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Overall: Fix dif names, and for a good meme pls add lyrics to description ;^)
Difficulty 1
00:13:374 (13374|3) - Make into an LN to match up with the sounds presented before and after this note, there's a lot more instances of this in the beginning section so I won't list anymore, but I'd scan back through and look for them.
00:13:708 (13708|3) - Move this to 1st lane, to help with the repetition you set up in the first section of the map
00:19:541 - The sound at this section is normally represented with a LN
00:21:541 (21541|1,21708|2) - Space these apart by at least one lane to add emphasis.
00:40:541 - There should be a note here
00:53:041 - The repetition theme of the jacks is fine, but I would recommend spacing them a little bit to add to the intensity of the music at the moment, kind of like this
01:14:374 - Same recommendation as the last set
01:27:874 (87874|1) - You could turn this into two small LN's and form a stair to match the music, but that may raise the difficulty a bit too much. This goes for a lot of this sound throughout the section, so scan through it again and look for instances of it if you accept this one.
01:47:374 (107374|0) - Having this in the lane one away from the next note implies it's the same group of sounds, see if you can space it out a bit more somehow
02:13:374 (133374|0,133541|2) - Considering the difficulty I'm not sure if anything could be done to fix these notes to match the sounds their attributed to better, but see if you can look into it
Overall: Truly, this map will inspire a new generation of LN haters :^). Jokes aside, fine dif, please look into a better name though lmao
00:13:708 (13708|3) - Move this to 1st lane, to help with the repetition you set up in the first section of the map
00:19:541 - The sound at this section is normally represented with a LN
00:21:541 (21541|1,21708|2) - Space these apart by at least one lane to add emphasis.
00:40:541 - There should be a note here
00:53:041 - The repetition theme of the jacks is fine, but I would recommend spacing them a little bit to add to the intensity of the music at the moment, kind of like this
01:14:374 - Same recommendation as the last set
01:27:874 (87874|1) - You could turn this into two small LN's and form a stair to match the music, but that may raise the difficulty a bit too much. This goes for a lot of this sound throughout the section, so scan through it again and look for instances of it if you accept this one.
01:47:374 (107374|0) - Having this in the lane one away from the next note implies it's the same group of sounds, see if you can space it out a bit more somehow
02:13:374 (133374|0,133541|2) - Considering the difficulty I'm not sure if anything could be done to fix these notes to match the sounds their attributed to better, but see if you can look into it
Overall: Truly, this map will inspire a new generation of LN haters :^). Jokes aside, fine dif, please look into a better name though lmao
Difficulty 2
00:15:541 (15541|0,15708|1) - Reverse position of these two and move 00:15:874 (15874|0) to lane 2, this way you can keep the spacing consistent between the next set of patterns
00:18:708 (18708|1) - This slider is unnecessary
00:20:208 (20208|2) - Make this into slider
00:24:291 (24291|0) - This happens a lot throughout this section, but this note is mapped to nothing (I know it's overmapping for the sake of the difficulty though, just food for thought)
00:32:874 (32874|2,33041|0) - These two notes make sounds similar to the intro section of the map, maybe make the patterns parrallel that area, would make the map more consistent and whole
00:53:374 (53374|2,53374|1,53374|3,53541|0,53541|2,53541|1,53708|1,53708|3,53708|0,53708|2) - I know you're buffing up the pattern due to intensity, but the sound itself stays the same, I would just increase the spacing between notes gradually, and replace the quad with a triple
00:53:874 - I hope you plan to add SV's to this section, because when only two portions of the map have them it feels kind of disjointed
00:58:374 (58374|0) - This note kind of takes away from the signifigance of the sound here (it being one of the softer ones) removing the note would indicate something new is coming
01:04:374 - Once again, where the SV's boi
01:13:708 (73708|2) - Move to lane 2 for consistency
01:19:708 (79708|0,79874|0) - With how these play off the pattern/sound before them, I think you should move them a bit closer
01:41:708 - Disagree with having LN's in this soft section, in the song it's kind of the eye of the storm, and I think the map should reflect that
01:45:541 (105541|3,105624|0,105708|3) - Sounds like a staircase, instead you put a jack you monster >:[
01:47:041 - Refer to what I wrote in the overall section for why I feel this way, but the SV's here are a bit much considering the dif.
