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mura masa - i miss you (tomppabeats remix)

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Pickkle
167 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Pickkle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, March 1, 2017 at 3:10:53 PM

Artist: mura masa
Title: i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
Tags: lofi hip hop chill pickkle renumi vaporwave remix
BPM: 77.6
Filesize: 2822kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. gone. (2.86 stars, 139 notes)
  2. renumi's normal. (1.66 stars, 103 notes)
Download: mura masa - i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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osu needs more tomppa

TIMING FIXED HOLY MOLY!!!

(´・◡・｀)

thanks TheDuckMask for the SB

renumi's normal. - 100% finished
gone. - 100% finished
Last edited by Pickkle , edited 40 times in total.
Ancelysia
482 posts
Joined September 2015
Ancelysia
gd
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no kudosu please
tomadoi
369 posts
Joined January 2015
tomadoi
Hai from #modreqs :3
hehehe

[gone]

set OD to 5

00:17:737 (1) - no NC but NC here 00:17:929 (2) -

00:26:438 (1) - no NC

00:27:209 (1,2,3) - why make them so close when 00:29:159 (1,2) - and 00:30:698 (1,2,3) - aren't so close?

00:42:457 (1) - no NC but NC here 00:42:697 (2) -

00:52:774 - the bpm change here is pretty unnessecary

01:05:158 - ^

all these BPM changes confused me a bit, but if it's timed liked this, okay :D

Good luck with your map, it's a pretty chill song!
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
wip something
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Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
here comes that dude with a double post and a finished diff
name the difficulty what you will
i think gay for shakrie
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Deafsun
7 posts
Joined September 2013
Deafsun
For gone difficulty: -I think it would feel more natural and flow nicer if the fourth slider bounce like at 20:061 was just a circle over the upcoming slider instead of the fourth bounce

-@ 33.419, the 1 and 2 are spaced more closely together than the 2 and the 1 in the next set even though they are the same time apart, and i think this should be adressed.

Don't see much else I could help with, good luck ranking the map!
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
my man remove the commas from the tags (should just be separated by one space) :d
Ancelysia
482 posts
Joined September 2015
Ancelysia

Renumi wrote:

my man remove the commas from the tags (should just be separated by one space) :d
RandomPrson
33 posts
Joined February 2016
RandomPrson
short mod for gone diff
first off good diff and i suck at modding so this might not be of help
00:10:209 (1) - pay attention to small things cause with all the red timing points some notes are slightly off especially at the end
00:59:735 (2,1,2) - ^ and the first slider is a bit too long
00:20:256 (3,4) - only notes in diff with red anchors (not really a problem just something thats there i felt i should say)
00:48:889 (2) - just me but would make it shorter
01:01:273 (2) - ^ i just think the slider is too long in this pattern again probably just me
00:33:419 (1,2) - this is different compared to the rest putting emphasis on the start of 2
00:58:927 (1,2,1,2) - the sliders could blanket but i see your trying to keep the distance snap so blanket or no blanket is up to you
00:10:209 (1,2,1) - ^ another example and lots of other places in the map
some spots i feel like timing bay be a slightly bit off dont trust me cause i cant hear well and alwasy time wrong anyway
-jordan-
692 posts
Joined October 2015
-jordan-
Make sure all of your inherited timing points are consistent across all difficulties!!

[gone.]
Make sure all your notes are snapped to the timeline, a lot are off.
Stack leniency 2 what?
you could change OD to 4/4.5 to better fit spread

00:13:285 (2) - Try to have all of these repeat 1/4 sliders exit into the flow of the next note, it just looks untidy.

00:25:277 (4) - NC

00:29:159 (1,2) - for all of these stacks, try to have the movement go with the follow point, like this.
SPOILER
It's a minor change but makes the map look a lot neater.

00:45:024 (3) - Make this look less similar than other sliders because of Slider Velocity change. Maybe NC, or change of shape/direction.

00:45:803 (1,2,3,4) - This stack hard to read, I'd change it.

01:11:272 (1,2) - Have second note follow flow of slider.

