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Weber
1,254 posts
Joined May 2015
Weber
just a few concerns

Easy

00:20:148 (2) - Distance Snap here isn't correct. Otherwise, really solid easy difficulty.

Space's Hard

00:34:536 (1) - The last sound in the music is where this slider starts, there isn't really a valid reason for this to be a slider instead of a hitcircle from what I can see. (Or you could just extend the last buzz slider by one repeat)

OKO YOUR DIFF IS PERFECT AND I LOVE IT

Good luck!
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen

Okorin wrote:

that's not how you answer mods and concerns from other members of the community

Shmiklak wrote:

osu file format v14

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SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Nyanko is LOVE!
TitleUnicode:にゃんこ is L♥VE !
Artist:every-ing!
ArtistUnicode:every❤ing!
Creator:-Tatsuo
Version:Shmik's Normal
Source:にゃんこデイズ
Tags:cat neko anime 2017 Nyanko Days Owens Shmiklak -Space- Okoratu Okorin
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https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Code_of_Conduct ... g_to_a_Mod
Last edited by Rizen , edited 1 time in total.
laura-
443 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
laura-

Weber wrote:

just a few concerns

Easy

00:20:148 (2) - Distance Snap here isn't correct. Otherwise, really solid easy difficulty. i made it smaller than the rest so the (noob) player understands the gap between the 2 objects isn't 1/2

Good luck! thank you!
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce

Rizen wrote:

Space's Hard
  1. 00:03:719 (3,4) - that percussion at that part is basically the same for all parts so giving this extra spacing compared to 00:03:107 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit well with the music I've went over too many times my reasoning for this jump. I will say it here last time and next time I just won't reply lol.
    I wanted to express something unique to the fact there is an extra part of the guitar part here, it's a really good part to buildup in the kiai and imo it works really well and I am really pleased with its output in terms of sharp angular flow.
  2. 00:15:352 (2) - 1/2 slider then circle seems to fit better, current slider kinad undermaps yeah I see what you mean here, I put a 1/2 slider and circle just like you said :)
  3. 00:27:393 - perhaps make a triplet here because of 8-bit sound and percussion? doesn't feel emphasised enough, plus it would feel as if i am mapping extremities which imo should be reserved for the higher diffs
  4. 00:27:597 (1,2) - kinda undermapped especially compared to 00:24:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6) added 1/2 notes to make it feel more involved :)

Yahuri wrote:

Space's Hard
00:03:107 (1,2,3) - the almost-but-not linear flow triggers me D: I got you my man, you pointing this out triggered me D:
00:05:454 - i think you should map this note instead of this one 00:05:658 (5) because 00:05:454 is stronger imo I see it the other way around, having a note on blue after the red tick would feel odd in contrast. Plus I feel this is more of a fade-in vocal.
00:08:719 - ^ 00:08:923 (5) ^
00:24:332 (1,5) - visual spacing is super close, space them out? I have -Space-'d them out :^)
00:30:046 (3) - rhythm choice is inconsistent with 00:30:862 (1) - 00:31:679 (3) made 1/2 :)

-Nya- wrote:

[notice]Space’s Hard:
  1. Check AiMod please. There are a few things there that should be fixed, like tags and the kiai should be snapped (preferably) blame noobsuo tags were fine for me tho? :P
  2. 00:03:107 (1,2) –Not the best flow tbh since the (1) is a straight slider and goes to the left while the (2) goes the opposite direction making the flow a bit awkward. I guess the current placement can work, but consider changing the shape of (1) to make the flow better. Perhaps something like this:
    Picture
    Either the one above or you can try making a blanket with (1) and (2). I just think a curved slider will fit in better. Yes, I totally agree and I love the idea of a curved blanket, I retained a tiny jump ..and can see the swarms of angry modders bcs apparently i need to make my map boring
  3. 00:13:923 (4) –Rather Ctrl+G this slider. It flows better. ^^ <3
  4. 00:15:352 (2) –Hmm, I’m not quite sure what you tried to follow here. The vocals can be heard right in the middle of the slider and you did follow them mostly throughout the kiai so it’s a bit weird not to follow them now. Rather try to remain consistent. So something like this:
    Picture
    did a change in the previous mod, would've changed here tho :)
  5. 00:17:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –This section is rather upbeat but with the way you mapped it that doesn’t really come through. You also left out the beats that can be heard here: 00:18:821 -00:19:230 – etc. I think something that would make this section pop is probably more circles to punctuate the strong beats better. I wanted to map the vocals here and the rhythm change ramp down feels like something that would make players need to rethink their note hitting which will make aim much more rewarding whilst being more difficult to achieve accurately.
    Picture
    I only mapped out the first combo to show you what I mean. There are lots more beats in the background that you can work with to make the pattern more interesting.
  6. 00:34:536 (1) –Consider silencing the tail of this slider completely (5%) since the music dies away. :^)
[/list][/list]

