As requested,
another 3 min song for me to mod I would like to say that, you forgot to give kudosu to gina91189 mod's post so do that first.
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General]
- Hitsound is really loud and drown out the music. Lower the volume. No higher than 50% volume for normal hitsound. I also notice that you use 70% volume the whole song. I suggest to try to variate a bit and do 60% here 50% there and so forth. I also feel you are using clap the wrong way, clap should be put only on white ticks in general. Sound really weird on red ticks / other colors tick.
- Try to keep break consistent across all difficulties.If you don't map something in Normal, don't map it in Insane.
- I also see useless timing point, remove them.
- I generally don't mod maps with hitsound problem as they bug me the whole time playing the map so, sorry if I suddenly said, I can't mod this anymore or so.
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Normal]
- Slider tick rate 0.5 is now unrankable so change to 1.- +1 hp drain and +1 od, quite low for a Normal.
- Remove countdown, you don't have this in your other difficulties.00:04:188 (2.3.4.5.6.7) - Sound a lot better if you move them 2 tick backward so that it is on the white. I also suggest making (2.3) a slider and 4,5) a slider. Then at 00:05:402, a repeating slider (end it where 7 is). Finally, remove (6.7).
http://puu.sh/6knb00:15:286 (2.3.4.5.6.7) - ^ Same thing here.
00:20:835 (2.3.4.5.6.7) - ^ Try to make variety, so try a longer slider than normal, or repeating slider > hit circle > slider > slider. There are many combinations.
Ok, I will stop here. Basically the problem with this map is this pattern 00:04:188 (2.3.4.5.6.7). Fix for the whole map and your map should be better. Don't reuse the same pattern again and again as it'll be boring so try to do something interesting rather than what I suggested.Also try to fix hitsound.
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Broetchen's Hard]
- Same comment about the hitsound.
- Same slider velocity as Insane?
00:15:286 (3.4.5) - Move this further away, I keep thinking I have to hit this earlier than normal. I also suggest a slider for (4.5) and putting it at 00:16:326. This rhythm feel really weird so should be better if you do this.
00:22:396 (1) - Place this further away, even through I can hit it, it feel really weird for there to be 3x jump and than all the sudden it is 1.2x. It break the flow quite a bit.
00:32:974 (2.3) - Ctrl + R (reverse selection), play better for me, but if you can, try to make this pattern a lot more readable, perhaps higher distant snapping so you can see the number as it is hidden due to the hitburst.
00:53:610 (x) - Break is so long, I suggest you map here like the other difficulties.
01:13:378 (3.4) - Unexpected jump, just space it out normally.
01:15:806 (1,2,3) - Like this for beat placement
http://puu.sh/6kqM. Really weird what you did.
01:18:581 - 01 :21:182 - Would give a nice effect if you increase the slider velocity here (so that you can add more repeat to the slider while not having an extremely short slider) and use more finish / change hitsound to normal.
01:35:228 (1.2 1.2) - This jump in this seciton could be better, but for now I suggest placing the note like this so that it flow nicer.
http://puu.sh/6krP02:33:493 (x) - Long break, map here like the other difficulties.
01:46:326 (1.1.1.1) - Make this kick slider more readable so try placing it like this
http://puu.sh/6ks9 http://puu.sh/6ksb.
01:53:957 (1) - Nicer to end on a white beat so add a repeat and finish on that repeat.
02:40:777 (4.5.6.7.8) - This whole section is weird. I have no idea how to fix it so can you try something else?
02:43:552 (3.4,5,6,7) - ^
02:46:326 (3.4.5.6.7) - ^ Try not to use the same pattern more than two times, so come up with a new pattern.
02:49:101 (3.4.5.6.7) - ^
02:51:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Come up with a new pattern here.
02:54:651 (3.4.5.6.7) - ^
02:56:904 (3.4.5.6.7) - I guess you can keep this one.
Pretty nice actually, this song reuse a lot of the same rhythm so it must had been difficult to come up with different interesting patterns, so good job. Also need tweak in hitsound.
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Insane]
- Do something else for all (almost all, I leave it to your judgement) the kick sliders (sliders with more than one repeat), they do not play well at all. I will not mention them in my mod.
- I notice box pattern, try to change them, will not mention them all in my mod.
- +1 ar feel a lot better.
01:03:320 (1-8) - A bit hard to read and not too fond of this jump. I suggest something like the previous combo at 01:01:933.
01:13:552 (4,5,6,7) - Do something more interesting than box pattern.
This is quite solid, I'm quite surprised. Other than kick sliders and hitsound this map is good.
What you need to work on is hitsound and your Normal difficulty. Both hitsound and Normal feel quite weird right now, but the mapping for Hard and Insane is quite good. I can't star for this reason, but if you fix this I say this is good enough for rank.
Good luck!