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TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-03-01T11:05:10+00:00

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Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-03-03T02:00:22+00:00

TyrantsEye2014 wrote:
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CircleFairy

221 posts

Joined January 2015

CircleFairy 2017-04-03T10:57:20+00:00

Hi from my mod queue :-)

Normal
00:16:840 (2) - I like a note stacked on the slider here, it fits better with the song.
Check AIMod, you have 7 unsnapped notes.

Deneb's Hard
00:15:856 (1,2,3) - This section doesn't fit well with the song, it can fit better.
01:10:856 (7) - I think it fits better without this note.

Finshie's Insane
00:13:233 (1) - You should map this break.

Extra Magical
00:23:561 (9) - I like this more as stacked notes on the slider, and it flows better.

Overall
Couldn't find too much to mod, the map set is nice :-)

Good luck!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-03T11:24:32+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Hi from my mod queue :-)

Normal
00:16:840 (2) - I like a note stacked on the slider here, it fits better with the song. it's fine
Check AIMod, you have 7 unsnapped notes. fixed

Extra Magical
00:23:561 (9) - I like this more as stacked notes on the slider, and it flows better. same as above

thanks for checking

Life Size Note

12 posts

Joined November 2013

Life Size Note 2017-04-03T14:06:00+00:00

Extra Magical

00:28:643 (6) - breaking clockwise flow with placement of this note, put it to the right
01:01:758 (1) - should be part of previous combo; uncomfortable transition into 01:01:922 (2)
01:01:922 (2) - breaks circular flow that you had at 01:01:102 (3) - into whole awkward pattern
01:03:725 (4,5,6) - i feel like this movement is too sharp, space it out a little bit
01:06:676 (4,1) - uncomfortable transition, but up to you
01:07:659 (3) - slider leads cursor up, but the next note goes down and i think you could put 01:07:987 (4,5) lower, so you would have nice transition at 01:08:151 (5,1)
01:08:807 (2) - could be moved to the left for better flow (coming out of previous slider)
01:17:004 (4,5) - i think this is too shard of a movement, 5th note could be moved slightly up so you would have comfortable transition into next slider, but up to you

If you fix these things (flow breaks and some awkward visuals), difficulty would be very enjoyable !

Good luck

Deneb

137 posts

Joined May 2013

Deneb 2017-04-03T17:43:22+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Deneb's Hard
00:15:856 (1,2,3) - This section doesn't fit well with the song, it can fit better. - remapped a bit to fit the song more
01:10:856 (7) - I think it fits better without this note. - made it like that for emphasis, really

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Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-04-03T20:13:53+00:00

CircleFairy wrote:
Hi from my mod queue :-)

Finshie's Insane
00:13:233 (1) - You should map this break. Done

Good luck!

Paasa

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Creator:TyrantsEye2014
Version:Finshie's Insane
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia op opening finshie deneb
BeatmapID:1209788
BeatmapSetID:570774

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-04T04:43:35+00:00

Life Size Note wrote:
Extra Magical

00:28:643 (6) - breaking clockwise flow with placement of this note, put it to the right
01:01:758 (1) - should be part of previous combo; uncomfortable transition into 01:01:922 (2) i did not remove NC on 01:01:758 (1) - but i changed something to make it look better
01:01:922 (2) - breaks circular flow that you had at 01:01:102 (3) - into whole awkward pattern
01:03:725 (4,5,6) - i feel like this movement is too sharp, space it out a little bit
01:06:676 (4,1) - uncomfortable transition, but up to you
01:07:659 (3) - slider leads cursor up, but the next note goes down and i think you could put 01:07:987 (4,5) lower, so you would have nice transition at 01:08:151 (5,1) okay
01:08:807 (2) - could be moved to the left for better flow (coming out of previous slider) okay
01:17:004 (4,5) - i think this is too shard of a movement, 5th note could be moved slightly up so you would have comfortable transition into next slider, but up to you okay

If you fix these things (flow breaks and some awkward visuals), difficulty would be very enjoyable !

Good luck

no reply, no changes

thanks for modding!

