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Topic Starter
Lefia

Deramok wrote:

nm as requested

  1. 00:06:002 (3) - jsut completely omitting it might be worth concidering
  2. 00:24:283 (2,4) - as you're not mapping on guitar in this part with it being skipped on 00:24:440 (3) - , you probably shouldn't map these the same way with one being supported by vocals and the other not since it's just light insane, i don't want make it harder in this part
  3. 00:30:377 (2) - ctrl g for the distinction between it and the following two slider, that are supported by additional vocals thanks! but i'll change it with different way
  4. 00:52:096 (4) - 01:02:096 (4) - maybe stack this on 3 or keep it at low spacing for better contrast with the following note compared to previous beats that had a more even intensity distribution.keep it


hard looks solid from what i can tell


  1. 00:24:908 (3) - not supported by the vocals. better to put it between 4 and 5 or 1 and 2 instead you're right, but i choose to follow the guitar here
  2. 01:19:283 (2) - probably better to just omit this. you're mostly going on the drums anyway, so this one stands out in a negative way. especially with the gaps in 01:16:315 (1,2) - and 01:21:315 (1,2) - which cover more vital guitar plucks i think that part have more guitar plucks
  1. 00:50:065 (3) - would suggest flipping this around to assimilate it to 00:50:690 (4,1) - nope, i'll break the pattern
  2. 01:01:315 (1) - not sure why you would suddenly go with a curve rathen than a red node hereBecause NC here, note only that, the instrument start changed here
thnaks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Lefia

Nevo wrote:

thank you for mapping this song :3
you're welcome, also thanks for the star!
Stack
from my queue
So I am doing these full NM's and want these to be really thourough checks. So here we go

General

So first backgrounds
  • -they are all pretty low quality so you might want to upscale or find a higher res version
    -If you do want to keep BG-2 then make sure to convert it to .jpg for a smaller file size
    - BG-3 has the wrong resolution scale, it's 1280x800

audio and video file seem fine

very minor kiai timing inconsistency in KittyAdventure's Insane, as kiai time should be off at timing point 01:08:815 (1) - (68815,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1)
and 01:16:315 (1) - (76315,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1)

Also feel that the gap between the insane and extra is a bit too large for a nice spread but I am not 100% if that influences ranking capabilities
Easy

rip easy icon on forum

00:48:190 (4) - would make this a slightly different shape to 00:47:565 (3) - beacause this one reflected intrumentals while 00:48:190 (4) - only follows vocals

Well, I am bad at modding easy diffs and everything here is nicely ds'ed
Nice diff
Normal

00:06:002 (5) - This note doesn't fit as you have been exclusively following vocals up to this point and then switching to instruments on a pretty minor sound doesn't fit

00:14:440 (2) - as you don't really mind using 1/2 gaps in this diff I would pull this back to 00:14:283 as I have a feeling you want to emphasize the guitar more from parts like 00:11:783 (2,3) - and 00:16:783 (2,3) - which focus the guitar as they have their heavy drum beats in the middle of the slider

00:18:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this feels off beacause you follow the vocals here but only sometimes do you actually try and catch the vocal on the red tick like at 00:19:440 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:690 (5,6,1) - while the other times you just don't map anything on top of it like at 00:18:815 (1,2) - 00:20:065 (4,5) -

00:22:877 (4) - this slider follows the guitar (obviously) but it feels too sudden beacause up to now you are basically going all-in on vocals, you like almost change the focus to the guitar with 00:21:315 (1,2) - but 00:22:408 (3) - emphasizes the held sound of the vocals and not the guitar beacause it's a slider.If you want to focus the guitar more I recommend changing 00:22:408 (3) - into a circle. Focussing vocals would be a bit weirder as they fall away after this

00:23:815 (1) - i don't think you want to switch back to following vocals here by emphasizing the held vocal sound with a slider, and if you do want to switch back to vocals then you are missing the vocals between 00:23:815 (1,2) - and 00:25:065 (4,5) -

00:27:408 (3) - not a fan of this circle, would actually just delete it and fix ds as it really lowers the emphasis the drums get at 00:27:565 (1,2) -

