hello
nao
general :
- title : 林檎売りの泡沫少女
Diff :
- OD 8,5 feels better imo because ur diff is an extra diff
- since 00:07:096 - to 00:15:089 - how about give whistle for every 4th whiteticks? whistle for downbeat only feel too empty imo
- 00:10:027 (2) - use 1,2x spacing for consistency with 00:08:428 (6) - ?
- 00:12:691 (1) - imo the spacing looks so small for emphasis the bell sound, try 1,5x spacing for at least consistent with 00:09:494 (1) - ?
- 00:14:955 (6) - use consistent spacing? 1,5x and 1,4x arent consistent at all
- 00:19:085 - whistle on head? somehow downbeat when music part change feels weird to hear w/o any emphasis
- 00:31:607 (3) - there is clap sound on bm, try use s:c1 clap?
- 00:39:467 (3,4) - ctrl+g gives better flow imo
- 00:40:400 (3) - why this slider has bigger jump than (4) when music on (4) is louder? i mean like its not like what you did in 00:37:202 (2,3) -
- 00:42:797 (4) - i would say having bigger jump for 00:43:064 (1) - is better than having it in this slider because vocal and crystal sound
- 00:45:462 - remove greenline since there is no sv changes
- 00:51:456 (3,4) - this anti jump feels weird because why you do spacing for catch (3) and nope for (4) when the drum at (4) is louder than (3). same for others like 00:46:128 (3) - etc
- 01:01:714 - clap because its similar with 01:01:980 -
- 01:02:113 (4,5,6,7) - from aethestic for ur flower pattern imo moving them all to 336,128 would look better
- 01:15:168 (6,1) - i feel like the flow is quite sharp if we see ur prev flow which are zig zag. try smoother it like move 01:15:168 (6) - to 160,172?
- 01:18:898 (3) - it feels weird when the drum is strong but mapped with stack or anti jump
- 01:23:161 (2) - move to 96,204 for blanket with (1)?
- 01:27:291 (1) - 1/4 feels weird because the sound is like around 1/8 01:27:391 - so imo better to change this to 1/2 slider
- 01:28:357 (2) - clap on head and remove on tail? i dont hear any drum at redtick
- 01:29:822 (5) - imo the flow is weird because the zig zag angle isnt same with 01:29:156 (1,2,4) - so i would say move that (5) to 436,184
- 01:37:148 (2) - ctrl+g feels smoother for transtition from (1)'s tail to (2)'s head
- 01:38:481 (2) - nazi but consistent spacing is better imo with move to 240,48
- 01:39:547 (6) - 01:44:342 - clap?
- 01:40:346 (2) - basically same as 01:37:148 (2) -
- 01:58:995 - volume should be 65% like first kiai
- 02:02:725 (3) - whistle on head? like 01:54:199 -
- 02:07:188 (5) - nazi but spacing on stream can be more consistent
- 02:11:118 (2,3) - if they are supposed for blanket, the blanket could be better
- 02:29:235 (2) - nazi but spacing can be more consistent
- 02:31:366 (2) - i still can understand with follow piano but imo skip drum at this case is weird because you following all drums before and seem like you are mapping based on drum especially at 02:23:507 - this part
- 02:33:897 (4,1) - the symmetrical can be better and not making symmetrical look weird based on ur design
- 02:41:090 (3) - having straight flow after a linear flow from 02:40:558 (1,2) - and linear again after that is weird imo, try ctrl+g instead to fix the flow?
- 02:41:756 (5) - just curious why jump in weak music
- 02:53:879 (1) - the flow is weird too imo because sudden change from 02:53:346 (5,6) - , how about ctrl+g this and then move 02:54:278 (2) - to 336,160?
- 02:58:674 (4,1) - i would say swap nc, see nc for the music is ok but break the consistent is weird especially 02:58:674 (4,5,1,2) - is a pattern
- 03:07:732 - also kinda weird to me, first kiai and second kiai are literally same but why SV changes are different here? (one with 1,4x the other one with 1,5x)
- 03:24:251 (3) - both head and tail are strong drum, how about change them to 2 circles? at least it would make sense like 01:58:462 (3,4,5,6) -
- 03:27:981 (1) - 360,100 for symmetrical with (3)
- 03:32:243 (1) - at least i hear a cymbal, how about finish? it gives nice emphasis for last note as well
- 03:44:898 (7) - stack can be better
- 04:13:806 (1) - move to 224,208 so spacing gap of 04:13:806 (1,2,3,4) - is consistent
- 04:28:726 (1) - add whistle because it sounds nicely
- 04:57:900 (4) - nazi, 284,360 for better blanket
- so ur kiai volume are too slow. ones are 48%, i saw 55% too and 65%. i hope you can make them more consistent (i personally prefer use 70% btw)
- and idk maybe its only me but i cant understand how your stacking are working here and yeah there are some flow which are weird imo so need to hear ur opinion about that
nao
general :
- title : 林檎売りの泡沫少女
Diff :
- OD 8,5 feels better imo because ur diff is an extra diff
- since 00:07:096 - to 00:15:089 - how about give whistle for every 4th whiteticks? whistle for downbeat only feel too empty imo
- 00:10:027 (2) - use 1,2x spacing for consistency with 00:08:428 (6) - ?