Weber wrote:

Space's Hard

00:34:536 (1) - The last sound in the music is where this slider starts, there isn't really a valid reason for this to be a slider instead of a hitcircle from what I can see. (Or you could just extend the last buzz slider by one repeat) Listening on 25% you can hear a dying vocal which I want to involve in this fade-out slider, you know something unique other than the many cases of spinner fade-out
Thanks for the mods <3

Space's Hard
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TitleUnicode:にゃんこ is L♥VE !
Artist:every-ing!
ArtistUnicode:every❤ing!
Creator:-Tatsuo
Version:Space's Hard
Source:にゃんこデイズ
Tags:cat neko anime 2017 Nyanko Days Owens Shmiklak -Space- Okoratu Okorin
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Shmiklak
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Shmiklak

Okorin wrote:

that's not how you answer mods and concerns from other members of the community
I've mostly remapped the diff so the mods didn't help me. I don't think that I should answer for something if it doesn't exist in the map.
Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens

Yahuri wrote:

from meme, nyan
i can't mod the Extra diffs well cuz not used to the style

Owen's Extra
-if you want to make a blanket-heavy diff, please make sure theyre clean :o
00:04:944 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:08:209 (4,5) - ^
00:11:678 (3,4) - ^
00:21:066 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:23:005 (2,4) - ^

all fixed thanks good luck, nyan~
post 666 lol
Update
https://puu.sh/vHVEU/5f188a80cf.osu
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,912 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
we should totally map the full ver of this because it just sings What is love? in engrish basically
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce

Okorin wrote:

we should totally map the full ver of this because it just sings What is love? in engrish basically

rip quality 0 second pp map tho e.e

Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
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Nozhomi

Okorin wrote:

we should totally map the full ver of this because it just sings What is love? in engrish basically
totally want be part of that if it happens XD
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
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Okoratu
i have no idea what space is talking about
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Also hi

