Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

rui

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rui 2017-03-08T15:02:32+00:00

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Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
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Tags:Tomoka Rin Nifty rui 	opening op tv size 5pb. 科学アドベンチャーシリーズ science adventure series 妄想科学adv mousou kagaku adv
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Emonal

168 posts

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Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-10T11:15:20+00:00

Metaku wrote:
Hi!!! Mod from q (Mod back if you want to )

[General]
The diff settings for normal are way too high. Consider dropping AR to 5 or less and OD to 4 or 3. Hard could also be dropped to ar 7 and od 6 but hp could be increased to 5 imo. On the other hand rui's diff could be increased to OD 8,5 or so to better fit the spread.
Gap between hard and insane is also quite big so you should probably try to get a light insane diff in between them
ok, I'll make an easy and a light insane

[Normal]
I'm lazy after modding all the higher diffs so I'll just point out general issues
Since this is your lowest diff and this is a high bpm song I'd really suggest avoiding 1/2 gaps between notes... Especially when it requires a lot of clicking in short time like 00:22:407 (2,3,4) -
00:53:836 (1,1) - spinner recovery time should be longer here too
And instead of focusing on vocals all of the time you should try focus on other instruments too when they are clearly more powerful like 01:22:550 (2,3,4) -

[Hard]

00:01:693 (1) - Not really necessary nc here
00:02:550 (3) - better end this earlier and have something for downbeat
00:04:122 (1,2,3) - Kinda weird rhythm here. First the emphasis is on vocals but then it's on the drums right after
00:06:836 (2) - Doesn't really fit imo. I'd keep the 1/2 slider pattern you had
00:09:693 - Pretty weird place for a break imo since the following section is quite intensecuz that part will be a little hard if I make it, u can discover that I only map this part in the diffs above insane. So nope.
00:18:693 - this is pretty calm section so I think you should've use smaller SV and less dense rhythms here... as of now there's no noticeable difference with 00:28:264 -
00:27:122 (1,2) - I think 1/2 repeats would work better here
00:35:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - could probably have a bit bigger spacing here
01:00:835 (5) - should probably change this since you followed vocals before
01:07:550 (3) - Might want to nc this to keep consistent with before
01:09:978 (5,6) - could change the rhythm here to match vocals better (ctrl g)
01:10:407 (7,1) - swap nc
01:13:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing... Not by much but due to the small spacing it's quite noticeablebut I map it with ds lol, still do my best to fix it.
01:21:978 (1,3) - Looks pretty random overlap to me
01:23:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - space out the 1/1 gaps more, they are quite easy to read wrong as 1/2 gaps for newer players

[Insane]

00:01:693 (5,1) - I think you should change these to match the vocals better as it seems to be your main focus here
00:03:121 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm could be better here... First you choose instrumentals over vocals but then you do the opposite right after
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as on Extra, you really could use 1/2 here instead since the build up feels kinda weak with just 1/1 circles
00:09:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could try to add a little variation here tbh like you did here 00:14:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's ok cuz the variation between the two is only the slider shape. but I tried to make it more consistent.
00:20:264 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could map the vocals here instead of the hihats...nope, I want to make some change here ( following the hithats) I follow more vocals in low diffs, on the contrary, I follow more instrument in high diff.
00:22:835 (2,1) - maybe ctrl g so they'd match the vocals better?nope, the spacing will be so weird.
00:25:264 (3,4) - Weird rhythm choice imo since the stronger vocals are on white ticksnice
00:25:835 (5) - This on the other hand could be a slider end no real need for a circle here
00:25:978 (1,2,3,1,2) - This part would be much more interesting if you mapped it to the drums like in the extra :/too hard XD
00:28:264 (1,2,3) - Not the best rhythm choice again as 2 lands on a pretty nonexistent beat while the tail of 3 has a vocal. Maybe change to slider first and then 2 circles?but the first sliderend is still on that nonexistent beat, still change it.
00:29:264 (1,3) - Yeah again don't really like these. Would match vocals better too if you just had 1/2 sliders instead
00:32:693 (6) - pretty weak beat so could just have 5 as slider insteadnope, I want it consistent with 00:32:264 (3,4) -
00:32:835 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm choice could be better again, if you follow vocals 1 could be 2 circles instead and 00:33:264 (3,4) - could be 2 1/2 sliders. Would match vocals betters and wouldn't skip the drum beat in middle of 3
00:34:264 (2) - if you're following vocals then this doesn't really work... 00:33:835 (1,2) - could be 2 1/2 sliders and a circle to match the vocals better
00:34:550 (3,4,5,6) - emphasis could be better here. Should be on 3 and 5 but currently the most emphasis is on 6
00:40:121 (2,3) - could have a triple hereyeah I had it originally, but one modder said it has no sound here, still change to triple.
00:40:264 (3) - feels kinda off as the tail is stronger than the head atm... Maybe shorten to 1/2 and add something to 00:40:550 -
00:44:835 (4,5,6) - spacing againwat?
00:48:264 (4,1) - 1/1 sliders again...
00:50:550 (6) - Not really good imo since tail is stronger than the head here
00:53:407 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I get that you don't want to use too big spacings on jump patterns but it feels kinda low spacing comapred to stuff like 00:36:264 (1,2,1,2,3) - and 00:44:693 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - before. If anything this part should have bigger spacing as it's getting pretty intense
00:56:978 (1,2) - I don't think stack is the best way here. I think a jump would work a lot better
00:57:978 (1,2,1,2) - pretty big difference in spacing between these two
01:03:407 (4) - if you're following vocals you could add circles in places like this which support itnot fits here cuz there're jumps backward
01:09:550 (2) - here too^ I don't want to add too much circle
01:14:121 (1) - Not really needed NC here
01:20:835 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really work imo as 3 and 4 have drums on tails too so identical 4 sliders isn't really good
01:23:121 (1,2,3) - A bit weird to change to sliders from 01:22:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - since these have even more emphasis