00:31:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm feels off again beacause you have this pretty large emphasis on 00:32:252 (3,4) - imo but the slider right before that 00:31:783 (2) - doesn't even have a frum sound on it's sliderhead

00:36:315 (1,2) - I feel like this is a better way to switch your focus from vocals to intruments as here you get this 1/1 gap after the last vocal slider, would try to implemant something like this at 00:22:408 (3,4) - if u want to focus vocals up to the last possible note

00:41:158 (1,2) - 1/2 doesn't work as the sliderend is way louder for the vocal and the instrument, possibly 2 circles would work better like you did at 00:43:658 (5,1) -

00:46:940 (2) - don't see the use of this slider as the only noticeable drumbeat in this section is on the red anchor. So maybe extend 00:46:315 (1) - to a 5/2 and 00:47:252 (2) - to a 1/2 if u still want to sliders. But just 1 very long slider would work even better.

rhythm in kiai seems better

after that only some more minor thing like, if you are going to focus the drums then make sure the loud sound is actually clickable which is not the case for slider 01:19:440 (3) - as this one has a louder tail than head

overall it just seems that the rhythm has no clear focus on what it wants to map
Hard

00:06:002 (5) - owo, whats this doing here. Is this mapping the breathing? don't feel like its needed imo

00:13:815 (1,2) - You have the speedy intro and then for these similar sounds you slow the map down, it feels like 00:08:815 (1,2,3) - but is mapped differently

00:23:190 (2) - ds this to make the gap clearer, as it doesn't look enough like a 1/1 gap

00:23:658 (3) - would delete this note for more emphasis on the vocals

00:24:908 (4) - If u map vocals I feel that you have to commit to it, and not map like these guitar sounds whenever a gap large enough comes around. So just delete the note

00:31:783 (2) - would make this slider focus more on the drums as it has this pretty weak vocal on the head but vocal+drum on the tail which feels odd

00:37:877 (2,3) - Why no circle between these slider, it would fit

00:48:190 (1,2) - I don't think you need these circles as 00:46:315 (1,2,3,1,2) - fully focusses on the drums, as does 00:48:815 (1,2) -. Between these there are no drum sounds so the emptyness would fit

00:58:815 (1,2) - space these more similar to 00:48:815 (1,2) - as you really want to show that they are similar

01:08:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some diversity here would be good as it feels pretty boring atm

01:13:815 (1) - how about a 1/2 reverse here to keep the focus on the on the drums
Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - Still not sure on mapping this breathing, I just don't feel it's loud enough to warrant a slider

The stacking seems without reasoning often, like you stack 2 notes with different sounds ex:00:11:783 (2,3) -
Or at spots like this 00:14:596 (4,5,1) - where you stacked 00:14:596 (4,5) - but not 00:14:752 (5,1) - although they follow up immediatly after eachother, givning 2 consecutive 1/2 gaps different spacing. If you have some reasoning for it then there is no problem though

00:24:440 (3,4) - You gave the guitar sound nothing of importance when it was in the sliderbody of 00:24:440 (3) - but right after it get a clickable object for the same sound 00:24:908 (4) -

stack 00:35:846 (3,3) - and 00:36:002 (4,4) -

this diff is also pretty good
KittyAdventure's Insane

00:02:565 (1) - feels out of place as all the other objects seem to be following vocals and this one is on a rather weak instruemntal sound

00:05:846 (5,6) - I can kinda agree mapping 00:06:002 (6) - on an insane and up but really think 00:05:846 (5) - shouldn't be there

00:14:283 (3,4) - really don't see any reason to stack these, but maybe I am missing something

00:18:346 (5,6,7) - I like cool patterns but this feels a bit too weird. And doesn't feel intense enough for the sound it's representing

00:30:846 (3,4) - how about angling 00:31:002 (4) - differently like http://i.imgur.com/o5j5fUk.png for better flow

00:39:908 (4,1,2,3,4) - This jump fits really well :D

00:43:502 (4) - would delete this note and stack 00:43:658 (5,1) - as I feel that it's not that important

