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REDALiCE - ALiVE

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Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 March 2017 at 12:01:59

Artist: REDALiCE
Title: ALiVE
Tags: HARDCORE SYNDROME 9 Tano*C C88 Alice Emotion Kami-senpai
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5558kb
Play Time: 02:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kami's Insane (4.38 stars, 527 notes)
  2. You Make Me Feel Alive! (5.02 stars, 563 notes)
Download: REDALiCE - ALiVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDALiCE Soo good!



RE DL after 19th, new mp3

MP3 from William K and inspiration from Natsu's set https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359749
Timing given by TequilaWolf


Normal -
Hard -
Insane - Kami-senpai
You make me feel alive! - Me
Last edited by Wuab , edited 39 times in total.
Hikomori
840 posts
Joined November 2015
Hikomori
adsasfasfgerg
William K
694 posts
Joined January 2013
William K
Hi, maybe I can help and I'm farming kds too

[General]

  1. Your map's mp3 could be improved to a higher quality of bit rate 192 kbps, the current one you use is 128 kbps. Here, I converted one for you :Link, Click Here. Remember that after changing the mp3, there'll be a slight change with the offset.

[You make me feel alive!]

Similarly, as how we make titles, the diff name should also be capitalized into "You Make Me Feel Alive!"

  1. 00:08:363 (1) - Obviously, an overmap as there's no sound at 00:08:451 - which is audible. Please make this into a single note as it doesn't really go with anything.
  2. 00:18:774 (3,4) - I don't think an extended slider at 00:18:774 (3) - goes with anything? There aren't any vocals nor another instrument similar to 00:18:774 (3) - .
  3. 00:19:127 (4) - The slider-end seems to be stronger in terms of vocals than the slider-head which is pretty questionable.
  4. 01:31:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm I suppose this's a different part from 01:30:951 (3,4) - ? If yes, then doing one pattern on two unconnected parts would be questionable.

If something's not clear, you're free to ask me :3 GL!
stUwUpid
608 posts
Joined January 2015
stUwUpid
100% not a Light Insane lol, will remap easier diff if you want

merp merp
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48951
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 105774,129774
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:ALiVE
TitleUnicode:ALiVE
Artist:REDALiCE
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE
Creator:Wuab
Version:Kami's Extra
Source:
Tags:HARDCORE SYNDROME 9 Tano*C C88 Alice Emotion
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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354,166,136480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,57,136657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,179,136833,5,0,0:0:0:0:
265,136,137010,2,0,P|277:106|278:78,1,49.5000015106202
184,57,137186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,166,137363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,26,137539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,223,137715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,89,137892,2,0,L|-6:87,1,99.0000030212403
176,261,138245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
205,264,138333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,260,138421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,246,138510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,223,138598,2,0,P|286:165|256:119,1,99.0000030212403
112,200,138951,5,0,0:0:0:0:
94,223,139039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,250,139127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,280,139216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,307,139304,2,0,P|139:342|194:339,1,99.0000030212403
254,327,139568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,327,139657,6,0,B|300:289|356:319|356:319|325:338|302:362,1,144
224,255,140186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,255,140274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,255,140363,2,0,P|274:230|312:226,2,72
327,338,140892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,217,141068,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Wuab
467 posts
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Topic Starter
Wuab

William K wrote:

Hi, maybe I can help and I'm farming kds tooSPACEBUTTONBROKE
[General]

  1. Your map's mp3 could be improved to a higher quality of bit rate 192 kbps, the current one you use is 128 kbps. Here, I converted one for you :Link, Click Here. Remember that after changing the mp3, there'll be a slight change with the offset.
willdowhenathome
[You make me feel alive!]