[Easy :]
  1. 00:20:148 (2) - Start on a blue tic is just not acceptable on an Easy. You shoud do it like 00:17:801 (1,1) - since it cover the same type of rhythm you did on them.
  2. 00:30:046 - Imo not having this beat sounds bad, and also weird since you make it clickable for 00:30:862 (1) - . Suggest you this https://puu.sh/vM4eo/e030348757.png .
[Shmik's Normal :]
  1. 00:20:250 (4) - Unsnaped. The "nyaaaaaa" start on 00:20:352 - and would make the rhythm feels way less akward here.
  2. 00:21:883 - There's nothing to emphase here. Also missing 00:22:291 - is a critical mistake.
[Space's Hard :]
  1. 00:05:556 (4,5,6) - This triplet sounds super off because it don't fit correctly vocal when it the main element of the song. I suggest you something like this who could fit more that and make your rhythm sounds less off the song https://puu.sh/vM7nL/150374c9d0.png . Same for 00:08:821 (4,5,6) - / 00:12:087 (3,4,5) - .
  2. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - For this one I suggest you more this https://puu.sh/vM7E7/7f25788f01.png .
  3. 00:18:821 - What about to make it clickable for the nyanya ?
  4. 00:19:842 (2) - Maybe extend it to 00:20:352 - for the nya ? See if you like it.
  5. 00:21:474 (2) - Stop it at 00:21:679 - , it would be better than stop it in the middle of nowhere.
[Insane :]
  1. 00:04:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo section like this don't work with your current rhythm. If you really want to focus more on vocal since it's the main element of the song, I suggest you more smth like this who sounds not off as your https://puu.sh/vM65s/3138075d28.png . Do it for 00:06:372 - / 00:08:005 - ofc.
  2. 00:11:270 - and for this one maybe this rhythm https://puu.sh/vM6po/dd4811ab07.png ?
  3. 00:14:536 - Maybe two of these triplets could be changed for reverse sliders for diversity and build a bridge for diffspread between Hard and Extra.
  4. 00:23:923 - Suggest you to take a look again at your NCingn since it kinda make no sense. You should better put them on elements like 00:24:332 - / 00:25:964 - / 00:27:597 - / 00:29:230 - and remove other and 00:23:923 - too.
[Owens' Extra :]
  1. 00:07:597 (6,1) - I think you should change them for a 1/1 slider in order to put a sort of break for the player between these crazy speedy sliders. Would match more vocal, and would kinda be consistant with sliders like 00:06:780 (3) - who end on snare.
  2. Btw your NCing is inconsistant as fk between both kiai so do smth. If needed come ask me.
  3. 00:13:719 - The finish hitsound is out of the place and sounds like the beat is off.
  4. 00:30:046 - Why no circle here since you put one for other 00:30:863 (3,1,3,1) - ?
[oko's Nyan]
  1. Nyanko is love.
  2. 00:14:944 - The speedup here is probably the only thing I didn't understood because the music don't build any intensity, the drum remain at the same level, and vocal came at 00:15:556 - , seems a bit overdone I would say.
  3. 00:26:372 (3,4) - Swap them, it sounds retarded and waste a strong sound on 00:26:781 - who could be clicked. Also the slider would work much better for the word "is" than nothing z.
  4. 00:30:046 - A third stacked circle would make the entire next rhythm sounds much better yu know. Or change 00:29:842 (4) - for a slider to make it play passive like all your heart sliders.


Mukyu~
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
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Shmiklak

Nozhomi wrote:

Also hi

[Shmik's Normal :]
  1. 00:20:250 (4) - Unsnaped. The "nyaaaaaa" start on 00:20:352 - and would make the rhythm feels way less akward here.
  2. 00:21:883 - There's nothing to emphase here. Also missing 00:22:291 - is a critical mistake.


Mukyu~
i've done everything
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laura-
443 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
laura-

Nozhomi wrote:

Also hi

[Easy :]
  1. 00:20:148 (2) - Start on a blue tic is just not acceptable on an Easy. You shoud do it like 00:17:801 (1,1) - since it cover the same type of rhythm you did on them.
  2. 00:30:046 - Imo not having this beat sounds bad, and also weird since you make it clickable for 00:30:862 (1) - . Suggest you this https://puu.sh/vM4eo/e030348757.png .


[Insane :]
  1. 00:04:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo section like this don't work with your current rhythm. If you really want to focus more on vocal since it's the main element of the song, I suggest you more smth like this who sounds not off as your https://puu.sh/vM65s/3138075d28.png . Do it for 00:06:372 - / 00:08:005 - ofc.
  2. 00:11:270 - and for this one maybe this rhythm https://puu.sh/vM6po/dd4811ab07.png ?
  3. 00:14:536 - Maybe two of these triplets could be changed for reverse sliders for diversity and build a bridge for diffspread between Hard and Extra.
  4. 00:23:923 - Suggest you to take a look again at your NCingn since it kinda make no sense. You should better put them on elements like 00:24:332 - / 00:25:964 - / 00:27:597 - / 00:29:230 - and remove other and 00:23:923 - too.




fixed everything thank you for the mod everything is so much better owo <3

Mukyu~
bubble me plz
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce

Nozhomi wrote:

Also hi

[Space's Hard :]
  1. 00:05:556 (4,5,6) - This triplet sounds super off because it don't fit correctly vocal when it the main element of the song. I suggest you something like this who could fit more that and make your rhythm sounds less off the song https://puu.sh/vM7nL/150374c9d0.png . Same for 00:08:821 (4,5,6) - / 00:12:087 (3,4,5) - . I feel they play fine, I don't hear much emphasis on the vocals on 25% and I have testplayed it multiple times and it plays fine for me.
  2. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - For this one I suggest you more this https://puu.sh/vM7E7/7f25788f01.png . Okay added this, also removed some 1/45 in the process for consistency.
  3. 00:18:821 - What about to make it clickable for the nyanya ? ^^
  4. 00:19:842 (2) - Maybe extend it to 00:20:352 - for the nya ? See if you like it. Nah, feels too empty. The slider kind of drags on / feels forced.
  5. 00:21:474 (2) - Stop it at 00:21:679 - , it would be better than stop it in the middle of nowhere. Alright! :)

