Very nice map, star
Please make also the easy and normal difficult as long as it is now
Please make also the easy and normal difficult as long as it is now
thx!!Jasquil wrote:
Very nice map, star
Please make also the easy and normal difficult as long as it is now
Sorry,2nnt wrote:
Awesome map of nice song ^^
ps. If you want CTB guest difficulty by me, I could be up for it :3
ありんこおおおおおおおおおおおお!!!!!!!!!!!val0108 wrote:
お待たせ!!!全部作り直した!![attachment=0:45b47]Hatsune Miku - Sakura Zensen Ijou Nashi (Lalarun) [Ijou Ari].osu[/attachment:45b47]
MODありがとう!!Chocopikel wrote:
Modリクありがとー
[Easy]
kiai time入ってないから入れてねー 忘れてた!
00:26:406 (5) - New combo OK
00:55:835 (1) - DSx2辛いかも? OK
01:07:549 (3) - New combo OK
01:39:264 (5) - サークルのほうがいいかなー OK
02:36:407 (5) - ^ OK
02:43:549 (4) - New combo OK
03:10:978 (5) - ^ OK
[Normal]
kiai time入ってないから入れてねー OK
00:40:111 (5) - New combo OK
00:55:825 (1) - Audio Volume soft 5% suggestion OK
02:00:111 (1,2,3,4) - DS x1 OK
02:36:111 (1) - !? 02:36:111 (5)とかぶってるで・・・ warotawwwww
02:46:968 (5) - New combo OK
[Hard]
OD +1
[Ijou Ari]
HP +2ぐらい
01:04:978 (1) - 全部ホイッスルでもいいんじゃないかなー
02:11:549 (1) - ここサークル置いてスライダーのスタート02:11:692
[Ijou Nashi]
難しすぎるんで全部真ん中に置いてはどうでしょうか suggesution このままで^^
がんばー
Lalarun wrote:
MODありがとう!!Chocopikel wrote:
Modリクありがとー
[Easy]
kiai time入ってないから入れてねー 忘れてた!
00:26:406 (5) - New combo OK
00:55:835 (1) - DSx2辛いかも? OK
01:07:549 (3) - New combo OK
01:39:264 (5) - サークルのほうがいいかなー OK
02:36:407 (5) - ^ OK
02:43:549 (4) - New combo OK
03:10:978 (5) - ^ OK
[Normal]
kiai time入ってないから入れてねー OK
00:40:111 (5) - New combo OK
00:55:825 (1) - Audio Volume soft 5% suggestion OK
02:00:111 (1,2,3,4) - DS x1 OK
02:36:111 (1) - !? 02:36:111 (5)とかぶってるで・・・ warotawwwww
02:46:968 (5) - New combo OK
[Hard]
OD +1
[Ijou Nashi]
難しすぎるんで全部真ん中に置いてはどうでしょうか suggesution このままで^^
がんばー
Done!!K o h a k u wrote:
FinishMODになってしまいました。
[Ijou Nashi]
00:28:692 (3) - add finish?
01:09:692 (1) - ^
01:23:621 (1) - mute sound
01:52:121 (1) - add finsh?
02:06:978 (1) - ^
02:43:549 (5) - ^
02:48:121 (5) - ^
02:48:692 (9) - ^
02:48:835 - remove finish
02:57:264 (1) - add finish?
03:13:264 (3) - remove whistle and add finish
[Hard]
Difficulty: Approach Rate 8 is better
01:13:264 (2) - add finish
01:21:264- add finish
01:21:835 (5) - add finish
01:22:121- remove finish
02:02:406 (1) - add finish
02:43:549 (2) - ^
02:48:121 (3) - ^
02:48:692 (3) -^
02:54:978 (1) - ^
02:55:264- remove finish
03:11:978 (3) - add finish
03:12:407 (4) - ^
03:12:692- ^
[Normal]
Difficulty: Approach Rate 5 or 6 is better
02:48:692 (2) - add finish
02:48:692 - ^
[Easy]
00:46:978 (1) - add finish
00:55:549 (4) - ^
02:02:406 (1) - ^
02:48:121 (1) - ^
02:48:978 (2) - ^
02:49:263 (3) - ^
頑張ってね
Done!!Faust wrote:
Let's see.
Overall: 2.0 DS
- 01:25:264 - Unsnapped bookmark. Better remove this and the rest as well.
Easy:
- 00:31:764 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.
Normal:
- 00:31:764 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.
- 00:37:764 - ^
Please check the rest of the map for these issues, lol. There are more behind.
Hard:
No special diff name?
I think it's safe to have the AR & OD +1 or the difficulty gap will be too high since the last 2 Insane diffs are 地獄
Ijou Nashi:
Consistent map difficulty throughout. Not much to find.
