Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Matsumoto Rica/Otani Ikue) - Alola! · forum

Weedy

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-03-18T03:03:02+00:00

Voltaeyx wrote:
Random friendship mod xd
Problem Solution/Alternative Comment

Alolan
00:01:687 (5,2) - I'm not a fan of random partial overlaps like this. It would make more sense if you repeated similar overlaps for your jumps throughout the section but you don't. Just move one or both of the objects. partial overlaps are my nonexistant style though

00:05:609 (2,3,4) - This is confusing to read. I can see that there certainly is a 1/8 beat you've properly represented but throughout this section, you established 1/4 stacks to follow the slider and here, it's a 1/8(kinda 1/4) jump. This, paired with the 1/8 slider, can be very difficult to read. Instead of a jump, I recommend maybe a partial overlap of the repeat slider with the 1/8 slider head or tail. it's a top diff, but i'll change it if it truly becomes problematic. most playtesters did it pretty well

00:28:550 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This section of jumps is confusing to read. I see that you want to snap on the 1 & 2's, which makes sense for the song. However, throughout this section, you've been representing 1/2 jumps with both stacks and snaps. At this part of the song, you have two 1/1 jumps that look no different from the 1/2 jumps. You want to avoid stuff like this. So, I have some suggestions:

3.Using a very sharp angle (<5 degrees) with a larger spacing to represent the 1/1 jump. See below for an example. ye did this

00:42:275 (2,3) - This is really minor but I notice it so easily. The spacing here is just slightly too low. blame math lol, i cant space it properly without the pattern getting slightly askew
00:44:040 (7,8,9,1) - I don't really like having a stack for this triple into a 1/2. Maybe partially overlap the 1 with the 9? It's more of cursor stop emphasis on vocal start, should be fine as long as you can tap triples xd
00:47:961 (4,4) - Overlap. Just move the preceding combo of 5 so that this 4 isn't overlapping with the second 4. yep
00:51:491 (1,3) - Slight overlap. ye
00:52:471 (3,3) - Overlap. Just move/rotate the following combo of 3. ye
00:55:020 (3,3) - Overlap. I would rotate the preceding combo of 3 upwards. ye
01:00:903 (3) - Is there a particular reason you're using 1/8 sliders for this section? 1/4 sliders work perfectly fine here as well. I'm just wondering wanted the contrast of "kiai = slider, not kiai = circle" without the lagginess of 1/4 sliders
01:11:393 (2,3) - Another 1/8 jump like before. I suggest a partial overlap. should be fine tbh, plays like a space-y 1/4
01:20:707 (1,2) - Alolan :^) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
01:23:256 (4,2) - :c b-b-b-b--b-b-b--b-b-b-b-but

Nice map! Best of luck to you fellow new mapper

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Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2017-03-19T03:01:25+00:00

[alo]
00:00:707 - better cover with sliderend
00:05:609 - change all claps to http://puu.sh/uPn0t/7b6f683f53.wav
00:21:687 (5) - volume decrease make no sense
00:22:667 (2,3) - same
and etc.
01:00:903 (3,4,5) - note is enough
01:05:903 - missing
[Cre]
00:02:079 - 00:03:648 - nc
00:07:177 (3,4) - c+g better to me
00:12:275 -

SPOILER

00:29:530 (1) - too far away
00:38:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - does not fit, better insert some sliders

[Insane]
00:41:883 - better cover with sliderend
00:46:589 (4,5) - c+g
00:49:726 (4,5) - same
01:05:903 - missing

[Elc]
00:05:903 - do this and nc

SPOILER

01:24:040 - missing hs

[Hard]
00:52:863 (3,4) - c+g
01:05:903 - missing

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-03-19T20:59:17+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[alo]
00:00:707 - better cover with sliderend eh i'll keep
00:05:609 - change all claps to http://puu.sh/uPn0t/7b6f683f53.wav oka
00:21:687 (5) - volume decrease make no sense voice sound emphasis
00:22:667 (2,3) - same
and etc.
01:00:903 (3,4,5) - note is enough need to make all the notes in kiai a slider ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (contrast with not-kiai section, will remove if problem)
01:05:903 - missing ye fix

[Insane]
00:41:883 - better cover with sliderend i just moved it closer w
00:46:589 (4,5) - c+g confused on what this means, ctrl g makes spacing weird, did adjust some placement
00:49:726 (4,5) - same ^
01:05:903 - missing

[Hard]
00:52:863 (3,4) - c+g i still dont know what this means, ctrl + g on those two screws things up
01:05:903 - missing ye

Elcheer

419 posts

Joined May 2014

Elcheer 2017-03-25T16:23:50+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Elc]
00:05:903 - do this and nc fixed
SPOILER
01:24:040 - missing hs fix this and others

le fix

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jas

541 posts

Joined August 2016

jas 2017-03-26T00:50:23+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Cre]
00:02:079 - 00:03:648 - nc no
00:07:177 (3,4) - c+g better to me same
00:12:275 -
SPOILER
~~no the song supports tjhe stream~~did something similar
00:29:530 (1) - too far away k i fix
00:38:354 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - does not fit, better insert some sliders percusion emphasis

thanks for mod <3

plz officially add my gd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58942
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5216,16197,19334,31883,41295,44432
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Alola!!
TitleUnicode:アローラ!!
Artist:Satoshi with Pikachu (CV:Matsumoto Rica/Otani Ikue)
ArtistUnicode:サトシwithピカチュウ (CV:松本梨香/大谷育江)
Creator:[[Pika]]
Version:CraEZy's Insane (questionable on "do i want to take" status)
Source:ポケットモンスター　サン＆ムーン
Tags:pokémon pokemon sun moon MikasaSerket Victorica Elcheer craEZy
BeatmapID:1240360
BeatmapSetID:572193

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"_wallpaper__pokemon_sun_moon_starters_by_arkeis_pokemon-da2576v.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 240,216,166
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Miriko

188 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2017-03-26T01:13:29+00:00

Net0 wrote:
[ Vicky's Advanced ]
You don’t really need the NC gimmick here 00:16:197 (1,1,1) - , I can’t see much of a reason to do it on this spot. Fixed~
The rhythm here is switching a lot from vocal to beats, but the hitsound really tell your intentions of what you’re following. To be honest, it works as a diff between normal and hard. I’ll just mention a few spots that I find to be a bit too hard, but take it as a suggestion to think about some simplification overall;
00:05:805 (2,3,4) – instead of 1 circle and two 1/2 sliders, make the first 1/2 slider 00:06:001 (3) – start here 00:05:805 – and then make it reverse arrowed. https://puu.sh/uAlCs.jpg Implemented~
00:09:726 (1,2,3,4) – Having similar objects mapped with two different ideas inside the same section is really hard to follow, the first full measure slider 00:09:726 (1) – is following melody and the next one is going with drum sound 00:10:707 (3) - . Remember that the active click time is the important sound to resemble what you’re following, so if we have on the red tick 00:09:726 – the instrumental melody on the white tick here 00:10:707 – we have the drum sound. In my opinion, since you did all drums here 00:11:491 (1,2,3,1) – you could keep this intro, 00:06:785 - ~00:16:001 - , following mainly drum with the bigger sliders. I decided to keep what I have so far. I'm not exactly sure how to change it and I don't think it's that hard to follow.

Thank you for the mod~

Wheeee~

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416,200,10314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,44,10707,2,0,P|380:32|308:44,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,11295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,280,12863,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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324,208,16001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,148,20707,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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108,72,35805,2,0,P|94:44|88:8,2,60,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,36393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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jas

541 posts

Joined August 2016

jas 2017-04-23T21:16:08+00:00

Reminder for pika if he ever decides to revive this::

Plz take out my diff thx, we mutually agree that we dont want it, but put it in the description or something as like an extra (as in there is more than there needs to be) diff, thx

Also where's my m4m

Elcheer

419 posts

Joined May 2014

Elcheer 2017-05-20T03:07:49+00:00

oh my gd doesn't exist anymore

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-05-20T04:27:17+00:00

Elcheer wrote:
oh my gd doesn't exist anymore

I'll make it a description diff

Forgot to tell you xd, my bad

Dewott

16 posts

Joined October 2015

Dewott 2017-06-04T02:18:34+00:00

[Hyper]
00:00:511 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern compared to the other two is weird, make it same.
00:05:903 (1,1) - take off combo for both
00:07:961 (4,5,1) - make spacing same
00:08:746 (2,1,2,3) - make circle on top of slider stack perfectly
00:18:746 (2) - pull out more
00:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - make 1 and 4 stack perfectly. it doesnt fit when it comes to the other one being perfectly stack (00:24:040 (1,2,3,4) )
00:25:020 (1,2,3) - pull out more, stacking it there is weird
00:56:589 (4,5,1) - proper triangle
01:24:432 (1,2,3) - switch 2 and 3
01:26:197 (1,2,3) - proper triangle
Add: I youy see a triangle that isn't stacked properly to any other note, STACK IT PEERFECTLY
Hope I helped
-Crem

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-06-04T03:14:22+00:00

Creminite wrote:
[Hyper]
00:00:511 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern compared to the other two is weird, make it same. fixed
00:05:903 (1,1) - take off combo for both k
00:07:961 (4,5,1) - make spacing same lolno spacing emphasis
00:08:746 (2,1,2,3) - make circle on top of slider stack perfectly k
00:18:746 (2) - pull out more i'm good
00:20:903 (1,2,3,4) - make 1 and 4 stack perfectly. it doesnt fit when it comes to the other one being perfectly stack (00:24:040 (1,2,3,4) )k
00:25:020 (1,2,3) - pull out more, stacking it there is weird it's fine :/
00:56:589 (4,5,1) - proper triangle spacing emphasis
01:24:432 (1,2,3) - switch 2 and 3 lol no spacing emphasis and it'll flow weird if i do
01:26:197 (1,2,3) - proper triangle spacing emphasis
Add: I youy see a triangle that isn't stacked properly to any other note, STACK IT PEERFECTLYno lol halfstacks are my thing
Hope I helped crem
-Crem

audinor

audinor 2017-06-07T01:02:35+00:00

where is craezy insane

Swash

82 posts

Joined June 2014

Swash 2017-06-10T04:39:37+00:00

For the mod request <3 Please note, I'm not the most experienced mapper, So if I didn't catch something, I apologize.