Mukyu~
Thank you for the mod :D

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Spayyce
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Spayyce

Okorin wrote:

i have no idea what space is talking about
short map is where the pp is at

>.>
Nozhomi
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Nozhomi
pp is zzz

-Tatsuo wrote:

bubble me plz
Blame your GDers who don't answer :D


Also why put a finish hitsound on 00:08:719 - and 00:13:719 - ?
And on Owens diff, could you not silence sliders ? I suggest you to take example on how okorin handle them.
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Owens
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Owens

Nozhomi wrote:

Also hi


[Owens' Extra :]
  1. 00:07:597 (6,1) - I think you should change them for a 1/1 slider in order to put a sort of break for the player between these crazy speedy sliders. Would match more vocal, and would kinda be consistant with sliders like 00:06:780 (3) - who end on snare. i tried but i really prefer this way :/
  2. Btw your NCing is inconsistant as fk between both kiai so do smth. If needed come ask me. fixed
  3. 00:13:719 - The finish hitsound is out of the place and sounds like the beat is off. hs not by me :<
  4. 00:30:046 - Why no circle here since you put one for other 00:30:863 (3,1,3,1) - ?True, changed :p
thx for mod noz

Mukyu~
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Nozhomi wrote:

Also hi

[oko's Nyan]
  1. Nyanko is love. :]
  2. 00:14:944 - The speedup here is probably the only thing I didn't understood because the music don't build any intensity, the drum remain at the same level, and vocal came at 00:15:556 - , seems a bit overdone I would say. i think the whole thing is building up towards 00:16:168 - , especially the melody is in my opinion doing that
  3. 00:26:372 (3,4) - Swap them, it sounds retarded and waste a strong sound on 00:26:781 - who could be clicked. Also the slider would work much better for the word "is" than nothing z. but i mapped the dumb melody shit the whole time 00:24:944 (4) - 00:26:577 (4) - 00:28:209 (4) - o__o
    like
  4. 00:30:046 - A third stacked circle would make the entire next rhythm sounds much better yu know. Or change 00:29:842 (4) - for a slider to make it play passive like all your heart sliders. a pause separates both rhythm and highlights that theyre different, just mixing one layer in seems counter-intuitive to me


Mukyu~
laura-
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Nozhomi wrote:

Also why put a finish hitsound on 00:08:719 - and 00:13:719 - ? there's a sound in the background that gets higher +
its good for build-up. all finish hitsounds are on such a sound so it fits the song good in my opinion
And on Owens diff, could you not silence sliders ? I suggest you to take example on how okorin handle them. copied oko's hitsounds on owens' request owo
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what are we waiting for?
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nozhomi
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well, then is possible other set on this song XD!!
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Kotori-Chan
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Hello there ~

Just a little thing, what about adding everying to the tags ?
Since the beatmap search deletes - and other "special" stuff its kinda hard to find that map, i just copy pasted the title and nope cant find it :(
The map does show up if you type nyanko is love but not if you type the whole title or every-ing!
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ok
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more than a month :thinking:
Nozhomi
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wew hey I'm back for the check again \o/

Your bg is nsfw be careful.

K seriously now, remove normal-hitfinish3[1].wav thx.

