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Pandano

HighTec wrote:

from my stack queue

  • [Disclaimer]
  1. You do not have to give this post kudosu. I wouldn't do it personally as it is very lazy and I'm not planning on farming kudosu to the hardest.
  2. Always try to stack from the note earlier in the timeline first as the stacking then most likely is more accurate. Take this in consideration while applying these fixes! However, sliderends tend to be better when they are placed on the note you want to overlap, even if it's later on the timeline. Take note!
  3. Your own visual looking helps a lot too, as you can easily see when something's off a bit. If the text above makes it uglier in your opinion, don't change it!

00:43:692 (1) - note could potentially be stacked, having the double ugly overlap with 00:42:385 (5,6) - makes it look randomly placed
01:34:624 (5,3) -
02:54:537 (2,4) -
Done all of the above
well stacked bro!
Thanks for the stacking check :3
Dammond
Hey! ;)
Black Vultures Clan Modding Queue request

The main problem of the map for me - rhythm and emphasize. Also the NCs ignore music almost all the time, and have some inconsistency.
Tried to point out the biggest issues
  1. 00:01:782 (2) - do you really like this edgy thing? I prefer this variant - make it a line for smooth view
  2. 00:01:782 (2,1) - is the (1) was accidentally moved? Looks like it should be a blanket or smth
  3. 00:12:641 (3) - I don't hear any separated played note there. 00:10:575 (2) - should be just a longer slider?
  4. 00:13:549 - somewhere in this point flute already plays a next note...
  5. 00:13:872 - ...and there. Fix it to the music
  6. 00:38:524 - strong downbeat - should be clickable
  7. 00:39:548 - ^ and there... what even happened in this point? It's so off now
  8. 00:49:755 (2) - NC it instead of previous note, because downbeat
  9. 00:50:777 (2) - ^ 00:51:926 (3) -
  10. Ok I just realized that NCs are completely ignore the music. Pretty view is a cool thing, but NCs should emphasize the music aswell
  11. 00:53:882 - chord starts from here
  12. 00:59:055 (1,3) - looks bad together. copypaste 00:58:667 (5) - instead of this 00:59:830 (3) -
  13. 01:01:124 - chord, downbeat, music...
  14. 01:04:356 - this is the beginning of the another music section, start of another "musical phrase" - let's call it like that, but it MUST be cliclable
  15. 01:08:503 (9) - NC - because this is the beginning of another bar / repeat of the riff
  16. 01:12:641 - clickable, please, reasons the same
  17. 01:18:589 (6) - NC - strong change of the tune coming from guitars
  18. 01:25:055 (2) - nc, cz downbeat
  19. 01:29:063 (6) - pointless slider, and make clickable this 01:29:451 -
  20. 01:40:313 (2) - NC
  21. 01:43:675 - why all these things are not clickable? These are the strongest beats in the music and you definitely wanna push some buttons in this moment
  22. 02:06:434 (2) - nc
  23. 02:12:641 (3) - nc
  24. 02:27:125 (5) - important NC
  25. 02:39:538 (2) - nc
  26. 02:41:478 (2) - nc
  27. Ok no more NCs, I've already said a word about that, so yea... they need some work
  28. 02:51:951 - click
  29. 03:00:227 - ^!
  30. 03:32:426 (1,2) - very unexpected changing of the rhythm, I prefer to use a slider here, because the initial difficulty if the map, and basically the way how you mapped everything before, will make players to miss this because of the unexpected, for no reason - this is not even the strongest part of the music
  31. 03:35:399 (1) - hide it
  32. 04:25:061 (1,2) - you did stacks before in similar parts, always, but these are not stacked...
  33. 04:27:648 - click please
  34. 04:39:544 - ^
  35. 04:51:279 (2,2) - blanket could be much better
  36. 05:01:917 (1) - pointless spinner and doesn't fit the music. my preference: 1) 05:01:610 - circle 2) from 05:01:767 - to - 05:02:667 - slider

Pandano wrote:

Thinking of another diff name tho :'(
Really? That's awesome and it was one of the reasons why I eventually did the mod lol :D

gl hf ;)
Misery
Hi! From the OSUWOT modq. Sorry late, I was out during the weekdays. These are mostly subjective aesthetics since I believe your map is already fun to play. ^^

long diff name that I'm too lazy to exactly write, jk
-I like CS3.8 better, just saying
-00:31:542 (2,3) - mind making these two shapes the same?
-01:50:917 (2,3,4,5) - these has clockwise progression, make it stronger a bit? (so that slider 5 points closer to 1)
-01:59:193 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like these look better with the anti-clockwise progression rather than this
-02:43:159 (4,5) - very minor change, but they don't look the same for me?
-03:19:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - back and forth sliders might work better here since I don't hear a sound at the 2s
-03:36:434 (2,3,4,5) - would be cute if these curve sliders look all the same uwu
-03:38:503 (2,3,4,5) - mind if these sliders have anti-clockwise progression? (like most of the other four slider combos you have)
-04:39:286 (4) - I'd turn this upwards, idk
-04:43:681 (1,2,3,4) - wot? :3 these 4 sliders... this feelss different but I understand why you did it... though I don't see the directions fitting tho. same as the next four sliders too.
-05:01:610 (1) - must be symmetric. Also last spinner isn't needed uwu

I feel like this is a bad mod, so I'll star you instead :3 Hope this helps! You don't have to follow them if you don't like to ^^
Topic Starter
Pandano

Dammond wrote:

Hey! ;)
Black Vultures Clan Modding Queue request

The main problem of the map for me - rhythm and emphasize. Also the NCs ignore music almost all the time, and have some inconsistency.
Tried to point out the biggest issues
  1. 00:01:782 (2) - do you really like this edgy thing? I prefer this variant - make it a line for smooth view Doing that would make the slider longer and that's not what I wanted
  2. 00:01:782 (2,1) - is the (1) was accidentally moved? Looks like it should be a blanket or smth It was supposed to blanket the slider end of the previous slider
  3. 00:12:641 (3) - I don't hear any separated played note there. 00:10:575 (2) - should be just a longer slider? The (3) slider has amplified the sound of the flute a little bit so that's why I separated (3) from (2) to avoid too long slider. Might consider this later
  4. 00:13:549 - somewhere in this point flute already plays a next note... Fixed
  5. 00:13:872 - ...and there. Fix it to the music ^
  6. 00:38:524 - strong downbeat - should be clickable Does not sound strong to me
  7. 00:39:548 - ^ and there... what even happened in this point? It's so off now You might not be familiar with BPM changing
  8. 00:49:755 (2) - NC it instead of previous note, because downbeat Fixed
  9. 00:50:777 (2) - ^ 00:51:926 (3) - Fixed
  10. Ok I just realized that NCs are completely ignore the music. Pretty view is a cool thing, but NCs should emphasize the music aswell
  11. 00:53:882 - chord starts from here So what do you want me to do?
  12. 00:59:055 (1,3) - looks bad together. copypaste 00:58:667 (5) - instead of this 00:59:830 (3) - Fixed
  13. 01:01:124 - chord, downbeat, music... Fixed
  14. 01:04:356 - this is the beginning of the another music section, start of another "musical phrase" - let's call it like that, but it MUST be cliclable This is allowed to use in "Hard" diff
  15. 01:08:503 (9) - NC - because this is the beginning of another bar / repeat of the riff Fixed
  16. 01:12:641 - clickable, please, reasons the same ^
  17. 01:18:589 (6) - NC - strong change of the tune coming from guitars Fixed
  18. 01:25:055 (2) - nc, cz downbeat Fixed
  19. 01:29:063 (6) - pointless slider, and make clickable this 01:29:451 - Would consider that
  20. 01:40:313 (2) - NC Fixed
  21. 01:43:675 - why all these things are not clickable? These are the strongest beats in the music and you definitely wanna push some buttons in this moment ^
  22. 02:06:434 (2) - nc
  23. 02:12:641 (3) - nc
  24. 02:27:125 (5) - important NC
  25. 02:39:538 (2) - nc
  26. 02:41:478 (2) - nc
  27. Ok no more NCs, I've already said a word about that, so yea... they need some work 5 above fixed
  28. 02:51:951 - click ^
  29. 03:00:227 - ^! ^
  30. 03:32:426 (1,2) - very unexpected changing of the rhythm, I prefer to use a slider here, because the initial difficulty if the map, and basically the way how you mapped everything before, will make players to miss this because of the unexpected, for no reason - this is not even the strongest part of the music Either map consistently like before or miss the rhythm of the song. If you could show me a better wat to represent this part, I would take it
  31. 03:35:399 (1) - hide it Fixed
  32. 04:25:061 (1,2) - you did stacks before in similar parts, always, but these are not stacked... This is the part I'm worried the most because this is the strongest part of the song and I like to make it more challenging instead of plain old pattern like before. Pretty soon I'm going to ask for a BN mod and see if they point out the same issue as you did. If they do, I will change immediately
  33. 04:27:648 - click please Hmm...
  34. 04:39:544 - ^ Fixed
  35. 04:51:279 (2,2) - blanket could be much better lol Done
  36. 05:01:917 (1) - pointless spinner and doesn't fit the music. my preference: 1) 05:01:610 - circle 2) from 05:01:767 - to - 05:02:667 - slider
Shiro did the same, you know.However, I changed that part