- 00:31:764 - Here, your inherited timing section is unsnapped by 4 ms.
- 01:48:978 (5,6,7) - Can be done better, I think. Just looks odd.
- 01:51:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe this can be a bit further, or placed better.
Try this:
- 01:52:835 (2) - If you use my stream pattern then move this note to somewhere you can see, since it will be blocked.
- 02:57:264 (1) - Not a good idea to place this here. Try stacking on (2). I think this is quite mean
あありおいがとうval0108 wrote:
いろいろdone!![attachment=0:d6e63]Hatsune Miku - Sakura Zensen Ijou Nashi (Lalarun) [Ijou Ari].osu[/attachment:d6e63]
Done!!y u c a wrote:
ヽ(・ω・*)ノ
General
Ijou Ari diffだけぷれびゅーポイントないよおおおお
Easy
00:37:835 (1) - スライダーの最初にフィニッシュ
00:55:549 (4) - これスライダーにしたらいいかもSPOILER01:24:692 - 音消し忘れ?これか
01:53:263 (1) - スライダーの頭にフィニッシュ
02:54:978 (1) - ^?
Normal
01:24:692 - 音最後消すの忘れてる?
02:50:121 (5) - ふぃにっしゅなし
02:50:406 (1) - フィニッシュ追加
03:02:906 -なんで青線でスピナーおわってるんww
Hard
AR-1のほうがいいかもー
01:14:406 (1) - ふぃにっしゅ
01:24:692 - 最後音消すのわすれてる?
01:57:835 (1) - これのほうがいいかもかも
Ijou Nashi
00:18:978 (1) - ニューコンボなし?
00:19:549 (5) - ニューコンボ
00:19:835 (1) - ニューコンボなし
00:23:549 (1) - ^
00:24:121 (6) - ニューコンボとフィニッシュ
Done!!val0108 wrote:
[Ijou Ari]
omg.wtf!!
[Ijou Nashi]
00:20:478 (4,5) - 8/1置き・・・がいいんじゃないだろうか 変更
00:25:049 (6,7) - ^
03:09:621 (6,7) - ^
00:56:121 - Break
01:25:263 (1,2) - 音量ダウン
01:46:692 (6) - 切り替えし一回
01:48:406 (9) - ^
01:50:692 (6) - ^
01:51:478 (8,1) - ここどうだろうか・・・。普通に繋げてもいいんじゃない?BPM210の連打を繋げるってだけで難しいと思う。 DS下げた!
02:09:978 (2) - もうちょっと上にずらすかして見やすくしたほうがいいかも。 02:09:263 (8) - をずらした!
02:22:406 (1,2) - 音量ダウン
[Hard]
00:10:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 全部0.7置きでいいんじゃない? 気に入ってるからとりあえずこのまま!
00:56:121 - Break
01:14:978 (3,3) - スライダー速度0.5 曲の鈴に合わせてるからとりあえずこのままで!
01:58:264 - note欲しい! 加えた
02:18:978 (3,4) - もうちょっと2に近づけていいと思う
02:46:835 (4) - http://puu.sh/aeyZ こっちのほうが叩きやすいしリズムとれると思うよ。 ありがと!
03:03:835 (2,1) - 離そう 少し配置変更
[Normal]
00:56:121 - Break
01:14:978 (3,2) - ノート一個だけのほうがいい これもハードと一緒かな
[いーじー]
00:56:121 - Break
(゚∀゚=゚∀゚)[attachment=0:76e1f]Hatsune Miku - Sakura Zensen Ijou Nashi (Lalarun) [Ijou Ari].osu[/attachment:76e1f]
Mod ありがとう~Colin Hou wrote:
おまたせ!
Chinese New Year took me a couple of weeks, sorry for this orz. No problem~ 祝 新年!!
[General]:OK
- enable 'Display epilepsy warning' (the strobes are not nice as I expected, I may suggest remove the SB but up to you) remove!
- tag in [Ijou Ari]: Vocaliod <--fix this
[Hard]:OK
- 00:23:692 (7) - not really easy for reading at first attempt, try move the slider's body out a bit? Change
- 03:08:264 (7) - ^ Change
- suggest OD8 for the high BPM, it could work better imo
[Nomral]:OK
- 00:55:835 (1) - how about a note? as in Hard you changed this to a note, I thought you're considering a short slider might be too hard
[Ijou Ari]:challenging and fun mapset, contact with me after fixing these.
