IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:350 (2) - It's off rhytm..the best solution I see here is to make a reverse slider using these notes:(00:01:350 - 00:01:571 - 00:02:012) X,However it seems find for me,keep it for now until next modder mention it again.
00:27:159 (4) - I'd flip it vertically. Sure,fixed
00:41:277 (4) - Distance looks wrong here,it should be at least 1 grid up. lol,I didn't open the grid snap when I was mapping.Well,up a bit.It may better now.
01:19:659 (4) - Rotate it clockwise by 90,cause you're not sure if there will be another repeat compared to spacing. Sure,fixed
01:55:395 (4) - Don't really like how it looks..I'd make it curvier,and 01:53:630 (2) too. X,soory for diffenert taste.

[Normal]
00:20:762 - I think there's a note missing here X,I won't add a note here due to I want to prominence the accent point (3.4.5)-
00:35:542 (3) - It plays sooo wrong,shorten by 00:35:983 and add another note to 00:36:203 then. X,I can't see any wrong here.
00:47:012 (6) - ^ Same,even with using slidertick hitsound it feels way too late.You just must have something to click here,so shorten to 00:47:453. ^
01:05:100 (3) - This one is totally off,it should start at 01:05:321 first of all.And you should have a note at 01:05:542,seriously,it's downbeat. Fixed in other way~
01:18:336 (3) - Feels wrong to me,too. X,not totally.The reverse on "do" sound.
01:22:306 (5) - Again,shorten to previous white tick. X
01:46:130 (5) - ^ X.

[Insane]
00:13:262 (5) - New combo due to slightly increased spacing? X,If I always add a new combo in some slightly spacing change.Then the new combo will being chaos.Also this jump is on a accent point so it should be fine for playing.
00:55:836 (3,4,5) - God,these jumps are just insane,they're so sudden and completely out of flow Sure,fixed
01:29:806 (4) - It's odd,but new combo could solve this out I think. Sure,fixed

1. 你的tags長到不像話, 尤其是Insane整個..
2. lead-in太少..加到2500? (first note offset+lead-in=3000)

1. 00:14:806 (1) - 起點15:027 (Auto get 5000, 應該不構成難度問題)
2. 00:28:042 (1) - 下SC1 clap? 段落轉換..

1. 01:14:365 (4) - 在這難度, 這裡值一個new combo

• ii diff, zenbu 提案:

1. 00:39:071 (1,2) - blue tick clap instead?
2. 00:42:600 (1) - ^

• 也是style mod:

1. 01:00:358 (7) - 稍微有點怪, 感覺這裡沒節奏而01:00:578有節奏好些

loveFantasy wrote:

早起沒事所以還是來看看了

[General]

1. 你的tags長到不像話, 尤其是Insane整個.. = =沒啥問題啊..
2. lead-in太少..加到2500? (first note offset+lead-in=3000)

Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:14:806 (1) - 起點15:027 (Auto get 5000, 應該不構成難度問題) X,加大了Lead in 應該好一點..
2. 00:28:042 (1) - 下SC1 clap? 段落轉換.. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:14:365 (4) - 在這難度, 這裡值一個new combo Fixed

[Insane]

• 也是style mod:

1. 01:00:358 (7) - 稍微有點怪, 感覺這裡沒節奏而01:00:578有節奏好些 Fixed

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod request from bakarin

I prefer OD +1 ._.

00:17:674 - k dd dd(dk?) k d
00:35:542 - kk dd d k?
00:38:189 - kd?
01:13:483 - kkddkkkkd
01:15:027 - ddk
01:20:542 - try sth like ddkdkdddk?
01:31:571 - dd dk d ddk
02:07:306 - [Nazi] well the melody ends 1/8 later?

Nice trial using triplets on 1/2 vocal, but I still want to see the diff with less 2-plets orz

7.5/10

arien666 wrote:

Everything seems fine but I'm not sure about bubbling...
Since

00:56:718 ~ 00:58:483 - This part's video scene... [I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure]

I don't know how should I deal with this ;_;
Needs more confirming orz

Sorry atm orz

arien666 wrote:

I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure

aesopl19193 wrote:

arien666 wrote:

Everything seems fine but I'm not sure about bubbling...
Since

00:56:718 ~ 00:58:483 - This part's video scene... [I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure]

I don't know how should I deal with this ;_;
Needs more confirming orz

Sorry atm orz

I think it is ok

[General]
01:28:483 - I just feel empty for this break time X,a short break time for newbie is fair enough.

