Sumisola wrote:

一会看图

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
結束時的綠線應該要放在轉盤結尾上結束kiai以前是跟hard难度的结尾一样``后来把normal跟easy的缩短了(hard忘了缩短我自重)``忘了弄回来
[Easy]
AR用2會比較好一點
01:32:110 (4) - 堆疊問題
02:15:443 (4) - 下來4格grid會比較好?[nazi]于是感觉下来4格更怪了``重新排了下你看看行不行
02:24:776 (3) - 為什麼返回的位置怪怪的@@额``不知道``已修复
03:07:444 (1,2) - spacing?
03:31:443 (1,2) - ^
03:45:443 (5,1,2) - 一樣是不均勻的spacing

[Normal]
00:38:110 (1,2,3) - 不均勻的間距
00:41:110 (4,5) - spacing
02:06:776 (1,2,3) - 一樣是間距問題
02:54:776 (3,4,5) - ^
03:02:110 (1,2,3) - ^
04:04:110 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 總覺得有點歪掉!! 修一下吧[nazi]于是重新排了下``好像有点2了``
00:37:776 - 還有00:43:110 - 不知道為什麼我很想在這加一個note (?)前面类似的地方也加上了
01:22:443 (2,3,4,5) - 正方形比較好看[nazi]
01:25:110 (9,10) - 平行(7,8)比較好(?)
03:13:776 (2,3,4,5) - nazi一下!! 你把每個slider的位置切齊點會比較好看
像↓

SPOILER

還有↓

SPOILER

這兩個的位置就不同 了解我的意思嗎0.0?(不懂可以用IRC問我)改成这样没错吧?
03:18:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種的排法容易造成玩家的困惑 不建議使用(節奏不太一樣的問題)拉出来可以么?
04:01:110 (8) - 堆疊在一起比較好
04:08:443 (14) - 並沒有完全的堆疊好
04:15:526 (1) - 結束的位置...明顯與其它diff不同~需要改過來!!啊哈```看General


建議:用grid size 4去調整吧

作的不錯(雪莉的SB果然很神阿=口=")
star~

Lan wings wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月4日 at 1:23:58

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Kyoko no Tsukiyo
BPM: 90
Filesize: 8067kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.81 stars, 172 notes)
2. Hard (4.51 stars, 425 notes)
3. Normal (2.8 stars, 268 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kyoko no Tsukiyo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
谢谢菲姐的SB``然后我想问下怎么加TAG?
然后7月3号之前下载的麻烦重新下载一下

zoern66 wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月4日 at 1:23:58

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Kyoko no Tsukiyo
BPM: 90
Filesize: 8067kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.81 stars, 172 notes)
2. Hard (4.51 stars, 425 notes)
3. Normal (2.8 stars, 268 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kyoko no Tsukiyo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
谢谢菲姐的SB``然后我想问下怎么加TAG?
然后7月3号之前下载的麻烦重新下载一下

• Title: Kyokou no Tsukiyo (100% sure about this. use this to change title)
  
  (The name of uploader is hard to find =_=b, leave this for other modders)
  
  Tags: Moonlight night of fiction sherrie__fay
  
  Offset: 1443. (Wrong metronome ._.)
  
  You need a preview point! (Timing----Set Current position as preview point)
  
  Hmm, skin is pretty nice, but why hit50k.png is different from hit50.png?
  
  Delete 1 - 1 (Lan wings).osb in your folder since it isn't used!
  
  I suggest to make the white combo colour more blue because the reverse arrow is also white...so...hard to notice there's a reverse.
  
  Also use tick rate 2 in all diff? 4 is too many imo...
  
  Here's a hitsounds you may use?...http://puu.sh/39Sn
  
  The outro is 1 min long...Though it's less than 20%, I suggest you crop the last part...

• 00:18:776 (2) - ...make like this? at least move the point a little to make the slider looks even.
  00:56:776 (1) - hmm, might be a little close to the spinner...Perhaps it's better to remove this note?
  02:46:110 (1) - ^
  03:16:110 (3) - ._. intentional? try this?
  03:31:443 (1) - might be a little close to the spinner?
  03:56:777 (5) - ^
  04:12:110 (3) - I suggest to make this smoother like this..

