General:
It just disturbs me how the spinner circle seems to disappear in the spinner. The rest is rather subtle, I like it, but I would just keep the actual spinner part for basically aesthetic reasons.
I would suggest mapping closer to the end, but now's a good ending point too.
Hard:
00:38:062 (4) - Dangerously offscreen here. Not a major problem, I just think it would be better if you fixed it anyway.
01:51:880 (6) - I would say this works better as simply 4 beat long 1/2 stream, it's kind of odd as it is.
02:34:380 (1) - This heart says see a doctor more than love to me. Though I recognise how hard it is to make a hard slider so short, so my advice is, don't. ♡
02:54:510 (6) - Moving the center point up and the endpoint right is a pretty simple way to improve this slider, since a few people appear to have complained about it.
03:47:010 (7) - Bet you can make this without redpoints and it would look better~
04:00:760 (1,2,3,4) - These don't seem to follow anything, and in my opinion actually take away the effect of this part.
04:02:947 (1) - ^
And yeah, watch out for those hp bar hitcircles etc.
Normal445:
00:31:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd move this entire combo like a grid to the left. Incredibly minor my arse
Cool patterns
Nice things.
It just disturbs me how the spinner circle seems to disappear in the spinner. The rest is rather subtle, I like it, but I would just keep the actual spinner part for basically aesthetic reasons.
I would suggest mapping closer to the end, but now's a good ending point too.
Hard:
00:38:062 (4) - Dangerously offscreen here. Not a major problem, I just think it would be better if you fixed it anyway.
01:51:880 (6) - I would say this works better as simply 4 beat long 1/2 stream, it's kind of odd as it is.
02:34:380 (1) - This heart says see a doctor more than love to me. Though I recognise how hard it is to make a hard slider so short, so my advice is, don't. ♡
02:54:510 (6) - Moving the center point up and the endpoint right is a pretty simple way to improve this slider, since a few people appear to have complained about it.
03:47:010 (7) - Bet you can make this without redpoints and it would look better~
04:00:760 (1,2,3,4) - These don't seem to follow anything, and in my opinion actually take away the effect of this part.
04:02:947 (1) - ^
And yeah, watch out for those hp bar hitcircles etc.
Normal445:
00:31:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd move this entire combo like a grid to the left. Incredibly minor my arse
Cool patterns
Nice things.