Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Emonal

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-02-14T16:17:56+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月26日 at 下午 09:44:45

Artist: Ito Kanako
Title: Uncontrollable (TV Size)
Source: CHAOS;CHILD
Tags: Inversal Tomoka Rin Nifty rui opening op tv size 5pb. 科学アドベンチャーシリーズ science adventure series 妄想科学adv mousou kagaku adv
BPM: 210
Filesize: 2501kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.48 stars, 81 notes)
Hard (3.57 stars, 287 notes)
Insane (5.05 stars, 389 notes)
Inversal's Insane (4.39 stars, 322 notes)
NeeNee (6.2 stars, 443 notes)
Nifty's Muzukashii (3.4 stars, 389 notes)
Normal (2.26 stars, 151 notes)
rui's Extra (5.61 stars, 338 notes)
Tomoka's Oni (4.66 stars, 595 notes)

Download: Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All Done!
waiting for mods now

NeeNee: Done by me
rui's Extra: Done by rui
Insane: Done by me
Light Insane: Done by Inversal
Hard: Done by me
Normal: Done by me
Easy: Done by me
Nifty's Muzu: Done by Nifty
Tomoka's Oni: Done by Tomoka Rin

不知不覺就這麼多diff了，怕._.

Last edited by Emonal 2017-03-26T13:46:46+00:00, edited 71 times in total.

Nifty

Beatmap Nominator

898 posts

Joined September 2014

Nifty 2017-02-18T05:05:08+00:00

Here I am.

Don't forget to add my name to tags uwu

3.4*

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Uncontrollable (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable (TV Size)
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:YoNiko
Version:Nifty's Muzukashii
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:Tomaka Rin nifty
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Emonal

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-02-18T08:24:00+00:00

Nifty wrote:

Here I am.

Don't forget to add my name to tags uwu

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256,192,66122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67122,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76050,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76265,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77693,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80836,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81979,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83122,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83265,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83550,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83693,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83979,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84122,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85407,12,0,89407,0:0:0:0:

ok update!
really thanks a lot

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-02-24T14:33:06+00:00

完成(/・ω・)/
https://puu.sh/uhQ59.zip

offset -307 better imo. Because long white line place strange.
long white line should be at the beginning of the sound.

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-02-24T17:43:20+00:00

rui wrote:
完成(/・ω・)/
https://puu.sh/uhQ59.zip

offset -307 better imo. Because long white line place strange.
long white line should be at the beginning of the sound.

