Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Matsumoto Rica/Otani Ikue) - Alola! · forum

Weedy

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-13T00:06:29+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, July 16, 2019 at 11:58:45 PM

Artist: Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Matsumoto Rica/Otani Ikue)
Title: Alola!!
Source: ポケットモンスター　サン＆ムーン
Tags: pokémon pokemon sun moon anime op opening Victorica
BPM: 153
Filesize: 8781kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Alolan (4.81 stars, 326 notes)
Alolan_old (5.02 stars, 337 notes)
Hard (3.29 stars, 265 notes)
Vicky's Normal (2.47 stars, 166 notes)

Download: Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Matsumoto Rica/Otani Ikue) - Alola!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OH GOOD GOD WE'RE BACK

~o3o~ Salsa~ ~o3o~
Thanks to Victorica (now Miriko) for Advanced <3

Last edited by Weedy 2019-07-17T04:59:51+00:00, edited 112 times in total.

MikasaSerket

520 posts

Joined December 2014

MikasaSerket 2017-02-15T04:41:21+00:00

https://puu.sh/u3N0Q/79b6d78868.osu

my normal

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-15T05:25:30+00:00

ayy

Elcheer

419 posts

Joined May 2014

Elcheer 2017-02-16T03:33:29+00:00

"Insane 1 ½"

Elcheer

419 posts

Joined May 2014

Elcheer 2017-02-17T00:30:41+00:00

01:10:903 (7,9) - i fugged up here, the 7 should be on the 9

here it is fixed

beaw

632 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2017-02-19T03:45:44+00:00

[Mika's Easy]
There's a lot of uneven spacing :/ Also why is your BG a pic of fighting when this is a happy song :/
00:13:060 (1,2) - Move (2) up a little to remove the smol overlap
00:30:314 (1,2) - Move (2) somewhere else to remove the smol overlap
00:46:785 (4,1) - Move (1) so- actually nevermind let's move on
01:00:903 (2) - boi wyd

[Normal]
00:00:511 (1,1) - Move the 2nd (1)'s second half to compliment the 1st (1)'s flat curve.
00:03:648 (1,1) - Make these parallel pls <3
00:36:589 (3,4,1) - This angle change is pretty extreme. Maybe do something about it if you want
01:26:687 (1) - I don't think you need this ;w;

[Vicky's Advanced]
00:23:256 (2,3,1) - This looks super weird :/ Move 2 down or something to follow (1)'s curve better.
00:48:354 (3,4,1) - Move (4) up to follow (3)'s curve better

[Hard]
00:37:961 (1,2) - NC to fix it? The NC isn't on the downbeat
01:26:687 (1) - ;w;

[Elcheer's Insane]
My boii Elcheer B^)
The NC's in the beginning are a bit... odd.
Now that I look at it... ALL your NC's are a bit odd o3o
01:26:687 (1) - pls

[Alolan]
gg

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-19T18:58:38+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Normal]
00:00:511 (1,1) - Move the 2nd (1)'s second half to compliment the 1st (1)'s flat curve. ye moved it
00:03:648 (1,1) - Make these parallel pls <3 see above
00:36:589 (3,4,1) - This angle change is pretty extreme. Maybe do something about it if you wantye fixed
01:26:687 (1) - I don't think you need this ;w;ye methinks spinner too short

[Hard]
00:37:961 (1,2) - NC to fix it? The NC isn't on the downbeat eh why not
01:26:687 (1) - ;w; ;w;

[Alolan]
gg wo i make good extra ye

Elcheer

419 posts

Joined May 2014

Elcheer 2017-02-19T19:03:56+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Elcheer's Insane]
My boii Elcheer B^)
The NC's in the beginning are a bit... odd.
Now that I look at it... ALL your NC's are a bit odd o3o
01:26:687 (1) - pls

01:10:511 (5,7) - didn't even tell me to fix blanket, noob B^)
01:19:922 (5,7) - ^
idek how i'm supposed to fix any of my NCs, they feel fine
removed the spinner at the end
fixed other things like jumps and blankets
ez fix

zev

462 posts

Joined September 2015

zev 2017-02-19T20:54:20+00:00

my left ear is lonely

edit:get one from lordraika or somth thanks. 8)