Pandano wrote:

Thinking of another diff name tho :'(
Really? That's awesome and it was one of the reasons why I eventually did the mod lol :D

gl hf ;)

[- Mizki -] wrote:

Hi! From the OSUWOT modq. Sorry late, I was out during the weekdays. These are mostly subjective aesthetics since I believe your map is already fun to play. ^^

long diff name that I'm too lazy to exactly write, jk
-I like CS3.8 better, just saying Ok
-00:31:542 (2,3) - mind making these two shapes the same? Fixed
-01:50:917 (2,3,4,5) - these has clockwise progression, make it stronger a bit? (so that slider 5 points closer to 1) I prefer the way it currently is
-01:59:193 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like these look better with the anti-clockwise progression rather than this ^
-02:43:159 (4,5) - very minor change, but they don't look the same for me? The ARE the same lol
-03:19:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - back and forth sliders might work better here since I don't hear a sound at the 2s Fixed
-03:36:434 (2,3,4,5) - would be cute if these curve sliders look all the same uwu The reason why I don't make them the same is that (4) and (5) are likely to be off-screen, which is something unrankable
-03:38:503 (2,3,4,5) - mind if these sliders have anti-clockwise progression? (like most of the other four slider combos you have) I like to be different lol
-04:39:286 (4) - I'd turn this upwards, idk This part was fixed in the above mod
-04:43:681 (1,2,3,4) - wot? :3 these 4 sliders... this feelss different but I understand why you did it... though I don't see the directions fitting tho. same as the next four sliders too. This is the final part of the song and I like it to be slightly more challenging. I don't want to make the map paling old and too easy to FC :3
-05:01:610 (1) - must be symmetric. Also last spinner isn't needed uwu
^

I feel like this is a bad mod, so I'll star you instead :3 Hope this helps! You don't have to follow them if you don't like to ^^
Huge thanks for you both. The mods relly helped my map :3
Asaiga
Didn't know this thing existed, some small stuff #how_to_mod_properly_shitty

00:01:265 - The first slider art session seems to be little bit too fast for the rest of the difficulty if you aren't intended for it be slow, then np
00:19:877 (1,1) - Why do these 2 have different hs than the rest of the session? If you wanted to have Normal sample, recheck the red lines otherwise make these Soft sample
00:25:188 (1) - no need for NC here

00:32:310 (4) - Trying moving this like 3 grids up and 1 grid to the left. Will make a better flow + better spacing (turn on grid snap for this) or x:440 y:136
00:34:234 (5,6,7) - Hitsound volume goes from 100% to 30% all way sudden and there is no such change like that in the music, try to adjust it to a reasonable amount
00:36:714 (1) - Try turning this into a curve shape for aesthetics, don't make it too curved, the curved angle can be around 145degrees, if it's 180 it's a straight line
00:39:042 (6) - NC here because there is a change in bpm
00:34:234 (5,6,7) - NC for each of these as well

00:40:220 (2) - NC here, same reason above and it's in the ranking criteria in case you wondering where I get those
00:40:857 (1) - This should be a normal curve slider, there is no need for variation here
00:41:633 (2) - NC starts here
00:41:623 - This session feels a little bit hard but i have no idea how to change it tbh, moving on

00:42:894 - NC here because red line change again
00:44:984 (5) - NC
00:47:317 (4) - NC
00:51:415 (3) - Let's keep the consistency here by making this a straight slider, it might ruins your blanket so if you want to keep, keep

00:51:415 (3) - Why sudden change to N:C1? I believe this should have the same sound with the rest, no?