わかった👍

-SuGon-

125 posts

Joined November 2011

-SuGon- 2017-03-01T17:53:09+00:00

IRC

2017-03-02 01:01 -SuGon-: 你有開grid ?
2017-03-02 01:02 Emonal: 你說格子嗎
2017-03-02 01:02 -SuGon-: 對齊網格
2017-03-02 01:02 Emonal: 有
2017-03-02 01:02 -SuGon-: 那個不要開會比較好一點
2017-03-02 01:03 Emonal: 我習慣都會開就是
2017-03-02 01:03 Emonal: 應該沒差吧
2017-03-02 01:03 -SuGon-: 插在ds
2017-03-02 01:03 -SuGon-: 沒辦法很準確 +-0.2內
2017-03-02 01:04 -SuGon-: 差
2017-03-02 01:04 Emonal: 原來;o
2017-03-02 01:05 Emonal: 嘛我還是會開就是
2017-03-02 01:05 -SuGon-: 恩恩
2017-03-02 01:05 -SuGon-: 00:05:693 (2) -
2017-03-02 01:05 -SuGon-: 這個
2017-03-02 01:06 Emonal: 你要irc嗎xD
2017-03-02 01:06 -SuGon-: 我覺得用blanket slider會比較好
2017-03-02 01:06 -SuGon-: 喔也可以
2017-03-02 01:06 Emonal: 你放Thread吧
2017-03-02 01:06 Emonal: 這樣有星星
2017-03-02 01:06 -SuGon-: 恩
2017-03-02 01:06 -SuGon-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7457386
2017-03-02 01:06 -SuGon-: 像這樣
2017-03-02 01:07 Emonal: normal嗎
2017-03-02 01:08 -SuGon-: 恩恩
2017-03-02 01:08 -SuGon-: 如果是我摸圖只要ds超過+-0.2 我都會寫出來
2017-03-02 01:09 Emonal: lol
2017-03-02 01:09 Emonal: 好
2017-03-02 01:09 Emonal: ok
2017-03-02 01:09 -SuGon-: 不過我懶了Orz
2017-03-02 01:09 Emonal: 是有想過blanket
2017-03-02 01:09 Emonal: 可是這樣flow不太好
2017-03-02 01:10 Emonal: 我normal都不太blanket的
2017-03-02 01:10 -SuGon-: nm 大多都會用blanket 0.0 吧
2017-03-02 01:10 -SuGon-: 00:08:693 -
2017-03-02 01:11 Emonal: 有必要才用
2017-03-02 01:11 -SuGon-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7457417
2017-03-02 01:11 -SuGon-: 這個我覺得這樣flow會比較好
2017-03-02 01:11 Emonal: 之前blanket太多就被說flow不好了
2017-03-02 01:11 Emonal: 恩ok
2017-03-02 01:11 -SuGon-: 是喔難道潮流又變了嗎XD
2017-03-02 01:12 Emonal: normal以下注重flow
2017-03-02 01:12 Emonal: 美觀其次
2017-03-02 01:12 Emonal: 畢竟新手也看不出來的
2017-03-02 01:12 Emonal: 我覺得滿有道理
2017-03-02 01:12 -SuGon-: 是喔 XD 每個作圖有自己的特色
2017-03-02 01:13 Emonal: 是沒錯啦XD
2017-03-02 01:13 -SuGon-: 00:20:693 (3) - 這個ds到0.4 不行
2017-03-02 01:14 Emonal: OK
2017-03-02 01:14 -SuGon-: 其實0.3也不行不過有時候不會看太緊
2017-03-02 01:14 -SuGon-: 其他0.3看你要不要調一下
2017-03-02 01:15 Emonal: 想調適想調
2017-03-02 01:15 Emonal: 但好覽
2017-03-02 01:15 Emonal: 懶
2017-03-02 01:15 -SuGon-: 那就放著吧XD
2017-03-02 01:15 Emonal: 看來Hard以下grid要關呢
2017-03-02 01:16 Emonal: 好XD
2017-03-02 01:17 -SuGon-: 00:20:693 (3,4) - 這邊的flow我覺得4頭接在3尾會比較順跟剛剛的一樣
2017-03-02 01:17 -SuGon-: 00:22:407 (1) - 這個0.3
2017-03-02 01:17 Emonal: 好
2017-03-02 01:18 -SuGon-: 你這是偏難的nm吼~~
2017-03-02 01:18 -SuGon-: 00:22:407 (1,2,3) - 這樣的擺法會提高*
2017-03-02 01:19 -SuGon-: 00:23:693 (4,5) - 這個flow也是~
2017-03-02 01:19 Emonal: 基本不超過2星應該沒問題吧XD
2017-03-02 01:21 Emonal: 這個flow有問題嗎?
2017-03-02 01:21 -SuGon-: 00:24:122 (5,1) - 這個flow我覺得不夠好因為這邊沒有blanket 然後尾跟頭沒有很連接看你要不要blanket或是讓flow順一點
2017-03-02 01:22 Emonal: 頭尾有連接吧
2017-03-02 01:22 Emonal: blanket感覺怪彆扭的
2017-03-02 01:22 -SuGon-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7457519
2017-03-02 01:23 -SuGon-: 我覺得這樣比較順
2017-03-02 01:23 Emonal: 恩ok
2017-03-02 01:25 -SuGon-: 後面類似的我就不提了0.0
2017-03-02 01:25 -SuGon-: 00:45:979 (1,2) -
2017-03-02 01:25 Emonal: ds差距嗎
2017-03-02 01:25 -SuGon-: 這個我沒記錯的話兩個單點相疊好像在nm比較少見
2017-03-02 01:26 -SuGon-: 在hr比較多
2017-03-02 01:26 -SuGon-: flow的部分
2017-03-02 01:26 Emonal: 恩...
2017-03-02 01:26 Emonal: 好吧
2017-03-02 01:30 -SuGon-: 00:24:693 (1,2,3) - 這個好除了美觀還可以用到dropoff with linear
2017-03-02 01:31 -SuGon-: 00:39:122 (1,2) - 像這個的話只有美觀
2017-03-02 01:31 Emonal: 那啥233
2017-03-02 01:31 -SuGon-: 該怎說
2017-03-02 01:31 -SuGon-: 我想想
2017-03-02 01:31 -SuGon-: 看圖好了
2017-03-02 01:31 Emonal: 那邊是要對秤才那樣的
2017-03-02 01:31 -SuGon-: https://i.ppy.sh/5cab81925554f304cb5c19 ... 382e6a7067
2017-03-02 01:32 Emonal: 也要blanket才能用r
2017-03-02 01:32 -SuGon-: 最好的blanket 我個人認為就是除了美觀又可以剛好用到dropoff with linear
2017-03-02 01:32 -SuGon-: 是呀~
2017-03-02 01:33 Emonal: 可以
2017-03-02 01:33 Emonal: 00:39:122 (1,2) - 不過這部分就不會改
2017-03-02 01:33 -SuGon-: 00:36:265 (3,2) -
2017-03-02 01:34 -SuGon-: 這個物件重疊不行
2017-03-02 01:34 -SuGon-: 00:39:122 (1,2) - 這不用改
2017-03-02 01:34 -SuGon-: 我是舉例說
2017-03-02 01:35 Emonal: 哎隔那麼久
2017-03-02 01:35 Emonal: 好
2017-03-02 01:35 Emonal: 可
2017-03-02 01:35 -SuGon-: 00:48:693 (2,4) - 這個重疊不好
2017-03-02 01:35 -SuGon-: hr以下重疊不太行
2017-03-02 01:36 Emonal: ok
2017-03-02 01:37 Emonal: 00:38:836 (3,2) - 這隔太久了
2017-03-02 01:37 -SuGon-: 恩>
2017-03-02 01:38 -SuGon-: ?
2017-03-02 01:38 Emonal: 隔太久了不好疊
2017-03-02 01:39 -SuGon-: 為什麼要疊起來0.0
2017-03-02 01:39 Emonal: 也不是要疊起來
2017-03-02 01:39 Emonal: 部會注意到有沒有疊到
2017-03-02 01:39 -SuGon-: 00:38:836 (3,2) - 這裡沒有問題0.0
2017-03-02 01:40 Emonal: 豪
2017-03-02 01:41 -SuGon-: 我覺得大概最需要改的就是ds超過+-0.3 跟兩個單點還有重疊

ice08311

240 posts

Joined January 2012

ice08311 2017-03-02T08:21:51+00:00

卡

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-02T10:19:01+00:00

ice08311 wrote:
卡

可以可以

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2017-03-03T09:32:30+00:00

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

unused hitsound : normal-sliderslide10.wavplease check this section. difficult of hard's end time is unsnapped
01:29:693 - Normal
01:29:692 - Hard
01:29:693 - rui's Extra
01:29:693 - Insane
01:29:693 - NeeNeetitle : Uncontrollable(TVSize)

img

It would be better to get this confirmed by QAT.
[Normal]

00:00:265 ~ 00:27:978 - I think the volume in this part is a little big and noisy to my ears. at other difficulties used 60% in this part.00:25:979 (4) - off-screen note00:27:978 - finish00:39:693 (2,3) - some more blanket00:51:122 (3) - I think this needs to be a little down. it is close to HP bar

[Hard]

00:00:693 - I felt it was noise.00:06:550 (1,1,1) - one needs to be subtracted new combo00:36:979 (1) - do not need new combo01:22:978 (4,1,2,1,2) - you need to think about this distance. 01:23:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think it's best to give them a bigger distance.

[Insane]

00:03:550 (2,3) - when I test played this myself I felt unnatural and sudden from this jump. 00:00:835 (1,2,3,4) - because, I thought I would have taken the distance this way in this part.00:19:050 - it so noisy :<00:20:121 (5,1) - give overlap00:39:621 (5,3) - this is not natural over-mapping in this part

[rui's Extra]

00:57:407 - たいした事ではないけど無音にした方がいいと思った。10％くらいに

[NeeNee]

00:00:764 - same as Hard. it would be nice to change the soft sampleset.

good luck

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-03T12:21:26+00:00

Abe Nana wrote:

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
unused hitsound : normal-sliderslide10.wavplease check this section. difficult of hard's end time is unsnapped
01:29:693 - Normal
01:29:692 - Hard
01:29:693 - rui's Extra
01:29:693 - Insane
01:29:693 - NeeNeetitle : Uncontrollable(TVSize)
img
It would be better to get this confirmed by QAT.
[Normal]
00:00:265 ~ 00:27:978 - I think the volume in this part is a little big and noisy to my ears. at other difficulties used 60% in this part.00:25:979 (4) - off-screen note00:27:978 - finish00:39:693 (2,3) - some more blanket00:51:122 (3) - I think this needs to be a little down. it is close to HP bar
[Hard]
00:00:693 - I felt it was noise.00:06:550 (1,1,1) - one needs to be subtracted new combo00:36:979 (1) - do not need new combo01:22:978 (4,1,2,1,2) - you need to think about this distance. 01:23:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think it's best to give them a bigger distance.
[Insane]
00:03:550 (2,3) - when I test played this myself I felt unnatural and sudden from this jump. 00:00:835 (1,2,3,4) - because, I thought I would have taken the distance this way in this part.00:19:050 - it so noisy :<00:20:121 (5,1) - give overlap00:39:621 (5,3) - this is not natural over-mapping in this part
[NeeNee]
00:00:764 - same as Hard. it would be nice to change the soft sampleset.

good luck

all fix

it seems that my hs isn't good QQ (very bad at hs)
maybe I'll redo hs
anyway thanks for mod!!

