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DivineEnigma

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-05-21T00:56:48+00:00

quick mod on hard since it was remapped

od should be increased, it's the same as normal's od.
try cs 3.5 since normal and easy have 3 as CS also..

not going to list every nc issue but will mention some
00:05:432 (4) - nc
00:05:940 (5,6) - feels weird, i suggest a slider, i keep playing that part and it plays weird ??
00:08:144 (4) - nc
00:13:228 (5,1) - increase ds
00:50:856 (2,3) - looks/plays better if (3) was a bit farther away from 00:50:347 (1) -
00:55:771 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm https://image.prntscr.com/image/effe814ce3e342b2aafafa92b66fa0eb.jpeg

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-09-11T04:33:59+00:00

requested . .!

[Insane]
first try im bad https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9064512
but onto the mod..
[]

00:01:534 (1,2,1,2) - imo I noticed this during my testplay, what I felt was that this, okay you're trying to emphasize what's there but, it's actually the beginning of the map so to even play a pattern where the spacing is huge already is harsh even on a ~4.5* diff, like this has low spacing 00:02:720 (1,2,3,1) - and the intensity is nearly the same, but I'm suggesting that to lower the spacing and/or remap.. mm im not saying i don't like zigzag patterns but it's just the way this was executed
00:05:262 (1,2) - remove NC on (1) and add NC on (2) to emphasize the sound there
00:06:279 (3) - ctrl+g plays better
00:06:788 (1,2) - makes more sense for (2) to have NC because of the sound there and you even emphasized (2) with a finish/cymbal hs
00:10:686 (1,2,3) - ee usually triples don't get mapped on white ticks, what about mapping it on the red tick 00:10:856 - ? probably makes more sense musically
00:11:957 (1,2,3,4) - overlap isn't aesthetically appealing
00:13:228 - makes more sense to map this vocal with a slider since it leads in better to the cymbals that u mapped at 00:13:567 (2,3,4) -
00:13:567 (2) - strong sound should have an NC to emphasize the cymbal here
00:14:584 (5,6) - it sounds better with sliders, there's nothing strong to have as a circle anyways, plus I believe this sound is 1/8 or whatever, so you can simplify the rhythm to 1/4 for the sake of playability
00:15:093 (1,2,1,2) - why a 1-2-1-2 NC pattern here, i'd suggest to just have NC on 00:15:093 (1) -
00:15:771 (3,4) - overlap isn't appealing and may I suggest another position than here xd
00:16:449 (5) - NC because of a downbeat so remove NC on 00:16:788 (1) -
00:17:805 (6) - NC bc of downbeat and so remove NC on 00:18:144 (1) -
zz too lazy to mention rest of NCs
00:25:432 (5) - can this be an extended slider, the sound in the back supports it
00:25:940 (1,2,1,2) - same with NC, why 1-2-1-2 ncs
00:27:127 (5) - why on 1/2 tick, it plays weird considering how there's no vocal or other sound worth making clickable here
00:53:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - interesting flow

[]
I had to end the mod since I'm short on time but i hope you get the idea;
nc issues, overlaps dont look that appealing, spacing issues, rhythm issues

gl!

Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-09-12T03:28:25+00:00

DivineEnigma wrote:
requested . .!

[Insane]
first try im bad https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9064512
but onto the mod..
[]
00:01:534 (1,2,1,2) - imo I noticed this during my testplay, what I felt was that this, okay you're trying to emphasize what's there but, it's actually the beginning of the map so to even play a pattern where the spacing is huge already is harsh even on a ~4.5* diff, like this has low spacing 00:02:720 (1,2,3,1) - and the intensity is nearly the same, but I'm suggesting that to lower the spacing and/or remap.. mm im not saying i don't like zigzag patterns but it's just the way this was executed
00:05:262 (1,2) - remove NC on (1) and add NC on (2) to emphasize the sound there
00:06:279 (3) - ctrl+g plays better
00:06:788 (1,2) - makes more sense for (2) to have NC because of the sound there and you even emphasized (2) with a finish/cymbal hs
00:10:686 (1,2,3) - ee usually triples don't get mapped on white ticks, what about mapping it on the red tick 00:10:856 - ? probably makes more sense musically
00:11:957 (1,2,3,4) - overlap isn't aesthetically appealing
00:13:228 - makes more sense to map this vocal with a slider since it leads in better to the cymbals that u mapped at 00:13:567 (2,3,4) -
00:13:567 (2) - strong sound should have an NC to emphasize the cymbal here
00:14:584 (5,6) - it sounds better with sliders, there's nothing strong to have as a circle anyways, plus I believe this sound is 1/8 or whatever, so you can simplify the rhythm to 1/4 for the sake of playability
00:15:093 (1,2,1,2) - why a 1-2-1-2 NC pattern here, i'd suggest to just have NC on 00:15:093 (1) -
00:15:771 (3,4) - overlap isn't appealing and may I suggest another position than here xd
00:16:449 (5) - NC because of a downbeat so remove NC on 00:16:788 (1) -
00:17:805 (6) - NC bc of downbeat and so remove NC on 00:18:144 (1) -
zz too lazy to mention rest of NCs
00:25:432 (5) - can this be an extended slider, the sound in the back supports it
00:25:940 (1,2,1,2) - same with NC, why 1-2-1-2 ncs
00:27:127 (5) - why on 1/2 tick, it plays weird considering how there's no vocal or other sound worth making clickable here
00:53:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - interesting flow

