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Tyistiana wrote:

[Stingy's Oni]
First, I notice something on before each kiai
Before kiai 1 - 00:32:667 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - is 7plet then 5plet
Before kiai 2 - 01:22:039 (366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377) - is 5plet then 7plet
Before kiai 3 - 02:11:325 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - is 7plet then 5plet
Please make it in the same way for the overall consistency. To make this difference, it would lead the player to confuse while playing. made all 5 to 7

01:34:382 - Add finisher here , it's pitch like 01:23:410. oops o:
02:04:725 - You missing a note here. You've followed the vocal here so here's have a vocal. Should place a note here too. oops again! >.>

You've did a great work! This is almost flawless! I can't mod this well. ;w;
Good luck~ :D

Hah. Yes, almost flawless. Without my difficulty, that is. Of course mine is the only one with a lot of problems.
http://puu.sh/yIPB2/6cb0843972.osu.
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Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~
As normal , it's sure that you can rejected these suggestion. It's only my opinion. :3

[ Overall]
  1. OD setting of this mapset looks strange. It's skipped and looks unsequence.

    Currently OD setting
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Stingy's Oni / Inner Oni = 2 / 4 / 4 / 5.5 / 6

    So, I would like to suggest a new OD setting to make it become sequently.

    Suggestion OD setting
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Stingy's Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 4 / 5 / 5.5 / 6


That's so good, changed

[Kantan]
01:30:610 - Delete , it don't consist to 02:19:982 (or maybe you add a note instead for a variation.) Variation? Idk, but removed for now

[Futsuu]
01:45:353 - Delete finisher , even on higher difficulty you decide to not use. And this pitch is calm.

[Muzukashii]
01:06:953 - Add finisher , it's not consist to Futsuu. And this pitch is distinguished. Deserve to use finisher imo.

[Inner Oni]
01:06:953 - Add finisher , it's not consist to Futsuu. And this pitch is distinguished. Deserve to use finisher imo.

You've did a great work! This is almost flawless! I can't mod this well. ;w;
Good luck~ :D
Fixed all :D
Thanks for mod!
Updated~
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Hey, from my q!

01:00:782 (10) - change to k to reflect vocals
01:18:610 (1) - d, the bit's just repeating
01:46:725 (1) - ^
02:07:982 (12) - ^
00:09:010 (27) - d
put a k at 01:21:867
00:06:953 (20,21,22) - ddk along with 00:08:325 (24,25,26) and 00:09:696 (29,30,31)
00:10:725 (33) - change to k (different sound + you mapped 00:09:353 (28) as k and it's the same sound)
00:18:267 (60,67) - you're clearly mapping to vocals in this section, so remove these
01:02:496 (279,280,281,282,283) - think ddkkd is more suitable
01:47:067 (518,519,520,521,522) - this doesn't suit the sound you're mapping to in the background - dkdkd or dkdkk would work. same with 01:48:439 (523,524,525,526,527)
02:34:553 (187) - this doesn't require a finish, it's not a particularly strong sound


great map overall!! good luck!!
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MBmasher wrote:

Hey, from my q!

01:00:782 (10) - change to k to reflect vocals Fixed
01:18:610 (1) - d, the bit's just repeating I need variation, only don feels a bit monotonous
01:46:725 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:07:982 (12) - ^ Same as 01:18:610 (1) -
00:09:010 (27) - d Fixed
put a k at 01:21:867 My bad, added


great map overall!! good luck!!
Thanks for mod!
Waiting for Stingy's Update~
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this is a song with deep social criticism



General

◾ Spread is fine.
◽ I would shorten the slider(00:32:667 (48) - / 02:11:410 (14) - ) and put a k or K before the D in both instances, it feels kind of empty with it not being mapped.
◾ You can't find a bg that isn't just stolen from the standard set? Ok.
Kantan

