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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月7日 at 21:39:22

Artist: Shimamiya Eiko
Title: Naraku no Hana (TV Size)
Source: ひぐらしのなく頃に解
Tags: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai blood splat 07th expansion visual novel horror festival watanagashi rika furude hanyuu satoko houjou keiichi maebara rena ryugu mion sonozaki shion oyashimo opening Hikari Nadeshiko kanor
BPM: 109
Filesize: 12324kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.25 stars, 298 notes)
  2. Kanor's Hard (2.61 stars, 187 notes)
  3. Normal (1.7 stars, 133 notes)


Download: Shimamiya Eiko - Naraku no Hana (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal --- by me (Done)
Hard --- by Kanor (Done)
Light Insane --- by Regraz

好的,稳
Insane --- by me (Done)
posted
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 38756
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Naraku no Hana (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:奈落の花 (TV Size)
Artist:Shimamiya Eiko
ArtistUnicode:島みやえい子
Creator:[ Abhor ]
Version:Kanor's Hard
Source:ひぐらしのなく頃に解
Tags:Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Kai blood splat 07th expansion visual novel horror festival watanagashi rika furude hanyuu satoko houjou keiichi maebara rena ryugu mion sonozaki shion oyashimo opening
BeatmapID:1201340
BeatmapSetID:567176

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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先来占个沙发(post前还在求LI,Po完立刻找到人了
好曲子啊QWQ
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yo, per your req owo

General
  1. soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav are less than 100ms long, which is unrankable so far. You can read 'bout it here — click.
  2. Consider adding Hikari Nadeshiko to the tags as it's the name of the album, which containg this song.


Normal
  1. It makes no sense at all when the volume is the same for 00:00:223 (1) - / 00:01:048 (2) - and 00:01:874 (3) - , consider adding some greenpoints as you've done in Insane diff.
  2. 00:02:425 (4) - NC would look really good as there's an upbeat 00:02:425 (4) - and the new measure starts, and it's kinda big itself, ye.
  3. 00:07:379 - whistle looks here sorta out of the context, tbh. As there's nothing to emphasis beside vocal, which you ain't emphasized. 00:32:700 - well, ye, they look kinda random.
  4. 00:12:608 (4) - a big distance between the previous circle, so NC? 00:21:415 (4) - and others.
  5. 00:17:562 - no any kind of bell sound for placing a whistle. 00:26:370 - and so on.
  6. 00:43:709 - there's no such strong kick sound as here 00:48:113 - , so consider removing it, or replacing with whistle, instead. 01:01:324 - the same.
  7. 00:52:516 - missing a hitsound, is it? A whistle would fit perfectly.
  8. 00:52:516 (9,1) - this rhythm here goes kinda off, as there's dominant sound here 00:52:792 - and in that case it making this 00:53:067 - a bit less audible. Consider emphasis it.
  9. 01:05:452 - whistle, I guess.


Hard
  1. 00:01:874 (1) - the very last 1/2 of it sounds off. Since here 00:04:076 - , consider reducing the length.
  2. 00:35:177 (1,1) - well, isn't that recover time too short?
  3. You're using really awesome patterns here, but wouldn't it be better if some unaudible beats would be skipped, like this 00:48:801 - or 00:53:204 - . Variety, I mean.
    By the way, overmapping for the sake of visual view and pattern consistency isn't sorta welcomed in Hard diff, from my point of view.
  4. As I can see you're using the same hitsounding as for other two diffs, so the same suggestions as for Normal, I guess.


