1. Futsuu (2.2 stars, 580 notes)
2. Inner Oni (4.8 stars, 1500 notes)
3. Kantan (1.4 stars, 330 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3 stars, 900 notes)
5. Oni (4 stars, 1220 notes)

1. 00:26:833 (1,2,1) - how about a dkd ? I think it flow better with the kkd
2. 00:41:576 (99,100,101,102,103) - change it to ddkdk ? it will make this pattern similar to this one 00:40:204 (87,88,89,90,91) - . (it will follow the vocal)
3. 01:54:604 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^
4. 00:52:890 (203,204) - maybe just me (and dunno why) ; but I feel like k D flow better.
5. 01:00:832 (239,240,241) - ddk ? the last note being really higher pitched than the 2, I feel like ddk have a better emphasis.
6. 02:57:774 (47,48) - last note have clear different guitare sound to this one : 02:57:774 (47) - . I think it should be better to change it as dk
7. 03:13:803 (116,117) - I'd emphasize this note : 03:14:146 (117) - by changing this one 03:13:803 (116) - into a D

1. 02:11:060 (1,2,3) - because the last piano note is higher pitched, and stronger than the other, how about changing it into a ddk ?
2. 02:55:117 (20) - forgot to change it into D ? or intentional d ?
3. 03:13:803 (94) - same thing as Inner D:
4. 03:53:060 (1) - since this one is a big note, maybe also make this one 02:46:889 (106) - into a big note ?
5. 04:04:374 (15) - pretty sure D sounds better to make difference with the k spam

1. 01:10:546 (12) - forgot to change it into D ? or intentional d ?
2. 01:55:804 (100) - change it into a K ?
3. 02:22:717 (16) - I'd change this note into a d to make a better difference between those pitch : 02:22:717 (16,17) - .
4. 03:25:632 (2) - change it into a k ? it sound better to me with the piano note. And might also flow better with the d d d.
5. 04:04:374 (43) - same as oni.

1. 00:44:147 (100) - changing this one into a D will make the pattern easier, and also mark a difference between this note a the k k k
2. 01:12:946 (15) - maybe just me, but I find it cool as k. dunno why tho.
3. 03:13:803 (119) - change it into d ? will be easier to tap & also have same reason as Oni/Inner Oni.
4. 04:04:374 (88) - same as other diff.

Raphalge wrote:

hi from mod queue! I know you requested NM but if you find yourself with a lot of free time it'd be awesome if you could do a quick check on this.

[General]
a lot of the green lines aren't snapped to the notes, is that intentional since they're mostly for volume changes? yes, it was made so player can get the volume effect even if they hit too early.

[Kantan]
01:00:604 - is this line necessary since there's no note here? mm sometimes people like hitting randomly at long break, so i set the volume just in case
03:41:403 (211) - change to k cause of the guitar? the drum sound is noticeably going lower so d is also fine
03:52:374 (227) - ^ same as ^
04:04:374 (241,242) - replace with a spinner? the note at 04:06:260 (242) - felt weird when playing i intentionally made no spinner and slider at this map. will see some other opinion first before making decision

[Futsuu]
01:12:946 (15) - I think having a k here makes for a better buildup and puts more emphasis on the D fixed
02:35:917 (34) - K? sounds better imo no change as the drum is rather low
03:42:089 (42) - ^ same as ^
04:04:374 (88,89) - again with the spinner thing retained for now

[Muzukashii]
why you copy pastin' kiais? :^( because im a bad muzu mapper
00:45:690 (134) - k for variation? tried another variation
00:54:947 (28) - d plays better imo ok
01:58:718 (117) - again with a k for variation modified with my variation
02:07:975 (28) - d plays better imo fixed
02:17:403 (6) - i think a d sounds better with the piano made 02:18:089 - this d instead
02:42:089 (79) - k? just cause I think it looks better with the k k d k d after it no change as the guitar sounds still constant
03:17:403 - no note here? yes, refer to 02:03:004 - and 00:49:976 - for a break consistency
03:22:375 (30) - d for playability again fixed
03:24:946 (3,4,5) - this triple sounds alright but it feels really odd when playing retained to maintain balanced spread between futsuu and oni
03:42:089 (74) - K sounds better imo no change as i think it's better to keep it consistent with 03:31:117 -
03:55:632 (18) - k? fixed for consistency with oni and inner
04:04:374 (43,44,45,46,47) - again think a spinner would work better no change for now