◾ 00:05:925 (7) - This is mapped to the synth like the note before, the synth drops but the note raises in pitch, so i would change to d.
◽ 00:25:810 (36,37) - ctrl g to get rid of the nasty d k d k d, the alternations should start later, like 00:28:553 - here, and not earlier like it is.
◾ 00:35:410 - Make the "hot right now" lyrics more emphasized, so delete the note before this time and put a note 00:35:753 - here. These lyrics are the most important thing and you can map them since it's such a basic rhythm, really abuse that in the kiai.
◽ ^ Starting from the time I highlighted, you can map 3 1/1 rhythms on the lyrics,, and then everything that's not the important lyrics can just be 2/1 gaps
◾ 00:42:267 - I would make this a 4/1 gap, the way you have it mapped right now makes it seem like you're mapping a random drum cause it's been awhile since you mapped a snare hit.
◽ 01:17:925 - I would make these buildups all d since they are all kicks in the song, they don't change.
Futsuu

◾ 00:01:125 - You're trying to map to the synth bites but you're also trying to kind of map to the vocals here. You need to commit to mapping one or the other, because right now you're letting the synth distract you from mapping the vocals completely. I recommend mapping around the synth, but less, so it's not as muddied as to what you're trying to accomplish.
◽ 00:28:553 - Again you don't need to be alternating here, just keep it nice and d.
◾ 00:37:467 - Random break, these vocals need to be mapped, just like in the kantan. I think you removed this because of "spread issues" but these vocals are very important to what the song is doing, since the instrumental is just the same shit over and over.
◽ 00:39:867 - Like here needs a 1/2 triple, not the beat after. Lyrics, my boi.
◾ 01:00:096 - This isn't a 1/2 triple, 01:00:782 - this is a 1/2 triple in the drums, so change accordingly.
◽ 01:24:096 - I would also move this 1/2 triple to be a 1/2 triple leading into the beat 1 (01:24:782 - ), this will add emphasis to the vocal.
◾ 01:46:382 - Map all of these with the note before the beat 1 because only having it mapped here 01:49:125 - is awkward, we can hear the note before the beat 1 from the end of the kiai you can't fake us out.
◽ 01:49:982 - Pls put note, it's not that hard of a rhythm.
Muzukashii

◾ 01:02:839 - Maybe split up the k d k d k d - ness going on here, it's pretty annoying (maybe make 01:05:582 - k d k k).
◽ 01:16:553 - ^ same thing here.
◾ 02:01:810 - I would map to the voice instead some weird bloopy bloop in the bg that is way weaker than the voice.
◽ 02:06:439 (14) - Nah, I know this is mapped to the bloops too, but the vocals are just so strong here it feels so out of place and wrong.
Realizing this map is literally one thing repeated 3 times, dear god.

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Oh shit I realized I was supposed to mod Stingy's Oni shit shit shit shit shit
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Hi NM from ingame chat
I couldn't find any important issues inside the first 3 diffs
[Stingy's Oni]
Usually I prefear to make suggestions about consistency or structure rather than notes except for evident pitches but in this case 00:16:553 (54,55,56) I really feel like saying ther would sound more coherent if they were like this 00:13:810 (43,44,45) btw feel free to ignore me.
00:47:582 - place a note since this same strucure is used after in the same kiai and the kiai after, in all the cases except for here you placed a note.
I found a lack in consistency since there are some parts like this 01:01:467 (273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) and parts like this 01:06:953 (301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) where the pitch is kinda similar... I don't mean you have to make them the same cause they are different but reduce the gap of difficulty
[Inner Oni]
First of all: I had fun playing it so... it is hard to find mistakes in something you like
Untill here 00:14:839 I think you could have put some notes that fit better the pitch but that's fine anyway
I'm kinda pissed off with the ranking cryteria in taiko cause some people can do certain things and some not ... In this stream 00:32:667 I would have suggested you to increse the speed at each note by few but some bn do not agree so I think a way to make it more cool could be decreasing the volume in the preview part and increase it at each note here instead of the speed to mark the difference between the part before and the part after.
I couldn't find any other things to say so just... "Put your hands in the air, if you want it right nowwww eo eo up right now!!!"
While modding I was stuck several times playing the song just cause I like it hahaha... This means it deserves a star ;D
Sorry if the mod was short
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Nifty wrote:

this is a song with deep social criticism



General

◾ Spread is fine.
◽ I would shorten the slider(00:32:667 (48) - / 02:11:410 (14) - ) and put a k or K before the D in both instances, it feels kind of empty with it not being mapped. It feels weird to play in the low diff, I wanna keep the current slider
◾ You can't find a bg that isn't just stolen from the standard set? Ok. No, I can't
Kantan

◾ 00:05:925 (7) - This is mapped to the synth like the note before, the synth drops but the note raises in pitch, so i would change to d. Changed
◽ 00:25:810 (36,37) - ctrl g to get rid of the nasty d k d k d, the alternations should start later, like 00:28:553 - here, and not earlier like it is. Fixed
◾ 00:35:410 - Make the "hot right now" lyrics more emphasized, so delete the note before this time and put a note 00:35:753 - here. These lyrics are the most important thing and you can map them since it's such a basic rhythm, really abuse that in the kiai.
◽ ^ Starting from the time I highlighted, you can map 3 1/1 rhythms on the lyrics,, and then everything that's not the important lyrics can just be 2/1 gaps
◾ 00:42:267 - I would make this a 4/1 gap, the way you have it mapped right now makes it seem like you're mapping a random drum cause it's been awhile since you mapped a snare hit. Fixed
◽ 01:17:925 - I would make these buildups all d since they are all kicks in the song, they don't change. I wanna keep the consistency with 00:28:553 -
Futsuu

◾ 00:01:125 - You're trying to map to the synth bites but you're also trying to kind of map to the vocals here. You need to commit to mapping one or the other, because right now you're letting the synth distract you from mapping the vocals completely. I recommend mapping around the synth, but less, so it's not as muddied as to what you're trying to accomplish. I changed some patterns for avoid it
◽ 00:28:553 - Again you don't need to be alternating here, just keep it nice and d. I don't like only d, it's very monotonous imo
◾ 00:37:467 - Random break, these vocals need to be mapped, just like in the kantan. I think you removed this because of "spread issues" but these vocals are very important to what the song is doing, since the instrumental is just the same shit over and over. Added note
◽ 00:39:867 - Like here needs a 1/2 triple, not the beat after. Lyrics, my boi. Fixed lol
◾ 01:00:096 - This isn't a 1/2 triple, 01:00:782 - this is a 1/2 triple in the drums, so change accordingly. I wanna emphasizes the vocal there
◽ 01:24:096 - I would also move this 1/2 triple to be a 1/2 triple leading into the beat 1 (01:24:782 - ), this will add emphasis to the vocal. Naah, I think that's fine if I follow the same of 00:34:725 (3,4,5) -
◾ 01:46:382 - Map all of these with the note before the beat 1 because only having it mapped here 01:49:125 - is awkward, we can hear the note before the beat 1 from the end of the kiai you can't fake us out. Added notes
◽ 01:49:982 - Pls put note, it's not that hard of a rhythm. Added
Muzukashii

◾ 01:02:839 - Maybe split up the k d k d k d - ness going on here, it's pretty annoying (maybe make 01:05:582 - k d k k). Applied
◽ 01:16:553 - ^ same thing here. Oke
◾ 02:01:810 - I would map to the voice instead some weird bloopy bloop in the bg that is way weaker than the voice. Fixed
◽ 02:06:439 (14) - Nah, I know this is mapped to the bloops too, but the vocals are just so strong here it feels so out of place and wrong. Also fixed
Realizing this map is literally one thing repeated 3 times, dear god.

