96neko - Uso no Hibana [OsuMania]

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Damaree
Hii hii. . . . came for M4M request w/here

Mostly here are my suggestions. I didn't put much explanation in then move things, well that means for the flow and balance
Heartbreak[SC]
00:03:840 (3840|3) - would be good to remove this
00:06:872 (6872|2,7031|3) - ctrl + j? col 4 is much empty in your current
00:13:733 (13733|2,13893|3) - ctrl + j
00:13:574 (13574|3) - ^ if applied, mov col3
00:37:350 (37350|1) - mov col1
00:36:712 (36712|2) - col4
00:41:180 (41180|1) - col1
00:49:478 (49478|2) - col4
01:02:084 (62084|3) - maybe mov col1? for balance thing, well ofc rearrange the short LN ones
01:17:882 (77882|1) - col1
01:20:435 (80435|3) - add 1?
Fake [MX]
00:02:244 - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099158, avoid doing same thing as SC
00:05:276 - to 00:15:489 - the patterns are exactly the same w/SC diff, well can you at least repattern the regular notes?
00:40:223 (40223|2) - mov col4
00:47:563 (47563|2) - col1
00:51:074 (51074|1,51712|0) - ctrl + j?
00:56:978 - 00:59:531 - add note for strong sound(do also same sound above)
01:04:638 (64638|2,64797|3,64957|2) - switch cols
Delusional. [HD]
00:02:244 (2244|1,2244|0,2404|2,2404|1,2563|2,2563|3,2723|3,2723|0) - same as MX, rearrange
00:06:872 (6872|2,7510|0,9425|1,11978|3,12616|0) - better to avoid this kind of pattern in HD diff, make it much comfortable.
00:25:382 (25382|3,25422|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|2,25582|1,25622|3,25662|2,25701|1,25701|0) - I do personally think the 1/8 snap in HD is too much. Maybe make it 1/6 or much better 1/4
00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|1,35795|2,35834|0,35874|1,35914|2,35914|3) - ^(will stop poing out from now on)
00:38:787 (38787|3,38787|2) - maybe mov col1&3
01:26:499 - im kinda disturbed w/this part, almost same as MX & SC. Well its not that bad/not allowed or anything, just a bit concern
Shameful. [NM]
00:05:276 (5276|2,5435|0) - ctrl + j<--1st suggestion
00:05:276 (5276|2,5276|3) - mov col1&3 and 00:05:435 (5435|0) - col4, 00:05:595 (5595|1) - col1<--2nd
00:16:765 (16765|0) - col4 & 00:16:925 (16925|2) - col2
00:21:393 (21393|0) - col2
00:25:382 (25382|0,25462|1,25542|2,25622|3) - just make them LN
00:45:090 (45090|1,45170|2) - maybe mov 1step at left
00:59:531 (59531|2,59691|0) - switch cols for following the stair feel sound
01:25:382 (85382|2) - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099465 for alternation of pattern below
Unrequited. [EZ]
00:02:244 (2244|1,2404|2,2563|3,2723|0) - ctrl + h
00:17:563 (17563|0) - mov col2
00:23:946 (23946|0) - col3
00:35:435 (35435|1,35595|2) - ctrl + h
00:52:191 (52191|2,52510|0) - ctrl + j
01:11:659 (71659|2,71978|1) - maybe mov 1step to right
Well that's it, hope it helps. . . :):)
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No_sync

chouyaa wrote:

halo sync,
i wanna mod map ur map, but i think IRC mod will be better
poke me in game when u are online
thanks <3
Wrong map lol, anyway thx for the mod in the other map xD

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JooF12 wrote:

Hii hii. . . . came for M4M request w/here hi!

