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Equilibrium - Snuffel

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TheLeviathan
271 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
TheLeviathan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 мая 2017 г. at 21:22:02

Artist: Equilibrium
Title: Snuffel
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8580kb
Play Time: 05:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blut und Wein (5,52 stars, 1850 notes)
Download: Equilibrium - Snuffel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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If you mod this - don't look into hitsounding. It's not even done
Last edited by TheLeviathan , edited 15 times in total.
note551
42 posts
Joined December 2014
note551
from our m4m
Blut und Wein
Timing
There's something going on in the beginning with your timing points

Mapping

imo there are some other instruments you can map instead of just the singer/bass to make your map more itneresting

00:47:499 1,2,3,4 the introduction of this pattern is very sudden, It will confuse first time players, I would make mini-patterns of this earlier on to slowly introduce the player to it, so they aren't thrown off by the sudden pattern.
01:12:530 2,3 I would put 2 on 3 to reflect the guitar sound better- Guitar here has sudden changes so interrupting movement of the player reflects the guitar better imo, as it requires the player to make sharp and fast movements.
01:12:905 4,1 ^
01:13:280 2,3 ^
01:13:655 4,1 ^ basically the rest of the following patterns that are similar
01:15:249 1 consider moving the slider for a small jump; new note is introduced by the guitar here, so you can make it stand out
01:33:249 1,2,3 awkward movement imo, consider flipping 1 and 3 around so they face each other
01:35:874 5,6 make into slider
01:36:624 5,6 ^
01:37:374 5,6 ^
01:38:124 5 you can turn it into a slider until the red tick
01:52:936 2,3 extend 3, add a hit circle in between 2,3
01:55:936 2,3 ^
01:59:124 2,3 ^
02:01:936 2,3 ^
02:03:999 1,2,3,4 snap distance isn't representative of the time between each note, i recommend re positioning unless it's intentional
02:05:499 1,2,3,4 ^
02:07:749 1,2,3,4 ^
02:08:499 1,2,3,4 ^
02:48:811 3,4 This may be difficult to read, consider separating them
02:50:124 5,1 ^
03:28:749 1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3 I would personally make these sliders straight instead of curved- the guitar sounds here don't really change in pitch for the duration of the sliders, so straight sliders may represent it better
03:36:811 4,1 I would avoid stacking this
03:41:874 2,3,1,2,3,4 sounds a bit off here.. you seemed to have mapped the sections where the instrument isn't actually playing.
03:44:874 2,3,1,2,3,4 ^
03:49:936 2 move to 03:49:999 using 1/3
04:17:374 1 no need new combo here
04:18:249 1 make this into a slider?
04:45:999 1 you can make this into a spinner
05:07:349 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16 consider increasing spacing to reflect the music
05:08:761 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13 ^
ItashaS13
678 posts
Joined January 2014
ItashaS13
o/ m4m


00:01:565 (1,2,1) - check their timing.. its wrong (if you need help with this, PM me in game)
the main red point should have Offset 1.735 instead of 1.749


  • 00:09:061 (1,2,1) - this isnt 1/4, its 1/6 starting from 00:08:999 -

    00:11:499 (1,2,3) - wrong timing to place these! use 1/6 :p

    00:11:311 (3) - make this into a kickslider? to fill this 00:11:405 -

    00:12:249 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - same here ^ ^

    00:13:374 (3,1,1) - I hear something 1/6 there too

    00:15:061 (1,2,1) - 1/6 (the rest of triplet from here are 1/6 :p)

    00:24:235 - Start the stream here on the white tick.

    00:24:891 (7,1) - spacing between these isnt clear.. youre using 0,4x for the whole stream and the you suddenly use 2,5x for that slider, if you want to make emphazise to that sound, make something similar (or the same) on 00:23:953 (1) - so the player know there'll be a.. jumpstream

    00:24:985 (1,2) - recomendation - add inherit point here and make these 2 sliders faster? like FASTER than 00:25:453 (1) - the mephazise it better?

