Surono wrote:

Ayam kah oh Ashyuhh - Wah mama ga NGACA HATInya [Bedugh] mep dibuat oleh lebtop be_DELL

Hi

>Nardo
Hi Mastah m(_ _ )m
* 00:07:375 (20,21,22) - change these as kat? to give contrast with burst sounds and 00:07:624 (23,24,25) - normal sounds, feels awkward if leave 00:07:375 (20,21) - these as don.. except you wanted to make it as 1/6 I think it still sounds okay as the current pattern could emphasize the background instrument at 00:07:541 (22,26) -
* 00:38:204 (205,206) - these sounds are similar, could be D D for consistency 00:38:867 (208) - also has the same stress but with a lower pitch. Here I would prefer flow and complexity to 3 simple finishes.
* 00:38:950 (209) - kat this? 00:38:867 (208,210) - need alteration for these sounds. Hmm, it would sound a bit unnatural in my opinion.
* 00:51:215 - kat it to follow piano too? I see your point, but following vocal is my prime concern here owing to the calmness.
* 01:13:010 (455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - would change to kkd d kkd d kkd because kats are more accurate at emphasize and synced with alteration of 01:12:845 (454,455,458,459,462,463) - these sounds Each 1/2 dd has the same pitch, so I think it would be fine to use the current pattern.

coba cari 2 mod lagi, setidaknya cari 1 modder yg jago kek Senritsu. soalnya dia juga suka ngurus spread tapi skarang inactive.

GL

Surono wrote:

Ayam kah oh Ashyuhh - Wah mama ga NGACA HATInya [Bedugh] mep dibuat oleh lebtop be_DELL lmao
>Oni
* 00:29:999 - geser 00:29:834 - sini lebih pas sama vokal ok.
* 00:32:237 - jadi kat buat ikut vokal juga, biar ada kontras di daerah pola ini. ok.
* 00:32:568 (126,127,128,129) - berlebihan, mending jadiin ddk d biar pas hmm, sebenarnya rada gimana gitu punya pola yg sama kayak 00:30:745 (115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - tapi ok deh.
* 00:38:204 (162,163) - jadiin Don finish dua2nya, suaranya sama ok.
* 00:53:618 (233,234,235) - jadi k d k biar pas sama pergantian suaranya ok, ctrl+g' ed.
* 00:55:773 - ga terlalu tinggi buat di teken kat, jadi don aja.. dan antisipasi ga banyak kat di pola ini ok.
* 00:57:099 - delete aja sih, 00:51:795 - disini aja kosong.. aneh juga panjang2 gitu ga ada jeda sebagai diff oni ok.
* 00:57:265 - dari sini buat k k d ddk kkd d k, lebih alus polanya sama ga canggung ok.
* 00:59:999 - pindah 00:59:834 - sini jadi don.. kaget aja akhir pola disini streamnya di akhir. 01:00:414 (276,277,278,279) - biar ada temennya ini kwkwk ok, tapi gw ubah 01:00:082 - jadi don, biar ada beda pola sama 01:00:414 (277,278,279,280) - .
* 01:10:193 - vokal tinggi, kudu di teken kat.. jgn don wkkwk ok.
* 01:14:336 - isi finish, ada impact disitu hmm, terlalu susah ga ya, D dkk jadinya itu, tapi ok manut wae lol.
* 01:16:988 - delete buat rest oke.
ini diff udah lumayan, cuman tata2 streamnya kadang bkin kaget dimaenin.. misalnya x x x x xxx kadang dipencet hambar kalau ngetap2 trus tiba2 ada stream diakhir.. kalau diteko enaknya ya kek x x xxx x x contohnya. yg dipoint2 aja itu maslahnya, jgn diutek2 lagi gegara komeng dari akunya kwkw sip2, ga gw utak atik selain yg gw tulis diatas xd.