Mostly here are my suggestions. I didn't put much explanation in then move things, well that means for the flow and balance hm ok
Heartbreak[SC]
00:03:840 (3840|3) - would be good to remove this I rather keep it. Snare roll end have 3 notes. Keep.
00:06:872 (6872|2,7031|3) - ctrl + j? col 4 is much empty in your current Keep, now the repetitions ends are difficult only here. Keep.
00:13:733 (13733|2,13893|3) - ctrl + j I don't see an improvement here. Keep.
00:13:574 (13574|3) - ^ if applied, mov col3 ^ ^
00:37:350 (37350|1) - mov col1 Following vocals here the stacks are intentional. Keep.
00:36:712 (36712|2) - col4 ^ ^
00:41:180 (41180|1) - col1 ^ ^
00:49:478 (49478|2) - col4 ^ ^
01:02:084 (62084|3) - maybe mov col1? for balance thing, well ofc rearrange the short LN ones LNs intentionally placed in that column, because of the repetition. Keep.
01:17:882 (77882|1) - col1 Repetition of the whistle there. Keep.
01:20:435 (80435|3) - add 1? Is only whistle, not kick or tom, as far i can hear... Keep.
Fake [MX]
00:02:244 - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099158, avoid doing same thing as SC For now, I can't find a better pattern that fits as well like that, and for both diffs. Keep.
00:05:276 - to 00:15:489 - the patterns are exactly the same w/SC diff, well can you at least repattern the regular notes? Taking your suggestion... for those repetitive ends i can make it easier ;D Applied!
00:40:223 (40223|2) - mov col4 Keeping the current arrange i don't see an improvement. Keep.
00:47:563 (47563|2) - col1 Rearranged... Changed!
00:51:074 (51074|1,51712|0) - ctrl + j? I don't see an improvement... Keep.
00:56:978 - 00:59:531 - add note for strong sound(do also same sound above) Changed all that section to be a different from Heartbreak... Changed!
01:04:638 (64638|2,64797|3,64957|2) - switch cols ^ ^
Delusional. [HD]
00:02:244 (2244|1,2244|0,2404|2,2404|1,2563|2,2563|3,2723|3,2723|0) - same as MX, rearrange Reading from EZ to Heartbreak so i don't see the MX still.. . . . Now i saw the MX. Yes i can rearrange them. Changed!
00:06:872 (6872|2,7510|0,9425|1,11978|3,12616|0) - better to avoid this kind of pattern in HD diff, make it much comfortable. Alright,
For HD, i think is reasonable, i'll spread them.
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00:25:382 (25382|3,25422|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|2,25582|1,25622|3,25662|2,25701|1,25701|0) - I do personally think the 1/8 snap in HD is too much. Maybe make it 1/6 or much better 1/4 I rather keep them for now. Keep.
00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|1,35795|2,35834|0,35874|1,35914|2,35914|3) - ^(will stop poing out from now on) There's only three of those xD. But i will change them if is really too hard if more mods say that. Keep.
00:38:787 (38787|3,38787|2) - maybe mov col1&3 I prefer the current arrange, fits more. Keep.
01:26:499 - im kinda disturbed w/this part, almost same as MX & SC. Well its not that bad/not allowed or anything, just a bit concern Is how i mapped the cymbal through all the difficulty (3 notes), but yes i can reduce them and make them exactly like the NM one. For now, that option seems wrong in my opinion. Keep.
Shameful. [NM]
00:05:276 (5276|2,5435|0) - ctrl + j<--1st suggestion I rather keep the trill. Keep.
00:05:276 (5276|2,5276|3) - mov col1&3 and 00:05:435 (5435|0) - col4, 00:05:595 (5595|1) - col1<--2nd Rearranged. Changed!
00:16:765 (16765|0) - col4 & 00:16:925 (16925|2) - col2 I will keep the current arrange. Doesn't fit in my opinion. Keep.
00:21:393 (21393|0) - col2 00:21:074 (21074|0) - moved to |1| Changed!
00:25:382 (25382|0,25462|1,25542|2,25622|3) - just make them LN Too easy in my opinion. Keep.
00:45:090 (45090|1,45170|2) - maybe mov 1step at left 00:45:329 (45329|3) - moved to |1| Changed!
00:59:531 (59531|2,59691|0) - switch cols for following the stair feel sound 00:59:212 (59212|2) - Move to |1| Changed!
01:25:382 (85382|2) - make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099465 for alternation of pattern below Doesn't fit for that part in my opinion,
also the pattern ends more faster than before so that's because the "bursts" instead of alternation.
Keep.
Unrequited. [EZ]
00:02:244 (2244|1,2404|2,2563|3,2723|0) - ctrl + h It look weird. Keep.
00:17:563 (17563|0) - mov col2 Rearranged. Changed!
00:23:946 (23946|0) - col3 I rather keep them spaced. Keep.
00:35:435 (35435|1,35595|2) - ctrl + h Will be too hard to put the note just after the LN end. Keep.
00:52:191 (52191|2,52510|0) - ctrl + j I don't see an improvement. Keep.
01:11:659 (71659|2,71978|1) - maybe mov 1step to right I rather keep the current arrange. Keep.
Well that's it, hope it helps. . . :):)Thanks for the mod, MX diff was changed a lot after my selfmod. So thanks again! :)
Thanks for your help!


