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- 01:00:306 (1,2,3,4) - wow it isnt consistent with 01:00:806 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:306 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:806 (1,2,3,4) - , if you did that because sound at 01:00:306 (1) - is different than 01:00:431 (2,3,4) - i would counter argue by saying so is 01:00:806 (1) - and 01:00:931 (2,3,4) - are different tbh
- 01:14:306 - note kds plz
- 01:23:056 (13) - since there is a spacing change imo put a nc (also imo put nc on every spacing changes if there are more)
- 01:27:181 (7,11) - ^
- 01:30:806 (1,5,9) - ^
- 01:23:493 (4,2) - im triggrd please equal spacing this is gamebreaking
- 01:24:743 (16,1) - ^
- 01:31:556 (13,14,15,16,1) - wtf is dis drums go full dumb and you didnt even increase spacing nice
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2017-03-02 02:37 Weriko: modea my mapa extremo :c
2017-03-02 02:38 iYiyo: hola xd
2017-03-02 02:38 Weriko: y hola xd
2017-03-02 02:39 iYiyo: eeh no te conozco xd así que podrías preguntarlo mejor
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: eee
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: la gente generalmente me pide que sea directo xd
2017-03-02 02:40 Weriko: ya que se podrian malinterpretar intenciones :c
2017-03-02 02:41 iYiyo: mmm lo mejor sería empezar una conversación de manera normal
2017-03-02 02:42 iYiyo: es tu mapa de 9*
2017-03-02 02:42 Weriko: si ;-;
2017-03-02 02:42 Weriko: perdon ;-;
2017-03-02 02:43 iYiyo: Me da pereza modear mapas tan dificiles xd
2017-03-02 02:43 Weriko: ayyy :ccccc
2017-03-02 02:43 iYiyo: además, no es muy difícil intentar rankear un 9* de primer mapa?
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: si
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: pero rankear uno de 6* o menos seria igual de dificil para mi
2017-03-02 02:44 Weriko: asi que.... eee
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: mmm
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: rankear algo de 7 es dificil
2017-03-02 02:44 iYiyo: de 8 ya es muy dificil
2017-03-02 02:45 iYiyo: de 9 creo que no he visto para serte sincero xd
2017-03-02 02:45 Weriko: porfavor ;-;
2017-03-02 02:45 Weriko: se puede intentar
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: así a la rápida puedo ver que algunos streams no se ven bien estructurados como el rseto
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 01:57:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: por ejemplo ese
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 02:08:306 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-03-02 02:50 iYiyo: 02:08:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
2017-03-02 02:51 Weriko: o
2017-03-02 02:51 Weriko: estructurados en que sentido
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: darles una forma más elaborada, como que hiciste un slider un poco curvo y los hiciste stream
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: en general el resto de streams igual están buenos
2017-03-02 02:52 iYiyo: mencioné algunos que vi de pasada nomás
2017-03-02 02:53 Weriko: ok
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: 04:29:181 -
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: podrías hacer este beat clickable
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: y aprovechas de mapear 04:29:306 -
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: no tiene sentido que lo dejes vació la verdad
2017-03-02 02:53 iYiyo: y el slider tan largo interrumpe los largos streams que venías haciendo
2017-03-02 02:54 iYiyo: 04:33:806 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - please esto es copia de lo anterior xd
2017-03-02 02:55 Weriko: oooo
2017-03-02 02:55 Weriko: shhh
2017-03-02 02:56 iYiyo: 05:34:931 (2,3,4) - esto da más para stream que 05:34:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - la verdad
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: esta pensado asi
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: siento que en
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: 05:34:931 (2,3,4) - el sonido que va a 1/2 es algo mas fuerte
2017-03-02 02:56 iYiyo: 05:43:056 (1) - este slider debería empezar 05:43:181 - acá imo
2017-03-02 02:56 Weriko: y creo que queda mejor si le pongo enfasis
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: de hecho si, no es necesario stream en esa parte
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: pero tampoco en la anterior
2017-03-02 02:57 iYiyo: 05:35:243 - acá cabe para un triple igual
2017-03-02 02:58 iYiyo: 05:43:056 - acá podrías poner una nota y que luego venga el slider ese
2017-03-02 02:58 iYiyo: xd
2017-03-02 02:59 Weriko: no quedaria raro?
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: 04:42:681 (2,3,4,5,6,2,3,4,5,6) - este tipo de stream te quedó bueno
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: Encuentro que queda raro así como está ahora
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: porque te estás comiendo 05:43:181 - este beat
2017-03-02 02:59 iYiyo: que es con el que verdaderamente termina la canción
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: o
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: tal vez
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: y yo que tú le doy un poquito más de SV al último slider
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: quizás 0.3, y aprovechas de darle una mejor forma
2017-03-02 03:00 iYiyo: además que el cambio es muy bruzco igual
2017-03-02 03:00 Weriko: hehe
2017-03-02 03:01 iYiyo: más que nada para aprovechar de hacer algo de slider art
2017-03-02 03:01 iYiyo: así como está se ve muy simple xd
2017-03-02 03:01 Weriko: ok
2017-03-02 03:01 Weriko: soy pesimo para el sliderart por cierto xd
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: eso sería viendo a la rápida, quizás podrías revisar a ver si te comiste algún triple como el que te mencioné antes
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: pero no se ve mal
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: un poco más de trabajo en lo estético y podría pasar
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: serías el primero en hacer de su primer mapa ranked uno de 9* xd
2017-03-02 03:02 iYiyo: suerte
2017-03-02 03:03 Weriko: gracias!
2017-03-02 03:04 iYiyo: y para la próxima empieza una conversación saludando normal xD
2017-03-02 03:05 Weriko: ayy ok xD
2017-03-02 03:07 Weriko: puedes postear si quieres xd
2017-03-02 03:07 iYiyo: si crees que te sirvió de algo xd
2017-03-02 03:08 Weriko: e
2017-03-02 03:08 Weriko: si xd
2017-03-02 03:09 iYiyo: bueno xd
2017-03-02 03:09 Weriko: :p
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00:24:056 (7) - this doesnt really belong here, should just be a 1/4 jump
00:26:181 (4) - why is this spaced, this is basically the same jump pattern as 00:17:806 (1,2,3,4) - but in that one 4 isnt spaced
00:22:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - could clean up this jump pattern, make it look a bit nicer
00:30:306 (1,2) - curved slider followed by a linear slider flows well, but looks awkward. i can see this pattern all over the map, but just doesnt fit with the rest of the map
00:34:806 (3) - blanket?
00:35:806 (5,6,7,8,9) - would look better as a slider stream
00:43:806 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:37:056 (4) - blanket better (sorry)
00:42:306 (1,2,3,4) - looks awkward, maybe make 3 linear and 4 curved?
i could go on about these sliders looking weird but then this mod would get too repetitive, im sure you can fix them all and make them look better :P
00:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - song sounds different here, maybe change the jump patterns (i recommend back and forth jumps)
01:09:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - flows awkwardly
01:10:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would make this a stream or just 1/4 reverse sliders
01:33:306 (1,2) - looks so bad in comparison with everything else, blanket maybe? (or try something else)
01:45:306 (1,2) - ^
02:33:306 (1,2) - ^
02:37:306 (1,2) - ^ theres probably a reason why youre doing the sliders like this, but it could be better (ill stop addressing these now)
02:11:806 (1) - kiai parts are well mapped, but the spaced streams seem a little much, try lowering the ds just a tiny bit
01:36:556 (6) - awkward overlap with 4
02:40:306 (5) - awkward overlap with 2
02:53:806 (1) - try adding more reverse sliders for the players sake
04:05:806 (1) - missing out on a few beats with this slider here
04:12:306 (1) - this can act as a "break for the player" if you add more reverse sliders so players can actually regain their stamina
04:32:806 (1) - could do more with these types of sliders, make them cool and unique instead of just linear
i skimmed over the song, and most parts are just repeats, so maybe you can apply some of this mod to those parts
05:01:306 (1) - these spaced streams are getting super overboard, not even sure if its playable at this point xd, again, lower ds, just a little bit, so it can still be challenging
05:43:181 (2) - this is probably just a placeholder slider, but remember to make it look better
i know you copy pasted a lot of this map, hope u remap those parts

