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arcwinolivirus

Rivals_7 wrote:

weee

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[Normal]

(both) - 00:31:165 (31165|0) - feel that there's should be F here
might applied to other diffs applied in all difficulties

(7K) - 00:05:297 (5297|5) - might be better if its on 4? so the players could feel the emphasis of cymbal - 00:05:603 (5603|1,5603|4) - better if I move it to 4, the double will be only pressed by left hand (as most 7K players are left thumb-er)

[Hard]

(both) - 00:05:603 (5603|1,5603|4) - delete? i found this doesnt seem to be really worth a highlight with such a low noise it has crash sound along with the kick sound. Its very loud and even louder than 00:06:675 - @@

(4K) - 00:51:369 (51369|3,51445|0,51675|1,51751|2) - why is this different in patterning? it seems they revolve around the same 3-sequence-drumroll. why dont make it same? rearranged to a different pattern instead.

(4K) - 00:52:134 (52134|2,52134|1) - actually since this is kiai..... Triple? I decided not to add any triples on my 4K hard difficulty so it can have variation for 7K hard in terms of note density

01:01:930 (61930|3,61930|2) - ^. indicate the new phase of song ^

(both) - 01:23:052 (83052|1) - same as first suggestion. since you quite focusing yourself at drum, i feel this is kinda misplaced its actually a hihat but I guess I will remove it. applied.

01:24:277 (84277|3) - ^ ^

[Fly High!]

uh idk what is fly high! even related but eh...xd its actually a part of the lyrics but yeah. With I started playing SIF and noticed the difficulty naming, I decided to change it to "Expert" xd

(4K) - 00:22:440 (22440|2,22440|0,22440|3,22517|1,22593|3,22670|0) - why dont you make it an usual jumpthrill? repattern'd I decided to make it a jumpstream instead (double-single-double-single-triple)

(4K) - 01:04:379 (64379|2,64379|1,64379|3) - quad? considering its kinda far from the notes after and before decided to make the last impact to be the only quad. With this, I removed other quads as well

(4K) - 01:21:522 (81522|0,81522|1,81522|3) - same? ^

(7K) - 01:21:522 (81522|4,81522|2,81522|0,81522|6) - would consider this a 5-noter for impact same as 4k, decided to make the last final impact to be the 5-noter. Rest of impact/cymbals are quads/

(4K) - 01:26:420 (86420|1,86420|0,86420|3) - quad for final impact? applied!

(7K) - 01:26:420 (86420|4,86420|6,86420|2,86420|0) - similar thing applied!
Thank you so much for the check, Sir Rivals! Much appreciated :oops:

20th MOD and BN check applied and.. UPDATED
Rivals_7
[Expert]
(7K) - 00:21:828 (21828|1) - missing clap here. see 4K

(both) - 00:31:471 -

now that i wondering why is this kick getting a triples while all the other are doubles

(4K) - 00:44:940 (44940|1) - remove one. as in 7K doesnt have doubles

(7K) - 00:59:328 - same concern about kick getting a triple

(4K) - 01:09:430 (69430|3,69736|2) - think its quite worth for a double?

[Hard]

(both) - 00:21:828 - feel that the noise is kinda loud to be ignored completely. might recommend to add note

should be all of it. if you confident with all things, you may PM me or lemmeknow on IRC if i'm online
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Expert]
(7K) - 00:21:828 (21828|1) - missing clap here. see 4K added. Also with this, I added a note with the clap hitsound on 4K/7K Hard.

(both) - 00:31:471 -

now that i wondering why is this kick getting a triples while all the other are doubles its the emphasis for the loud melody sound similar to 00:31:165 - and 00:31:777 - along with the note density of double for kick.

(4K) - 00:44:940 (44940|1) - remove one. as in 7K doesnt have doubles ok!

(7K) - 00:59:328 - same concern about kick getting a triple along with the long sound at the bgm. If this map has long notes, one note here would be LN with the double note kick.

(4K) - 01:09:430 (69430|3,69736|2) - think its quite worth for a double? nice notice! added on 01:09:736 - as well since kick.