00:47:721 (2,3) - I think you should still use constant/growing ds here and not lower it

kiai looking good

01:17:408 (1,2) - some weird flow here, maybe rotate 01:17:877 (2,3,4) - alltogether

01:21:002 (6) - feels louder but has lower spacing emphasis than 01:21:158 (7) -
ByBy's Exorcist

00:02:565 (5) - doesn't fit as all the other objects follow vocals closely, would just remove this one and extend 00:02:408 (4) - to a 1/2 slider.
Also some seriously bad flow with the wide angle usage

00:04:283 (4) - ^, this one also feels bit weird

00:12:252 (5,1) - not really a fan of this supershort spacing but whatever

00:37:252 (5,3,4,5) - overlap that doesn't look that nice/intended

00:38:346 (6,7) - Were these supposed to be stacked?

00:38:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - You mapped 00:39:752 (5) - there but not on the white tick at 00:39:127. Also by using a slider like this you are mapping the vocal on a sliderend here 00:39:752 (5) - which you don't want to do as that seems to be the main rhythm you are following

00:58:111 (5,1) - I don't see how anyone should be able to read that that is a 1/4 gap

00:58:736 (5,1) - ^

01:14:908 (1,2,3) - not a fan of stacking this twice if you have 2 different timing gaps

01:24:596 (4,5,1) - uncomfortable flow and you were trying to always use sharp angles so this is unexpected

Thats about it, would appreciate any feedback about the mod and if you have questions you can always pm me
Gl with the map :)

Edit: lol, I totally did not miss the Light Insane only to spot it later and mod it then
Flake
hi nm

Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - no sound here

01:27:408 (1) - is this intended to be where it is or is it supposed to be in the center? pls clarify

Insane

00:18:346 (5,6,7) - I think these should have more density than 00:17:877 (2,3,4) -


Exorcist

00:51:080 (5,6) - rip
Topic Starter
Lefia

gottagof4ast wrote:

from my queue
So I am doing these full NM's and want these to be really thourough checks. So here we go thanks!

General

So first backgrounds
  • -they are all pretty low quality so you might want to upscale or find a higher res version finaly i found it :') , fixed
    -If you do want to keep BG-2 then make sure to convert it to .jpg for a smaller file size fixed
    - BG-3 has the wrong resolution scale, it's 1280x800 i change it with new BG, fixed

audio and video file seem fine

very minor kiai timing inconsistency in KittyAdventure's Insane, as kiai time should be off at timing point 01:08:815 (1) - (68815,-100,4,1,1,70,0,1)
and 01:16:315 (1) - (76315,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1) about this kiai time, i leave this to Kitty

Also feel that the gap between the insane and extra is a bit too large for a nice spread but I am not 100% if that influences ranking capabilities i think it's okay, you are first person who critic about this
Easy

rip easy icon on forum too much easy diff with normal icon get ranked right now, so it's okay

00:48:190 (4) - would make this a slightly different shape to 00:47:565 (3) - beacause this one reflected intrumentals while 00:48:190 (4) - only follows vocals change it with two circles

Well, I am bad at modding easy diffs and everything here is nicely ds'ed
Nice diff thanks!
Normal

00:06:002 (5) - This note doesn't fit as you have been exclusively following vocals up to this point and then switching to instruments on a pretty minor sound doesn't fit just keep it right now

00:14:440 (2) - as you don't really mind using 1/2 gaps in this diff I would pull this back to 00:14:283 as I have a feeling you want to emphasize the guitar more from parts like 00:11:783 (2,3) - and 00:16:783 (2,3) - which focus the guitar as they have their heavy drum beats in the middle of the slider it's a nice idea, but i will keep it because i won't use to much 1/2 gaps in this part

00:18:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this feels off beacause you follow the vocals here but only sometimes do you actually try and catch the vocal on the red tick like at 00:19:440 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:690 (5,6,1) - while the other times you just don't map anything on top of it like at 00:18:815 (1,2) - 00:20:065 (4,5) -
just like i said before, but if the other suggest about this i'll add circles