[]
I had to end the mod since I'm short on time but i hope you get the idea;
nc issues, overlaps dont look that appealing, spacing issues, rhythm issues

gl!

fixd ty

Josh123uaJ

81 posts

Joined March 2014

Josh123uaJ 2017-11-15T23:56:58+00:00

Ayy from mod q

General:
I noticed that Divine's Hard diff has a pink sliderborder while the other two diffs have just regular sliderborders.
At 00:56:449 (3), there's a finish and whistle hitsound together on this slider. It feels random since it's the only note with those hitsounds. Maybe replace or remove them.

Normal:
00:06:957 (1) - This note should be further away since there's a bigger gap in rhythm. It might confuse some new players.
00:18:991 (1,1) - I'm not too sure about the slider heads being so close together. Use .8x spacing here too.
00:27:635 (3) - This slider doesn't need to be that long. Maybe turn it into shorter sliders like 00:30:008 (3,4).

Divine's Hard:
00:12:381 (1,2) - Add a circle between these notes to fill in the gap.
00:21:872 (1,2,3) - imo, Flow here is kind awkward. Maybe do something like this?

Insane:
00:10:856 (7,8,1) - This should be further away to add emphasis.
00:11:957 (1) - This slider can be shorted by 1/4 ticks and then add a circle after it so it covers the strong sound.
00:13:906 (2,3,4) - You could place (3) so that it's equally spaced from the slider beginnings of (2) and (4) to make the pattern look better.
00:15:771 (1,2,3) - I don't like big spacing here, especially near the beginning. It's unusually high and it feels like it should be reserved for the kiai.
00:30:686 (1,2,3) - Similar suggestion of placing (2) equally away from slider beginnings of (1) and (3).
00:36:110 (7,8) - You could increase spacing here to place emphasis on the strong sound at (8)

GL! :^)

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-11-16T03:45:06+00:00

Josh123uaJ wrote:
Ayy from mod q

General:
I noticed that Divine's Hard diff has a pink sliderborder while the other two diffs have just regular sliderborders. Doesn't have to be consistent with other difficulties
At 00:56:449 (3), there's a finish and whistle hitsound together on this slider. It feels random since it's the only note with those hitsounds. Maybe replace or remove them. Fixed

Divine's Hard:
00:12:381 (1,2) - Add a circle between these notes to fill in the gap. keeping, i'm focused on vocals here
00:21:872 (1,2,3) - imo, Flow here is kind awkward. Maybe do something like this? tbh i think it's fine haha

GL! :^)

thank you for the mod!

Divine's Hard

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Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-11-16T03:53:50+00:00

Josh123uaJ wrote:
Ayy from mod q

General:
I noticed that Divine's Hard diff has a pink sliderborder while the other two diffs have just regular sliderborders.
At 00:56:449 (3), there's a finish and whistle hitsound together on this slider. It feels random since it's the only note with those hitsounds. Maybe replace or remove them.

Normal:
00:06:957 (1) - This note should be further away since there's a bigger gap in rhythm. It might confuse some new players.
00:18:991 (1,1) - I'm not too sure about the slider heads being so close together. Use .8x spacing here too.
00:27:635 (3) - This slider doesn't need to be that long. Maybe turn it into shorter sliders like 00:30:008 (3,4).
fixed all
Divine's Hard:
00:12:381 (1,2) - Add a circle between these notes to fill in the gap.
00:21:872 (1,2,3) - imo, Flow here is kind awkward. Maybe do something like this?

Insane:
00:10:856 (7,8,1) - This should be further away to add emphasis. moved it out a little
00:11:957 (1) - This slider can be shorted by 1/4 ticks and then add a circle after it so it covers the strong sound. looks bad but i guess lol
00:13:906 (2,3,4) - You could place (3) so that it's equally spaced from the slider beginnings of (2) and (4) to make the pattern look better. i tried
00:15:771 (1,2,3) - I don't like big spacing here, especially near the beginning. It's unusually high and it feels like it should be reserved for the kiai. fixd
00:30:686 (1,2,3) - Similar suggestion of placing (2) equally away from slider beginnings of (1) and (3). fixd
00:36:110 (7,8) - You could increase spacing here to place emphasis on the strong sound at (8) e

GL! :^)

ty for mod!