01:52:041 (112041|1,112041|2,112208|2,112208|1) - Move these to the right/left half of the field (1,2 or 3,4) to help playability and represent the music
01:59:458 (119458|3,119541|1) - I would move these over a bit to help distinguish them from the pattern before, in the heat of SV's it's very hard to time perfectly
02:11:541 - You repped the sound here more at the start of the map, but not really at all in this section, I understand you did it to pimp out LN's but since it was emphasized beforehand I think it should be again
02:13:374 (133374|1,133374|0,133458|3,133458|2,133541|1,133541|0,133624|2,133624|3) - Don't think this sound should be repped by a double
02:51:374 - Please make the SV's here a lot softer, in the song it's winding down and removed some parts of the music, so it should be anything but intense.
03:12:374 - I get why it ends here, but I'd still prefer if you mapped the tiny section afterwards
Overall: I think this dif is a little overmapped for what it's trying to accomplish in the set. This being "difficulty 2" would be fine if the difficulty wasn't so ramped up after the first one. The SV's in this map are very difficult in comparison to the change in pattern difficulty between dif 1 and 2, even if the star rating itself is reflective of what the spread should look like. I would nerf the SV's in this dif by a bit so it is more representative of a full spread.
00:18:708 (18708|1) - This slider is unnecessary
00:20:208 (20208|2) - Make this into slider
00:24:291 (24291|0) - This happens a lot throughout this section, but this note is mapped to nothing (I know it's overmapping for the sake of the difficulty though, just food for thought)
00:32:874 (32874|2,33041|0) - These two notes make sounds similar to the intro section of the map, maybe make the patterns parrallel that area, would make the map more consistent and whole
00:53:374 (53374|2,53374|1,53374|3,53541|0,53541|2,53541|1,53708|1,53708|3,53708|0,53708|2) - I know you're buffing up the pattern due to intensity, but the sound itself stays the same, I would just increase the spacing between notes gradually, and replace the quad with a triple
00:53:874 - I hope you plan to add SV's to this section, because when only two portions of the map have them it feels kind of disjointed
00:58:374 (58374|0) - This note kind of takes away from the signifigance of the sound here (it being one of the softer ones) removing the note would indicate something new is coming
01:04:374 - Once again, where the SV's boi
01:13:708 (73708|2) - Move to lane 2 for consistency
01:19:708 (79708|0,79874|0) - With how these play off the pattern/sound before them, I think you should move them a bit closer
01:41:708 - Disagree with having LN's in this soft section, in the song it's kind of the eye of the storm, and I think the map should reflect that
01:45:541 (105541|3,105624|0,105708|3) - Sounds like a staircase, instead you put a jack you monster >:[
01:47:041 - Refer to what I wrote in the overall section for why I feel this way, but the SV's here are a bit much considering the dif.
01:52:041 (112041|1,112041|2,112208|2,112208|1) - Move these to the right/left half of the field (1,2 or 3,4) to help playability and represent the music
01:59:458 (119458|3,119541|1) - I would move these over a bit to help distinguish them from the pattern before, in the heat of SV's it's very hard to time perfectly
02:11:541 - You repped the sound here more at the start of the map, but not really at all in this section, I understand you did it to pimp out LN's but since it was emphasized beforehand I think it should be again
02:13:374 (133374|1,133374|0,133458|3,133458|2,133541|1,133541|0,133624|2,133624|3) - Don't think this sound should be repped by a double
02:51:374 - Please make the SV's here a lot softer, in the song it's winding down and removed some parts of the music, so it should be anything but intense.