00:22:877 (4) - this slider follows the guitar (obviously) but it feels too sudden beacause up to now you are basically going all-in on vocals, you like almost change the focus to the guitar with 00:21:315 (1,2) - but 00:22:408 (3) - emphasizes the held sound of the vocals and not the guitar beacause it's a slider.If you want to focus the guitar more I recommend changing 00:22:408 (3) - into a circle. Focussing vocals would be a bit weirder as they fall away after this it'll better to use slider than circle even it's changed too sudden

00:23:815 (1) - i don't think you want to switch back to following vocals here by emphasizing the held vocal sound with a slider, and if you do want to switch back to vocals then you are missing the vocals between 00:23:815 (1,2) - and 00:25:065 (4,5) - i feel doubt about it, i want add circles but i won't use 1/2 gaps too much in this diff

00:27:408 (3) - not a fan of this circle, would actually just delete it and fix ds as it really lowers the emphasis the drums get at 00:27:565 (1,2) - the vocals started say "u" in this part, so i'll keep it right now

00:31:315 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm feels off again beacause you have this pretty large emphasis on 00:32:252 (3,4) - imo but the slider right before that in this part the vocals change his voice's volume sudden, it'll better to keep it

00:31:783 (2) - doesn't even have a frum sound on it's sliderhead

00:36:315 (1,2) - I feel like this is a better way to switch your focus from vocals to intruments as here you get this 1/1 gap after the last vocal slider, would try to implemant something like this at 00:22:408 (3,4) - if u want to focus vocals up to the last possible note nope, because there are nothing on the red tick

00:41:158 (1,2) - 1/2 doesn't work as the sliderend is way louder for the vocal and the instrument, possibly 2 circles would work better like you did at 00:43:658 (5,1) - fixed

00:46:940 (2) - don't see the use of this slider as the only noticeable drumbeat in this section is on the red anchor. So maybe extend 00:46:315 (1) - to a 5/2 and 00:47:252 (2) - to a 1/2 if u still want to sliders. But just 1 very long slider would work even better. change it with sliders

rhythm in kiai seems better

after that only some more minor thing like, if you are going to focus the drums then make sure the loud sound is actually clickable which is not the case for slider 01:19:440 (3) - as this one has a louder tail than head i followed the guitar

overall it just seems that the rhythm has no clear focus on what it wants to map i'm suck at normal :')
Hard

00:06:002 (5) - owo, whats this doing here. Is this mapping the breathing? don't feel like its needed imo it's not about breathing :'

00:13:815 (1,2) - You have the speedy intro and then for these similar sounds you slow the map down, it feels like 00:08:815 (1,2,3) - but is mapped differently but i think the guitars more have emphasis here 00:13:815

00:23:190 (2) - ds this to make the gap clearer, as it doesn't look enough like a 1/1 gap fixed

00:23:658 (3) - would delete this note for more emphasis on the vocals i think it'll better to keep it

00:24:908 (4) - If u map vocals I feel that you have to commit to it, and not map like these guitar sounds whenever a gap large enough comes around. So just delete the note i followed vocals & guitar

00:31:783 (2) - would make this slider focus more on the drums as it has this pretty weak vocal on the head but vocal+drum on the tail which feels odd i think no

00:37:877 (2,3) - Why no circle between these slider, it would fit yes it would fit, but i won't use 1/4 rhytm in this diff

00:48:190 (1,2) - I don't think you need these circles as 00:46:315 (1,2,3,1,2) - fully focusses on the drums, as does 00:48:815 (1,2) -. Between these there are no drum sounds so the emptyness would fit i need this because this part is going to kiai time

00:58:815 (1,2) - space these more similar to 00:48:815 (1,2) - as you really want to show that they are similar fixed

01:08:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some diversity here would be good as it feels pretty boring atm will keep it right now

01:13:815 (1) - how about a 1/2 reverse here to keep the focus on the on the drums nope, i focus to the vocal here
Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - Still not sure on mapping this breathing, I just don't feel it's loud enough to warrant a slider same like before