- 01:25:403 (T) - section not snapped. not a big deal though
wow.Colin Hou wrote:
something I missed: preview of Normal: 161174 is different from others.
fix and I'll bubble
Thx Garven~Garven wrote:
Did some IRC modding.SPOILER13:55 <Garven> : 00:28:692 (1) -
13:56 <Garven> : How about ending it at 00:30:978 - ?
13:56 <Lalarun> : OK!
13:56 <Garven> : Applies to all difficulties
13:58 <Garven> : I am worried about how many 1/2 rhythms there are in this Easy though.
13:58 <Garven> : Especially with 01:16:692 (1,2,3,4) -
13:58 <Garven> : So many in a row
13:58 <Garven> : Maybe delete the 2 and 4
13:59 <Garven> : 01:35:549 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy
13:59 <Garven> : 01:37:263 (3,4) - Kind of a tricky rhythm
14:01 <Lalarun> : hm
14:01 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 - to allow for more recovery time
14:02 <Garven> : 02:32:692 (1) - Too soon after spinner
14:03 <Garven> : 02:34:406 (3,4) - Same as earlier
14:03 <Garven> : 02:36:692 (1) - End this at 02:39:978 -
14:04 <Garven> : 02:55:549 (2,2) - eeeh I really don't like these in Easy difficulties
14:04 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - delete
14:06 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:06 <Garven> : 03:10:978 (1) - How about this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/nC0l
14:09 <Lalarun> : OK, thank you!
14:13 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 -
14:13 <Garven> : In [Normal]
14:14 <Lalarun> : change~
14:15 <Garven> : 02:29:263 (4) - remove finish from the end
14:16 <Lalarun> : wow
14:16 <Lalarun> : thank you XD
14:16 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - add new combo
14:17 <Lalarun> : 03:04:121 (2) - remove
14:17 <Lalarun> : ?
14:18 <Garven> : no, leave it
14:18 <Garven> : Only add on 1
14:18 <Lalarun> : OK
14:19 <Garven> : btw
14:19 <Garven> : Tick rate 2 sounds much better~
14:20 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:22 <Garven> : In hard
14:22 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End at 02:21:978 -
14:26 <Garven> : Ijou Nasi: 02:19:549 (1,2,1,2) - hidoi ;_;
14:27 <Garven> : 02:20:763 (1) - end at 02:21:978 -
14:28 <Lalarun> : hm
14:30 <Lalarun> : bad spacing?
14:31 <Garven> : I kept slide rbreaking.
14:31 <Garven> : 100's
14:35 <Lalarun> : wow XD
14:35 <Garven> : I have a suggestion for your storyboard too
14:36 <Garven> : Right now you have strobes going every two beats
14:36 <Garven> : I think if you have strobes during strong parts of the song, it would fit much better
14:37 <Garven> : So strobe at 02:41:264 - then 02:42:264 -
14:37 <Garven> : And follow that pattern
14:38 <Garven> : Follow that until 02:59:549 -
14:38 <Garven> : You can do a long long strobe here
14:38 <Garven> : and at 03:01:835 - and 03:04:121 -
14:39 <Lalarun> : hm,
14:39 <Lalarun> : Sorry
14:40 <Lalarun> : I can't SB
14:40 <Garven> : Who made this SB?
14:41 <Garven> : Because right now the strobe feels off-time
14:41 <Garven> : The strong rhythmica emphasis doesn't like every two beats during this part
14:33 <Garven> : 02:11:549 (1) - Hrm, feels weird. Might be better having it like this: http://puu.sh/nCg0
14:34 <Garven> : 02:20:692 (1) - end this at 02:21:978 -
14:34 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - end this at 02:20:692 - and start 02:20:692 (1) - at 02:20:835 -
14:36 <val0108> : 02:11:692 (2) - done
14:39 <Garven> : That's all for your diff
14:39 <val0108> : 02:20:692 (1) -
14:39 <val0108> : done
14:39 <val0108> : but,02:19:549 (1) - not change
14:40 <Garven> : Hm, okay
Lalarun wrote:
Thx Garven~Garven wrote:
Did some IRC modding.SPOILER13:55 <Garven> : 00:28:692 (1) -
13:56 <Garven> : How about ending it at 00:30:978 - ?
13:56 <Lalarun> : OK!
13:56 <Garven> : Applies to all difficulties
13:58 <Garven> : I am worried about how many 1/2 rhythms there are in this Easy though.