From 00:51:926 - to 01:00:218 - this looks way too messy and not followed by what you are trying to follow.
00:51:926 (1,1,3,1,1,1,1) - You are following the flute with these but the rest you followed drum
Up until here 01:00:218 - , trying following only flute because the flute you followed basically ignore the drums as well and by mapping the flute will reduce the density + messiness you are having here. Yes, you will have to make long sliders, this is where you slider art skill comes in. But keep this in mind : make.it.neat

01:05:400 - What's the purpose of having this red line here?
01:05:917 (4) - You can clearly hear that vocal at the slider end has lounder and more emphasized sound, make rhythm looks like this instead

01:08:503 (1,2) - Stack these because, (1) follows the instrument while the rest follow vocal, so to make the vocal feels more emphasized, stack these. (1) stands alone makes it stands out and can be mistaken as equal sound with the rest

01:09:537 - There is nothing to be clicked here. Make rhythm to be looked like this instead

01:11:218 (1,2) - Wrong emphasis here, the slider head is weaker than the body and tail
01:13:158 (2,3,4) - same, if you couldn't think of any solution, come and talk to me we will find a way because otherwise I will be remapping this for you

That's it for now, will come back later if requested. This map is currently flawed and can be improved a lot
Topic Starter
Pandano

Asaiga wrote:

Didn't know this thing existed, some small stuff #how_to_mod_properly_shitty

00:01:265 - The first slider art session seems to be little bit too fast for the rest of the difficulty if you aren't intended for it be slow, then np
00:19:877 (1,1) - Why do these 2 have different hs than the rest of the session? If you wanted to have Normal sample, recheck the red lines otherwise make these Soft sample
00:25:188 (1) - no need for NC here

00:32:310 (4) - Trying moving this like 3 grids up and 1 grid to the left. Will make a better flow + better spacing (turn on grid snap for this) or x:440 y:136
00:34:234 (5,6,7) - Hitsound volume goes from 100% to 30% all way sudden and there is no such change like that in the music, try to adjust it to a reasonable amount
00:36:714 (1) - Try turning this into a curve shape for aesthetics, don't make it too curved, the curved angle can be around 145degrees, if it's 180 it's a straight line
00:39:042 (6) - NC here because there is a change in bpm
00:34:234 (5,6,7) - NC for each of these as well

00:40:220 (2) - NC here, same reason above and it's in the ranking criteria in case you wondering where I get those
00:40:857 (1) - This should be a normal curve slider, there is no need for variation here
00:41:633 (2) - NC starts here
00:41:623 - This session feels a little bit hard but i have no idea how to change it tbh, moving on

00:42:894 - NC here because red line change again
00:44:984 (5) - NC
00:47:317 (4) - NC
00:51:415 (3) - Let's keep the consistency here by making this a straight slider, it might ruins your blanket so if you want to keep, keep

00:51:415 (3) - Why sudden change to N:C1? I believe this should have the same sound with the rest, no?

From 00:51:926 - to 01:00:218 - this looks way too messy and not followed by what you are trying to follow.
00:51:926 (1,1,3,1,1,1,1) - You are following the flute with these but the rest you followed drum
Up until here 01:00:218 - , trying following only flute because the flute you followed basically ignore the drums as well and by mapping the flute will reduce the density + messiness you are having here. Yes, you will have to make long sliders, this is where you slider art skill comes in. But keep this in mind : make.it.neat

01:05:400 - What's the purpose of having this red line here?
01:05:917 (4) - You can clearly hear that vocal at the slider end has lounder and more emphasized sound, make rhythm looks like this instead

01:08:503 (1,2) - Stack these because, (1) follows the instrument while the rest follow vocal, so to make the vocal feels more emphasized, stack these. (1) stands alone makes it stands out and can be mistaken as equal sound with the rest

01:09:537 - There is nothing to be clicked here. Make rhythm to be looked like this instead

01:11:218 (1,2) - Wrong emphasis here, the slider head is weaker than the body and tail
01:13:158 (2,3,4) - same, if you couldn't think of any solution, come and talk to me we will find a way because otherwise I will be remapping this for you

That's it for now, will come back later if requested. This map is currently flawed and can be improved a lot
I wish you hadn't seen this.
I know I requested in the #modreqs (Or if that's not where you came from, you must probably have checked my userpage countless times) but next time do tell me in advance before even modding.
Topic Starter
Pandano
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Asaiga
oh, sorry
BUT AT LEAST GIVE ME A KDS DAMN IT ; ;