The stacking seems without reasoning often, like you stack 2 notes with different sounds ex:00:11:783 (2,3) -
Or at spots like this 00:14:596 (4,5,1) - where you stacked 00:14:596 (4,5) - but not 00:14:752 (5,1) - although they follow up immediatly after eachother, givning 2 consecutive 1/2 gaps different spacing. If you have some reasoning for it then there is no problem though i make jump here, if i make (5) and (1) stacked, it'll break the emphasis

00:24:440 (3,4) - You gave the guitar sound nothing of importance when it was in the sliderbody of 00:24:440 (3) - but right after it get a clickable object for the same sound 00:24:908 (4) - i got it. fixed

stack 00:35:846 (3,3) - and 00:36:002 (4,4) - fixed

this diff is also pretty good

Thats about it, would appreciate any feedback about the mod and if you have questions you can always pm me
Gl with the map :)thank you very much :)

Edit: lol, I totally did not miss the Light Insane only to spot it later and mod it then that's okay
Thanks for the mod!
meii18

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
You asked me to mod extra.
But i can't tell you something new...
I do a little mod, and i tell you some things, that i noticed)

Byby's Exorcist

00:51:002 (5) - i think here is mistake...move circle in this time; oops got it
00:05:065 (1) - not needs new combo; you're right done
00:07:408 (5) - continue combo; ^
00:07:877 (1) - new combo; yes
00:32:408 (1) - continue combo; sorry but i have to disagree here i would mess up the ncs
00:32:877 (1) - new combo. ^
thanks for mod!

@CucumberCuc i have to disagree the jump is not really huge it gives more emphasis and build-up effect to the vocal and instruments too

wip
nextplay
K

  1. 00:01:002 (1) - Circle is not important because skipping the vocal the beginn is okay i guess...
  2. 00:09:440 (2) - the reverse is following nothing if it's for consistency then it wouldn't make much sense because the music slightly changes here end the rever se on the white tick so the reverse would follow the instrumentals better
  3. 00:13:815 (4) - dosen't make much sense here again because with this reverse you are skipping a new measure of music which should be clickable
  4. 00:27:565 (3) - following instrumentals would be better imo
  5. 00:34:127 (2,3) - change the rhythm here because the skip potenzial vocals here if you disagree with this one make them at least straight that would easier to play
  6. 00:54:440 (2,3) - Blanket is off
  7. 00:29:596 (2,3) - ^
  8. 01:04:440 (2,3) - here is nothing special but this pattern is inconsistent with the rest from your map


okay Gl with map <insert a "here is a star" emoji> (and sorry for only 1 diff)
Topic Starter
Lefia

crystalinfusion wrote:

hi nm

Light Insane

00:06:002 (3) - no sound here keep it

01:27:408 (1) - is this intended to be where it is or is it supposed to be in the center? pls clarify umm... okay put it in the center

My Angel Kanan wrote:

K

  1. 00:01:002 (1) - Circle is not important because skipping the vocal the beginn is okay i guess... i want to follow it
  2. 00:09:440 (2) - the reverse is following nothing if it's for consistency then it wouldn't make much sense because the music slightly changes here end the rever se on the white tick so the reverse would follow the instrumentals better because the music slightly changed i put the reverse on the red tick, and it have more emphasis than white thick
  3. 00:13:815 (4) - dosen't make much sense here again because with this reverse you are skipping a new measure of music which should be clickable since it's an easy diff, that's okay to keep it
  4. 00:27:565 (3) - following instrumentals would be better imo i think vocal is better
  5. 00:34:127 (2,3) - change the rhythm here because the skip potenzial vocals here if you disagree with this one make them at least straight that would easier to play it'll better to keep it
  6. 00:54:440 (2,3) - Blanket is off fixed
  7. 00:29:596 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  8. 01:04:440 (2,3) - here is nothing special but this pattern is inconsistent with the rest from your map oh, you're right, only this one. but it's okay to keep it


okay Gl with map <insert a "here is a star" emoji> thanks for the star! :)
(and sorry for only 1 diff) that's okay~
thanks for the mods!
Affirmation
Q