>Muzukashii
* 00:08:535 - tambah don, jauh nih ke oni sama deket ke futsuu... ok.
* 00:15:165 - selo ini.. tambah don biar ga keseloan *sry jawa kebiasaan, intinya sama Oni mah jauh.. disini malah ada renggang gede* aku yo reti jowo kok, santai wae lol, added at 00:15:331 - .
* 00:15:828 - eh ini ada cymbalnya kan? mending isi aja.. di Oni juga tuh kalau mau keknya ini gw keep aja deh, diff inner juga ga ada finishernya sih xd.
* 00:20:137 (49,50) - di balik, biar pas sama tinggi datarnya si vokal. di oni buat kat lah biar sama kek disini 00:20:469 - ok.
* 00:38:204 (122,123) - kek Oni, di atur2 yak ok, tapi mentok ketemu pattern 1/2 beat Dkd gw, aneh dimain buat gw, tapi entahlah wkwkwk.
* 01:07:541 - finish, di Oni juga udah finish disini dulu emang finish disini, tapi gw apply mod siapa dulu jadi ga di finish lagi, ok dibalikin lagi.
* 01:10:856 - don terus 01:11:021 - kat buat alterasi,* al terasi lel * biar ga jauh sama si Oni wew, 1/2 beat 6plet sebelum 1/4 beat ddd sama kkk, breaknya cukupkah itu? Manut wae deh wkwkwk.
* 01:14:336 (271,274) - finish kalau bisa Mentok di pattern DkkD, aneh gw mainnya, but ok.
* 01:15:994 - tambah notes, don deh terus 01:17:320 - ini juga kasih kat aja biar ada variasi sama ga jauh sama oni.
* 01:20:635 - kat, ada flow merdu disini
* 01:23:618 - 01:24:281 - 01:24:944 - 01:25:607 - hapus aja... soalnya juga sama futsuu kejauhan ok, deleted.
banyak bet pola 4plet 1/2 tapi emang cocok ya kwkwkw entah gw yg noob ngemap tekos keknya lol.

>Futsuu
* 00:14:171 - tambah don aja, renggang banget di awal2 nih polanya sadis amat, rearranged with my own pattern.
* 00:16:823 - ^ gpp ^
* 00:36:712 - gpp kwkw aneh gw pas mainnya, kek kesannya dK itu terlalu tiba2, re-arranged with my own pattern.
* 00:54:613 - gpp, renggang banget disini.. padhal kiai :"D added d here.
* 00:58:259 - delete terus, 00:58:093 - ganti don.. biar aman disini.. doble 1/2nya sadis somehow buat gw patternnya bagusan kayak gini, tapi gw ganti 00:58:093 - jadi d biar polanya jadi kk dd lebih mudah di read.
* 01:00:583 - delete ok.
* 01:14:502 - waduh sama ketan jauh lagi.. hapus aja, susah juga ini notesnya di tick2 yg liar kwkw ok.
* 01:21:961 - pindah ke 01:22:126 - sini changed to kk dd instead.
* 01:28:425 - delete, 01:28:259 - kasih finish.. utamakan keselamatan oke.
hampir oke ini, cuman banyak yg rada ngeri2 polanya walau banyak renggang restnya.. kadang restnya renggang banget terus kadang polanya padet susah gitu.. starsnya gede soalnya ini overall pake pola2 genap.. kek banyak gunain 2plet gitu dah tapi gpp *pepes buat nubi wkwk* kalo gw bener2 ikut mod lu starnya jadi 2,37 kalo ga salah lol.

coba cari 2 mod lagi, setidaknya cari 1 modder yg jago kek Senritsu. soalnya dia juga suka ngurus spread tapi skarang inactive. ok, gw coba cari mod lagi nanti wkwkwk.

GL

Surono wrote:

Ayam kah oh Ashyuhh - Wah mama ga NGACA HATInya [Bedugh] mep dibuat oleh lebtop be_DELL

Hi

>Yuzu Rinrin
* 00:36:878 - add don then start spinner 00:37:375 - here until 00:39:033 - here to follow long vocal.
* 01:07:541 - finish to give contrast with 01:06:215 (25,26) -
all changed

coba cari 2 mod lagi, setidaknya cari 1 modder yg jago kek Senritsu. soalnya dia juga suka ngurus spread tapi skarang inactive.

GL

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Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~!! :3
My modding is include personal feeling & suggestion.
please feel free to ignore, If my modding affect your mapping style.

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

• [General]
  
  

1. This is statistical diff gap. Kantan~Muzukashii is compact, but Muzukashii~Inner Oni have large gap.
   But it's a statistical data. Genarally, note increment is acceptable for me. :3
   However, you can adjust 'Futsuu' and 'Muzukashii' for better balance maybe If you want. will ask BNs or QATs about this later.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:05:220 (11) - change to k.(more fit to vocal.) and we can make reverse pattern with previous d k d. oki.
2. 00:08:701 (3) ~ 00:10:027 (7) - I'm not sure this part. 00:10:027 (7) - there is no special sound fit to k imo. maybe we can change like this.
   
