Ok, let's get this party started.
Metadata: okay, ranked std map of this is correct
AiMod: ya fine
idk how to format
Difficulty settings: 6/5 -> 7/8 -> 8/8? what is that spread lmao, suggesting this:
Normal: OD 7 HP 7
Hard: OD 7,5 HP 7,5
Insane: OD 8 HP 8
optionally lower OD because LNs but not by more than 0,5 anyway, OD below 7 is looooow
I suggest changing the diffname to Extreme, sounds better than Insane for this kind of a map
00:00:375 (375|0,375|1,874|1,874|2) - Suggesting to keep both of the jumps exactly the same on this section on every single repeat (as in both first and second jump are in the same position not all throughout the section) to diffrentiate between the two first sounds that are exactly the same and 00:01:374 (1374|0,1374|2) - which is diffrent. As I said repeat for the entire section
00:48:208 (48208|3,48208|0) - Unneeded double, no sounds to support it especially looking at what you're accenting with more notes around here
00:50:208 - Should be a double here tho
00:51:874 - Same
00:52:874 - A short 1/4 trill on right hand might be or might be not overkill but there's certainly sounds supporting it. Something like this:
00:54:041 (54041|3,54541|0,54541|3) - Listen to those two and tell me what's the diffrence between them other than the second one having more notes? (((delet)))
00:55:041 (55041|1,55208|1,55208|3) - ctrl+G (mind the hitsounds)
Actually in the entire 00:53:874 - 01:01:208 - section you really need to rethink what sounds do you want to emphasizes with doubles and what sounds you don't because it looks like you're doing that pretty randomly
01:07:541 - 01:07:708 - Don't back down on the notes just because it's a faster transition, at least put one each
01:08:374 (68374|0,68374|3,68541|0) - 2 - 1 and 01:08:874 (68874|3,69041|1,69041|0) - 1 - 2? which one do I believe???!?!?!?
01:09:708 (69708|3,69708|0,69874|3,69874|1,70041|3,70041|2) - And here you actually do all doubles even tho it's a faster transition and the first sound doesn't fit for a double
01:10:708 (70708|3,70708|2,70874|0,70874|2,71374|1,71541|2) - Who wore it better??
(it also happens in a couple more spots here, recheck them all)
01:14:541 (74541|0) - You just had doubles on LN transitions and they happen on the start of the buildup of that sound, making it a single note here is not appropriate, make it double
01:14:708 (74708|0,74708|1,74874|1,74874|0,74874|2) - Additionally you can also add one more note each to here to follow the buildup theory from earlier
01:16:041 (76041|1,76041|0,76208|1,76208|3,76374|0,76374|3,76541|1,76541|3,76708|1,76708|2,76874|1,76874|3,77041|3,77041|2,77208|0,77208|3,77374|2,77374|0,77541|2,77541|1,77708|2,77708|1) - I really don't think the entire section should be doubles, the weakest sounds at least should be singles
01:18:208 - Now no note here uhhh
01:19:374 (79374|3,79374|2) - I like how you put the only double in this section to the probably weakest sound here
I honestly feel like you're just putting too much meat into those sections and then you're confused what went where and got lost in it. I think you should just highlight the sound on transitions and crashes (or the louder kicks however you call what happens at for example 01:20:708 - )
01:24:374 - This could be a trill section but honestly that would probably be overkill with the SVs so just think about adding one note on 3rd column at 01:25:374 - to accent the clap
01:32:791 - 1/4 missed (to be consistent with how you're layering here)
01:40:624 - This is a constant 1/4, I didn't catch it in my 1k chart for this song but it is continous (5 note stream starting from 01:40:624 - and ending at 01:41:041 - )
01:42:291 - Missed 1/4
01:43:291 - me
01:43:458 - irl
01:43:624 - technically this also counts
01:44:291 - i might've missed two notes just before but not sure if they are even audible enough so not pointing it out
01:44:458 - those ones are though
01:48:374 - You could add one more note on metronomes to accent the stronger sound on the start of each "phrase" sort of since the song is split here like that in a way, and also kicks
01:49:708 - like here you can hear it too
01:51:041 - and here, so on
01:59:041 - if you want to be an asshole there's a constant 1/4 rhythm going on until 01:59:874 - here, but you're probably purposefully avoid charting the drum for playability sake so thumbs up
02:06:583 - Hey remember when you made the 1/8 triplet at 02:06:041 - ? Where Are They Now?