[Hyper]
(I'm going for small visuals that I believe could be slightly improved)
00:13:648 (3) - I believe you could stack the ending of the slider on 00:13:060 (1) - or wrap it around the 00:13:452 (2) - better
00:16:197 (1,1) - I believe these two can look better together (looks better in my opinion) https://swash.s-ul.eu/hRgqX5Lg
00:56:001 (3) - I personally believe the red slider point looks better in the center of it

Other than that, I say this difficulty is pretty solid. No very noticeable errors, just small visual tweaks here and there, I could only find 3.

[Insane]
00:19:138 (3) - I believe the red point looks better centered <3
00:24:040 (1,2,3) - I believe these should be spaced more. The other's were a cozy 1.6, while these shorten. The voice has a higher pitch so it kind of throws me off when I'm playing.
00:44:824 (3,4,5,6,7) - Almost a star pattern, you could fix that and make it an actual cool looking star for more visual appeal <3
00:47:961 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:55:216 (1) - This slider was kind of randomly drawn it looks like to me. I'm just not a fan of it, but it's not an issue
01:18:942 (1,1) - Would maybe look better if you slightly spaced those away from each other

Other than that, looks awesome <3

[Alola]
00:16:981 (1) - Slider could use a little revision. I know it's the same as the other, but it just looks kind of weird like that in such a position. Maybe center the red
Other than that, nothing else seemed off to me

Overall, It's a good map that's decent quality. <3 Good luck with ranking

Touhou

201 posts

Joined January 2014

Touhou 2017-06-26T17:50:40+00:00

Waiting for you to update <3
(added custom hitsounds and did hitsounding from the kiai to the end on Alola!!)

Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2017-07-05T03:47:56+00:00

ohmygodwhereareyourhitsoundsimgoingtoexplodeimsoangryohmygod
[Alolan]
00:01:687 (5,2) - you should stack these
00:06:099 (5) - not snapped correctly, should be 1/6?
00:07:373 (3,4) - more aesthetic stack http://puu.sh/wBT7h/c3fa688720.jpg
00:09:530 (3) - nc?
00:12:275 (3,1) - evil spacing for 1/4 that doesnt fit what was done already
00:12:961 (4,1) - space like what you did at 00:06:687 (4,1) - ?
00:15:805 (1,1) - super iffy spacing
00:18:746 (2) - nc to clarify rhythm and also stack it properly
00:27:373 (4) - should be nc'd
00:29:138 (3,1) - i mean mapping the breath on 3 is kinda eh since its not adding to the music and is only coincidentally lands on the 1/4 but if you dont delete it pls switch nc's
00:29:922 (3,1) - switcherino ncerino
00:32:863 (5,6,7) - why is this the only stacked triple in the section
imma stop modding some of the nc's cuz theyre really weird, id advise you to go back and revise it on your own as to make it more consistent with the entire map
00:36:589 (1) - remove nc cuz i love aesthetic
00:47:373 (1,2) - u should totally be consistent and compliment the triple in the song
00:50:118 (4,5) - what in the music warrants a stack here?
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesnt match up with what you did at 00:05:805 (3,4,5) - you should swap for one or the other
01:00:510 (1) - i dont think this super fast slider is warranted it doesnt fit the music/section at all
01:11:491 (1) - ^
01:15:020 (3,2) - stack this yo
01:20:707 (1) - this should be snapped to 1/4 (the blue tick)

[Insane]
00:06:099 (4) - ye
00:26:981 (1) - remoooooooove nc
00:30:118 (1) - u should map the drum hit before this as to be more c o n s i s t e n t
00:51:491 (5,6) - i think this stack is kinda rando but e
00:57:765 (1) - itd be cool if you did something like the previous slider so its more clean
00:59:334 (1,2,3) - ye
01:01:491 (1,5) - stock
01:13:844 (1) - missing clap
01:16:981 (1) - ^
01:21:687 (1) - ^ ok are these rlly missing or am i missing something
this insane was rlly good

[Hyper]
00:05:903 (2) - ye
00:08:746 (2,3) - stack these better
00:18:746 (2) - nc cuz rhythm gap and sv change
00:47:373 (1,2) - you should complimentthattriplelol

[Hard]
00:07:373 (3,4,1) - visual spacing could be improved
00:08:354 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:354 - this should be mapped
00:28:550 (5,1,2,1) - what the heck are these nc's
00:29:922 - this should be mapped

[Vicky's Advanced]
not much i could say besides go through the map again and polish the visual spacing a bit to make the map a bit cleaner

[Normal]
00:02:079 (1) - how to ruin symmetry

((((
00:01:687 (2,2,2,2) - Yo My Mans Stack These
00:09:138 (3,2) - Y o M y M a n s

h

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-07-05T04:05:14+00:00

Swash wrote:
For the mod request <3 Please note, I'm not the most experienced mapper, So if I didn't catch something, I apologize.

[Hyper]
(I'm going for small visuals that I believe could be slightly improved)
00:13:648 (3) - I believe you could stack the ending of the slider on 00:13:060 (1) - or wrap it around the 00:13:452 (2) - better adjusted
00:16:197 (1,1) - I believe these two can look better together (looks better in my opinion) https://swash.s-ul.eu/hRgqX5Lg yup
00:56:001 (3) - I personally believe the red slider point looks better in the center of it i suppose

Other than that, I say this difficulty is pretty solid. No very noticeable errors, just small visual tweaks here and there, I could only find 3.

[Insane]
00:19:138 (3) - I believe the red point looks better centered <3 tweaked
00:24:040 (1,2,3) - I believe these should be spaced more. The other's were a cozy 1.6, while these shorten. The voice has a higher pitch so it kind of throws me off when I'm playing. can't space those without excessive overlap or ruining structure :/
00:44:824 (3,4,5,6,7) - Almost a star pattern, you could fix that and make it an actual cool looking star for more visual appeal <3 yup
00:47:961 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ yup
00:55:216 (1) - This slider was kind of randomly drawn it looks like to me. I'm just not a fan of it, but it's not an issue de-spaghettified
01:18:942 (1,1) - Would maybe look better if you slightly spaced those away from each other changed rhythm a little

Other than that, looks awesome <3

[Alola]
00:16:981 (1) - Slider could use a little revision. I know it's the same as the other, but it just looks kind of weird like that in such a position. Maybe center the red tweaked slightly
Other than that, nothing else seemed off to me

Overall, It's a good map that's decent quality. <3 Good luck with ranking <333

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-07-05T05:01:28+00:00

Spaghetti wrote:
ohmygodwhereareyourhitsoundsimgoingtoexplodeimsoangryohmygod
[Alolan]
00:01:687 (5,2) - you should stack these my stack aesthetic
00:06:099 (5) - not snapped correctly, should be 1/6? /!\ Fixed on this and insane diffs..
00:07:373 (3,4) - more aesthetic stack http://puu.sh/wBT7h/c3fa688720.jpg fine
00:09:530 (3) - nc? i'll fix the ncs
00:12:275 (3,1) - evil spacing for 1/4 that doesnt fit what was done already revamped
00:12:961 (4,1) - space like what you did at 00:06:687 (4,1) - ? revamped with the revamp
00:15:805 (1,1) - super iffy spacing made first slider 1/2
00:18:746 (2) - nc to clarify rhythm and also stack it properly yup
00:27:373 (4) - should be nc'd yup
00:29:138 (3,1) - i mean mapping the breath on 3 is kinda eh since its not adding to the music and is only coincidentally lands on the 1/4 but if you dont delete it pls switch nc's killed
00:29:922 (3,1) - switcherino ncerino eh no, the slider isn't part of the pair of jumps
00:32:863 (5,6,7) - why is this the only stacked triple in the section making a movement triple there would feel really weird to play
imma stop modding some of the nc's cuz theyre really weird, id advise you to go back and revise it on your own as to make it more consistent with the entire map
00:36:589 (1) - remove nc cuz i love aesthetic aesthetic
00:47:373 (1,2) - u should totally be consistent and compliment the triple in the song fair enough
00:50:118 (4,5) - what in the music warrants a stack here? no vocals
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesnt match up with what you did at 00:05:805 (3,4,5) - you should swap for one or the other screw the one at 00:58 too complex for me i just halved the sv :^)
01:00:510 (1) - i dont think this super fast slider is warranted it doesnt fit the music/section at all made it slower
01:11:491 (1) - ^ fixed 2
01:15:020 (3,2) - stack this yo lol my b
01:20:707 (1) - this should be snapped to 1/4 (the blue tick) 75% tells otherwise owo

