from my nm q )
ByBy's Exorcist
good song, ok anime, 2/10- GENERAL: WhY THE fUCK iS ARR 8??? OR WHY siS OD 6^? make it 9+; 7.5+ respectively. cs 3.6 ehhhhhhhhh i guess its ok?? hp 6 is also fine
[list:1337]00:03:815 (3,4) - bad blanket lul
- 00:07:096 (4) - don't stack this, especially when it's a 1/1 gap
- 00:07:408 (1,3) - what is with people stacking things improperly, lol it's not perfectly on the 1
- 00:09:752 (6,2,4) - let the 6 touch equally with the 2 and the 4 instead of it leaning more towards the 4; or just move the 6 away and avoid these overlap
- 00:12:408 (1,2) - bad blanket
- 00:13:502 (4) - make this a little curved
- 00:13:815 (1,2) - move these down; 00:15:846 (5) - move this one more to the right, move 00:15:377 (3) - along with it.
- 00:19:440 (4,5) - b l a n k e t ! ! !
- 00:23:502 (4,1) - isn't stacked properly on the tails
- 00:25:690 (4) - i recommend reversing this so it makes a blanket with 00:26:158 (5) - , don't forget to flip this if you do 00:26:315 (1) -
- 00:27:252 (4,1,2) - isn't stacked properly; if you move the 1, it either moves into 2's end or 4.
- 00:46:940 (4) - move this to the right, so 00:47:721 (1) - feels more gradual
- 00:48:033 (3) - move this down so it has the same distance as 00:46:940 (4,1) -
- 00:51:002 (5,1) - blanket
- 00:51:940 (3) - make this more towards the angle of 00:51:315 (1) -
- 00:57:877 (2,3,4,5) - lol??? make this different; either let it lead into 00:58:190 (1) - or just revise it, don't make it cancer; 00:58:502 (2,3,4,5) - same thing
- 00:59:440 (3,4) - fix blanket, a little off; still noticeable; same for 01:03:815 (1,2,4) -
- 01:05:690 (5,1) - stack it properly, off a little again
- 01:08:658 (3,4,1) - ds is inconsistent in the stream, move 01:08:815 (1) - back a little
- 01:13:033 (4,6) - move both down a little so it becomes bottom-right from 01:12:252 (3) - instead of almost being a stack
- 01:14:908 (1) - make this separate from 01:15:377 (2,3) - it gets confusing, especially after the jumps; also remove nc on the 1 because the next passage starts after the gap. make sure to also move point on 01:15:065 - over to 01:15:377 -
- 01:18:502 (6) - fix this blanket a little
- 01:19:283 (2) - move this to the right a little, I recommend the same distance as the distance between 01:18:190 (5,6) - 's heads or close to at least
- 01:23:815 (1,3,4) - fix blanket
- 01:26:627 (3) - angle this downwards so it doesn't look wonky and with the extremely sharp angle.
- 01:27:486 (1) - start on 01:27:565 - and make sure to change it so it ends at the same spot 01:29:440 -
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