Monstrata wrote:

Last two diffs:

15:56:534 (1) - How about positioning this in the center of the triangle? Would look more geometric i think lol. Emphasize with anti jump instead. But just an idea~ agreed with this idea, last one is kinda weak than other tooooooo..?
16:09:129 (3,4,5) - Really not sure what this rhythm is following. 16:09:358 - the white tick being empty feels really odd, and the next repeat beginning on a blue tick also sounds really odd. add one more reverse per each, I think it sounds fine now o.o
16:10:961 (6,7) - Imo, better to stack here, and move to spaced 1/4 doublets and stuff in the next section since your rhythm becomes a lot denser. It makes better sense to introduce the spaced doublet gameplay element there. agreed, plays better for me too.

16:24:244 (1,2,3) - These really sound like theyre 1/3... but they're also a bit hard to hear... double check the snapping here or maybe get another opinion if you think theyre 1/4? i listen to it again and I think it's 1/6
17:54:554 (5) - NC'ing here for sliders looks nice. breaks the circle pattern + slider pattern into their own combos which makes sense imo since i don't think the sliders connect with the circles visually. agreed
17:59:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a pretty mean pattern to put at the end of the map imo xD. I would have just stacked all the doubles, and used the bigger spacing as emphasis. Increasing spacing from the doublet feels kinda evil haha, but I guess its up to you. agreed ahaha thanks to take me back from dark side.

just modding the two diffs that were added~,

Rechecking other diffs:

sb\f\77ac.png
sb\f\9593.png
These files seem to be unused still. delete both

05:24:344 (1) - Should be snapped to the red tick.
08:39:178 (1) - This should be snapped to the new red tick.
10:55:734 (1) - Snap to red line. woops, my bad xd

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Okay that's all. Call me back when you're ready!

-Sh1n1- wrote:

16:51:037 (2) - shouldn't this finish at 16:53:327 - ? I also think that it could be cut in 3 or 2 parts, cause caught fruits will stack up on the plate in ctb and can potentially obstruct the player's view, sometimes it causes lag too, just keep in mind and maybe you can reconsider >.< anyways good map as always, Good Luck

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Monstrata wrote:

We worked out some issues with storyboard load. Should be fine now! Bubbled~

Pachiru wrote:

Congratulations PAN :3

Kisses wrote:

why did you write ヘビーローテーション as hebi- ro-te-shon instead of heavy rotation?

Raging Bull wrote:

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also wtf that music video though.

P A N wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

I want you~~~
I need you~~~

also wtf that music video though.

which video lol

1. 02:34:728 (8,1) - The spacing of slider (1) is pretty much the same as the spacing you used to emphasized the drums in the previous pattern. Slider (1) deserves a higher jump for better emphasis and highlight that difference imo~
2. 03:36:955 (1,1) - This blanket can be improved a lot
3. 04:36:320 (5,1) - Bigger jump to emphasize better (1)
4. 07:41:288 (6) - Here I suggest decreasing the jump to something around 2.9x ~ I know you're emphasizing the strong sound here and that's cool but feels overdone for this specific part of the song + it could be unexpected for many people because is just too sudden and after a stream happy birthdaaay to youuu♪
5. 12:31:505 (5) - Did you forget nc for the sv change?
6. 12:53:078 (5) - ^
7. 14:08:417 (3,1) - Just having nc here doesn't help much to differ the different snapping imo, I highly suggest making a small jump like you did at 14:09:354 (3,1) -
8. 14:49:596 (3,4) - This jump doesn't make sense since there's no change in the music's intensity :/ (just between (3) and (4))
9. 17:49:390 (2) - 3.92x is too much for the nature of the song here. Consider reducing this to something like you used at the "yo ne" vocal here 17:45:456 (2) - or the "eru" at 17:53:325 (2) -

Big Cat wrote:

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This is the second longest map I've checked ;;;w;;;
[The only diff you have]

1. 02:34:728 (8,1) - The spacing of slider (1) is pretty much the same as the spacing you used to emphasized the drums in the previous pattern. Slider (1) deserves a higher jump for better emphasis and highlight that difference imo~ agreed with this
2. 03:36:955 (1,1) - This blanket can be improved a lot oops mistake here.
3. 04:36:320 (5,1) - Bigger jump to emphasize better (1) alright.
4. 07:41:288 (6) - Here I suggest decreasing the jump to something around 2.9x ~ I know you're emphasizing the strong sound here and that's cool but feels overdone for this specific part of the song + it could be unexpected for many people because is just too sudden and after a stream happy birthdaaay to youuu♪ oooook
5. 12:31:505 (5) - Did you forget nc for the sv change? oops yes
6. 12:53:078 (5) - ^
7. 14:08:417 (3,1) - Just having nc here doesn't help much to differ the different snapping imo, I highly suggest making a small jump like you did at 14:09:354 (3,1) - hmm I didn't NC for that reason tho but those are bigger because of stronger sound.
8. 14:49:596 (3,4) - This jump doesn't make sense since there's no change in the music's intensity :/ (just between (3) and (4)) there is drum there, tho I reduced the spacing to be the same with spacing from 1 to 2
9. 17:49:390 (2) - 3.92x is too much for the nature of the song here. Consider reducing this to something like you used at the "yo ne" vocal here 17:45:456 (2) - or the "eru" at 17:53:325 (2) - tbh it's easy to hit becasue the spacing keep increasing bit by bit so player can predit how fast they gonna move their mouse. I nerf it a bit anyway.

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Big Cat wrote:

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