Lafayla

Beatmap Nominator

348 posts

Joined December 2014

Lafayla 2017-11-16T07:43:01+00:00

Hello :3~~
From my Queue,
Normal>
00:18:991 (1,1) - I would avoid covering the slider head like this, it also seems overdone compared to the other 1/2 rhythms and how they block their slider heads
00:19:500 (1) - unnecessary nc imo, I'm guessing you put it here to make reading this overlap easier but, I don't think its going to help
00:44:754 - 00:44:245 (3,1) - overlap is visible and doesn't look very nice, I would reorganize those 2 sliders so they don't overlap eachother
00:45:940 (1) - I would map this slider to start on 00:46:110 - because it sounds like you are following the melody here, you don't map the drum beats that follow it so it doesn't fit well being mapped here like this
00:34:923 (1) - makes more sense to put a circle at 00:35:432 - especially since reverse sliders with more than 1 reverse are usually avoided in these lower diffs, I would strongly recommend avoiding this in your case because your normal is the easiest diff in your set, just too complex for players at this level.
00:48:652 (2) - I think you meant to start the reverse slider on 00:48:822 - , I would then add a circle on 00:49:330 - for what I said above, like this
01:06:618 (1) - sounds like you are mapping vocals here, a circle on the end would give better emphasis to 01:07:127 - like this
01:08:144 (4) - same as above point, a circle on the end would be better
01:12:042 (1) - ^
01:17:466 (1) - ^
01:22:889 (1) - ^

Divine's Hard>
00:13:567 (1,2,3,1) - this emphasis could be better, it makes the slider emphasis really stand out which is good but the 3 circles could be emphasized better
00:23:228 (1,2) - this would be better as a blanket
edit, just got an update and most of the mod from normal were fixed, rip

Insane>
00:14:415 (4) - could use more spacing
00:15:262 (2) - too much emphasis on this imo, would be better to have its spacing similar to 00:15:432 (3,4) -
00:16:618 (2) - spacing here is a bit too much,
00:50:347 (2,3) - ok.. but 00:47:805 (2,3) - ? spacing difference is incredible yet they are similar
01:22:550 (4,5) - I'm only using this rhythm as an example because it happens everywhere, spacing bettween these two shouldn't be similar 01:22:550 - is bass drum and then the sound that comes after it is.. almost nothing, yet they are mapped with equal importance throughout this section. There are also numerous spacing inconsistencies.
Gl with the mapset

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-11-17T03:52:10+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
Hello :3~~
From my Queue,
Divine's Hard>
00:13:567 (1,2,3,1) - this emphasis could be better, it makes the slider emphasis really stand out which is good but the 3 circles could be emphasized better i'd emphasize it more but taking into account that it's a hard, i made it more easier in a way that it still is consistent with what i'm doing like here 00:46:110 (1,2,3) -
00:23:228 (1,2) - this would be better as a blanket sure

Gl with the mapset

ty for mod!

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Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-11-21T02:23:42+00:00

Lafayla wrote:
Hello :3~~
From my Queue,
Normal>
00:18:991 (1,1) - I would avoid covering the slider head like this, it also seems overdone compared to the other 1/2 rhythms and how they block their slider heads
00:19:500 (1) - unnecessary nc imo, I'm guessing you put it here to make reading this overlap easier but, I don't think its going to help
00:44:754 - 00:44:245 (3,1) - overlap is visible and doesn't look very nice, I would reorganize those 2 sliders so they don't overlap eachother
00:45:940 (1) - I would map this slider to start on 00:46:110 - because it sounds like you are following the melody here, you don't map the drum beats that follow it so it doesn't fit well being mapped here like this
00:34:923 (1) - makes more sense to put a circle at 00:35:432 - especially since reverse sliders with more than 1 reverse are usually avoided in these lower diffs, I would strongly recommend avoiding this in your case because your normal is the easiest diff in your set, just too complex for players at this level.
00:48:652 (2) - I think you meant to start the reverse slider on 00:48:822 - , I would then add a circle on 00:49:330 - for what I said above, like this
01:06:618 (1) - sounds like you are mapping vocals here, a circle on the end would give better emphasis to 01:07:127 - like this
01:08:144 (4) - same as above point, a circle on the end would be better
01:12:042 (1) - ^
01:17:466 (1) - ^
01:22:889 (1) - ^

Divine's Hard>
00:13:567 (1,2,3,1) - this emphasis could be better, it makes the slider emphasis really stand out which is good but the 3 circles could be emphasized better
00:23:228 (1,2) - this would be better as a blanket
edit, just got an update and most of the mod from normal were fixed, rip

Insane>
00:14:415 (4) - could use more spacing
00:15:262 (2) - too much emphasis on this imo, would be better to have its spacing similar to 00:15:432 (3,4) -
00:16:618 (2) - spacing here is a bit too much,
00:50:347 (2,3) - ok.. but 00:47:805 (2,3) - ? spacing difference is incredible yet they are similar
01:22:550 (4,5) - I'm only using this rhythm as an example because it happens everywhere, spacing bettween these two shouldn't be similar 01:22:550 - is bass drum and then the sound that comes after it is.. almost nothing, yet they are mapped with equal importance throughout this section. There are also numerous spacing inconsistencies.
Gl with the mapset

sry 4 late response, i fixed every recommendations directed towards my diffs, thanks for the mod!