[Oni]
I think you should start introducing some small SV changes in this diff due to the incredibly large amount in the Inner agreed, will try to put some light SV

00:39:347 (63) - k? no change since guitar sounds constant
00:50:490 (143) - ^ same as ^
01:18:604 (7) - k here sounds a lot better imo remain unchange because d can somehow give some variation to the lower vocal pitch there
01:23:575 (11) - ^ hmm pitch remains same so i will retained it for now
01:32:318 (7) - ^ same as 01:18:604
01:52:375 (54) - k? the amount of red notes feels a little weird to me not to me tho
02:03:518 (134) - ^ ^
02:41:232 (72) - think another k sounds nice here i think d can give variation to low pitched piano here
03:26:832 (14) - k looks nice with the kkd triple in the next pattern but the guitar is still constant
03:47:403 (13) - k again same as 02:41:232, it's fine as long as it's consistent
03:52:374 (1) - k to make it less evil? no change as drum and guitar is start changing sound here
04:04:374 (15,16,17,18,19) - aaand the spinner thing again aaa

[Inner Oni]
00:54:862 (222) - k? nope
01:07:204 (261,262,263) - all k? current stream is ugly :^( well it suits the guitar sound. who care if it's ugly :^)
01:12:604 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298) - these long 1/6 bursts are a massive jump in difficulty from the Oni, would it be possible to shorten them to 4 notes? i prefer 1/6 to reflect the piano sounds better, it's ok for the highest diff. Oni was made to maintain the balance with lower diffs
01:45:518 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - again with the long bursts, this is some 6* shit right here same as ^
02:04:889 (170) - k for variation? ok
02:07:889 (11) - k? nope
02:41:232 (90) - k to give the D more emphasis? same as oni
02:54:517 (20) - delete and change 02:54:603 (21) - to d? i think 1/4 is better to reflect the continuos guitar
03:22:288 (11) - k for playability? no change because i want to give variety before the finisher (03:22:203 (10,11,12) - kdd , 03:22:717 (14,15,16) - kkd , 03:23:231 (18,19,20) - dkd , 03:23:745 (22,23,24) - ddd)
03:47:403 (42) - k for D emphasis again? same as oni
03:57:346 (7) - k? plays bad because the note before is finisher with same color
04:04:203 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - spinner again

sorry for a bad mod, but BN maps are intimidatingly good

Kin wrote:

nice SV \o glad you liked it~

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:26:833 (1,2,1) - how about a dkd ? I think it flow better with the kkd i think ddk could fits the increase in bass sound better
2. 00:41:576 (99,100,101,102,103) - change it to ddkdk ? it will make this pattern similar to this one 00:40:204 (87,88,89,90,91) - . (it will follow the vocal) a variation is also good here imo so no change
3. 01:54:604 (75,76,77,78,79) - ^ same as ^
4. 00:52:890 (203,204) - maybe just me (and dunno why) ; but I feel like k D flow better.it was made so the cymbal crash is consistent with 00:52:376 -
5. 01:00:832 (239,240,241) - ddk ? the last note being really higher pitched than the 2, I feel like ddk have a better emphasis. the 2nd also has higher pitch than 1st, so dkk is also fine, and generally the piano sound is high pitched, so having more k can reflect it better
6. 02:57:774 (47,48) - last note have clear different guitare sound to this one : 02:57:774 (47) - . I think it should be better to change it as dk fixed
7. 03:13:803 (116,117) - I'd emphasize this note : 03:14:146 (117) - by changing this one 03:13:803 (116) - into a D hmm i think i prefer monocolor