03:12:374 - I get why it ends here, but I'd still prefer if you mapped the tiny section afterwards
Overall: I think this dif is a little overmapped for what it's trying to accomplish in the set. This being "difficulty 2" would be fine if the difficulty wasn't so ramped up after the first one. The SV's in this map are very difficult in comparison to the change in pattern difficulty between dif 1 and 2, even if the star rating itself is reflective of what the spread should look like. I would nerf the SV's in this dif by a bit so it is more representative of a full spread.
Difficulty 3
00:05:541 (5541|2) - I think your missing a whistle hitsound here here
00:18:374 (18374|3,18541|2) - To enhance repetition merge into same lane (like how you did 00:15:791 (15791|3,16041|3) this)
00:21:124 (21124|3,21291|3,21458|3,21624|3,21791|3,21958|3) - Seems a bit anchored here
00:22:666 - Just a little suggestion, change the clap hitsound that indicates an SV to something else, for me the clap sounds more like something that emphasizes the beat of the song rather than a hitsound that indicates "SV goes here", I dunno what you could use and it's fine really, just a suggestion.
00:29:374 (29374|3,29541|1) - Connect these two to show that they are part of the same sound
00:41:874 - I like how you ramped up the patterns in this section, but perhaps don't initiate the quads so soon, hold doubles for 3 or 4 sounds, then do triples for two, and then you have 2-3 sounds left for quads (if I'm not being clear here's what I mean)
00:43:374 (43374|2,43374|3) - Move these to the center or left so it's not so right hand focussed
00:53:374 (53374|2,53374|1) - Why double here when it's been triples before it? Maybe do this section similar to how you did the one at 00:41:874 but with less intensity
00:55:541 - Feels a little anchored to lane 4, maybe reverse the primary hand a little bit into the section (entire part feels right hand focussed)
01:01:874 (61874|0,61874|1) - Just a suggestion here, but maybe to add more impact to how quiet the song gets here, only emphasize the sound of 01:01:708 (61708|3) this is a non issue though, just a suggestion
01:03:874 - Just like the last dif, why no SV's here? Feels kind of inconsistent. If the reason is that the song doesn't have as many fast sounds than I can agree with that, but maybe add some minor SV throughout just to increase consistency.
01:10:208 (70208|2,70374|3,70541|2) - I think you should make this stick to a single lane, there's some other patterns like this later on, but the way the rest of the patterns reflect the song make these feel kind of out of place.
01:24:541 (84541|0) - Maybe make all the singles in this section tiny LN's, would reflect the sound a bit more accurately I feel
01:47:208 - Using the soft sampleset for these notes makes hitting them feel unsatisfying, I would reccomend finding a different sampleset for the section
01:47:708 (107708|3) - Just to add on to the last part, the clap feels a lot more satisfying to hear than the soft sampleset, so if you accept the last one I would probably leave the clap alone
01:57:124 (117124|2,117208|1,117291|2) - Maybe space these out by two lanes to help represent the intensity
01:59:208 (119208|2,119291|3,119291|1) - I would move this pattern to the left by one lane, just for varieties sake
02:05:791 (125791|3) - Maybe not jack here lol
02:13:374 (133374|1,133458|3,133541|2,133624|3) - Claps make sense with the song but the notes that their clapping too aren't distinctly shown, maybe give them a bit more visibility as being a "complete pattern"
02:19:041 (139041|2,139041|3) - Change to a regular double no LN to emphasize the sound their attatched to (maybe use an SV for the "zoom"-esque sound)
02:29:874 - No mod here I just want to say that you are a evil person for this section >:[
02:41:708 - Once again no mod, just emphasizing that you're evil
02:51:208 - Just like last dif I'm inclined to disagree with having SV's in the winding-down section of the song. At least make them less intense than the ones in the section that parrallels this one.