    00:26:766 (11,1) - spacing lul

    00:28:453 (1) - why not a mini stream? you can clearly hear a stream on here xD

    00:30:985 (1,2,3) - Im not agree with the rythm used here, why not make something like http://prntscr.com/ecy7do

    00:31:735 (1,2,3) - maybe Im too nazi but .. why not move them something like http://prntscr.com/ecy8yq (stacking the 2 with the prevoous circle (4)

    00:33:047 (3) - make this into a kickslider? to fill up the sound on 00:33:141 - only a triplet.. It feels empty idk

    00:33:703 - same ^

    00:33:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm Im not agree with this.. once again, you skipped a really audible stream for a slider :< should make.. idk. at least use reverse-sliders?

    00:34:735 (1) - move this to 174/44 to the curve looks niceee~~~

    00:35:860 (1) - make this slider faster? to emphazise the sound more :o

    00:36:985 (1,1,2) - overlap here looks therrible imo, also, the rythm on 00:36:985 (1,2,3) - isnt.. correct? should change it like http://prntscr.com/ecyanu

    00:38:766 (12,1) - :/ move the slider to 331/128? http://prntscr.com/ecyb0j also.. I recommend using this rythm http://prntscr.com/ecybf5 on 00:38:766 (12,1,1) -

    00:39:891 (8,1,2,3,1) - ^

    00:46:453 (3) - do ctrl+g at least to make the difference of rythm, should NC tho

    00:47:016 - theres a strong beat there, should make it clickable (suggestion - http://prntscr.com/ecychn )

    00:48:235 (1,2,3,4) - rotate these 45°, the voice changes, the combo changes, why keep mapping it the same way? make a difference just by rotating them

    00:50:297 - should be clickable (even tho, if you change this one, you might change the other parts like this aswell, so you can keep it like it is now if you want~)

    00:51:235 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion :p rotate them to make a difference

    00:55:360 (3) - move to 232/184

    00:59:110 (1,2,3) - this is 1/6

    01:06:235 (1,2,3,4) - rotate them ? like 90° or smth

    01:08:110 (3) - stack its end with 01:07:360 (4) -

    01:11:110 (5) - NC here instead of 01:11:203 (1) -

    01:10:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this stream plays.. too easy imo, and you You dont make a recognizable change so.. I suggest something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414250 - http://prntscr.com/ecygtp 01:11:860 (5,1,2,3) - its 1/6 D:

    01:23:766 (2,3) - naxi blanket kappa

    01:23:110 (5,1) - make them into a 1/2 slider?

    01:24:422 (1,2) - another blanket..

    01:25:641 - missed a beat? add a circle!

    01:26:016 - ! ^ !

    01:38:485 (1) - lul fix this

    01:44:110 (5) - add a slider here?

    01:45:797 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - should change their spacing according to the music.. example.. 01:45:985 (1,1) - make these longer jumps than the rest, because theres a stronger beat on them

    01:50:485 (9) - the change should be on this circle, you see. theres a downbeat there, a white tick.. so make it like http://prntscr.com/ecyj97

    01:57:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not fan of this stream shape, you can do something better come one! xD

    02:18:047 (3) - should make them a triplet with big spacing!! like http://prntscr.com/ecykxw < that would be fun to play

    02:21:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just move the whole stream like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414369

    02:36:235 - I reaaally like the way you mapped this, 9/10, why 9? because.. I think you can make it even better by changing their spacing according to the music. for example: 02:36:985 (5) - move this further, because the voice there its like.. more audible/stronger, this beat has more intensity than the rest.. you know what I mean?
    02:39:610 (3,3,3,7) - moving these further! to emphazise that guitar note

    02:27:985 (1,2,3,4) - should ctrl+g this whole part

    02:42:610 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this part kinda killed it :<

    02:48:516 - missed a beat :o

    02:51:235 (7,8,9) - why not a stream for guitar :<?

    02:53:485 (1) - fix this slider xD

    02:55:735 (3,4,1) - I think I saw this before.. did you just copy pasted? btw.. these sliders are 10000/10000

    03:13:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion for this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414441

    03:24:860 (1) - this is.. 1/6 I think.. make this 03:24:860 (1) - a reverse slider?

    03:26:499 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - every slider should be like 03:28:749 (1,2) - (dont change if you really dont want xd)

    03:53:499 (1,2,3) - suggestion for these https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414470 (AND THE REST) 03:53:749 (2,3) - Both circles should NOT be stacked since 03:53:874 (3) - has a STRONGER beat than 03:53:749 (2) - and the next pattern could be something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414477

    04:01:967 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is weird lol.. I think you can use 1/12 to fit it well. starting here 04:01:967 -

    04:09:624 (3) - so yeah I recommend not stacking these.. nothing its emphazised

    04:18:249 (1) - move to 192/293? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414523 to emphazise that sounDD!!!