no reply means fixed
finally finished to insane ( insane passed 5 star lol )
will fix extra tomorrow

Emonal

168 posts

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Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-12T13:29:35+00:00

Metaku wrote:
Hi!!! Mod from q (Mod back if you want to )

[NeeNee]

00:01:979 (3) - could be 2 circles if you're following vocalsI think slider can follow vocals here too, but still change it
00:02:550 (1) - I think you don't need to nc this one
00:04:693 (3) - kinda weak sound here so I think it would be better stacked with 2
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a build up so I find it weird to decrease note density here, imo you could at least use 1/2 sliders or something as it feels kinda empty compared to before as it is
00:12:836 (5,6) - I think you could angle these a bit more so they'd be more consistent with other slider pairs
00:16:979 (1,2) - Definitely could use bigger spacing with these imoI like the spacing between the note and slider here, so I increase the spaicng of each nc part.
00:19:121 - hmm this is a rather calm part so I think it's weird to use so high sv here since it's the same as 00:09:978 - which is a lot more intense part
00:19:693 (1) - no need for nc imo
00:20:264 - I know you're following vocals but these empty downbeats feel kinda weird... Maybe add circles there and stack with previous note and move the next note somewhere as a jump?
00:20:693 (3) - This slider feels kinda weird imo... Maybe ctrl g with 2?
00:25:407 (3) - I think this should be something else than a 1/1 since now you're missing a vocal in the middle
00:25:979 (1,2) - the beat on 2 is pretty weak so maybe ctrl g these so it'd be circle and then 1/2 slider?nope, there's a bass sound on 2
00:27:550 (4) - This deserves a bigger spacing as it's pretty emphasized note. I'd also nc it but that's up to you
00:27:979 (7) - same here could use bigger spacing compared to the previous notes as it's more emphasized
00:27:979 (7,1,2) - 2 is a lot weaker than 1 so I find it weird that the spacing here is pretty much the same
00:28:550 (3) - could probably be 2 circles for vocals
00:29:265 (1,3) - I don't think these work too well here since the drum beat in the middle is quite noticeable. Maybe use a 1/2 slider + circle instead? The song is getting more intense here anyway so increasing note density wouldn't hurt.
00:30:550 (1,2,3,4) - I think the rhythm could be better since now you're focusing on drums with 1 and 2 and 3 but then ignoring them with 4
00:31:836 (2,3) - Same here, no matter what you follow the stronger beats are on 2's tail and in middle of 3
00:32:550 (4,5) - very weak beat on 5 so doesn't make sense to space these more than 00:32:122 (3,4) - I'd probably stack these or replace 4 with a 1/2 slider
00:33:265 (3) - same thing about rhythm as before, 1/2 + circle would probably work better
00:34:979 (6,1) - You should rearrange these as 1 really deserves a bigger spacing. Now it seems you just ran out of space and that's why the spacing is so small
00:35:121 (1,2,3) - Spacing could be better... 2 is a very weak beat while 1 and 3 are lot stronger but the spacing is equal on them
00:37:407 - The whole section here could be better imo. 00:37:407 (1) - is ignoring a lot of sounds, 00:38:550 - ignored audible downbeat here and some other places too, 00:40:265 (1) - and 00:41:407 (1) - have audible sounds on red ticks so they'd work better as 1/2 sliders, 00:41:979 (2) - is a really strong beat but is now very underspaced because of the 3/4 slider... Lots of issues imo so I'd suggest you to try mapping this section a bit differently as I feel it's lower quality than the map overall.
00:43:979 (2,3,4,5,1) - here too something else than a stream could work better like using a 1/4 slider to emphasize the vocal on 4
00:48:693 (1) - Same as earlier but especially here since the song is getting quite intense so I'd avoid using 1/1 sliders at all
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite a big change compared to 00:51:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - as you change from all 1/2 to all circles even tho there isn't that big of a change in the song so I'd probably try to even it out a bit and maybe make 00:51:693 (1) - into 2 circles and these 00:53:122 (3,4,1,2) - into 1/2 sliders or smtng
00:56:122 (1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm these anti jumps feel a bit weird since it's the final part of the build up before kiai. I'd rather space them more and make 00:56:979 (1,2) - into a big jump since a stack feels kinda underwhelming here.
00:58:836 (1,2,3) - I'd change 1 into a 1/4 slider and space these more to keep the strong emphasis on vocals like in 00:57:979 (1,2,1,2) -
01:09:122 (4,5,1) - 5 is a weak beat so spacing could be better again
01:09:550 (2) - I think 2 circles would work better here as there are vocals on both ticks and a drum on the tail too so I don't think a slider is the way to go here
01:11:693 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would work better here, could also space 01:11:979 (2) - more if you changed it.
01:13:693 (5) - yeah here too. There's no sound that strong here so I don't think a 3/4 is necessary as you'll miss a sound on the red tick.
01:15:265 (1) - no need to nc here
01:16:265 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think rhythm could be better here as there are strong sounds on the slider ends now and there as strong beat in middle of 01:16:265 (1) -
01:20:836 (1,2,3,4) - there are 2 drum beats on 3 so making a pattern with 4 identical sliders doesn't really work
01:23:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - again a really small spacing on part that has strong emphasis ._. I'd really suggest making these jumps as it feels pretty weird after the intense jumps before and these sounds are even stronger on the music well, change a bit