On a serious note, if it wasn't me, other people would have said the same. I wanted to help you to rank this if you are dedicated enough but yea, you can blame me, I should have talked to you first.
davidminh0111
Mod:
Your beatmap is good, I really enjoy it, your beatmap has done with a correct timing and snapping.
BUT:
04:32:303: Overlap
Topic Starter
Pandano

davidminh0111 wrote:

Mod:
Your beatmap is good, I really enjoy it, your beatmap has done with a correct timing and snapping.
BUT:
04:32:303: Overlap That kind of "overlap" is considered rankable. No change
Hmm. Thanks for modding tho. Idk if it deserves a kudosu or not.
davidminh0111
I have time to mod in 5pm. I will mod your map again because yesterday i was in rush
Rad-
Hello, from my queue.

Well, from both editing and playing the map, i can't really tell what difficulty this was exactly trying to be, as it is a bit too easy for a Hard, yet it has alot of 1/4 short sliders and ,many 1/2 sliders, yet it doesn't have any spacing differences most of the time, being something you would see alot on Normals, and the use of alot of repeating 1/2 sliders as well, so i'll just consider this map as an ''Advanved'', It's just something that should be more clear the first time.

The AR on the map seems too high for it's object density and overall speed of the map, so i suggest to reduce to AR7 (Max AR7.5) to make it easier for reading.
the OD seems too high also for this kind of difficulty, reduce it to OD6 to balance it more.

00:12:644 (3) - This slider is way too wiggly for this difficulty and makes it hard to read, consider fixing it
00:17:959 (1,1) - Slider is too close to the previous spinner and place it too high for people to recover on this difficulty.
00:22:534 (2) - NC
00:23:388 (3) - NC, these 2 need NC because of speed changes
00:32:310 (4,1) - Switch NC
00:36:456 (4,1) - Switch NC
00:39:436 (2) - NC
00:40:598 (2) - NC
00:42:639 (5,1) - Switch NC
00:44:726 (4,1) - Switch NC
00:52:839 (3,1) - Switch NC
00:52:969 (1,2,3) - These sliders look too close to each other and causes alot of confusion to follow
00:54:917 (3) - NC
00:59:055 (1) - Make this slider end on the white tick before it instead of the red one (optionally you can add a circle to where the slider end was) This is to better fit the song and to avoid awkward playability
01:01:124 (4) - NC for consistency, and also dont make this slider end on the blue tick, instead on the white tick.
01:04:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overall i can already tell you that you need a more consistent spacing between all your objects on the map, conflicting spaces makes a conflicting map, so use only one number for it.
01:06:434 (6) - NC
01:11:218 (1,2) - switch NC
01:14:710 (5) - NC
01:18:589 (1,2) - Switch NC
01:19:106 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:046 (1,1) - Too close to each other
01:31:520 (5) - NC
01:39:537 (6) - NC
01:40:313 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:865 (6) - NC
02:04:365 (5) - NC
02:08:503 (5) - NC
02:10:055 (1) - Remove NC
02:10:572 (6) - NC
02:11:865 (1) - Remove NC
02:16:779 (4) - NC
02:18:848 (7) - NC
02:19:365 (1) - Remove NC
02:28:676 (1) - Remove NC
02:29:452 (4,1) - Switch NC
02:33:202 (5) - This slider is being overlapped by slider 3, place it somewhere else to fix this, and also give it a New Combo since the slider speed changes here
03:11:478 (3) - This slider makes no sense to be like this, change it to something that follows the beat correctly
04:58:049 (1,1) - Spinner too close again
05:01:610 (1,2) - This is a huge jump for this difficulty, just place them stacked in the middle

The rest of the new combos i think you can fix them yourself if you learned to spot the difference, it basically means you need to keep a consistency between them, and only change them on the same rhythm beats constantly.

Also very important to note is that you need to properly hitsound your map, there are no claps that i heard of, and also if possible fit better hitsound samples to fit the song best, normal ones are really off...


Hope it helps!
Lumario
I looked at your map and since I'm a fan of asian mapping and your map looks neat... have a star :3
Topic Starter
Pandano

Lumario wrote:

I looked at your map and since I'm a fan of asian mapping and your map looks neat... have a star :3
Thank for the star bud :3
CircleFairy
Hi from my mod queue :-)

00:52:839 (1,2,3,4) - This section can fit better to the song.
03:24:797 (1) - Might be too fast.

Check AIMod - You have a lot of unsnapped notes that need fixing.