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Syadow-
Marked for mod x33
sorry for very very late mod :'vvvvv
00:03:521 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284414 , 00:03:521 - 00:03:680 - remove this cuz they aren't loud

00:16:127 (16127|1,16287|3) - maybe remove this n 00:15:808 - add note here, same sound 00:17:563 (17563|0) -

00:17:084 - loud sound owo

00:18:361 - 00:19:638 - 00:20:914 - 00:22:191 - 00:23:467 - ^^ similar

00:21:393 (21393|0) - remove this n 00:21:233 (21233|2) - change to LN for guitar

00:22:829 - add LN for guitar

00:24:425 - i like this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284445

00:26:499 (26499|3) - 00:27:776 (27776|0) - etc what LN for ? it not fit imo, i suggest to make only 1/1 beat here

01:06:074 (66074|2) - remove n 01:05:914 (65914|3) - change to LN

01:21:872 - till 01:25:063 - i suggest to make 1/1 cuz 01:25:063 - start here the beat more intense
00:03:521 (3521|0,3600|1,3680|3,3760|2) - u can cover this with single LN cuz the current pattern really painful for nm :'v

00:15:808 - why :'vvvvv it has loud sound

00:17:084 - 00:18:361 - 00:19:638 - 00:20:914 - 00:22:191 - 00:23:467 -

00:22:829 - better to add LN for guitar

00:45:090 (45090|1) - u can ignore this since it not loud

00:45:542 (45542|2) - 1/4

01:25:063 - make it more fun http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284533 :3333
00:03:840 (3840|1,3920|2) - better to ctrl h

00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2) - aw aw aw :vvvv

00:15:808 - etc. this :'''vvv whyy

00:25:382 - maybe make a stair pattern to read easily

00:35:595 - ^

01:06:233 - ^

01:16:446 - better to change into burst pattern 1324
00:15:808 - etc. same problem owo

00:35:276 (35276|2) - move to col 4

00:58:893 (58893|1,59052|2) - ctrl h
00:00:170 - u can map the guitar in this part, use this point http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284648 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284651

00:15:808 (15808|1) - double

00:17:084 (17084|3,17563|3,17723|0) - double

00:18:361 (18361|2) - 00:19:638 (19638|0,20116|0,20276|3) - 00:20:914 (20914|3) - 00:22:191 (22191|0) - 00:23:467 (23467|0) - ^
tbh i can't mod LN map :'vvv

Good Luck >w< take my star /o/
Litharrale
M4M (it's finally here! sorry for the wait)
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00:00:170 (170|0,170|3) - Dont do this double hitsounding thing. If you want it to be louder, just make one of them louder
00:02:723 (2723|3,2723|0) - Theres a tom here as well, with sampleset you can add it
00:03:760 (3760|1,3920|1) - Why are these singles while the others are doubles? moreover, why is this 00:03:840 (3840|3,3840|0,3840|2) - a triple (remove the duplicate hitsounds btw) while the stronger sound here 00:03:999 (3999|3,3999|2) - is just a double?
00:04:638 (4638|2,4638|3,4957|0,4957|1) - more duplicate hitsounds, gonna stop mentioning them here
00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2) - Different pitches so consider moving the one to a different column to reflect that. Perhaps the first one to col 4
00:07:191 (7191|0,7350|0) - same here
00:25:422 (25422|3,25462|2,25502|1,25542|0,25582|2,25622|1,25662|3) - I really don't like this here. Not only is the piano slide way faster than 1/6, you also set the player up to expect fast drums rather than a 1/6 stair
lots of duplicate hitsounding again
it's pretty clear that this diff is just the MX with a few notes deleted or moved around a bit instead of an actual standalone diff so there's not a lot of point to me modding it.
00:10:382 (10382|3,11021|0) - What are these mapping? if it's what I think it is, then 00:11:659 (11659|3) - should have an LN as well and 00:11:978 (11978|2) - shouldn't
00:22:670 (22670|1) - So much missed potential here across all the difficulties. You could make a really cool section focusing on the cool drums but instead you just put a note every half beat and and call it a day
Eh this diff is just single note spam as well without a lot of thought put in



higher diffs are significantly better than the lower diffs
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Litharrale wrote:

M4M (it's finally here! sorry for the wait)
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00:00:170 (170|0,170|3) - Dont do this double hitsounding thing. If you want it to be louder, just make one of them louder ... In my opinion is correct. Both sum to 40%. Keep.
00:02:723 (2723|3,2723|0) - Theres a tom here as well, with sampleset you can add it I can't hear it until now, replacing the current then. Changed!
00:03:760 (3760|1,3920|1) - Why are these singles while the others are doubles? moreover, why is this 00:03:840 (3840|3,3840|0,3840|2) - a triple (remove the duplicate hitsounds btw) while the stronger sound here 00:03:999 (3999|3,3999|2) - is just a double? Let's explain then: 00:03:840 (3840|3,3840|0,3840|2,3920|1,3999|3,3999|2) - After the triple, it sounds pretty different than before, 00:03:760 (3760|1,3920|1) - So following the stream with these simples to keep the strain and using a different pattern meanwhile fits with the music, and 00:03:999 (3999|2,3999|3) - for me it isn't a stronger sound that needs more notes (also, i don't want jacks there). So at the end: 00:03:521 (3521|0,3521|3,3600|2,3600|1,3680|3,3680|0,3760|1,3840|3,3840|0,3840|2,3920|1,3999|2,3999|3) - Playability. Adding that in my opinion, this "other" pattern doesn't look good: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8222399 And about duplicated hitsounds just read above, I don't see an issue if the hitsounds have the same total volume at the end. 25%+25% = 50% etcetc. Keep.
00:04:638 (4638|2,4638|3,4957|0,4957|1) - more duplicate hitsounds, gonna stop mentioning them here Just read above. Keep.
00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2) - Different pitches so consider moving the one to a different column to reflect that. Perhaps the first one to col 4 I don't think so. I can't hear the difference. I think the current arrange is good enough. Keep.
00:07:191 (7191|0,7350|0) - same here ^ ^
00:25:422 (25422|3,25462|2,25502|1,25542|0,25582|2,25622|1,25662|3) - I really don't like this here. Not only is the piano slide way faster than 1/6, you also set the player up to expect fast drums rather than a 1/6 stair In my opinion fits really well. Keep.
lots of duplicate hitsounding again duplicate hitsounding? Wait, You rather mean "mapping" (continues below) Reply on MX.
it's pretty clear that this diff is just the MX with a few notes deleted or moved around a bit instead of an actual standalone diff so there's not a lot of point to me modding it. For me add/delete few notes or moving around a "bit" is a big difference, but i appreciate your advice.
00:10:382 (10382|3,11021|0) - What are these mapping? if it's what I think it is, then 00:11:659 (11659|3) - should have an LN as well and 00:11:978 (11978|2) - shouldn't 00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2,7191|0,7350|0,9106|1,9265|1,11659|3,11818|3,12297|0,12457|0) - and so on: Guitar riffs. 00:10:382 (10382|3,11021|0) - These two like the others LNs are guitar riffs too. My intention was to make a difference between the faster ones and the more slower ones. Using 1/2 LNs instead of 1/2 stacks (2 notes followed) will be more difficult in this difficulty, so i rather use this pattern. Keep.
00:22:670 (22670|1) - So much missed potential here across all the difficulties. You could make a really cool section focusing on the cool drums but instead you just put a note every half beat and and call it a day
Eh this diff is just single note spam as well without a lot of thought put in ...even you can hear the whistles clearly. Well, let's see how it goes now... guitarrale. joke. (changed all diffs!) Changed!



higher diffs are significantly better than the lower diffs Thx for mod.
Thanks for your help!


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Syadow- wrote:

Marked for mod x33
sorry for very very late mod :'vvvvv For me this isn't late, thx!
00:03:521 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284414 , 00:03:521 - 00:03:680 - remove this cuz they aren't loud Removed those two notes at start. Different pattern for the first two notes though, after that is like the screenshot. Changed!

00:16:127 (16127|1,16287|3) - maybe remove this n 00:15:808 - add note here, same sound 00:17:563 (17563|0) - Right, hihats are more clear than those whistles. Applied!

00:17:084 - loud sound owo ^ ^

00:18:361 - 00:19:638 - 00:20:914 - 00:22:191 - 00:23:467 - ^^ similar ^ ^

00:21:393 (21393|0) - remove this n <- That's a 1/4 snap. No notes there. 00:21:233 (21233|2) - change to LN for guitar Added. That means add the guitar in next diffs... lol. Added!

00:22:829 - add LN for guitar ^ ^

00:24:425 - i like this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284445 Nice one. Applied!

00:26:499 (26499|3) - 00:27:776 (27776|0) - etc what LN for ? it not fit imo, i suggest to make only 1/1 beat here Changed to 1/1 then,
less confusing.
Changed!

01:06:074 (66074|2) - remove n Emphazise tom drum there, yes. Removed! 01:05:914 (65914|3) - change to LN Hope isn't too hard now... Applied!

01:21:872 - till 01:25:063 - i suggest to make 1/1 cuz 01:25:063 - start here the beat more intense Alright, not completely but i remove a lot of notes. Changed!
00:03:521 (3521|0,3600|1,3680|3,3760|2) - u can cover this with single LN cuz the current pattern really painful for nm :'v Like the Easy one, yes i can change it. Applied!

00:15:808 - why :'vvvvv it has loud sound Yes, i give priority to those whistles instead of the hihat sounds. My bad! Changed!

00:17:084 - 00:18:361 - 00:19:638 - 00:20:914 - 00:22:191 - 00:23:467 - All applied. ^

00:22:829 - better to add LN for guitar Yes, Already added by me. Applied!

00:45:090 (45090|1) - u can ignore this since it not loud Seems good. I can arrange better now Applied!

00:45:542 (45542|2) - 1/4 For me is 1/6. Leaving like this for now... Keep.