[Insane]
00:06:099 (4) - ye
00:26:981 (1) - remoooooooove nc yup
00:30:118 (1) - u should map the drum hit before this as to be more c o n s i s t e n t yep
00:51:491 (5,6) - i think this stack is kinda rando but e fixed kinda
00:57:765 (1) - itd be cool if you did something like the previous slider so its more clean map improvement with spagoot
00:59:334 (1,2,3) - ye ye
01:01:491 (1,5) - stock
01:13:844 (1) - missing clap
01:16:981 (1) - ^
01:21:687 (1) - ^ ok are these rlly missing or am i missing something UPDOOTED HITSOUNDS
this insane was rlly good

[Hyper]
00:05:903 (2) - ye rhythm simplification ;A; makes noobs not cry
00:08:746 (2,3) - stack these betteroop
00:18:746 (2) - nc cuz rhythm gap and sv change ye
00:47:373 (1,2) - you should complimentthattriplelol k

[Hard]
00:07:373 (3,4,1) - visual spacing could be improved
00:08:354 (1,2,3) - ^ both ye
00:28:354 - this should be mapped ye
00:28:550 (5,1,2,1) - what the heck are these nc's fixed
00:29:922 - this should be mapped ye

[Vicky's Advanced]
not much i could say besides go through the map again and polish the visual spacing a bit to make the map a bit cleaner

[Normal]
00:02:079 (1) - how to ruin symmetry (((( fixed!!1
00:01:687 (2,2,2,2) - Yo My Mans Stack These
00:09:138 (3,2) - Y o M y M a n s all ye

h vroom vroom

jas

541 posts

Joined August 2016

jas 2017-07-07T17:18:19+00:00

- Squishi wrote:
where is craezy insane

Rip

Also my name are in the tags plz remove

Also didn't make my diff a description diff I'm triggered

Also you still haven't m4m

Kds plz

Tarrasky

1,203 posts

Joined March 2014

Tarrasky 2017-07-10T19:51:08+00:00

few tips from br queue

General

The backgrounds "alolan_sandslash_by_limecatmastr-dafmem7" and "vicky" have the wrong size for osu, please try find a 1920x1200 bg size

Normal

00:06:393 (2,1) - Fix the stack with 00:04:824 (2) -
Add clap in 00:10:314 - 00:11:099 - 00:11:883 - for consistence
01:03:256 (1,2) - try avoid this kind of overlap
01:06:001 (6) - I prefer stacked with 01:06:393 (1) -, looks more confortable for Normal players
you can map here i think, have a good song for map 01:16:197 -

Vicky's Advanced

00:33:452 (1,2,3) - I prefer you do a double slider sequence like in 00:36:589 (1,2) -, flows better the music imo
00:38:942 - This clap doesn't looks necessary, breaks a bit the consistence
00:40:511 - hmm i disaprove a bit the finish intense song being in the end of this slider, you can do this moment clickable doing circles here, for me looks getter
00:46:001 (1,2,3) - I prefer double sliders like you have done in 00:49:138 (1,2) -, flows better the music

Hard

00:27:765 (4) - hm this can be a bit confuse for a Hard, is pretty but is better you avoid
00:38:942 - This clap doesn't looks necessary, breaks a bit the consistence
00:44:040 - looks good if you add a circle here stacked with 00:44:236 (1) -, for the new sequence starts in a big white tick, for me looks better
00:54:628 (3) - a bit out of the screen i think
01:25:020 (1,3) - is better you avoid this overlap, just move 01:26:197 (3,4,5) - more from the right

hope this helps, gl ~

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-07-13T18:34:20+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
few tips from br queue

General

The backgrounds "alolan_sandslash_by_limecatmastr-dafmem7" and "vicky" have the wrong size for osu, please try find a 1920x1200 bg size i gimped them and now they're all 1080p

Normal

00:06:393 (2,1) - Fix the stack with 00:04:824 (2) - ok
Add clap in 00:10:314 - 00:11:099 - 00:11:883 - for consistence i copied the hitsounds from top diff lol, plus that part is calmer
01:03:256 (1,2) - try avoid this kind of overlap
01:06:001 (6) - I prefer stacked with 01:06:393 (1) -, looks more confortable for Normal players
you can map here i think, have a good song for map 01:16:197 - fixed all

Hard

00:27:765 (4) - hm this can be a bit confuse for a Hard, is pretty but is better you avoid meh
00:38:942 - This clap doesn't looks necessary, breaks a bit the consistence ehsure
00:44:040 - looks good if you add a circle here stacked with 00:44:236 (1) -, for the new sequence starts in a big white tick, for me looks better eh sure
00:54:628 (3) - a bit out of the screen i think fixed
01:25:020 (1,3) - is better you avoid this overlap, just move 01:26:197 (3,4,5) - more from the right eh sur

hope this helps, gl ~ ay

Miriko

188 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2017-07-17T01:49:18+00:00

Spaghetti wrote:
[Vicky's Advanced]
not much i could say besides go through the map again and polish the visual spacing a bit to make the map a bit cleaner I tried to clean it up a bit~ Hopefully it's better~

Tarrasky wrote:
Vicky's Advanced

00:33:452 (1,2,3) - I prefer you do a double slider sequence like in 00:36:589 (1,2) -, flows better the music imo Changed~
00:38:942 - This clap doesn't looks necessary, breaks a bit the consistence Changed~
00:40:511 - hmm i disaprove a bit the finish intense song being in the end of this slider, you can do this moment clickable doing circles here, for me looks getter Not sure what you mean. xD
00:46:001 (1,2,3) - I prefer double sliders like you have done in 00:49:138 (1,2) -, flows better the music Fixed~

Thank you for your mods~ *Bows*

I Choose You! :3

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504,100,51295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,51491,2,0,B|464:236|464:236|472:308,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,372,52079,6,0,P|396:356|328:356,1,120
260,340,52667,2,0,L|200:348,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,328,53060,2,0,P|64:340|4:324,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,53648,6,0,L|0:120,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,54236,2,0,L|120:68,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,54628,2,0,P|244:100|308:88,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,52,55216,6,2,P|432:40|496:56,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,132,55805,2,0,L|484:200,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56589,12,4,58550,0:0:0:0:
468,336,59922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,284,60118,2,0,P|336:272|264:280,1,132.00000402832,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,324,60707,2,0,L|128:328,1,66.0000020141602,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,61099,2,0,L|160:248,1,66.0000020141602,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,61491,6,0,P|244:128|228:64,1,132.00000402832,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,40,62079,2,0,L|80:48,2,66.0000020141602,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,68,62667,2,0,L|300:56,1,66.0000020141602,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,40,63060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,84,63256,6,0,P|472:144|456:232,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,63844,2,0,L|344:292,1,66.0000020141602,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,64236,2,0,L|200:324,1,66.0000020141602,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,300,64628,6,0,P|104:240|112:168,1,132.00000402832,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,65216,2,0,L|224:104,1,66.0000020141602,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,136,65609,2,0,P|364:144|432:132,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
484,68,66197,1,6,0:3:0:0:
412,24,66393,6,0,L|268:28,1,132.00000402832,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,60,66981,2,0,L|132:56,1,66.0000020141602,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,40,67373,2,0,L|56:112,1,66.0000020141602,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,144,67765,6,0,P|148:200|128:280,1,132.00000402832,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,340,68354,2,0,P|112:352|148:352,1,66.0000020141602,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,68746,2,0,P|280:296|352:304,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,332,69334,6,2,P|456:268|448:188,1,132.00000402832,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,132,69922,2,0,L|420:60,1,66.0000020141602,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,28,70314,2,2,L|336:100,1,66.0000020141602,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,70707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,100,70903,6,0,P|116:88|48:96,1,132.00000402832,2|10,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
24,176,71491,2,0,L|36:312,1,132.00000402832,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
100,364,72079,2,0,P|132:368|176:364,1,66.0000020141602,10|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,328,72471,6,0,P|304:308|368:312,1,132.00000402832,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,328,73060,2,0,L|484:264,1,66.0000020141602,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,208,73452,2,0,P|408:156|416:68,1,132.00000402832,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
460,8,74040,1,6,0:3:0:0:
412,79,74236,6,0,L|264:87,1,132.00000402832,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,124,75020,2,4,P|92:76|100:24,2,99.0000030212403,8|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,75805,6,0,L|164:312,1,132.00000402832,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,76393,2,0,P|308:328|380:340,1,132.00000402832,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,76981,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,368,77373,6,4,L|456:224,1,132.00000402832,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,76,78158,2,4,P|432:44|496:44,2,99.0000030212403,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,116,78942,6,0,L|176:120,1,132.00000402832,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,148,79530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,208,79726,2,0,L|56:348,1,132.00000402832,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,356,80314,6,0,L|124:224,1,132.00000402832,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,80903,2,2,P|248:140|328:152,1,132.00000402832,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,82079,6,2,P|392:256|312:248,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,82667,2,2,P|200:212|120:220,1,120
68,256,83256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,348,83648,6,2,L|128:360,2,60,0|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,251,84432,2,2,L|396:263,2,60,8|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,188,85020,6,0,P|264:128|268:64,1,120,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,24,85609,2,2,L|468:32,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,92,86197,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,160,86393,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,232,86589,5,6,0:0:0:0:

Mashed

43 posts

Joined April 2017

Mashed 2017-07-27T00:36:06+00:00

First time modding woo. Couldn't find much because I am not good.