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2017-04-07T19:12:36+00:00

Hi. Here from my queue. Didn't look at Normal or Insane. Hope this helps!

[Extra Magical]

00:09:955 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – This felt as strong as your chorus. I prefer the pacing when more of the emphasis is in the kiai section. Try scaling these down a bit. I'm not disagreeing with your intention, it just feels like you go a bit too far in the execution. Alternatively, you can make your kiai more intense.

00:23:233 (8,9) – This 1/1 pause didn't feel agreeable to me. To really sell the 1/1 pause coming up, it'd work better if the spacing into (8) was relatively larger than the rest of the spacings. This gives it more emphasis, and after an intense pattern, the player will want rest and be more inclined to go with the 1/1 pause. Try toning down the first notes of the violin like: http://puu.sh/vcBSK/1fdcd26f39.png .

00:34:217 (1) – This doesn't look good because the first part of the slider does not continuously go into the second part of the slider. Try to get the middle three nodes of the slider to look like this and you should have a nicer slider.

01:01:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – This is spaced bigger, and I didn't understand what part of the music was being emphasized since the music feels a bit calm to me here, so this felt overdone.

01:21:266 (5,1) - It was always quite awkward to play that (1) slider. You change the flow from counterclockwise to clockwise, but then you also make the (1) path flow counterclockwise, which is two flow changes at once and I just think it can play better if you change this up by making the flow only have one change like this or something: http://puu.sh/vcFyg/f969be71d1.png

01:21:266 (5,1) – If you don't change the above, try making these blanket? I know you're going for 01:20:446 (2,5) - , but the one I mentioned seemed more important, though you can probably make both blanket.

[Deneb's Hard]

00:03:233 (3,4) – Don't stack these, this was really hard to read. I'd also consider a different rhythm like: http://puu.sh/vcDb5/b3f4f66ad0.png

00:05:364 (1,4) – avoid the overlap

00:09:791 (3,4,1,2) – make the triangle nicer by using the same DS: http://puu.sh/vcDpU/4e99a13893.jpg

00:15:856 (1,2,3) – I don't understand why spacing into (2) is so different from (3). It makes the jump into (3) feel overdone for (2) to be low. Maybe try: http://puu.sh/vcDSW/2daecf39d1.png . This applies to the other parts done similarly

00:19:135 (1,2) – These look a little close, try giving these a bit of space to not look so cramped.

00:21:102 (5,6,7,8) – avoid the (5,8) overlap like: http://puu.sh/vcDz6/7e35a501de.png

00:27:987 (2) – missing clap on tail?

00:32:250 (2) – rotate this to avoid the overlap at 00:31:266 (5,2) -

00:36:184 (3,4) – Put the clap on (3) instead.

00:36:184 (3) – Jump felt unintuitive, thought it was a 1/1 spacing instead. Consider making (3) a 1/1 slider.
00:50:610 (3,4) - ^ (might not be the same solution, but it's the same problem)

01:14:545 (6) – add clap

01:16:266 (1) – delete the spinner and map out the rest of the song to be consistent with the rest of the mapset.

Good luck!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-09T06:56:33+00:00

pinataman wrote:
[Extra Magical]

00:09:955 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – This felt as strong as your chorus. I prefer the pacing when more of the emphasis is in the kiai section. Try scaling these down a bit. I'm not disagreeing with your intention, it just feels like you go a bit too far in the execution. Alternatively, you can make your kiai more intense. okay

00:23:233 (8,9) – This 1/1 pause didn't feel agreeable to me. To really sell the 1/1 pause coming up, it'd work better if the spacing into (8) was relatively larger than the rest of the spacings. This gives it more emphasis, and after an intense pattern, the player will want rest and be more inclined to go with the 1/1 pause. Try toning down the first notes of the violin like: http://puu.sh/vcBSK/1fdcd26f39.png . okay

00:34:217 (1) – This doesn't look good because the first part of the slider does not continuously go into the second part of the slider. Try to get the middle three nodes of the slider to look like this and you should have a nicer slider. fixed

01:01:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – This is spaced bigger, and I didn't understand what part of the music was being emphasized since the music feels a bit calm to me here, so this felt overdone. fixed

01:21:266 (5,1) - It was always quite awkward to play that (1) slider. You change the flow from counterclockwise to clockwise, but then you also make the (1) path flow counterclockwise, which is two flow changes at once and I just think it can play better if you change this up by making the flow only have one change like this or something: http://puu.sh/vcFyg/f969be71d1.png fixed. but did something different

01:21:266 (5,1) – If you don't change the above, try making these blanket? I know you're going for 01:20:446 (2,5) - , but the one I mentioned seemed more important, though you can probably make both blanket.

thanks for mod!