Miriko

188 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2017-02-19T21:12:57+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Vicky's Advanced]
00:23:256 (2,3,1) - This looks super weird :/ Move 2 down or something to follow (1)'s curve better. Fixed~
00:48:354 (3,4,1) - Move (4) up to follow (3)'s curve better Fixed~

Ty for the mod~

ピカ～

osu file format v14

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Renumi

Beatmap Nominator

904 posts

Joined July 2012

Renumi 2017-02-22T02:18:09+00:00

gib stingy kd xd

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2017-02-24T02:41:52+00:00

could you at least credit crystilonz for taking mp3, metadata and vid from his set? :c

Screwdrivers

40 posts

Joined December 2013

Screwdrivers 2017-02-24T05:19:52+00:00

~~cancer song~~ hi hi

Alolan

00:22:275 (3,1,2) - This looks incredibly ugly. Either make the slider curved or map a triple instead
00:25:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Both times, the vocals clearly follow a rhythm best followed by two singles then a 1/2 slider. How you mapped the rhythm makes no sense because for the first 4 notes you mapped the instrumental beat on (4) clickable, thus ignoring the vocals. But then you made 00:26:001 - unclickable which ignores both the instrumental and the vocal
This whole section is a HUGE headache to listen to because of these claps on beats that are unclickable. Please redo the hitsounds
00:30:118 (1,2) - This looks bad
00:41:491 - This strong vocal sound should be clickable
00:41:687 (2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is a mess. Starting from 00:41:295 - and ending at 00:42:471 - , the instruments can be followed with either two 1/2 sliders then 3 singles, or 3 1/2 sliders then a single. It's obvious that after 00:41:491 -, the instruments should be followed instead of the vocals which are just one held out note. I have no idea what this section is following
00:42:667 (1,2) - This looks even worse
01:06:001 (1) - My left ear is lonely
In general this map looks very ugly, not only because the spacing is incredibly inconsistent and the structures all look messy, but because there are huge spikes in spacing for absolutely no reason at places like 00:38:550 -, 00:42:275 -, 00:55:805 -, etc... The huge jumps look ugly either because they make no sense in general, like 00:42:275 (4,5,1) - where the big jumps are BEFORE the strong sounds, which are all low spacing sliders, or they are so large that their contrast with the rest of the map looks random and messy, like 01:04:040 (3,4,5,1) -.
To summarize, I'd say to check your rhythm in the slow part, fix the hitsounds, make your spacing consistent, neaten your structures, and NERF ALL OF THE JUMPS.

zev's Insane

00:06:785 (1,2,3,4) - The air horn sound or whatever should definitely be followed here, right now it sounds like it's ignoring the song. Also because the break afterwards is there only because the air horn sound stopped, which contradicts your earlier rhythm
00:13:060 - Again follow the air horn pls
00:17:765 - This should be clickable
00:18:060 - This beat shouldn't be ignored
00:19:334 - This whole section until 00:28:746 - completely ignores the vocals and simplifies the rhythm way too much. It again sounds like the map's ignoring the song
00:38:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is cancer
00:40:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What is this rhythm following? Pls fix
00:44:236 - This should be clickable
00:46:785 - ^
00:59:922 - ^
01:00:510 - nice meme
This map overall lacks correct rhythm in most sections.

Elcheer's Insane

Fine difficulty. The only things that I'd like to mention are failed blanket aesthetics -- like 00:43:648 (4,5,6,1) - (because of the stacking) or 00:37:177 (14,1,3) - (because of the overlap with (14)) -- and the lack of intensity in the kiai in comparison to the rest of the map.

Hard

Looks fine, but I do want to mention this ugly overlap: 01:19:530 (3,5) -.

Vicky's Advanced

00:22:471 (1,2) - These should be at the same angle
00:28:550 (3,1) - These should be spaced like 00:29:334 (2,3) -, both because it looks better and because stacking them could cause some confusion with 00:31:491 (3,1) -
00:44:040 (3) - This looks bad because it's a different angle from 00:45:216 (3) - and because of the overlap
01:03:060 - This should be clickable, the following notes sound very offbeat because the long slider sounds like it's delayed by 1/2 a beat.