hi-mei

784 posts

Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-11-23T11:53:43+00:00

idk how to mod this, it felt really good and clean

gl on ranking

Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-11-24T02:51:34+00:00

hi-mei wrote:
idk how to mod this, it felt really good and clean

gl on ranking

awww, thanks!!!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-11-30T19:52:41+00:00

[general]

aimod
go map another 2* diff to make the spread more balance between Normal and Hard, like making Advanced diff
the gap between Hard and Insane is kinda high and requires a diff to balance it
end the kiai at 01:26:788 - for all diffs

[i]

usually for NC could work on big white tick or red tick to follow its emphasize by its downbeat or vocal, such as 00:02:720 (3) - 00:05:432 (2) - 00:13:567 (1) - 00:16:279 - (if u're using 1/1 slider) 00:18:991 (1) - etc. should apply to everything on this diff, as i don't want to mention all of them here
00:01:534 (1,2) - this isn't a right way to follow such rhythm starting on a vocal here. should be 1/1 slider and 2 1/2 sliders for a better start to follow both vocal's emphasize
00:05:432 (2) - honestly, i'd NC this for emphasizing the vocal and its downbeat there
00:06:618 - should work to use 1/2 slider for following a xylophone sound
00:06:957 (1,2,3) - u could use this for following vocals with this rhythm http://puu.sh/ywDyu/19fe6385c4.jpg
00:09:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/ywDQR/159260dc2d.jpg
00:11:703 (1,1,2) - u could just make a simple pattern for this, such as triangle blanket pattern here. or to keep it safe, 3/4 reverse will do for its emphasize
00:13:059 (5,6,1) - i wouldn't make this as a jump gap for (6), but 00:13:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be it
00:14:415 (4,5) - should be this instead http://puu.sh/ywDYU/841aba8222.jpg
00:15:771 (1) - this doesn't even deserve to have NC here, despite u were following the xylophone note here
00:15:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - try this rhythm better http://puu.sh/ywE8m/9e8975a505.jpg
00:18:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - NCs aren't quite right and the pattern use doesn't suit based on the rhythm here. perhaps u could use this rhythm that would make it more better to follow its vocal and notes http://puu.sh/ywHIo/ae0df2dee7.jpg
00:42:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - why is this even a note placement? the 1/1 slider supposed to be a vocal that holds at 1/1 note. should be http://puu.sh/ywHNV/ba7e9c9af6.jpg + NC fix
00:52:212 (1,2) - should be 7 1/4 note here
00:53:059 (1,3) - i'd avoid overlapping these 2 from its tail
00:59:754 - missing note
01:03:143 (3) - overmap note and there's nothing to support with it
01:03:567 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 isn't a good idea for some players playing this diff and realize that it is a 1/1 note gap here with its close distance
01:24:923 (1,1,1) - vs 00:11:703 (1,1,2) - what? same note, but different
01:24:076 (6,1) - just use a 1/1 slider and a note better rather than a current one

ur diff is almost like "light extra" for me due to jumps with such gaps around there. also, i intentionally didn't want to mention anything about the patterns or its own flow, such as 00:30:008 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - for example, due to awkward flow for its movement there, 00:35:262 (4,5) - etc. i think u should review ur diffs all over again and try to focus on what you're trying to emphasize there, like 00:28:991 (1) - should be more further for its snare (?), missing notes around, flow, etc. should be a lesson for you here

just a tip. to make this "Insane" diff, i'd suggest using a lot of 1/2 sliders around for following vocals + 1/1 sliders too without making a huge gap for jumps, unless it's sth to emphasize

[Divine]

00:21:872 (1,3) - this blanket seems intentional for me, but ain't perfectly blanketed sadly
00:28:652 (1) - at least u could curve it better there with some adjustment
00:58:483 (1,3) - tbh i wouldn't recommend overlapping these 2 for those tails
01:17:974 (2) - why not this for following a vocal better http://puu.sh/ywJZz/8bdc57bba6.jpg

[n]

why is this even sv 1.1? isn't this rly fast for beginner players to play with? it doesn't feel like friendly play for this sv tbh
NC stuff is relatable as i have mentioned it from Insane
00:01:534 (1) - u could just remove the 3rd anchor and just do this instead man http://puu.sh/ywK6T/0baa90a4d5.jpg
00:12:381 (2) - please make the DS more consistent as u have did like the rest
00:19:500 (2,3,4) - please no. the flow would be confusing thinking that (4) should be clickable, even if its both with mods or not
00:24:584 (1,1) - spinner, then break for 1/1 gap... pretty much unrankable for a diff like this. normally you would have to skip to 4 white ticks there to give them a good time to read and a short amount of break after spinning it. or just map it like this http://puu.sh/ywKgK/13a6d24006.jpg
00:44:584 (4) - missing note that should be clickable
01:00:686 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ywKkD/30ebd409eb.jpg for vocals that holds 1/1 there
01:13:228 (4) - too friendly play for a diff like this, as this supposed to be in Easy diff
01:23:737 (3) - why this...? here http://puu.sh/ywKrI/742f26b5ad.jpg