01:25:063 - make it more fun http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284533 :3333 Well if is fun, not too hard in my opinion so... Applied!
00:03:840 (3840|1,3920|2) - better to ctrl h I like that. Alright. Changed!

00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2) - aw aw aw :vvvv Alright, not 1/4 LNs here then. Changed!

00:15:808 - etc. this :'''vvv whyy Already explained on NM. lol Changed!

00:25:382 - maybe make a stair pattern to read easily Alright, the end of the stream will look odd but i will give priority to read better the stream. Changed!

00:35:595 - ^ ^ ^

01:06:233 - ^ ^ ^

01:16:446 - better to change into burst pattern 1324 Rearranged. Changed!
00:15:808 - etc. same problem owo ok Applied!

00:35:276 (35276|2) - move to col 4 I don't like so much that stack, but for repetition, i will move it. Changed!

00:58:893 (58893|1,59052|2) - ctrl h Great! Applied!
00:00:170 - u can map the guitar in this part, use this point http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284648 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8284651 Nice, I erase a note, so isn't so hard there. Applied!

00:15:808 (15808|1) - double Alright, but maybe is too hard? I will add them to be consistent with that part. Added!

00:17:084 (17084|3,17563|3,17723|0) - double ^ ^

00:18:361 (18361|2) - 00:19:638 (19638|0,20116|0,20276|3) - 00:20:914 (20914|3) - 00:22:191 (22191|0) - 00:23:467 (23467|0) - ^ ^ ^
tbh i can't mod LN map :'vvv

Good Luck >w< take my star /o/ Thank you so much, Syadow >///<
Thanks for your help!


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Tofu1222
[EZ]
  1. 00:10:382 (10382|3) - This LN is unnecessary cuz it does not convey the extended sound of elec guitar
  2. 00:23:148 (23148|3) - make this to a LN like 00:22:829 (22829|0) -


[NM]
  1. 00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2,7191|0,7350|0,9106|1,9265|1,11659|3,11818|3,12297|0,12457|0) - These are exactly of different pitches, so I suggest arrange them to different columns
  2. 00:37:031 (37031|2,37191|2,37350|1,37510|1) - 00:37:829 (37829|0,37989|0,38148|3,38308|3) - Pay attention to the pattern like these two. I don't really get your idea that what exactly you are following cuz according to pitch though, they are definitely not in the same column
  3. 00:57:457 (57457|2) - if this LN is for the guitar, then you should end it at 00:58:414 -
  4. 00:58:893 - I suggest make a LN from here to note the guitar sound like what you did in this part, which make it more complete


[HD]
  1. 00:03:521 (3521|0,3521|1) - I dont see need to double, make it single cuz no emphasized sound here
  2. 00:22:829 (22829|0,22989|3) - seems wrong for guitar sound. 00:22:829 (22829|0) - this one extends to 00:22:829 (22829|0) - and the other start from 00:22:829 (22829|0) -
  3. 00:58:574 (58574|0) - this one should be extended to 00:58:813 - like this 00:57:935 (57935|2) -
  4. 01:03:521 (63521|3,63680|3) - there seems no need to form a shield, so separate the single note to another column will be better



[Heartbreak.]
  1. Why not add [SC] in the diff name of this one? Now it seems not so consistent with only this not having a diff name like [SC]
  2. 00:04:159 (4159|0,4159|1,4239|3,4239|2,4318|1,4318|2,4318|0) - I wanna remind you that this kind of pattern is not good to play and suggest u delete one on the triple
  3. 00:03:760 (3760|3,3760|2,3840|3,3840|0,3840|1) - and also this, maybe delete 00:03:760 (3760|3) - will be nice
  4. 00:35:595 (35595|2,35595|1,35635|3,35675|0,35715|1,35755|3,35755|2,35795|0,35834|3,35834|1,35874|2,35914|3,35914|1,35914|0) - this section is not wrong, but for me to play it is too dense for such difficulty. I suggest u give up one element that u catch in this section which is better to play
  5. 00:45:967 (45967|0,45967|3,45967|2) - it's not good to play for one thing, and what's more this does not have a cymbal like 00:46:127 - so ibetter double
  6. 00:56:260 (56260|0,56260|1,56340|1) - u may also get my idea then lol, here so 00:56:340 (56340|1) - to one column left, and delete 00:56:260 (56260|0) -
  7. 01:06:074 (66074|3,66233|1,66233|2,66273|0,66313|3,66353|2,66393|0,66393|1,66433|3,66473|0,66473|2,66513|1,66552|3,66552|2,66552|0) - same thing lol
  8. 01:16:685 (76685|1,76685|2,76765|1) - u get my idea right? owo
  9. 01:22:191 (82191|2,82191|1,82191|3) - 01:22:829 (82829|1,82829|0,82829|2) - 01:23:467 (83467|2,83467|1,83467|0) - 01:24:106 (84106|3,84106|1,84106|2) - 01:24:744 (84744|2,84744|3,84744|0) - these sounds are not strong enough to triple, double would be better
  10. 01:26:021 (86021|2,86021|0,86021|1) - still make into double