   It's a symmetry pattern. so we can make a consistentcy and more playable things. :3 ok, but i also added a k at 00:10:193 - to fix the gap with muzu.
3. 00:14:005 ~ 00:15:497 - just suggestion. make symmetry rhythm with previous part.
   oki.
4. 00:54:944 (12, 13) - swap this.(follow vocal's variation.) ok, ctrl+g'ed.
5. 00:56:104 (16) - change to k.(same vocal pitch with 00:55:773.) oki.
6. 00:58:259 (22) - move to 00:58:425.(in order to grab vocal. owo/) nice, moved.
7. 00:59:585 (25) - change to k. oki.
8. 00:59:916 (26,27) - swap this. so make like this.(to follow vocal.)
   oki.
9. 01:02:900 (34) - maybe we can move this to 01:02:734 and change to k. for consistent with 00:51:961 (3,4). 01:02:900 has strong sound. but 01:03:066 (35) can cover that. ok, nice, moved and changed the color.
10. 01:08:370 - add d here. and delete 01:09:364. I think 01:07:541 ~ 01:09:198. make a 1 set is more playable and follow vocal. somehow i feel like current pattern works better, and kinda want to map 01:07:872 - similar with 01:09:198 - but i changed something here to make the color easier to read.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:52:789 (180) - change to k. so dkkd. oki.
2. 01:16:325 (284) - If you want to symmetry pattern, you can change this to k. hmm, the vocal here isn't that high to be emphasized with a k i think, so i will keep this.
3. 01:19:475 (298) - it should be a k. if you follow vocal. :3 ok, changed to k.
4. 01:21:463 (305,306,307,308) - change to kddk.(more fit to vocal.) sure, changed.

• [Oni]

1. Fine for me. I love this individual stream pattern. thanks~

I'm just feel unfriendly with 'Futsuu' rhythm, so I told many sugeestion that part.(but just my opinion.) actually i also think current futsuu is kinda weird to play.
except this, well-mapped genarally.
I hope you rank this soon.
GL~ Dellvangel~! =w=/

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~!! :3
My modding is include personal feeling & suggestion.
please feel free to ignore, If my modding affect your mapping style.

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

• [General]
  
  

1. This is statistical diff gap. Kantan~Muzukashii is compact, but Muzukashii~Inner Oni have large gap.
   But it's a statistical data. Genarally, note increment is acceptable for me. :3
   However, you can adjust 'Futsuu' and 'Muzukashii' for better balance maybe If you want.

• [yzrin's Kantan]

1. 00:44:668 - delete this for consistency with 00:42:016.
   ok
2. 00:44:999 - change to d
3. 00:45:994 - ^
   I want to express a quiet place with k.
4. 00:46:988 (12, 13, 14) - I think kdk is more fit to vocal. :3
   If you accepted them all, it should be like this.
   
   no >< I thought that your plan would be nice, but I would like to stay as it is.
5. 01:06:712 (26) - finish please~!
   ok~!
6. 01:04:226 (23, 24, 25, 26) - maybe we can make this part same pattern with (18) ~ (21). imo, It's more playable for beginners. and this follow vocal's variataion too.
   
   I will change it. :3
   
   
   I think rhythm is good for beginners generally. Nice map~! :3

I'm just feel unfriendly with 'Futsuu' rhythm, so I told many sugeestion that part.(but just my opinion.)
except this, well-mapped genarally.
I hope you rank this soon.
GL~ Dellvangel~! =w=/

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1. 00:32:237 (45,46) - how about changing the rhythm to reflect the vocals/instruments better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514659 The current rhythm doesn't feel natural to the song
2. 01:12:845 (36) - I find this rhythm really weird because of how you skip the big beat on 01:14:336 . Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514682
3. 01:28:259 - delete green line

1. 00:33:397 (64) - deleting this would create a nice break as it's not really needed
2. 01:05:055 - Personal suggestion but how about a d here, it creates quite an interesting rhythm to me. If you did this then perhaps a d at 01:05:552 as well?
3. 01:12:845 (62,63,64) - Deleting this finishes would be better imo. 4 finishes feels a bit bland and it takes away emphasis from the strong finish at 01:14:336 (65)
4. change 01:19:475 (79) to and change 01:20:137 (81) to d? would reflect the pitch of the vocals better imo
5. 01:27:928 (100) - fits better if you move it to 01:27:762 imo
6. 01:28:591 (102) - D?

1. hp 6
2. 01:10:358 - a k feels good here for intensity

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

@Dellvangel: If you want to revive this, I may have to simplify my Inner Oni into an Oni to avoid duplication as komasy has used it in his set when you abandoned this some months ago.