Similarly, as how we make titles, the diff name should also be capitalized into "You Make Me Feel Alive!"k

  1. 00:08:363 (1) - Obviously, an overmap as there's no sound at 00:08:451 - which is audible. Please make this into a single note as it doesn't really go with anything.madecircle
  2. 00:18:774 (3,4) - I don't think an extended slider at 00:18:774 (3) - goes with anything? There aren't any vocals nor another instrument similar to 00:18:774 (3) - .soundisthere
  3. 00:19:127 (4) - The slider-end seems to be stronger in terms of vocals than the slider-head which is pretty questionable.icouldmakeit2circles
  4. 01:31:657 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm I suppose this's a different part from 01:30:951 (3,4) - ? If yes, then doing one pattern on two unconnected parts would be questionable.
usedsamepatternwithmirroringtolookcleanidkgonnakeepit

If something's not clear, you're free to ask me :3 GL!
Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab
i don't want to forget this

holiday is super gay i wanna map
remap 1st and 5th spinners to be long sliders
01:37:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe new pattern
reshape all of these 00:52:127 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
01:45:774 (1,2,3) - reshape this part
TheKingHenry
1,666 posts
Joined October 2014
TheKingHenry
Hello mod from my queue~
You Make Me Feel Alive!
  1. Maybe it's just me, but the stacking looks messy and inconsistent imo, as in patterns that could use similar stacking have perfect stacking at places and that stack distance at others places. I know it's just due the stack leniency and thus I don't really know what else you could do except change that so that everything could be made more consistent. 00:16:127 (7,8,1,2,4,6) - for example
  2. 00:20:892 (5,6) - blanket slightly off
  3. 00:36:598 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for build-up part like this, it kinda makes no sense that the first instance is clearly having more spacing and thus intensity than the following ones lol. Similar stuff at 01:58:480 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - It would also make sense to make both of these sections similar to each other spacing-wise since the music is basically the same.
  4. Also from these sections, 00:47:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 02:07:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would work better if they continued up to the points where the spinners currently start. There's a strong (thus preferably clickable) sound there, and that's where the sounds the stream is following go up till. Then just move the spinner forward 1/4
  5. 00:43:304 (4,3) - I don't think this overlap is necessary
  6. 01:36:244 (6,7) - preferably just have one since that's what you have done with these so far, even tho I guess you are tryin to follow the vocals. Same drill 01:41:892 (6,7) -
Looks like there wasn't much to say here ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Good luck!
Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~
You Make Me Feel Alive!
  1. Maybe it's just me, but the stacking looks messy and inconsistent imo, as in patterns that could use similar stacking have perfect stacking at places and that stack distance at others places. I know it's just due the stack leniency and thus I don't really know what else you could do except change that so that everything could be made more consistent. 00:16:127 (7,8,1,2,4,6) - for example trying 4 now
  2. 00:20:892 (5,6) - blanket slightly off looks fine
  3. 00:36:598 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - for build-up part like this, it kinda makes no sense that the first instance is clearly having more spacing and thus intensity than the following ones lol. Similar stuff at 01:58:480 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - It would also make sense to make both of these sections similar to each other spacing-wise since the music is basically the same. Done this
  4. Also from these sections, 00:47:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 02:07:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would work better if they continued up to the points where the spinners currently start. There's a strong (thus preferably clickable) sound there, and that's where the sounds the stream is following go up till. Then just move the spinner forward 1/4 yep done that
  5. 00:43:304 (4,3) - I don't think this overlap is necessary looks fine to me
  6. 01:36:244 (6,7) - preferably just have one since that's what you have done with these so far, even tho I guess you are tryin to follow the vocals. Same drill 01:41:892 (6,7) - I thinks its playable and it complements the music better no change
Looks like there wasn't much to say here ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod m8
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
Once this it's complete, call me for the m4m I own you, please ewe xD
7ambda
2,560 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
this map is cool
Sakurauchi Riko
1,579 posts
Joined January 2015
Sakurauchi Riko
Helloo, #modreqs

you make me feel alive
00:04:510 (2,3) - swap places so it flows better http://puu.sh/ua7al/b9530d049c.jpg

00:31:775 - maybe consider silencing these sliderends (5% volume) because there is no sound in the music. its not necessary, its rather a matter of style, but i think it sounds better and it gets better along the music. 00:33:187 - 00:34:598 - you get it.

for 00:46:863 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe smth like http://puu.sh/ua7wR/e57fcac04c.jpg ? looks more organized imo because your current ending of the stream looks a bit unstructured (like you didnt know what you wanna do for the end)

00:59:040 (6) - ctrl + g and replace a bit for better flow. line 00:59:216 (7) - up with the slider

01:20:745 - i think you dont need to stop the break a bit earlier, just let it end naturally

01:24:275 (6,1) - i think the gap between these two is a bit high for a slow part. earlier in the map you use only 2.0x distance snap 00:09:804 (1,2) -