[renumi's normal.]
00:11:737 (5) - not snapped properly to 1/12. I would personally change this to a 1/8 repeat and extend it to the blue tick (for all 1/12 sliders).

00:15:622 (1,3) - I would make these seem more crooked right now it just looks like untidy mapping, and I know that isn't your intention.

00:45:024 (3) - Off screen, try to move it in a bit more.

00:46:582 (1) - make more crooked or make it perfectly straight. It hurts my OCD.

As an overall note, a lot of your slider shapes seem repeated. Try to mix it up a bit more.

[okward's easy.]
00:45:024 (3) - Remove clap sound,
Map seems super repetitive throughout, I think some sections need a bit of a remap just to make it more interesting.

[easy.]
00:25:664 (4) - NC.
00:36:505 (1) - 00:38:832 (1) - Switch NC around.

[beginner.]
Your sliders pass through timing points so a lot of them aren't properly snapped at the end. Also this difficulty is a beginner, but still has a lack of circles so try to change some of the reverse sliders into a non reverse, and a circle. This also gets around the ending not being snapped issue.
00:37:274 (1) - Doesn't look nice, I'd use different shape.
00:43:466 (2) - Too far off screen.
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi

-Jordan- wrote:

Make sure all of your inherited timing points are consistent across all difficulties!! also timing sounds super off for me sometimes, might want to get a check!! (or ask me whenever i have some free time, maybe i could help idk)

[renumi's normal.]
00:11:737 (5) - not snapped properly to 1/12. I would personally change this to a 1/8 repeat and extend it to the blue tick (for all 1/12 sliders). i see what you mean, but it's actually using 1/16 snapping; 1/12 doesn't fit this particular sound (in the sense that beats fall a bit late), so 1/16 was the closest thing i could use (peppy please implement 1/32 someday). i can't snap to blue ticks cause then would feel like it's being held for too long, making it kind of awkward, at least to me (plus ds would succ and it'd be hard to arrange), so i tried to make this as basic and simple as possible (sorry for having so many reasons but just afdsddh >.<")

00:15:622 (1,3) - I would make these seem more crooked right now it just looks like untidy mapping, and I know that isn't your intention. fixed a bit by ctrl+c and v'ing some sliders, good eye o:

00:45:024 (3) - Off screen, try to move it in a bit more. eeeeh, not really >.>|||

00:46:582 (1) - make more crooked or make it perfectly straight. It hurts my OCD. wtf happened here ;o;

As an overall note, a lot of your slider shapes seem repeated. Try to mix it up a bit more. simple patterns and concepts for a repeated song that bases itself off loops, i can see what you mean though!
thanks for the mod!
kkemosht the bestsd
osu file format v14

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intiaz
1,006 posts
Joined March 2015
intiaz
inb4 grave after 4 weeks

[The Off-Topic Stuff]
1) Made you a banner!

it's depressing like those diff names

Code:
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[General]
1) ...nice map XD

[beginner.] okay depressing diff names
Some of your sliders end at weird points.. is that rankable?
Some sliders are a little shaped weird...
Some sliders are off rhythm!
you kno idk what else to say ;w;

[easy.]
00:24:121 - overlaps with other note
00:28:006 - ^
00:32:640 - ^ but this one is fine
00:55:850 - this slider's a little.......... (vomit)

[renumi's normal.]
CS 4.5 isn't really recommended for normal,but I like it! Tell renumi that was a nice and unique thing to add.
00:10:583 - try not to do that type of overlay... <
00:13:285 - sliders a little closer... |
00:16:775 - ---------------------------------------------
00:22:967 - ^ not gonna name rest just find rest plez xd

[gone.] suicidal picckle
Nothing to note, nice job!
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi

Nyantiaz wrote:

inb4 grave after 4 weeks LOOOOL (nice banner btw, looks nice; gj uwu!