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2017-03-03T12:51:15+00:00

m4m from my queue

整体看下来你的图大部分都是跟的vocal，跟我新人时候一样。排版不错，节奏可能还要改改，有很多地方跟instrument更好。
音效的话你参考我的ctb图的也行参考rui下的也行，不用全程Normal set，声音很吵

[General]
Tags 可以抄我的

[Normal]
00:08:835 (1) - 像这个地方，节奏拆成一个1/1slider + 一个circle就比较好，00:09:121这边的音还是比较重的。
00:22:979 (4) - 这边的节奏则拆成1个circle + 1个slider，这样跟了vocal也跟了instrument
00:32:122 (5) - same
如果让我来改你这个diff的节奏的话可能要动50%左右，所以我不一一列出来了，大部分都是跟的红线vocal而漏了白线的drum，事实上玩家在玩的时候跟着鼓点按下去打起来会更舒服。
另外有很多跟vocal的地方都只有1/2的gap，我个人觉得可能改成1/1的gap会更好点，在跟了instrument的情况下。

[Hard]
Hard相对Normal稍微好一点，但大部分也都是跟着vocal下的
00:06:836 (2) - 这个slider太突兀了，节奏跟00:05:407 (1,2,3,4)是一样的
00:22:979 (3) - 跟normal一样的问题
00:39:550 (4,5) - 其他地方好像都没用triple，这边删掉5吧
00:53:693 (2) - 这个大slider也分成几个小的比较好
00:55:550 - 漏音，这里就是我说的跟instrument
01:04:693 - 这边漏音明显会影响打图的感受

这个diff里面还有NC abuse，不一一列出了

[Insane]
这个diff的节奏明显就好的多了不过音效还是不行
00:13:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这边的音跟其他节奏相比要更重一些，不如把4和6也拿出来做两个小跳？
00:20:121 (5,1) - 迷惑性很强，ds不等，容易miss，建议合成一个slider
00:26:693 - triple应该在这边，而不是00:26:835 (3)
00:34:550 (3,4,5,6) - 摆正一点;w;
01:20:693 - 前面挺好了这里又漏音
01:29:693 (3) - 所有diff都有这个问题，这边是没音的 overmap了

[rui's Extra]
00:06:550 (1,2,1,2) - make them 1/2 sliders to increase the note density gradually?
00:37:122 (5) - overmapped?
00:47:407 (4) - I think ctrl+G on this will make a better flow
01:06:407 (1,2,3,4) - You can use even harder patterns with 1/4 sliders here since the song is getting to the climax.
01:29:693 (3) - overmap

[NeeNee]
00:38:407 (1,2,1,2) - 这种pattern感觉不是很舒服，而且节奏都乱了……
感觉有不少overmap的地方不过我extra不是很能摸就pass了

That's all from me, good luck :3

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-03-03T13:31:50+00:00

[rui's Extra]

00:57:407 - たいした事ではないけど無音にした方がいいと思った。10％くらいに了解

Yumeno Himiko wrote:
m4m from my queue
[rui's Extra]
00:06:550 (1,2,1,2) - make them 1/2 sliders to increase the note density gradually? good idea
00:37:122 (5) - overmapped? nope
00:47:407 (4) - I think ctrl+G on this will make a better flow yay! fixed
01:06:407 (1,2,3,4) - You can use even harder patterns with 1/4 sliders here since the song is getting to the climax. ok
01:29:693 (3) - overmap nope
That's all from me, good luck :3

Thank you

update pls

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57693
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 265,836,5407,9978,16836,19121,28265,37407,46550,55693,57978,60550,66836,76264,85407,89693
DistanceSpacing: 5.4
BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Uncontrollable(TVSize)
TitleUnicode:Uncontrollable(TVSize)
Artist:Ito Kanako
ArtistUnicode:いとうかなこ
Creator:Emonal
Version:rui's Extra
Source:CHAOS;CHILD
Tags:Tomoka Rin Nifty rui
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BeatmapSetID:572908

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303,352,59265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,145,59407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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112,188,64122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,64265,1,0,1:0:0:0:
92,264,64407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,356,64836,5,2,1:0:0:0:
140,200,64979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,220,65122,1,0,1:0:0:0:
161,357,65265,5,2,1:0:0:0:
152,187,65407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,263,65550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,356,65693,6,0,P|93:315|120:283,1,85,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,76,65979,5,2,1:0:0:0:
264,212,66122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,66265,1,2,1:0:0:0:
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264,212,66550,2,0,L|263:165,1,42.5
378,330,66693,2,0,L|361:286,1,42.5,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,41,67122,6,0,L|200:61,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,67407,2,0,L|136:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,132,67693,2,0,P|421:118|375:124,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,218,67979,2,0,P|90:219|131:241,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,301,68265,5,0,1:0:0:0:
200,133,68407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,340,68550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,174,68693,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,40,69122,2,0,P|227:53|268:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,125,69407,6,0,L|374:144,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,258,69693,2,0,L|137:239,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,344,69979,2,0,B|471:358|471:358|425:279,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,70407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,300,70550,6,0,P|272:308|224:320,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,57,70836,2,0,P|144:49|192:37,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,240,71122,2,0,P|396:284|396:324,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,109,71407,2,0,P|124:85|98:54,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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380,88,71979,2,0,L|297:108,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,348,72550,2,0,P|349:324|308:294,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,39,72836,6,0,P|121:87|121:183,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,304,73265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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420,22,73693,2,0,P|393:55|372:92,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,308,74265,1,8,1:0:0:0:
256,121,74407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,187,74550,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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284,227,74836,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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264,56,75693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,56,75765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,156,75979,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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256,144,89693,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-03T14:04:55+00:00

I'll fix them tomorrow
真音效渣ｏｒｚ
big thanks

Saika0k1

346 posts

Joined April 2014

Saika0k1 2017-03-04T14:49:08+00:00

hi! mod from my queue

rui's Extra

00:03:122 (1) - reshape this a bit, looks kinda wierd
00:49:979 (1,4) - unneccesary overlapping
00:04:836 (2,3) - make a long slider instead ? theres no sound at 3