• 00:24:776 (5) - New combo?
  00:30:776 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?
  00:36:444 (6) - ...
  00:58:110 (4) - Add clap? Or remove clap at 00:58:776 (6) ?
  01:37:776 (1) - Add finish.
  02:20:109 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?
  02:29:443 (3,5) - The end of 5 is slightly blocked by 3, so...this?
  02:40:109 (3,1) - I prefer not stack these...just make 02:41:443 (1,2) symmetry?
  03:57:443 (8,1) - the reverse of 1 is hard to see...you'd better move the end point towards left.
  04:06:110 (5) - Curve this a little?

• 00:37:110 (9) - Just use 1/4 slider and mvoe 1/4 beat forward to have a pause here?
  00:42:444 (10) - ^
  01:23:776 (6) - New combo?
  01:36:443 (X) - add a note here.
  02:15:276 (4) - Remove this?
  02:33:443 (3,4,5,6) - ...meaningless stacks which reduce fluent and flow of the music...
  03:23:776 (1,3) - Hidden reverse arrow again, move 03:24:776 (3) or 03:23:776 (1) so that the arrow can be seen.
  04:12:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need for a anti-jump here...try a cross?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Title: Kyokou no Tsukiyo (100% sure about this. use this to change title)changed
  
  (The name of uploader is hard to find =_=b, leave this for other modders)
  
  Tags: Moonlight night of fiction sherrie__fay 于是这里不懂为啥要改?
  
  Offset: 1443. (Wrong metronome ._.)changed
  
  You need a preview point! (Timing----Set Current position as preview point)看不懂
  
  Hmm, skin is pretty nice, but why hit50k.png is different from hit50.png?删了
  
  Delete 1 - 1 (Lan wings).osb in your folder since it isn't used!删了
  
  I suggest to make the white combo colour more blue because the reverse arrow is also white...so...hard to notice there's a reverse.等菲姐上线找他换颜色去``
  
  Also use tick rate 2 in all diff? 4 is too many imo...主要是因为hard难度的太鼓模式用4给力一些``
  
  Here's a hitsounds you may use?...http://puu.sh/39Snchanged
  
  The outro is 1 min long...Though it's less than 20%, I suggest you crop the last part...我找人剪掉算了

[Easy]

• 00:18:776 (2) - ...make like this? at least move the point a little to make the slider looks even.changed
  00:56:776 (1) - hmm, might be a little close to the spinner...Perhaps it's better to remove this note?changed
  02:46:110 (1) - ^ changed
  03:16:110 (3) - ._. intentional? try this?changed
  03:31:443 (1) - might be a little close to the spinner?changed
  03:56:777 (5) - ^同上上的意思?
  04:12:110 (3) - I suggest to make this smoother like this..changed

[Normal]

• 00:24:776 (5) - New combo?changed
  00:30:776 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?不懂``
  00:36:444 (6) - ...changed
  00:58:110 (4) - Add clap? Or remove clap at 00:58:776 (6) ?changed
  01:37:776 (1) - Add finish.changed
  02:20:109 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?同上上上上
  02:29:443 (3,5) - The end of 5 is slightly blocked by 3, so...this?changed
  02:40:109 (3,1) - I prefer not stack these...just make 02:41:443 (1,2) symmetry?changed
  03:57:443 (8,1) - the reverse of 1 is hard to see...you'd better move the end point towards left.changed
  04:06:110 (5) - Curve this a little?changed

[Hard]

Hmm, the whistle slider body doesn't fit well imo...Remove them?找不到合适的``可以帮我找一个么

• 00:37:110 (9) - Just use 1/4 slider and mvoe 1/4 beat forward to have a pause here?不懂什么意思`你看看现在的行不行?
  00:42:444 (10) - ^^
  01:23:776 (6) - New combo?changed
  01:36:443 (X) - add a note here.changed
  02:15:276 (4) - Remove this?changed
  02:33:443 (3,4,5,6) - ...meaningless stacks which reduce fluent and flow of the music...改hitsound?
  03:23:776 (1,3) - Hidden reverse arrow again, move 03:24:776 (3) or 03:23:776 (1) so that the arrow can be seen.藏箭头?好像没藏吧
  04:12:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need for a anti-jump here...try a cross?changed

Nice song~
Your mapping skill has improved much, good job

don't forget spboxer3's kds btw.擦``忘了给我自重

No_Gu wrote:

- -表示做楼上的翻译压力巨大。。。

oWingz wrote:

Nice and relaxing map
Star~

Just suggestions
[Easy]
00:52:490 - Remove Spinner for break
02:20:441/02:26:823 - Break time
03:26:823 - Remove Spinner for break

[Normal]
00:31:990 - Remove Slider 3 and Circle 1 //Add Break
03:27:156 - Remove Spinner for break

[Hard]
Hard map is hard

Megurine Luka wrote:

看见V+图就想mod >///<
Nice Skin&BG..