[renumi's normal.]
CS 4.5 isn't really recommended for normal,but I like it! Tell renumi that was a nice and unique thing to add. thank you! (low cs normals for maps like these are my theme uwu; rip sadly though since i changed to cs 4 to fit spread a bit better :<)
00:10:583 - try not to do that type of overlay... < i don't see what's so wrong with it; i used it consistently and plan to keep it as my main theme. i don't think this is anything any player would struggle to pick up at first play >.>
00:13:285 - sliders a little closer... | hmm?
00:16:775 - --------------------------------------------- Q-Q?
00:22:967 - ^ not gonna name rest just find rest plez xd find what? >.<[/notice]
thanks for the mod, though i'd appreciate it if you'd write more explanation behind your points, being concise and coherent with your points should be the bread and butter of your mod!!
sankusanku for checking anyways (fixed a few things) uvu
concern
fix the setting between your gone diff and my diff, the spread in relation to settings is super weird right now :/
like your od, hp and ar are way too low to be the highest diff, did you forget to set them when you made this into the highest
also rip my diff has 2.00sv and gone has 1.20sv lol what do
also fix ur taGS
also add okwards dead diff to desc mayb
ill mod this someday with all the specifics that might make the mapset look bad, maybe unless another modder points things out
gdgd haha
osu file format v14

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Title:i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
TitleUnicode:i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
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Yuuki Konno
51 posts
Joined March 2016
Yuuki Konno
Normal

00:38:832 (3,4,5) - Timing is off a little. Might be nit-picking.

00:52:190 (4,5,1) - 4 notes here not 3. Maybe create small differences rather than stack.
00:58:382 (4,5,1) - Same as last
01:04:558 (4,5,1) - Same
01:10:734 (4,5,1) - Same

00:49:658 (1,2,3) - This breaks the patterns set before it.

Gone

00:13:285 (2,3,4,1,2) - Breaks previous patterns.
00:58:138 (1,2) - Same

00:33:419 (6,7,8,9) - Breaks patterns set, as well as having a false distance.
Ancelysia
482 posts
Joined September 2015
Ancelysia
remove tomppabeats and tomppa from the tags. tomppabeats is already in the title so theres no reason for it in the tags (same with tomppa). and remove okward from the tags since im not a part of the map anymore.
Mr HeliX
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
190 posts
Joined February 2013
Mr HeliX
Hi,

[General]
  1. You have conflicting tags, timing points and audio preview time. Make them the same in all your diffs
  2. Your timing is off, which can be heard especially well in the normal diff. Why is your bpm changing from 77 to 78 to 77,497 to 77 etc even though the song doesn't change? :^) You can just set one correct bpm in the beginning and use inherited timepoints for the rest of the map; that would already avoid the incorrect timing sections. Now every part where you change the bpm, it is a bit off.
    For example:
  3. 00:34:198 (9) - bit too late
  4. 00:46:582 - Really off
  5. 00:58:907 - And here the third tick is a bit too fast
  6. 01:11:320 (1) - Too late
[normal]
  1. There is no preview point :^)
  2. 00:06:313 (2) - NC
  3. 00:11:737 (5) - Unsnapped object; check AIMod
  4. 01:07:465 (4) - Move it a bit further away so it looks nicer c:
[gone.]
  1. 00:06:313 (2) - NC here
  2. 00:09:430 (7) - NC
  3. 00:14:843 (1) - Put that NC here: 00:15:622 (2)
  4. 00:25:857 - Add a note on this tick?
aetwuns
138 posts
Joined July 2016
aetwuns
M4M

got lazy and just did the second half of the mod on top diff in chat

renumi's normal.

I'd take a good look at the timing, at the very beginning it sounds like the notes are coming a bit early and later in the map it starts to sounds like the notes are coming later than the music

00:15:038 (4,5) - I looks like you can't decide whether to map this sound or not, 00:21:035 - and 00:33:419 - you didn't map it but 00:27:227 - 00:39:611 - you did

00:41:736 (3) - and 01:06:504 (3) - i can't tell if these reverse sliders are meant to express some special sound, if not they should be the same as all the other

gone.