I intended to mod the first 3 diffs but I still take a look at your highest one lol
Anyway well done I think! HS is also nice. Good luck for ranked!
and hope my mods will be useful for you ;)
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Tofu1222 wrote:

[EZ]
  1. 00:10:382 (10382|3) - This LN is unnecessary cuz it does not convey the extended sound of elec guitar I think there is a vocal extended like *a a a aa* or something like that, what can confuse the sound that i'm emphasizing. Only the guitar riff here, any extension will be confused with the vocal. Keep.
  2. 00:23:148 (23148|3) - make this to a LN like 00:22:829 (22829|0) - Sounds good, better for follow the guitar at least with this LN. Applied!


[NM]
  1. 00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2,7191|0,7350|0,9106|1,9265|1,11659|3,11818|3,12297|0,12457|0) - These are exactly of different pitches, so I suggest arrange them to different columns I already hear this before, alright moving! Applied!
  2. 00:37:031 (37031|2,37191|2,37350|1,37510|1) - 00:37:829 (37829|0,37989|0,38148|3,38308|3) - Pay attention to the pattern like these two. I don't really get your idea that what exactly you are following cuz according to pitch though, they are definitely not in the same column Following the vocal here. Rearranged with less stacks... Changed!
  3. 00:57:457 (57457|2) - if this LN is for the guitar, then you should end it at 00:58:414 - Yes, that guitar sound ends there, changing! Applied!
  4. 00:58:893 - I suggest make a LN from here to note the guitar sound like what you did in this part, which make it more complete I skip this one, added! Changed!


[HD]
  1. 00:03:521 (3521|0,3521|1) - I dont see need to double, make it single cuz no emphasized sound here Right, erased one note Changed!
  2. 00:22:829 (22829|0,22989|3) - seems wrong for guitar sound. 00:22:829 (22829|0) - this one extends to 00:22:829 (22829|0) - and the other start from 00:22:829 (22829|0) - ...I see the same time three times?? Anyway, the guitar riff starts on 00:22:749 and ends on 00:22:909 - when the other LN starts. It was bad snapped, i think that was what are you saying lol Changed!
  3. 00:58:574 (58574|0) - this one should be extended to 00:58:813 - like this 00:57:935 (57935|2) - I need to rearrange a bit but is correct. Changed!
  4. 01:03:521 (63521|3,63680|3) - there seems no need to form a shield, so separate the single note to another column will be better Moved one column to left Changed!



[Heartbreak.]
  1. Why not add [SC] in the diff name of this one? Now it seems not so consistent with only this not having a diff name like [SC] I read that you can put any name to the last difficulty, but yes i will add it just for consistency... Changed!
  2. 00:04:159 (4159|0,4159|1,4239|3,4239|2,4318|1,4318|2,4318|0) - I wanna remind you that this kind of pattern is not good to play and suggest u delete one on the triple I don't see it as an issue. For now, i will move the note on the triple to be less dense on the central columns. Changed!
  3. 00:03:760 (3760|3,3760|2,3840|3,3840|0,3840|1) - and also this, maybe delete 00:03:760 (3760|3) - will be nice Erased, less effort now also with the change of above. Changed!
  4. 00:35:595 (35595|2,35595|1,35635|3,35675|0,35715|1,35755|3,35755|2,35795|0,35834|3,35834|1,35874|2,35914|3,35914|1,35914|0) - this section is not wrong, but for me to play it is too dense for such difficulty. I suggest u give up one element that u catch in this section which is better to play If i erase the snares (chords there) will look like the MX difficulty, for now i will keep them. Keep.
  5. 00:45:967 (45967|0,45967|3,45967|2) - it's not good to play for one thing, and what's more this does not have a cymbal like 00:46:127 - so ibetter double Reduced. Changed!
  6. 00:56:260 (56260|0,56260|1,56340|1) - u may also get my idea then lol, here so 00:56:340 (56340|1) - to one column left, and delete 00:56:260 (56260|0) - I prefer to keep the current pattern, since the end of the stream is with that jack. Also, i don't prefer a direction change there so sudden. Keep.
  7. 01:06:074 (66074|3,66233|1,66233|2,66273|0,66313|3,66353|2,66393|0,66393|1,66433|3,66473|0,66473|2,66513|1,66552|3,66552|2,66552|0) - same thing lol Will look like the MX diff, explained above. Keep.
  8. 01:16:685 (76685|1,76685|2,76765|1) - u get my idea right? owo ^ ^
  9. 01:22:191 (82191|2,82191|1,82191|3) - 01:22:829 (82829|1,82829|0,82829|2) - 01:23:467 (83467|2,83467|1,83467|0) - 01:24:106 (84106|3,84106|1,84106|2) - 01:24:744 (84744|2,84744|3,84744|0) - these sounds are not strong enough to triple, double would be better ^ ^
  10. 01:26:021 (86021|2,86021|0,86021|1) - still make into double ^ ^



I intended to mod the first 3 diffs but I still take a look at your highest one lol
Anyway well done I think! HS is also nice. Good luck for ranked!
and hope my mods will be useful for you ;)Thank you so much, really appreciated! :)
Thanks for your help!