[Oni]

1. 02:11:060 (1,2,3) - because the last piano note is higher pitched, and stronger than the other, how about changing it into a ddk ? same reason as inner, 2nd note is also high pitched
2. 02:55:117 (20) - forgot to change it into D ? or intentional d ? changed to k to have consistency with other diffs
3. 03:13:803 (94) - same thing as Inner D: same as inner
4. 03:53:060 (1) - since this one is a big note, maybe also make this one 02:46:889 (106) - into a big note ? fixed
5. 04:04:374 (15) - pretty sure D sounds better to make difference with the k spam i think both can works. fixed for now

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:10:546 (12) - forgot to change it into D ? or intentional d ? added finish
2. 01:55:804 (100) - change it into a K ? no, will be overpowered and weird to play
3. 02:22:717 (16) - I'd change this note into a d to make a better difference between those pitch : 02:22:717 (16,17) - . their pitch sounds same to me, so no change
4. 03:25:632 (2) - change it into a k ? it sound better to me with the piano note. And might also flow better with the d d d. it's d in all diffs here because of the constant guitar
5. 04:04:374 (43) - same as oni. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:44:147 (100) - changing this one into a D will make the pattern easier, and also mark a difference between this note a the k k k fixed
2. 01:12:946 (15) - maybe just me, but I find it cool as k. dunno why tho. not just you, fixed from raphalge's mod too
3. 03:13:803 (119) - change it into d ? will be easier to tap & also have same reason as Oni/Inner Oni. i prefer monocolor here it's simple imo
4. 04:04:374 (88) - same as other diff. fixed

I don't have much to say about kantan, it's a kantan >w>
anyway, good luck! \o

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

1. add tags "ending,feng"? Along the std mapset.

1. 00:29:062 (33) - change d?I think the next ”K" hear well
   
2. 00:44:147 (57) - change D? 00:33:176 (38) - Because it is similar sound,and 00:43:462 (56) - ,00:44:833 (58) - Since these are k, I feel that K does not sound well.
   
3. 01:09:175 - change k? It felt like the back of sound is high.
   
4. 01:33:175 (41,42) - ctrl+G? 01:33:175 (41) - The sound of this piano feels pretty high,01:34:546 (43) - The sound of this vocal is also high, so I think that 01:33:861 (42) - can be d.
   
5. 01:40:718 (51) - change d? I dont think it's a sound to emphasize.
   
6. 01:43:461 (53) - I think that it is better to take this as D.
   
7. 01:44:146 (54) - change k? Since the vocal is high,I think that it sounds better. 02:33:174 (114,115) - In the same way.
   
8. 01:57:174 (77) - same as 00:44:147.
   
9. 03:16:374 (174,175) - ctrl+G,and 03:17:060 (175) - add finisher? 00:38:662 (48) - ,01:51:689 (68) - Because there was a finisher here,Placement was also k D.
   
10. 03:41:403 (211) - change k? Because the sound of the guitar is rising
    
11. 03:52:374 (227) - ^

1. 01:26:318 (54) - change k? Try taking the piano sound?
   
2. 01:33:175 (73,74,75) - change k d d? same as Kantan.
   
3. 02:24:260 (13) - change k? Since the vocal is high.
   
4. 03:16:717 (127,128) - ctrl+g,and change d K? - 00:38:662 (48) - ,01:51:689 (68) - In the same way.
   
5. 03:28:032 (7) - change k? Since the vocal is high.
   
6. 03:40:717 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - change k ddk k d? 03:35:232 (24,25,26,27,28,29) - Symmetry arrangement,I think that patterning is also good
   
7. 03:52:717 (67) - change k? I think that this one fits the sound.

1. 00:38:662 (99) - change K? Since the vocal is high
   
2. 01:07:461 (54) - change k? same as Futsuu.I think that it sounds better.
   
3. 01:30:432 (15) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out
   
4. 02:24:260 (20) - change k? same as Futsuu.
   