i think you should learn more a bit about mapping lower diffs there just for a while tbh

gl

Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-12-01T00:24:22+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[general]
aimod
go map another 2* diff to make the spread more balance between Normal and Hard, like making Advanced diff
the gap between Hard and Insane is kinda high and requires a diff to balance it
end the kiai at 01:26:788 - for all diffs
[i]
usually for NC could work on big white tick or red tick to follow its emphasize by its downbeat or vocal, such as 00:02:720 (3) - 00:05:432 (2) - 00:13:567 (1) - 00:16:279 - (if u're using 1/1 slider) 00:18:991 (1) - etc. should apply to everything on this diff, as i don't want to mention all of them here ok
00:01:534 (1,2) - this isn't a right way to follow such rhythm starting on a vocal here. should be 1/1 slider and 2 1/2 sliders for a better start to follow both vocal's emphasize ill consider it
00:05:432 (2) - honestly, i'd NC this for emphasizing the vocal and its downbeat there yh tru
00:06:618 - should work to use 1/2 slider for following a xylophone sound fixed, but idk about flow
00:06:957 (1,2,3) - u could use this for following vocals with this rhythm http://puu.sh/ywDyu/19fe6385c4.jpg doen
00:09:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/ywDQR/159260dc2d.jpg
00:11:703 (1,1,2) - u could just make a simple pattern for this, such as triangle blanket pattern here. or to keep it safe, 3/4 reverse will do for its emphasize i made it 3/4 since i didnt know what a triangle blanket was :/
00:13:059 (5,6,1) - i wouldn't make this as a jump gap for (6), but 00:13:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be it i think i got it?
00:14:415 (4,5) - should be this instead http://puu.sh/ywDYU/841aba8222.jpg changed, but might consider re-changing it later since the background isnt *thattt* strong
00:15:771 (1) - this doesn't even deserve to have NC here, despite u were following the xylophone note here kk
00:15:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - try this rhythm better http://puu.sh/ywE8m/9e8975a505.jpg done
00:18:991 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - NCs aren't quite right and the pattern use doesn't suit based on the rhythm here. perhaps u could use this rhythm that would make it more better to follow its vocal and notes http://puu.sh/ywHIo/ae0df2dee7.jpg i dont feel it ,sorry
00:42:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - why is this even a note placement? the 1/1 slider supposed to be a vocal that holds at 1/1 note. should be http://puu.sh/ywHNV/ba7e9c9af6.jpg + NC fix fixd
00:52:212 (1,2) - should be 7 1/4 note here ill try it until someone complains
00:53:059 (1,3) - i'd avoid overlapping these 2 from its tail k i made it same angle
00:59:754 - missing notei dont hear it, im deaf maybe
01:03:143 (3) - overmap note and there's nothing to support with it mbmb, god supported it
01:03:567 (1,2) - the distance between these 2 isn't a good idea for some players playing this diff and realize that it is a 1/1 note gap here with its close distance ill consult some people and check, will keep it in mind tho
01:24:923 (1,1,1) - vs 00:11:703 (1,1,2) - what? same note, but different i feel like it's fixed from making the first one a 3/4 slider
01:24:076 (6,1) - just use a 1/1 slider and a note better rather than a current one
ur diff is almost like "light extra" for me due to jumps with such gaps around there. also, i intentionally didn't want to mention anything about the patterns or its own flow, such as 00:30:008 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - for example, due to awkward flow for its movement there, 00:35:262 (4,5) - etc. i think u should review ur diffs all over again and try to focus on what you're trying to emphasize there, like 00:28:991 (1) - should be more further for its snare (?), missing notes around, flow, etc. should be a lesson for you here ok dad, i tried fixing as much as i can, i kept a few in mind, but fixed majority of what i wanted

just a tip. to make this "Insane" diff, i'd suggest using a lot of 1/2 sliders around for following vocals + 1/1 sliders too without making a huge gap for jumps, unless it's sth to emphasize

[Divine]
00:21:872 (1,3) - this blanket seems intentional for me, but ain't perfectly blanketed sadly
00:28:652 (1) - at least u could curve it better there with some adjustment
00:58:483 (1,3) - tbh i wouldn't recommend overlapping these 2 for those tails
01:17:974 (2) - why not this for following a vocal better http://puu.sh/ywJZz/8bdc57bba6.jpg
[n]
why is this even sv 1.1? isn't this rly fast for beginner players to play with? it doesn't feel like friendly play for this sv tbh 1.1+.3 =
divine's hard +.3 = insane; i'll see tho
NC stuff is relatable as i have mentioned it from Insane ill figure it out later
00:01:534 (1) - u could just remove the 3rd anchor and just do this instead man http://puu.sh/ywK6T/0baa90a4d5.jpg im dumb
00:12:381 (2) - please make the DS more consistent as u have did like the restidk what went through my mind
00:19:500 (2,3,4) - please no. the flow would be confusing thinking that (4) should be clickable, even if its both with mods or not ???
00:24:584 (1,1) - spinner, then break for 1/1 gap... pretty much unrankable for a diff like this. normally you would have to skip to 4 white ticks there to give them a good time to read and a short amount of break after spinning it. or just map it like this http://puu.sh/ywKgK/13a6d24006.jpg thought the same, fixed
00:44:584 (4) - missing note that should be clickable fixed
01:00:686 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ywKkD/30ebd409eb.jpg for vocals that holds 1/1 there k
01:13:228 (4) - too friendly play for a diff like this, as this supposed to be in Easy diff fixed
01:23:737 (3) - why this...? here http://puu.sh/ywKrI/742f26b5ad.jpg
fixed