Normal

Fine.

Mika's Easy

Overall, I know nothing about mapping Easy difficulties, but it seems to me that often times ignoring the red ticks in this map causes the rhythm to sound half a beat off. Maybe this isn't a problem for new players but I think it would be
Also, I don't know how strict DS requirements are for Easies, but I'd assume that for placements like 01:22:863 (2,3) -, keeping a consistent amount of space between objects in a structure is more important than consistent DS. Currently 01:22:863 (2,3) - has a different amount of space between them than the rest of structure, but I don't know if that's a problem or not.

I wrote this at midnight so excuse me if this turned out to be incoherent rambling

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-24T17:12:50+00:00

oka so im probably gona remap alolan because i got time and stuffs

Antares-

260 posts

Joined December 2012

Antares- 2017-02-24T20:00:11+00:00

quick metadata mod o/

official source: http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/pokemon_sunmoon/staff/

title: アローラ!!
rom: Alola!!

artist: うた:サトシwithピカチュウ (CV:松本梨香/大谷育江)
rom: Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Rica Matsumoto/Otani Ikue)

source: ポケットモンスター　サン＆ムーン

pokémon pokemon sun moon in tags

diraimur

547 posts

Joined December 2013

diraimur 2017-02-24T20:18:13+00:00

zevs map
- 00:00:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hooooooooooly imo try to change notes every 5th one or sth so its not so repetitive imo
- 00:09:726 - im sorry but this break is bad imo please consider mapping it *sadface*
- 00:12:863 (1) - why is this nc'd tho especially since 00:06:589 (3) - isnt
- 00:17:569 (1) - wat but why all you have to do is sth like this, right now youre completely missing the sound at 00:18:060 -
- 00:38:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - b-but why... 00:38:354 (1) - is not even part of the repetition yet its placed such so, and its quite boring to play constant 1/2 back and forths. at least try sth like this, feel free to repeat this as its at least not two-note-repeat but a four note one, it also plays nicely into next pattern!
- 00:48:158 (4,6) - they arent overlapped perfectly plzfix literally unplayable
- 00:55:020 (6,1) - this is a too big jump, not because spacing is high, but you completely killed the motion at 00:54:629 (5,6) - , either decrease spacing between 00:55:020 (6,1) - or increase spacing between 00:54:629 (5,6) -
- 01:12:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo spacing is kinda too high

hard
- 00:06:001 (3,4) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imo
- 00:06:393 (4) - take this to a little bit lower so they line up better like this
- 00:12:275 - remove finish and place it at 00:13:060 - imo it sounds better that way
- 00:19:334 - finish? because its start of a new section, its usually good idea to put finish on start of new section (unless they are very calm)
- 00:22:471 (1,2,3) - btw i know you want to protect ds but its a hard diff and you dont have to be bound to ds and in my opinion you should use lower spacing on 1/4 notes (i mean you did use stacks at 00:33:256 (5,6,1) - 00:35:216 (2,3,4) - etc, im not saying use stacks but a lower spacing would be better)
- 00:31:687 (4,5,1) - ^
- 00:31:883 - finish? because its start of a new section, its usually good idea to put finish on start of new section (unless they are very calm)
- 00:38:550 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - dont spam finish like this imo, finish is a quite strong hitsound you cant just spam it like this (unless they are drum hitfinish)
- 00:42:667 (3,1,2,3) - these finish are fine tho because they are kinda justified
- 00:59:334 (3) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imo
- 01:06:001 (1) - again i dont really personally like the finishes, just place clap at 01:06:001 - and maybe a whistle, and maybe a whiste to slider end too but thats about it, leave the finish to 01:06:393 - , if you spam finishes they just kinda lose their power on emphasising such things
- 01:21:687 (1) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imo

Last edited by diraimur 2017-02-24T21:34:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2017-02-24T21:26:21+00:00

woah pika mapping pokemon songs what a coincidence

[Elcheer's Insane]

