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Bag Raiders - Shooting Stars

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Wingdings
32 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Wingdings
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 15, 2018 at 11:08:27 AM

Artist: Bag Raiders
Title: Shooting Stars
BPM: 125
Filesize: 7831kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dive (3.08 stars, 372 notes)
Download: Bag Raiders - Shooting Stars
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm in love with a shooting star.


Revived to do good by old mods, but not enough mods to go for rank yet.
Last edited by Wingdings , edited 9 times in total.
Nightinga1e
40 posts
Joined December 2015
Nightinga1e
Hi.
Dive:
00:07:889 (1) - Don't use sliders like this on hard. Make good rhythm around drums, ok?
00:30:689 (2) - move this note above 00:30:809 (3)
00:32:609 (2) - ^
00:51:809 (2); 00:51:929 (3) - it is realy bad placement
01:04:289 (5) - note here, slder on 01:04:529
01:19:889 (5) - slider here. Notes losing rhythm
01:27:569 (5) - remove reverse, note on 01:28:049 (6)
01:37:409 (7) - why slider?
03:00:209 (2) - bad placement
Wingdings
32 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Wingdings

Nightinga1e wrote:

Hi.
Dive:
00:07:889 (1) - Don't use sliders like this on hard. Make good rhythm around drums, ok?
Used this slider for timing, forgot to delete for this version.
00:30:689 (2) - move this note above 00:30:809 (3)
00:32:609 (2) - ^

Fixed.
00:51:809 (2); 00:51:929 (3) - it is realy bad placement
There it went.
01:04:289 (5) - note here, slder on 01:04:529
01:19:889 (5) - slider here. Notes losing rhythm
Fixed.
01:27:569 (5) - remove reverse, note on 01:28:049 (6)
Fixed.
01:37:409 (7) - why slider?
It kept with the note pattern on the song, but changed anyways.
03:00:209 (2) - bad placement
Reflected outside of slider.

Thanks!
L a n d o n
44 posts
Joined February 2016
L a n d o n
Hey, just starting modding, but I hope it helps.

Dive

Generally, the way you spread out the notes isn't very consistent.
In the beginning, you did double stack five times
ex) 00:26:849 (2,3) -
Then you double spread only twice
ex) 00:34:529 (2,3) -
Then you do triple stacked twice
ex) 00:37:409 (1,7) -
Then you alternate from triple stacked to triple spread
ex) 00:42:209 (1,2,3) -
00:44:129 (2,3,4) -
Then, for the most part, the rest is just triple spread.


Anyway, onto the specifics
00:35:729 (5,1,2,3) - this is a bit cluttered
00:52:049 (4) - this whistle hit sound is a bit out of place considering none of the earlier lyrics were emphasized
01:05:249 (1) - it would be better if you replaced the beginning half tick with a triple spread or stack
01:08:609 (6) - instead of a repeating slider, a triple spread or stack would also fit
01:10:769 (1,2,3) - it would fit with your theme if you made a triple in the beginning and then extended the slider

After this point you stopped doing triples for a while and then you resumed. These could all be triples:
01:12:689 (1,2,3) -
01:14:609 (6,1,2) -
01:16:529 (6,1,2) - this was very different from the mapping from before
These are only a few, there are way more that you should fix

01:19:649 (4,5) - 5 should be a circle, and 4 should be a slider
01:23:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this placement and movement is just very awkward, i would just stick with a zig zag w/ equal spacing
01:28:049 (6) - random placement in the middle of a triple
01:29:489 (5,6) - you should remove the 5 and extend the slider by half a tick
01:31:409 (6) - this would flow better if you turned the slider to the left to create a sharper angle
01:37:169 (6,7) - you should turn this into a slider
01:39:809 (1) - this should be a circle because "street" isn't very long
01:51:569 (1) - i feel like the spinner could end on a better note, it just seems to end abruptly

02:42:209 (2) - can you center the 2 so that it is equal distance from 3 and 5, it just annoys me
02:48:449 (6) - you should remove the last repeat of the slider and instead make a slider half a tick forward

There's a lot of large-ish sliders in the section, you should try some slider art.
The end part is pretty nice though, I like it.