Thoughts
Nice map overall, it flows nicely. Good luck! :-)
Topic Starter
Pandano

CircleFairy wrote:

Hi from my mod queue :-)

00:52:839 (1,2,3,4) - This section can fit better to the song. The problem is: I don't know how. Do leave me a solution next time. That's called modding
03:24:797 (1) - Might be too fast. The song called for it. So I think I'll keep that

Check AIMod - You have a lot of unsnapped notes that need fixing. Ok...

Thoughts
Nice map overall, it flows nicely. Good luck! :-)
Thanks for modding!
newton-
hi, from queue

[ relaxed happiness of a joyful japanese goddess]
  1. tbh i think your sv changes are a bit too extreme for a hard diff (case in point: 03:24:150 (2,1,1) - )
  2. 00:32:318 (1) - there actually isnt a strong sound on the downbeat, so it doesnt deserve to be clickable. i'd suggest a rhythm like this instead
  3. 00:36:096 (3,1) - same as above
  4. 00:44:338 (3,1) - yeah ok
  5. 00:52:839 (1) - touches hit error bar, also a tiny bit of the sliderborder is offscreen
  6. 01:07:210 (2,3) - seems odd to have a 1/2 stack in this diff when you used a 1/1 stack directly before it. according to the ranking criteria, "avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing."
  7. 02:02:555 (2,3,4) - why did you simplify rhythm here and not in other parts of this section like 02:04:365 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  8. 03:49:882 (1,2,3) - as discussed above
  9. 04:49:469 (3,2) - ugly overlap tbh
good luck!
Topic Starter
Pandano

newton- wrote:

hi, from queue

[ relaxed happiness of a joyful japanese goddess]
  1. tbh i think your sv changes are a bit too extreme for a hard diff (case in point: 03:24:150 (2,1,1) - Do leave me a suggestion next time. I'll think about ir for now)
  2. 00:32:318 (1) - there actually isnt a strong sound on the downbeat, so it doesnt deserve to be clickable. i'd suggest a rhythm like this instead Fixed, for now
  3. 00:36:096 (3,1) - same as above There were some errors when I tried to fix. I'll see what I can do
  4. 00:44:338 (3,1) - yeah ok ^
  5. 00:52:839 (1) - touches hit error bar, also a tiny bit of the sliderborder is offscreen Fixed
  6. 01:07:210 (2,3) - seems odd to have a 1/2 stack in this diff when you used a 1/1 stack directly before it. according to the ranking criteria, "avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing." Fixed, I think
  7. 02:02:555 (2,3,4) - why did you simplify rhythm here and not in other parts of this section like 02:04:365 (1,2,3,4) - ? Still confused by what you mean. I think those two parts are kinda different
  8. 03:49:882 (1,2,3) - as discussed above ^
  9. 04:49:469 (3,2) - ugly overlap tbhBut I like those :( I think I'll change it later
good luck!
Thanks for modding!
JapanYoshiTheGamer
Xin chào from my queue!

Relaxed Happiness of a Joyful Japanese Goddess
Diff name is too long. I don't know which difficulty you're aiming for, but I'll assume Hard.
This map is over 5 minutes long without a break. That could cost you your rankability.
The timing points are all over the place. Remove all uninherited timing points except the one at 00:31:284.
00:01:265 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Don't try to map everything, especially this free-tempo section. Players will have to rely on the approach circles to play this part, especially if they don't know the song. Delete this part, and add a countdown.
00:33:596 (4,5) - Turn these to normal ½ beat sliders. ¼ beat "hold" sliders make your map less readable.
00:38:718 (6) - This slider is awkwardly placed in between the beats. Revise this.
00:39:436 (1) - The slider starts at a weaker beat than it ends.0
01:21:068 (1) - There's lots of stuff going on in the music here, so it's such a waste to put a spinner. Remove the spinner and map this part.
01:29:085 (5) - The music stops for about a beat here, so it doesn't make sense to have a slider running through it. Turn this into a hit circle.
01:51:973 (1) - The spiral part of this slider needs a little reshaping. I've fixed it in the modified version of the map.
02:14:215 (1) - At this difficulty, slider velocity manipulation doesn't make sense. Remove the inherited timing point before this slider, and recalculate the length of this slider to be ¾ beats.
02:33:223 (5) - Slider velocity manipulation overuse
02:34:904 (4) - Snap the end to ¼ beat snap.
03:09:430 (2) - The timing of this object may be hard to read.
03:21:973 (5,6) - Fix this overlap.
03:24:818 (1) - Another bad example of random slider velocity manipulation.
03:25:982 (2) - There's a rockin-ass guitar solo in the back of this slider here. Huge waste.
03:35:421 (1) - Fix this spiral so that the borders don't overlap each other.
03:43:697 (1) - Fix this spiral so that the borders don't overlap each other.
04:01:801 (1) - Slider velocity manipulation overuse.
04:13:697 (3) - Out of bounds.
04:20:809 (5) - Slider velocity manipulation overuse.
04:27:146 (1) - Slider velocity manipulation overuse.
04:46:542 (1,1,2) - 04:51:133 (1) - 04:53:977 (1) - These may be too hard to time.
05:01:930 (1) - Spinner is too long, and goes past the end of the song.

