Toehoe wrote:

Normal

1. 00:40:259 - section is hard to read and I think a pattern like here 00:53:141 - would be better hmm i think pattern variation maybe better, i keep
2. 00:45:906 - You should follow the pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7693597 feels much better i understand but i follow the pitch to arrange the pattern, actually it's not always the same
   
3. 01:32:494 (92494|1,92494|3) - the chords in this section don't really fit when every sound is the same, should just be single notes

I understand, but i keep it temporarily, and i will ask a few others for this part. I think it is reasonable but now i don't want to change since all single notes would be too boring.

Hope you found useful, GL

DE-CADE wrote:

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[Beginner]

00:43:347 (43347|0) - move to 3, dont map after LN, hard to see by newbie

00:33:553 - https://puu.sh/va8Zt/a16fa7ba0d.png

00:44:494 (44494|0) - end 00:45:553

more to come ..

Evening wrote:

[Another]

00:00:730 (730|2) - you could start out with a slowjam here if you wanna, 0.9 - 0.95 would be significant enough such that the player will notice but won't significantly affect their gameplay. (Take note that you might want to start out the song with a 1.0x speed so that its transition from high speed to low speed would fit the sudden change in intensity in the music, it also helps the players who use scroll speed on scale to adjust correctly) Done

^ you could gradually raise it as music gets more intense

00:17:318 (17318|2) - 1.5 is a bit questionable at some points since it's really hard to read at that speed but since the next notes are logically deduce-able i think it's fine so i just keep them now

00:56:494 (56494|0,57200|1) - You can probably do a speed up here from 1.0 to 1.1
00:57:200 (57200|1) - and abruptly cut to a 0.9 here to create a slowjam for this whole "breakdown" section in the music

^ same idea to increase speed back to 1.0 as the music gets more intense or before that 1/4 stream Done

idk, not many ideas here except for stuttering certain notes which honestly doesn't really add much to the map lol

Rivals_7 wrote:

Really late zzz. NM as requested

looks like this mapset going to be pushed forward. i'll just say this.
This Mapset is currently unrankable. eedow's Hyper and normal Star rating are Way too far (1,9* -> 3,7. barely 1,8* apart) making the difficulty progress are extremely hard for a players that expecting something not too far from the "Normal diff" patterning. I suggest you made another diffs between normal and hyper which around 2,9* to fill the gap (it could be named "Advanced" imo)

1|2|3|4

[Another]

00:09:024 (9024|2) - should've splitted the LN here. if you focusing main melody. guess its close to - 00:11:847 (11847|1,11935|3) -

00:12:112 (12112|1,12200|0,12288|1,12465|1,12553|2,12641|1,12818|2,12906|1,12994|2,13171|1,13259|2,13347|3) - this 3 note sequence pattern goes trill-trill-trill-roll. but later it goes trill-trill-roll-trill which is kinda inconsistent with the music whereas the music has a stable melody and revolve around the same percussion structure. try to rearrange them into somthing structurally similar

00:34:524 (34524|1,34700|1,34877|1,35053|1,35229|1,35406|2,35582|2,35759|2,35935|2) - i'm not sure with the playability here. its really focused in in one column. plus the pattern is somewhat doesnt seem to be interesting enough for the hardest diff itself. you can somehow variate this

00:44:582 (44582|3,44671|2,44759|1,44847|0,44935|1,45024|2,45112|3) - you can continue the 14|23 trill here since the song provide strong kicks and make it consistent with the trill before - 00:44:406 (44406|0,44406|3,44494|2,44494|1) -

the second half is somewhat builded around the same idea so these suggestion might applied to there as well

[Normal]

00:18:906 (18906|0) - delete this one and make - 00:18:729 (18729|1) - an LN to - 00:19:082 - to properly cover the drum roll

00:21:553 (21553|2) - ^

00:41:318 (41318|3) - ^
there's actually many imo

sorry for short mod, cant really find much due to your note placement still looks kinda random (no offense tho) and since your first and second half hardly revolve around the same structure, so I cant say much :>

GL o/

So 1. All Mods Accepted, About 50% about my map is entirely changed. Some problems i realized very early, but i am not sure whetheer it will affect a lot until u point out my problem.
2. It is true that most of my two easist diffs are in random pattern, i didn't think a lot about them, which is a shame for me.
3. Also i will add a diff in the future when i am free, and before i didnt perceive this star gap as a big problem until u point out that is my biggest trouble.