02:56:041 (176041|1,176124|1) - Move these to lane 4
02:58:541 (178541|2,178624|3,178624|1) - If you accepted the mod at 01:59:208 then I would move these to parrallel that, if not carry on lol
03:01:374 - I would stick to one handed doubles for this, I think it represents the sound better
03:12:374 - Same as last dif, would prefer if you mapped those ending notes, but I think since this is the primary difficulty of the set you should especially do it here lol
00:18:374 (18374|3,18541|2) - To enhance repetition merge into same lane (like how you did 00:15:791 (15791|3,16041|3) this)
00:21:124 (21124|3,21291|3,21458|3,21624|3,21791|3,21958|3) - Seems a bit anchored here
00:22:666 - Just a little suggestion, change the clap hitsound that indicates an SV to something else, for me the clap sounds more like something that emphasizes the beat of the song rather than a hitsound that indicates "SV goes here", I dunno what you could use and it's fine really, just a suggestion.
00:29:374 (29374|3,29541|1) - Connect these two to show that they are part of the same sound
00:41:874 - I like how you ramped up the patterns in this section, but perhaps don't initiate the quads so soon, hold doubles for 3 or 4 sounds, then do triples for two, and then you have 2-3 sounds left for quads (if I'm not being clear here's what I mean)
00:43:374 (43374|2,43374|3) - Move these to the center or left so it's not so right hand focussed
00:53:374 (53374|2,53374|1) - Why double here when it's been triples before it? Maybe do this section similar to how you did the one at 00:41:874 but with less intensity
00:55:541 - Feels a little anchored to lane 4, maybe reverse the primary hand a little bit into the section (entire part feels right hand focussed)
01:01:874 (61874|0,61874|1) - Just a suggestion here, but maybe to add more impact to how quiet the song gets here, only emphasize the sound of 01:01:708 (61708|3) this is a non issue though, just a suggestion
01:03:874 - Just like the last dif, why no SV's here? Feels kind of inconsistent. If the reason is that the song doesn't have as many fast sounds than I can agree with that, but maybe add some minor SV throughout just to increase consistency.
01:10:208 (70208|2,70374|3,70541|2) - I think you should make this stick to a single lane, there's some other patterns like this later on, but the way the rest of the patterns reflect the song make these feel kind of out of place.
01:24:541 (84541|0) - Maybe make all the singles in this section tiny LN's, would reflect the sound a bit more accurately I feel
01:47:208 - Using the soft sampleset for these notes makes hitting them feel unsatisfying, I would reccomend finding a different sampleset for the section
01:47:708 (107708|3) - Just to add on to the last part, the clap feels a lot more satisfying to hear than the soft sampleset, so if you accept the last one I would probably leave the clap alone
01:57:124 (117124|2,117208|1,117291|2) - Maybe space these out by two lanes to help represent the intensity
01:59:208 (119208|2,119291|3,119291|1) - I would move this pattern to the left by one lane, just for varieties sake
02:05:791 (125791|3) - Maybe not jack here lol
02:13:374 (133374|1,133458|3,133541|2,133624|3) - Claps make sense with the song but the notes that their clapping too aren't distinctly shown, maybe give them a bit more visibility as being a "complete pattern"
02:19:041 (139041|2,139041|3) - Change to a regular double no LN to emphasize the sound their attatched to (maybe use an SV for the "zoom"-esque sound)
02:29:874 - No mod here I just want to say that you are a evil person for this section >:[
02:41:708 - Once again no mod, just emphasizing that you're evil
02:51:208 - Just like last dif I'm inclined to disagree with having SV's in the winding-down section of the song. At least make them less intense than the ones in the section that parrallels this one.
02:56:041 (176041|1,176124|1) - Move these to lane 4
02:58:541 (178541|2,178624|3,178624|1) - If you accepted the mod at 01:59:208 then I would move these to parrallel that, if not carry on lol
03:01:374 - I would stick to one handed doubles for this, I think it represents the sound better
03:12:374 - Same as last dif, would prefer if you mapped those ending notes, but I think since this is the primary difficulty of the set you should especially do it here lol
Overall: Fix dif names, and for a good meme pls add lyrics to description ;^)