    04:22:374 (2) - move to 413/274

    04:28:561 (6,6,6,6) - at least make these into kickslider to fill up the sound!

    04:30:811 (6,1) - triplet?

    04:45:999 - SLIDERART!! why not SLIDERART!!! D:

    04:42:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - btw the whole shape of the stream could be better.. from this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414550
    to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414601
    by making a slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414596

    04:48:997 (1,2,3) - should make them into triplets, reverses are kinda boring and this part of the song isnt.. boring

    04:57:820 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - streams like this should be.. SPACED MORE!! like MOOOOORE because the guitar its really high!

    05:07:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - not good slider shape my frind :<

    05:14:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - YEEAAHHH THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT 10 10

    05:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix this part of the stream lul it doesnt look good lul

    05:35:960 (7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think they all are 1/6

GL GL, fun map :D
TheLeviathan
271 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
TheLeviathan

Itasha_S13 wrote:

o/ m4m


00:01:565 (1,2,1) - check their timing.. its wrong (if you need help with this, PM me in game)
the main red point should have Offset 1.735 instead of 1.749


  • 00:09:061 (1,2,1) - this isnt 1/4, its 1/6 starting from 00:08:999 -

    00:11:499 (1,2,3) - wrong timing to place these! use 1/6 :p

    00:11:311 (3) - make this into a kickslider? to fill this 00:11:405 -

    00:12:249 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - same here ^ ^

    00:13:374 (3,1,1) - I hear something 1/6 there too

    00:15:061 (1,2,1) - 1/6 (the rest of triplet from here are 1/6 :p)

    00:24:235 - Start the stream here on the white tick.

    00:24:891 (7,1) - spacing between these isnt clear.. youre using 0,4x for the whole stream and the you suddenly use 2,5x for that slider, if you want to make emphazise to that sound, make something similar (or the same) on 00:23:953 (1) - so the player know there'll be a.. jumpstream

    00:24:985 (1,2) - recomendation - add inherit point here and make these 2 sliders faster? like FASTER than 00:25:453 (1) - the mephazise it better?

    00:26:766 (11,1) - spacing lul

    00:28:453 (1) - why not a mini stream? you can clearly hear a stream on here xD

    00:30:985 (1,2,3) - Im not agree with the rythm used here, why not make something like http://prntscr.com/ecy7do

    00:31:735 (1,2,3) - maybe Im too nazi but .. why not move them something like http://prntscr.com/ecy8yq (stacking the 2 with the prevoous circle (4)

    00:33:047 (3) - make this into a kickslider? to fill up the sound on 00:33:141 - only a triplet.. It feels empty idk

    00:33:703 - same ^

    00:33:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm Im not agree with this.. once again, you skipped a really audible stream for a slider :< should make.. idk. at least use reverse-sliders?

    00:34:735 (1) - move this to 174/44 to the curve looks niceee~~~

    00:35:860 (1) - make this slider faster? to emphazise the sound more :o

    00:36:985 (1,1,2) - overlap here looks therrible imo, also, the rythm on 00:36:985 (1,2,3) - isnt.. correct? should change it like http://prntscr.com/ecyanu

    00:38:766 (12,1) - :/ move the slider to 331/128? http://prntscr.com/ecyb0j also.. I recommend using this rythm http://prntscr.com/ecybf5 on 00:38:766 (12,1,1) -

    00:39:891 (8,1,2,3,1) - ^

    00:46:453 (3) - do ctrl+g at least to make the difference of rythm, should NC tho

    00:47:016 - theres a strong beat there, should make it clickable (suggestion - http://prntscr.com/ecychn )

    00:48:235 (1,2,3,4) - rotate these 45°, the voice changes, the combo changes, why keep mapping it the same way? make a difference just by rotating them

    00:50:297 - should be clickable (even tho, if you change this one, you might change the other parts like this aswell, so you can keep it like it is now if you want~)

    00:51:235 (1,2,3,4) - same suggestion :p rotate them to make a difference

    00:55:360 (3) - move to 232/184

    00:59:110 (1,2,3) - this is 1/6

    01:06:235 (1,2,3,4) - rotate them ? like 90° or smth

    01:08:110 (3) - stack its end with 01:07:360 (4) -

    01:11:110 (5) - NC here instead of 01:11:203 (1) -

    01:10:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this stream plays.. too easy imo, and you You dont make a recognizable change so.. I suggest something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414250 - http://prntscr.com/ecygtp 01:11:860 (5,1,2,3) - its 1/6 D:

    01:23:766 (2,3) - naxi blanket kappa

    01:23:110 (5,1) - make them into a 1/2 slider?