[Owen's cat :]
  1. 00:06:576 (2,3,4) - Could be nerfed a bit since these are super jumpy and slider leniency make them edgy to play so ye.
  2. 00:14:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are the only one done with a reduced spacing, so I would like to see other like these one, since spaced triplet like that are a bit overkill here. Or if you plan to keep them, do that progressively.
[Insane cat :]
  1. 00:07:291 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm don't fit the music imo. Vocal makes a strong beat in the middle of it but you keep the same pace with that. Imo you should or remove 00:07:495 (7) - to create more impact on 00:07:597 - , or doing 00:07:393 (6,7) - a kick slider.
  2. 00:16:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - These triplet patterns don't feel like they have a real structure between them. Also flow is really questionnable between 00:16:372 (3,4) - and 00:17:189 (3,4) - .
  3. 00:22:699 (1) - Could you do that slider with a bit more coherence and structure with 00:22:291 (4) - ? Like for example http://puu.sh/wTVJT/9e4cef4e6b.png .
  4. 00:21:985 (1) - If you really want to make that beat playable, you should make 00:21:883 - same, because both beats cover same instrument.
[Space's Hard cat :]
  1. Will continue tomorrow I'm too tired lol Hi it's tomorrow yay.
  2. 00:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - Intensity is constant so spacing should be, would be acceptable for an Insane but not for a Hard diff.
  3. So a lot of your rhythm you use don't really work with the music. Stuff like 00:05:556 (4,5,6) - / 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - / etc don't follow the most obvious rhythm -> vocal. Let's take 00:05:352 - as example, smth like https://puu.sh/wUL0b/93f3885ab1.png who follow strong music elements sounds definitly better. Also for 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - smth like https://puu.sh/wUL30/305913920b.png is way better and suit more the song. Apply that to similar section on the diff.
  4. 00:18:209 (2) - / 00:19:842 (2) - End is unsnaped to the music, should be on the blue tic. Also 00:19:842 (2) - would be better if was a reverse who end at 00:20:454 - to fit background instrument.
  5. 00:21:066 - Suggest this https://puu.sh/wULwU/8aa89172fe.png to fit more the song overall.
  6. 00:24:128 (3,4,1) - Maybe stack them ? That's a bit too much imo for a Hard.
  7. 00:24:332 - This part is probably the biggest problem of the diff. You start following the drum, and then decide to ignore everything to fit vocal at 00:25:964 - , creating a huge inconsistency. Also following only drums on that less intense section imo makes it too dense. It would be a bit nice if you could ignore beat like 00:25:148 - to focus more on the instrument who is more dominant on that part. Fix that entire part pls (until 00:29:230 - ).
  8. 00:30:454 (4,1,2,3) - Perfect stacking them will just be pain to read for someone playing just Hard lvl diff. Unstack thx.
[Shmik's Normal cat :]
  1. M a r v o l l o's Normal thx.
  2. 00:21:883 (4) - Nothing start from that beat, so I strongly suggest you to do a 1/2 slider and start it from 00:22:087 - where there's a real sound to map.
[Easy cat :]
  1. 00:21:066 - Should be a clickable beat. Also the slider 00:20:250 (2) - starts on nothing really dominant since both strong sounds are on blue tics. So you could just do 3/1 sliders like this https://puu.sh/wUMln/dc1a4a25a9.png instead. Also NC 00:22:699 (2) - to be consistent with rest of your mapping.

Also already talked with oko about his diff and it's k.
Stay tuned~
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Spayyce
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Nozhomi wrote:

wew hey I'm back for the check again \o/

[notice]
[Space's Hard cat :]
  1. Will continue tomorrow I'm too tired lol Hi it's tomorrow yay. <3
  2. 00:03:107 (1,2,3,4) - Intensity is constant so spacing should be, would be acceptable for an Insane but not for a Hard diff. Jump is seriously negligable, I explained this about 10039220392039 times before XD
  3. So a lot of your rhythm you use don't really work with the music. Stuff like 00:05:556 (4,5,6) - / 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - / etc don't follow the most obvious rhythm -> vocal. Let's take 00:05:352 - as example, smth like https://puu.sh/wUL0b/93f3885ab1.png who follow strong music elements sounds definitly better. Also for 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - smth like https://puu.sh/wUL30/305913920b.png is way better and suit more the song. Apply that to similar section on the diff. I don't want to overcomplex the rhythm, since as you mentioned before: it's a hard. I believe the triplet does give the player a following with the vocals and infact works better with the vocals (at least when hearing it on 25%) so I will keep these.
  4. 00:18:209 (2) - / 00:19:842 (2) - End is unsnaped to the music, should be on the blue tic. Also 00:19:842 (2) - would be better if was a reverse who end at 00:20:454 - to fit background instrument. I made both of them a reverse for consistency, but you're right it sounds better on 1/4 :)
  5. 00:21:066 - Suggest this https://puu.sh/wULwU/8aa89172fe.png to fit more the song overall. wasn't what i was going for here, im following vocals + dont think that sound is enough to map for
  6. 00:24:128 (3,4,1) - Maybe stack them ? That's a bit too much imo for a Hard. if they cant read this i doubt their ability to play any diff over 2*
  7. 00:24:332 - This part is probably the biggest problem of the diff. You start following the drum, and then decide to ignore everything to fit vocal at 00:25:964 - , creating a huge inconsistency. Also following only drums on that less intense section imo makes it too dense. It would be a bit nice if you could ignore beat like 00:25:148 - to focus more on the instrument who is more dominant on that part. Fix that entire part pls (until 00:29:230 - ). okay i removed the note and then for consistency removed another at 00:28:413 .
  8. 00:30:454 (4,1,2,3) - Perfect stacking them will just be pain to read for someone playing just Hard lvl diff. Unstack thx. gotchu
Thanks for modding! <3