00:06:589 (7,8) - Claps don't really fit on these last two notes, maybe something like drumfinishes or drumwhistles would fit better
00:09:726 (1) - how about rotating this by about 25 degrees to make the patter cleaner + a bit more emphasis on the slider jump (coz finish)?
00:12:863 (8,9) - idk claps again, only the first 2 notes have claps in the music
00:13:648 (2,5) - stacking these wouldn't hurt
00:15:805 (9,10) - how about a slider instead of 2 stacked notes? Would fit the melody/rhythm better here imo
00:15:609 (8,1) - distance the blanket a bit like https://voli.s-ul.eu/MuZk8FPV.png this so it matches your other blankets better
00:16:197 (1,1,1) - increase spacing a bit for each of these? cuz the music gets more intense everytime
00:18:746 (1,3) - having these notes barely touch isnt very nice
00:44:236 (1,3) - ^
00:46:001 (1,2,3) - bit more spacing that the previous pattern since the vocals get more intense?
00:46:589 (4,1) - dis overlap tho
00:52:079 (6,8) - here too, just stack the sliderheads it will look way cleaner
00:52:863 (8,1) - more overlapz (im not gonna point more out from here on but there are a few more worth checking, overlapping sliders like that usually dont look very nice unless theyre done consistently)
00:54:824 (5,6) - slider instead of stack? hold vocals
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4) - I think a rhythm like this would play better here: https://voli.s-ul.eu/PvWASxlH.png
01:11:687 (9,10) - Bit more spacing between this notes to emphasize the high pitched sound here (because right now the previous jump is bigger and thats kinda counter intuitive)
01:18:550 (4) - ctrl+g? this slider 01:18:942 (1) - will have very nice emphasis like that
01:20:707 - I'd kinda like to click this strong vocal sound, perhaps reduce the slider by half and make this clickable
01:20:903 (8) - Maybe up the SV a bit to match the vocal intensity here
01:23:648 (9) - you can make a nice blanket here: https://voli.s-ul.eu/deNQmNdO.png
01:24:824 (13,1) - deserves more spacing imo
01:26:393 (5,6) - this too, put 6 around x252 y228 maybe for a nice finisher jump

[zev's Insane]

00:05:805 (1) - plz thats boring + it doesnt even follow the rhythm do sth lk dis https://voli.s-ul.eu/mQ1dcBud.png
00:07:177 (2,3) - low spacing is a bit weird compared to the last pattern, imo 00:06:785 (1,2) - these should be paired closely instead and then a jump to 00:07:569 (3) - but thats just me
00:13:451 (2) - actually these kinda deserve a note > slider pattern coz its like ''du duuu''
00:17:569 (1) - this is snapped wrongly a repeat wouldnt work here, just do this https://voli.s-ul.eu/gAO4HqjM.png
00:18:942 (6) - note here?
00:24:853 - wh is this slider spam can u make it bit more interestingggg switch it up a bit xd
00:33:256 (6) - this 1 feels kinda forced, also slider end on strong ass downbeat plz no (put a triple?)
00:34:432 (1) - 2 notes? (downbeat)
00:46:001 (1,2,3) - spacing is kinad reversed, 2-3 should have higher spacing than 1-2 cuz more emphasis on 3
00:49:138 (1) - space more plz, back and forths are cool for these parts 00:38:746 (3,4,5) - but this part deserves spacing diversity to express emphasis
00:50:903 (2) - note>slider?
00:52:079 (1,2) - momentum hold is a bit odd with this strong sound on both notes
00:55:216 (1,2) - ^
00:57:765 (2) - remove reverse and add not here? 00:58:354 - would be nice if those drum beats are both clickable
01:06:001 (1) - idk if its fiting for this diff but i'd definitely play with sv here
01:14:236 (2) - spacinbg emphasis
01:16:981 (3,1) - spacing emphasis
01:22:079 (1) - wouldnt u start with a triple on this slider like u did here too 00:06:589 (3,4,1) -

[Alolan]