30201102

73 posts

Joined May 2014

30201102 2017-04-18T09:32:32+00:00

[General]

Inconsistent widescreen storyboard (none on Extra Magical)

[Normal]

If you want 00:18:479 (1) - to blanket 00:17:004 (2) - you need to increase its curvature a little
00:19:463 (2) - I would put a note here, it's emphasized by the music, and putting the note on a red tick (in the lowest diff) is a bit like putting a starting note on a blue tick in a regular diff
The whistle on 00:19:627 (2) - 's tail should be on the head of the next note at 00:20:446 (3) -
00:34:217 (1) - this is the only slider in the entire diff that uses sharp red point. Consider turning it into an s-shaped slider to match with the rest of the map
00:36:840 (1,2,3) - I would modify this section to follow the vocals better. I would move 00:37:496 (2) - to start at 00:37:332 (2) - , 00:38:151 (3) - to start at 00:37:987 (3) - and put a note at 00:38:479 (4) - . Distance spacing would have to be adjusted accordingly. You do things like this plenty of time in the diff so it wouldn't be unjustified
00:59:791 (6,7) - why is there a 1.2 DS between these 2 notes?
Similarly with the 0.8 DS between 01:03:725 (2,3) - and 01:04:381 (4,5) -
Basically you should go over the whole diff and make sure DS is always consistent, as it should be for the lowest diff. There's several places where it goes to 0.9 or 1.1 instead of 1.0

[Deneb Hard]

Deneb's Hard should not end 6 seconds earlier than all other diffs in the mapset
00:03:233 (3,4) - this pattern indicates that a stack is deployed with a full beat in between, which would be fine if used consistently, but then right off the bat, 00:08:807 (4,5) - only has half a beat between the notes, as do 00:10:610 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . I think the full beat spacing is made worse by the fact that there are large jump right before at 00:03:069 (2,3) - and 00:46:184 (1,2) - and 00:50:610 (3,4) - and 01:09:627 (1,2) -, but I think that the 1st case is the worst offender due to the spatial density of the notes at 00:02:741 (1,2,3,4) - making the pattern much harder to read
00:30:610 (3,4,5) - This sort of thing would also regularly be fine, but this is basically the only place it's used. I would recommend just ending the sliders on the previous red tick
In order to match the vocals, 00:39:463 (1,2,3) - should end on the previous white tick and 00:43:397 (4) - should end at 00:44:053 (5) -
00:55:610 (3) - and 01:12:823 (4) - These notes aren't mapped to anything and feel overmapped. All the other triple stacks in the kiai start before a big white tick instead of before a short white tick
01:10:938 (1) - I would remove the clap of this slider, there's too many claps in this area
01:14:545 (6) - put a clap here and also 01:15:200 (2) -

[Finshie's Insane]

00:39:463 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Consider modifying this section. It's 6.5 seconds of barely moving the cursor which is almost 7.5% of the entire map. Maybe try moving 00:42:086 (1,2,1,2) - to somewhere else, and 00:44:709 (1,1,1) - to somewhere else as well
01:17:823 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Consider changing this as well as 01:23:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I know the back and forth pattern is used thematically but 7 notes back and forth just seems lazy and repetitive.