For the full mod please purchase the "Nifty Likes Your Music Package" for only $5.99/Month. With this package, Nifty won't tire himself out on writing long explanations and mod your whole map. Good offer, but I'm not intested for now :^)

Oh shit I realized I was supposed to mod Stingy's Oni shit shit shit shit shit Nah, no for that

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM from ingame chat
I couldn't find any important issues inside the first 3 diffs
[Inner Oni]
First of all: I had fun playing it so... it is hard to find mistakes in something you like
Untill here 00:14:839 I think you could have put some notes that fit better the pitch but that's fine anyway I'm followin the vocal, so that's fine imo
I'm kinda pissed off with the ranking cryteria in taiko cause some people can do certain things and some not ... In this stream 00:32:667 I would have suggested you to increse the speed at each note by few but some bn do not agree so I think a way to make it more cool could be decreasing the volume in the preview part and increase it at each note here instead of the speed to mark the difference between the part before and the part after. It's a not bad idea, but I don't see it as necessary since the volume is not as noticeable. I'm going to keep.
I couldn't find any other things to say so just... "Put your hands in the air, if you want it right nowwww eo eo up right now!!!"
While modding I was stuck several times playing the song just cause I like it hahaha... This means it deserves a star ;D
Sorry if the mod was short Nah, thanks anyways for mod the GD :D
Thanks for mod both!
Waiting Stingy's update~
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MBmasher wrote:

Hey, from my q!

00:06:953 (20,21,22) - ddk along with 00:08:325 (24,25,26) and 00:09:696 (29,30,31) I like variation
00:10:725 (33) - change to k (different sound + you mapped 00:09:353 (28) as k and it's the same sound) ok
00:18:267 (60,67) - you're clearly mapping to vocals in this section, so remove these ok
01:02:496 (279,280,281,282,283) - think ddkkd is more suitable I like this
01:47:067 (518,519,520,521,522) - this doesn't suit the sound you're mapping to in the background - dkdkd or dkdkk would work. same with 01:48:439 (523,524,525,526,527) changed a little
02:34:553 (187) - this doesn't require a finish, it's not a particularly strong sound I like the emphasis since it's the last kiai


great map overall!! good luck!!

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM from ingame chat
[Stingy's Oni]
Usually I prefear to make suggestions about consistency or structure rather than notes except for evident pitches but in this case 00:16:553 (54,55,56) I really feel like saying ther would sound more coherent if they were like this 00:13:810 (43,44,45) btw feel free to ignore me. mmm I like this
00:47:582 - place a note since this same strucure is used after in the same kiai and the kiai after, in all the cases except for here you placed a note. no? ;w;
I found a lack in consistency since there are some parts like this 01:01:467 (273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) and parts like this 01:06:953 (301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) where the pitch is kinda similar... I don't mean you have to make them the same cause they are different but reduce the gap of difficulty variety though =w= also similar isn't the same, so I keep
http://puu.sh/yXo8N/09bc02359a.osu
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All updated~
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4 months later, new mod here. but i didn't prepare image for Queue.. :<

[ Muzukashii]

SR Cap between Oni and Muzu could be problem.

00:32:667 and 01:22:039 and 02:11:410 - Loop Futsuu's Silder here? how nonsense as compare Oni's note on here.

00:40:210 (26),(27),(28) - but i think dons is pretty much better to fit song. also for give variety than Oni, mostly used Kats on Oni with 5-streaking notes.
00:51:182 - ^
02:18:953 - ^
02:29:925 - ^

01:04:210 - you really want to make it same as Futsuu? it's actually different than 01:09:010 thought it's unskippable note above Muzu.
01:15:182 - ^

note about SR Cap : Muzu used too much 1/2s while Oni used 5-streaking notes, might need working on Some triples. / it'll destroy some follows on song btw

[ Stingy's Oni]

00:32:667 and 01:22:039 and 02:11:410 - the only 1 note is different than Inner Oni, think it need nerf. like triples with 5-streaking note.


might it's not help much, as Map is well done. +1
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Diva Days wrote:

4 months later, new mod here. but i didn't prepare image for Queue.. :<

[ Muzukashii]

SR Cap between Oni and Muzu could be problem.