Thanks for ur mod, really nice and helpful, which also helps me to realize my drawbacks as well. :3 And also good luck on ur exam. And if it is ok, plz add me as a friend, i will not bother u at all.

Hiranaka wrote:

Here is my mod as requested.

Advanced

1. I would make these LNs 00:06:112 (6112|2,6200|1,6288|2) - like you did in Another yes. and i apply short LN to a few parts after this as well
2. Add one note here 00:08:935 - ok
3. Remove pls because ghost note 00:09:112 (9112|2) - ok
4. 00:21:906 - I would make the pattern like this. I think it is more playable like this https://puu.sh/vhVF3/be18d5c3e5.jpg i change it in a different way but thanks for pointint out owo
5. 00:40:435 - You might want to add 1 note before every double here 00:40:700 - 00:40:965 - 00:41:229 - 00:41:847 - I won't mention every single one here but I guess you got it it's just that i want to keep the diff not so hard, if i add single note, this part may be harder enough to increase star, which might not be good, and also since this is advanced, it may be still important to keep pattern nice and focused on obvious notes though lol
   
6. 01:16:259 (76259|0,76435|2,76612|0,76965|0,76965|3) - You might want to move these notes around and balance them ok
   
7. 01:29:671 (89671|1,89671|3,89759|2,89847|1,89935|2,89935|0,90024|1) - more balance pls. It's to much focus into the middle imo ok

Hm that's pretty much everything I could find. I hope you get this map ranked! I love the song. Good Luck

dkingo wrote:

Hai a rough mod

mod

[Advanced]

1. 把widescreensupport取消掉 ok
2. HP调到7.5? ok
3. 00:23:671 - 例，鼓点最好都用两个note 如果全部应用我认为星数会提高比较多，所以我还是选择不加比较好，加这个难度的原因就是为了缓解star gap
4. 可以把两段kiai的图案做得乱一些，按顺序排感觉太重复了 没什么头绪，如果有些例子最好可以告诉我
5. 00:36:200 - 这里开始可以把LN放在中间两格 可能影响手感，而且旋律基本都是在重复，这个pattern也就重复了一次
6. 00:44:318 - 加一个note ok
7. 01:18:377 - 给木鱼(?)加一个note instead我给它换了hitsound，后面的重鼓我用的双键，这儿要是还用感觉音量大小不太匹配
   

[Normal]

1. 00:12:024 (12024|0,12377|0,12729|0) - 3个jack在normal难度太多了，最好把一个note重新排一下 我觉得 example有么，现在这样我觉得本来速度也不快，能构成jack吗？

没发现其他问题，图做的不错

谢谢摸图，我思考了很多，以及谢谢star

Good luck!

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi there, just some suggestion here
General

- About your hitsound usage, i can only saw u use C (normal-hit-clap), W ( normal-hitwhistle) and normal-hitnormal, i think all these are unused hitsound > http://puu.sh/vshLf/e0397b0e60.png since i can't find the where did u apply this, if u do please tell me where is it
my suggestion remove all the highlighted hitsound file and use only normal type hitsound

-hitsound are kinda inconsistent and some part are missing, example 00:34:612 - till 00:40:259 - , u should probably recheck for each difficulty again

- suggest to change difficulty names ( Advanced > Hyper , Eedow's Hyper > Another , Another > Extra or any custom name u like) advanced and hyper actually sound about the same in my opinion