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Amiichii
Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

  • [SC]
  1. 00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2,6872|2) - i dont have idea what did you follow here. If that is synth, i think the synth have different pitch. if you follow guitar, I think should be it will be long Jack :/
    00:07:191 (7191|1,7350|1) - 00:09:106 (9106|3,9265|3) - 00:11:659 (11659|1,11818|1) - 00:12:297 (12297|2,12457|2) -
  2. 00:15:090 (15090|1,15130|2,15170|1) - what is this? 00:15:130 (15130|2) - this is no sound
  3. 00:24:584 (24584|3,25063|0) - delete this. since actually the sound earlier than 00:24:425 (24425|1,24425|0,24505|2,24505|3) -
  4. 00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1,25422|3,25462|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|3,25542|2,25582|1,25622|0,25622|3,25662|2) - spam SR lol. delete that double note pls. to make it playbable
  5. 00:35:595 (35595|2,35595|1,35635|3,35675|0,35715|1,35755|3,35755|2,35795|0,35834|1,35834|3,35874|2) - ^
  6. 00:45:010 - add note for hithat?
  7. 00:57:616 (57616|3,57776|3,58255|0,58414|0) - 01:00:170 (60170|0,60329|0) - same as before
  8. 01:06:233 (66233|1,66233|2,66273|0,66313|3,66353|2,66393|1,66393|0,66433|3,66473|0,66473|2,66513|1) - hmmm

    [MX]
  9. 00:24:744 (24744|0) - move to 3?
  10. 00:25:223 (25223|3) - to 2
  11. 01:00:648 (60648|2) - New pitch New LN

    [HD]
  12. 00:21:233 - 00:21:393 - 00:21:552 - 00:21:712 - add note consistency with 00:18:680 (18680|3,18840|0,18999|2,19159|1) - and for keep the rytem of beat
  13. 00:23:946 - 00:24:106 - add note for consistecy with 00:20:116 (20116|0,20276|3) - ^
  14. 00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|0,35795|1,35834|2,35874|3) - this is rare case. HD have burst 1/8s. hmm
  15. 01:00:648 (60648|3) - New pitch New LN
  16. 01:09:265 (69265|3) - to 3
  17. 01:11:818 (71818|0) - to 2
  18. 01:14:372 (74372|3) - to 3
  19. 01:25:063 - add note for snare

    [NM]
  20. 00:23:946 - 00:24:106 - add note. for consistency like as HD diff
  21. 00:55:701 - 00:55:701 - new LN? To make better feeling since there have new layer for drum roll

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
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Amiichii wrote:

Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

  • [SC]
  1. 00:06:552 (6552|2,6712|2,6872|2) - i dont have idea what did you follow here. If that is synth, i think the synth have different pitch. if you follow guitar, I think should be it will be long Jack :/
    00:07:191 (7191|1,7350|1) - 00:09:106 (9106|3,9265|3) - 00:11:659 (11659|1,11818|1) - 00:12:297 (12297|2,12457|2) - Guitar riffs. All those are 1/4 LN in my opinion, not 1/2 LN. Keep.
  2. 00:15:090 (15090|1,15130|2,15170|1) - what is this? 00:15:130 (15130|2) - this is no sound Correct, Erased!
  3. 00:24:584 (24584|3,25063|0) - delete this. since actually the sound earlier than 00:24:425 (24425|1,24425|0,24505|2,24505|3) - Finishing every drumroll with jack (for triple) Keep.
  4. 00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1,25422|3,25462|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|3,25542|2,25582|1,25622|0,25622|3,25662|2) - spam SR lol. delete that double note pls. to make it playbable Piano+Snares. I'd consider after mod. For now: Keep.
  5. 00:35:595 (35595|2,35595|1,35635|3,35675|0,35715|1,35755|3,35755|2,35795|0,35834|1,35834|3,35874|2) - ^ ^ ^
  6. 00:45:010 - add note for hithat? I think that was the vocal. Not the hihat. Keep.
  7. 00:57:616 (57616|3,57776|3,58255|0,58414|0) - 01:00:170 (60170|0,60329|0) - same as before Guitar riffs. Already explained above. Keep.
  8. 01:06:233 (66233|1,66233|2,66273|0,66313|3,66353|2,66393|1,66393|0,66433|3,66473|0,66473|2,66513|1) - hmmm Piano+Snares. I'd consider after mod. For now:x2 Keep.x2

    [MX]
  9. 00:24:744 (24744|0) - move to 3? Good moves! Applied!
  10. 00:25:223 (25223|3) - to 2 ^ ^
  11. 01:00:648 (60648|2) - New pitch New LN Fixed too, Changed!