\o/
really thanks for ur modding

rui

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rui 2017-03-13T11:34:15+00:00

Metaku wrote:
[rui's Extra]
00:05:979 (1) - 00:07:121 (1) - I don't think these ncs are necessary keep
00:16:835 - Why did you skip this strong beat ._. add note
00:25:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this rhythm and spacing is kinda weird since there's nothing in the music that indicates 7 equally spaced notes ok. change placement.
00:31:122 (4) - I think a 1/2 + circle would work better here as it would get the vocal and keep the drums clickable like before you are saying is right. but I don't change it to avoid one pattern.
00:34:407 (2,3) - Could use more variable spacing here as 2 is rather weak compared to 3 especially when you've been focusing on drums so I'd expect 3 to be emphasized more compared to 2 change placement.
00:36:836 (3,4,5) - Could use something with bigger spacing here, these stand out and you had bigger spacing on the previous part in general change placement.
00:49:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again a pattern like this doesn't really tell me anything nor does it follow or emphasise anything properly. keep
00:59:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm could be better as now it seems you're just randomly switching between circles and sliders I don't like randomly placement
01:00:836 (3) - I'd rather not use a random 1/1s on kiai especially since there's nothing that'd suggest using one sorry. but keep it
01:03:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beats on red ticks are quite weak so I don't see a reason to make an equally spaced jump pattern here fixed
01:04:836 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here are actually strong notes but you use a smaller spacing on them ._. expanded the distance
Overall I think you could've made this diff more interesting if you prioritized the vocals that had more variation instead of the static drum beat　

Thank you mod Metaku. Your mod was helpful.

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rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-03-13T15:05:56+00:00

Emonal san. If you change to use soft hit sound, you need to learn Sampleset and Additions imo.
Soft sound only feel that something is missing imo. Sampleset and Additions are important technique to add a strong sound.

t/306177 (Advanced Method 1 and Advanced Method 2)

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-13T17:25:50+00:00

rui wrote:
Emonal san. If you change to use soft hit sound, you need to learn Sampleset and Additions imo.
Soft sound only feel that something is missing imo. Sampleset and Additions are important technique to add a strong sound.

t/306177 (Advanced Method 1 and Advanced Method 2)

Ok, I'll take a look
Rui san Thanks d(`･∀･)b

Yona

185 posts

Joined February 2016

Yona 2017-03-17T20:56:47+00:00

(∩ツ)⊃━☆ﾟ.* From my modding queue ~

Tomoka's Oni

00:03:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Instead of repeating kat then don, you should alternate
00:03:121 (1,5,7) - I suggest you to add kat here for highlight the "boom"
00:05:693 (2) to 00:07:406 (8) - I suggest you to do 1/2 stream
something like that? :

00:18:264 (8) - k?
00:19:406 (3) - I don't understand your choice to put a kat here. You follow the voice, but after you stop to follow it while the other times you follow the "boom". I suggest you to delete it and to put a kat at 00:19:121 (1) to highlight the cutie song as at 00:19:693 (5)
and to follow the "boom" you have to add k at 00:19:978 (6,7)
01:04:693 (4,5,6,7,8) - kkddd seems better because the sound is descending
01:16:121 - add a d?
01:16:407 (2) - k?
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - kkddk?
01:23:979 (6,7) - dk or kk?