Insane
  1. 00:15:636 (3,4,5) - spacing here is kinda broken. Sound is the same intensity but spacing here 00:15:911 (4,5) - is much bigger than 00:15:636 (3,4) - , which is lack of emphasis.
  2. 00:44:535 (3,4) - triple isn't that audible for making it and isn't that audible for making spacing so big. 01:02:149 (3,4,5) - goes for this as well.
  3. Spacing emphasis lacks as well, from my point of view. It's really strange thing you're emphasizing this 00:40:957 (7) - more than 00:41:232 (8) - but this 00:41:232 (8) - is obviously stronger. 00:43:159 (7) - and 00:43:434 (8) - . 00:52:792 (1) - as it has a bigger intensity than overall map has, it would be logical make spacing bigger so far. This goes consistently throughout the diff so consider making something with it.
  4. Because of this double here 01:05:177 (7,8) - it's hard to hit these 01:05:452 (1,2,3,4) - . Consider replacing it with a slider.
  5. 01:10:131 (1) - 0.5x SV is too way low, it goes very sudden to react properly, imo. Maybe try 0.8x, it plays much better that way.
  6. 01:25:681 (8,1,2) - such an inconsistent pattern. I'd rather you didn't use it here. Consider using two sliders intead of 01:25:269 (7,8) - .
  7. 01:30:223 - strong beat and 01:30:498 - isn't really strong beat. In that case 01:30:223 - should be emphasized better, shouldn't it?
  8. Ye, hitsounds, you know. The same as for Normal and Hard.


Solid set but Insane needs some polishements, I guess.
Good luck.
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Namki wrote:

yo, per your req owo

General
  1. soft-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide2.wav are less than 100ms long, which is unrankable so far. You can read 'bout it here — click.
  2. Consider adding Hikari Nadeshiko to the tags as it's the name of the album, which containg this song.OK,i will fix these soon~~~


Normal
  1. It makes no sense at all when the volume is the same for 00:00:223 (1) - / 00:01:048 (2) - and 00:01:874 (3) - , consider adding some greenpoints as you've done in Insane diff.ok
  2. 00:02:425 (4) - NC would look really good as there's an upbeat 00:02:425 (4) - and the new measure starts, and it's kinda big itself, ye.I NCed on each of the two big white line
  3. 00:07:379 - whistle looks here sorta out of the context, tbh. As there's nothing to emphasis beside vocal, which you ain't emphasized. 00:32:700 - well, ye, they look kinda random.ok,delete~~
  4. 00:12:608 (4) - a big distance between the previous circle, so NC? 00:21:415 (4) - and others.↑↑
  5. 00:17:562 - no any kind of bell sound for placing a whistle. 00:26:370 - and so on.i think it's ok for me
  6. 00:43:709 - there's no such strong kick sound as here 00:48:113 - , so consider removing it, or replacing with whistle, instead. 01:01:324 - the same.changed to use whistle since there are strong vocals which is sound better than drum
  7. 00:52:516 - missing a hitsound, is it? A whistle would fit perfectly.ok
  8. 00:52:516 (9,1) - this rhythm here goes kinda off, as there's dominant sound here 00:52:792 - and in that case it making this 00:53:067 - a bit less audible. Consider emphasis it. i low down the volum
  9. 01:05:452 - whistle, I guess.


Insane
  1. 00:15:636 (3,4,5) - spacing here is kinda broken. Sound is the same intensity but spacing here 00:15:911 (4,5) - is much bigger than 00:15:636 (3,4) - , which is lack of emphasis.fixed
  2. 00:44:535 (3,4) - triple isn't that audible for making it and isn't that audible for making spacing so big. 01:02:149 (3,4,5) - goes for this as well.i think it's fine,they are playable and not hard
  3. Spacing emphasis lacks as well, from my point of view. It's really strange thing you're emphasizing this 00:40:957 (7) - more than 00:41:232 (8) - but this 00:41:232 (8) - is obviously stronger. 00:43:159 (7) - and 00:43:434 (8) - . 00:52:792 (1) - as it has a bigger intensity than overall map has, it would be logical make spacing bigger so far. This goes consistently throughout the diff so consider making something with it.you said right~~i missed those downbeats,fixed. 00:43:159 (7) - but here has a strong vocal and the pitch is obviously rised so i keep this place
  4. Because of this double here 01:05:177 (7,8) - it's hard to hit these 01:05:452 (1,2,3,4) - . Consider replacing it with a slider.fixed
  5. 01:10:131 (1) - 0.5x SV is too way low, it goes very sudden to react properly, imo. Maybe try 0.8x, it plays much better that way.fixed
  6. 01:25:681 (8,1,2) - such an inconsistent pattern. I'd rather you didn't use it here. Consider using two sliders intead of 01:25:269 (7,8) - .it's not really hard to play and i think it's fit the music
  7. 01:30:223 - strong beat and 01:30:498 - isn't really strong beat. In that case 01:30:223 - should be emphasized better, shouldn't it?ok
  8. Ye, hitsounds, you know. The same as for Normal and Hard.