[Normal]
00:16:001 (5) - Shorten the end of the slider to the white line at 00:15:805 (5) to fit the rhythm, it will also be a bit easier for newer players

[Vicky's Advanced]
00:01:883 (3) - Move this a bit to the left? Just personal opinion on how it looks.
00:03:452 (3) - This too?
00:04:432 (2) - Move this down a bit more so it follows the path of the sliders?
00:20:707 (3) - This looks a bit hard to see the slider right under it because they are the same combo number.
01:14:236 (1) - Move bit to left? Looks nicer

[Hard]
00:05:903 (3) - Move this to 00:05:805 (3) and extend it one line, it sounds better in my opinion.
00:06:295 (4) - Move this to 00:06:393 (4) too.
00:59:334 (3) - Remove 1 repeat arrow?

[Alolan]
00:59:922 (2,3) - This stacking looks strange, maybe you can fix it a bit.

That's all I really found

Hopefully it helps lol.

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-07-27T00:46:40+00:00

Mashed wrote:
First time modding woo. Couldn't find much because I am not good.

[Normal]
00:16:001 (5) - Shorten the end of the slider to the white line at 00:15:805 (5) to fit the rhythm, it will also be a bit easier for newer players fixed

[Hard]
00:05:903 (3) - Move this to 00:05:805 (3) and extend it one line, it sounds better in my opinion. placed a circle instead, complex rhythms aren't good for hards
00:06:295 (4) - Move this to 00:06:393 (4) too. crisis alleviated with circle
00:59:334 (3) - Remove 1 repeat arrow? yep

[Alolan]
00:59:922 (2,3) - This stacking looks strange, maybe you can fix it a bit. lmao im a bad mapper

That's all I really found
Hopefully it helps lol. thanks for modding, you did really well for first time modder :^

coco

410 posts

Joined January 2017

coco 2017-08-01T04:00:26+00:00

from ur q

insane

00:06:785 (1) - this hitsound is so strong i shook when i first heard it. you could change it to something with less bass
00:16:981 (1) - this started on where you would expect the sliderend to be (considering the other sliders before it)
00:17:765 (1) - now you've mentally prepared yourself that the slider should now start on the end closer to the previous one but nope
00:31:687 (6,7,1) - eh this stack looks weird
01:24:432 (3,1) - wide angle jump after a million acute angle jumps is weird

i just modded 1 diff cuz mine has 1 diff

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-08-02T01:56:51+00:00

from q

General
-these hitsounds are like crazy loud so u can drop the volume like at least 30% in most places (especially kiai)
-01:00:118 - move kiai to here in all diffs, thats where the loudest background instrument kicks in, pls put a click there too
-the rly loud/llong finish doesnt sound appropriate for this song because there arent rly instruments in the song which match it. the closest instruments are much cleaner sounding, and the whistle matches those notes just fine.

Hard
00:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - playing this part felt weird to me bc the drum whatever starts on 2 but thats only mapped as a circle. this sounds more rhythmically accurate but i dont think its appropriate for this diff lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8740838
00:28:550 (6,7) - increase DS
00:36:393 (9,2) - overlap is meh
00:38:158 - dont put a rly loud finish on a non-click pls
00:55:805 (2,3,4) - eeeeee visual spacing isnt consistent, the [tail of 3 is closer to the body of 2] than the [tail of 4 is to the body of 3]
01:00:118 - pls dont prioritize the vocals over the kiai entrance
01:12:471 (1,2,3) - i think u should change the flow direction of 3 to match 1 and 2 to better show "aiaiai" then change flow direction of 01:13:844 (4) to contrast it so sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8740936
01:17:373 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing again, but its not as noticeable as last time. this is a bigger gap than the others 01:17:765 (2,3)

Hyper
00:09:334 (2,4) - fix blanket xddd
00:12:275 (1,1) - overlap looks kinda ugly, i would just stack them instead
00:25:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the song isnt soft enough here to be using these overlap spacings imo
00:28:746 (2,2,1) - overlaps look weird, try making an equilateral triangle or a line instead
01:00:118 - why is the kiai not over here aaaaaa
01:06:393 (1,2) - .........moon moon???

good luck!

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-02T03:23:47+00:00

cococolaco wrote:
from ur q
insane
00:06:785 (1) - this hitsound is so strong i shook when i first heard it. you could change it to something with less bass nah
00:16:981 (1) - this started on where you would expect the sliderend to be (considering the other sliders before it)
00:17:765 (1) - now you've mentally prepared yourself that the slider should now start on the end closer to the previous one but nope deal with it
00:31:687 (6,7,1) - eh this stack looks weird custom stacks
01:24:432 (3,1) - wide angle jump after a million acute angle jumps is weird nah it's fine, it's literally 1 jump and it's a slider for leniency
i just modded 1 diff cuz mine has 1 diff

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-02T03:43:05+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
from q

General
-these hitsounds are like crazy loud so u can drop the volume like at least 30% in most places (especially kiai)
-01:00:118 - move kiai to here in all diffs, thats where the loudest background instrument kicks in, pls put a click there too
-the rly loud/llong finish doesnt sound appropriate for this song because there arent rly instruments in the song which match it. the closest instruments are much cleaner sounding, and the whistle matches those notes just fine.

Hard
00:05:609 (1,2,3,4) - playing this part felt weird to me bc the drum whatever starts on 2 but thats only mapped as a circle. this sounds more rhythmically accurate but i dont think its appropriate for this diff lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8740838 simplification for nobs
00:28:550 (6,7) - increase DS nah, the next set is ds too
00:36:393 (9,2) - overlap is meh fixed
00:38:158 - dont put a rly loud finish on a non-click pls i copied hitsounds from top diff
00:55:805 (2,3,4) - eeeeee visual spacing isnt consistent, the [tail of 3 is closer to the body of 2] than the [tail of 4 is to the body of 3] fixed
01:00:118 - pls dont prioritize the vocals over the kiai entrance fixed
01:12:471 (1,2,3) - i think u should change the flow direction of 3 to match 1 and 2 to better show "aiaiai" then change flow direction of 01:13:844 (4) to contrast it so sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8740936 eh no, last aiaia changes back to normal flow
01:17:373 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing again, but its not as noticeable as last time. this is a bigger gap than the others 01:17:765 (2,3) fixed

Hyper
00:09:334 (2,4) - fix blanket xddd lo
00:12:275 (1,1) - overlap looks kinda ugly, i would just stack them instead did something else
00:25:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the song isnt soft enough here to be using these overlap spacings imo remapped entire part of that lol
00:28:746 (2,2,1) - overlaps look weird, try making an equilateral triangle or a line instead stacked them all
01:00:118 - why is the kiai not over here aaaaaa fixed
01:06:393 (1,2) - .........moon moon??? sun sun

good luck!

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2017-08-06T12:34:18+00:00

M4M From my queue

General

01:00:118 - The kiai starts here. In every diff besides the Insane it starts on the next white tick, which isn't correct. You hear that extra layer come in at the time stamp I gave you, which means it's the chorus.

The backgrounds have no purpose. They also all don't share the same style. The alolan diff I think fits the style of the song, but then in some diffs like Hyper and Hard you use wallpaper style backgrounds. Regardless, you have different backgrounds which suggest different ideas, but the only differences I see in the set are difficulty and coloring. Assuming all the backgrounds were of the same tropical style, this idea would only work if you had multiple difficulties of the same level. That way you keep the spread but include more ideas.

Alolan

00:05:805 - Up until here your hitsounds are too quiet.

00:06:066 (1) - You don't need the nc here as both this and the previous slider were 1/3 and the nc makes the player think there's something different about it.

00:16:197 (1) - jeezuz when was there a cannon in pokemon. 50-60% volume sounds good.

00:22:863 (3) - This barely goes off screen.