NeeNee

00:16:979 (2) - strong sound here, NC
00:16:979 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think this goes better like this
00:18:693 (1) - maybe like this?
00:19:693 (1) - theres a sound at the sliderend, you should place a circle there instead, the beat plays by clicking
00:36:979 (3) - stack this with 00:37:122 (4)
00:41:122 (2) - this one is kinda unneccesary
00:44:550 (2) - ^
01:05:265 (1,2,3) - rotate this and make the 1 stack on the previous 1 or 2 on 2 or 3 on 3
the sound between 01:20:836 (1,2,3,4) and 01:21:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) are the same but the pattern are drasticly
diffrent, try make one of these same as the other

good luck! nice song btw

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-03-04T15:00:53+00:00

Saika0k1 wrote:
hi! mod from my queue
rui's Extra
00:03:122 (1) - reshape this a bit, looks kinda wierd If you feel kinda wierd that it is as I intended. I aimed for a chaotic slider
00:49:979 (1,4) - unneccesary overlapping keep
00:04:836 (2,3) - make a long slider instead ? theres no sound at 3 I don't think. There is sound at
good luck! nice song btw

Thanks mod

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-04T17:24:38+00:00

Yumeno Himiko wrote:
m4m from my queue

整体看下来你的图大部分都是跟的vocal，跟我新人时候一样。排版不错，节奏可能还要改改，有很多地方跟instrument更好。
音效的话你参考我的ctb图的也行参考rui下的也行，不用全程Normal set，声音很吵

[General]
Tags 可以抄我的

[Normal]
00:08:835 (1) - 像这个地方，节奏拆成一个1/1slider + 一个circle就比较好，00:09:121这边的音还是比较重的。因為跟人聲，所以會再考慮
00:22:979 (4) - 这边的节奏则拆成1个circle + 1个slider，这样跟了vocal也跟了instrument
00:32:122 (5) - same
如果让我来改你这个diff的节奏的话可能要动50%左右，所以我不一一列出来了，大部分都是跟的红线vocal而漏了白线的drum，事实上玩家在玩的时候跟着鼓点按下去打起来会更舒服。
另外有很多跟vocal的地方都只有1/2的gap，我个人觉得可能改成1/1的gap会更好点，在跟了instrument的情况下。
normal會再remap壓低難度，不過大部分應該還是跟vocal, 會考慮跟一點instrument
[Hard]
Hard相对Normal稍微好一点，但大部分也都是跟着vocal下的是跟著vocal下的沒錯，我個人是低難度一律跟vocal，隨著難度增加跟更多instrument，跟vocal就不好嗎?不太懂你好的標準是??(沒有偏激意思，純屬疑問)
00:06:836 (2) - 这个slider太突兀了，节奏跟00:05:407 (1,2,3,4)是一样的是一樣沒錯，但後面接的東西不一樣，而且跟vocal，所以用長滑條來鋪陳
00:22:979 (3) - 跟normal一样的问题nope
00:39:550 (4,5) - 其他地方好像都没用triple，这边删掉5吧
00:53:693 (2) - 这个大slider也分成几个小的比较好
00:55:550 - 漏音，这里就是我说的跟instrument
01:04:693 - 这边漏音明显会影响打图的感受

这个diff里面还有NC abuse，不一一列出了

[Insane]
这个diff的节奏明显就好的多了不过音效还是不行
00:13:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这边的音跟其他节奏相比要更重一些，不如把4和6也拿出来做两个小跳？不行，這樣跟extra一樣，而且不能再難了
00:20:121 (5,1) - 迷惑性很强，ds不等，容易miss，建议合成一个sliderinsane難一點正常吧，而且也沒遮到數字
00:26:693 - triple应该在这边，而不是00:26:835 (3)
00:34:550 (3,4,5,6) - 摆正一点;w;我覺得滿正了
01:20:693 - 前面挺好了这里又漏音故意的，結尾讓人休息一點
01:29:693 (3) - 所有diff都有这个问题，这边是没音的 overmap了有音吧

[rui's Extra]
00:06:550 (1,2,1,2) - make them 1/2 sliders to increase the note density gradually?
00:37:122 (5) - overmapped?
00:47:407 (4) - I think ctrl+G on this will make a better flow
01:06:407 (1,2,3,4) - You can use even harder patterns with 1/4 sliders here since the song is getting to the climax.
01:29:693 (3) - overmap

[NeeNee]
00:38:407 (1,2,1,2) - 这种pattern感觉不是很舒服，而且节奏都乱了……沒亂哦，有規律的
感觉有不少overmap的地方不过我extra不是很能摸就pass了

That's all from me, good luck :3

謝啦，hs會再重弄一次，沒回覆代表fix

Emonal

168 posts

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Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-04T17:38:46+00:00

Saika0k1 wrote:
hi! mod from my queue

rui's Extra
00:03:122 (1) - reshape this a bit, looks kinda wierd
00:49:979 (1,4) - unneccesary overlapping
00:04:836 (2,3) - make a long slider instead ? theres no sound at 3

NeeNee
00:16:979 (2) - strong sound here, NC
00:16:979 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think this goes better like thisnope, I did that at first, but somebody said the new pattern is better.
00:18:693 (1) - maybe like this?there's only two sounds
00:19:693 (1) - theres a sound at the sliderend, you should place a circle there instead, the beat plays by clickingit's on purpose
00:36:979 (3) - stack this with 00:37:122 (4)it will be so easy
00:41:122 (2) - this one is kinda unneccesarywhy? there's a drum sound on white line
00:44:550 (2) - ^
01:05:265 (1,2,3) - rotate this and make the 1 stack on the previous 1 or 2 on 2 or 3 on 3the flow will be so wierd
the sound between 01:20:836 (1,2,3,4) and 01:21:979 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) are the same but the pattern are drasticly
diffrent, try make one of these same as the othernope, they are the same sound, but I want them to be hard gradually in the end of the song.

good luck! nice song btw

no reply means fixed
thanks for ur mod!!