i think you should learn more a bit about mapping lower diffs there just for a while tbh true

gl

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2017-12-01T02:13:45+00:00

hi m4m from my q

[insane]
00:06:788 (5) - hurmm definately there is no sound there .. delete it
00:06:534 - and also at this part you can put a 2 note stream there..

suggestion

00:36:110 (7) - this note is unnacessary .. delete it because the song stop here 00:35:940 - and also there no sound at all 00:36:110 -
01:03:567 (1) - delete this nc
01:03:906 (2) - nc should be here

[normal]
00:48:822 (2,3) - weird

better this way
since this is normal .. minimal the note as possible ...
00:50:686 (1) - no need slider .. replace it with single hit circle

thats all .. my map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/666042
btw goodluck ^^

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-12-01T04:53:12+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[Divine]
00:21:872 (1,3) - this blanket seems intentional for me, but ain't perfectly blanketed sadly im using default skin, it looks okay to me, doesnt have to be a perfect-pixel blanket
00:28:652 (1) - at least u could curve it better there with some adjustment it's fine
00:58:483 (1,3) - tbh i wouldn't recommend overlapping these 2 for those tails moved a bit left, but leaving it as it is
01:17:974 (2) - why not this for following a vocal better http://puu.sh/ywJZz/8bdc57bba6.jpg imo, both play fine. i like the two repeat sliders in a row, makes a nice flow as well
gl

ty for the mod!

also changed my kiai time to suggested one

Divine's Hard

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Twiggles

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Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-12-02T01:59:10+00:00

YukiZura- wrote:
hi m4m from my q

[insane]
00:06:788 (5) - hurmm definately there is no sound there .. delete it fixed yesterday
00:06:534 - and also at this part you can put a 2 note stream there.. i made it a 5 note instead since there was sound before, thanks for pointing it out for me <3

suggestion
not in this diff sorry
00:36:110 (7) - this note is unnacessary .. delete it because the song stop here 00:35:940 - and also there no sound at all 00:36:110 - fixed yesterday
01:03:567 (1) - delete this nc iffy but ok
01:03:906 (2) - nc should be here ^

[normal]
00:48:822 (2,3) - weird i removed 3, ty
better this way
since this is normal .. minimal the note as possible ...
00:50:686 (1) - no need slider .. replace it with single hit circle done

thats all .. my map for m4m : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/666042
btw goodluck ^^

thanks

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Cote 2017-12-03T01:21:21+00:00

Hi random mod as the song is nice

Normal

00:01:534 (1) - This slider does not convince me at all, Try this so that the body of the slider to make it much more appealing
00:05:771 (6,7,8,9) - This is a little complicated considering that these difficulties are played by beginning people, you could try 00:05:771 (6) - Slider 1/2 and 00:06:110 (8) - Slider 1/2
00:18:822 - Why skip :c, The song is still being very fluid here so this gap is kind of awkward, put a circle on top of 00:18:991 (1) -
00:23:228 (1) - You could round this slider, imo is better
00:35:093 - The same as above, idk why do you skip this

Divine's Hard

00:05:432 (1) - try to stack on 00:04:754 (2) - this you could also try with 00:16:110 (4) -
00:28:652 (1) - Mmm, this curve in the slider does not convince me, mainly because it does not emphasize the music part, I suggest to make it simpler
01:07:127 (3,1) - why not try to do a blanket here, imo is better

Insane

00:14:754 (8,1) - This is very close, it makes the player think that it is a 1/4 stream, maybe you could give it more space

Nice diff! but you could work in the spaces, since sometimes the circle or slider is very close and others very far away, which is confusing in some cases.

Gl!

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2017-12-03T03:09:52+00:00

wolf3211 wrote:
Hi random mod as the song is nice

Divine's Hard
00:05:432 (1) - try to stack on 00:04:754 (2) - this you could also try with 00:16:110 (4) - mm I think it's fine. I sometimes break the use of consistency with DS to overlap slightly.
00:28:652 (1) - Mmm, this curve in the slider does not convince me, mainly because it does not emphasize the music part, I suggest to make it simpler imo it's simple, it's just a wavy curve that's used throughout the map. it's nothing new the player wouldn't see
01:07:127 (3,1) - why not try to do a blanket here, imo is better no thanks, i'd have to move it even further to blanket and it still works this way
Gl!

ty!

