2017-02-13 21:00 transcendental: ok leggo
2017-02-13 21:01 Weriko: ok
2017-02-13 21:01 transcendental: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1200217 Sunless Rise - Awakening [Rising]]
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: 00:19:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: this is two groups of three
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: your patterning should be two groups of three
2017-02-13 21:02 transcendental: not three groups of two
2017-02-13 21:02 Weriko: ADSDAFGSDGSDGSD
2017-02-13 21:03 Weriko: i did it cuz :c....
2017-02-13 21:03 Weriko: it looked cool :C but ok
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: 00:27:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: same
2017-02-13 21:03 transcendental: follow music properly > look cool
2017-02-13 21:05 transcendental: 00:29:306 (1,2,3,4) - this flows poor
2017-02-13 21:06 transcendental: 00:49:306 (1,2) -
2017-02-13 21:07 transcendental: accented note is at 00:49:681 -
2017-02-13 21:07 transcendental: rhythm like this is better
https://puu.sh/u28qr/1a9d81b821.png2017-02-13 21:07 Weriko: oops
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: same here
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: 00:57:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2017-02-13 21:08 transcendental: it's a 3+2+3 grouping
2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental: so your rhythm should be
2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental:
https://puu.sh/u28xM/7d92376454.png2017-02-13 21:09 transcendental: a 3,2,3 grouping
2017-02-13 21:10 transcendental: 01:02:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:03:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would combo in 3's to make it even more obvious that it switches to 1/3 rhythm
2017-02-13 21:11 transcendental: 01:07:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this stream so cramped up
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: because
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: i think drums sound like that
2017-02-13 21:12 transcendental: well 01:06:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is also drums
2017-02-13 21:12 Weriko: i mean
2017-02-13 21:12 transcendental: and is not cramped up
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: i'd just even out spacnig a little
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: but
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: its less intense
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: yeah keep it less spaced bc it is less intense
2017-02-13 21:13 Weriko: the music
2017-02-13 21:13 transcendental: but not as cramped as it is right now
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: ee
2017-02-13 21:14 transcendental: since right now it just looks awkward comapred to the big spacing around it
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: big spacing eksdee
2017-02-13 21:14 transcendental: music is going intense -> less intense -> intense but ur spacing is going intense -> lame -> intense
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: its not lame
2017-02-13 21:14 Weriko: its still a hold stream
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: and i think that one is represented okay :c
2017-02-13 21:15 transcendental: ok is up to you
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: hold stream eksdee
2017-02-13 21:15 Weriko: ill think about it
2017-02-13 21:15 transcendental: 01:47:306 (1,2) -
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: what is this
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: also i'd nc at 01:46:806 (9) -
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: its
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: to emphasize that 1/2 sound
2017-02-13 21:16 Weriko: people dont like that kind of streams :c
2017-02-13 21:16 transcendental: tream shape is fine
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: i mean the tiny NC
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: i'd nc at 01:46:806 (9) - and at 01:47:556 (3) -
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: removing the one at 01:47:431 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:17 transcendental: so you have 4's
2017-02-13 21:17 Weriko: z ok
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: 01:55:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: so for long streams like this it's ok to do less NCs
2017-02-13 21:18 transcendental: but i'd at least do one every 16 notes
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: that one is
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: nced at 16
2017-02-13 21:19 Weriko: i speednced sorry :c
2017-02-13 21:19 transcendental: although personally i'd do every 8
2017-02-13 21:19 transcendental: since then you have a nice 8+8+8 set of NCs
2017-02-13 21:20 transcendental: i'd also nc the start of the stream at 01:57:806 (3) - to make the sliders more emphasized
2017-02-13 21:20 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:20 transcendental: did you chooose to do 8's or 16's
2017-02-13 21:21 Weriko: ill keep it
2017-02-13 21:21 Weriko: 16 for now
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: ok
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: NC at 02:03:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: since you broke the previous 16 into 8+4+4
2017-02-13 21:21 transcendental: and then ofc again at 02:04:806 (17) -
2017-02-13 21:22 Weriko: yeah
2017-02-13 21:22 transcendental: 02:47:806 (1) -
2017-02-13 21:22 transcendental: lemme double check
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: o
2017-02-13 21:23 transcendental: but i'm pretty sure this is hella offscreen
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: that
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: that is
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: shitte xXDXdxd
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: nonono ill change that pattern
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: but i dont know what to put instead
2017-02-13 21:23 transcendental: ok
2017-02-13 21:23 Weriko: need suggestions :c
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: maybe like
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental:
https://puu.sh/u29LQ/d8b8e39d35.png2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: so you're kinda blanketing the curve of the previous stream
2017-02-13 21:26 Weriko: oh yeah
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental: and then change the next strream to this
2017-02-13 21:26 transcendental:
https://puu.sh/u29PD/72e3d15c4a.png2017-02-13 21:27 Weriko: okay
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: so you don't have that weird zigzag from the end of that pattern into the stream
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: 02:56:805 (17) -
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: NC etc etc
2017-02-13 21:27 transcendental: i'll stop with the NCs here if you think you can find them all
2017-02-13 21:28 Weriko: k
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: 03:35:306 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - seriously
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: why is this stream not perfectly straight
2017-02-13 21:29 transcendental: :T
2017-02-13 21:30 transcendental: 03:59:806 (1) - this slider is a little ugly
2017-02-13 21:30 Weriko: i think that stream
2017-02-13 21:31 Weriko: is not straight cuz........ e.......... IDK
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: lol ok
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: 04:39:306 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
2017-02-13 21:31 transcendental: remove copypasta
2017-02-13 21:31 Weriko: 03:59:806 (1) - am i the only one who likes this slider Asdasdsad
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: yes
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: sorry lol
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: changed
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: eksdee
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: i suck at sliders tbh
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: no worries sliders are hard
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: 05:27:306 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
2017-02-13 21:32 transcendental: r e m o v e c o p y p a s t a
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: NO
2017-02-13 21:32 Weriko: LEAVE MY COPYPASTA ALONE
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: last copypasta has a meaning
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: dont judge last copypasta!
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: at least ctrl+h or something
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: you are awakening so... you look at... previous mistakes in the map..... cuz you are awakening
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: and you be like
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: yeah sure
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: remove
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: copypasta
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: o shit u fucked up but im okay now cuz im awakening!!!
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: XDXDXDXDX :c
2017-02-13 21:33 Weriko: NO
2017-02-13 21:33 transcendental: ACTION shrugs