[Normal]
01:05:100 (3) - this look better Fixed

[Hinacle]
01:09:071 (1) - too close to (6)? or it can be a jump like (4,5,6)? X

Leorda wrote:

Easy
* Since this is an easy diff, make sure that some slider body has clearly visible to make beginner player easy to read while gameplay. Hidden slider body (e.g. 00:02:453 (1)) is sometimes hard to read for noobs (I am pretty not sure, though. Since you are good mapper D:) Will change some if somebody mention this again.

00:01:350 (2) - Move to 00:01:130, and extend it as you wish. To make sound feel better while gameplay X,I'm avoiding a 1/2 click in this diff so no!
01:09:071 (3) - Finish and clap at head slider is kinda weird for me, change something better Fixed

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Normal
01:12:600 (5) - When I see this slider at gameplay, the tail slider is almost off-screen x,NOT REALLY

Something

01:40:836 (7,1) - How about you make the slider between this object? X.
01:43:262 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider? To make better flow? (I am not sure, lol) X,I'm making a pattern here.
01:44:586 (4) - ^ X,^
01:48:225 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this triplet are hard to read for beginner/average player since this is normal diff. But, it's up to you O.O I can't see any triplet..
01:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think 10 combos are too long for normal diff Fixed!
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Insane
These jumps is for player who always see the hentai visual novel D: But they're fair enough

00:13:262 (5,6,7,8) - This jumps is kinda rough for me.... Why?I like this pattern.
00:44:365 (3) - New combo? Fixed!
01:14:365 (4) - ^ Fixed!
01:14:586 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed!

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]

arien666 wrote:

I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure

The video is fine for me. However, maybe add a caution in the creator's words? That would be more reasonable for bubble/ranked. I think caution is unnecessary.

[Easy]
00:42:600(1) - starts at 00:42:270.X,no.
01:09:733(T) - useless timepoint. Really?
01:10:064(T) - ^ ^

[Normal]
01:00:358(T) - useless timepoint. Fixed!
01:40:836(7) - move to x321y54? Sorry I never use grip snap when I was mapping.

[Insane]
00:58:372(T) - useless timepoint. Fixed!

SapphireGhost wrote:

This looks good overall, but in [Easy] keep in mind that these notes:
00:16:571 (1)
00:30:247 (1)
00:44:806 (1)
Come fairly soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, so it might be good to change that a bit. Oh well!

James2250 wrote:

-Yeah that video scene that arken/shiirn mentioned is really pushing it....I would either find a way to censor that out or remove the video. At 01:13:042 mehhhhh.....I guess that can pass I may find some bat/mat/player to comfirm it.
-You shouldn't need a background that is almost 2MB, convert it to JPEG to save filespace (or you can find a smaller, better quality one as Shiirn suggested) Fixed!
-Most things I check have the source listed as "Areas Koisuru Otome no 3H" are you sure the current one is current? Change it to Areas Koisuru Otome no 3H

Normal:
01:05:983 (5,6,1) - move this around so the repeat isn't hidden by the previous hitbursts Fixed!

Some jumps I don't like in Insane but the mapset looks good overall, just need that video issue looked into
I can prob rank after fixes

Shiirn wrote:

Alternatively, you could have just added some lens flare during that one bit, as the rest of the video is very nice and entirely fine.

Shiirn wrote:

Rin, that just means that they'd need to be censored anyway.

Yes, they're from 18+ games, but the song obviously isn't 18+ 8D

If you really need help, PM me in-game, I know some people that can censor this easily. I really like the song and video and want to see it ranked with vid.

Shiirn wrote:

alternatively, storyboard in a censor

/me runs

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking this just in case so James has a 2nd opinion on this.

[Easy]
00:08:409 (6) - Dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty i suggest removing a repeat or something from it.
01:06:424 (1) - Once again dont use kick sldiers on the easiest difficulty
01:27:600 (2) - Same as above

That will be all, love fripside songs <3