The first half of the LN SV section can use the same suggestions as the part before
02:29:874 - hey toaph I hate you (jk)
02:50:708 - Absolutely no notes for the sounds you mapped as jumptrills in the entire section, feels incredibly weird honestly, this should be the absolute climax of rudeness in this chart and it's just LN releases
02:51:958 - Might make a roll here for the sample since you're making the other sample a minijack, this could be a roll
03:01:874 - LNs for the swhooosh?
03:12:208 - Add a note for impact before the quad, feels satisfying tbh
I suggest changing to Advanced maybe?
We've talked about the intro on Discord and now it's fine, I felt better about playing it today
00:11:541 - Why is this a double and 00:11:874 (11874|0) - isn't?
00:13:291 - Kinda obvious to hear note, suggesting adding
00:13:624 - Same here, I think that keeping the consistent pace is gonna be fine and fun for this one and if you wanna focus on the sounds in the background (that weird synth) you could keep the LNs here, not gonna be a big problem (counts for both)
00:18:541 - Same for this section
00:25:041 (25041|0) - This not being at 00:24:874 - kinda doesn't match the previous parts where you put a double on the strongest bass (?) sound of the three, in this section in general sometimes you put it on the first one and sometimes on the second one, which I think you should just revise as a whole, so I'm not going to point out every iteration
00:40:291 - I think making that a double would be nice to accent that other sound happening here and as a bit of a stronger finish to that section
01:14:874 - Add a note on 2nd lane to make it a triple into the triple with LN for buildup here?
01:52:374 (112374|2) - Move to 2nd? Feels awkward to read with the LNs just before
02:02:708 - I'd make that a jumptrill tho, just a stair feels weird
03:07:374 (187374|2) - Move to 1st imo for the same reason
After thinking it through now, actually this might fit more as an Insane or something now that Insane is now Extreme and Normal might just want to stay as Normal while you might add an Advanced, seeing the difficulty of it at least
00:31:374 - In this more intense section you should use doubles for claps imo and any future iterations, unless star rating is a problem but it shouldn't be lol
01:25:708 - This section is basically why I think that Easy diffname for this was not a good idea and you should name it a Normal, possibly even Advanced. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just harsh at this level.
So with that, I'm going to say this right here since I think it's a good moment to do that:
For this spread I think you need 2 more difficulties. One is a barebones really basic Easy for newcomers, and one is a Advanced which is inbetween current two difficulties with light SVs all over. This Normal difficulty can be also buffed a bit just in terms of accenting claps as doubles sometimes to make one of the most intense parts feel that way (01:47:041 - 02:07:708 - ) but otherwise it's good enough. It's way too hard for newcomers though, so that's why there needs to be another difficulty below it, even if you have to ignore a lot of rhythms, just focus on the barebones basics and you'll get there.
I do recognize btw that you did add doubles in that section but there should be more to be consistent and I feel like the only reason why they're not there is muh star rating. Which is also why I suggested to make an Easy.
02:18:708 (138708|2,138874|1) - Here for example as well you could make doubles for the intense sound
02:24:041 (144041|0,144208|3) - And here and so on
02:29:708 - In the current moment this section is in a difficulty called Easy. Dude LMAO!!! (yeah another one of reasons why I suggested an Easy diff)
03:09:041 (189041|1,189291|1,189541|1) - & 03:11:708 (191708|1,191874|1,192041|2) - Should be same imo
Ok I think that's it from me, poke me in case you need any clarification or help and good luck man <3