Don't worry about length of this mod. This just because I like your map.
OD to 9,2
00:15:545 (5) - very sharp angel, move a little higher and left
00:15:954 (1,2,3) - How about this
http://i.imgur.com/7e8kg8N.jpg ?
00:19:090 (2) - moving to x:27 y:45
00:19:908 (1,1) - What about this
http://i.imgur.com/dWenaI1.jpg ? Here sound changes, why not to show it?
00:20:863 (1) - make it closer to prev slider
00:21:136 (1) - closer to slider
00:24:136 (1,2) - try
http://i.imgur.com/ZCdThFu.jpg. Maybe, you will like it
00:25:090 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should start triangle rotation from note 4, not 5 (cause you just hide this note under the slider)
00:29:999 (1,2) - very fast + slider on slider (use 0,75 velocity)
00:31:090 (1) - make like stream note (just move to x: 324 y:232)
00:31:636 (3,4) - rotate slider 3 by -8 and my compasition like this
http://i.imgur.com/ybg21EM.jpg 00:32:181 (5,6,7,8) - note 5 to x:170 y:348, note 6 to x:325 y:225, slider 7 to x:225 y:47 and note 8 to x:55 y:60
00:32:863 (1,2) - sliders like this you can fix like 00:24:136 (1,2). I won't mention them anymore.
00:33:681 (2) - rotate by - 10 and move to x:231 y:154
00:33:954 (3) - rotate by 15 and move to x: 22 y: 95
00:34:227 (4) - to x:274 y:223
00:37:090 (1,2) - make them closer
00:50:999 (3,4) - more beautiful pls
00:51:545 (5) - better to x:258 y:140 (to make symmetry with 00:52:227 (3,4)
00:52:363 (5) - to x:244 y:268
00:52:908 (1) - to x:162 y:216
00:59:318 (1,1) - place them in a position of note 01:00:545 (1)
01:11:590 (2) - rotate by 15 and place to x:408 y: 252
01:11:863 (4) - place to x:153 y:29
01:20:181 (1,2) - you know, what i'm talking about
01:21:272 (1) - yeyeye
01:23:318 (3) - to x:107 y:23
01:24:272 (3) - move to note 2 position
01:25:090 (1,2) - make them a little closer
01:25:499 (1) - start and end of this slider not parallel
01:29:591 (2) - change to triple or reverse slder (listen carefully, you missed sound)
01:39:136 (2) - move to x:224 y:52
01:39:408 (3) - to x:198 y:329
01:40:772 (1,2,3,1) - try like this
http://i.imgur.com/C0o3sfh.jpg01:49:499 (1,1) - as prev
02:05:926 (5) - to x:31 y:192
02:05:311 (2) - to x:426 y:323
02:18:590 (1) - to x:309 y:174
03:03:741 (8) - to x:208 y:177
03:09:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is bad cause diff to change from note 4 to 5, remap
03:10:695 (6) - to x:88 y:121
03:10:695 (6,6,1) - slider on slider. fix it
03:28:150 (4) - to x:273 y:30
You know that this never would be ranked, but see you in loved, cause map is AWESOME.
Pm me cause i need your help, ok?