LunaticMara wrote:

[Easy]
01:13:902 (5) - You don't need that many sliderpoints. Heads + 1 is enough. removed extras.
Everything else is fine, good job. I like how you are actually much better at making sliders than me. haha,you should've seen this diff. before the mods

[Normal]
00:31:662 (1,3) - Doesn't need that many sliderpoints either. Removed.
01:10:062 (1) - Is it just me or does this sound wrong? Oh,let's see what I can do about it...
02:42:462 (2) - I'd suggest 1 grid down (lvl3) Oki~
03:11:982 - You should add a note here - it would fit perfectly. Hm,maybe you're right.

[Hard]
Some sliders looks little bit weird, but as I suck with making clean sliders, I can't really help. No problemo,maybe someone else will give some tips,even though I think those babies look fine. *achem* Fatherly instincts...

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Easy]

00:56:622 (4) - Wrong hitsound add i think. http://puu.sh/q20r Hm... Not sure about this one,both ways sound good :/... well Alright,I'll change it for now.
01:44:622 (6) - add finish at beginner No changes,sounds ok right now,I'd say.
02:11:502 (1) - Don't stack for different colors. It can't read for new player.
02:49:902 - useless inherited point
03:18:702 - ^ No they aren't xD, because the osu! icon blinks with the rhytmh and the main menu screen goes all Wooo~ with the Kiai time,and it should be

[Normal]

Fine Yay~

[Hard]

02:13:662 (5) - Followed the rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296897 oooooh,that looks really nice!

Confusion of the hit sound, Try to followed it → http://puu.sh/q20x 'aye,will see.

UnderminE wrote:

Easy
00:58:542 (5) - 1 grid right I,for once have no idea what difference does it make but hey,whatevah.
01:14:862 (6) - What about moving this to 01:14:742 - here (1/4 blue tick) since it's the last note before spinner also it goes well with the rhythm I decided not to use 1/4 on easy,and anyways,it goes well with the lyrics more than the rhythm hehe.
01:37:902 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god this part looks like it has nothing related with lyrics. I don't suggest you to change it though, but really, it really doesn't sound well with the lyrics. Yup you're right,it sure isn't related to lyrics in anyway,just the beat .

Normal
Oh gaaawd why is this still easy and boring as well waaaaaaa. I know you think this map should look easy but.. Please make this diff a little bit harder. PLEASE. uh...uhhh...uhhhhh... I shall try,but I do not promise anything.
00:21:582 - Clap should be here, not at the end of slider. Because you used clap for the 4th tick twice before that. So you must be use clap for the 4th tick here too. If you don't know how to sound a slidertick; Oh god,I soooo wanted to find out how others did this o.o' . Aaaand added~
Put this in your song folder. Back to osu and F5.
Then add these two:

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N:C1 means "Normal:Custom1" Click Audio tab and change it from Default to Custom1

00:25:662 (4) - what? Even I'm surprised when I saw this. It's kinda surprising for here though. It must be at 00:25:902 (4) - here I think this slider suits the song well enough,and I don't think that a single tricky part is a problem
01:36:462 (4) - This is kinda tricky. You know why? Because you went with the lyrics 01:34:422 (3) - for this, but you didn't do the same for here. You have 2 options:
- Move it to here 01:36:342 (4) - Yes,I choose answer number one. I win the first 100 dollar question!
- Move this 01:34:422 (3) - to 01:36:403 - here
Also noticed something. You used 1,0x distance for some parts and also used 0,80x distance for some parts as well. May I ask why? I suggest you to use 1,0x though. I used it um... I think I used it to compensate for the lack of fast beats I think.
01:40:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here we can see an easy part even for an easy diff. I tried something like this:

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and whistle 01:44:622 (1) - here I used some of your ideas,not all if you don't mind nippah~
03:01:422 (1) - What. I think...that's a slider.
03:09:102 (3) - Whistle because before that you used those "double-whistle" twice. Will try.

Also I have a suggestion for all diffs: Enable Countdown. Why? Because if I (or someone else) want to wait and listen to 7,1% of the song, I need to ready myself before the map starts suddenly. Mwuahahahaha - no.

Hard
There are still so many things to do. But I will only try to make this diff harder.
01:03:582 - add note
01:03:702 - add note
01:03:822 - add note Added all three but something got lost in the process O.o
01:03:942 - add note Yaaay super super streeeaam pf,forever not added.
If you don't want to add a stream like this, make a repeat slider from it~
01:04:542 - add note
01:05:022 - add note
01:05:502 - add note
01:05:982 - add note I think I added most of them with a twist of my own.
And make some short sliders from them:

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And then I went searching for this part for 10 mins to finally realise that it's the same place -_-. Anyway,I'm already happy with what I added (a single slider there is)
01:44:622 (1) - Remove clap Roger!
01:45:822 (2,4) - Clap ooooooow,that sounds interesting OvO
01:56:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Normally, we use this kind of rhythm in a normal diff. Also it's the famous KIAI part. Don't make it so easy Re-moddeling in progress... Okay done. Feel free to criticize.
02:03:822 - what about something like this?