    01:24:422 (1,2) - another blanket..

    01:25:641 - missed a beat? add a circle!

    01:26:016 - ! ^ !

    01:38:485 (1) - lul fix this

    01:44:110 (5) - add a slider here?

    01:45:797 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - should change their spacing according to the music.. example.. 01:45:985 (1,1) - make these longer jumps than the rest, because theres a stronger beat on them

    01:50:485 (9) - the change should be on this circle, you see. theres a downbeat there, a white tick.. so make it like http://prntscr.com/ecyj97

    01:57:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not fan of this stream shape, you can do something better come one! xD

    02:18:047 (3) - should make them a triplet with big spacing!! like http://prntscr.com/ecykxw < that would be fun to play

    02:21:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just move the whole stream like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414369

    02:36:235 - I reaaally like the way you mapped this, 9/10, why 9? because.. I think you can make it even better by changing their spacing according to the music. for example: 02:36:985 (5) - move this further, because the voice there its like.. more audible/stronger, this beat has more intensity than the rest.. you know what I mean?
    02:39:610 (3,3,3,7) - moving these further! to emphazise that guitar note

    02:27:985 (1,2,3,4) - should ctrl+g this whole part

    02:42:610 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this part kinda killed it :<

    02:48:516 - missed a beat :o

    02:51:235 (7,8,9) - why not a stream for guitar :<?

    02:53:485 (1) - fix this slider xD

    02:55:735 (3,4,1) - I think I saw this before.. did you just copy pasted? btw.. these sliders are 10000/10000

    03:13:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion for this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414441

    03:24:860 (1) - this is.. 1/6 I think.. make this 03:24:860 (1) - a reverse slider?

    03:26:499 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - every slider should be like 03:28:749 (1,2) - (dont change if you really dont want xd)

    03:53:499 (1,2,3) - suggestion for these https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414470 (AND THE REST) 03:53:749 (2,3) - Both circles should NOT be stacked since 03:53:874 (3) - has a STRONGER beat than 03:53:749 (2) - and the next pattern could be something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414477

    04:01:967 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is weird lol.. I think you can use 1/12 to fit it well. starting here 04:01:967 -

    04:09:624 (3) - so yeah I recommend not stacking these.. nothing its emphazised

    04:18:249 (1) - move to 192/293? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414523 to emphazise that sounDD!!!

    04:22:374 (2) - move to 413/274

    04:28:561 (6,6,6,6) - at least make these into kickslider to fill up the sound!

    04:30:811 (6,1) - triplet?

    04:45:999 - SLIDERART!! why not SLIDERART!!! D:

    04:42:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - btw the whole shape of the stream could be better.. from this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414550
    to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414601
    by making a slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7414596

    04:48:997 (1,2,3) - should make them into triplets, reverses are kinda boring and this part of the song isnt.. boring

    04:57:820 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - streams like this should be.. SPACED MORE!! like MOOOOORE because the guitar its really high!

    05:07:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - not good slider shape my frind :<

    05:14:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - YEEAAHHH THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT 10 10

    05:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fix this part of the stream lul it doesnt look good lul

    05:35:960 (7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think they all are 1/6

GL GL, fun map :D

Thanks for quality mod, will not highlight exactly what changes I've done, but about 90% of your mentioned stuff were fixed
yShadowXOP_
536 posts
Joined January 2016
yShadowXOP_
M4m late because I was without pc sorry
01:34:266 - have song
02:30:328 (2) - no have song
02:43:828 (2) - what?
03:11:578 (3,4) - no have song
03:17:297 (2) - ^
03:20:297 (3) - ^
05:05:320 (2) - ^


I think that's all :)
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka
saw you on #modreqs! wanna m4m for either t/375127 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329835 ? nvm o3o
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