[Extra Magical]

This is the only diff that uses drum hitsamples, for example at 00:04:955 (5,6) - . Hitsounding should be consistent across the mapset
00:07:904 (8,1) - Why is this jump 2.2x all of a sudden? I think it should just follow the 1.0x of the previous 4 notes
Same thing at 00:49:872 (6,1) - if you want the notes to match the slider shape, just ctrl-h, ctrl-j a copy of the slider and convert slider to stream with 5 notes (ctrl-shift-f) and delete the overlapping note
01:13:561 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can't just have these kinds of jumps show up out of nowhere. All the other big jumps in the map have been either triangle jumps (01:04:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ) or the kind where the 3rd note stack with the second note (00:10:610 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 01:24:053 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ). Your map should be consistent and brand new elements shouldn't be introduced in the last 10 seconds of the map only to never be seen again

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-04-18T20:41:14+00:00

30201102 wrote:
[Finshie's Insane]
00:39:463 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Consider modifying this section. It's 6.5 seconds of barely moving the cursor which is almost 7.5% of the entire map. Maybe try moving 00:42:086 (1,2,1,2) - to somewhere else, and 00:44:709 (1,1,1) - to somewhere else as well
01:17:823 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Consider changing this as well as 01:23:069 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I know the back and forth pattern is used thematically but 7 notes back and forth just seems lazy and repetitive.

Fixed both. thanks for mod!

san na gd q

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[Exiled Wolf]

[Exiled Wolf] 2017-04-19T01:55:15+00:00

just get ranked already

TyrantsEye2014

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TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-19T06:51:04+00:00

30201102 wrote:
[General]
Inconsistent widescreen storyboard (none on Extra Magical)
[Normal]
If you want 00:18:479 (1) - to blanket 00:17:004 (2) - you need to increase its curvature a little
00:19:463 (2) - I would put a note here, it's emphasized by the music, and putting the note on a red tick (in the lowest diff) is a bit like putting a starting note on a blue tick in a regular diff
The whistle on 00:19:627 (2) - 's tail should be on the head of the next note at 00:20:446 (3) -
00:34:217 (1) - this is the only slider in the entire diff that uses sharp red point. Consider turning it into an s-shaped slider to match with the rest of the map
00:36:840 (1,2,3) - I would modify this section to follow the vocals better. I would move 00:37:496 (2) - to start at 00:37:332 (2) - , 00:38:151 (3) - to start at 00:37:987 (3) - and put a note at 00:38:479 (4) - . Distance spacing would have to be adjusted accordingly. You do things like this plenty of time in the diff so it wouldn't be unjustified
00:59:791 (6,7) - why is there a 1.2 DS between these 2 notes?
Similarly with the 0.8 DS between 01:03:725 (2,3) - and 01:04:381 (4,5) -
Basically you should go over the whole diff and make sure DS is always consistent, as it should be for the lowest diff. There's several places where it goes to 0.9 or 1.1 instead of 1.0
[Extra Magical]
This is the only diff that uses drum hitsamples, for example at 00:04:955 (5,6) - . Hitsounding should be consistent across the mapset
00:07:904 (8,1) - Why is this jump 2.2x all of a sudden? I think it should just follow the 1.0x of the previous 4 notes
Same thing at 00:49:872 (6,1) - if you want the notes to match the slider shape, just ctrl-h, ctrl-j a copy of the slider and convert slider to stream with 5 notes (ctrl-shift-f) and delete the overlapping note
01:13:561 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can't just have these kinds of jumps show up out of nowhere. All the other big jumps in the map have been either triangle jumps (01:04:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ) or the kind where the 3rd note stack with the second note (00:10:610 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 01:24:053 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ). Your map should be consistent and brand new elements shouldn't be introduced in the last 10 seconds of the map only to never be seen again

all fixed. thanks for modding!

[Exiled Wolf] wrote:
just get ranked already

luh
wait ka lang xd

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2017-04-19T07:01:45+00:00

Normal:
00:13:233 (1) - pantay mo dito 00:12:578 (5) -
00:17:823 (3) - paabutin mo hanggang dito yung slider? 00:18:315
00:27:987 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:55:037 (2) - ds nakakalito?
01:00:282 (7,1) - ds mo to

Hard:
00:13:561 (1,2,3) - mas maganda siguro kung imamatch mo nalang sa vocals yung mga notes
01:03:889 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:04:873 (3) - note dito?