Solid set but Insane needs some polishements, I guess.
Good luck.
Many of your advices are useful to me,thanks for mod!!
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水一下~

Normal

  1. nothing

Kanor's Hard

  1. 00:19:214 (3) - 换一个圈或者尾巴5%
  2. 00:28:021 (3,4) - 建议这两个先把圈放去x:55 y:136的位置,再把滑条叠上去,不然打起来的堆叠效果会显得很丑

Insane

  1. 00:07:654 - 这个地方插个5%吧,有声音感觉怪怪的
  2. 01:33:525 - 最后滑条可以切一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7259128
posted
寒蝉!
很棒
posted

Karen wrote:

寒蝉!
很棒
扑通
posted

[ Abhor ] wrote:

Karen wrote:

寒蝉!
很棒
扑通
posted

Namki wrote:

yo, per your req owo


Hard
  1. 00:01:874 (1) - the very last 1/2 of it sounds off. Since here 00:04:076 - , consider reducing the length. if i used the spinner here ,i only can choose one stop here betwween 00:01:874 and 00:04:076, if i use 00:04:076, 00:04:351 - here would be suddern
  2. 00:35:177 (1,1) - well, isn't that recover time too short? try to fixed it
  3. You're using really awesome patterns here, but wouldn't it be better if some unaudible beats would be skipped, like this 00:48:801 - or 00:53:204 - . Variety, I mean.
    By the way, overmapping for the sake of visual view and pattern consistency isn't sorta welcomed in Hard diff, from my point of view.
  4. As I can see you're using the same hitsounding as for other two diffs, so the same suggestions as for Normal, I guess.

cause overmap would be more comfortable in a hard diff than the main mapping style, whcih would be too hard in a hard diff for palyers as it was a qiang shuang tu but i would try my best to make it better

Good luck.

Kanor's Hard

  1. 00:19:214 (3) - 换一个圈或者尾巴5% 好
  2. 00:28:021 (3,4) - 建议这两个先把圈放去x:55 y:136的位置,再把滑条叠上去,不然打起来的堆叠效果会显得很丑
OK
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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

水一下~

Normal

  1. nothing

Insane

  1. 00:07:654 - 这个地方插个5%吧,有声音感觉怪怪的插了!插了听到没有!我插了!不小心就开黄腔← ←
  2. 01:33:525 - 最后滑条可以切一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7259128
我要善良,最后来一下感觉会坑到人
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这摸会水大佬如果有什么不满小弟随时愿意被打蟹蟹。
哥哥你这歌后边突然就没了0.0

Normal


首先先说句吧,我觉得normal不必要去太刻意扭滑条,即使滑条漂亮,非00:37:379 (5) - 这样的音我觉得尽量不要去刻意扭。
  1. 00:48:113 (1) - 这滑条中间可是大白线诶,有重音
  2. 感觉00:46:324 - 到00:47:149 - 只有个note,我觉得这里能用滑条带过。

Kanor's Hard

  1. 00:48:113 (9,1) - 稍微摆开点吧
  2. 00:48:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你这堆overlap,其实可以的话跟前面一样吧,感觉太挤了
  3. 00:48:938 (3,1) - overlap

Insane

  1. 00:01:186 (2,3) - 用回跟00:01:048 (1,2) - 一样的间距,然后00:01:324 (3) - 摆好点吧
  2. 00:04:351 (1) - 这滑条扭得一点意义都没有
  3. 00:08:755 (2,3) - 这歌前半部分节奏都比较弱,可以避免就避免这种跳。
  4. 00:13:159 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:16:186 (5) - 跟00:15:360 (2) - stack
寒蝉的歌都好听啊 病娇什么的最喜欢了
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[quote="Suzuki_1112"]这摸会水大佬如果有什么不满小弟随时愿意被打蟹蟹。
小霸王服务器,卡的分身了。。
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Suzuki_1112 wrote:

