it seems like you're charting all the bell sounds as doubles which means 00:03:000 (3000|2) - 00:03:462 (3462|0) - need an extra note (there is a drum accompanying the second one and for the first one 00:03:116 (3116|0,3116|1) - doesn't have a drum accompaniment so there's got to be some consistency here)
because 00:04:154 (4154|1,4154|0) - is a stronger sound you'd think you could maybe place a double otherwise it's sharing the same intensity as other, quieter notes here
00:05:770 (5770|3,5885|1,5885|0) - maybe switch the density around here? seems like it would work better
00:07:616 (7616|0,7731|2,7731|3) - same here
00:07:846 (7846|0,7846|1) - triple density as mentioned before
00:08:770 (8770|0,8770|3) - same
00:09:116 (9116|0,9116|1) - i can't see any reason for this to be a double in comparison to the density in this section
00:09:635 - sound here but no note (place at col 3)
00:10:385 (10385|0,10385|3,10500|2) - these are both accompanied by the same sound why are they different densities
00:13:231 - grace note goes here on col 4
00:15:116 - singular 1/2 LN here? there is a sound there and it feels weird going unmapped
sounds like there should be another grace note around 00:16:500 - dunno what snap though
why aren't 00:16:731 (16731|1,16962|0) - the same density as 00:14:654 (14654|3,14654|2,14885|2,14885|3) -
00:18:577 (18577|2) - 00:22:270 (22270|1) - why are these not a double? (you mapped it as a double here 00:20:423 (20423|3,20423|2) - )
00:18:866 - sound here for a note
00:26:077 (26077|2) - only non doubled white line major note in these 2 measures, why?
00:26:193 (26193|0) - i can let off this one being a double because of space but not the previous suggestion
00:27:923 (27923|2) - same here with the white lines
00:29:770 (29770|1) - and here
00:31:616 (31616|2) - and here
00:31:962 (31962|3,31962|2,32077|1,32077|2,32193|1,32193|0) - these should be ascending note descending
00:33:346 (33346|1) - should be a double
00:33:462 (33462|3,33462|0) - debatable triple
00:40:846 (40846|3,40846|2) - if you're mapping triples for the strong drum beat then at least keep the ones on the white lines consistent
00:42:693 (42693|3,42693|2,42808|1,42808|0) - why are these two the same densities they're completely different
00:43:154 (43154|0,43154|3,43212|1,43270|2,43327|3) - either have this as just all singles, a jumptrill or a small js pattern
00:44:539 (44539|3,44539|1) - triple
if 00:46:270 (46270|0,46270|3,46270|1) - is a triple why isn't 00:46:385 (46385|3,46385|2) -
00:46:616 (46616|0,46616|3,46673|1,46731|2,46789|3) - past suggestion about single/double/js
00:46:846 (46846|0,46846|1) - the switch to just singular vocals doesn't come off that well with a double LN
there is gonna be one pattern complaint which is 00:52:616 (52616|2,52616|3,52673|0,52731|2,52731|3,52789|1,52789|0,52846|3,52846|2,52904|0,52962|3,52962|2,53020|1,53020|0,53077|2,53077|3) - you can do something like the following and it just works better
notes can be placed on 00:53:943 - 00:54:173 - 00:54:404 -
01:02:077 (62077|1) - two sounds here = two notes, if not, why is 01:02:193 (62193|3,62193|0) - a double then like the rest of the notes in this section (this will end up effecting like 25% of his section minimum so i'm not writing "same here" for 40 lines, use your best unbiased judgement)
01:02:308 - why is this completely audible sound just ignored
01:03:231 - same here
01:05:077 - and here (no more repeats)
in fact like that entire section from 01:01:846 - up to 01:09:231 - could use a rework in terms of consistency and density
01:10:616 (70616|0,70846|2) - LNs? or note 01:10:962 - ?
01:12:000 (72000|2,72000|3) - this has literally no reason to be a double
01:14:539 (74539|1,74539|2) - this has no strong drum beat to it so should be a single
01:17:539 (77539|1,77539|2,77539|0) - why is this a triple
01:19:385 (79385|1,79385|3,79385|0) - same
01:20:308 - until 01:25:616 - either make those notes on white lines doubles or make the notes on red lines doubles as there's a lack of consistency even if you could a held LN as a note in these sections
01:27:173 (87173|0,87173|1,87231|0) - that's just a bit cheeky
01:28:500 (88500|3,88500|2,88500|0,88616|1,88616|0,88731|2,88731|0,88731|3) - why not use the 1/8 here
if no 1/8 there at least make 01:28:500 (88500|3,88500|2,88500|0,88731|2,88731|0,88731|3) - doubles like they should be
same 01:30:346 (90346|3,90346|1,90346|0,90577|3,90577|0,90577|1) - or buff 01:30:693 (90693|0,90693|1,90808|2,90808|3) - instead
try 01:30:923 (90923|0,90923|3) - as a singular 1/4 ln and 01:31:154 (91154|3,91154|0) - as a singular 1/2 ln
01:31:385 - until 01:34:616 - repeat section
01:35:885 (95885|1,95885|0,95885|3,96116|1,96116|3,96116|0) - why are these triples? it makes no sense because no other strong sound in this section is mapped as triples (01:35:654 (95654|2,95654|0,95654|3) - is fine due to the intensity of the sound it produces)
01:36:693 (96693|3,96693|0,96808|2,96808|1) - singles because they're not as strong sounding as the previous notes and then make 01:36:923 (96923|0,96923|3,96923|1) - a double
01:38:077 (98077|3,98077|2,98193|0,98193|1) - should both be triples with their intensity
map 01:39:808 (99808|0,99808|1,99866|3) - as a double with one note being LN because there's a 1/8 buzz sound here completely ignored and just having it be continuous jumpstream ruins the feeling of this section here
01:40:039 (100039|3,100039|2,100096|0,100154|2,100154|1,100212|3,100270|1,100270|0,100327|2) - same here
01:41:077 (101077|3,101077|0,101135|1,101193|3,101193|2,101250|0,101308|2,101308|1,101366|3) - same here
01:41:770 (101770|3,101798|2,101885|3,101914|2) - ctrl-G for switching of intensity (1/8 to 1/16 buzzing sound)
01:42:000 (102000|3,102000|2) - map as one singular 2/1 LN
01:42:462 - until 01:49:846 -
EVERY 2/1 note should be a double
01:50:770 - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
im going to have to stop here for now because i need to wake up in 6 hours but i believe you have the ability to check through the rest of the diff itself to notice any more consistency issues also you better not waive this as a no change because i spent 2 hours on it unbiased over what is essentially objective issues (inconsistency should be counted as objective) and im only here to help (i already modded it once here i go again)