Twiggles

155 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Twiggles 2017-12-03T18:37:59+00:00

wolf3211 wrote:
Hi random mod as the song is nice

Normal
00:01:534 (1) - This slider does not convince me at all, Try this so that the body of the slider to make it much more appealing ok, dad
00:05:771 (6,7,8,9) - This is a little complicated considering that these difficulties are played by beginning people, you could try 00:05:771 (6) - Slider 1/2 and 00:06:110 (8) - Slider 1/2 instead, i made it 1 1/2 and a circle
00:18:822 - Why skip :c, The song is still being very fluid here so this gap is kind of awkward, put a circle on top of 00:18:991 (1) -while i can't put a circle on top, i can put a circle next to it
00:23:228 (1) - You could round this slider, imo is better rounded
00:35:093 - The same as above, idk why do you skip thisgod says otherwise, sorry

Divine's Hard
00:05:432 (1) - try to stack on 00:04:754 (2) - this you could also try with 00:16:110 (4) -
00:28:652 (1) - Mmm, this curve in the slider does not convince me, mainly because it does not emphasize the music part, I suggest to make it simpler
01:07:127 (3,1) - why not try to do a blanket here, imo is better
Insane
00:14:754 (8,1) - This is very close, it makes the player think that it is a 1/4 stream, maybe you could give it more space fixed last mod

Nice diff! but you could work in the spaces, since sometimes the circle or slider is very close and others very far away, which is confusing in some cases.
Gl!

ty for mod <3<3

Venix

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Venix 2018-03-17T15:51:22+00:00

Hello~ a random mod from my queue! (I'm probably much too late)
Red = unrankable

General

Tags are inconsistent. You should remove "victorfernando" tag from hard to fix it.
You should delete the audio from the video file.
Source is wrong, should be "ネコぱらOVA" instead; resource: http://nekoparaova.com/
You should delete "ネコぱら" from tags as it's source.

Normal

00:05:771 (6,7) - I feel it would fit better if you change those to one slider as you used to emphasize vocal lines by sliders like that, for example, 00:02:720 (2) -
00:08:313 - I think it would be better if this beat was clickable according to your follow beats like this. I feel using rhythm ctrl+g 00:07:974 (2,3) - would fit your follow better.
In order to follow vocals which were your point of emphasis I'd suggest extending 00:12:381 (2) - this by 1/2. // Similar kind of issue applies 01:24:076 (1) -
00:19:500 (4,5) - I feel it might be uncomfortable to play by beginners according to the sharp angle between those objects. I think using one like https://venix.s-ul.eu/ihIihXzy would fit better here.
00:23:228 (1,2) - I think this rhythm ignores the continuous vocal line which you used to emphasize by long sliders like 00:01:534 (1) - . I feel using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/cjwBNWXM would support your vocal following.
00:47:635 - I feel putting this strong downbeat on the sliderend doesn't fit well here in accordion to your following. In order to emphasize it, I'd suggest using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/zcKmKSkj
According to your NC consistency there should be one 01:26:788 (4) - here I think.

Divine's Hard

Overall, I think your usage of spacing changes is kinda inconsistent during the entire difficulty. Sometimes you are putting a jump on strong vocals like 00:10:856 (1) - , sometimes you are putting it on the clap like 00:16:110 (4) - and sometimes you aren't applying it at all. I'd suggest to constantly follow one kind of sound because it would give you some kind of consistency during the difficulty.
00:04:754 (2,1) - This shapes overlap gives this pattern a bit unpolished look I feel. I think using a pattern like https://venix.s-ul.eu/CibToeJ2 would fit your style nicely.
00:13:059 - I feel there should be a note here to emphasize noticeable sound which you used to emphasize (00:15:940 (3) - for example).
01:17:974 (2) - I kinda fell 1/1 slider would express vocal line here better in order to emphasize the sound contrast with 01:17:466 (1) - this one which supports repeat because of the other kind of vocal.

Insane

00:06:957 (1) - This object isn't properly snapped.
00:12:381 (2,3) - I feel this flow is a bit uncomfortable to play because of very sharp angle used here. I think using something like https://venix.s-ul.eu/j4r7oglr would fit your style.
00:22:550 - I think it should be emphasized by the clickable object according to the strong beat which was your point of emphasis during this part. Using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/Apbvf9tO would support map structure more I feel.
00:25:940 - Overall I think this section should be nerfed a bit in order to emphasize the contrast in music intensity with the kiai which is using very similar distances between the objects. Some spacings such as 00:27:296 (1,2) - or 00:35:432 (2,3) - etc. feel too big according to the calm tone of this section. I'd suggest lowering spacing during this part to get a better representation of the calmness in the song.
00:47:635 (1) - I feel this one would fit better if it was spaced more as it sounds more intense than 00:48:144 (4) - which shares same spacing.
00:58:991 (3,4) - I think using one 1/1 slider here would fit your following better as you used to emphasize continuous vocals by 1/1s like 00:53:737 (5) - for example.
01:14:076 (4,5) - I feel emphasizing 1/4 beats here by the stream would fit better here as you used to follow beats like those by using streams, for example, 00:47:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - .
01:25:432 (1,2) - I feel they're a bit uncomfortable to play because of the very wide angle between objects. I think using a pattern like https://venix.s-ul.eu/Goi66Dn2 would fit nicely here.