[Hard]

(both) - 00:21:828 - feel that the noise is kinda loud to be ignored completely. might recommend to add note added~

should be all of it. if you confident with all things, you may PM me or lemmeknow on IRC if i'm online I'll pm you instead so you can take time sir :3/ Thank you so much again
Thank you so much for the re-check, Sir Rivals! Much appreciated :oops:

Updated!
Rivals_7
well then. Good luck o/
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Rivals_7 wrote:

well then. Good luck o/
Thank you so much again! :oops:
franciskyuun
GOING BACK FOR THE APRIL FEELS EH? Anyways good luck <3 ;)
franciskyuun
seems na wala pa palang hitsounds, ito yung suggested ko na hitsound, https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bz00P ... ENPZnFwT2M extracted na yan galing sa skin ni -Nitrous pero originally yung hitsound ay sa Love Live School Idol Festival mismo and na try ko na rin yung map at ok lang ang pag test ko :D
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

franciskyuun wrote:

seems na wala pa palang hitsounds, ito yung suggested ko na hitsound, https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bz00P ... ENPZnFwT2M extracted na yan galing sa skin ni -Nitrous pero originally yung hitsound ay sa Love Live School Idol Festival mismo and na try ko na rin yung map at ok lang ang pag test ko :D
may hitsound na to lol, also hindi naman i bu-bubble ng BN to kung hindi pa ready sa rank :)
though thanks sa feedback o/
Nitrous
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Maxus
Decided to pick this map from sergio's thread, so here i go :3

[General]
  1. Metadata is unfortunately wrong here, for the source, It should be "ラブライブ! School idol project" according to Alacat's post at t/238815/start=180

[4K Normal]
  1. 00:03:001 (3001|3,3001|1,4226|3,4226|0) - not making this 43-12? so it would introduce different doubles pattern with 00:00:706 - and 00:05:297 -
  2. 00:31:624 - Add note? i felt the 1/2 stream already started here.
  3. 00:41:879 - felt like you still need to emphasize this roll with adding one note here, felt awkward without it.
  4. 00:46:165 - felt like the sound is too big to be ignored here..
  5. 01:11:114 (71114|3,71267|1) - I suggest switch column between these 2 notes, the strain of 01:11:267 (71267|1,71573|1,71726|0) - makes it a bit heavier when want to hit upcoming notes at 01:12:644 (72644|0,72950|1,73257|0,73869|1,73869|0) -
  6. 01:16:930 - The diamond pattern a bit comes out of nowhere imo, how about making this one the same column as 01:17:542 - ? it kinda synchronize with the vocal "tonde tonde" here, which is plus point imo, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7998916 retain the balance, comfortability and musicality imo.
[7K Normal]
  1. 01:24:583 (84583|4,84736|2) - Somehow felt the symmetry could be formed better if you make it at col 6 and col 2 here, try it :P
    Oh god don't really find anything here, you might want to apply the thing in 4K normal to 7K normal at some places if you agree to add
[4K Hard]
  1. 00:28:716 (28716|2,28716|0,29175|0,29175|2,29787|2,29787|0) - Intentional being at the same column? i think you can make it more proper and variative by having them at different column like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999031
  2. 00:50:374 - Kinda awkward you didn't map the 1/4 here.
  3. 01:02:542 (62542|0,62695|1,62848|3,62848|2,63154|1,63308|2,63461|0,63461|3,63614|1) - perhaps you can Ctrl+H this, and then move 01:03:920 (63920|0) - to col 2? a bit too heavy you already have 01:01:012 (61012|2,61012|3,61318|2,61318|3,61547|2,61624|3,61930|2,61930|3) - and then you still focused on right hand.
[7K Hard]
  1. 00:31:165 - This should be triple , finish sound here
  2. 00:31:777 - Should be double, no finish sound.
  3. 00:50:374 - Same with 4K Hard issue.
  4. 00:50:757 - 00:51:063 - see no harm making this triple i think.
  5. 01:03:767 - delete this note? no kick sound i think.
[4K Expert]
  1. 00:20:297 - Perhaps you can make the trill in the right hand side to be more balanced? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999653
  2. 01:11:879 - Felt that the chain of one hand trill occured for too long here, perhaps you can balance this better by https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999779
  3. 01:23:818 (83818|0) - move to col 4 here feels better to balancing the occurence of the jack at 01:24:277 (84277|0,84583|0,84736|0) -
[7K Expert]
  1. 00:27:491 - intentionally emptied? in 4K Expert you do use one note here.
  2. 00:51:063 - reduce one note? i thought you only use 4 note for finish.
  3. 01:09:277 - Better use quad here, it's finish sound.
Really nice map here, call me back~
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Maxus wrote:

Decided to pick this map from sergio's thread, so here i go :3

[General]
  1. Metadata is unfortunately wrong here, for the source, It should be "ラブライブ! School idol project" according to Alacat's post at t/238815/start=180 applied! Thanks!

