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S3RL feat. Tamika - I Will Pick You Up

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Albatross
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 26. April 2017 at 10:44:47

Artist: S3RL feat. Tamika
Title: I Will Pick You Up
Tags: s3rl i will pick you up tamika albatross huge jumps jump map
BPM: 175
Filesize: 5449kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Albatross' Extra (6,35 stars, 770 notes)
Download: S3RL feat. Tamika - I Will Pick You Up
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This is my "Extra" difficulty from "I Will Pick You Up".
The original mapset can be found here!
This map is not completly finish. Updates will come in the future.
NOT going to be ranked!
Circle
Impression after trying your map once:

  1. Timed well
  2. I love this part. 01:07:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - cause it goes well with the rhythm. Nice choice of slider velocity and spacing.
  3. Would help if your jumps looked more organized. Need more variety in 1/2 jumps. Example: 03:02:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 01:44:913 (9,10) - feels a bit awkward (not fitting music)
  5. 02:07:713 (1) - circle slider after rectangular ones when music did not change? Need more attention to slider shape.
  6. Is it intentional for you to make 02:13:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read (tempo wise)? Cause it is. Not necessarily a bad thing.
  7. Overall mapping style fits nicely with the nightcore-ish music. Reminds me of 2012/2013 mapping.
thx for map. gl
Topic Starter
Albatross

Circle wrote:

Impression after trying your map once:

  1. Timed well
  2. I love this part. 01:07:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - cause it goes well with the rhythm. Nice choice of slider velocity and spacing.
  3. Would help if your jumps looked more organized. Need more variety in 1/2 jumps. Example: 03:02:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 01:44:913 (9,10) - feels a bit awkward (not fitting music)
  5. 02:07:713 (1) - circle slider after rectangular ones when music did not change? Need more attention to slider shape.
  6. Is it intentional for you to make 02:13:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to read (tempo wise)? Cause it is. Not necessarily a bad thing.
  7. Overall mapping style fits nicely with the nightcore-ish music. Reminds me of 2012/2013 mapping.
thx for map. gl
Thank you very much for your feedback! Helps me a lot and motivates me!
I can organize the jumps more, that's true. During my mapping, I moved around with my cursor and looked how it would be comfortable if the next circle will be on which position.

My plan wasn't to make it difficult to read! I will change it and make it easier to read.

Thx for your opinion on my map :)
Ayachi Nene_old
00:19:027 (1,2) - Not placed to vocals if thats what you're mapping to.
00:20:570 (5,1) - what is this mapped to
00:41:313 (2,3,4) - spacing inconsistent with your interval
01:51:256 (5) - nc
02:13:199 - try to be a bit more creative here, it's pretty boring to play the same patterns in addition to being a bit hard to read
02:24:170 (1) - this...kinda has less shazham compared to what the music i hear is trying to do. make this more epic lol
02:35:142 (1,2,3) - spacing

also u told me u wanted to make a fun jump map but u have a lot of unused space (ctrl+A ur map to see it). u have a lot of space to work with and it doesn't hurt to use it.
Topic Starter
Albatross
Thank you very much for answering me and testing my map!

Ayachi Nene wrote:

00:19:027 (1,2) - Not placed to vocals if thats what you're mapping to.
Changed

Ayachi Nene wrote:

00:20:570 (5,1) - what is this mapped to
Changed to an slider (listen to the basskick in the background)

Ayachi Nene wrote:

00:41:313 (2,3,4) - spacing inconsistent with your interval
Changed (I hope so)

Ayachi Nene wrote:

01:51:256 (5) - nc
?

Ayachi Nene wrote:

02:13:199 - try to be a bit more creative here, it's pretty boring to play the same patterns in addition to being a bit hard to read
I will change that tomorrow!

Ayachi Nene wrote:

02:24:170 (1) - this...kinda has less shazham compared to what the music i hear is trying to do. make this more epic lol
I will try to make it more epic, I added some circles, just need to change the positioning)

Ayachi Nene wrote:

02:35:142 (1,2,3) - spacing
I will change tomorrow, I will also change the positionings!
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