5. 02:39:346 (69) - change k? same as Oni.
   
6. 02:49:289 (108) - change k? 02:48:946 (107) - Slightly higher compared to the sound?I think that it sounds better.
   
7. 02:58:889 (152,153) - change k? I think the sound of the guitar is ringing so far.
   
8. 03:25:974 (3) - change k? I think it would be nice to take the sound of the snare,Oni is taking
   
9. 04:01:974 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - I want a break somewhere…

1. 00:21:862 (50) - change k? Since the vocal is high.I think that this one fits the sound.
   
2. 00:39:176 (62) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out
   
3. 01:07:461 (210,211) - ctrl+G,and k D? same as Muzu.
   
4. 02:24:260 (27,28) - ctrl+G? 02:23:574 (24,25,26,27,28) - set to kd dk d k,I think that it sounds better.
   
5. 02:33:860 (29) - change k? There is a higher sound than the surroundings.
   
6. 02:44:146 (88) - change k? I think that this one fits the sound.
   
7. 02:49:289 (115,116,117) - change kkD? I think that it sounds better.
   
8. 02:58:889 (44) - change k?same as Muzu,and 02:57:346 (32,33,34,35,36) - Form a symmetry arrangement

1. 00:21:862 (50) - same as Oni.
   
2. 00:39:176 (62) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out
   
3. 01:07:461 (210,211) - same as Oni.
   
4. 01:40:032 - add notes?
   
5. 02:24:260 (27,28) - ctrl+G? 02:23:574 (24,25,26,27,28) - set to kd dk d k,I think that it sounds better.
   
6. 02:39:346 (75) - change k?
   
7. 02:44:146 (88) - change k? same as Oni.
   
8. 02:49:289 (115,116,117) - change kkD? same as Oni.
   
9. 02:58:889 (59) - change k? I think that it sounds better.

chaica wrote:

Hi,m4m

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]

1. add tags "ending,feng"? Along the std mapset.

i have no idea who feng is but fixed

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[ Kantan]

1. 00:29:062 (33) - change d?I think the next ”K" hear well synth sound is going up so k is fine
   
2. 00:44:147 (57) - change D? 00:33:176 (38) - Because it is similar sound,and 00:43:462 (56) - ,00:44:833 (58) - Since these are k, I feel that K does not sound well. fixed
   
3. 01:09:175 - change k? It felt like the back of sound is high. fixed
   
4. 01:33:175 (41,42) - ctrl+G? 01:33:175 (41) - The sound of this piano feels pretty high,01:34:546 (43) - The sound of this vocal is also high, so I think that 01:33:861 (42) - can be d. nice catchhh fixed
   
5. 01:40:718 (51) - change d? I dont think it's a sound to emphasize. fixed
   
6. 01:43:461 (53) - I think that it is better to take this as D. no change since it feels like it lowers the emphasis at the start of kiai (01:46:204 - )
   
7. 01:44:146 (54) - change k? Since the vocal is high,I think that it sounds better. 02:33:174 (114,115) - In the same way. retained since guitar sound is still same, and can emphasis higher pitch at 01:44:832 - better and fixed the latter to d
   
8. 01:57:174 (77) - same as 00:44:147. fixed
   
9. 03:16:374 (174,175) - ctrl+G,and 03:17:060 (175) - add finisher? 00:38:662 (48) - ,01:51:689 (68) - Because there was a finisher here,Placement was also k D. added finish at (175) since it was actually referred to 00:49:633 -
   
10. 03:41:403 (211) - change k? Because the sound of the guitar is rising no change because it is actually going down, the guitar and the drum
    
11. 03:52:374 (227) - ^ same as ^

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[ Futsuu]

1. 01:26:318 (54) - change k? Try taking the piano sound? piano sound is normal there imo, and mirror with 01:29:061 - sounds good, so no change
   