I even tried mapping this song myself, but I scrapped the idea. Good luck on your map though! I think the song is nice too.
Le_Crapougnard
29 posts
Joined March 2017
Le_Crapougnard
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Last edited by Le_Crapougnard , edited 1 time in total.
Wingdings
32 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Wingdings

LandonOSU wrote:

Dive
ex) 00:26:849 (2,3) -
Then you double spread only twice
ex) 00:34:529 (2,3) -
Then you do triple stacked twice
ex) 00:37:409 (1,7) -
Then you alternate from triple stacked to triple spread
ex) 00:42:209 (1,2,3) -
00:44:129 (2,3,4) -
Altered the two double spreads, although the fix is greasy. It did let me smoothly transition from the square pattern to the alternating spread/stacks however.



00:35:729 (5,1,2,3) - this is a bit cluttered
00:52:049 (4) - this whistle hit sound is a bit out of place considering none of the earlier lyrics were emphasized
01:05:249 (1) - it would be better if you replaced the beginning half tick with a triple spread or stack
01:08:609 (6) - instead of a repeating slider, a triple spread or stack would also fit
01:10:769 (1,2,3) - it would fit with your theme if you made a triple in the beginning and then extended the slider
all done

After this point you stopped doing triples for a while and then you resumed. These could all be triples:
01:12:689 (1,2,3) -
01:14:609 (6,1,2) -
01:16:529 (6,1,2) - this was very different from the mapping from before
These are only a few, there are way more that you should fix
Fixed this, more or less.

01:19:649 (4,5) - 5 should be a circle, and 4 should be a slider
01:23:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this placement and movement is just very awkward, i would just stick with a zig zag w/ equal spacing
01:28:049 (6) - random placement in the middle of a triple
01:29:489 (5,6) - you should remove the 5 and extend the slider by half a tick
01:31:409 (6) - this would flow better if you turned the slider to the left to create a sharper angle
01:37:169 (6,7) - you should turn this into a slider
01:39:809 (1) - this should be a circle because "street" isn't very long
01:51:569 (1) - i feel like the spinner could end on a better note, it just seems to end abruptly
Larger fixes, changed some patterns.

02:42:209 (2) - can you center the 2 so that it is equal distance from 3 and 5, it just annoys me
02:48:449 (6) - you should remove the last repeat of the slider and instead make a slider half a tick forward
Fixed the first pattern, don't understand the second part however.

Thanks for the mod! Hopefully the map is much healthier now, sending a kudosu your way.
LimePixel
184 posts
Joined March 2015
LimePixel
Hi :)

Random mod to try and help out. I'm just starting out with modding and I have some notes. Feel free to ignore these if you disagree with them

Dive:
01:05:249 (7) and 01:09:089 (8) - Maybe start the new combo on these notes so that those and the slider are the same combo color, as is the case with other sliders in the beatmap
01:23:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These hitcircles are cluttered. Maybe try a star shape to organize them better? Like this
Image
01:34:049 (1,2) - These go against the flow of the slider 01:34:289 (3), everywhere else around this part of the map the sliders follow the flow
02:48:449 (6) - Slider should end when the vocals end, as is the case with other objects in the beatmap before this (after the long spinner).
Make it reverse once and end a beat later than the start?

Hope this helps. Good luck :)
Last edited by LimePixel , edited 1 time in total.
Le_Crapougnard
29 posts
Joined March 2017
Le_Crapougnard
It seems like my link was dead lol, anyway this is a diff i made :3