Metaku

524 posts

Joined August 2015

Metaku 2017-03-05T14:04:42+00:00

Hi!!! Mod from q (Mod back if you want to

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[General]
The diff settings for normal are way too high. Consider dropping AR to 5 or less and OD to 4 or 3. Hard could also be dropped to ar 7 and od 6 but hp could be increased to 5 imo. On the other hand rui's diff could be increased to OD 8,5 or so to better fit the spread.
Gap between hard and insane is also quite big so you should probably try to get a light insane diff in between them

[Normal]
I'm lazy after modding all the higher diffs so I'll just point out general issues
Since this is your lowest diff and this is a high bpm song I'd really suggest avoiding 1/2 gaps between notes... Especially when it requires a lot of clicking in short time like 00:22:407 (2,3,4) -
00:53:836 (1,1) - spinner recovery time should be longer here too
And instead of focusing on vocals all of the time you should try focus on other instruments too when they are clearly more powerful like 01:22:550 (2,3,4) -

[Hard]

00:01:693 (1) - Not really necessary nc here
00:02:550 (3) - better end this earlier and have something for downbeat
00:04:122 (1,2,3) - Kinda weird rhythm here. First the emphasis is on vocals but then it's on the drums right after
00:06:836 (2) - Doesn't really fit imo. I'd keep the 1/2 slider pattern you had
00:09:693 - Pretty weird place for a break imo since the following section is quite intense
00:18:693 - this is pretty calm section so I think you should've use smaller SV and less dense rhythms here... as of now there's no noticeable difference with 00:28:264 -
00:27:122 (1,2) - I think 1/2 repeats would work better here
00:35:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - could probably have a bit bigger spacing here
01:00:835 (5) - should probably change this since you followed vocals before
01:07:550 (3) - Might want to nc this to keep consistent with before
01:09:978 (5,6) - could change the rhythm here to match vocals better (ctrl g)
01:10:407 (7,1) - swap nc
01:13:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing... Not by much but due to the small spacing it's quite noticeable
01:21:978 (1,3) - Looks pretty random overlap to me
01:23:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - space out the 1/1 gaps more, they are quite easy to read wrong as 1/2 gaps for newer players

[Insane]

00:01:693 (5,1) - I think you should change these to match the vocals better as it seems to be your main focus here
00:03:121 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm could be better here... First you choose instrumentals over vocals but then you do the opposite right after
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as on Extra, you really could use 1/2 here instead since the build up feels kinda weak with just 1/1 circles
00:09:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could try to add a little variation here tbh like you did here 00:14:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:20:264 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could map the vocals here instead of the hihats...
00:22:835 (2,1) - maybe ctrl g so they'd match the vocals better?
00:25:264 (3,4) - Weird rhythm choice imo since the stronger vocals are on white ticks
00:25:835 (5) - This on the other hand could be a slider end no real need for a circle here
00:25:978 (1,2,3,1,2) - This part would be much more interesting if you mapped it to the drums like in the extra :/
00:28:264 (1,2,3) - Not the best rhythm choice again as 2 lands on a pretty nonexistent beat while the tail of 3 has a vocal. Maybe change to slider first and then 2 circles?
00:29:264 (1,3) - Yeah again don't really like these. Would match vocals better too if you just had 1/2 sliders instead
00:32:693 (6) - pretty weak beat so could just have 5 as slider instead
00:32:835 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm choice could be better again, if you follow vocals 1 could be 2 circles instead and 00:33:264 (3,4) - could be 2 1/2 sliders. Would match vocals betters and wouldn't skip the drum beat in middle of 3
00:34:264 (2) - if you're following vocals then this doesn't really work... 00:33:835 (1,2) - could be 2 1/2 sliders and a circle to match the vocals better
00:34:550 (3,4,5,6) - emphasis could be better here. Should be on 3 and 5 but currently the most emphasis is on 6
00:40:121 (2,3) - could have a triple here
00:40:264 (3) - feels kinda off as the tail is stronger than the head atm... Maybe shorten to 1/2 and add something to 00:40:550 -
00:44:835 (4,5,6) - spacing again
00:48:264 (4,1) - 1/1 sliders again...
00:50:550 (6) - Not really good imo since tail is stronger than the head here
00:53:407 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I get that you don't want to use too big spacings on jump patterns but it feels kinda low spacing comapred to stuff like 00:36:264 (1,2,1,2,3) - and 00:44:693 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - before. If anything this part should have bigger spacing as it's getting pretty intense
00:56:978 (1,2) - I don't think stack is the best way here. I think a jump would work a lot better
00:57:978 (1,2,1,2) - pretty big difference in spacing between these two
01:03:407 (4) - if you're following vocals you could add circles in places like this which support it
01:09:550 (2) - here too
01:14:121 (1) - Not really needed NC here
01:20:835 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really work imo as 3 and 4 have drums on tails too so identical 4 sliders isn't really good
01:23:121 (1,2,3) - A bit weird to change to sliders from 01:22:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - since these have even more emphasis

[rui's Extra]
00:05:979 (1) - 00:07:121 (1) - I don't think these ncs are necessary
00:16:835 - Why did you skip this strong beat ._.
00:25:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this rhythm and spacing is kinda weird since there's nothing in the music that indicates 7 equally spaced notes
00:31:122 (4) - I think a 1/2 + circle would work better here as it would get the vocal and keep the drums clickable like before
00:34:407 (2,3) - Could use more variable spacing here as 2 is rather weak compared to 3 especially when you've been focusing on drums so I'd expect 3 to be emphasized more compared to 2
00:36:836 (3,4,5) - Could use something with bigger spacing here, these stand out and you had bigger spacing on the previous part in general
00:49:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again a pattern like this doesn't really tell me anything nor does it follow or emphasise anything properly.
00:59:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm could be better as now it seems you're just randomly switching between circles and sliders
01:00:836 (3) - I'd rather not use a random 1/1s on kiai especially since there's nothing that'd suggest using one
01:03:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beats on red ticks are quite weak so I don't see a reason to make an equally spaced jump pattern here
01:04:836 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here are actually strong notes but you use a smaller spacing on them ._.

Overall I think you could've made this diff more interesting if you prioritized the vocals that had more variation instead of the static drum beat

[NeeNee]

