the patterns are extremely cool, although they don't seem to at times match the rhythm of the song. i mean, i'm absolutely guilty of the same issue so i know hard it can be to fluently match the rhythmical complexities of a song. and since i'm not too much of a mapper, i'll keep my criticism relatively brief.
watch out for stuff like this: 00:12:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this whole death stream is cool; but there isn't any significant part of the song that calls for this stream. if you listen closely; the white tick the stream initially stands on what should start with a single, then a triple and then more variation as the song goes on.
there are some more silly examples of this kinda stuff, but i won't mention them all because i'm really leaving a comment here to tell ya how much i appreciate this kinda mapping. stuff like ...
00:20:796 (8) - this slider is AWESOME.
00:22:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this flows super well and looks super rad.
00:35:296 (4,5,6,7,1) - this is probably one of my favorite parts of the map. it looks rad, it plays rad, and it ignites such a rad impact of the song's chord. but here's a quick suggestion~ you should try experimenting a little bit with adding inherited points at the end of these kinda 1/4 sliders with the volume at 5%. that way you can implement cool kick sliders in yer maps while still maintaining following the 1/2 rhythmic beats.
00:37:962 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - i love this transition here.
00:42:462 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - heckin' love it.
00:49:796 (1) - HECKIN' LOVE IT.
00:51:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i looOOOVE the gradual increase of spacing here.
there's a ton more that's awesome in this map; but i think you get the overall message i'm trying to get out. awesome map dude; i'd love to see more stuff like this in the future.