Raphalge

482 posts

Joined January 2014

Raphalge 2017-03-18T18:58:07+00:00

Ito Kanako :>

[Tomoka's Oni]
00:00:835 - greenline off by 1ms
00:00:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why finishers? the vocals are not that strong, and the only bass drums are on 00:00:835 (1) - and 00:01:978 -

00:03:121 - greenline off by 1ms again
00:27:549 (12,13) - ctrl+g and 00:27:835 (14) - d would probably be more comfortable to play
00:41:549 (10) - d for more vocal emphasis?
00:54:263 (8,9,10,11,12) - kdkkd? give preparation for 00:55:263 (17,18,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:27:978 - green line is off by 1ms
00:28:264 - green line is off by 1ms
00:36:835 - green line off by 1ms
00:41:978 - green line off by 1ms again
01:04:549 (3) - to 01:06:835 (1) - doesn't emphasise vocals like the rest of the section which makes it very weird to play, consider mapping it more like you did at 00:57:978 (1) -

patterning is nice

[Nifty's Muzukashii]
fix greenline issues like in tomoka's diff
00:16:835 (43) - consider deleting this to give muzukashii players a better change to hit the 210bpm finishers
00:55:692 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - this seems reaaaallly hard, idk about this

looks pretty good!

really liking this song, gl with rank

Tomoka Rin

Former osu! Champion: #1

378 posts

Joined June 2009

Tomoka Rin 2017-03-19T06:05:11+00:00

Yonakr wrote:
(∩ツ)⊃━☆ﾟ.* From my modding queue ~
Tomoka's Oni
00:03:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Instead of repeating kat then don, you should alternate
00:03:121 (1,5,7) - I suggest you to add kat here for highlight the "boom"
00:05:693 (2) to 00:07:406 (8) - I suggest you to do 1/2 stream
something like that? :

00:18:264 (8) - k?
00:19:406 (3) - I don't understand your choice to put a kat here. You follow the voice, but after you stop to follow it while the other times you follow the "boom". I suggest you to delete it and to put a kat at 00:19:121 (1) to highlight the cutie song as at 00:19:693 (5)
and to follow the "boom" you have to add k at 00:19:978 (6,7)
01:04:693 (4,5,6,7,8) - kkddd seems better because the sound is descending
01:16:121 - add a d?
01:16:407 (2) - k?
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - kkddk?
01:23:979 (6,7) - dk or kk?

thanks for mod!

1/2 streams is more comfortable than before.

Tomoka Rin

Former osu! Champion: #1

378 posts

Joined June 2009

Tomoka Rin 2017-03-19T06:09:31+00:00

Raphalge wrote:
Ito Kanako :>

[Tomoka's Oni]
00:00:835 - greenline off by 1ms
00:00:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why finishers? the vocals are not that strong, and the only bass drums are on 00:00:835 (1) - and 00:01:978 -
00:03:121 - greenline off by 1ms again
00:27:549 (12,13) - ctrl+g and 00:27:835 (14) - d would probably be more comfortable to play
00:41:549 (10) - d for more vocal emphasis?
00:54:263 (8,9,10,11,12) - kdkkd? give preparation for 00:55:263 (17,18,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:27:978 - green line is off by 1ms
00:28:264 - green line is off by 1ms
00:36:835 - green line off by 1ms
00:41:978 - green line off by 1ms again
01:04:549 (3) - to 01:06:835 (1) - doesn't emphasise vocals like the rest of the section which makes it very weird to play, consider mapping it more like you did at 00:57:978 (1) -

patterning is nice

really liking this song, gl with rank

Thanks for mod !

btw

(idk what happened on the green line but i fixed it XD.)

Nifty

Beatmap Nominator

898 posts

Joined September 2014

Nifty 2017-03-19T06:29:04+00:00

Updated my diff ^^

OwO!

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 37407
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Uncontrollable (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable (TV Size)
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:YoNiko
Version:Nifty's Muzukashii
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:Tomaka Rin nifty
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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victorfernando

292 posts

Joined October 2016

victorfernando 2017-03-19T15:41:52+00:00

the title is wrong is Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size)

Easy

CS 2,8 AR 3,2 BPM is more than 170 <
01:14:071 make this a wave slider :
make this timing point kiai time too

Normal

CS 3 AR 5 OD 4 HP DRAIN 4
don't forget kiai time too here
00:41:990 make this slider better

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-20T11:37:36+00:00

victorfernando wrote:
the title is wrong is Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size)no cuz this
Easy
CS 2,8 AR 3,2 BPM is more than 170 <
01:14:071 make this a wave slider : I like straight one XD
make this timing point kiai time too
I did this because I want the flash again in the second kiai

Normal
CS 3 AR 5 OD 4 HP DRAIN 4
don't forget kiai time too here
00:41:990 make this slider better
no I like this one cuz the curve in this slider reflect the music

no reply means fixed
thanks for ur mod and star

Inversal

508 posts

Joined November 2014

Inversal 2017-03-25T11:11:02+00:00

Oh!