01:30:275 (1,2) - this is really hard to read because the reverse arrow is barely seeable since it gets almost fully overlapped

00:23:922 - here the spinner fits because there are no background sounds, but for 01:44:393 - the spinner doesnt really fit because 1) 01:44:393 - has a really strong sound that should be clickable and 2) the spinner covers sounds that you can easily map

01:47:569 (2) - make this like 01:41:922 (6,7) - for consistency
01:53:216 (2) - same here. I really like how you did this only for 01:30:628 (2) - because at 01:30:804 - is no strong sound and later on you did 01:36:274 (6,7) - this because on 01:36:451 - is a strong sound (so it is clickable). i think you should keep this consistent

00:53:569 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 02:14:040 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ahhhhhh dat copy pasta
02:19:334 (5,6,7) - yea also copy pasta, would do the same as i suggested you above for the same pattern

02:21:098 - maybe place a last circle here? sounds cooler imo

cool map, fun to play. keep it up :)
best of luck
Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab

Phyloukz wrote:

Helloo, #modreqs

you make me feel alive
00:04:510 (2,3) - swap places so it flows better http://puu.sh/ua7al/b9530d049c.jpg done

00:31:775 - maybe consider silencing these sliderends (5% volume) because there is no sound in the music. its not necessary, its rather a matter of style, but i think it sounds better and it gets better along the music. 00:33:187 - 00:34:598 - you get it. lazy i'll try this later

for 00:46:863 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe smth like http://puu.sh/ua7wR/e57fcac04c.jpg ? looks more organized imo because your current ending of the stream looks a bit unstructured (like you didnt know what you wanna do for the end) done

00:59:040 (6) - ctrl + g and replace a bit for better flow. line 00:59:216 (7) - up with the slider tried something

01:20:745 - i think you dont need to stop the break a bit earlier, just let it end naturally spinner seems fine to me

01:24:275 (6,1) - i think the gap between these two is a bit high for a slow part. earlier in the map you use only 2.0x distance snap 00:09:804 (1,2) - changed

01:30:275 (1,2) - this is really hard to read because the reverse arrow is barely seeable since it gets almost fully overlapped changed

00:23:922 - here the spinner fits because there are no background sounds, but for 01:44:393 - the spinner doesnt really fit because 1) 01:44:393 - has a really strong sound that should be clickable and 2) the spinner covers sounds that you can easily map added a circle on downbeat and kept spinner i want the spinner the represent the build up part

01:47:569 (2) - make this like 01:41:922 (6,7) - for consistency
01:53:216 (2) - same here. I really like how you did this only for 01:30:628 (2) - because at 01:30:804 - is no strong sound and later on you did 01:36:274 (6,7) - this because on 01:36:451 - is a strong sound (so it is clickable). i think you should keep this consistent the vocals on the parts you suggested are much weaker than the instances where i put to buzz's i whan you mean but i don't think is needed there no change

00:53:569 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 02:14:040 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ahhhhhh dat copy pasta
02:19:334 (5,6,7) - yea also copy pasta, would do the same as i suggested you above for the same pattern i mean can change them but it ruins the meme

02:21:098 - maybe place a last circle here? sounds cooler imo na i don't like that

cool map, fun to play. keep it up :)
best of luck

TY for mod
Asuka_-
1,459 posts
Joined February 2016
Asuka_-
im not good at english.

from #modreqs

offset is bit early imo
plz try 2703
Wuab
467 posts
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Topic Starter
Wuab

Asuka_- wrote:

im not good at english.

from #modreqs

offset is bit early imo
plz try 2703
I changed mp3 and timed this with liiraye it is fine rn
Asuka_-
1,459 posts
Joined February 2016
Asuka_-
sry^^
Fluffy Tiger
Fluffy Tiger