Here's my modified .osu file, which contains some of the fixes I mentioned, most importantly the timing points. Note that the inherited timing points are kept as they were.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 134196
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 31264,44971,64627,197558,197687,197816
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Tengaku
TitleUnicode:天樂
Artist:Wagakki Band
ArtistUnicode:和楽器バンド
Creator:Pandano
Version:Relaxed Happiness of a Joyful Japanese Goddess
Source:
Tags:vocaloid japanese tengaku wagakki band
BeatmapID:1205261
BeatmapSetID:568506

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Tengaku.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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MAKKOV
this map is starting to look good :D
_sponez
Hello
  1. Is it necessary to change bmp many times?
  2. 00:51:415 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7894375.
  3. 01:20:141 (7) - NC.
  4. 03:37:210 (5) - Too bent in comparison with 03:36:434 (2,3,4).
  5. 02:34:107 (1,2,3) - Different space.
Winnie
Hello from modding queue



[Relaxed Happiness of a Joyful Japanese Goddess]
00:10:058 (1) - Almost a perfect blanket :D
00:38:718 (6) - Could NC this too since it's almost the same 1/1 slider like 00:37:749 (4) - but is played different.
00:53:752 (3) - DS to keep it cleaner
00:55:563 (2,3,1) - DS to keep clean
00:59:830 (2) - Same as ^
01:14:193 (4) - instead of this just long plain slider, how about these different rhythms to keep it on the same track like your other patterns/rhythms http://puu.sh/vUlDY/d911bce7c4.jpg or http://puu.sh/vUlEs/e41bf458bd.jpg.
01:15:486 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here just seems like a runoff. Maybe try something a little different. Ex: http://puu.sh/vUlIR/e1c352696c.jpg
01:31:003 (4) - Ends on quite a strong vocal of hers so I believe making it a clickable note would be nice. So something like this http://puu.sh/vUlMm/870d97df46.jpg to keep it like this 01:16:779 (1,2) -
01:35:271 (2,3,4) - Overlap here makes it look quite bad imo even having it spaced out just a tad bit seems much better http://puu.sh/vUlQI/d673c12672.jpg
01:39:537 (1,2) - Instead of 2 single notes having a slider may suit you more especially if you're going for a vocal type rhythm here. So having a slider roll off that strong note would be best suited for the vocals right after instead of having (2) be by itself
01:57:124 (2,3,4,5) - Your hitsounds here might be incorrect, if not then I suggest changing it to keep it from the same as before. It'll be strange for listener to play and then for some reason this part would be the only one with a different hitsound rhythm
02:02:556 (2) - I believe having your rhythm this way would suit this place better or some form like this http://puu.sh/vUmat/96c32b299c.jpg because the way you used the slider at (2) the strong beat is on the sliderstart which makes the rhythm feel strange when actually paying attention to it or just make the beginning a clickable and the rest you can keep the same
02:06:951 (2,3,4) - How about? of course with proper spacing http://puu.sh/vUmiF/fce74df4ed.png
02:16:779 (1,2) - I think this would be too simple of a pattern. Especially considering it's a kiai and what you've done previously http://puu.sh/vUmlI/ba635b5bae.jpg
02:54:797 (3,4,5) - Rhythm here is pretty poor imo doesn't utilize a lot of components
03:22:987 (6) - I don't think it's necessary to really blanket like this
03:56:865 (3) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/vUmxZ/240c29b038.png
Not much else just keep a look out for this. Keep rhythm ideal and same as others. Some places were just boshed maybe because nothing came up to you but it should be ok in most aspects.