Normally "TV size" write like this. Please fix (TV size)

Like the previous mod says

No KDS

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-25T11:29:00+00:00

Inversal wrote:
Oh!

Normally "TV size" write like this. Please fix (TV size)

Like the previous mod says

No KDS

Well, two people mentioned this so change it
Thanks!

kwk

572 posts

Joined May 2010

kwk 2017-03-25T12:03:54+00:00

hello
[Easy]

i think the rhythm is a bit too complicated for easy kiai rhythm feels more like normal?. i think you can try and simplify a bit more for example 00:57:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you can do http://puu.sh/uXPTA/c8cf74e7b5.png
00:00:264 (1) - i think circle here is better to simplify rhythm
00:01:407 - end here is better imo since you are following background and not vocals?
00:04:264 (5) - 2 circle instead because strong sound on start+end?
00:19:978 (2,1) - i suggest you try this rhythm instead i think is more natural http://puu.sh/uXPrc/2274ca9052.png same for 00:22:264 (2,1,2) -
00:30:550 (1,2,3) - hitsounding sounds a bit strange? maybe remove clap from 00:28:550 (2) - - tail? do the same for 00:30:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:36:835 (2) - circle instead?
00:53:407 (1) - end here instead? 00:55:693 - i think it makes more sense

[Normal]

00:00:264 (1,2) - blanket fix
00:03:121 (3) - end slider at 00:03:693 (4) - ?
00:19:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/uXQlP/b15710ef79.png try this instead?
00:19:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is one big circle motion, consider introducing some flow directional changes
00:28:264 - is this section following vocals? if it isn't you can simplify rhythm here a lo
00:46:550 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/uXQAi/7025b4b737.png try this rhythm?
00:53:407 (1) - end here instead? same as ez

~~i'll do the rest of the diffs later need to sleep dont kd~~

[Hard]

00:03:121 (1,2) - stack these together instead? since downbeat is on circle and not on slider since you use slider for downbeats here 00:04:264 (1,3) - and its different to 00:04:693 (2,3) -
00:07:121 (3,4) - do this instead? http://puu.sh/uYDfd/5b87d448d1.png
00:19:121 (1) - i think lower ds might work better for this section so contrast with this section 00:20:550 (2) - is stronger.
00:20:264 (1,2,3,4) - consider reducing the ds? i think 0.9x is better since this section is rather calm. same for the rest of this section (ur ds in this section for insane is a lot smaller than your hard..)
00:53:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think slider is better here but just increase ds instead and use circles for 00:54:550 (1,2,3,4) -
00:56:979 (1,2) - very questionable for hard since it is very misleading
01:01:407 (7) - nc here instead
00:41:979 (1,2,3,1) - i think would be cool if you repeat what you did here 00:37:407 (1,2,1) - you cant really hear the additional sounds in the background at 100% speed so i dont think its necessary to follow it too much

just in general but i think the pattern building and general aesthetics can be significantly improved in your lower diffs. your insane looks a lot prettier than your lower diffs.

[Insane]

00:04:264 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm is strange here when finish lands on slider tail of 00:04:693 (3) - and it doesnt play very well. i dont think you should follow vocal rhythm in this section but up to you
00:08:978 (2,4) - 00:19:407 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
00:14:550 (1,2) - not symmetrical
00:17:264 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm here for these
00:18:693 (4) - why no ds change here? you do it for hard/extra
00:19:693 (4,5) - 00:22:264 (4) - i think you should try and represent these the same way
00:34:407 (3,4) - increase ds here? i think it flows a bit better and nice emphasis
01:13:978 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i think you can find better pattern here.. if you want to keep i suggest you stack these 01:13:978 (1,2) -
01:15:407 (2,3,4,5,1) - can you make it more circular/smooth?

[NeeNee]

00:02:550 (4) - why 1x? its very sudden and are you sure you want to skip this beat 00:02:835 - ?
00:11:122 (1,3,4) - do the same as 00:09:979 (1,3,4) - ? not sure why the jump 00:11:265 (2,3) - is a lot bigger when same sound
00:17:407 (1,2) - might be cool if you gradually increase ds for these 00:17:836 (1,2) - 00:18:265 (1,2) -
00:27:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if your stacking 4 and 7 for the emphasis you should do the same for 1 since its the same sound, try make this pattern consistent
00:36:265 (1,2) - i think ds should be bigger here?
00:41:407 (1,1) - this sv change doesnt make sense to me, what are you trying to do here? 00:43:407 (1,1) - this at least follows vocals
00:53:407 (1) - should start the back and forth pattern from here
00:53:693 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing is a bit inconsistent if you highlight it and also imo the ds here should be a lot bigger since it is the biggest peak in the song imo same as here 00:55:693 (1,2,3,1) - ds should be bigger, i dont see why 01:11:121 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern has a harder jump
01:06:836 (1) - i would increase ds here instead of lowering it if you want to change sv..

i think lower diffs a lot of work with patterning/aesthetics, insane/extra seems a lot better in comparison

good luck!

