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!summon Kencho
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Modding because I like this map and I want it to be ranked, and even if this mod doesnt contribute much, it will add an extra star, making it more rankable, and also bump this thread.

[Crimson Rebellion]
00:23:450 (1,1) - Is there any reason why these two sliders have the red anchor directly in the middle, but 00:32:822 (1) - decides to have its red anchor about 3/4 ways through the slider? I dont hear anything that will musically represent this.

00:41:600 (1,1) - Why do you feel the need to make these two sliders the same length, despite having different bpms? It will be much easier to read that it is slowing down here if the slider lengths represented that, I think.

00:55:495 (5) - This might work better as a slider to serve the softer (but still existing) sound on 00:55:568 -

02:41:154 (1,2,1,2,1) - What is the point of using the glass breaking hitsounds if it never actually plays out? Why not just use another whistle sample?

02:55:788 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of similar to what I said above, why does 2, 3, and 4 have its split right down the middle,

Ok that is actually all I could find... Good luck!
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Stars don't make maps more rankable btw x3
Appreciate the mod however~

00:23:450 (1,1) - Is there any reason why these two sliders have the red anchor directly in the middle, but 00:32:822 (1) - decides to have its red anchor about 3/4 ways through the slider? I dont hear anything that will musically represent this. Nothing wrong with keeping shapes fresh.

00:41:600 (1,1) - Why do you feel the need to make these two sliders the same length, despite having different bpms? It will be much easier to read that it is slowing down here if the slider lengths represented that, I think. maybe I'll look into this one but from what I remember, I wanted to give the jump to (1) bigger spacing cuz slower slider might not allow me that.

00:55:495 (5) - This might work better as a slider to serve the softer (but still existing) sound on 00:55:568 - I'll disagree

02:41:154 (1,2,1,2,1) - What is the point of using the glass breaking hitsounds if it never actually plays out? Why not just use another whistle sample? glass sounds pretty cool tho

02:55:788 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of similar to what I said above, why does 2, 3, and 4 have its split right down the middle, monstrata wanted me to use a different pattern xd
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just noticed that audio.mp3 seems unused since according to the .osu the mp3 used is BABYMETAL - Road of Resistance.mp3, is that a placeholder of some sorts ?
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AyanokoRin wrote:

just noticed that audio.mp3 seems unused since according to the .osu the mp3 used is BABYMETAL - Road of Resistance.mp3, is that a placeholder of some sorts ?
Mines doesn't contain audio.mp3 at the moment? Maybe delete and redownload for now, but I know it'll get replaced to audio.mp3 once it qual/ranks
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Just a short mod senpai! Everything is already nice and polished! :3

00:18:768 (1,2) - Maybe you could make 1 with the red point and 2 just a casual curve, as 1 is the one to enphasize.
01:14:812 (1,2,1) - I like jumps but I don't think this requires any enphasis here.
01:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - LoL Cool! Didn't noticed it was the guitar sound c:
02:11:885 (6) - NC maybe?
03:36:471 (5,6,7,1) - I think this slider is a bit too spaced but tbh I don't know any way to change it unless you change spacing, but if so it would fit the map's spacing SO IDK :C (or you could just add 4 circles before the stream next to it xd)


I hope you could get something helpful from here C:

I wish you the best for this!
Good luck! :3

EDIT 3h later :3 :
You could change diff name to some of these:

Revenge
Justice
Destiny
Fate
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CutEddie wrote:

Just a short mod senpai! Everything is already nice and polished! :3

00:18:768 (1,2) - Maybe you could make 1 with the red point and 2 just a casual curve, as 1 is the one to enphasize. I'd rather keep it how I have it currently~
01:14:812 (1,2,1) - I like jumps but I don't think this requires any enphasis here. This acts as a buildup into the streams. The jumps gradual increase in spacing.
01:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - LoL Cool! Didn't noticed it was the guitar sound c:
02:11:885 (6) - NC maybe? I believe even Yuii- wanted to point this out but the NC is treated the same as 02:30:617 (5,6) - which is okay.
I don't think it's needed, I don't like the look of it being NC'd.

03:36:471 (5,6,7,1) - I think this slider is a bit too spaced but tbh I don't know any way to change it unless you change spacing, but if so it would fit the map's spacing SO IDK :C (or you could just add 4 circles before the stream next to it xd) This should be okay too..
Thanks for the mod anyways~
As for the diff name, it's thematic with the background
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For other instances of where similar sounds occur and the streams stay consistent you can look at 01:12:764 (1) - and 03:50:812 (1)
I don't disagree with you, but i believe that this pattern in Crimson Rebellion 01:12:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) is another example of an eerie similarity to monstrata's version as seen 01:04:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). I know I invalidate my own point because these streams are mapped on entirely different sounds, but i still think this should have some more consideration before potential rank.



Although this is just a generic pattern and one could argue that this isn't a result of "ctrl c ctrl v", the patterns are way too comparable to monstrata's: 02:03:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

02:51:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Nothing inherently wrong here, I just appreciate the fact that you decided to change the pattern out of similarity. I'd also like to commend this pattern too, for the sake of variation in the maps 01:04:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). it's also pretty nice

03:47:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I understand that this strictly isn't a copy paste, however the blatant similarities are evident. don't get me wrong, I don't want you to change this pattern but I have a feeling that this may be another reason for this map to get dq'd due to the similarities.

04:02:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this needs to change lol. if you're going to argue that these patterns are coincidental, you at least have to credit monstrata for inspiration or something along the lines of that.

