m4m as discussed with AlheakThank you![ Waterfall of Nine Heavens ]
- This three particular sections are very similar 00:47:532 (1,2,3,4,2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) – about the guitar melody. Their rhythm is well done, the only thing I could suggest here is that you change a bit the spacing of this 3 objects 00:47:532 (1,2,3) - . In the other two patterns is clear that that the spacing is growing along with the guitar intensity 00:52:865 (2,3,4,5) - / 00:57:865 (2,3,4,5) - they are quite similar indeed, but not entirely and the way they are introduced in the song isn't either, there are also times when the drums play a certain beat, other times when they play another, and this implies that they should be mapped differently
- I honestly believe that this flows better 01:16:865 (3,4,5,6) – with 01:17:198 (5,6) – ctrol+G . Also the spacing here suggests that you want 01:17:198 (5) – more emphasized then 01:17:365 (6) - . But as I listen to this part of the music the strong snare sounds are here on this slider end 01:16:698 - and here 01:17:365 (6) – while this other objects sounds like regular kicks 01:16:865 (3,4,5) - . So I’m not sure what were your intentions here, but my suggestion for this part is first ctrol+G this two 01:17:198 (5,6) – then take this object located here 01:17:365 (6) – and space it out a bit more, I’d suggest x:361 y:28 i'm focusing on the lead guitar here, and it's playing on upbeat, and the way it plays suggests a back-and-forth pattern, hence why it's mapped that way. doing as you suggested not only woudn't work with the guitar, but it actually wouldn't
flowfeel that great because it wouldn't be as snappy anymore
- Move this slider 01:33:532 (1) – to x:149 y: 57 and 01:34:198 (3) - to x:293 y:167 to make sure that this pair 01:33:532 (1,2) – is structured the same way as this other pair 01:34:198 (3,4) - https://puu.sh/ufoek.jpg . This is just a really small polishment suggestion. yeah i see that lol, don't think it matters really
- Don’t you think that the spacing here 04:08:198 (1,2,3) – is a bit excessive compared to the other jump streams that this map has in even stronger parts of the music? For example 02:58:365 (1,2,3,4,5) – this jumpstream on the solo, or this 02:59:448 (5,1) - , 03:25:448 (11,1) - . My main suggestion here is that you actually map this sound 04:08:532 – clickable, but if you want to keep the slider 1/1 for the guitar melody, at least consider nerfing this spacing here 04:08:615 (2,3) - . this plays just fine, and works thanks to the magic of slider leniency
I guess that’s all for me. Personally this map is really too good/well done to question main concepts or suggest bigger modifications and in the end all I could come up with are just small little modifications that doesn’t affect much of the map quality. I hope that you can find at least one of them useful to improve this even more.
Hope to see this on ranked soon o/