[Waterfall of Nine Heavens]
00:41:698 (3,6) - Hard to spot them being sliders (THANKS PISHI FOR MAKING ME NO BE ABLE TO CALL THEM KICKSLIDERS). To fix it just rotate all the pairs by +5 an -5 equivalently
00:52:032 (1) - Subjective opinions, but I think it would look better if you blanket 00:53:032 (3) - instead of creating a triangle with sliderhead, sliderend and the single.
00:56:698 (2,3,4) - This is a bit gimmicky considering you havn't used it in any other spot previously in the same section. It's good however that it's this early, and not late into the map. Consider putting it in line with the rest of the section, or change other similar patterns to be like this to make it more consistent.
00:57:865 (2) - Single into slider to emphasise snare instead of a repeat slider that skips the snare with the reverse arrow.
01:05:532 (1,2) - Angle +10 to make it more aesthetically pleasing. Or alternatively do
this.01:06:365 (3,4) - Ctrl+g either one of them to make it look aesthethically better, as well as continuing with the structure you've started with so far.
01:17:532 (7) - Could place in line with rest of pattern by placing the slider in a position where the angle between 6-7 isn't 90 degree. Also due to how you play 01:16:865 (3,4,5,6) - putting the slider more top right of the screen would feel more natural, while still breaking the flow.
01:25:115 - 02:41:115 - 04:34:448 - Skipping a beat here consitently throughout the map that you could do something like 01:24:198 (6,1) - instead, which would fit the patterns a lot better.
01:56:365 (2) - Slider shape doesn't fit rest of structure, as simple as that. If you would have used similar sliders then it would've been fine.
02:01:532 (1) - Make into Anchor slider instead, right now it looks dull for what it is representing in the song.
02:08:865 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent with the last section with the same sound. 00:52:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - and the latter one is imo way better at representing what is happening in the song.
02:29:365 (4,5,1) - 02:30:198 (3,4,5) - 02:31:198 (1,2,3) - Way too late and way too calm to introduce such a intense and reading heavy pattern.
02:44:698 (2) - Slider could be improved visually (Alheak fix it, I know you can improve it)
02:49:532 (5,1,2,3) - Inconsistent with last chorus 01:33:532 (1,2,3,4) - The latter one is easy, but still requires you to aim, while the earlier one is just, bland and quite frankly boring to play due to the lack of movement.
02:55:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should move so that the manual stack is more easily visible
03:16:198 (2,1) - Flow is really uncomfy here, could fix by doing
this.03:32:865 (3) - Slider body stack isnt great as shown
here.03:41:698 (1) - Slider could be improved visually by curving it a bit more.
03:43:532 (2) - Rotate +15 to make the flow change direction better.
03:44:032 (1) - Should end at 03:44:032 (1) - to make the pattern less confusing, and the guitar also changes how it sounds at that beat which justifies it too.
03:45:698 (1) - Could make this slider body stack the slider end of 03:44:532 (2) -
03:46:365 (1,2,3) - Could make this less "static"(visually) by mixing it up with ctrl+g.
04:00:198 (1) - Unecessary slider body stack, it stops the flow in a way you havn't used earlier in the song.
04:01:532 (1) - Make into a 1/4 repeat or a 1/4 and a single to represent the song better, since now you're skipping a beat. And you will still follow the guitar since there's stilla slider there. just shorter.
04:02:865 (1) - Could improve the visuals of this slider by quite a bit.
04:37:532 (1) - Could be improved visually by making the red anchor be in the middle and both curves be symmtrical with eachother.
04:59:698 (2,3,4) - Bigger spacing to emphasise the difference in strums compared to 04:59:532 (1) like
so. 05:04:365 (6,7,8,9) - Manual stack this to keep it like similar sections 00:38:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
05:06:032 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing compared to the rest of the section, however this is how it should be, more in line with the intensity. Comparing this too
05:08:032 (1,2,3,1) - If you want people to kill you then this is completely fine.
These last points are paired together.
04:46:865 (1,2,3) - 04:52:198 (1,2,3) - 04:57:532 (1,2,3) - 05:02:865 (1,2,3) - Too extreme for this section, compare to the intro section that sounds the same and go the same intensity. (Gowo you're the one who taught me NOT to make the ending noticeably harder for no obvious reason)
05:06:032 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing compared to the rest of the section, however this is how it should be, more in line with the intensity. Comparing this too the ones above.