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I'll leave this place as it is right now for now.
02:10:662 - EMPTY SPAAAAACEEE I made a mega jump around here,and I bet that the next modder will point that out lol.

UnderminE wrote:

Also funny fact, I modded your map in the classroom, while the teacher was talking about SQL and shit lol

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[Easy]
00:27:822 (6) - Make like this and add new combo? *thumbs up in da air*
00:35:502 (5) - New combo? naaah
00:49:422 (2,4) - Add clap? aye~
00:53:262 (2) - ^ No need for this one >v<'
01:44:622 (6) - New combo?ok.
02:05:742 (4 or 5) - ^ I will keep it as it was.

[Normal]
01:08:142 (7) - New combo? All righty.
02:38:382 (3) - ^ Nooope.
02:42:222 (1) - Add finish? Yeeees.
02:53:742 (4) - New combo? Okey.

/me flies away*

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Easy

1. 00:56:622 (4) - put new combo here as long comboes are not good for easy :< ok.
2. 01:13:902 (5) - ^ okey.
3. 01:44:622 (1) - I don't like how 01:43:182 (5) - overlaps this slider and also it's shape. Rearrange it, for example, like this:
   
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   Done.
   01:46:542 (3) - and make a better curve here too done too.
4. 01:54:222 (6) - new combo here to avoid long comboes Okay.
5. 01:57:582 (3) - why there are no claps in this part? D: put claps! PUT'D CLAPS HERE.
6. 01:59:502 (5) - ^ PUT'D CLAPS HERE.
7. 02:08:142 (5) - new combo! You know why C: I sure do.
8. 02:11:502 (1) - you missed finish! oh,you're right.
9. 02:38:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - claps don't fit this part :< :<
10. 02:38:382 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they touch 02:37:422 (3) - No touchy 'k 'k.
11. 02:42:222 (1,2,3,4,5) - waaaaait, it's not good rhythm for easy! Make this:
    
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    YES!
12. 02:51:822 (4) - new combo! Yeah.
13. 02:54:702 (2,3,4) - make 1/1 slider to avoid hard rhythm D: okaaaaay D:
14. 02:55:662 (1) - remove 2 reverse as it will be hard to read so many repeats and do this:
    
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    Fixed~
15. 03:01:902 (4) - ^ Fixed as well.
16. 03:05:742 - where are claps in this part >:O I dunno man o:
17. 03:10:302 (4) - remove this note, too hard rhythm Alright.
18. 03:18:702 (3,4,5,6,7) - NOOOOOO HAWWWRRRDDD:
    
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OOOOH fiiiiiiixin~‼ AND fixed~

Normal

1. 00:14:382 (1) - remove clap, sounds bad When did that clap come here anyway? :/
2. 00:16:782 (1) - I don't like it's shape, personally Ugu,I'll keep it.
3. 00:25:662 (4) - plays bad. remove it and put circle on 00:25:902 - sure,I guess.
4. 00:27:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe move it down so that 00:28:302 (3,4) - will be stacked with 00:26:862 (2) - ? I can do that,but then I can't keep 00:26:382 (1,2,3) a straight line due to spacing... Well applied for now.
5. 00:36:942 - I want a note here :< It costs 4 minutes to put this note in twelve seconds.(added)
6. 00:52:302 (7,1) - bad spacing, move it closer Moved.
7. 01:08:622 (3,4) - make this:
   
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8. 01:10:062 (1) - don't like this... Try to reduce it to 1/1 and add a note like on the pic: *sigh* 'key.
   
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9. 01:15:822 (1,2,3) - quite... hard. Make this:
   
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   Thanks for the suggestion,but I'll keep this hard piece of beats.
10. 01:34:062 (2,3) - change it to slider. Blue tick plays bad in Normal diffs
11. 01:35:982 (4,5) - ^ They aren't that hard here,I don't see the point in changing them.
12. 01:37:662 (1,2) - make circle with slider as 01:36:702 (1,2) - It's more interesting this way :3
13. 01:43:182 (6,7,8) - stack them all or unstack all Unstacked.
14. 01:43:662 (8,9,1) - remember, use of blue tick in easy-normal diffs is not good :< try to avoid it with 1/1 rhythm or slider (repeat sider)
    
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    Once again the spacing makes it easy to easy imo, so I'll keep it too.
15. 01:48:942 - where are claps in this chorus?! Um I dunno,let me see...
16. 01:57:822 (1) - naah, make this:
    
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    Okay...
17. 01:59:982 (1) - using such many repeats is baaaaad for easy and normal, it's hardly readable. Rearrange it :< But it's um, unique :<
18. 02:02:382 (3,4,1,1) - noooooo, TOO BAD! -v- Kinda fixed.
    
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19. 02:03:822 (1) - you can make a better shape No I can't. It's, like, the best shape ever.
20. 02:10:542 (3,4,5) - I don't like that they are under slider D: move them somewhere else Of course.
21. 02:34:302 (1,2) - it's better to stack them Alright.
22. 02:54:702 (2,3,1,2,3) - look, the distance between 02:54:702 (2,3) - and 02:55:662 (1,2) - on the timeline is equal (1/2), but distance on the screen is different, fix it Yeah.
23. 03:02:142 (1) - gaaaah, make just a circle on 03:02:382 - okay...
24. 03:18:702 (1) - remove finish and silence this spinner

Okay,volumed down it.