13:58 <Garven> : Especially with 01:16:692 (1,2,3,4) -
13:58 <Garven> : So many in a row
13:58 <Garven> : Maybe delete the 2 and 4
13:59 <Garven> : 01:35:549 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an easy
13:59 <Garven> : 01:37:263 (3,4) - Kind of a tricky rhythm
14:01 <Lalarun> : hm
14:01 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 - to allow for more recovery time
14:02 <Garven> : 02:32:692 (1) - Too soon after spinner
14:03 <Garven> : 02:34:406 (3,4) - Same as earlier
14:03 <Garven> : 02:36:692 (1) - End this at 02:39:978 -
14:04 <Garven> : 02:55:549 (2,2) - eeeh I really don't like these in Easy difficulties
14:04 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - delete
14:06 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:06 <Garven> : 03:10:978 (1) - How about this rhythm here? http://puu.sh/nC0l
14:09 <Lalarun> : OK, thank you!
14:13 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End this at 02:21:978 -
14:13 <Garven> : In [Normal]
14:14 <Lalarun> : change~
14:15 <Garven> : 02:29:263 (4) - remove finish from the end
14:16 <Lalarun> : wow
14:16 <Lalarun> : thank you XD
14:16 <Garven> : 03:03:549 (1) - add new combo
14:17 <Lalarun> : 03:04:121 (2) - remove
14:17 <Lalarun> : ?
14:18 <Garven> : no, leave it
14:18 <Garven> : Only add on 1
14:18 <Lalarun> : OK
14:19 <Garven> : btw
14:19 <Garven> : Tick rate 2 sounds much better~
14:20 <Lalarun> : OK!
14:22 <Garven> : In hard
14:22 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - End at 02:21:978 -
14:26 <Garven> : Ijou Nasi: 02:19:549 (1,2,1,2) - hidoi ;_;
14:27 <Garven> : 02:20:763 (1) - end at 02:21:978 -
14:28 <Lalarun> : hm
14:30 <Lalarun> : bad spacing?
14:31 <Garven> : I kept slide rbreaking.
14:31 <Garven> : 100's
14:35 <Lalarun> : wow XD
14:35 <Garven> : I have a suggestion for your storyboard too
14:36 <Garven> : Right now you have strobes going every two beats
14:36 <Garven> : I think if you have strobes during strong parts of the song, it would fit much better
14:37 <Garven> : So strobe at 02:41:264 - then 02:42:264 -
14:37 <Garven> : And follow that pattern
14:38 <Garven> : Follow that until 02:59:549 -
14:38 <Garven> : You can do a long long strobe here
14:38 <Garven> : and at 03:01:835 - and 03:04:121 -
14:39 <Lalarun> : hm,
14:39 <Lalarun> : Sorry
14:40 <Lalarun> : I can't SB
14:40 <Garven> : Who made this SB?
14:41 <Garven> : Because right now the strobe feels off-time
14:41 <Garven> : The strong rhythmica emphasis doesn't like every two beats during this part
14:33 <Garven> : 02:11:549 (1) - Hrm, feels weird. Might be better having it like this: http://puu.sh/nCg0
14:34 <Garven> : 02:20:692 (1) - end this at 02:21:978 -
14:34 <Garven> : 02:19:549 (1) - end this at 02:20:692 - and start 02:20:692 (1) - at 02:20:835 -
14:36 <val0108> : 02:11:692 (2) - done
14:39 <Garven> : That's all for your diff
14:39 <val0108> : 02:20:692 (1) -
14:39 <val0108> : done
14:39 <val0108> : but,02:19:549 (1) - not change
14:40 <Garven> : Hm, okay
Fixed!
Garven wrote:
[All difficulties]
I still think Tick rate 2 would fit this song better. Changed
[Normal, Hard, Ijou Nashi]
00:28:692 (1) - End this at 00:31:978 - OK
[Ijou Ari]
Tick rate is still 0.5. Change to at least 1, but 2 is better~
英語力が幼稚園児だからなwwwどやwwwval0108 wrote:
lららんがOK!しか言ってなくて萌えた。
All fixedGarven wrote:
Ack, a few more things, sorry:
[Hard]
01:34:978 (1) - New combo
02:32:120 (1) - New combo
[Normal]
03:03:549 (1) - Remove new combo
[Easy]
01:36:121 (1) - New combo
02:33:263 (1) - New combo
02:41:263 (1) - New combo
03:04:121 (1) - New combo
If someone else asks you to add new combos to the notes at 03:03:549 - in any of your difficulties, refuse them. The way the combo works in this phrase the new combo shouldn't be applied until 03:04:121 -
Dangaard wrote:
Some few things should be fixed
[Easy]
02:54:406 (2,1) - there is a timing overlap here wow.thanks XD
[Normal]
You should increase HP by 1 and OD by 2 fixed
[Hard]
Increase OD by 1 fixed
[Ijou Nashi]
Increase OD by 1 fixed
00:14:406 (9,10) - sounds like there is missing a beat after these fixed
[Ijou Ari]
Increase OD by 1fixed