Hitsounds

01:09:839 - I feel a finish + whistle should be placed here as it follows same sound as 01:04:415 -
01:20:178 - I think auto sampleset should be used here as you used to put it on the vocal line
01:22:889 - Also, I think this volume change is unnecessary since music intensity doesn't change at all here.

Good luck~

Last edited by Venix 2018-03-31T21:08:25+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Twiggles

155 posts

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Topic Starter

Twiggles 2018-03-17T16:12:46+00:00

Venix wrote:
Hello~ a random mod from my queue! (I'm probably much too late)
Red = unrankable

General
Tags are inconsistent.
You should delete the audio from the video file.
Source is wrong, should be "ネコぱらOVA" instead; resource: http://nekoparaova.com/
A note: when it will be changed, please remove "OVA" from tags.
You should delete "ネコぱら" from tags as it's source.
Normal
00:05:771 (6,7) - I feel it would fit better if you change those to one 2/1 slider as you used to emphasize vocal lines by sliders like that, for example, 00:02:720 (2) -
00:08:313 - I think it would be better if this beat was clickable according to your follow beats like this. I feel using rhythm ctrl+g 00:07:974 (2,3) - would fit your follow better.
In order to follow vocals which were your point of emphasis I'd suggest extending 00:12:381 (2) - this by 1/2. // Similar kind of issue applies 01:24:076 (1) -
00:19:500 (4,5) - I feel it might be uncomfortable to play by beginners according to the sharp angle between those objects. I think using one like https://venix.s-ul.eu/ihIihXzy would fit better here.
00:23:228 (1,2) - I think this rhythm ignores the continuous vocal line which you used to emphasize by long sliders like 00:01:534 (1) - . I feel using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/cjwBNWXM would support your vocal following.
00:47:635 - I feel putting this strong downbeat on the sliderend doesn't fit well here in accordion to your following. In order to emphasize it, I'd suggest using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/zcKmKSkj
According to your NC consistency there should be one 01:26:788 (4) - here I think.
Divine's Hard
Overall, I think your usage of spacing changes is kinda inconsistent during the entire difficulty. Sometimes you are putting a jump on strong vocals like 00:10:856 (1) - , sometimes you are putting it on the clap like 00:16:110 (4) - and sometimes you aren't applying it at all. I'd suggest to constantly follow one kind of sound because it would give you some kind of consistency during the difficulty.
00:04:754 (2,1) - This shapes overlap gives this pattern a bit unpolished look I feel. I think using a pattern like https://venix.s-ul.eu/CibToeJ2 would fit your style nicely.
00:13:059 - I feel there should be a note here to emphasize noticeable sound which you used to emphasize (00:15:940 (3) - for example).
01:17:974 (2) - I kinda fell 1/1 slider would express vocal line here better in order to emphasize the sound contrast with 01:17:466 (1) - this one which supports repeat because of the other kind of vocal.
Insane
00:06:957 (1) - This object isn't properly snapped.
00:12:381 (2,3) - I feel this flow is a bit uncomfortable to play because of very sharp angle used here. I think using something like https://venix.s-ul.eu/j4r7oglr would fit your style.
00:22:550 - I think it should be emphasized by the clickable object according to the strong beat which was your point of emphasis during this part. Using rhythm like https://venix.s-ul.eu/Apbvf9tO would support map structure more I feel.
00:25:940 - Overall I think this section should be nerfed a bit in order to emphasize the contrast in music intensity with the kiai which is using very similar distances between the objects. Some spacings such as 00:27:296 (1,2) - or 00:35:432 (2,3) - etc. feel too big according to the calm tone of the song. I'd suggest lowering spacing during this part to get a better representation of the calmness in the song.
00:47:635 (1) - I feel this one would fit better if it was spaced more as it sounds more intense than 00:48:144 (4) - which shares same spacing.
00:58:991 (3,4) - I think using one 1/1 slider here would fit your following better as you used to emphasize continuous vocals by 1/1s like 00:53:737 (5) - for example.
01:14:076 (4,5) - I feel emphasizing 1/4 beats here by the stream would fit better here as you used to follow beats like those by using streams, for example, 00:47:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - .
01:25:432 (1,2) - I feel they're a bit uncomfortable to play because of the very wide angle between objects. I think using a pattern like https://venix.s-ul.eu/Goi66Dn2 would fit nicely here.
Hitsounds
01:09:839 - I feel a finish + whistle should be placed here as it follows same sound as 01:04:415 -
01:20:178 - I think auto sampleset should be used here as you used to put it on the vocal line
Good luck~

I appreciate your mod, but I feel like remapping it after a certain point would be better since I'd know how to properly map. I'll see if Divine wants to change anything though. Thanks for your effort!

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wolf3211 wrote:

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