Hard

1. 00:27:822 (1) - I would like to put finish here :O It doesn't go well with the whistles :/
2. 00:42:222 (3,4) - move 4 little closer? :< Um,it's part of the longer spacing trio ;o.
3. 00:53:622 (11) - bad idea to put this circle above the (10). Move it under this slider Alright.
4. 01:03:582 (2,3,4,5,1) - nooo, why stack D: you can stack 01:03:582 (2,3,4) - with slider, but please, move (5) and (1) away Moved -v-
5. 01:11:142 (1) - don't like this spinner, it's better to map this part I don't see anything wrong with it.
6. 01:16:902 - make this:
   
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   Mmm,delicious.
7. 01:59:262 (11) - add a repeat? Yeah, I can do that.
8. 02:35:622 (3,4,5,6,7) - make the distance between them wider Don't mind...
9. 02:38:622 (2,3) - and 02:39:702 (5,6,7) - ^ ...IF I DO!
10. 02:42:702 (4,5) - look again, the distance on the timing panel is 1/2, but distance on the screen is different from 02:42:222 (2,3,4) - and 02:43:302 (5,6,7,8,9) - Fixed and distance'd.
11. 03:04:062 (7) - I don't like how it touches 03:03:582 (4) - D: make this:
    
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    Touching...has been separated.
12. 03:07:662 (2) - move it some grids right Al-Right. lol
13. 03:09:102 - add a note :< Yup.
14. 03:09:582 - ^ Hehe,maybe it will be more interesting without one here?
15. 03:13:422 (2,3,4) - it confuse me D: make normal spacing? Um. Let's say I changed it...a bit?
    
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16. 03:17:502 (2,3,4) - move it down and stack (3) with (4)Done~

crabovan wrote:

General
All fine. 'k xD

Hard

You map to the vocal? Yes.Kinda. Nippah~ :3
You have many strange sliders Uh yeaaaaah -___-
IMO this diff required full remap. This diff required a full remap, then it took a mod in the knee.

00:16:782 (2) - add clap to the start and end
00:18:702 (5) - add clap to the start 'k and 'k
00:21:462 - add note
00:21:822 - ^^^ Didn't plan to match the vocals here but 'k.
00:44:142 (4,5,6) - move from 00:43:182 (2) (overlap) Fixed~
01:03:582 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - straight lines? replace with more curve Curved a bit.
01:10:062 (1,2,3,4) - make a star from this A wha- ohgodwhy.Is it even possible to make a star with a slider like this uuuuh. I'll do something else that is easier for low IQ guys like me looool
01:13:182 (3,4,5) - replace with symmetry about axis X (click this if you don't know what is axis X) I don't see how they aren't placed fine in accordance with axis X already :/ . keepin' it.
01:16:902 (1,2,3) - add clap yuck,no offense,but this doesn't sound nice xD,keeping defaults.
01:35:022 (4) - make from this something like this Something like that.
01:40:782 (2) - redo with NORMAL wave >< hhhhhggghgh,ok.
02:09:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace this with symmetry about axis Y ok,this one can be done.
02:15:342 (1) - same as 01:35:022 (4) um,something.
02:51:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace this with symmetry about axis Y done
03:06:222 (2,3,4) - replace this with symmetry about axis X accomplised.
03:14:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^^ aaaand fixed.

Normal

00:41:262 (6) - add NC ok
00:59:022 (2) - this note too much overlap 01:00:462 (6) huh? uh,There is enough time for it to disappear before the slider appears IMO.
02:15:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace this with symmetry about axis Y uh hm,don't see what good this does :/ but will do,cuz the symmetry thingy looks interesting afterwards.

Easy
All fine. yayz

ezek wrote:

Easy
00:18:222 (3) - New combo There's no need.
00:25:902 (3) - ^ OK
00:35:502 (5) - New combo (if you do this you must remove it from 00:39:342 (1) and add to 00:41:262 (3) ) I'll keep it as it is.
01:04:782 (3) - New combo Unneeded.
02:13:422 (3) - ^ Added~
02:42:222 (6) - ^ Fixed.
02:47:982 (1) - Delete this spinner and extend the first to the end of this one. Oki doki, Made a big one.

Normal
00:26:862 (2) - Remove clap
00:28:302 (3) - Add clap
00:29:262 (6) - Remove whistle and add clap
If you do that 3 things it will sound fine. Section configured
00:33:102 (2) - Add clap No-no
01:15:822 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a Normal diff. change it for something more easy. Made something eazy.

Hard
You're using too much spinners on this diff.
Combos quite cool, but
Spinners are cruel, they
Banish thy thought, of
A perfect score.

Good luck with your map!, try to make better sliders Thanks, and I once again promise even though I have no idea how to do those frigin sli