Regraz wrote:

No kudosu

Easy: AR3吧 4对于Easy有点高
00:52:970 (1,2,3,4) - 改成 https://puu.sh/v2mSz/15ee04a0db.png 好一点 毕竟是Easy Kiai切到vocal那么就暂且一直跟vocal吧

Normal: AR6 吓人 建议5
01:25:970 (1,2,3,4) - 调整一下让他们的Visual Spacing也一致

Hard:
00:10:032 (3) - 尽量不要把这么重的音放在折返上。应该放在滑条头或者圆圈
00:11:720 (3,4,5,1) - 这个flow像闪电似的，不是很好
DS重新拖一遍所有note吧 一会1.2x 00:06:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - 一会又是1.0x 00:12:470 (1,2,3) - 甚至还有1.4x 00:27:095 (4,5,1) - 让我不禁对这张图的诚意产生了怀疑 已经全部用ds拖一遍了

Insane:
问题和上一个版本一样，就不重复了 有很多地方间距弄大了，比如重音或者vocal高音的地方

Regraz wrote:

No kudosu
[Easy]
00:58:970 (1,2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/vKCgd/b4645a4f9b.png
01:07:970 (4) - NC
01:34:970 (1) - Recovery time is too short.

[Normal]
01:28:970 (1,1) - Recovery time is too short.

[Hard]
00:21:470 (1) - DS?
00:49:220 (2) - Divide this into two 1/2 sliders for the transistion from relatively calm sections from Kiai (intense).
00:59:532 (2,3) - Two 1/2 sliders for the vocal.
01:12:095 (4) - Change the position of 4 to avoid the visual spacing between 3 and 4 from being to small.
01:28:970 (1) - You might consider applying a slower sv for this outro section.

ENH问题不是很大

Insane还是有待提高，我感觉。一是1/2spam 二是间距看起来都差不多

Joe Castle wrote:

O SH*T!

THAT VN WAS THE BOMB!

can i mod this in a few days? im kinda busy uwu

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

Joe Castle wrote:

O SH*T!

THAT VN WAS THE BOMB!

can i mod this in a few days? im kinda busy uwu

i'm so sorry i do not want to give this map to find an extra mod...

ZhongRen wrote:

为什么要挖坟 2kd位没了

mediadata根本找不到………

改天有时间摸一下

ZhongRen wrote:

大概是一些建议
Hard
00:50:720 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以加跳 间距增大了
01:28:970 - 在这条绿线之后可以适当增加间距因为滑条速变慢了 现在这样有些挤【 这里是在上一个摸改过的【所以还好
00:49:032 - 这里我还是想加一个circle的 保持这样吧


insane
01:10:970 (1,2) - 这里还是改成滑条和前面一致 fixed
01:28:970 - 减速 和hard一致 不了

-Eriri- wrote:

来摸佛摸啦 邓女士~


哇这是什么BL游戏

[Insane]

00:00:845 - 开头这个转盘我会在中间插几个绿线调音效,一直都是5%的话转完感觉会没什么实感，而且接下来的note音效vol.是75%..感觉需要过渡一下，不会太唐突~ 也还好，没什么特别突出的音，保留了

(其实第一根绿线完全可以用前面的红线代替...没问题的 逼死你们这帮强迫症

00:07:220 (3,1) - 这儿有点强迫症QAQ 好像没包好? 你这个太nazi了，没啥问题的，看不出来QAQ


00:23:626 - 00:24:376 - 这儿有人声挺明显的空出来是故意的吧..我觉得这儿是可以跟的.. 这些地方打图的时候不会特别在意，而且这里的梗算是在这个图里比较突出的一个增大的三角形梗，1/4就不必了
00:35:626 - ^ ^

00:36:845 (3,4) - 4滑条后半段没和3平行，这儿你应该是想把他们弄平行的吧? fixed

就这样吧，我摸图水的不行

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

recheck 应该没有kd
首先视频格式问题
你现在用的是wmv然后屙屎官网都没有without video这个选项
正确格式我觉得应该用flv 你可以问问虾抖大佬 k
6376
6470
这两根绿线重复了 k
00:22:970 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 你前面这俩用的这种梗后面突然00:24:470 (1,2,3) - 有点不舒服 在逆flow转换为顺flow令整张图添加了可玩性
00:50:720 (3,4,5,6) - 实话说 四方跳有点丑 可以试一试棱形跳【改不改都无所谓了】 改了一点
00:51:845 (1,2,3) - 后面都是折返这种梗 我觉得蛮不好的
就这些 【很短小是不是是不是】
然后 我其实不太喜欢这flow的 flow没问题
怎么才3.76星 你看我多善良啦这歌做不上四星

Speechless wrote:

都26sp了还要摸干什么直接找bn把

Suzuki_1112 wrote:

Speechless wrote:

都26sp了还要摸干什么直接找bn把

Insane re了呀;w;

Tofu1222 wrote:

1112最牛逼\o/我的偶像神麻婆

Monstrata wrote:

Insane

00:29:532 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really love this flow. I just with 00:30:470 (1,2,3) - were a bit more similar in spacing. I think the structure could have been better, but the idea is great. here i think it is the best idea in this map haha
00:39:845 (3,4) - Maybe a jump here? Could emphasize that white tick imo ok, i have increased the spacing

Not much to say, clean diff!

Hard

00:24:845 (3) - The slier shape can be improved. Also flip it the other way like this? Makes the flow better imo. Think of drawing a thunderbolt when doing these sliders! ok~

~

01:12:095 (4,1) - Blanket can be better. fixed
01:13:595 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:20:720 (3,4,1) - Spacing looks inconsistent here xP ok
01:24:095 (4,5) - Blanket? or nah fixed

This is the only diff where you have a different ending (spinner at the end). Was that intentional? It felt a bit inconsistent to the other diffs xP. this is my negligence ;w; i do not realize these problems, i have adjusted it.

Normal

00:06:470 - 00:18:470 - This section is completely 1/1 rhythm. It's a bit too simple for a Normal. The rest of your map is fine, but please add a few more 1/2 rhythms here to make the map more even. ok

Easy

Looks fine!

[]

Clean set. Please give me a link to metadata if you have one! Call me back when you're ready for bubble~

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

都29个小星星了，赶紧飞了吧！

Monstrata wrote:

Sorry for the delay, Nominated!

Regraz wrote:

no kudosu
[Hard]
01:16:220 (2) - 考虑到这里出于两段Kiai的中间部分应该把这个拆成更密集的节奏去跟鼓。
01:24:470 (5) - NC
01:27:470 (1,2) - 视觉间距太小了，不好
call me back tomorrow.

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

sp30 我射的 满足你的强迫症
飞图快乐飞图快乐

Regraz wrote:

Next time please use a more yaoi BG!

[ Abhor ] wrote:

喜大普奔
Graz~~

Tofu1222 wrote:

太厉害了！祝贺飞图！