[light insane]
00:37:096 (4,2) - stack error
00:46:158 (5,1) - I suggest you making a jump for consistency
00:58:190 (1,1) - unnecessary NC
01:12:721 (2,5) - stack error

GL
[MTF] Wolfette
Light insane:

00:03:502 (3,4) - Ctrl + g

00:28:190 (5,6,1) - overlap

00:41:158 (5) - move to (472, 80)

01:02:877 (2) - overlap

01:08:033 (2,3,4) - stack notes on top of the slider
Shunao
hey from q

idk if you still want a mod.. well i want to mod this map

  • general
  1. can you change the color of the combo 2 we don't see too much the difference when we play, you can choose a other color like blue or brown
  • easy
  1. 00:01:315 (1,2) - fix blanket https://puu.sh/wrHCA/1265e719b7.jpg
  2. 00:26:315 (1,2,3) - it's doesn't looks good maybe make this slider straight 00:27:408 (3) - it's should be a better flow and a better aesthetic
  3. 00:36:940 (2,3) - this rythm would follow the music better http://i.imgur.com/V7qKNxW.jpg?1
  4. 00:47:877 - why the volume here it's nore higher that the kiai parts?
  • normal
  1. 00:04:908 (3,4) - can you make them similar it's looks like a bit akward imo
  2. 00:12:877 (5) - i think it's too narrow
  3. 00:34:440 (2,6) - stack them, overlap doesn't look nice
  4. 00:37:877 (4,5) - they break the flow if you raise the 1/2 slider renverse to x:428 y:74 it's should be better
  5. 00:38:815 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this moment there are too much gaps.. while here on every ticks white there is a sound 00:39:127 - 00:39:752 - and more so please map these gaps :/
  6. 00:47:877 - like i said before for the volume on the easy diff
  7. 01:26:627 (2) - why you don't map the guitar on the red tick it's so bad .-.
  • hard
  1. 00:06:002 (5,1) - increased spacing?
  2. 00:09:752 (4,1) - ^
  3. 00:13:502 (5,1) - ^
  4. 00:13:815 (1,2) - why suddendly there are 2 slider renverse, make like you did before 00:08:815 (1,2,3,4) - be consistent :/
  5. 00:14:752 (3,1) - increased spacing?
  6. 00:17:096 (3,1) - ^
  7. 00:36:940 - it's should be clickable for emphasis the guitar. it's should be very nice if you map it cause the guitar has the upper hand at this moment
  8. 00:46:158 (4,1) - jump?
  9. 00:47:565 (1) - remove nc because the drums has the same density as 00:46:627 (2,3) - so it's not useful
  10. 01:01:315 (1,1) - stack them?
  11. 01:06:002 (4,1) - the flow is not here BUT if you make this slider straight 01:06:315 (1) - it's should be here i think
  12. 01:08:502 (4,1) - increased spacing?
  13. 01:13:815 (1) - it's should be a finish on the head as you did at 00:06:315 (1)
  • byby
  1. 00:05:065 (1) - remove nc there is no reason to add it
  2. 00:17:565 (2) - it's should be here 00:17:408 - if you want to emphasis the guitar
  3. 00:25:533 (3,4) - why the spacing is more higher that 00:22:408 (5,1)
  4. 00:27:408 (5,1) - ^
  5. 00:46:158 (5,1) - ds should be high because here 00:46:315 (1) - the vocals start to be strong
  6. 00:47:565 - same about the volume, it should be decreased for the kiai parts
  7. 00:51:080 (5,6) - ?
  8. 00:53:502 (5,1) - the spacing should be similar as 00:54:752 (5,1) - it's the same density of the vocals
  9. 01:15:065 - decrease volume there are just the vocals and there are not too loud
  10. 01:27:096 (5,6) - 1/2 slider should be better for emphasis the guitar like 01:26:627 (3)


gl!
-_Ashura-San_-
El mapa iba excelente porque lo dejastes ?? Ahora los mods no valen :,(
Oxcisor
^
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