00:05:609 (2,3,4) - plz https://voli.s-ul.eu/I6U03P5y.png the rhythm isnt right
00:16:197 (1,1,1) - increase spacing for each one of these because the music gets more intense with every slider
00:20:118 (3) - ctrl+g would make this pattern flow better
00:22:765 (2) - this is overmapped methinks
00:29:922 (2,1) - decrease spacing a bit here because it looks like it'd start on the red tick coz you spaced it exactly the same as the previous patterns (time-distance equality owo)
00:35:216 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - why so much spacing between the 1/4s, theyre spaced more than your 1/2s thats so jarring plz fix, spacing them just a little adds just as much emphasis, just do like diss https://voli.s-ul.eu/rFfMVxp3.png
00:52:079 (1) - deserves more spacing, perhaps stack on 00:51:295 (4) - ?
00:58:550 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong rhythm again like in the start of the map gee that sound really offfff
01:09:922 - wh ok dad

also for my map u can mod whatever 3 diffs u want from this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1155152 oki BAI gl

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-24T21:44:36+00:00

diraimur wrote:
hard
- 00:06:001 (3,4) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imo oka
- 00:06:393 (4) - take this to a little bit lower so they line up better like this oka
- 00:12:275 - remove finish and place it at 00:13:060 - imo it sounds better that way sure
- 00:19:334 - finish? because its start of a new section, its usually good idea to put finish on start of new section (unless they are very calm) ye
- 00:22:471 (1,2,3) - btw i know you want to protect ds but its a hard diff and you dont have to be bound to ds and in my opinion you should use lower spacing on 1/4 notes (i mean you did use stacks at 00:33:256 (5,6,1) - 00:35:216 (2,3,4) - etc, im not saying use stacks but a lower spacing would be better) tweaked
- 00:31:687 (4,5,1) - ^
- 00:31:883 - finish? because its start of a new section, its usually good idea to put finish on start of new section (unless they are very calm) k
- 00:38:550 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - dont spam finish like this imo, finish is a quite strong hitsound you cant just spam it like this (unless they are drum hitfinish) fixed
- 00:42:667 (3,1,2,3) - these finish are fine tho because they are kinda justified
- 00:59:334 (3) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imo k
- 01:06:001 (1) - again i dont really personally like the finishes, just place clap at 01:06:001 - and maybe a whistle, and maybe a whiste to slider end too but thats about it, leave the finish to 01:06:393 - , if you spam finishes they just kinda lose their power on emphasising such things did kick whistle on silder head
- 01:21:687 (1) - plz no clap spam they dont sound nice imoye oka

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-02-24T21:49:24+00:00

Voli wrote:
woah pika mapping pokemon songs what a coincidence kek
[Alolan]

00:05:609 (2,3,4) - plz https://voli.s-ul.eu/I6U03P5y.png the rhythm isnt right eh fixed
00:16:197 (1,1,1) - increase spacing for each one of these because the music gets more intense with every slider ye
00:20:118 (3) - ctrl+g would make this pattern flow better done because easily fixable if i feel like it
00:22:765 (2) - this is overmapped methinks no use 50%
00:29:922 (2,1) - decrease spacing a bit here because it looks like it'd start on the red tick coz you spaced it exactly the same as the previous patterns (time-distance equality owo) oka
00:35:216 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - why so much spacing between the 1/4s, theyre spaced more than your 1/2s thats so jarring plz fix, spacing them just a little adds just as much emphasis, just do like diss https://voli.s-ul.eu/rFfMVxp3.png nerfed a litl
00:52:079 (1) - deserves more spacing, perhaps stack on 00:51:295 (4) - ? tweak
00:58:550 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong rhythm again like in the start of the map gee that sound really offfff did hitsound emphasis on the weird bongo shit in background
01:09:922 - wh ok dad wat
also for my map u can mod whatever 3 diffs u want from this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1155152 oki BAI gl

Miriko

188 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2017-02-26T03:50:39+00:00

Screwdrivers wrote:
00:22:471 (1,2) - These should be at the same angle Fixed~
00:28:550 (3,1) - These should be spaced like 00:29:334 (2,3) -, both because it looks better and because stacking them could cause some confusion with 00:31:491 (3,1) - Changed to avoid confusion later on~ Ty~
00:44:040 (3) - This looks bad because it's a different angle from 00:45:216 (3) - and because of the overlap I see~ Thank you for pointing that out! Changed~
01:03:060 - This should be clickable, the following notes sound very offbeat because the long slider sounds like it's delayed by 1/2 a beat. Changed~

Ty for the mod~!

Update to difficulty desuu~

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