RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

Really good song

[Easy]
• OD -1?
00:17:451 (3) - Right 1 grid (level 3) k
00:19:948 (7) - ^ k

[Hard]
01:37:840 (3) - Place this directly on the end of the slider k
02:17:286 (2) - ^ k


[Insane]
• Tick Rate 2 forgot about it thanks
00:19:948 (6) - Directly on sliders end. k
01:30:850 (5) - Remove New Combo (because you don't want the spacing changing that much inside the same combo, it's fine for the anti-jumps, though) k
01:31:100 (2) - New Combo ^
01:42:833 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but do the remove combo, new combo thing on these 2? So it becomes 01:42:833 (6,1)? no


Great mapping! Star

56,192,109324,1,0
256,264,109824,1,0
456,192,110323,1,8
184,192,110822,5,2
256,120,111072,1,0
328,192,111322,1,0
256,264,111571,1,0

232,152,47410,2,0,B|240:176|232:208|176:216|120:224|112:256|120:280,2,190,0|0|2

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156,292,31432,2,0,B|184:348|212:348|216:272|256:304|296:272|300:348|328:348|356:288,1,240,0|8

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156,328,38922,2,0,B|120:264|136:120|296:108|364:200,1,360,0|4

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168,216,64886,2,0,B|188:288|256:304|324:288|344:204,1,240

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Pattern

432,96,151766,2,0,B|456:160|408:208|356:260|384:328,1,240

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344,212,159256,2,0,B|324:284|256:300|188:284|168:200,1,240

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440,160,74872,2,0,B|424:208|456:240|488:272|472:328,1,170

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40,320,76370,6,0,B|24:272|56:240|88:208|72:152,1,170

Kiiwa wrote:

General
Are you sure the Album name is 'smoke & mirrors' and not 'Smoke & Mirrors'? Because on the album its 'smoke&mirrors' (no spaces).

Katsuri wrote:

02:23:777 (5) - I hate these Sliders.

[Dellirium] wrote:

Всё окок, правда [Hard] показался мне слишком уж лёгким. AR в нём специально стоит, чтобы его с хардроком можно было играть?
Если да, то ок; а так я бы поднял на единичку.

Verdisphena wrote:

Hi.
General
I fell off the offset or timing, I don't know what bpm or offset is the correct

You need a normal imo [Hard] is pretty easy.

Easy

00:52:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you put some sliders? I find that hard for beginners imo
01:12:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:37:341 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:19:283 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:28:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:40:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

i don't think so

Hard

00:40:669 (1,2) - Try this.

01:10:877 (6) - Try this.
ok
01:20:614 (1) - Try this.

01:35:593 (4,5) - Try this.

01:43:582 (4,5) - ^ Same here.
02:16:537 (1,2) - Try this.


Insane

00:25:190(1) - Delete new combo ok
00:26:189 (4) - New combo ^
02:14:789 (2,4,6,8) - New combo? ^
02:27:522 (3) - cntrl+r ^
02:28:021 (4) - ^
02:31:766 (5) - Try this


Nice song and map
Star ㄟ(￣▽￣ㄟ)

whymeman wrote:

Why did you put the SB beyond the .mp3 play time? It would make more sense to have the rainbow fade after the last note, not 30 seconds later. done :3
The BPM sounds kinda off at the start and i'm getting late hits. Try using this and see how this plays out

1. Offset: 486ms BPM: 120.155 sounds fine

[Hard]

00:40:419 (7) - Could put a finish hitsound here....
01:20:364 (8) - ^
01:28:353 (5) - ^
01:35:843 (5) - ^
01:43:832 (5) - ^
02:16:287 (8) - ^
02:23:777 (5) - ^ (Could use the whole slider too.)
02:31:267 (3) - ^
02:39:256 (3) - ^ (Could use the whole slider too.)
done
[Insane]

00:26:688 (3) - I can see the right side of this slider sagging. Lift the 5th slider point by 1 grid to make it look neater. Don't forget to restack 00:27:937 (4) on the end.
00:40:419 (5) - Could use a finish hitsound here...
00:47:410 (3) - ^ (Could use the whole slider too.)
00:55:399 (3,5) - Could put some finish hitsounds here.
01:20:115 (9,11) - Remove the finish from (9) and switch it with (11).
01:27:355 (3) - Could add a finish hitsound here.
01:27:854 (5) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of the slider or the whole thing.
01:35:344 (3,5) - Could put some finish hitsounds here.
01:43:333 (3) - ^
01:43:832 (5) - Could use some finish hitsounds here or the whole slider.
01:51:322 (3,5) - Could use some finish hitsounds.
02:23:278 (3) - ^
02:23:777 (5) - Add a finish at the end of the slider or the whole thing.
02:31:267 (3) - Could add a finish here.
02:31:766 (5) - ^
02:39:256 (3) - ^
02:39:755 (5) - Add a finish at the end of the slider or the whole thing.
02:47:245 (3) - Could add finishes to the 1/1 beats.

done
Some of the places where you could add finish hitsounds are optional, but if if you feel better using them per combo end, that's fine as long as you have finishes. [Easy] had finish hitsounds compared to the other difficultes that sounded more mono without it.

abalee wrote:

not strongly sugggest but have a normal looks better. or delete all 1/4 in Hard and decrease the difficulty set to make it shown as H(belwo 4.5 stars in test play). but it shows as 4,5 stars in mapset ;w;
consider to reduce kiai time on every diff.s. I'd think of deleting the middle one. no

Hard:
00:56:164 (6) - man 1 gird right. :/
01:19:384 (5) - 1 grid left :\

normal:
02:44:274 (8) - 1 grid left

ok

nice try.

CDFA wrote:

Clearing mod queue posts a month after they appear is fun.

Anyways, I'm going to kinda nazi, but only useful nazi.

Insane:
Some of the jumps are pretty dumb.
00:40:184 (5) - To fit the rest of the pattern, you should make this a straight slider
01:43:852 (5) - Probably make the slider look like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124570 , so its more proportional and stuff.

Hard
01:43:852 (5) - Not as odd as insane, but maybe you could move the last sliderpoint to have your slider look more like THIS http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124572
02:31:291 (3) - Move the rightmost sliderpoint 3 units left, and move the top sliderpoint a few grids up~. It should look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124573

Easy:
I'm not a big fan of everything being 1/1, but meh.

It's a cool song and the map is good, but uguu.

James2250 wrote:

-20 second break is pushing it but ok....

Hard:
00:23:206 (9,1,2) - keep the spacing equal ok

Insane:
-Some of the jumps don't really fit with the music in my opinion I'll keep some of them.
00:21:209 (2,3,4) - kind of confusing spacing here
00:42:431 (1,2,3,4) - keep the spacing equal ok
00:46:926 (1,2) - semi random jump
01:26:874 (1,2) - ^
01:42:853 (1,2) - ^ (these ones seem strange to me, the music doesn't really call for a jump) oh ok.

The mapset looks nice overall, I just think Insane could be sorted out more