Last edited by kwk 2017-03-26T05:29:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-25T13:12:08+00:00

kwk wrote:
hello
[Easy]
i think the rhythm is a bit too complicated for easy kiai rhythm feels more like normal?. i think you can try and simplify a bit more for example 00:57:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you can do http://puu.sh/uXPTA/c8cf74e7b5.png uhh but what u did is what I did in my normal diff
00:00:264 (1) - i think circle here is better to simplify rhythm
00:01:407 - end here is better imo since you are following background and not vocals?
00:04:264 (5) - 2 circle instead because strong sound on start+end?nope, I don't want it too hard in the beginning
00:19:978 (2,1) - i suggest you try this rhythm instead i think is more natural http://puu.sh/uXPrc/2274ca9052.png same for 00:22:264 (2,1,2) -
00:30:550 (1,2,3) - hitsounding sounds a bit strange? maybe remove clap from 00:28:550 (2) - - tail? do the same for 00:30:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:36:835 (2) - circle instead?nope cuz there's a finish on sliderend
00:53:407 (1) - end here instead? 00:55:693 - i think it makes more sense but if I end there I can't put anything in that blank part so change to here 00:56:121 -

[Normal]
00:00:264 (1,2) - blanket fix
00:03:121 (3) - end slider at 00:03:693 (4) - ?nope cuz I don't want to ingnore 00:03:407 - and the vocal
00:19:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/uXQlP/b15710ef79.png try this instead?it's good if it's easy but I want to keep those drum sounds and my hs
00:19:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is one big circle motion, consider introducing some flow directional changes
00:28:264 - is this section following vocals? if it isn't you can simplify rhythm here a lo
00:46:550 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/uXQAi/7025b4b737.png try this rhythm?they can be in easy
00:53:407 (1) - end here instead? same as ez
i'll do the rest of the diffs later need to sleep dont kd

will recheck all things tomorrow :thinking:
I feel a little confused on easy and normal;w;

Kazaze

250 posts

Joined May 2014

Kazaze 2017-03-25T15:49:00+00:00

Hey! Here for our M4M.
I want to apologize for the delay, I promised I would mod your map on wednesday.

Nifty's Muzukashii

• 00:01:979 (2) - Change to a D, it sounds way lower than 00:00:836 (1)
• 00:10:979 (6) - You might consider removing this note so it creates a repetition of 00:09:979 (1,2,3)
• 00:13:836 (22) - Remove this note, it would play much more smoother
• 00:15:550 (31) - Remove this note if you agreed on the previous suggestion (00:10:979 (6) -)
• 00:21:264 (12) - Remove in order to emphasize the strong vocals on 00:21:407 (13)
• 00:27:407 (42,43,44,45) - What do you think of : kd dk
• 00:30:121 (56) - Move this note to : 00:30:693 -
• 00:36:121 - You can a d here for the vocals
• 00:52:978 (159) - Remove to emphasize on the pause you can hear in the vocals
• 01:06:550 (224) - Remove this note to create a better flow on that part and emphasize the end of the first part of the chorus
• 01:17:407 (281) - Move that note to 01:17:121 - to follow the vocals
○ 01:20:835 - Is a Kiai time really necessary on that part?

Tomoka's Oni

Side note : I can see that your mapping isn't based on the vocals that much, I hope that won't make my mod useless because my suggestions are often based on highlighting and emphasizing the vocals.
• 00:00:835 (1) - Change to a k to emphasize on the vocals being higher than 00:00:977 (2) -
• 00:01:263 (3,4) - If you applied the previous suggestion, I suggest using Ctrl+g to swap them
• 00:01:835 (6) - Change to a k to follow the vocals
• 00:02:120 (7,8) - Ctrl + g : Swap these two too for the vocals again
• 00:04:263 (5) - Change to d to highlight the strong instrumentals
• 00:04:835 (7) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^
• 00:04:549 (6) - Change this note to a k to emphasize the following note as a d
• 00:42:834 (5) - Change to a d for consistency with : 00:37:406 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
• 00:57:978 (1) - Consider adding a finisher here
• 01:07:121 (3) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^
• 01:16:264 (1) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^

Solid taiko difficulties.
Best of luck for the future!