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osu file format v14

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208,144,158370,2,0,P|288:144|304:176,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,158850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,159090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,159330,2,0,P|352:192|368:144,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,240,159810,2,0,P|248:288|304:296,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,160290,2,0,P|368:104|408:120,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,160770,2,0,P|384:192|352:160,1,93.75
362,174,161130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,174,161250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,161970,6,0,P|224:152|264:168,1,93.75
72,232,162450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,152,162690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,162930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,163170,2,12,P|304:312|224:312,2,187.5
88,120,164610,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,80,164730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,56,164850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,165090,2,0,P|256:24|320:32,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,31,165570,2,0,P|375:23|311:31,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,124,166050,2,0,L|315:4,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,166530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
201,337,166770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,167010,2,12,B|121:316|121:316|235:346,1,187.5
248,184,167730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,58,167970,2,0,L|315:124,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,168450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,176,168690,1,12,0:0:0:0:
320,208,168810,1,10,0:0:0:0:
280,240,168930,1,12,0:0:0:0:
168,168,169650,6,0,P|240:152|256:104,1,93.75
200,264,170130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,170370,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,176,170610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,105,170850,2,0,P|194:97|186:129,1,375,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,172290,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,172410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,172530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,172770,2,0,P|428:164|484:84,2,187.5,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,174210,6,0,L|270:68,1,93.75
176,87,174690,2,0,L|99:29,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,203,175170,2,0,L|245:260,1,93.75
79,215,175650,2,0,L|151:119,1,93.75
224,272,176130,2,8,P|272:296|320:288,1,93.75,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,280,176490,1,12,0:0:0:0:
376,264,176610,1,12,0:0:0:0:
280,40,177330,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,177570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,177810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,56,178050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,120,178290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,192,178530,2,0,B|392:232|344:304|272:256|256:232|256:232|208:312|120:280|112:224,1,375,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,179970,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,180090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,180210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,180450,2,0,B|294:3|311:-13|429:118|451:270,1,375,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,264,181890,6,0,P|336:304|400:304,1,93.75
224,232,182370,2,0,P|288:192|336:216,1,93.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,182850,2,0,P|264:289|295:239,1,93.75
72,216,183330,2,0,P|136:272|184:280,1,93.75
160,184,183810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,112,184050,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,112,184170,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,144,184290,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,88,185010,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,88,185250,2,0,P|272:56|336:80,1,93.75
456,160,185730,2,0,P|456:240|416:264,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,186210,2,0,B|296:376|248:384|128:336|48:208|48:136,1,375,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,40,187650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,187770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,187890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,248,188130,2,0,B|232:312|320:264|320:184,2,187.5,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,48,189570,6,0,P|360:48|400:88,1,93.75
456,152,190050,1,12,0:0:0:0:
440,264,190290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,190530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,264,190770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,191010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,191250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,191490,2,8,P|168:296|176:320,1,93.75,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,301,191850,1,10,0:0:0:0:
169,301,191970,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,112,192690,6,0,P|160:160|176:200,2,93.75
208,248,193410,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,176,193650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,193890,2,0,B|128:168|176:72|240:24|320:24|392:48,1,375,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,195330,6,0,P|224:264|248:280,2,46.875
381,44,195810,2,0,P|441:130|369:210,2,187.5,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,193,197250,2,0,P|368:240|320:264,1,93.75
256,296,197730,2,0,P|152:312|64:296,2,187.5,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,199170,1,14,0:0:0:0:
184,104,199410,1,14,0:0:0:0:
272,80,199650,1,14,0:0:0:0:

Spacing could be better, hit sounds too and this difficulty is rather similar to yours but i hope you'll like it.
(Diff name could be changed too :D )
Tiggz Mumbson
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Joined July 2015
Tiggz Mumbson
Dive:
00:46:049 (1,2) - These circles go against the flow of the slider
01:03:329 (2,3) - ^^
01:34:049 (1,2) - ^^

01:23:249 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Objects are look cluttered, rearrange circles, or NC on 2,4,6

01:51:569 (1) - This spinner is too long. Recommend ending it at 01:59:249, since that's when the instruments start to play and fade in

02:14:609 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Set the volume to 50-70 percent, the song doesn't support the loud hitsounds here

02:32:129 (4) - Whistle hitsound doesn't fit with music

02:48:449 (6) - Reduce repeat slider by 1/2 (one repeat)

03:05:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - Object placement looks random, maybe NC at 03:05:729 (1) ?
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