2. 01:33:175 (73,74,75) - change k d d? same as Kantan. fixed to k-d-k
   
3. 02:24:260 (13) - change k? Since the vocal is high. fixed
   
4. 03:16:717 (127,128) - ctrl+g,and change d K? - 00:38:662 (48) - ,01:51:689 (68) - In the same way. no change as it is referred to 00:49:633 -
   
5. 03:28:032 (7) - change k? Since the vocal is high. i think 03:28:374 - is much more high, so d here can emphasis it better
   
6. 03:40:717 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - change k ddk k d? 03:35:232 (24,25,26,27,28,29) - Symmetry arrangement,I think that patterning is also good fixed, but made (41) as d since it would reflect the drum better
   
7. 03:52:717 (67) - change k? I think that this one fits the sound. hmm i prefer to focus on the lower drum sound here

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[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:38:662 (99) - change K? Since the vocal is high i think symetry with 00:37:804 - sounds much better
   
2. 01:07:461 (54) - change k? same as Futsuu.I think that it sounds better. fixed
   
3. 01:30:432 (15) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out fixed
   
4. 02:24:260 (20) - change k? same as Futsuu. fixed
   
5. 02:39:346 (69) - change k? same as Oni.fixed
   
6. 02:49:289 (108) - change k? 02:48:946 (107) - Slightly higher compared to the sound?I think that it sounds better. hmm somehow i prefer to use d here..
   
7. 02:58:889 (152,153) - change k? I think the sound of the guitar is ringing so far. since the guitar's pitch is going down i think d is better
   
8. 03:25:974 (3) - change k? I think it would be nice to take the sound of the snare,Oni is taking right, fixed
   
9. 04:01:974 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - I want a break somewhere… removed 04:02:489 - lol

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[ Oni]

1. 00:21:862 (50) - change k? Since the vocal is high.I think that this one fits the sound. since the drum is low i think d is also fine
   
2. 00:39:176 (62) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out fixed, good variation too
   
3. 01:07:461 (210,211) - ctrl+G,and k D? same as Muzu. fixed
   
4. 02:24:260 (27,28) - ctrl+G? 02:23:574 (24,25,26,27,28) - set to kd dk d k,I think that it sounds better. fixed
   
5. 02:33:860 (29) - change k? There is a higher sound than the surroundings. fixed
   
6. 02:44:146 (88) - change k? I think that this one fits the sound. fixed and changed some surrounding pattern to support the piano
   
7. 02:49:289 (115,116,117) - change kkD? I think that it sounds better. no change it is made as ddD so the snare at 02:48:946 - is more clear
   
8. 02:58:889 (44) - change k?same as Muzu,and 02:57:346 (32,33,34,35,36) - Form a symmetry arrangement fixed

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[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:21:862 (50) - same as Oni. same as oni
   
2. 00:39:176 (62) - change k? Because the sound of the piano stands out fixed
   
3. 01:07:461 (210,211) - same as Oni. fixed
   
4. 01:40:032 - add notes? nope, to make the drum and bass's 3/4 rhythm more clear
   
5. 02:24:260 (27,28) - ctrl+G? 02:23:574 (24,25,26,27,28) - set to kd dk d k,I think that it sounds better. fixed
   
6. 02:39:346 (75) - change k? hmm i think d fits the low piano sound
   
7. 02:44:146 (88) - change k? same as Oni. fixed
   
8. 02:49:289 (115,116,117) - change kkD? same as Oni. same as oni
   
9. 02:58:889 (59) - change k? I think that it sounds better. no change as currently it fits the guitar better imo

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nice song! waiting for rank.good luck~

Surono wrote:

gw ga jago ngemod ginian cacadas.........