Hanazawa Kana

727 posts

Joined February 2013

Hanazawa Kana 2017-03-26T14:58:42+00:00

来了
低难度我就不看了应该也没啥问题吧

[Hard]
嗯先不说摆放吧我先说一下节奏吧我试玩了一下感觉就是慢的地方空的太多快的地方都塞爆了..
说一点例子吧你看着改改
00:20:264 (1,2,3,4) - 其实我感觉这种就感觉特别空要不就用滑条带过去要不就把这四个note摆的有点规律比如正方形什么的

00:29:264 - 从这里开始我看你后面都是1/2塞爆了这个对hard来说应该是很难打....我的建议是你如果是想跟鼓的话歌曲有停顿的地方一定要表现出来比如这种00:30:407 - 00:32:121 - 然后稍微把一些1/2改成1/1...跟点人声或者自创点节奏打起来会好很多..
还有就是低难度尽量不要overmap hard里面歌曲本来的节奏已经简化了再加上歌曲没有的节奏就会感觉很莫名

抱歉不过我感觉这个难度还需要改挺多的..

[Inversal's Insane]
just some suggestions
00:27:121 (1,2,3) - you can make them as a repeat slider,or reduce the distance between them,since it's suddenly larger the ds when the object around them are all using low DS.
00:30:835 (2,3) - i suggest to ctrl+j and move it a bit to better the flow
01:06:978 - i guess there's no beat... you can make 01:06:835 (7) - into a 1/2 slider instead

[Insane]
00:20:121 (5,1) - 我觉得这个1可以删掉虽然也是有音但是它相对于5来说太过于轻了而你这个pattern是强调1的所以感觉打着就有点别扭吧或者你考虑吧这个沙锤的音换个跟的方式?比如放滑条尾什么的
从00:36:550 - 到00:46:550 - 我觉得这里节奏的摆放应该有点停顿
00:37:407 (1) - 我觉得应该是把结尾snap到00:37:978 - 吧
01:13:978 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这个排列很难打考虑改改?
不错感觉眼前一亮

要熄灯了后面两个难度随便水下吧
[rui's Extra]
sry for short mod
00:00:836 (1,1,1,1) - you can reduce the sv a bit,looks awkward since the beginning of the song is not that fast

[Extra]
01:09:835 (4) - 这是什么...
挺好的感觉就是需要注意点美观问题然后还有大跳有点大个人感觉需要nerf一点

加油

Tomoka Rin

Former osu! Champion: #1

378 posts

Joined June 2009

Tomoka Rin 2017-03-26T15:14:32+00:00

Kazaze wrote:
Hey! Here for our M4M.
I want to apologize for the delay, I promised I would mod your map on wednesday.

Tomoka's Oni
Side note : I can see that your mapping isn't based on the vocals that much, I hope that won't make my mod useless because my suggestions are often based on highlighting and emphasizing the vocals.
• 00:00:835 (1) - Change to a k to emphasize on the vocals being higher than 00:00:977 (2) -
• 00:01:263 (3,4) - If you applied the previous suggestion, I suggest using Ctrl+g to swap them
• 00:01:835 (6) - Change to a k to follow the vocals
• 00:02:120 (7,8) - Ctrl + g : Swap these two too for the vocals again
• 00:04:263 (5) - Change to d to highlight the strong instrumentals
• 00:04:835 (7) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^
• 00:04:549 (6) - Change this note to a k to emphasize the following note as a d
• 00:42:834 (5) - Change to a d for consistency with : 00:37:406 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
• 00:57:978 (1) - Consider adding a finisher here
• 01:07:121 (3) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^
• 01:16:264 (1) - ^ Same suggestion as above ^
Solid taiko difficulties.
Best of luck for the future!

Got it !

I follow the drum almost.

Thanks you for mod.

Inversal

508 posts

Joined November 2014

Inversal 2017-03-26T15:35:21+00:00

Hanazawa Kana wrote:
just some suggestions
00:27:121 (1,2,3) - you can make them as a repeat slider,or reduce the distance between them,since it's suddenly larger the ds when the object around them are all using low DS. That's really strong beat right there. So I make jumps here.
00:30:835 (2,3) - i suggest to ctrl+j and move it a bit to better the flow That don't improve the flow much I guess. So I don't have to change this.
01:06:978 - i guess there's no beat... you can make 01:06:835 (7) - into a 1/2 slider instead Okay

加油

Thanks for the mod!