04:11:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - if there comes a time where you have to change this pattern due to plagiarism, i would recommend using ctrl h (and some rotational adjustment) on 04:11:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6), it flows nicely and keeps the style of rhythm you're using. another benefit of doing this is that it contrasts from this pattern 04:13:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1)

04:38:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This may come up as an issue previously stated. I'm a fan of the pattern you're using, but it's just far too similar (ctrl h ctrl j).



imo this map would be ready for qualification when these issues are met with.
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Thanks for the post, I'm glad it can help me improve the quality of my map.
See you in ranked soon :)

P.S. Comments regarding plagiarism has already been dealt with. Monstrata and I have settled a long time ago.
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As always, these maps need to get done via voice chat
We changed some stuff, we discussed other stuff for clarification (in case a Miracle happens :eyes:)

2017-07-02 21:35 Kroytz: hi Yuii!!
2017-07-02 21:37 Yuii-: 00:01:091 -
2017-07-02 21:40 Yuii-: 00:20:378 (3) -
2017-07-02 21:41 Kroytz: 00:19:646 (3) -
2017-07-02 21:42 Yuii-: 00:21:694 (3) -
2017-07-02 21:42 Kroytz: 00:21:694 (3) -
2017-07-02 21:43 Yuii-: 00:30:474 (1,2,3) -
2017-07-02 21:43 Yuii-: 00:35:163 (1) -
2017-07-02 21:46 Yuii-: 00:41:600 (1,1) -
2017-07-02 21:47 Kroytz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496553
2017-07-02 21:48 Yuii-: 00:42:325 (1) -
2017-07-02 21:51 Yuii-: 01:01:495 (3,4) -
2017-07-02 21:53 Yuii-: 01:10:422 (1,2) -
2017-07-02 21:54 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/Tc6pSvM.jpg
2017-07-02 21:58 Yuii-: 01:18:983 -
2017-07-02 22:00 Kroytz: 01:16:276 (1) -
2017-07-02 22:02 Yuii-: 01:24:910 (7,8,1,2) -
2017-07-02 22:10 Kroytz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496675
2017-07-02 22:13 Yuii-: 01:27:983 (1,2) -
2017-07-02 22:13 Yuii-: 01:25:642 (1,2) -
2017-07-02 22:16 Yuii-: 01:44:373 -
2017-07-02 22:17 Yuii-: 01:49:349 (1,2) -
2017-07-02 22:18 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/KUPr4XF.jpg
2017-07-02 22:19 Yuii-: 332 104
2017-07-02 22:20 Kroytz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496718
2017-07-02 22:22 Yuii-: 01:51:398 (1,2) - 01:52:129 (1) -
2017-07-02 22:23 Yuii-: 01:44:081 (5,1) -
2017-07-02 22:24 Yuii-: 01:53:446 (1,1) -
2017-07-02 22:31 Yuii-: 02:00:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
2017-07-02 22:32 Yuii-: 02:08:227 (3,4,5) -
2017-07-02 22:32 Yuii-: 02:15:398 (3,4,5,6) -
2017-07-02 22:32 Yuii-: 02:23:812 (12,13) -
2017-07-02 22:32 Yuii-: 02:31:203 (1,3) -
2017-07-02 22:33 Yuii-: 02:37:055 (1) - ¿
2017-07-02 22:33 Yuii-: 02:38:812 -
2017-07-02 22:34 Yuii-: 02:47:593 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2017-07-02 22:34 Yuii-: 03:01:642 - st
2017-07-02 22:35 Yuii-: 03:11:007 - +%c
2017-07-02 22:36 Yuii-: 03:20:520 (2,3) - r
2017-07-02 22:41 Kroytz: 02:09:837 (5,6,7) -
2017-07-02 22:41 Yuii-: 02:08:081 (2) - 216 384
2017-07-02 22:42 Kroytz: https://puu.sh/wAaqB/cb039178d1.jpg
2017-07-02 22:45 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/pPkCmPl.jpg
2017-07-02 22:48 Yuii-: 02:24:178 (1,3) - 02:26:520 (1,3) -
2017-07-02 22:49 Yuii-: 02:30:910 (6) -
2017-07-02 22:50 Kroytz: 02:12:178 (10) -
2017-07-02 22:50 Yuii-: 02:11:885 (6) -
2017-07-02 22:53 Yuii-: 02:47:959 -
2017-07-02 22:56 Yuii-: 03:01:055 (4,5,6,7) -
2017-07-02 23:00 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/GxMlH1N.jpg
2017-07-02 23:02 Yuii-: 03:07:568 - 40%
2017-07-02 23:03 Yuii-: 03:08:666 -
2017-07-02 23:07 Yuii-: 03:53:154 (1,2) -
2017-07-02 23:10 Kroytz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496949
2017-07-02 23:10 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/1k6lurs.jpg
2017-07-02 23:12 Yuii-: 04:11:520 (4) -
2017-07-02 23:14 Yuii-: 04:21:251 -
2017-07-02 23:15 Yuii-: 04:26:373 (2,3) - w
2017-07-02 23:15 Yuii-: 04:27:690 (4) -
2017-07-02 23:15 Yuii-: 04:32:081 (2) -
2017-07-02 23:18 Yuii-: http://i.imgur.com/nZHVjrq.jpg
2017-07-02 23:20 Kroytz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496986
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A-L-I-E-N... you are next

congrats, kroytz!!
i only took 2 months, that isn't that much, right? gowo has to wait a whole year sometimes 8-)
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he's just a kroytz and he's on fire
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nice nice
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YAY congratz ></
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xC
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gratz
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Congrats Kroytz!
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gz Kroytz!

can't wait to see the nutty scores
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Taki vs Mitsuha


Monstrata vs Kroytz
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Road of x1 Misses
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