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Owens
167 posts
Joined March 2015
Owens

Nozhomi wrote:

wew hey I'm back for the check again \o/


[Owen's cat :]
  1. 00:06:576 (2,3,4) - Could be nerfed a bit since these are super jumpy and slider leniency make them edgy to play so ye. IS it really needed ? It doesnt look too much spaced to me since it's almost the same here 00:06:372 (1,2) - for example xD.
  2. 00:14:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These are the only one done with a reduced spacing, so I would like to see other like these one, since spaced triplet like that are a bit overkill here. Or if you plan to keep them, do that progressively.
it is actually done progressively


Also already talked with oko about his diff and it's k.
Stay tuned~
Spayyce
693 posts
Joined December 2013
Spayyce
soooooo...?
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,912 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
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@whoever has highest diff now you can have the Nyan i think i just improved mine while getting rid of a lot of SR...?

Ah, yes, tags conflict on my end locally but what do i know if that s the case for other diffs
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laura-
443 posts
Joined May 2015
Topic Starter
laura-

Nozhomi wrote:

wew hey I'm back for the check again \o/

Your bg is nsfw be careful. how is that nsfw

K seriously now, remove normal-hitfinish3[1].wav thx. ok


[Insane cat :]
  1. 00:07:291 (5,6,7,8) - This rhythm don't fit the music imo. Vocal makes a strong beat in the middle of it but you keep the same pace with that. Imo you should or remove 00:07:495 (7) - to create more impact on 00:07:597 - , or doing 00:07:393 (6,7) - a kick slider. ok i think its better now
  2. 00:16:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - These triplet patterns don't feel like they have a real structure between them. Also flow is really questionnable between 00:16:372 (3,4) - and 00:17:189 (3,4) - . tried out many patterns. i hope this is good.
  3. 00:22:699 (1) - Could you do that slider with a bit more coherence and structure with 00:22:291 (4) - ? Like for example http://puu.sh/wTVJT/9e4cef4e6b.png . i hope its fine that the slider ends on a loud sound
  4. 00:21:985 (1) - If you really want to make that beat playable, you should make 00:21:883 - same, because both beats cover same instrument. the sound is either so quiet that i dont hear it on max volume or it sounds different. it plays really weird with that extra circle and i dont think its needed
[Easy cat :]
  1. 00:21:066 - Should be a clickable beat. Also the slider 00:20:250 (2) - starts on nothing really dominant since both strong sounds are on blue tics. So you could just do 3/1 sliders like this https://puu.sh/wUMln/dc1a4a25a9.png instead. Also NC 00:22:699 (2) - to be consistent with rest of your mapping. should be all fixed

some answers may be vague because i already had 50% changed 2 months ago and couldnt remember everything.

Also already talked with oko about his diff and it's k.
Stay tuned~
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Owens
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Owens
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Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
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Okoratu
tbh i have no idea what's stopping you from updating my diff lol
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Shmiklak
gay
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Combo2 : 0,106,106
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laura-
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laura-
everything updated zzzz
Owens
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Owens
What are we waiting for smh
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