- Kiai at 01:11:624 - and 01:42:592 - are not necessary since it's kinda the same than 00:28:269 - who is not a kiai. Also imo that's too much kiai parts anyway.
- I think volume at 60% would be better from that point 00:12:786 - they're really quiet atm.
- 00:36:011 - You forget Whistle + Normal addition.
- 00:43:366 - Shouldn't be a clap and not drum hitsound ?
- Seems you copied hitsound on diffs, but it appears than your whistles on kiai sound now totally random, so it would be nice to change them to reflect more the diff :>
- 00:45:302 (3) - I just wonder why you did a 2/1 slider here and not at 00:43:753 - like you did for 00:40:657 (1) - .
- Also I agree about BetaStar rhythms suggestions.
- I think it would be nice if you could do all your 1/2 things like 00:03:302 (6,1) - and not swap hasardly with stuff like 00:25:947 (2,3) - just for gain some clarity.
- 00:40:463 - Why a whistle here and not at 00:46:657 - ?
- 00:02:334 (2,4) - Could you not do such bad overlap for the sake of readability ?
- 00:12:786 (1,3) - ^
- 00:14:721 (2,3,4) - It's clear than you was stuck in that corner and decided to put stack on the side of the slider, but that's quite a bad move when all other like this one (00:24:011 (2,3,4) - for example) have a much better flow by following the sliders movement.
- 00:29:044 (3,4,5) - Also do the stack like other you did, same example than above. Same for 01:12:398 (3,4,5) - / 01:43:366 (3,4,5) -
- 00:38:915 (1,2) - So you did some okay overlaps like 00:36:398 (2,4) - but this one is just super bad esthetically.
- Ask Chaos to arrange a bit hitsounds on kiai with these whistles who sounds inconsistent like in Easy.
- 00:00:302 (1) - Seems absolutly not necessary and super hard for a map start. The slider is enough to cover guitar sound.
- 00:57:495 (7,1) - Imo the jump don't work here because strong beats are on 00:57:495 (7,2) - and not 00:57:689 (1) - , so could be nice to change that in order to fit more the music.
- 01:23:431 (5,6) - Could be nice to CTRL+G them in order to get vocal clickable on 01:23:818 - and a slider would work nicely on vocal here 01:23:431 - .
- 01:33:689 (2,3) - Why spacing is suddenly so low ?
- 00:00:302 (1) - Same as Insane.
- 01:05:334 (7) - Can you move it to 131:112 ? That would do a better straight triplet.
- 01:02:237 - Place a circle here or remove 01:20:818 (5) - and 01:33:205 (8) - .
- 01:02:528 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why doing this one with a stream and next totally differently with 01:20:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ?
- Would maybe be nice to differentiate stacks on sliders end between these who are 1/2 and 1/4 rhythm.
- Also last important point, I think rhythmic patterns like 00:28:269 (1,2,1,2,3) - should be like this https://puu.sh/vSgzc/85bc7eb5c4.png to avoid the kind of break created by the circle after played the slider. And since 00:28:560 (2,1,2,3) - are mapping the same instrument, it would be more coherent to have them on the same stream and not splitted. Hope you understand imo that would improve a lot the playability too.
Mukyu~