01:20:707 (1) - Unsnapped thing

Insane

01:19:726 (1,2,1,2) - With what you decided to bring out with these jumps the nc should be one the first note and the last. So the numbers should read off as 1,2,3,1. Reason being is because the emphasis is on the first and last notes, so the coloring should compliment that.

Hyper

00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is just a bad way to overmap. There's a mess in the background, so mapping it all as 1/4 doesn't really help. You're better off using reverse sliders.

Hard

00:05:805 (2,3) - This rhythm is incorrect. There's no 1/4 sound where the reverse slider is. The best way I can think of to map this is to use a 1/2 slider.

I couldn't find anything for advanced or normal

gl

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2017-08-06T22:37:04+00:00

from queue
~~These wave sliders are worse than shiirn's~~

Alolan:

00:00:903 (2,5) - Can you at least make the overlap consistent with 00:01:687 (5,2) - , 00:02:471 (2,5) - , etc. The DS is slightly larger than those two.
00:05:216 (1) - There should be a finish here, no? and a clap 00:05:609 (2) - . The transition doesnt start till 00:05:805 (1) - , so it just sounds awkward until then.
00:08:746 (1,1) - Put whistles here? at the moment 00:08:354 (1) - 's whistle is kind of random.
00:20:118 (1,1) - Why the unnecessary NCs, throughout the entire map too?
00:41:491 (4) - I think the slider should start 00:41:687 - , of course following the vocals, but it'd feel more impact-ful if it was hit with the drum.
01:13:844 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this more spaced from 01:16:981 (1,2,3,4,1) - when they're basically rhythmically the same? Seems very inconsistent.
01:23:648 - Different hitsounds than 00:14:628 - even though they're rhythmically the same?

Everything in this difficulty is quite questionable. hitsounds, where notes are positioned, aesthetics, overlaps, etc. I didn't list all of what i thought were issues since I like to avoid forcing the mapper to change their style. Just clean it up a bit.
~~it looks like a dirty pp map~~

Insane:

00:08:746 (1,1) - again, unnecessary NCs, and throughout the entire map.
00:20:903 (1,2) - Wouldn't this be ctrl+g following 00:19:530 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 's pattern?
00:30:903 (3,6,7,1) - Honestly, in this case, stacking would be better.
00:40:707 (2,3,4) - same situation as the highest diff.
00:58:550 (1,1) - why map this but not in the Alolan difficulty? I assumed it'd be the other way.
01:00:118 - Missed the big kiai point. That's p bad.
01:23:648 - what happened to 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? They're pretty much the same, its just this ones an outro.

Hyper:

00:05:609 (1,1,1) - Just felt awful. Mainly because 00:05:609 (1) - ended on 00:05:805 - , where the drums actually kick in.
00:12:275 (1,1) - I'd say in this case, stack.
00:14:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Again, unnecessary NCs. Also, why is 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2) - different even thought they're rhythmically the same?
00:24:628 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe just stack these.
00:22:471 (2) - pretty sure the NC is supposed to be here.
00:50:314 (7,1) - space these, since you did it for 00:47:373 (1) - ?
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Is literally harder than the Insane's and Alolan's. 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - is just overmapping in general.

This diff also has some questionable stuff in it. Polishing is needed here too.

Hard:

00:06:001 (3) - Why the repeat here? The trumpet doesnt start till 00:06:393 - , so this just sounds weird.

00:25:020 (3,1,2) - Just felt really underwhelming
00:28:746 (7) - NC?
00:36:393 (9,1) - Make it a triple instead of a 1/4 into slider, like 00:33:256 (5,6,1) - . This pattern is just out of no where and it makes it pretty awkward.
00:44:824 (3,4,5,6) - Is different than 00:47:961 (2,3,4) - , but in other diffs they're pretty much the same. Change that?
00:49:726 (3) - You could just make this a 1/2 slider with a circle note 00:50:314 -
00:58:550 (1,2,3) - This has more activity going than the Alolan difficulty.
01:05:805 (4,5,1) - I suggest you stack these, the spacing is pretty wide.

The set in general needs more polishing. Everything seems out of place and in terms of aesthetics, awful. Really think you should revise the Insane and Hard. Look back into Alolan and polish it a bit more. It seems you're trying too hard to make it difficult.

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-07T04:48:34+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
M4M From my queue

General

01:00:118 - The kiai starts here. In every diff besides the Insane it starts on the next white tick, which isn't correct. You hear that extra layer come in at the time stamp I gave you, which means it's the chorus.

The backgrounds have no purpose. They also all don't share the same style. The alolan diff I think fits the style of the song, but then in some diffs like Hyper and Hard you use wallpaper style backgrounds. Regardless, you have different backgrounds which suggest different ideas, but the only differences I see in the set are difficulty and coloring. Assuming all the backgrounds were of the same tropical style, this idea would only work if you had multiple difficulties of the same level. That way you keep the spread but include more ideas. replaced all bgs except top diff and vicky's diff with a more general bg

Alolan

00:05:805 - Up until here your hitsounds are too quiet. raised by 11%™

00:06:066 (1) - You don't need the nc here as both this and the previous slider were 1/3 and the nc makes the player think there's something different about it. yeah, it's a different pattern. a normal nc there wouldn't be enough for the pattern imo.

00:16:197 (1) - jeezuz when was there a cannon in pokemon. 50-60% volume sounds good. forretress used explosion!

00:22:863 (3) - This barely goes off screen. barely fixed

01:20:707 (1) - Unsnapped thing snapped thing

Insane

01:19:726 (1,2,1,2) - With what you decided to bring out with these jumps the nc should be one the first note and the last. So the numbers should read off as 1,2,3,1. Reason being is because the emphasis is on the first and last notes, so the coloring should compliment that. sure why not

Hyper

00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - This is just a bad way to overmap. There's a mess in the background, so mapping it all as 1/4 doesn't really help. You're better off using reverse sliders. did something say "pikaaa" (im mapping that sound instead :3)

Hard

00:05:805 (2,3) - This rhythm is incorrect. There's no 1/4 sound where the reverse slider is. The best way I can think of to map this is to use a 1/2 slider. fixed finally voli bubble my map

I couldn't find anything for advanced or normal great

gl thanks mate

Osatia

272 posts

Joined November 2015

Osatia 2017-08-07T05:10:07+00:00

the mod

21:26 [[Pika]]: ok
21:31 Waku: oh
21:33 Waku: in hard diff why doesnt the repeat sliders start 00:05:805 (2) - 
21:34 [[Pika]]: :thinking:
21:34 [[Pika]]: i'm applying mods as we speak
21:34 [[Pika]]: so
21:34 [[Pika]]: dump your ideas here and i'll get back to them
21:34 Waku: alrightt
21:35 Waku: 00:28:550 (6) - i would nc this since you do so on 00:29:334 (1,2) - and 00:30:118 (1,2) - 
21:36 Waku: 00:59:138 (2) - repeat should start here 
21:38 Waku: 01:05:805 (4,5,1) - the ds here is way too high imo it doesnt even play that nicely, and sorry if its my hearing but i really dont get what you are mapping to since you kind of skip the actual "stream" sounds on 01:06:001 (1) - to 01:06:295 - 
21:39 Waku: 01:26:589 (5) - i would nc this
21:39 [[Pika]]: o and
21:39 [[Pika]]: make sure i can clearly tell which diff a mod is for lol
21:40 Waku: yeah 
21:40 Waku: hyper now xd
21:40 Waku: for a light insane type of diff i dont really think the ds change on 00:22:765 (3,4) - is really neccessary but it isnt that important imo
21:42 Waku: 00:59:138 - shouldnt a triple be here? ( 00:59:138 -  to 00:59:334 - )
21:43 Waku: 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - what are you mapping to here? i dont really get this stream
21:43 Waku: 01:06:197 - skipped triple starting here
21:44 Waku: and 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - compared to 01:13:844 (5,6,7,8) - also doesnt make sense since you are changing what you are mapping the streams to
21:45 Waku: 01:16:197 (3) - maybe add a finish here? idk but the song kinda sounds like it has a finish here but this doesnt really matter
21:45 Waku: 01:26:589 (3) - nc maybe?
21:45 Waku: insane now ~
21:47 Waku: 00:59:334 (1) - why did you map a stream around here in the hyper diff but map a slider instead in the insane?
21:47 Waku: 01:06:295 - missing circle here
21:48 Waku: without it, it also makes it look like 01:06:295 - is on the blue tick while playing for some people
21:48 Waku: so the circle goes with the music and i guess helps with playing
21:49 Waku: 01:19:530 - to 01:19:726 - is skipped triple
21:49 Waku: 01:20:707 (1,2) - should be a circle on the blue tick and then the slider making a triple
21:49 Waku: 01:26:589 (4) - nc
21:49 Waku: thats it i guess
21:56 [[Pika]]: uwaw no top diff
21:56 [[Pika]]: sadface lo
21:56 [[Pika]]: jk
21:56 Waku: hm
21:56 [[Pika]]: i'll respond to this in a sec
21:56 Waku: this is m4m right?
21:56 Waku: and ok
22:05 Waku: should i post or wait
22:08 [[Pika]]: post
22:08 Waku: ok

m4m for this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645515

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-07T17:54:41+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
from queue
These wave sliders are worse than shiirn's i refuse to be compared to shiirn ((