[Easy]
Clap的声音都略重了._.相对起来很多地方感觉finish的音效就足够了._.
比如[00:11:490][1]和[00:14:157][3]试试看只下finish~个人感觉好听很多
因为曲子本身就比较轻柔突然那么重的clap总觉得很破坏._.clap的音量调低了``看看怎么样

很多clap再斟酌下？
不是一定要玩万金油下法的吧>▽<没那能力啊``只能用万金油了``
顺带一提._.最后一个spinner下clap实在太让人难受了Q.Q

[Normal]
音效方面同Easy
00:20:157 [5] 拉的对称一点会比较好&move down
00:32:157 [6] 太直..拉弯点
好多条子都太直了..个人感觉不好看其实偶比较喜欢略弯的``
如果相邻几个一起直就还好..有时候会出现前一个直后一个弯视觉上就不是很好看
00:36:491 [3] ^

完全可以拉成这样..

00:20:157 [5] move down..almost touch the life bar
00:44:824 [3] 拉条有点崩
00:48:824 [1] move down..
01:14:157 [3] 太直
02:06:823 [1] ^
02:19:490 [1] move up
03:52:824 [1,2] move down
03:54:824 [5] 拉条崩，最好拉的和前一个对称的样子这样?
04:15:156 [1] 一样的问题..下clap太难受了Q.Q去掉了

[Hard]
00:42:490 [10] spacing
01:07:157 [3,4]

try this

01:16:490 [4,5,6] spacing可以适当拉大点
01:23:823 [1] move down
02:08:490 [4,6] 拉条略崩
02:18:157 [4,5,6] 同第三条
02:29:823 [5] move down
03:09:823 [6,7,8]

try this

03:13:823 [2,3,4,5] 同第三条感觉没以前好看了..
03:43:156 [5,8] new combo
03:51:157 [6] move up



anyway, star☆

Lan wings wrote:

全部搞定``省略的已经全部修改

LKs wrote:

general

我比较喜欢把BG图片叫做"BG"
..................歌曲文件叫做它的英文名等找到whistle的音效后再改了一起full
有两个osb文件 删掉其中明显是歌曲改名之前的那个
sliderball给人的感觉略小找菲姐<_<

Easy

AR不用这么低。。2或3比较好AR还是OD``AR本来就是2``于是我把OD也跟AR弄一样算了
[02:08:156] slider形状不好OK
[03:13:490] 这两个slider形状都要重塑OK
[03:24:823] 这个复制(ctrl+c)之前的slider6粘贴(ctrl+v)到这里 再弄一个垂直翻折效果(ctrl+j)你确定?``那样slider开始方向就反了..
[04:07:490] 形状OK
[04:10:156]^OK
主要是一些slider的形状不够圆滑 另外s-whistle这个音效不太适合这首歌求找一个whistle的音效

Normal

同理ar上升2~3个我觉得现在的AR还可以啊``
其实吧..如果没有easy你这个难度就可以当easy了

Hard

[02:53:490] 诸如此类的slider形状要注意OK

整体来说不错

1. "of" is rather generic as a tag (it might make this map come up when seaching something completely unrelated), so I think it's better to remove it.
2. I don't think sherrie__fay is needed as tag either since they didn't make a diff ?
3. Remove the unnecessary transparency (on the sides) on the default-comma and default-dot pictures. As of now they exceed the maximum allowed size for skin elements.
4. Remove the unnecessary transparency on scorebar-colour.png, which is bigger than the maximum allowed.
5. For the elements you skin out, use a 1x1 transparent pixel. With your current pictures, osu! draws the transparent pictures anyway, which is a waste of resources.
6. Crop the spinner background to 1023x692 cutting the bottom. The current resolution makes the background look bad in-game: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123256
7. There are two osb files. Delete the useless one.
8. Your mp3 bitrate is below 128 kbps. It'd be better to find a new one.

1. What's the point of using tick rate 2 if you silence the ticks ? Use tick rate 1.
2. I think you should make it a bit harder, for difficulty spread purposes. The gap between Easy and Normal is quite big.

1. The preview point is different from the other diffs'. They must be all the exact same.
2. I don't really like the slowdowns, because they were quite unexpected and might throw off new players.
3. 00:15:156 (7,8,1) - Due to stacking, this stack looks rather bad in-game. Unstack ?
4. 03:47:490 (1,2,3) - Same.

• Seems fine.