Crimson RebellionLet's begiiiin
I'll focus in aesthetics mostly
General:• Idk if you noticed but, you have 2 audios on your folder... delete audio.mp3
seems good
Objects:• 00:53:739 - I feel like the spinner starts here (i also tried hearing that part at 25% playback rate and you can see that there is where it starts)
• 00:55:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - Right now, this seems like
this, but i think that , just for aesthetics :v), you should move this like
this... and yes, its like moved a bit only... but if you can see, now it does a perfect blanket with 00:55:934 (10) - and 00:56:081 (11) - so it looks a bit better. this is a bit nazi i know xD
• 00:59:593 (6) - isn't this TOO far away from 00:59:446 (5,7) - ? i might consider moving it a bit to the left, at least to make the spacing a bit more comfortable to play
or you can also do an overlap on 00:59:739 (7) - like
this (maybe this is the best option , because you will also make the spacing between 00:59:739 (7,1) - lower than before, the current one is overspaced imo)
• 01:00:178 (2) - what about moving this to x:352 y:356, it looks better also if you see the follow point pass exactly over 00:59:593 (6) -
• 00:59:446 (5,8) - Is this stack wrong or it's just me?
• 01:01:788 (4) - what about putting NC here? seems like you broke the flow
• 01:07:642 (6) - you might consider moving this a bit down to fit with the stream from before, at least it will looks better
• 01:07:934 (8,8) - hmm maybe an overlap (with less spacing) would play better, like, right now its kinda overspaced imo xD
• 01:14:520 (2) - what about moving this to x:364 y:196 so it will be exactly (or almost exactly) between 01:14:081 (2,3) - ... it would look cleaner tho
• 01:14:666 (3) - same here, x:88 y:288 , it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -
• 01:14:812 (1) - same here x3 (or maybe HELLO THERE ... ok , no) x:304 y:76 so it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -
• 01:16:861 (3) - Since this sounds really different than 01:16:715 (2) - , i think that you should make a different pattern for this notes 01:16:861 (3,4,5,6) - (since it says "higashi no" ... or "hi ga shi no" and it says nothin where the circle 2 is)
• 01:24:178 (13) - Add NC?
• 01:26:373 (4,3) - same stack thing lol, like, it seems good but if you move its like it re-stacks (yes this is a lot nazi)
• 01:37:203 (6,1) - idk , i think that this shouldn't be THAAAAAAAAT spaced
• 01:47:007 (2,4) - Ctrl + G, trust me, it really feels bad playing that D:
• 01:52:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think that you may move this a bit up, like 5 pixels or something like that, and moving 01:53:446 (1) - as part of the stream stair, if my explanation is bad, there's a pic with what im talking about:
Patternalso, i stacked the whole stream stair with 01:52:568 (1,2) - so it will works for aesthetics too :p
• 02:00:471 (7) - why not make this slider curvy like 01:59:300 (13) - ?
• 02:05:154 (1) - and what about moving this to x:448 y:40? it will be exactly between 02:04:203 (4,1) - so it works as an aesthetic too
• 02:08:227 (3,4,5) - wat why did u brokw the consistency and added a triple?
• 02:18:910 (9) - NC?
• 02:40:568 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OH WHAT THE FUCK KROYTZ REALLY?
♦ 02:50:520 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this sounds as only one stream tho, or well... it would be better if you change the pattern and you add a circle here 02:50:739 - imo
• 02:56:081 (3) - plz dont make our lifes bad than they're rn and do ctrl + G on this :'(
• 03:01:055 (4) - i think that breaking the flow here would play REALLY good, just hear at the guitar
• 03:05:446 (1,2) - maybe it would be better if you move this circle to the left, or rotate the pattern to the left, or making it like
this (the circle 3 is doing a blanket with the last curve of 03:03:983 (1) - , maybe you should stack the circle 3 with the sliderend of 03:02:812 (1) - )
also you can make 03:05:592 (2) - blanket with 03:06:324 (1) -
• 03:14:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i was there when you made this pattern in stream and i know how many time it took to you to decide what pattern to use here, but hey, doesn't it looks like (combo) 4-4?, maybe you should consider making a different pattern, maybe something similar than Panda Eyes - Highscore
hope you understand the picture• 03:57:837 (1) - this is the most nazi thing that ill say today, but you should move this a pixel to the right so it will be exactly between 03:57:178 (4,5) -
• 04:19:276 (6,7,8,9,10) - A CIRCLE MADE WITH ONLY PURE HATE LOL WHY
• 04:20:227 (3,1) - i think that this should be overlapped.
• 04:25:788 (6) - move this to x:296 y:256 so it will be exactly between 04:24:764 (1,3) -
or you can stack the 6 with the sliderend of 04:27:105 (1) -
• 04:45:470 (6,6) - this overlap looks really weird lol
• 04:49:349 - i think that the kiai should ends here
• 04:51:983 (2,1) - fix stack i think
Don't take me wrong, i don't really wanted to sounds nazi but the details on the aesthetics are important to have a clean map imo
Ok thats all from me, good luck.