I don't feel like the hit sounding on this fits with the song

00:31:082 (1,2) - overlap

00:40:196 (9,10,11) - this sounds overmapped

Chat
5:06 Smolboi: noticing somthing
15:07 Pickkle: im modding a really bad map
15:07 Smolboi: about halfway through the top diff the note density gets a little funky
15:07 Pickkle: and theres so many problems with it
15:07 Pickkle: what you mean
15:07 Smolboi: just some random points whith more density than others
15:07 Pickkle: like
15:07 Smolboi: like points that were previously 1/1 sliders were changed to 1/2 notes
15:08 Smolboi: just sounds kind of overmapped
15:08 Pickkle: ohhhhh
15:08 Pickkle: yeah
15:08 Pickkle: i know what you're saying
15:08 Pickkle: I was thinking about that as well
15:08 Smolboi: doesn't really affect playability but it sounds kind of weird
15:08 Pickkle: yeah
15:08 Smolboi: also the NCing is kind of weird
15:08 Smolboi: i'm not seeing a pattern
15:09 Smolboi: like "NC starts on every downbeat
15:09 Smolboi: it's just kinda allover the place
15:09 Pickkle: ooops
15:09 Pickkle: forgot about that
15:09 Smolboi: got a couple other points that i wrote down
15:09 Smolboi: guess i'll do a half n half between that and chatlog
15:09 Pickkle: alright
15:09 Pickkle: thanks btw
Wezeh
329 posts
Joined January 2016
Wezeh
may i gd insane ? :P
Pickkle
167 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Pickkle

Wezeh wrote:

may i gd insane ? :P
no but thanks for offering
jas
541 posts
Joined August 2016
jas
how to farm kudosu from #modreq

[ normal ]

This is a normal, but you mapped it like a hard. Normals are for babies, so they're supposed to be simplistic. The overlaps and other stuff like 00:11:737 (5) - might confuse new players, would consider spacing things and make it less confusing, while fixing density, and these things 00:11:737 (5) - , while increasing cs. if you want to leave it as it is, ok, but i believe youre going to have a hard time getting it ranked

  1. 00:07:482 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing from 00:06:313 (2,3) -
  2. 00:07:872 (4,1) - overlap could confuse new players
  3. 00:32:640 (3) - move this to x:332 y:68 for spacing consistency
  4. 00:55:850 (1,2) - maybe do something like this instead?
    SPOILER
  5. if you do ^ then 00:57:398 (3) - is inconsistent spacing
[ gone ]

You have more/different bpm points than the normal, this is unrankable i.e: the 78.5 bpm, make the bpm's the same on both diffs, or it will be unrankable

  1. 00:40:001 (8) - increase spacing to emphasize the sound
  2. 00:46:193 (11) - ^
  3. 00:51:980 (7) - you should make this into a slider then circle, not a reverse slider, cuz there's a strong sound on the red tick
  4. 00:57:398 (3) - are you just gonna leave the red tick unnoticed? there's an obvious sound there
  5. 01:04:310 (6) - make these jumps, since the strong sound is the red tick
  6. 01:13:847 (1) - i presume that you want this slider to be silent? if so you misplaced the inherited point (the green point)
GL :D
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
Hey, my nm as requested ! :3

[General]

Timing things we pointed out earlier! :)

Super long hitsounds that last over 10?!?!?! seconds? Not sure on the rankability of these in the way they're mapped.

[renumi's normal]

Overall, I see a lot of parts where there is stacks for a prolonged period of time and I don't think the song warrants things like this. You can hear clear progression within the song and as a result I believe that stacks should be a unique and very subjective thing when it comes to mapping /especially/ in the lower difficulty brackets. You've to express silence with antijumps usually and I can see examples on where the song actually increases in intensity and we're met with a trainsqueak: 00:07:872 (4,1) , 00:20:256 (3,1) , . I don't understand other parts where you've stacked notes for what in my opinion would be a good place (00:05:533 (1,2) this is a good place to stack because the music stops or has a significant decrease) but then you've not stacked places like this: 00:17:929 (5,1) (which is very similar if not the same to the first one.)

To summarise above I think you should re-evaluate the map and check for what parts warrant such a unique portrayal of stacking and which parts should make effective use of distance snapping.


00:07:482 (3,4) - This can be made so the beginning and end of the slider make an equilateral/isosceles triangle. I think this would work better for aesthetics.