Stack

osu! Alumni

729 posts

Joined March 2015

Stack 2017-04-03T13:06:59+00:00

NM from my queue
yes I know I'm really late, was busy with other things and also worked on my own map a bit but I finally got around to making it

Rui's Extra

00:00:834 (1,1,1,1,2) - If you use 210BPM 1/4 gaps, I would make the spacing smaller as now its almost normal jump sized, try stacking the sliderheads and ends. 00:04:836 (2,3), right here the spacing was the same as for the long sliders but the gap was 1/2

00:07:121 (1,1) - Overlapping sliders like this doesn't look nice, so maybe try something else

00:08:836 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern it like this so its more predictablehttps://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/5Yqmner.png

00:11:979 (5,6,1) - would keep spacing the same as you don't need this much emphasis on 00:12:265 (1)

00:25:407 (3,4,5) - make this line straight so it looks better

00:30:836 (3,4) - the spacing between these 2 is too big compared to the 00:30:550 (1,2,3) spacing you had before

00:37:122 (5,1,2) - I like the stack for the 1/1 gap but I don't think you should stack another note under that with a 1/2 gap

00:38:265 (3,4) and 00:39:407 (6,1) I would choose between stacking 1/1 or 1/2 but not both together

00:49:979 (1,4) - I just don't like how these overlap, would full stack or not make them touch at all

00:54:550 (1,2,3,4) - making a rectangle here makes it so that all diagonal jumps are longer, like 00:54:550 (1,2) and 00:54:836 (3,4) and therefor making the 00:54:693 (2,3) jump shorter and a bit weird so I would change up this pattern

The patterns in the chorus seem fine but they are very inconsistent spacing wise and some jumps are way longer than others

01:09:979 (3) - Just make this a normal reverse as the sharp curve doesn't reflect the sound

Spacing inconsistency example 01:12:550 (4,1) and 01:12:836 (1,2) first jump is suuper long, the second one is way shorter, also 01:13:979 (1,2,3,4)

01:17:693 (5,6) - stack these as you also stack 1/1 on alot of other spots, this makes it seem like a 1/2

01:23:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - nerf these jumps a bit as they are a bit too large

NeeNee

00:01:265 (3) - NC so the cap is clearer

00:01:978 (1) - remove NC as it isn't needed to signify something new

00:02:265 (3,4,1) - gap of 34 is way larger than 41, would make these the same

00:11:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing varies too much, you can change the sapcing a little bit during jumps but this much is uncomfortable to play

00:11:693 (5,6) - spacing to small compared to the rest of the map

00:12:836 (5,6) - ^ and all slider like this, the map is more intense here than these sliders imply

00:19:693 (4) - The sound on this sliderend should be clickable

00:27:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would try another pattern here as this one doesn't look nice

00:35:693 (1) - NC isn't needed

00:36:550 (1) - ^

00:45:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not that fun to play

00:48:693 (6,2,3,4) - This overlap doesn't look nice

01:09:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels really cluttered, 123 is fine but 456 play really weird

01:17:407 (1,2,3) - use ds to keep spacing equal here

01:19:979 (2,3,4,5) - If anything should be spaced further away, it's 23 as there can be emphasis on these notes. 01:20:550 (5) doesn't need this much spacing

01:21:407 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Would really keep spacing more consistent

Gl with the map

frukoyurdakul

638 posts

Joined December 2015

frukoyurdakul 2017-04-10T12:21:23+00:00

Hello, NM from my queue (sorry for the very late mod ;_;)

[Nifty's Muzukashii]

00:14:407 (28) - How about deleting this note? A bit much for 210 bpm muzukashii don't you think?

00:55:693 (175,176,177,178) - On this BPM, maybe 1/2 finishers like this can be a bit hard for 3.4* muzukashii diff. I suggest 00:55:836 (176) - deleting this one. I know the lyrics are following well but these kinds of finishers don't suit on a muzu imo.

01:02:265 (205,206,207,208) - Now, I'm not well informed about this and so i asked this situation to some of my friends. "On a BPM like that a finisher after triplets, maybe *kkk D* or *ddd K* will flow good." So, i suggesting 01:02:265 (205,206,207) - these to change kkk. ddd D can be a bit hard for muzukashii players.

01:11:693 (255) - Put a finisher like you put on 01:02:550 (208) - this or delete on 208 to make the map consistent. I listened carefully and they both don't have crash cymbal sounds.

[Tomoka's Oni]

00:03:121 - Hmm. A strong opening with following vocals plus putting a 1/4, but after this one you mapped it like futsuu. To make it more consistent I think you can follow the vocals here as well.

00:14:406 (18) - This section is too long even for a kiai time. I suggest removing this note to put a short break.

00:19:121 (1) - This note is unseen behind the slider. Either shorten the slider or change the SV on it.

00:28:264 - If I were you, on a calm part like this I didn't change SV. It feels weird for me.

00:37:407 - I suggest moving the SV change on this note.

00:39:693 - Move the SV change to 00:39:692, because the note is on that time and with like that the note is coming slower than the measure line.

00:56:549 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - This pattern feels really overmapped. There are no 1/4 sounds literally.

01:29:407 - You can increase the volume to 70% or 80% back to make a strong outro with finishers.

Good luck on the ranking way,

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