Alolan:
00:00:903 (2,5) - Can you at least make the overlap consistent with 00:01:687 (5,2) - , 00:02:471 (2,5) - , etc. The DS is slightly larger than those two. used some custom stack magic
00:05:216 (1) - There should be a finish here, no? and a clap 00:05:609 (2) - . The transition doesnt start till 00:05:805 (1) - , so it just sounds awkward until then. fixed
00:08:746 (1,1) - Put whistles here? at the moment 00:08:354 (1) - 's whistle is kind of random. put a whistle on the not-clap one
00:20:118 (1,1) - Why the unnecessary NCs, throughout the entire map too? tweaked all except for kiai for cleaner follow point organization
00:41:491 (4) - I think the slider should start 00:41:687 - , of course following the vocals, but it'd feel more impact-ful if it was hit with the drum. it'd break the slider triangle thing though :/
01:13:844 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this more spaced from 01:16:981 (1,2,3,4,1) - when they're basically rhythmically the same? Seems very inconsistent. 01:13:844 (1,2,3,4,1) - kiai exit and the sounds before it are relatively stronger compared to rest of kiai
01:23:648 - Different hitsounds than 00:14:628 - even though they're rhythmically the same? idk how to explain it but it's based off the piano in the background and its pitch at the end of the song

Everything in this difficulty is quite questionable. hitsounds, where notes are positioned, aesthetics, overlaps, etc. I didn't list all of what i thought were issues since I like to avoid forcing the mapper to change their style. Just clean it up a bit.
~~it looks like a dirty pp map~~ you wouldn't be wrong
Insane:
00:08:746 (1,1) - again, unnecessary NCs, and throughout the entire map. it's follow point cleanliness but i suppose :/
00:20:903 (1,2) - Wouldn't this be ctrl+g following 00:19:530 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 's pattern? 00:20:511 (6,7,1) - distance emphasis on stronger note because the notes before it are boring and repetitive
00:30:903 (3,6,7,1) - Honestly, in this case, stacking would be better. honestly i think you're right
00:40:707 (2,3,4) - same situation as the highest diff. vocals more important
00:58:550 (1,1) - why map this but not in the Alolan difficulty? I assumed it'd be the other way. ye lemme fix that
01:00:118 - Missed the big kiai point. That's p bad. i overhauled shit with the mod before yours, you just didn't update
01:23:648 - what happened to 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? They're pretty much the same, its just this ones an outro. that's the point lol, less intense after kiai to cool down
Hyper:
00:05:609 (1,1,1) - Just felt awful. Mainly because 00:05:609 (1) - ended on 00:05:805 - , where the drums actually kick in. overhauled along with the rest of the diffs
00:12:275 (1,1) - I'd say in this case, stack. ye
00:14:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Again, unnecessary NCs. they're hops man, it's organization Also, why is 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2) - different even thought they're rhythmically the same? start of intro
00:24:628 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe just stack these. ye
00:22:471 (2) - pretty sure the NC is supposed to be here. ye
00:50:314 (7,1) - space these, since you did it for 00:47:373 (1) - ? ye
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Is literally harder than the Insane's and Alolan's. 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - is just overmapping in general. overhaul

This diff also has some questionable stuff in it. Polishing is needed here too.
Hard:
00:06:001 (3) - Why the repeat here? The trumpet doesnt start till 00:06:393 - , so this just sounds weird. overhaul
00:25:020 (3,1,2) - Just felt really underwhelming :/
00:28:746 (7) - NC? revamp
00:36:393 (9,1) - Make it a triple instead of a 1/4 into slider, like 00:33:256 (5,6,1) - . This pattern is just out of no where and it makes it pretty awkward. ok
00:44:824 (3,4,5,6) - Is different than 00:47:961 (2,3,4) - , but in other diffs they're pretty much the same. Change that? eh no blame ds
00:49:726 (3) - You could just make this a 1/2 slider with a circle note 00:50:314 - breaks consistency no
00:58:550 (1,2,3) - This has more activity going than the Alolan difficulty. revamped
01:05:805 (4,5,1) - I suggest you stack these, the spacing is pretty wide. nah intensit
The set in general needs more polishing. Everything seems out of place and in terms of aesthetics, awful. Really think you should revise the Insane and Hard. Look back into Alolan and polish it a bit more. It seems you're trying too hard to make it difficult.

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-07T19:56:40+00:00

Ongaku wrote:
from queue
~~These wave sliders are worse than shiirn's~~

Alolan:
00:00:903 (2,5) - Can you at least make the overlap consistent with 00:01:687 (5,2) - , 00:02:471 (2,5) - , etc. The DS is slightly larger than those two.
00:05:216 (1) - There should be a finish here, no? and a clap 00:05:609 (2) - . The transition doesnt start till 00:05:805 (1) - , so it just sounds awkward until then.
00:08:746 (1,1) - Put whistles here? at the moment 00:08:354 (1) - 's whistle is kind of random.
00:20:118 (1,1) - Why the unnecessary NCs, throughout the entire map too?
00:41:491 (4) - I think the slider should start 00:41:687 - , of course following the vocals, but it'd feel more impact-ful if it was hit with the drum.
01:13:844 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this more spaced from 01:16:981 (1,2,3,4,1) - when they're basically rhythmically the same? Seems very inconsistent.
01:23:648 - Different hitsounds than 00:14:628 - even though they're rhythmically the same?

Everything in this difficulty is quite questionable. hitsounds, where notes are positioned, aesthetics, overlaps, etc. I didn't list all of what i thought were issues since I like to avoid forcing the mapper to change their style. Just clean it up a bit.
~~it looks like a dirty pp map~~
Insane:
00:08:746 (1,1) - again, unnecessary NCs, and throughout the entire map.
00:20:903 (1,2) - Wouldn't this be ctrl+g following 00:19:530 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 's pattern?
00:30:903 (3,6,7,1) - Honestly, in this case, stacking would be better.
00:40:707 (2,3,4) - same situation as the highest diff.
00:58:550 (1,1) - why map this but not in the Alolan difficulty? I assumed it'd be the other way.
01:00:118 - Missed the big kiai point. That's p bad.
01:23:648 - what happened to 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? They're pretty much the same, its just this ones an outro.
Hyper:
00:05:609 (1,1,1) - Just felt awful. Mainly because 00:05:609 (1) - ended on 00:05:805 - , where the drums actually kick in.
00:12:275 (1,1) - I'd say in this case, stack.
00:14:628 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Again, unnecessary NCs. Also, why is 00:08:354 (1,2,1,2) - different even thought they're rhythmically the same?
00:24:628 (4,1,2,3) - Maybe just stack these.
00:22:471 (2) - pretty sure the NC is supposed to be here.
00:50:314 (7,1) - space these, since you did it for 00:47:373 (1) - ?
00:58:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Is literally harder than the Insane's and Alolan's. 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - is just overmapping in general.

This diff also has some questionable stuff in it. Polishing is needed here too.
Hard:
00:06:001 (3) - Why the repeat here? The trumpet doesnt start till 00:06:393 - , so this just sounds weird.
00:25:020 (3,1,2) - Just felt really underwhelming
00:28:746 (7) - NC?
00:36:393 (9,1) - Make it a triple instead of a 1/4 into slider, like 00:33:256 (5,6,1) - . This pattern is just out of no where and it makes it pretty awkward.
00:44:824 (3,4,5,6) - Is different than 00:47:961 (2,3,4) - , but in other diffs they're pretty much the same. Change that?
00:49:726 (3) - You could just make this a 1/2 slider with a circle note 00:50:314 -
00:58:550 (1,2,3) - This has more activity going than the Alolan difficulty.
01:05:805 (4,5,1) - I suggest you stack these, the spacing is pretty wide.
The set in general needs more polishing. Everything seems out of place and in terms of aesthetics, awful. Really think you should revise the Insane and Hard. Look back into Alolan and polish it a bit more. It seems you're trying too hard to make it difficult.

i lost a lot of the mod data (blame windows updates in the middle of the night) but i applied and changed stuff