Triangle thing

00:09:430 (1,2,3) - Interesting pattern, and whilst I do enjoy these types I think since it's a quick paced thing (it's in 1/4 regardless of how the bpm dictates it's pretty fast) it would work better if you had a linear flow between the notes rather than the back/forth. I think even stacking 2 and 3 works better here.

00:11:737 (5) - Since you've already used 1/4 before I wouldn't see much harm in ending the reverse at 00:12:314 instead.

00:24:121 (5) - ^

00:36:505 (5) - ^ (you get the idea XD)

00:55:081 (4) - My nazi suggestion, move this to the right a tiny bit please so it lines up with the sliders trajectory, xD

[gone.]

A few combo inconsistencies can be seen, and they're getting pretty high. Like 14 combos aren't really nice to see and show that you may have skipped downbeats for comboes. A good rule of thumb would be to a NC at each downbeat. Some songs can be different but if you follow this general rule it can make your maps look much more consistent.

Hitsound business I mentioned in general, they're really invasive.

00:10:583 - No audible sound here?

00:11:737 (1) - Move this up and to the right a little so it's lined up with the slider (just like my nazi suggestion in the normal xd)

00:14:843 (1,2) - You're skipping a lot of mappable song here, I don't think a simple stack (a stack that in my opinion is also unwarranted (see normal)) is justice for what the song is giving. I would map the parts here, especially for a hard diff.

00:21:814 (7) - NC here for consistency with the previous part of the map's NC's.

00:28:006 (8) - ^

00:39:611 (6) - ^

00:52:561 (8) - I would advise a note on the downbeat because a sliderend doesn't give the same emphasis as clicking on a circle of sliderhead would do.

00:58:138 (1,2) - (same suggestion as 00:14:843 (1,2) )

01:02:772 (2,5) - These are overlapping in a very blatant and awkward way. I would advise spacing these out to remove the overlap issue.

01:04:310 (6,7) - ^ (not sure if this is intentional tho) the wave slider is also uneven.

01:13:847 (1) - Spinner should start where the 2nd last note is and the hitsound in question is very loud and smears out the song itself.

I would gather a few more mods from people with experience with this map. It is still a nice looking map regardless, best of luck!
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi

Yuuki Konno wrote:

Normal

00:38:832 (3,4,5) - Timing is off a little. Might be nit-picking. [/color]

00:52:190 (4,5,1) - 4 notes here not 3. Maybe create small differences rather than stack. i don't really understand what you mean by this, sorry :< (provide a picture or what you mean by "differences" and i could have something work with, y'know? ;-;)
00:58:382 (4,5,1) - Same as last ^
01:04:558 (4,5,1) - Same ^
01:10:734 (4,5,1) - Same

00:49:658 (1,2,3) - This breaks the patterns set before it. initially wrong, but made me look at the map and find some inconsistencies, so this made me remap quite a bit of the map, not that that's a bad thing, thanks!

Mr HeliX wrote:

Hi,

[General]
  1. You have conflicting tags, timing points and audio preview time. Make them the same in all your diffs hopefully pickkle fxed
  2. Your timing is off, which can be heard especially well in the normal diff. Why is your bpm changing from 77 to 78 to 77,497 to 77 etc even though the song doesn't change? :^) You can just set one correct bpm in the beginning and use inherited timepoints for the rest of the map; that would already avoid the incorrect timing sections. Now every part where you change the bpm, it is a bit off. hopefully pickkle fixed

    [normal]
    1. There is no preview point :^) pickkle apparently went ahead and made one for me, thanks..?
    2. 00:06:313 (2) - NC start of the song, yet would look out of place as there's no real important sound there to nc on
    3. 00:11:737 (5) - Unsnapped object; check AIMod gg yeah >.>
    4. 01:07:465 (4) - Move it a bit further away so it looks nicer c: exact positioning and pictures save lives <.<

Smolboi wrote:

M4M

got lazy and just did the second half of the mod on top diff in chat rip ;w;

renumi's normal.