Beginner
- 00:34:259 (34259|0) - it should start at 00:34:082 - for the long sound or the 1/4 kick roll.
- 01:52:259 (112259|2,112612|1,112965|2) - suggest to catch the vocal sound here, example > http://puu.sh/vsidm/de6b6b7fb3.png

Normal
- 00:12:024 - for all these crash sound u heard, u should add finish hitsound to them since it represent the crash cymbal here, u should recheck again for this one
- 00:12:024 - till 00:17:318 - isnt all sound the same? but why have W for place like 00:12:729 (12729|0,12729|3) - ? it should all C
- 00:18:377 (18377|3,18465|1,18641|3) - missing hitsound C, and so on like 00:19:259 (19259|3,19347|1,19524|3,19788|0,19877|2,20053|0) - please recheck all the missing hitsound again
- 01:19:788 - double note here?
- 01:52:965 - u can use another LN to emphasize the 1/8 burst sound here, end at 01:53:318 -

Advanced
- 00:06:024 - better not to miss this sound too
- 00:11:671 - suggest to add a note ^
- 00:44:318 (44318|1,44318|0) - why double note here? refer 00:42:729 (42729|3,42729|0,42818|1,42906|2,42994|3) - all these time u didn't use any double for 1/4 stream
- 00:45:906 - suggest double note here for crash
- 00:57:200 - ^
- did u copy paste the pattern each time? lol

Another
01:08:494 - 01:09:906 - 01:11:318 - 01:12:729 - how about make double note here? if u notice there is a bell sound for each double tick timing, and so on till 01:18:377 -
feel the pattern are just CTRL+H from each time, well is not wrong too


Overall the pattern are solid but the hitsound are inconsistent to me, please give a recheck for each difficulty again, good luck!

Critical_Star wrote:

Eedow's Hyper
00:27:818 - 00:28:347 - highly suggest to add a note here to make a 1/4 stream
00:33:465 - 00:39:112 - here too, i feel much comfortable to make a full 1/4 stream here instead breaking this flow, and so on if u accept

Critical_Star wrote:

Eedow's Another
01:42:377 - till 01:47:671 - why there is need of slow down here? i do think the music here are still constant intensive compared to the previous part, it just feel a litle odd to make a slow sv here

Critical_Star wrote:

recheck no kud
pattern and hitsound seems fine now
just going through with some sv here


Extra
00:17:318 - x5.00 is enough
00:22:788 - 01:30:553 - x0.01 with x5.00 is not a really good idea here, while i still able to catch it but i suggest a slow down sv here instead flying sv "let" "rock" "it"
00:39:906 - x5.00
00:51:200 - the sound impact are greater here, i suggest x5.00 like before
01:19:435 - 01:25:082 - 01:47:671 - 01:53:318 - same thing like before x5.00 suggestion

dkingo wrote:

搞事情啊

rs_fadeaway wrote:

后排贺电,相信很快会rq的！
gratz))

YaHao wrote:

I've found some issues which I think worthy to mention before this map hit the ranked stage


[Extra]

00:00:740 - This whole 0.91 -> 0.92 -> 0.93 .... -> 1.00 thing, if you want to add something like this, at least do it right. The gap between each green line are so random, like the gap between the first two green line are 2/1, then the 2nd one and the 3rd one are 4/1 and so on. Plus while you changing the speed on every single bell sound, you suddenly decide not to on 00:09:563 - which are so wrong imo.
On the other hand, I dont see why you add these 0.01 gap, player can barely realize the changes and give them random 300 instead of 320 (Yes, someone SS'ed this map i know, but it does mean it is a good SV to use here)
If you really really want to add this kinda of SVs here (which I'm totally suggest not to), change 00:00:740 - to 0.92, 00:03:563 - change to 0.94 then 00:06:387 - change to 0.96, lastly 00:09:210 - change to 0.98 and delete the rest of the SVs, you can see what i'm trying to do here is change the speed in every bell sound with 0.02 difference which is easier for player to follow instead of changing speed randomly.

Looking forward to see your reply

Tofu1222 wrote:

YaHao wrote:

Things...