    [HD]
  12. 00:21:233 - This one will be a chord: for guitar and whistle... Self-modding, I will consider/rearrange. 00:21:393 - 00:21:552 - 00:21:712 -
    add note consistency with 00:18:680 (18680|3,18840|0,18999|2,19159|1) - and for keep the rytem of beat The rest is good. Added these notes for whistle. Added!
  13. 00:23:946 - 00:24:106 - add note for consistecy with 00:20:116 (20116|0,20276|3) - ^ Already added from the change on NM that you pointed before. Using green here: Added!*
  14. 00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|0,35795|1,35834|2,35874|3) - this is rare case. HD have burst 1/8s. hmm Decreasing difficulty after the mod. (and the others too) Changed!
  15. 01:00:648 (60648|3) - New pitch New LN Fixed then, Changed!
  16. 01:09:265 (69265|3) - to 3 Alright less repetitive. Changed!
  17. 01:11:818 (71818|0) - to 2 ^ ^
  18. 01:14:372 (74372|3) - to 3 ^ ^
  19. 01:25:063 - add note for snare Alright, Added!

    [NM]
  20. 00:23:946 - 00:24:106 - add note. for consistency like as HD diff In this diff, i decided to skip those whistles. I forget to add those on hard btw, adding them. Changed!*
  21. 00:55:701 - 00:55:701 - new LN? To make better feeling since there have new layer for drum roll Alright, seems good! Added!

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)Thanks for the mod! Fixing by my own the rest based on your mod. :)
Thanks for your help!


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Aikawa
Hello No_sync !

From my Modding queue.

For the NM request:

Focus:

* Patterns
* Checking for needed note removal or additional to maps.
* Simplicity of the map to make it playable for most players.

Feel free to reject any suggestions I have for this though^^
Alright let's start this.

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[NM]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|0) - too early. Move it up to white line and make sure it ends at white line.


[HD]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|0) - ghost note?
  2. 00:25:382 (25382|3,25422|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|3,25582|2,25622|1,25662|0) - I don't think having 1/8 patterns like this is good on a HD dif.
  3. 00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|0,35795|1,35834|2,35874|3) - ^Same here.
  4. 01:06:233 (66233|3,66273|2,66313|1,66353|0,66393|3,66433|2,66473|1,66513|0) - ^


[MX]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|2) - What is this following? Vocal or guitar? Either way I think it's a ghost note.


Sorry short mod.
Only found a few things that caught my attention.
Really ain't good at difficulties higher than MX dif.
The rest looked fine though.

Good luck with ranking the map! Aikawa out 8-)
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Aikawa wrote:

Hello No_sync ! hi! Aikawa Welcome again :)

From my Modding queue.

For the NM request:

Focus:

* Patterns
* Checking for needed note removal or additional to maps.
* Simplicity of the map to make it playable for most players.

Feel free to reject any suggestions I have for this though^^
Alright let's start this.

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[NM]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|0) - too early. Move it up to white line and make sure it ends at white line. Yes, i still hearing the guitar riff in the 1/4. hm but i think that fits better in the white line like you said... (the louder part starts there so...) Changed!


[HD]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|0) - ghost note? No, is the guitar riff (above mentioned) I'll change by my own. (Not for now, maybe tomorrow if i have time) Changed!
  2. 00:25:382 (25382|3,25422|2,25462|1,25502|0,25542|3,25582|2,25622|1,25662|0) - I don't think having 1/8 patterns like this is good on a HD dif. True. I'll change tomorrow. Changed!
  3. 00:35:595 (35595|0,35635|1,35675|2,35715|3,35755|0,35795|1,35834|2,35874|3) - ^Same here. ^ ^
  4. 01:06:233 (66233|3,66273|2,66313|1,66353|0,66393|3,66433|2,66473|1,66513|0) - ^ ^ ^


[MX]
  1. 00:22:749 (22749|2) - What is this following? Vocal or guitar? Either way I think it's a ghost note. Explained above, changing. . . Changed!


Sorry short mod.
Only found a few things that caught my attention.
Really ain't good at difficulties higher than MX dif.
The rest looked fine though.

Good luck with ranking the map! Aikawa out 8-)Thank you for the mod, no problem. :) I need fix things, i have some time tomorrow so i will do it. rank~ what is that word~ what a cute word~
Thanks for your help!


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