I'd take a good look at the timing, at the very beginning it sounds like the notes are coming a bit early and later in the map it starts to sounds like the notes are coming later than the music pickkle u fk

00:15:038 (4,5) - I looks like you can't decide whether to map this sound or not, 00:21:035 - and 00:33:419 - you didn't map it but 00:27:227 - 00:39:611 - you did a biiiit more elaboration would help >.>||| (i think i fixed it though)?

00:41:736 (3) - and 01:06:504 (3) - i can't tell if these reverse sliders are meant to express some special sound, if not they should be the same as all the other adding a bit mroe diversity near the end, last sections come in 6 sets, so i added two repeats, one in the first and one in the 5th, leaving 6th alone since it's the last part of the song, which has no other repeat there so doesn't matter in the end (sorry if i didn't explain myself well adasdrsfasd)

CraEZy wrote:

how to farm kudosu from #modreq filthy :v)

[ normal ]

This is a normal, but you mapped it like a hard. Normals are for babies, so they're supposed to be simplistic. The overlaps and other stuff like 00:11:737 (5) - might confuse new players, would consider spacing things and make it less confusing, while fixing density, and these things 00:11:737 (5) - , while increasing cs. if you want to leave it as it is, ok, but i believe youre going to have a hard time getting it ranked quoting words from happy30; please stop treating newer players like babies :< i highly doubt they'll have a hard time playing the themes i included here.

  1. 00:07:482 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing from 00:06:313 (2,3) - they're all 1.00x spaced away from each other wha-
  2. 00:07:872 (4,1) - overlap could confuse new players you mean stack, but again, i relaly doubt this is anything issuing a combobreak or w/e since it's the first (and calmest) section of the song
  3. 00:32:640 (3) - move this to x:332 y:68 for spacing consistency could've just said move one pixel down lol (not that big of an issue to have small ds errors in there but i fixed anyways so derp)
  4. 00:55:850 (1,2) - maybe do something like this instead? null since i fixed with previous mod
    SPOILER
  5. if you do ^ then 00:57:398 (3) - is inconsistent spacing null
rank wifi tears

GL :D thanks for modding!

-Space- wrote:

Hey, my nm as requested ! :3
[renumi's normal]

Overall, I see a lot of parts where there is stacks for a prolonged period of time and I don't think the song warrants things like this. You can hear clear progression within the song and as a result I believe that stacks should be a unique and very subjective thing when it comes to mapping /especially/ in the lower difficulty brackets. You've to express silence with antijumps usually and I can see examples on where the song actually increases in intensity and we're met with a trainsqueak: 00:07:872 (4,1) , 00:20:256 (3,1) , . I don't understand other parts where you've stacked notes for what in my opinion would be a good place (00:05:533 (1,2) this is a good place to stack because the music stops or has a significant decrease) but then you've not stacked places like this: 00:17:929 (5,1) (which is very similar if not the same to the first one.)

To summarise above I think you should re-evaluate the map and check for what parts warrant such a unique portrayal of stacking and which parts should make effective use of distance snapping. eeeeh, give me more specific things to fiiix >.<; but overall, i only used stacks two times in the song; two times at the beginning to emphasize the smaller/calmer/lower two sections of the song before picking up the pace/intensity. i can understand what you mean, but i really don't think it's that huge of a problem rn. you're more than welcome to talk with me in-game if you think that i should change though, thanks!


00:07:482 (3,4) - This can be made so the beginning and end of the slider make an equilateral/isosceles triangle. I think this would work better for aesthetics. ds doesn't let me, but i think i did a thing (probably not) zz

Triangle thing


00:09:430 (1,2,3) - Interesting pattern, and whilst I do enjoy these types I think since it's a quick paced thing (it's in 1/4 regardless of how the bpm dictates it's pretty fast) it would work better if you had a linear flow between the notes rather than the back/forth. I think even stacking 2 and 3 works better here. pictures save lives >.>;;;;;

00:11:737 (5) - Since you've already used 1/4 before I wouldn't see much harm in ending the reverse at 00:12:314 instead. i explained my reasoning behind having this reverse the way it is back in a few mod posts, but to repeat, i wanted to make this as simplistic as can be for normal players, having anything longer would feel kind of awkward to play >.<

00:24:121 (5) - ^ yy

00:36:505 (5) - ^ (you get the idea XD) owo

00:55:081 (4) - My nazi suggestion, move this to the right a tiny bit please so it lines up with the sliders trajectory, xD did that and realize this has an inconsistency, so i fixed by adding two circles :3c (thanks for the indirect mod too !)