Ongaku

607 posts

Joined January 2014

Ongaku 2017-08-07T19:57:46+00:00

[[Pika]] wrote:
i lost a lot of the mod data (blame windows updates in the middle of the night) but i applied and changed stuff

lul

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-07T20:06:23+00:00

Waku wrote:

the mod

21:26 [[Pika]]: ok
21:31 Waku: oh
21:33 Waku: in hard diff why doesnt the repeat sliders start 00:05:805 (2) - [b]revamps to all diffs[/b]
21:34 [[Pika]]: :thinking:
21:34 [[Pika]]: i'm applying mods as we speak
21:34 [[Pika]]: so
21:34 [[Pika]]: dump your ideas here and i'll get back to them
21:34 Waku: alrightt
21:35 Waku: 00:28:550 (6) - i would nc this since you do so on 00:29:334 (1,2) - and 00:30:118 (1,2) - [b]did something different[/b]
21:36 Waku: 00:59:138 (2) - repeat should start here [b]did something different[/b]
21:38 Waku: 01:05:805 (4,5,1) - the ds here is way too high imo it doesnt even play that nicely, and sorry if its my hearing but i really dont get what you are mapping to since you kind of skip the actual "stream" sounds on 01:06:001 (1) - to 01:06:295 - [b]deleted stream[/b]
21:39 Waku: 01:26:589 (5) - i would nc this [b]nah im good[/b]
21:39 [[Pika]]: o and
21:39 [[Pika]]: make sure i can clearly tell which diff a mod is for lol
21:40 Waku: yeah 
21:40 Waku: hyper now xd
21:40 Waku: for a light insane type of diff i dont really think the ds change on 00:22:765 (3,4) - is really neccessary but it isnt that important imo [b]no change then[/b]
21:42 Waku: 00:59:138 - shouldnt a triple be here? ( 00:59:138 -  to 00:59:334 - ) [b]revamped stuff[/b]
21:43 Waku: 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - what are you mapping to here? i dont really get this stream [b]revamped stuff[/b]
21:43 Waku: 01:06:197 - skipped triple starting here [b]:/[/b]
21:44 Waku: and 00:59:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - compared to 01:13:844 (5,6,7,8) - also doesnt make sense since you are changing what you are mapping the streams to [b]revamped stuff remember[/b]
21:45 Waku: 01:16:197 (3) - maybe add a finish here? idk but the song kinda sounds like it has a finish here but this doesnt really matter [b]no change[/b]
21:45 Waku: 01:26:589 (3) - nc maybe? [b]nah[/b]
21:45 Waku: insane now ~
21:47 Waku: 00:59:334 (1) - why did you map a stream around here in the hyper diff but map a slider instead in the insane? [b]revamped stuff[/b]
21:47 Waku: 01:06:295 - missing circle here [b]ye done[/b]
21:48 Waku: without it, it also makes it look like 01:06:295 - is on the blue tick while playing for some people
21:48 Waku: so the circle goes with the music and i guess helps with playing
21:49 Waku: 01:19:530 - to 01:19:726 - is skipped triple [b]vocals and pp jump no lol[/b]
21:49 Waku: 01:20:707 (1,2) - should be a circle on the blue tick and then the slider making a triple [b]eww no[/b]
21:49 Waku: 01:26:589 (4) - nc [b]nah[/b]
21:49 Waku: thats it i guess
21:56 [[Pika]]: uwaw no top diff
21:56 [[Pika]]: sadface lo
21:56 [[Pika]]: jk
21:56 Waku: hm
21:56 [[Pika]]: i'll respond to this in a sec
21:56 Waku: this is m4m right?
21:56 Waku: and ok
22:05 Waku: should i post or wait
22:08 [[Pika]]: post
22:08 Waku: ok

m4m for this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645515

kek

Arphimigon

1,650 posts

Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2017-08-13T18:01:40+00:00

Lab Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Alolan]
Object at 00:07:373 - should be placed at: [399, 167] currently at: [400, 168] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:56:589 - should be placed at: [514, 139] currently at: [512, 136] to blanket slider body

[Hard]
Object at 00:21:491 - should be placed at: [247, 157] currently at: [247, 155] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:33:256 - should be placed at: [33, 265] currently at: [34, 266] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:33:354 - should be placed at: [33, 265] currently at: [34, 266] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:33:452 - should be placed at: [33, 265] currently at: [34, 266] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:38:942 - should be placed at: [185, 266] currently at: [186, 267] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:02:275 - should be placed at: [59, 172] currently at: [60, 171] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:18:942 - should be placed at: [148, 249] currently at: [149, 248] to move in line with slider

[Hyper]
Object at 01:23:648 - should be placed at: [20, 220] currently at: [21, 221] to move in line with slider

[Insane]
Object at 00:06:589 - should be placed at: [274, 40] currently at: [275, 41] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:32:667 - should be placed at: [421, 60] currently at: [422, 61] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:44:628 - should be placed at: [414, 85] currently at: [415, 86] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:02:471 - should be placed at: [125, 188] currently at: [128, 190] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:16:001 - should be placed at: [216, 291] currently at: [213, 290] to blanket slider body

[Normal]
Object at 01:04:824 - should be placed at: [179, 146] currently at: [180, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:746 - should be placed at: [90, 98] currently at: [89, 99] to move in line with slider

[Vicky's Advanced]
Object at 00:20:707 - should be placed at: [231, 147] currently at: [232, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:21:687 - should be placed at: [231, 147] currently at: [232, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:45:020 - should be placed at: [426, 146] currently at: [424, 148] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:03:060 - should be placed at: [380, 42] currently at: [380, 40] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:04:628 - should be placed at: [132, 302] currently at: [132, 300] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:354 - should be placed at: [81, 339] currently at: [80, 340] to move in line with slider

I hope I didn't malfunction! C:

also thank antares always

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-08-14T18:56:04+00:00

What a cute song

General Stuff

You have some unused files in your folder: hard.png hyper.png insane.png normal.png
Why is kiai time inconsistent in your diffs? You mapped all of them, so make them consistent
Consider to add an Easy diff to the mapset

Normal

00:01:687 (2,2,2,2) - Your intention is to make this pattern symmetric, but it isn't actually xD You need to move these elements some grid right (x:256) fixing the next elements as well to remake them symmetrical.
00:09:922 (1,2) - Did you forget to add claps on (1) reverse and on (2)? I do not understand if it's intentional to emphasize the "PIKACHU" or you just missed them! I guess you forgot them because you added it on 00:15:020 (4)ù
00:11:491 (1,2) - You forgot them here as well? This part sounds so empty without those claps that should be used
00:24:040 (4) - You need to move this slider somewhere else, it is actually covered by HP bar, same for 00:39:726 (3) and 01:20:903 (1) -

Vicky's Advanced

00:06:393 (3) - Stack this slider's head with previous 00:04:824 (3)
00:35:805 (3) - Why don't you follow the same logic you did for 00:32:667 (3) since this is the same rhythm?
00:39:726 (1) - I would have kept the 1/2 slider to make the next 00:40:511 clickable. You could use a rhythm like this: https://puu.sh/x9XPP.png
00:42:667 - This tick should be clickable as well. Remember you are mapping an advanced, not a Normal :3 What about this? https://puu.sh/x9XWt.png If yes, be sure to switch NC between this and 00:43:060 (1)
01:26:197 (3,4) - I would use an 1/2 slider
Map is good, I just think those rhythms need to be changed

Hard

00:05:805 (2,3) - You should avoid this for an Hard diff. Just make an 1/4 repeating slider that ends at 00:06:197 : https://puu.sh/x9Y7w.png
00:09:726 (4,1) - I would switch NCs here
00:12:961 (5) - Remove this circle
00:28:354 (5,6,1) - Check the spacing please, it counfused me
00:36:393 (9,10) - If you want to keep this triple instead of an 1/4 slider, you should change the order of slider/triples. I mean, 00:35:216 (2) use 1/4 slider here, 00:35:609 (5) triple here, 00:36:001 (6,7,8) slider here, so you can keep triple on 00:36:393 (9,10,1)

Hyper

00:09:726 (4) - New combo
00:22:765 (2,3) - Make the spacing constistent moving the (3) a bit further
00:25:020 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please avoid this, it's confusing for this diff. Just stack them or use sliders, I actually got confused af when I saw it here 00:24:628 (4,1,2) stacked with 00:24:628 (4) as well, so, try to unstack (1) and (4) too.
00:38:550 (5) - NC like you did for the triples, and remove it from 00:39:726 (1)
01:11:883 (2) - Some grid down, it's covered by HP bar's shadow
01:15:805 (1,2,3) - NOOOOOOOOOO it's confusing! xD Just unstack them and make something else instead!
01:18:942 (1,2) - I would switch NC here
01:20:903 (2,3) - Unstack them :s

Insane

00:27:373 (4) - Change with 2 circles - slider like you did for previous ones? It would be fun in DT, more than this. Also, set NC
00:50:903 (2) - HP bar
01:20:314 (1,1) - These one should be stacked instead! The spacing is too low and it looks an 1/2 instead that 1/1. Stack it or move it further

Alolan

00:06:099 (1) - ??? I don't understand this, it's not constistent with other diff. Set it 1/6 earlier
01:18:942 (3) - NC here for consistency? You can add it and keep NC on next, it's ok I guess

Good luck!

Weedy

773 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Weedy 2017-08-19T05:30:50+00:00

Chewin wrote:
What a cute song :D

General Stuff
You have some unused files in your folder: hard.png hyper.png insane.png normal.png deleted
Why is kiai time inconsistent in your diffs? You mapped all of them, so make them consistent fixed
Consider to add an Easy diff to the mapset mayyybe?