00:01:979 (3) - could be 2 circles if you're following vocals
00:02:550 (1) - I think you don't need to nc this one
00:04:693 (3) - kinda weak sound here so I think it would be better stacked with 2
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a build up so I find it weird to decrease note density here, imo you could at least use 1/2 sliders or something as it feels kinda empty compared to before as it is
00:12:836 (5,6) - I think you could angle these a bit more so they'd be more consistent with other slider pairs
00:16:979 (1,2) - Definitely could use bigger spacing with these imo
00:19:121 - hmm this is a rather calm part so I think it's weird to use so high sv here since it's the same as 00:09:978 - which is a lot more intense part
00:19:693 (1) - no need for nc imo
00:20:264 - I know you're following vocals but these empty downbeats feel kinda weird... Maybe add circles there and stack with previous note and move the next note somewhere as a jump?
00:20:693 (3) - This slider feels kinda weird imo... Maybe ctrl g with 2?
00:25:407 (3) - I think this should be something else than a 1/1 since now you're missing a vocal in the middle
00:25:979 (1,2) - the beat on 2 is pretty weak so maybe ctrl g these so it'd be circle and then 1/2 slider?
00:27:550 (4) - This deserves a bigger spacing as it's pretty emphasized note. I'd also nc it but that's up to you
00:27:979 (7) - same here could use bigger spacing compared to the previous notes as it's more emphasized
00:27:979 (7,1,2) - 2 is a lot weaker than 1 so I find it weird that the spacing here is pretty much the same
00:28:550 (3) - could probably be 2 circles for vocals
00:29:265 (1,3) - I don't think these work too well here since the drum beat in the middle is quite noticeable. Maybe use a 1/2 slider + circle instead? The song is getting more intense here anyway so increasing note density wouldn't hurt.
00:30:550 (1,2,3,4) - I think the rhythm could be better since now you're focusing on drums with 1 and 2 and 3 but then ignoring them with 4
00:31:836 (2,3) - Same here, no matter what you follow the stronger beats are on 2's tail and in middle of 3
00:32:550 (4,5) - very weak beat on 5 so doesn't make sense to space these more than 00:32:122 (3,4) - I'd probably stack these or replace 4 with a 1/2 slider
00:33:265 (3) - same thing about rhythm as before, 1/2 + circle would probably work better
00:34:979 (6,1) - You should rearrange these as 1 really deserves a bigger spacing. Now it seems you just ran out of space and that's why the spacing is so small
00:35:121 (1,2,3) - Spacing could be better... 2 is a very weak beat while 1 and 3 are lot stronger but the spacing is equal on them
00:37:407 - The whole section here could be better imo. 00:37:407 (1) - is ignoring a lot of sounds, 00:38:550 - ignored audible downbeat here and some other places too, 00:40:265 (1) - and 00:41:407 (1) - have audible sounds on red ticks so they'd work better as 1/2 sliders, 00:41:979 (2) - is a really strong beat but is now very underspaced because of the 3/4 slider... Lots of issues imo so I'd suggest you to try mapping this section a bit differently as I feel it's lower quality than the map overall.
00:43:979 (2,3,4,5,1) - here too something else than a stream could work better like using a 1/4 slider to emphasize the vocal on 4
00:48:693 (1) - Same as earlier but especially here since the song is getting quite intense so I'd avoid using 1/1 sliders at all
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite a big change compared to 00:51:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - as you change from all 1/2 to all circles even tho there isn't that big of a change in the song so I'd probably try to even it out a bit and maybe make 00:51:693 (1) - into 2 circles and these 00:53:122 (3,4,1,2) - into 1/2 sliders or smtng
00:56:122 (1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm these anti jumps feel a bit weird since it's the final part of the build up before kiai. I'd rather space them more and make 00:56:979 (1,2) - into a big jump since a stack feels kinda underwhelming here.
00:58:836 (1,2,3) - I'd change 1 into a 1/4 slider and space these more to keep the strong emphasis on vocals like in 00:57:979 (1,2,1,2) -
01:09:122 (4,5,1) - 5 is a weak beat so spacing could be better again
01:09:550 (2) - I think 2 circles would work better here as there are vocals on both ticks and a drum on the tail too so I don't think a slider is the way to go here
01:11:693 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would work better here, could also space 01:11:979 (2) - more if you changed it.
01:13:693 (5) - yeah here too. There's no sound that strong here so I don't think a 3/4 is necessary as you'll miss a sound on the red tick.
01:15:265 (1) - no need to nc here
01:16:265 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think rhythm could be better here as there are strong sounds on the slider ends now and there as strong beat in middle of 01:16:265 (1) -
01:20:836 (1,2,3,4) - there are 2 drum beats on 3 so making a pattern with 4 identical sliders doesn't really work
01:23:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - again a really small spacing on part that has strong emphasis ._. I'd really suggest making these jumps as it feels pretty weird after the intense jumps before and these sounds are even stronger on the music

Emonal

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Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-05T16:25:05+00:00

Omg metakuuu
I don't know if I love u or hate u now😂

Metaku

524 posts

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Metaku 2017-03-06T02:42:07+00:00

Emonal wrote:
Omg metakuuu
I don't know if I love u or hate u now😂

long mod oops xD

rui

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rui 2017-03-08T15:02:32+00:00

I will reply you mod at a later date.

sorry over SD5.5

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Emonal

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Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-10T11:15:20+00:00

Metaku wrote:
Hi!!! Mod from q (Mod back if you want to )

[General]
The diff settings for normal are way too high. Consider dropping AR to 5 or less and OD to 4 or 3. Hard could also be dropped to ar 7 and od 6 but hp could be increased to 5 imo. On the other hand rui's diff could be increased to OD 8,5 or so to better fit the spread.
Gap between hard and insane is also quite big so you should probably try to get a light insane diff in between them
ok, I'll make an easy and a light insane

[Normal]
I'm lazy after modding all the higher diffs so I'll just point out general issues
Since this is your lowest diff and this is a high bpm song I'd really suggest avoiding 1/2 gaps between notes... Especially when it requires a lot of clicking in short time like 00:22:407 (2,3,4) -
00:53:836 (1,1) - spinner recovery time should be longer here too
And instead of focusing on vocals all of the time you should try focus on other instruments too when they are clearly more powerful like 01:22:550 (2,3,4) -

[Hard]

00:01:693 (1) - Not really necessary nc here
00:02:550 (3) - better end this earlier and have something for downbeat
00:04:122 (1,2,3) - Kinda weird rhythm here. First the emphasis is on vocals but then it's on the drums right after
00:06:836 (2) - Doesn't really fit imo. I'd keep the 1/2 slider pattern you had
00:09:693 - Pretty weird place for a break imo since the following section is quite intensecuz that part will be a little hard if I make it, u can discover that I only map this part in the diffs above insane. So nope.
00:18:693 - this is pretty calm section so I think you should've use smaller SV and less dense rhythms here... as of now there's no noticeable difference with 00:28:264 -
00:27:122 (1,2) - I think 1/2 repeats would work better here
00:35:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - could probably have a bit bigger spacing here
01:00:835 (5) - should probably change this since you followed vocals before
01:07:550 (3) - Might want to nc this to keep consistent with before
01:09:978 (5,6) - could change the rhythm here to match vocals better (ctrl g)
01:10:407 (7,1) - swap nc
01:13:978 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing... Not by much but due to the small spacing it's quite noticeablebut I map it with ds lol, still do my best to fix it.
01:21:978 (1,3) - Looks pretty random overlap to me
01:23:121 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - space out the 1/1 gaps more, they are quite easy to read wrong as 1/2 gaps for newer players