I would gather a few more mods from people with experience with this map. It is still a nice looking map regardless, best of luck! i'd mod it but eeeeh, thanks for modding, regardless!
thank you all for your mods! they really helped, if it looked like i denied a lot of them >w>;; your time and effort spent hasn't gone unnoticed!
i wish i got notifications like i used to
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 30890
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 16
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
TitleUnicode:i miss you (tomppabeats remix)
Artist:mura masa
ArtistUnicode:mura masa
Creator:Pickkle
Version:renumi's normal+.
Source:
Tags:lofi hip hop chill pickkle renumi vaporwave remix
BeatmapID:1205983
BeatmapSetID:568723

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4.6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:6.5
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Jennifer
349 posts
Joined July 2015
Jennifer
quick mod for gone.

  • general
  1. song is very constant, whats the point of bpm change??
  2. timing is tad bit off in my opinion
    gone.
  3. 00:39:611 (1,2,3) - i get you are trying to match the 5th slider, but spacing is weird and not constant
  4. 00:43:466 (2,3) - move to center bottom slider
  5. 00:48:889 (1) - doesnt sound right..
  6. 01:09:762 (1,2,1,2,3) - should be 1 2 3 4 5
Finshie
829 posts
Joined October 2012
Finshie
M4M but dont Mod my map yet. I'll tell you when.

[General]

  1. uninherited timing point. dunno which one of the diff has the right bpm offset but you guys dont have the same.
[renumi's normal.]

  1. Check distance snap at AiMod
    AiMod
  2. Change AR. its too high
    from Okorin's ruleset Draf

    Okorin wrote:

    - Normal


    Difficulty Setting Guidelines
    1. Approach Rate should be between 4 and 6.
    2. Overall Difficulty / HP Drain Rate should be between 3 and 5.
  3. 00:05:533 - 00:06:118 - no reason to be 0.7x sv since it doesnt have slider and the next timing point isnt even needed since it doesnt have any notes in it copy pasta'ing timing notes op
  4. 00:11:545 (4,5) - i mean this is only 1.6* especially that reverse slider seems too brutal for new players. too long and its 1/12
  5. 00:36:313 (4,5) - ^ i mean this range is so close to easy. not gonna tag all of them since theres bunch of them
[gone.]
  1. 00:24:121 (1) - move this closer to 00:24:890 (1) - or vise versa
  2. 00:09:430 (6) - NC
  3. 00:10:199 (7) - move this alittle farther to 00:09:430 (6) - .And if you do, make 00:10:199 (7,8) - distance farther to make the pause noticeable
  4. 00:14:843 (1,3) - switch NC?
  5. 00:21:814 (1,2) - distance of this two is like 1/4 but it is 1/2 try to make the distance higher
  6. 00:34:004 - note?
  7. 00:34:198 (8) - NC
  8. 00:41:154 (6,7) - looks 1/4 distance again.
  9. 00:43:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - put NC somewhere here. Im really confused where you put NCs
  10. 00:46:388 (12,1) - ds should be like this 00:47:351 (3,4) -
  11. 00:48:889 (1) - i just noticed your finish custom hitsound sounds delay? or is it intentional
  12. 01:01:229 (1,1) - lower distance? people might sliderbreak on 01:01:229 (1) -
  13. 01:05:079 (7) - NC
  14. 01:07:387 (1) - remove NC
  15. 01:11:126 - note?
the song and sound literally repeats but your rhythms changes. Might have too look at that but im not sure either cause i kept doing what youre doing lol

gd~
Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
reminder for myself, ill edit this when done
Ralyn_old
Ralyn_old
lovely sounds and map (‘∀’●)♥
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
34,830 posts
Here since the beginning
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