Always be positive, and stay humble. Keep the driving force of osu! this way
Sometimes motivational words no matter how small can push a person's spirit to new heights
Topic Starter
Pandano

Kocari wrote:

Hello from modding queue



[Relaxed Happiness of a Joyful Japanese Goddess]
00:10:058 (1) - Almost a perfect blanket :D Lol readjusted a bit
00:38:718 (6) - Could NC this too since it's almost the same 1/1 slider like 00:37:749 (4) - but is played different. Okay
00:53:752 (3) - DS to keep it cleaner
00:55:563 (2,3,1) - DS to keep clean Done 2 above
00:59:830 (2) - Same as ^ ^
01:14:193 (4) - instead of this just long plain slider, how about these different rhythms to keep it on the same track like your other patterns/rhythms http://puu.sh/vUlDY/d911bce7c4.jpg or http://puu.sh/vUlEs/e41bf458bd.jpg. I fixed it like the first one you gave
01:15:486 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here just seems like a runoff. Maybe try something a little different. Ex: http://puu.sh/vUlIR/e1c352696c.jpg Woa thanks! Did not expect it to sound that much better
01:31:003 (4) - Ends on quite a strong vocal of hers so I believe making it a clickable note would be nice. So something like this http://puu.sh/vUlMm/870d97df46.jpg to keep it like this 01:16:779 (1,2) - Done
01:35:271 (2,3,4) - Overlap here makes it look quite bad imo even having it spaced out just a tad bit seems much better http://puu.sh/vUlQI/d673c12672.jpg Fixed, with some minor spacing changes
01:39:537 (1,2) - Instead of 2 single notes having a slider may suit you more especially if you're going for a vocal type rhythm here. So having a slider roll off that strong note would be best suited for the vocals right after instead of having (2) be by itself Done, thanks!
01:57:124 (2,3,4,5) - Your hitsounds here might be incorrect, if not then I suggest changing it to keep it from the same as before. It'll be strange for listener to play and then for some reason this part would be the only one with a different hitsound rhythm They are practically the same as before. Where's the difference tho?
02:02:556 (2) - I believe having your rhythm this way would suit this place better or some form like this http://puu.sh/vUmat/96c32b299c.jpg because the way you used the slider at (2) the strong beat is on the sliderstart which makes the rhythm feel strange when actually paying attention to it or just make the beginning a clickable and the rest you can keep the same Thanks a lot! Fixed
02:06:951 (2,3,4) - How about? of course with proper spacing http://puu.sh/vUmiF/fce74df4ed.png That probably might ruin quite an amount of structure
02:16:779 (1,2) - I think this would be too simple of a pattern. Especially considering it's a kiai and what you've done previously http://puu.sh/vUmlI/ba635b5bae.jpg Fixed!
02:54:797 (3,4,5) - Rhythm here is pretty poor imo doesn't utilize a lot of components It was pretty hard to work out this part. I changed the rhythm into 1/1 sliders
03:22:987 (6) - I don't think it's necessary to really blanket like this I do. Even if I don't, I can't work out what way to best represent that part
03:56:865 (3) - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/vUmxZ/240c29b038.png Fixed like so
Not much else just keep a look out for this. Keep rhythm ideal and same as others. Some places were just boshed maybe because nothing came up to you but it should be ok in most aspects.


Always be positive, and stay humble. Keep the driving force of osu! this way
Sometimes motivational words no matter how small can push a person's spirit to new heights
Thanks for the mod! Most helpful one yet so far. Really improved the map's rhythm!
Winnie
Came back for review of all my mods. Good changes but I do still feel 02:54:797 (3,4,5) - is lackluster because of the 1/1. How about http://puu.sh/vWLAB/7a4302ef4b.jpg
As well as 02:58:676 (3,4) - to http://puu.sh/vWLCn/ae68a99c56.jpg
Just to make sure everything seems perfect No kudosu thxs
Topic Starter
Pandano

Kocari wrote:

Came back for review of all my mods. Good changes but I do still feel 02:54:797 (3,4,5) - is lackluster because of the 1/1. How about http://puu.sh/vWLAB/7a4302ef4b.jpg
As well as 02:58:676 (3,4) - to http://puu.sh/vWLCn/ae68a99c56.jpg
Just to make sure everything seems perfect No kudosu thxs
Thanks! All done, I guess lol
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