Finshie's Penge ng supp tag
00:09:791 (3) - ilayo mo pa don sa (2)
00:12:250 (2,4) - fix blanket
00:16:512 (3,1) - ^
01:14:053 (3) - stack mo ng ayos don sa 6
01:14:545 (6,7) - paghiwalayin mo na nhihiya pa eh

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-19T09:56:17+00:00

Shishou wrote:
Normal:
00:13:233 (1) - pantay mo dito 00:12:578 (5) - oke lang yan kasi blanket sa 00:11:594 (3) - 0:11:594 (3) -
00:17:823 (3) - paabutin mo hanggang dito yung slider? 00:18:315 iie
00:27:987 (4,1) - fix blanket opo
00:55:037 (2) - ds nakakalito? opo
01:00:282 (7,1) - ds mo to suman

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-04-19T13:05:13+00:00

Shishou wrote:
Finshie's Penge ng supp tag
00:09:791 (3) - ilayo mo pa don sa (2)
00:12:250 (2,4) - fix blanket
00:16:512 (3,1) - ^
01:14:053 (3) - stack mo ng ayos don sa 6
01:14:545 (6,7) - paghiwalayin mo na nhihiya pa eh

All fixed. Salamat

wala na

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JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-04-20T05:12:51+00:00

Yo very short mod cos im suck at modding

Normal

00:28:971 (1) - this slider is a bit too plain to me maybe put some aesthetics?
00:44:709 (1,1) - these as well
01:22:578 (3) - ^

Deneb's Hard

00:24:873 - you can add a note here because to me without it, it sounds undermapped for a hard diff
hmmm cant find that much mistakes Deneb tooo pro

Finshie's Insane

00:11:758 (2) - angle of the slider is a bit to sharp perhaps compared to the other sliders
Welp also this one wew

Extra Magical

00:15:856 (1,2) - please blanket properly thx
00:26:020 (5,1) - ^
00:23:233 (8,9) - stack?
00:39:135 (8,1) - overlap?
00:54:709 (2,1) - ^
01:05:200 (3,1) - ^
01:17:004 (6,2) - overlap for neatness xd

Goodluck

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-20T10:55:50+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Yo very short mod cos im suck at modding

Normal
00:28:971 (1) - this slider is a bit too plain to me maybe put some aesthetics? oke
00:44:709 (1,1) - these as well ^
01:22:578 (3) - ^ ^

Extra Magical
00:15:856 (1,2) - please blanket properly thx fixed
00:26:020 (5,1) - ^ oke naman a
00:23:233 (8,9) - stack? nah
00:39:135 (8,1) - overlap? its fine
00:54:709 (2,1) - ^ ^
01:05:200 (3,1) - ^^
01:17:004 (6,2) - overlap for neatness xd hah
Goodluck

tnx po

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-04-20T18:01:17+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Finshie's Insane
00:11:758 (2) - angle of the slider is a bit to sharp perhaps compared to the other sliders
Welp also this one wew
Goodluck

Fixed alittle. Thanks for mod!

hui giru iupdate mo naman diff q

osu file format v14

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Deneb

137 posts

Joined May 2013

Deneb 2017-04-21T13:39:25+00:00

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pinataman wrote:
[Deneb's Hard]

00:03:233 (3,4) – Don't stack these, this was really hard to read. I'd also consider a different rhythm like: http://puu.sh/vcDb5/b3f4f66ad0.png
fixed

00:05:364 (1,4) – avoid the overlap
fixed

00:09:791 (3,4,1,2) – make the triangle nicer by using the same DS: http://puu.sh/vcDpU/4e99a13893.jpg
fixed

00:15:856 (1,2,3) – I don't understand why spacing into (2) is so different from (3). It makes the jump into (3) feel overdone for (2) to be low. Maybe try: http://puu.sh/vcDSW/2daecf39d1.png . This applies to the other parts done similarly
fixed

00:19:135 (1,2) – These look a little close, try giving these a bit of space to not look so cramped.
made to be that since 1. slow part and 2. the distance between notes is very small

00:21:102 (5,6,7,8) – avoid the (5,8) overlap like: http://puu.sh/vcDz6/7e35a501de.png
fixed