[4K Normal]
  1. 00:03:001 (3001|3,3001|1,4226|3,4226|0) - not making this 43-12? so it would introduce different doubles pattern with 00:00:706 - and 00:05:297 - I wanted the players to key press those impact sound with both hands so it can be felt more.
  2. 00:31:624 - Add note? i felt the 1/2 stream already started here. nice notice! added
  3. 00:41:879 - felt like you still need to emphasize this roll with adding one note here, felt awkward without it. added a note along with the hitsound
  4. 00:46:165 - felt like the sound is too big to be ignored here.. added! also added in 7k as well
  5. 01:11:114 (71114|3,71267|1) - I suggest switch column between these 2 notes, the strain of 01:11:267 (71267|1,71573|1,71726|0) - makes it a bit heavier when want to hit upcoming notes at 01:12:644 (72644|0,72950|1,73257|0,73869|1,73869|0) - applied! switched column, it makes the pattern more comfortable.
  6. 01:16:930 - The diamond pattern a bit comes out of nowhere imo, how about making this one the same column as 01:17:542 - ? it kinda synchronize with the vocal "tonde tonde" here, which is plus point imo, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7998916 retain the balance, comfortability and musicality imo. Very nice suggestion! applied~
[7K Normal]
  1. 01:24:583 (84583|4,84736|2) - Somehow felt the symmetry could be formed better if you make it at col 6 and col 2 here, try it :P Somehow, it is much better to execute. Applied~
    Oh god don't really find anything here, you might want to apply the thing in 4K normal to 7K normal at some places if you agree to add Applied those already while doing the 4K stuff~
[4K Hard]
  1. 00:28:716 (28716|2,28716|0,29175|0,29175|2,29787|2,29787|0) - Intentional being at the same column? i think you can make it more proper and variative by having them at different column like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999031 Applied but in different pattern to have variation.
  2. 00:50:374 - Kinda awkward you didn't map the 1/4 here. added 1/4th, also in 7K~
  3. 01:02:542 (62542|0,62695|1,62848|3,62848|2,63154|1,63308|2,63461|0,63461|3,63614|1) - perhaps you can Ctrl+H this, and then move 01:03:920 (63920|0) - to col 2? a bit too heavy you already have 01:01:012 (61012|2,61012|3,61318|2,61318|3,61547|2,61624|3,61930|2,61930|3) - and then you still focused on right hand. Applied and also rearranged some pattern for smooth executions.
[7K Hard]
  1. 00:31:165 - This should be triple , finish sound here applied
  2. 00:31:777 - Should be double, no finish sound. I hear a cymbal here clearly, more like a low crash
  3. 00:50:374 - Same with 4K Hard issue. already fixed
  4. 00:50:757 - 00:51:063 - see no harm making this triple i think. already triple
  5. 01:03:767 - delete this note? no kick sound i think. its the chime-like sound
[4K Expert]
  1. 00:20:297 - Perhaps you can make the trill in the right hand side to be more balanced? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999653 Applied and rearranged some patterns a bit.
  2. 01:11:879 - Felt that the chain of one hand trill occured for too long here, perhaps you can balance this better by https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7999779 applied
  3. 01:23:818 (83818|0) - move to col 4 here feels better to balancing the occurence of the jack at 01:24:277 (84277|0,84583|0,84736|0) - oh didn't noticed this one, moved.
[7K Expert]
  1. 00:27:491 - intentionally emptied? in 4K Expert you do use one note here. added
  2. 00:51:063 - reduce one note? i thought you only use 4 note for finish. I decided to use 5 noter since its the loudest sound beside the finisher last note.
  3. 01:09:277 - Better use quad here, it's finish sound. Applied nice notice!
Really nice map here, call me back~ calling you back now, Sir! :oops:

Thank you so much for the check, Sir Maxus! Much appreciated :oops:

21st MOD and BN check applied and.. UPDATED
Maxus
aaaaa i'm so sorry arcwin.. the Title should be : "僕らは今のなかで(TVサイズ)" according to http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html , where i found the title at https://puu.sh/vG91U/56eece205d.jpg
and Romanised Title should be : "Bokura wa Ima no Naka de(TV Size)" with no spacing between the title and (TV Size)
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Maxus wrote:

aaaaa i'm so sorry arcwin.. the Title should be : "僕らは今のなかで(TVサイズ)" according to http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/otonokizaka/release.html , where i found the title at https://puu.sh/vG91U/56eece205d.jpg
and Romanised Title should be : "Bokura wa Ima no Naka de(TV Size)" with no spacing between the title and (TV Size)
Now fixed and updated! Thank you for double checking, Sir! :oops:
Maxus
Let my love be with Lovelive <3
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Maxus wrote:

Let my love be with Lovelive <3
Thank you so much Sir Maxus! Have love and life <3
Eldergleam
T R I G G E R E D ! ! ! ! !

btw congratz arcwin
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Eldergleam wrote:

T R I G G E R E D ! ! ! ! !

btw congratz arcwin
t r i g g e r i n g ! !
thanks~ hahah!
Shionia-Chan
more µ's
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Shionia-Chan wrote:

more µ's
Thanks for the support! Will probably do more soon :P
_Meep_
My std when uwu
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