Inner
00:21:347 (46) - cacadas, ini suara kick mending di teken pake kat lah kalau emang kontras mau dapet. bas nya agak naik turun disitu jadi ddkkd lebih oke
00:20:747 - ga usah ganti, minor ini :'C a
00:43:890 (122,123) - k,00:43:547 (118) - d. mau di buat kontras ga? kalau lagu pop gini pengiring musik mah ga usah di teken2 berlebihan y.. biar ga overmep kek diff ku dulu ngotod2 sampe pengen dimskin di set #baper gw nich justru rasanya pattern kayak gitu kurang cocok dgn lagu pop menurut gw
02:01:975 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - kkddkkd cocok dah, snernya... =_= mabok nih snarenya di (151) kok lebih cocok ddkkddk
02:07:118 - :thinking: :snore:
02:32:746 (24,25,26,27,28,29) - ikut drum bang *makan bang*? kkddkd, atau 02:32:917 - ini daong yg di d . kontrasnya mana??? ada 2 ketukan snare malah di isi kat deretan ;_; dengering perkusinya lah kat semua gitu lebih cocok
02:46:032 - Herman Li is cool
02:50:832 - kat enah nih, ikut flow gitar sama perkusi yg absurdnya enakan konsisten sama 02:48:089 -
02:54:860 - ples geser ke 02:54:689 - trus terserah mau diapain warnanya kalo kuning gimana?
02:58:546 - why not CAT DONT DONT CAT intensifies.. bruh nvm gblk
03:00:603 - ga kasih finisher? volume juga udah situ turunin :thinking:
03:21:517 - y maknyus
03:27:517 (45,46,47) - dkd dong :'C piano nub drum pro drum nub piano pro

anjailah, 00:22:204 - dari sini style musiknya kek lagu kuda2an koboi atau pola2 lu ini mah :'0 ketoplak ketoplak 100x

Oni
00:34:376 - 00:37:119 - spot kaya gini gimana apus. cieg base pattern panjang juga males buat neken2 seukuran Oni. udah msk 5plet trus base pattern panjag cieg gak, muzu jg panjang kok disitu
00:45:347 - 00:48:090 - bener bener cieg..... :'C :c
00:53:233 - berikanlah ampunan tiada ampun
01:45:004 (12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - :thinkingforserious: masih acceptable kok kalo liat inner nya yg 1/6nya kayak tai
01:47:404 - yg disini mau keep juga gapapa, increseng :0 konsesten
02:31:117 (12,18) - setydacknya apus ini ini kedengerannya jd rada aneh ya bolong gitu

02:05:061 - 00:52:033 - 03:19:460 - GREGET AMAT DARI SINI SINI SINI U: ye

1. some tag which can be add:
   
   1. セレナーデ it's just serenade in katakana ; and the game is sometimes called ちいさな彼女のセレナーデ instead of ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
   2. Little Princess's Serenade another alias of the VN. But no need to add Serenade, because it's already on tags
   3. chiikano another alias

1. Maybe delete this note 02:47:403 (101) - ? Because there's no 2/1 break from 02:30:089 - to 02:59:232 - .

1. 01:24:261 (27) - maybe no need to finish ? Every other diff use normal note.
2. 01:40:718 (51) - Maybe you don't want to use finish for slow section, but every other diff use finish here.

Kin wrote:

Just few point before icon:

[general]

1. some tag which can be add:
   
   1. セレナーデ it's just serenade in katakana ; and the game is sometimes called ちいさな彼女のセレナーデ instead of ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
   2. Little Princess's Serenade another alias of the VN. But no need to add Serenade, because it's already on tags
   3. chiikano another alias

fixed

[Muzukashii]

1. Maybe delete this note 02:47:403 (101) - ? Because there's no 2/1 break from 02:30:089 - to 02:59:232 - . i think 30s is still an acceptable interval, since the pattern constellation in the session is relatively less dense. also small 3/2 break at 02:47:403 - and 02:49:974 - are sufficient imo

[Kantan]

1. 01:24:261 (27) - maybe no need to finish ? Every other diff use normal note.
2. 01:40:718 (51) - Maybe you don't want to use finish for slow section, but every other diff use finish here.
   fixed both owo

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Surono wrote:

mashallah :"V

Ovoui wrote:

Surono wrote:

mashallah :"V

Surono wrote:

Alhamdullilah, when you see halal posts kek.

Shurelia wrote:

good song