Kisses wrote:

Futsuu

1. 00:33:397 (64) - deleting this would create a nice break as it's not really needed maybe i was thinking to keep the spread https://puu.sh/zP0xI/7483a9efe8.png (kantan, futsuu, muzu) but maybe i think its fine to keep it like this, somehow still follow the rhythm.
2. 01:05:055 - Personal suggestion but how about a d here, it creates quite an interesting rhythm to me. If you did this then perhaps a d at 01:05:552 as well? i think i will keep this one, otherwise the gap will become too close with muzu https://puu.sh/zP0Ba/b14d15fab5.png
3. 01:12:845 (62,63,64) - Deleting this finishes would be better imo. 4 finishes feels a bit bland and it takes away emphasis from the strong finish at 01:14:336 (65) i think so, deleted the finisher.
4. change 01:19:475 (79) to and change 01:20:137 (81) to d? would reflect the pitch of the vocals better imo changed to kk dk.
5. 01:27:928 (100) - fits better if you move it to 01:27:762 imo i think i will keep this one, focus to the guitar sound.
6. 01:28:591 (102) - D? swapped the notes here 01:28:259 (101,102) - .

Muzu

1. hp 6 ok.
2. 01:10:358 - a k feels good here for intensity moved 01:10:856 (258) - to 01:10:358 - instead, i want to avoid 8 notes in a row for muzu diff.

1. change 00:41:519 (192,193,194) - kdd and 00:44:171 (206,207,208) - kkd ?
2. 01:02:983 - add k? With all the triplets in the kiai a 5 note pattern reflects the drum stream better imo
3. 01:00:745 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312) - listening to the music it feels weird that the stream isn't connected (even though I can tell you mapped more to the drums). a 9 note stream would fit better imo like you did in your old inner oni. If you think it would be too hard for this diff then you could always simplify 00:59:751 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302) to allow for an easier entry to the stream.
4. 01:14:336 (399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - wouldn't a 5plet > triplet follow the song closely? I mentioned this because I couldn't work out why you strayed away from the song to have this particular flow
5. 01:20:469 (447,448,449,450) - 5 note pattern for contrast (with the other triplets in the section) and emphasis?
6. 01:28:010 - d for triplet was really fun to play

Kisses wrote:

Kantan

1. 00:32:237 (45,46) - how about changing the rhythm to reflect the vocals/instruments better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514659 The current rhythm doesn't feel natural to the song
   ok
   
2. 01:12:845 (36) - I find this rhythm really weird because of how you skip the big beat on 01:14:336 . Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10514682
   ok
   
3. 01:28:259 - delete green line
   lol
   

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

@Dellvangel: If you want to revive this, I may have to simplify my Inner Oni into an Oni to avoid duplication as komasy has used it in his set when you abandoned this some months ago.

Btw, yuzu__rinrin has the same problem as me right now. Maybe you can exchange Futsuu with their Kantan and remap respectively.

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yuzu__rinrin wrote:

GD to komasy has been remaped and it is totally different from this Kantan,
but is there still a problem?

Kisses wrote:

Nardo

1. change 00:41:519 (192,193,194) - kdd and 00:44:171 (206,207,208) - kkd ? fixed
2. 01:02:983 - add k? With all the triplets in the kiai a 5 note pattern reflects the drum stream better imo Added d instead.
3. 01:00:745 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312) - listening to the music it feels weird that the stream isn't connected (even though I can tell you mapped more to the drums). a 9 note stream would fit better imo like you did in your old inner oni. If you think it would be too hard for this diff then you could always simplify 00:59:751 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302) to allow for an easier entry to the stream. I would keep it for simplicity.
4. 01:14:336 (399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - wouldn't a 5plet > triplet follow the song closely? I mentioned this because I couldn't work out why you strayed away from the song to have this particular flow I think stepping up 1/4 patterns would help emphasize the upcoming finish at 01:15:165 (408) - more.
5. 01:20:469 (447,448,449,450) - 5 note pattern for contrast (with the other triplets in the section) and emphasis? Vocal pauses here so I would not improvise it with a 5-note pattern. This would also take away the emphasis of 01:22:458 (464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473) - in my opinion.
6. 01:28:010 - d for triplet was really fun to play Avoiding 1/4 starting from 01:26:104 - is my intention for the outro here.

I mentioned some subjective stuff because it's a remap with no prior mods. Also if you want, you can keep "inner oni" as there is a definite gap in difficulty between your diff and Dell's oni This version is significantly easier than the original Inner Oni so I would prefer using "Oni" as the level indicator.
[]@DellVangel your diffs look cool and I'm happy with your changes + responses

Kisses wrote:

bub

Surono wrote:

Qualified

wait i forgot what I should tell about, zz my laptop ded / internet trouble before...
ok, testplayed all diffs and discussed with the mapper about the minor changes he made, also yeah the post above.. sorry for no available 2weeks lol
checked overall and nothing issues ye, #saynotoripbgposition

Good Luck, akhirnya map lama tertekoss sma aing ... slamat aaaa internet anjienggg

Dellvangel wrote:

Thanks sur, sorry for the trouble rip ur net i got silenced just to chat u lol.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello Dellvangel~
May I map a guest difficulty for you?