Normal
00:01:687 (2,2,2,2) - Your intention is to make this pattern symmetric, but it isn't actually xD You need to move these elements some grid right (x:256) fixing the next elements as well to remake them symmetrical. fixed
00:09:922 (1,2) - Did you forget to add claps on (1) reverse and on (2)? I do not understand if it's intentional to emphasize the "PIKACHU" or you just missed them! I guess you forgot them because you added it on 00:15:020 (4) fixed
00:11:491 (1,2) - You forgot them here as well? This part sounds so empty without those claps that should be used ye
00:24:040 (4) - You need to move this slider somewhere else, it is actually covered by HP bar, same for 00:39:726 (3) and 01:20:903 (1) - fixed all

Hard
00:05:805 (2,3) - You should avoid this for an Hard diff. Just make an 1/4 repeating slider that ends at 00:06:197 : https://puu.sh/x9Y7w.png sure
00:09:726 (4,1) - I would switch NCs here ye
00:12:961 (5) - Remove this circle ...fine
00:28:354 (5,6,1) - Check the spacing please, it counfused me they're just 1/2 :/
00:36:393 (9,10) - If you want to keep this triple instead of an 1/4 slider, you should change the order of slider/triples. I mean, 00:35:216 (2) use 1/4 slider here, 00:35:609 (5) triple here, 00:36:001 (6,7,8) slider here, so you can keep triple on 00:36:393 (9,10,1) fixed

Hyper
00:09:726 (4) - New combo ye
00:22:765 (2,3) - Make the spacing constistent moving the (3) a bit further nah i just moved (2)
00:25:020 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please avoid this, it's confusing for this diff. Just stack them or use sliders, I actually got confused af when I saw it here 00:24:628 (4,1,2) stacked with 00:24:628 (4) as well, so, try to unstack (1) and (4) too. ye remaped
00:38:550 (5) - NC like you did for the triples, and remove it from 00:39:726 (1) ye
01:11:883 (2) - Some grid down, it's covered by HP bar's shadow ye
01:15:805 (1,2,3) - NOOOOOOOOOO it's confusing! xD Just unstack them and make something else instead! ye
01:18:942 (1,2) - I would switch NC here sure
01:20:903 (2,3) - Unstack them :s nah readability

Insane
00:27:373 (4) - Change with 2 circles - slider like you did for previous ones? It would be fun in DT, more than this. Also, set NC ye sure
00:50:903 (2) - HP bar ye
01:20:314 (1,1) - These one should be stacked instead! The spacing is too low and it looks an 1/2 instead that 1/1. Stack it or move it further nah, 01:20:314 (1,1) - double nc here

Alolan
00:06:099 (1) - ??? I don't understand this, it's not constistent with other diff. Set it 1/6 earlier oops
01:18:942 (3) - NC here for consistency? You can add it and keep NC on next, it's ok I guess eh nah

Good luck! ty <3

Mekki

1,793 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2017-09-04T20:39:08+00:00

m4m my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/663704

[normal]
consider increasing AR to 4 or even 4.2 since 3.5 is too low for a normal, even for the lowest diff on the set.
also increase OD to 3.5
you have a serious combo issue at the beginning of map, u are following a default of NCing at every downbeat when at the rest of the map u NCed in every 2 downbeats, consider fixing it.
e.g 00:02:079 (1) - remove
00:05:216 (1) - remove
00:08:354 (1) - remove and so on...

apart from the combo, seems clear.

[hard]
hp 4 is too low for a hard, maybe you could use 5.
00:02:863 (3,4) - why is spacing here smaller than 00:01:295 (3,4) ?
00:05:805 (2) - this is 1/8 I think
00:27:765 (4) - my personal thoughts, but u could do this slider less curved, it doesnt fit the mapset/song
00:33:844 (2) - replacing it for two notes would make the rhythm better, the gap right not is kinda weird, and slider is also ignoring important vocals at the end of it.
00:41:099 (5) - DS error, it's smaller than it should be for no reason.
00:47:863 (2) - you could remove that note if u ask me, doesn't fit that well for a hard considering that there is a hyper already. better keep the rhythm as clean as possible
00:59:922 (1,2) - consider adding some hitsounds here, feels realyl empty.

[hyper]
hp 4? hp 5.5 would fit much better for a hyper, considering hard should be 5
00:05:805 (3) - again, pretty sure it is 1/8 but it needs more check
00:28:158 (3) - placing this slider like that would flow better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9017454
00:33:452 (1,2,3,4) - why sudden low spacing?
00:44:040 (7,8) - the beat seems too low for using a spaced stream like that, consider doing something smaller for these.
01:18:942 (3) - nc for start of new vocals.
01:20:903 (2) - placement seems weird, what about to put right to the left of (1)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9017473

[insane]
HP 6 would fit better for a 4.4 insane, especially for that BPM
00:50:511 (1) and 00:52:079 (1) - needs more emphasys imo
01:18:942 (3) - nc for start of new vocals.

clean

[alolan]
od 9 seems to big for the map itself, consider using it 8 or 8.5 instead
consider using a bigger HP rate like 6.5
00:05:805 (1) - 1/8. snap is very tricky here, u should check it better with someone else
00:09:922 (1,2,3) - where r the hitsounds?
00:39:530 (2) - move this note up a bit, it flows bad the way it is right now, like that > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9017360
00:43:256 (2,3) - the jump seems to big for me compared to the rest of the map
00:47:373 (1,2,3) - i honestly dont think that spacing the stream like that in this part of the map is a good idea, it doesn't play that well as expected.
01:00:903 (2) - remove nc
01:05:903 (5,1) - nazi: move a bit to the right to stack better with 01:05:412 (3) - lol
01:08:354 (2,3) - again another big jump with no apparent reason, neither being on the kiai can explain it the big spacing for me
01:13:844 (1,2,3,4) - i feel like a spaced stream like that doesnt make much sense with map, it is overdone if u ask me. do it like here 00:06:393 (1,2,3,4) -
01:14:628 (2) - ctrl g flows better imo
01:18:942 (1) - nc for different vocals

good luck

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Renaylria

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Renaylria 2017-09-06T00:05:56+00:00

Hello Hello~ Here from M4M

Normal

00:06:393 (2) - Due to stacking this note is slightly farther away than it should be.
00:15:020 (4,5) - Object 4 is a bit to low. Nudge up a little bit.
00:24:040 (1,2) - These two objects are not quite parallel. It's tiny I know.
00:25:609 (1) - Same thing (If this is meant to be intentional, please make it more apparent.
01:04:824 (3,4,5,6) - Angles aren't quite even.

Hard

00:04:824 (4,5) - Spacing is slightly larger to prior notes
00:05:609 (1,2) - Due to the 1/2 gap instead of 1/1, I feel like these notes should be a bit closer. They're not very different from the previous spacing.
00:28:354 (5,6,1) - Object 1 is spaced to close.
01:10:314 (3,4,5) - I don't feel an intensity change that would warrant this uncomfortable movement. Personally I suggest zig zags, but this may prove difficult with that spacing.

Hyper

00:05:609 (2) - Stack ontop of 00:04:824 (4) might look better?
00:08:158 (5,2) - Could be stacked?
00:21:491 (4,1) - I know this is hyper, but this might prove a bit difficult to read. Try stacking Object 4 on the slider head?
00:32:667 (3,5,6,1) - Could be stacked? (Turn on stacking...)
01:01:295 (3,3) - Could be stacked?
01:07:177 (3,1) - Could be stacked?
01:10:314 (3,4,5) - 4 juts out a little
01:16:981 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could repeat the idea you had here? 01:13:844 (5,6,7,8,1) -
01:18:550 (2) - Slider end doesn't follow into the hitcircle. Nudge up.

If your trying to not stack rhythms then here's a place where you did stack them:
01:04:236 (4,3) -

Insane

00:40:118 (1,2) - The jumps were spinning counter clockwise. perhaps follow that trend with this jump as well?
00:47:765 (2,3,4) - Enable stacking and fix that star please.
00:48:942 (9,2) - Could be stacked?
00:50:511 (1,5) - Hit circle and slider end could be stacked?
01:01:099 (3,3) - Could be stacked
01:07:177 (3,4,5) - Fix the triangle please

Alola!!

00:06:066 (1) - ctrl+G this perhaps? The time to jump is so low this is really easy to Sliderbreak on.
00:19:138 (3,3) - Could be stacked (slider end)
00:20:314 (5,6,7) - 7 isn't quite parallel with 5 and 6. Nudge down a little.
00:48:158 (4,8) - Could be stacked?
00:50:510 (1,5) - Could be stacked? (slider end)
01:00:118 (1,1) - This can prove a little hard to read with object 1NC being hidden under the slider.
01:01:491 (1,3) - Could be stacked?
01:15:805 (1) - Nudge a little right for better blanket? (You'll have to adjust that whole combo for this so... It might be better to adjust the slider anchor instead)
01:20:707 (1) - I feel like putting the slider end on a blue tick would work (and maybe sound) better.

So I've gather on alot of your diffs your not stacking for a reason? The places where I listed "could be stacked" Are places that weren't deliberate with not stacking (For the most part) so maybe take that advice backwards? lol

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