这摸会水大佬如果有什么不满小弟随时愿意被打蟹蟹。这么可爱,一定要打爆(╯‵□′)╯
哥哥你这歌后边突然就没了0.0TV就这么短啊0 0我不是哥哥啊

Normal


首先先说句吧,我觉得normal不必要去太刻意扭滑条,即使滑条漂亮,非00:37:379 (5) - 这样的音我觉得尽量不要去刻意扭。呐~~既然你也觉得漂亮了,前奏这么空我一直用很普通的滑条就显得很无聊了,再第二点NORMAL的滑条我都是顺着FLOW来的,也都是很顺的轨迹,这个对打图效果一点影响都没有,更何况这个BPM才109
  1. 00:48:113 (1) - 这滑条中间可是大白线诶,有重音
我知道这里有重音,但是很明显我这里对的是人声,我试过了,这里对人声比强行对鼓点打着舒服,听着也舒服,而且我这里点击地方用的是WHISTLE而不是FINISH,也是表示我这里不是对的鼓点,而且副歌前后两段我节奏都是这么做的
感觉00:46:324 - 到00:47:149 - 只有个note,我觉得这里能用滑条带过。
这里停顿感我觉得挺好的,前后两段相同位置我都是这样做的,这里人声比其他地方平淡了许多了,从头到尾塞满我不喜欢

Insane

  1. 00:01:186 (2,3) - 用回跟00:01:048 (1,2) - 一样的间距,然后00:01:324 (3) - 摆好点吧
我这里都开了绿线逐渐降低音量了,我觉得逐渐缩小间距挺适合的,稍微调整了一下目距
00:04:351 (1) - 这滑条扭得一点意义都没有具体原因这个跟NORMAL差不多的=W=什么叫有意义的呢,我前奏风格就是想稍微扭一下滑条,没变速,没几把FLOW,找人试图也没有觉得前奏难得
00:08:755 (2,3) - 这歌前半部分节奏都比较弱,可以避免就避免这种跳。行,改了
00:13:159 (1,2) - ^
00:16:186 (5) - 跟00:15:360 (2) - stack不想叠QWQ
寒蝉的歌都好听啊 病娇什么的最喜欢了
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insane

00:02:149 (3) - change to circle
00:04:351 (1) - change this
00:15:911 (4) - move farther
00:22:516 (2) - move closer to slider end
00:57:195 (1) - maybe delete 5 and add a triplet on this slider?
01:17:287 (3,4) - move closer to 5

kanor's hard


00:10:406 (4) - looks weird, move
00:19:214 (3) - make circle
00:23:892 (1) - stack a little better than that :/
00:24:718 (3) - ^^
00:42:195 (2,3) - flip

good map, im not good at modding normals
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Pickkle wrote:

insane

00:02:149 (3) - change to circlei think it's fine and consistent
00:04:351 (1) - change this why?
00:15:911 (4) - move farther
00:22:516 (2) - move closer to slider end
00:57:195 (1) - maybe delete 5 and add a triplet on this slider?00:39:581 (1) - i think it's same as this one,so no
01:17:287 (3,4) - move closer to 55 has a downbeat so make a jump here~~


good map, im not good at modding normals
Thanks for mod~~
posted
yeye寒蝉 支持一下
posted

Misure wrote:

yeye寒蝉 支持一下
谢谢前辈支持=W=
posted
Hi there!

00:04:351 (1,2) - you can improve this place by moving slider back to the red tick, and make a double on the red and blue, this would be much easier to read.
00:09:305 (3) - In this place you missing the sound "mi" on the blue tick, you can change (3) into the slider.
00:09:581 (4,5) - missing the tick again, if you want the slider to lose this part of voice, you can add the circle to the blue tick.
00:17:562 (1,2) - ^
00:28:021 (3,1) - ^
00:18:388 (3,4) - ^
00:37:379 (1) - as the player, you would expect this slider to be faster, but its slow. :thinking:
00:15:636 (3,4) - I would doesn't change the spacing in this place, as the voice doesn't really change here.
00:26:094 (7,1) - forgetting about the tick again, advice, to put the double or change into a slider.


gl in a further mapping!
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