[Insane]

00:01:693 (5,1) - I think you should change these to match the vocals better as it seems to be your main focus here
00:03:121 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm could be better here... First you choose instrumentals over vocals but then you do the opposite right after
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as on Extra, you really could use 1/2 here instead since the build up feels kinda weak with just 1/1 circles
00:09:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could try to add a little variation here tbh like you did here 00:14:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's ok cuz the variation between the two is only the slider shape. but I tried to make it more consistent.
00:20:264 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could map the vocals here instead of the hihats...nope, I want to make some change here ( following the hithats) I follow more vocals in low diffs, on the contrary, I follow more instrument in high diff.
00:22:835 (2,1) - maybe ctrl g so they'd match the vocals better?nope, the spacing will be so weird.
00:25:264 (3,4) - Weird rhythm choice imo since the stronger vocals are on white ticksnice
00:25:835 (5) - This on the other hand could be a slider end no real need for a circle here
00:25:978 (1,2,3,1,2) - This part would be much more interesting if you mapped it to the drums like in the extra :/too hard XD
00:28:264 (1,2,3) - Not the best rhythm choice again as 2 lands on a pretty nonexistent beat while the tail of 3 has a vocal. Maybe change to slider first and then 2 circles?but the first sliderend is still on that nonexistent beat, still change it.
00:29:264 (1,3) - Yeah again don't really like these. Would match vocals better too if you just had 1/2 sliders instead
00:32:693 (6) - pretty weak beat so could just have 5 as slider insteadnope, I want it consistent with 00:32:264 (3,4) -
00:32:835 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm choice could be better again, if you follow vocals 1 could be 2 circles instead and 00:33:264 (3,4) - could be 2 1/2 sliders. Would match vocals betters and wouldn't skip the drum beat in middle of 3
00:34:264 (2) - if you're following vocals then this doesn't really work... 00:33:835 (1,2) - could be 2 1/2 sliders and a circle to match the vocals better
00:34:550 (3,4,5,6) - emphasis could be better here. Should be on 3 and 5 but currently the most emphasis is on 6
00:40:121 (2,3) - could have a triple hereyeah I had it originally, but one modder said it has no sound here, still change to triple.
00:40:264 (3) - feels kinda off as the tail is stronger than the head atm... Maybe shorten to 1/2 and add something to 00:40:550 -
00:44:835 (4,5,6) - spacing againwat?
00:48:264 (4,1) - 1/1 sliders again...
00:50:550 (6) - Not really good imo since tail is stronger than the head here
00:53:407 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I get that you don't want to use too big spacings on jump patterns but it feels kinda low spacing comapred to stuff like 00:36:264 (1,2,1,2,3) - and 00:44:693 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - before. If anything this part should have bigger spacing as it's getting pretty intense
00:56:978 (1,2) - I don't think stack is the best way here. I think a jump would work a lot better
00:57:978 (1,2,1,2) - pretty big difference in spacing between these two
01:03:407 (4) - if you're following vocals you could add circles in places like this which support itnot fits here cuz there're jumps backward
01:09:550 (2) - here too^ I don't want to add too much circle
01:14:121 (1) - Not really needed NC here
01:20:835 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really work imo as 3 and 4 have drums on tails too so identical 4 sliders isn't really good
01:23:121 (1,2,3) - A bit weird to change to sliders from 01:22:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - since these have even more emphasis

no reply means fixed
finally finished to insane ( insane passed 5 star lol )
will fix extra tomorrow

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-12T13:29:35+00:00

Metaku wrote:
Hi!!! Mod from q (Mod back if you want to )

[NeeNee]

00:01:979 (3) - could be 2 circles if you're following vocalsI think slider can follow vocals here too, but still change it
00:02:550 (1) - I think you don't need to nc this one
00:04:693 (3) - kinda weak sound here so I think it would be better stacked with 2
00:05:407 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a build up so I find it weird to decrease note density here, imo you could at least use 1/2 sliders or something as it feels kinda empty compared to before as it is
00:12:836 (5,6) - I think you could angle these a bit more so they'd be more consistent with other slider pairs
00:16:979 (1,2) - Definitely could use bigger spacing with these imoI like the spacing between the note and slider here, so I increase the spaicng of each nc part.
00:19:121 - hmm this is a rather calm part so I think it's weird to use so high sv here since it's the same as 00:09:978 - which is a lot more intense part
00:19:693 (1) - no need for nc imo
00:20:264 - I know you're following vocals but these empty downbeats feel kinda weird... Maybe add circles there and stack with previous note and move the next note somewhere as a jump?
00:20:693 (3) - This slider feels kinda weird imo... Maybe ctrl g with 2?
00:25:407 (3) - I think this should be something else than a 1/1 since now you're missing a vocal in the middle
00:25:979 (1,2) - the beat on 2 is pretty weak so maybe ctrl g these so it'd be circle and then 1/2 slider?nope, there's a bass sound on 2
00:27:550 (4) - This deserves a bigger spacing as it's pretty emphasized note. I'd also nc it but that's up to you
00:27:979 (7) - same here could use bigger spacing compared to the previous notes as it's more emphasized
00:27:979 (7,1,2) - 2 is a lot weaker than 1 so I find it weird that the spacing here is pretty much the same
00:28:550 (3) - could probably be 2 circles for vocals
00:29:265 (1,3) - I don't think these work too well here since the drum beat in the middle is quite noticeable. Maybe use a 1/2 slider + circle instead? The song is getting more intense here anyway so increasing note density wouldn't hurt.
00:30:550 (1,2,3,4) - I think the rhythm could be better since now you're focusing on drums with 1 and 2 and 3 but then ignoring them with 4
00:31:836 (2,3) - Same here, no matter what you follow the stronger beats are on 2's tail and in middle of 3
00:32:550 (4,5) - very weak beat on 5 so doesn't make sense to space these more than 00:32:122 (3,4) - I'd probably stack these or replace 4 with a 1/2 slider
00:33:265 (3) - same thing about rhythm as before, 1/2 + circle would probably work better
00:34:979 (6,1) - You should rearrange these as 1 really deserves a bigger spacing. Now it seems you just ran out of space and that's why the spacing is so small
00:35:121 (1,2,3) - Spacing could be better... 2 is a very weak beat while 1 and 3 are lot stronger but the spacing is equal on them
00:37:407 - The whole section here could be better imo. 00:37:407 (1) - is ignoring a lot of sounds, 00:38:550 - ignored audible downbeat here and some other places too, 00:40:265 (1) - and 00:41:407 (1) - have audible sounds on red ticks so they'd work better as 1/2 sliders, 00:41:979 (2) - is a really strong beat but is now very underspaced because of the 3/4 slider... Lots of issues imo so I'd suggest you to try mapping this section a bit differently as I feel it's lower quality than the map overall.
00:43:979 (2,3,4,5,1) - here too something else than a stream could work better like using a 1/4 slider to emphasize the vocal on 4
00:48:693 (1) - Same as earlier but especially here since the song is getting quite intense so I'd avoid using 1/1 sliders at all
00:52:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite a big change compared to 00:51:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - as you change from all 1/2 to all circles even tho there isn't that big of a change in the song so I'd probably try to even it out a bit and maybe make 00:51:693 (1) - into 2 circles and these 00:53:122 (3,4,1,2) - into 1/2 sliders or smtng
00:56:122 (1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm these anti jumps feel a bit weird since it's the final part of the build up before kiai. I'd rather space them more and make 00:56:979 (1,2) - into a big jump since a stack feels kinda underwhelming here.
00:58:836 (1,2,3) - I'd change 1 into a 1/4 slider and space these more to keep the strong emphasis on vocals like in 00:57:979 (1,2,1,2) -
01:09:122 (4,5,1) - 5 is a weak beat so spacing could be better again
01:09:550 (2) - I think 2 circles would work better here as there are vocals on both ticks and a drum on the tail too so I don't think a slider is the way to go here
01:11:693 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would work better here, could also space 01:11:979 (2) - more if you changed it.
01:13:693 (5) - yeah here too. There's no sound that strong here so I don't think a 3/4 is necessary as you'll miss a sound on the red tick.
01:15:265 (1) - no need to nc here
01:16:265 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think rhythm could be better here as there are strong sounds on the slider ends now and there as strong beat in middle of 01:16:265 (1) -
01:20:836 (1,2,3,4) - there are 2 drum beats on 3 so making a pattern with 4 identical sliders doesn't really work
01:23:122 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - again a really small spacing on part that has strong emphasis ._. I'd really suggest making these jumps as it feels pretty weird after the intense jumps before and these sounds are even stronger on the music well, change a bit