00:32:667 and 01:22:039 and 02:11:410 - Loop Futsuu's Silder here? how nonsense as compare Oni's note on here. The slider fits good in the stream there, also it don't have problem in the spread

00:40:210 (26),(27),(28) - but i think dons is pretty much better to fit song. also for give variety than Oni, mostly used Kats on Oni with 5-streaking notes.
00:51:182 - ^
02:18:953 - ^
02:29:925 - ^ If I change that triplets to don, the diff didn't triplets kat, I wanna make more variety

01:04:210 - you really want to make it same as Futsuu? it's actually different than 01:09:010 thought it's unskippable note above Muzu.
01:15:182 - ^ I added notes there

note about SR Cap : Muzu used too much 1/2s while Oni used 5-streaking notes, might need working on Some triples. / it'll destroy some follows on song btw I use triplets only if Oni have 5plets for make a better spread, I think it's fine.

might it's not help much, as Map is well done. +1 Sorry for delay, thanks for mod!
Updated~
Waiting for Stingy (if still alive)
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Wow, I'm lazy. Sorry for not getting to this!


[Muzukashii]

00:04:210 (9,10) - , 00:05:582 (13,14) -, etc. Why are these doubles? I personally would think the player could handle 1/2 triples
00:12:096 (29) - , 00:14:839 (8) - , etc. I don't get why you include these notes on the downbeats. I'd remove them for better phrasing with the vocals.
00:24:439 (35,36,37) - I'd switch the color on these for vocal pitch.
00:30:610 - & 00:30:782 - ; I'd add two notes here for a more consistent build
01:00:439 (14,15,16) - For variety and the vocals, I'd make this k k k
01:17:925 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - I think you could make this portion of the build less dense, because it's less intense than the verse imo
01:46:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make up your mind! JK, but it really is sort of weird that you flip between the two patterns.
00:55:982 (1) - I think you need a more apparent rest moment around here somewhere.
01:23:410 (1) - ^ same
02:09:353 - "can I get a" should probably be mapped
02:10:039 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - I'd flip this around; it flows better, and represents the music better
02:55:296 (36,37,38) - I'd make this k k d
00:45:010 (1) - , 01:34:382 (1) - , 02:23:753 (1) - Why not a blue finisher?

[Stingy's Oni]

00:38:753 (150,151) - , 00:44:239 (180,181) - , etc. these doubles should be color flipped because a kick drum actually lands on the 1/4 tick; listen on 50%
00:45:525 (188,189,190,191,192) - From what limited experience of flow I have, this pattern isn't that comfortable. Same with 00:51:010 (219,220,221,222,223) - and the others
00:57:010 (249) - , 00:59:753 (261) - Pretty big snares hit here; I wouldn't miss those
01:02:839 (277,278,279) - "on your" should all be kat, since it's a higher pitch
01:13:039 (322) - You could shift this to 01:13:210 - for the fast hi-hats
01:22:039 (362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373) - [praise] Nice job improvising this fill. I like how the points of emphasis in the vocals are still notated as kats, so it still represents the music.
01:45:353 (508) - I personally would drastically lower SV in this section.
01:47:067 (514,515,516,517,518) - I think the vocals go more like d d k k d
01:48:439 (519,520,521,522,523) - If you're trying to represent the synth sound here, maybe you could go like k k k d k
02:04:725 (13) - I personally would remove this note, since it moves better with the song imo
02:17:410 (79,80,81) - [praise] I can see you got rid of the doubles. A very subtle choice; I like it.
00:45:010 (183) - , 01:34:382 (443) -, 02:23:753 (121) - Why not a blue finisher?
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