  • I am just gonna start with blanket sliders, as they make this map a lot more comfortable to play
  1. 00:03:458 (5,6) - Blanket
  2. 00:03:811 (6,1) - Blanket
  3. 00:04:870 (3,4) - Blanket (Their heads & ends can blanket each other)
  4. 00:06:282 (3,1) - Blanket
  5. 00:11:929 (4,5) - Blanket (Their heads & ends can blanket each other)
  6. 00:14:752 (3,5) - Blanket
  7. 00:15:282 (5,6) - This one is almost blanket
  8. 00:20:929 (5,6) - Blanket
  9. 00:49:694 (1,2,3) - Try getting these 3 sliders like this
  10. 00:50:752 (1,4) - Blanket this (even if it's not directly after each other)
  11. 01:02:047 (1,4) - ^
  12. 01:24:988 (2,3,4,1,2) - Holy blankets all over the place, please <3
  13. 01:26:752 (5,1) - And another one
  14. 01:29:576 (3,4) - Blanket them into each other
  15. 01:30:282 (1,3) - And another one
  16. 01:32:400 (4,5) - Blankets are awesome
  17. 01:34:164 - Blanket this slider end to 01:34:517 (1) -
  18. 01:35:400 (4,5) - And anooooooother one
  19. 01:36:635 (8,9) - Blank it :3
  20. 01:40:517 - Blanket this slider end to 01:39:635 (4) -
  21. 01:40:429 (1,3) - Almost at the end! (Blanket)
  22. 01:41:047 (4) - Blanket slider head to 01:41:400 (5) -
  23. 01:42:635 (9,3,5) - A blanket to own them all
  24. 01:59:929 (1,2,3,5,1) - You know what to do
  25. 02:11:223 (1,4) - Yes blanket even these
  26. 02:13:694 (5) - Blanket the slider end to 02:12:988 (5) -
  27. 02:14:752 (1,3) - This isn't a blanket thing but they don't overlap nicely, might wanna fix it for aesthetics
Wuab
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Topic Starter
Wuab

Fluffy Tiger wrote:



  • I am just gonna start with blanket sliders, as they make this map a lot more comfortable to play
  1. 00:03:458 (5,6) - Blanket
  2. 00:03:811 (6,1) - Blanket
  3. 00:04:870 (3,4) - Blanket (Their heads & ends can blanket each other)
  4. 00:06:282 (3,1) - Blanket
  5. 00:11:929 (4,5) - Blanket (Their heads & ends can blanket each other)
  6. 00:14:752 (3,5) - Blanket
  7. 00:15:282 (5,6) - This one is almost blanket
  8. 00:20:929 (5,6) - Blanket
  9. 00:49:694 (1,2,3) - Try getting these 3 sliders like this
  10. 00:50:752 (1,4) - Blanket this (even if it's not directly after each other)
  11. 01:02:047 (1,4) - ^
  12. 01:24:988 (2,3,4,1,2) - Holy blankets all over the place, please <3
  13. 01:26:752 (5,1) - And another one
  14. 01:29:576 (3,4) - Blanket them into each other
  15. 01:30:282 (1,3) - And another one
  16. 01:32:400 (4,5) - Blankets are awesome
  17. 01:34:164 - Blanket this slider end to 01:34:517 (1) -
  18. 01:35:400 (4,5) - And anooooooother one
  19. 01:36:635 (8,9) - Blank it :3
  20. 01:40:517 - Blanket this slider end to 01:39:635 (4) -
  21. 01:40:429 (1,3) - Almost at the end! (Blanket)
  22. 01:41:047 (4) - Blanket slider head to 01:41:400 (5) -
  23. 01:42:635 (9,3,5) - A blanket to own them all
  24. 01:59:929 (1,2,3,5,1) - You know what to do
  25. 02:11:223 (1,4) - Yes blanket even these
  26. 02:13:694 (5) - Blanket the slider end to 02:12:988 (5) -
  27. 02:14:752 (1,3) - This isn't a blanket thing but they don't overlap nicely, might wanna fix it for aesthetics
Alot of this is very nitpicky altho i did make changes (therefore kds given) most of these blanket changes are not in line with how i mapped this, this map uses deep curves through the map, and pixel by pixel the blankets will never be perfect however i have made an effort to keep them centered and clean
Dstorv
247 posts
Joined November 2013
Dstorv
#modreqs

Please note, that's there's a chance my mod will conflict with your map style, so feel free to reject

General
Other diff when? :^)