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really thanks for ur modding

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-03-13T11:34:15+00:00

Metaku wrote:
[rui's Extra]
00:05:979 (1) - 00:07:121 (1) - I don't think these ncs are necessary keep
00:16:835 - Why did you skip this strong beat ._. add note
00:25:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this rhythm and spacing is kinda weird since there's nothing in the music that indicates 7 equally spaced notes ok. change placement.
00:31:122 (4) - I think a 1/2 + circle would work better here as it would get the vocal and keep the drums clickable like before you are saying is right. but I don't change it to avoid one pattern.
00:34:407 (2,3) - Could use more variable spacing here as 2 is rather weak compared to 3 especially when you've been focusing on drums so I'd expect 3 to be emphasized more compared to 2 change placement.
00:36:836 (3,4,5) - Could use something with bigger spacing here, these stand out and you had bigger spacing on the previous part in general change placement.
00:49:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again a pattern like this doesn't really tell me anything nor does it follow or emphasise anything properly. keep
00:59:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm could be better as now it seems you're just randomly switching between circles and sliders I don't like randomly placement
01:00:836 (3) - I'd rather not use a random 1/1s on kiai especially since there's nothing that'd suggest using one sorry. but keep it
01:03:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the beats on red ticks are quite weak so I don't see a reason to make an equally spaced jump pattern here fixed
01:04:836 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here are actually strong notes but you use a smaller spacing on them ._. expanded the distance
Overall I think you could've made this diff more interesting if you prioritized the vocals that had more variation instead of the static drum beat　

Thank you mod Metaku. Your mod was helpful.

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rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2017-03-13T15:05:56+00:00

Emonal san. If you change to use soft hit sound, you need to learn Sampleset and Additions imo.
Soft sound only feel that something is missing imo. Sampleset and Additions are important technique to add a strong sound.

t/306177 (Advanced Method 1 and Advanced Method 2)

Emonal

168 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Emonal 2017-03-13T17:25:50+00:00

rui wrote:
Emonal san. If you change to use soft hit sound, you need to learn Sampleset and Additions imo.
Soft sound only feel that something is missing imo. Sampleset and Additions are important technique to add a strong sound.

t/306177 (Advanced Method 1 and Advanced Method 2)

Ok, I'll take a look
Rui san Thanks d(`･∀･)b

Yona

185 posts

Joined February 2016

Yona 2017-03-17T20:56:47+00:00

(∩ツ)⊃━☆ﾟ.* From my modding queue ~

Tomoka's Oni

00:03:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Instead of repeating kat then don, you should alternate
00:03:121 (1,5,7) - I suggest you to add kat here for highlight the "boom"
00:05:693 (2) to 00:07:406 (8) - I suggest you to do 1/2 stream
something like that? :

00:18:264 (8) - k?
00:19:406 (3) - I don't understand your choice to put a kat here. You follow the voice, but after you stop to follow it while the other times you follow the "boom". I suggest you to delete it and to put a kat at 00:19:121 (1) to highlight the cutie song as at 00:19:693 (5)
and to follow the "boom" you have to add k at 00:19:978 (6,7)
01:04:693 (4,5,6,7,8) - kkddd seems better because the sound is descending
01:16:121 - add a d?
01:16:407 (2) - k?
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - kkddk?
01:23:979 (6,7) - dk or kk?

Raphalge

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Joined January 2014

Raphalge 2017-03-18T18:58:07+00:00

Ito Kanako :>

[Tomoka's Oni]
00:00:835 - greenline off by 1ms
00:00:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why finishers? the vocals are not that strong, and the only bass drums are on 00:00:835 (1) - and 00:01:978 -

00:03:121 - greenline off by 1ms again
00:27:549 (12,13) - ctrl+g and 00:27:835 (14) - d would probably be more comfortable to play
00:41:549 (10) - d for more vocal emphasis?
00:54:263 (8,9,10,11,12) - kdkkd? give preparation for 00:55:263 (17,18,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:27:978 - green line is off by 1ms
00:28:264 - green line is off by 1ms
00:36:835 - green line off by 1ms
00:41:978 - green line off by 1ms again
01:04:549 (3) - to 01:06:835 (1) - doesn't emphasise vocals like the rest of the section which makes it very weird to play, consider mapping it more like you did at 00:57:978 (1) -

patterning is nice

[Nifty's Muzukashii]
fix greenline issues like in tomoka's diff
00:16:835 (43) - consider deleting this to give muzukashii players a better change to hit the 210bpm finishers
00:55:692 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - this seems reaaaallly hard, idk about this

looks pretty good!

really liking this song, gl with rank

Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Ito Kanako - Uncontrollable (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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