00:27:987 (2) – missing clap on tail?
no, since the snare hits on the blue instead of the red

00:32:250 (2) – rotate this to avoid the overlap at 00:31:266 (5,2) -
fixed
00:36:184 (3,4) – Put the clap on (3) instead.
remapped
00:36:184 (3) – Jump felt unintuitive, thought it was a 1/1 spacing instead. Consider making (3) a 1/1 slider.
00:50:610 (3,4) - ^ (might not be the same solution, but it's the same problem)
I see your point, fixed.
01:14:545 (6) – add clap
fixed
01:16:266 (1) – delete the spinner and map out the rest of the song to be consistent with the rest of the mapset.
fixed

30201102 wrote:
[Deneb Hard]
Deneb's Hard should not end 6 seconds earlier than all other diffs in the mapset
00:03:233 (3,4) - this pattern indicates that a stack is deployed with a full beat in between, which would be fine if used consistently, but then right off the bat, 00:08:807 (4,5) - only has half a beat between the notes, as do 00:10:610 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . I think the full beat spacing is made worse by the fact that there are large jump right before at 00:03:069 (2,3) - and 00:46:184 (1,2) - and 00:50:610 (3,4) - and 01:09:627 (1,2) -, but I think that the 1st case is the worst offender due to the spatial density of the notes at 00:02:741 (1,2,3,4) - making the pattern much harder to read
I see your point. Remapped.
00:30:610 (3,4,5) - This sort of thing would also regularly be fine, but this is basically the only place it's used. I would recommend just ending the sliders on the previous red tick
No point, I guess. Fixed.
In order to match the vocals, 00:39:463 (1,2,3) - should end on the previous white tick and 00:43:397 (4) - should end at 00:44:053 (5) -
imo this one is fine, not really matching the vocals but the slow measurement itself
00:55:610 (3) - and 01:12:823 (4) - These notes aren't mapped to anything and feel overmapped. All the other triple stacks in the kiai start before a big white tick instead of before a short white tick I guess they do. FIxed.
01:10:938 (1) - I would remove the clap of this slider, there's too many claps in this area
01:14:545 (6) - put a clap here and also 01:15:200 (2) -
Good luck!

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sorry na bb

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-04-21T15:19:31+00:00

Hi :3
M4M mod

Shishou's Easy

00:51:266 (2) You can shorten the slider to 00:51:922
00:57:168 (3) You can change circle from slider

Normal

Check Distance Snap
00:04:873 (5) you can delete Whistle sound on reverse circle because the sound is not very well suited to the music
00:27:987 (4) ^
00:36:184 (4) ^
01:03:561 put circle?

Deneb's Hard

00:03:725 (5) move slightly down and right
00:07:332 (3) move slightly right?
00:28:315 add clap sound?
00:32:168 put circle?
01:19:135 to 01:25:856 mapped this place

Finshie's Insane

Fix your tags
00:20:938 put circle?

Extra Magical

00:15:856 (1) move the start slider to 00:15:692 if you go on the vocals, but if not, don't fix it

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-04-21T16:52:02+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3
M4M mod
Finshie's Insane
Fix your tags
00:20:938 put circle?

fixed both. thanks for mod!

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54463
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 4.299998

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:TyrantsEye2014
Version:Finshie's Insane
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia op opening finshie deneb shishou
BeatmapID:1209788
BeatmapSetID:570774

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 116,32,21
Combo3 : 254,163,90

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TyrantsEye2014

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TyrantsEye2014 2017-04-22T06:38:36+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi :3
M4M mod

Normal
Check Distance Snap
00:04:873 (5) you can delete Whistle sound on reverse circle because the sound is not very well suited to the music it sounds fine to me
00:27:987 (4) ^
00:36:184 (4) ^
01:03:561 put circle? there's no clickable sound here so, nope

Extra Magical
00:15:856 (1) move the start slider to 00:15:692 if you go on the vocals, but if not, don't fix it

tnx for checking

_xyliac

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_xyliac 2017-12-13T02:29:27+00:00

Revive please

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