Death
00:05:233 (4) - ctrl + g
00:06:292 (3) - if you're following vocal (which I assume you did), 00:06:821 - I would make this clickable, since its more showing on the vocal side
00:08:939 (3,4,5) - can you make them equal DS? (idk about this probably because of the stacking? If it is, try edit it a bit, the different DS is quite visible)
00:16:527 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since I would assume you follow the vocal, Try this? , You could make (2), a 1/2 + gimmick, or just make it 1/1 ( which probably would end up weird)
00:22:174 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:32:057 (5) - Try placing it like this http://puu.sh/uf1qB/0168daf6eb.jpg , it give like some symmetrical in 00:32:057 (5,6,1) - also avoid the awkward movement transition from 00:31:880 (4,5) - to 00:32:057 (5,6)
00:36:557 (8,1) - why is this have smaller DS than the other?
00:43:704 (1) - why not ctrl + g? it connect to both 00:43:351 (4) - and 00:44:057 (2) - in term of pattern
00:59:057 (6,7) - could be made more parallel to (5)

I'm not sure if its the same but The part before the break is almost the same as the part after the break, so those mod apply for the second half of the song

Overall, a good map~ :)
Good Luck with the map ~!
Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab

sullywally wrote:

#modreqs

Please note, that's there's a chance my mod will conflict with your map style, so feel free to reject

General
Other diff when? :^)
GDs take time i guess i don't mind the wait as long as they're good diffs :D

Death
00:05:233 (4) - ctrl + g done
00:06:292 (3) - if you're following vocal (which I assume you did), 00:06:821 - I would make this clickable, since its more showing on the vocal side i don't like how that plays no change
00:08:939 (3,4,5) - can you make them equal DS? (idk about this probably because of the stacking? If it is, try edit it a bit, the different DS is quite visible) think i fixed now
00:16:527 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since I would assume you follow the vocal, Try this? , You could make (2), a 1/2 + gimmick, or just make it 1/1 ( which probably would end up weird)
00:22:174 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ i have an idea if i do want change this part currently i don't, i want rhythm to be dense to match the rest of the section, however i do see how having a less dense rhythm would make it stand out which is also good.
00:32:057 (5) - Try placing it like this http://puu.sh/uf1qB/0168daf6eb.jpg , it give like some symmetrical in 00:32:057 (5,6,1) - also avoid the awkward movement transition from 00:31:880 (4,5) - to 00:32:057 (5,6) different change made, you idea doesn't follow the ds i want here
00:36:557 (8,1) - why is this have smaller DS than the other? fixed
00:43:704 (1) - why not ctrl + g? it connect to both 00:43:351 (4) - and 00:44:057 (2) - in term of pattern done
00:59:057 (6,7) - could be made more parallel to (5) done

I'm not sure if its the same but The part before the break is almost the same as the part after the break, so those mod apply for the second half of the song

Overall, a good map~ :)
Good Luck with the map ~!
MegaMagicPencil
17 posts
Joined June 2012
MegaMagicPencil
Hello.
I didnt find A LOT but i hope i can help at least with something.

00:30:645 (5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe Curve the stream? all the other streams are curved
+ curved stream would connect with the slider in a better looking way.

01:41:410 (5) - Here u have slider that starts on "soft" sound and has "stronger" sound in the middle then ends on the "soft" one again.
Im refering to the Pishifat video where he said that slider should end on the same or "lesser""/"softer" sound, im not sure about sounds in the middle but it looks/sounds weird.
01:35:762 (5) - Not sure if this one counts too.


Also no need to trust me with this cus im still a newbie but im trying very hard
Wuab
467 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Wuab

MegaMagicPencil wrote:

Hello.
I didnt find A LOT but i hope i can help at least with something.

00:30:645 (5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe Curve the stream? all the other streams are curved
+ curved stream would connect with the slider in a better looking way. done

01:41:410 (5) - Here u have slider that starts on "soft" sound and has "stronger" sound in the middle then ends on the "soft" one again.
Im refering to the Pishifat video where he said that slider should end on the same or "lesser""/"softer" sound, im not sure about sounds in the middle but it looks/sounds weird.
01:35:762 (5) - Not sure if this one counts too. I could make this into a circle + slider but i mapped this section to have strong ties to the vocals so went against normal intensity to map to them for example 01:38:233 (5) - could start on a white tick but i chose to purely map the vocal sound, hope my reasoning made sense.


Also no need to trust me with this cus im still a newbie but im trying very hard
TY
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