- 00:12:691 (1) - imo the spacing looks so small for emphasis the bell sound, try 1,5x spacing for at least consistent with 00:09:494 (1) - ?
- 00:14:955 (6) - use consistent spacing? 1,5x and 1,4x arent consistent at all
- 00:19:085 - whistle on head? somehow downbeat when music part change feels weird to hear w/o any emphasis
- 00:31:607 (3) - there is clap sound on bm, try use s:c1 clap?
- 00:39:467 (3,4) - ctrl+g gives better flow imo
- 00:40:400 (3) - why this slider has bigger jump than (4) when music on (4) is louder? i mean like its not like what you did in 00:37:202 (2,3) -
- 00:42:797 (4) - i would say having bigger jump for 00:43:064 (1) - is better than having it in this slider because vocal and crystal sound
- 00:45:462 - remove greenline since there is no sv changes
- 00:51:456 (3,4) - this anti jump feels weird because why you do spacing for catch (3) and nope for (4) when the drum at (4) is louder than (3). same for others like 00:46:128 (3) - etc
- 01:01:714 - clap because its similar with 01:01:980 -
- 01:02:113 (4,5,6,7) - from aethestic for ur flower pattern imo moving them all to 336,128 would look better
- 01:15:168 (6,1) - i feel like the flow is quite sharp if we see ur prev flow which are zig zag. try smoother it like move 01:15:168 (6) - to 160,172?
- 01:18:898 (3) - it feels weird when the drum is strong but mapped with stack or anti jump
- 01:23:161 (2) - move to 96,204 for blanket with (1)?
- 01:27:291 (1) - 1/4 feels weird because the sound is like around 1/8 01:27:391 - so imo better to change this to 1/2 slider
- 01:28:357 (2) - clap on head and remove on tail? i dont hear any drum at redtick
- 01:29:822 (5) - imo the flow is weird because the zig zag angle isnt same with 01:29:156 (1,2,4) - so i would say move that (5) to 436,184
- 01:37:148 (2) - ctrl+g feels smoother for transtition from (1)'s tail to (2)'s head
- 01:38:481 (2) - nazi but consistent spacing is better imo with move to 240,48
- 01:39:547 (6) - 01:44:342 - clap?
- 01:40:346 (2) - basically same as 01:37:148 (2) -
- 01:58:995 - volume should be 65% like first kiai
- 02:02:725 (3) - whistle on head? like 01:54:199 -
- 02:07:188 (5) - nazi but spacing on stream can be more consistent
- 02:11:118 (2,3) - if they are supposed for blanket, the blanket could be better
- 02:29:235 (2) - nazi but spacing can be more consistent
- 02:31:366 (2) - i still can understand with follow piano but imo skip drum at this case is weird because you following all drums before and seem like you are mapping based on drum especially at 02:23:507 - this part
- 02:33:897 (4,1) - the symmetrical can be better and not making symmetrical look weird based on ur design
- 02:41:090 (3) - having straight flow after a linear flow from 02:40:558 (1,2) - and linear again after that is weird imo, try ctrl+g instead to fix the flow?
- 02:41:756 (5) - just curious why jump in weak music
- 02:53:879 (1) - the flow is weird too imo because sudden change from 02:53:346 (5,6) - , how about ctrl+g this and then move 02:54:278 (2) - to 336,160?
- 02:58:674 (4,1) - i would say swap nc, see nc for the music is ok but break the consistent is weird especially 02:58:674 (4,5,1,2) - is a pattern
- 03:07:732 - also kinda weird to me, first kiai and second kiai are literally same but why SV changes are different here? (one with 1,4x the other one with 1,5x)
- 03:24:251 (3) - both head and tail are strong drum, how about change them to 2 circles? at least it would make sense like 01:58:462 (3,4,5,6) -
- 03:27:981 (1) - 360,100 for symmetrical with (3)
- 03:32:243 (1) - at least i hear a cymbal, how about finish? it gives nice emphasis for last note as well
- 03:44:898 (7) - stack can be better
- 04:13:806 (1) - move to 224,208 so spacing gap of 04:13:806 (1,2,3,4) - is consistent
- 04:28:726 (1) - add whistle because it sounds nicely
- 04:57:900 (4) - nazi, 284,360 for better blanket
- so ur kiai volume are too slow. ones are 48%, i saw 55% too and 65%. i hope you can make them more consistent (i personally prefer use 70% btw)
- and idk maybe its only me but i cant understand how your stacking are working here and yeah there are some flow which are weird imo so need to hear ur opinion about that