kind of a shitty repetitive mod but its all i could do, mostly that the sliders look really awkward when it could look much better, making the map more
A E S T H E T I C
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Hello there!
What we fixed IRC:
-some flow in jumps
-rhythm inconsistencies


~ Bubbled ~





good luck!
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Canadian Baka wrote:

Hello there!


What we fixed IRC:

-some flow in jumps
-rhythm inconsistencies


~ Bubbled ~





good luck!
ty!!!!
posted
Hello again!


sorry, I looked through the map and found some serious issues, here are a few reasons:


inconsistency in flow

and

inconsistency in rhythm

~ Popped ~
posted

Canadian Baka wrote:

Hello again!


sorry, I looked through the map and found some serious issues, here are a few reasons:


inconsistency in flow

and

inconsistency in rhythm

~ Popped ~
oh no,

fixed!!!!!

ill rebub it

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okay! seems good


~ Qualified ~
posted
looks ugly

dq'd
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Lunicia wrote:

looks ugly

dq'd
Total agree sorry weriko
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ill requal rn fixed all




stop memeing naw plz
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'sup mango

random modding, not being serious at some points.

Rising
  1. 00:36:556 (2) - Would be nice if you'd stack this slider with 00:37:056 (4) - , it will make a similar effect with 00:36:306 (1,3) - and their stacked ends.
    Also, I believe it would be better if this slider was more up anyway because of the flow.
  2. 00:49:306 (7) - New measure, new combo? ;) (Just add a new combo to this one to make it consistent with your new combos. Also, this current combo was getting too long)
  3. 01:11:681 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - these are insane jumps.. :(
  4. 02:33:806 (3) - I'd add a new combo to this object because the two previous sliders are not the same snap and they represent something else in the song. 02:37:806 (3) - same for this one
  5. 05:43:181 (2) - nice slider c:


I can't be helpful here, I don't mod crazy-over-the-top maps :^)
posted
I love how this got in graveyard moments after my mod.

not mad.
posted
im not letting it die xd, just waiting for a hype collab :p
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