Eedow's Diff I will ask her later to check. I will explain this SV change in extra diff

For one thing, in this part i intend to make the SV change from 0.9-1.0 to note a volume change from weaker to stronger. You can also see that. And the reason for this uneven change is due to the timing settings itself at first, i cannot evenly distribute them like 0.9125,0.925....so i take the estimated value and delete those which are same. You may also notice them.
So are you saying the current timing is "evenly distributed"? Before 00:01:445 - they are 2/1 length then next one is 4/1 and only speed up by 0.1, then 00:03:563 - 2/1 again. At least from what i've heard from the music itself, it doesnt goes like this

What I want to say is, this small, uneven change won't affect people's play. Even though it may not be the perfect one in your mind,
If someone think it's not perfect and gave a proper reason, then you should change it

this way is not wrong, and small changes in SV like 0.01 will not cause problems really.
Map got dq-ed because of 1ms delay on the green line. Does it affect the game play? No. 0.01 is a small change, true, but it doesnt give you the right to place 0.01 gap SVs randomly thru the whole section

If it is so noticeable i think BNs who check my mapset should have pointed them out.
Its not noticeable while playing doesnt mean its right to use. Things BNs didnt point out its either they PERSONALLY think its ok or they've missed it. otherwise why you think there are so many map get dq-ed after qualified

Sorry, I will not change this. But thanks for your concern

YaHao wrote:

Yea, for the sake of your lovely qualified icon, ofc you wouldnt change it

Tofu1222 wrote:

YaHao wrote:

Yea, for the sake of your lovely qualified icon, ofc you wouldnt change it

I know what you mean and you intend to point out and I wont complain. I will further consider your suggestion though I am personally ok with this until Eedow reply to your mod.
Plz wait for her reply. Thanks. Also please don't keep finding mistakes in my reply.

YaHao wrote:

I've found some issues which I think worthy to mention before this map hit the ranked stage

[Eedow's Another]

00:17:416 - The gap between the SVs in this slow down section are not linear, it goes from 0.5->0.6->0,8. Please change the first slow down SV 00:17:416 - from 0.5 to 0.4 so the gap between are all stick with 0.2 and make the whole SV smoother. If you wonder will this change affect the game play? No, its hard to notice this small change but I think for a qualified map, if there is room for improvement, then we should change it.

00:39:916 - Same as here (Not gonna mention you just copy paste the whole previous pattern)

00:56:769 - Why you change the pattern structure when the pitch is changed at 00:56:857 - ? The whole burst looks so random to me, img something like this should be more accurate.

01:55:798 - I can see you are trying to emphasize the "lets rock it" vocal, but do note that, the LN tail (ending) doesnt give much impact like normal notes or the beginning of the LN. Its also weird to play since you can hear the background long sound is finished at 01:56:063 - which none of the current LNs end at that timing, it does confuse me while playing until I check it in edit. You can either change all the LNs ending to 01:56:063 - , or if you want to show some difference in your diff compare with other diff, you can just simply delete the LN and add note on 01:55:975 - 01:56:151 - 01:56:328 - for the vocal instead of using LN tail to represent them.

Looking forward to see your reply

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

YaHao wrote:

Things...

Mr.SanadaYukimura,
I don't know who you are, but I reject all of your mod.
First, It's no meaningful to make the smoothest SVs 00:17:416
It is, give me one good reason why you dont want to change it, cause it doesnt fit the song

Second, you denied Fresh Chicken's mod 00:56:857
if something is wrong/questionable, i dont care whether or not you have discussed this with the BN
BNs are not always 100% correct

Third, It's funny to change the LNs into notes and it's boring 01:55:798
What you're doing now is what we call boring, fancy pattern doesnt mean is always good or fit the music

The last, The real Eedow is dead. I'm just taking her position, so don't put your personal emotions to this mapset, you are truly PITIABLE
its nothing personal, i dont give a damn who you are. Lower your self-esteem and lets face the real problem here.