UVERworld - Itteki no Eikyou (short ver.)

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Hikawa Hina
这Easy和Normal是多大仇。。。
[General]
  1. bg: 1000*750这种4:3的话建议用ps裁成16:9.
  2. 没有sb关了widescreen support.
  3. 从00:00:809 开始一直到00:18:493 这一段区间貌似只有人声可以跟,不过他不好好唱挺多都没在白线上,感觉打起来有点难受不过也没啥
[Easy]
  1. sv有点高
  2. 00:13:914 (2) - 这个折返放在蓝线 00:14:309 这里感觉比较好
  3. 00:57:967 (3,4) - 前边两个Note跟的节奏这里也跟吧,红线上的重音00:57:809,00:58:124 挺明显的,然后白线这个00:57:967 (3) - 完全没听到声音感觉不应该下
  4. 01:16:598 (1,3) - 个人感觉短条从中间用这种直角锚点不是特别好看,还有这个00:31:124 (1) - ,用直角锚点的话角度别太大
  5. 01:12:177 (2) - Ctrl + J ?
[Normal]
  1. Normal 可以变SV?
  2. 01:07:440 (3) - 还是直角锚点,感觉角度太大,而且这里用一个弧感觉更配vocal
  3. 00:34:914 (4,5) - 总觉得听着别扭还说不出哪里别扭
  4. kiai部分感觉有点简单,比如从00:26:072开始这一段
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:914 (3) - 拆成两个circle然后其中一个和(2)stack?
  2. 00:30:966 (1) - 重音白线考虑不放滑条尾?
  3. 00:57:966 (2) - 重音滑条尾,考虑直接把00:57:809 (1,2,3) - 换成两个滑条?
  4. 00:58:282 (3,4,5,6) - 01:02:387 (4,5) - 01:06:177 (4,5) - 这种两圈重叠的梗有点多,不是很明白
  5. 稍微感觉思路不是很清晰,有点乱
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:335 (3) - NC?
  2. 00:09:414 (3) - 跟vocal可以跟蓝线,I难度的话
  3. 00:18:809 (2,3,4,5,6) - 有点别手
  4. 00:21:019 (1,3) - 90度的锚点超难看啊。
  5. 00:25:440 (3,4) - 如果你跟的是鼓点的话折返那个位置的Note需要去掉,如果跟的是电吉他的话空的位置需要填上变成4折返
  6. 00:34:598 (5,1) - DS有点大,突然这么一下,前后都没用过这么大的
  7. 01:00:335 (1,2,3) - 重音很明显可以跳一跳啊
  8. 01:00:809 (4,5,1) - 挤一起了感觉不是很清晰,可以摆开了

这图好难做啊,人不好好唱,节奏不好抓。(捂脸)
Topic Starter
kanor

Vanillas wrote:

这Easy和Normal是多大仇。。。
[General]
  1. bg: 1000*750这种4:3的话建议用ps裁成16:9.
  2. 没有sb关了widescreen support.
  3. 从00:00:809 开始一直到00:18:493 这一段区间貌似只有人声可以跟,不过他不好好唱挺多都没在白线上,感觉打起来有点难受不过也没啥
[Easy]
  1. sv有点高 0.9SV 1.0绿线不是很很正常的吗.....
  2. 00:13:914 (2) - 这个折返放在蓝线 00:14:309 这里感觉比较好 Easy 最好用不到蓝线就不用吧
  3. 00:57:967 (3,4) - 前边两个Note跟的节奏这里也跟吧,红线上的重音00:57:809,00:58:124 挺明显的,然后白线这个00:57:967 (3) - 完全没听到声音感觉不应该下 这里跟的是简化的vocal而不是节奏,因为节奏全是在红线上,如果要跟后面必然会有1/2slider,但是我在其他地方都没有这么放,放了反而会觉得突兀
  4. 01:16:598 (1,3) - 个人感觉短条从中间用这种直角锚点不是特别好看,还有这个00:31:124 (1) - ,用直角锚点的话角度别太大 因为前面同样有用红点描得slider,我觉得这里应该还好吧.....
  5. 01:12:177 (2) - Ctrl + J ? 感觉没什么特别的必要,keep
[Normal]
  1. Normal 可以变SV? 因为如果用前面的那个sv的话后面会显得很挤,用后面那个sv的话前面会显得很空,能区分就好了,也不是说低难度就不能变SV
  2. 01:07:440 (3) - 还是直角锚点,感觉角度太大,而且这里用一个弧感觉更配vocal 因为01:08:387 (4,1) - 我用了两个直滑条,为了跟这里保持pattern我选择了红点滑条,如果用弧线的话个人感觉这里反而会不太好看
  3. 00:34:914 (4,5) - 总觉得听着别扭还说不出哪里别扭 既然说不出哪里别扭的话我就暂时keep啦
  4. kiai部分感觉有点简单,比如从00:26:072开始这一段 不太懂......低难度本来就不难啊,只是跟E比这里压了1/2的音而已,spread上有区分不就好了吗
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:914 (3) - 拆成两个circle然后其中一个和(2)stack?
  2. 00:30:966 (1) - 重音白线考虑不放滑条尾?因为接下来马上就是人声,用滑条压重音是为了过渡,如果换成两个circle这种区分就不明显了
  3. 00:57:966 (2) - 重音滑条尾,考虑直接把00:57:809 (1,2,3) - 换成两个滑条?
  4. 00:58:282 (3,4,5,6) - 01:02:387 (4,5) - 01:06:177 (4,5) - 这种两圈重叠的梗有点多,不是很明白 你可以把这个kiai的节奏单独拿出来看一下,应该就知道我是怎么下的了,这个你要我说明我也不好说
  5. 稍微感觉思路不是很清晰,有点乱
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:335 (3) - NC? 好,加了
  2. 00:09:414 (3) - 跟vocal可以跟蓝线,I难度的话 因为这个人声实在太别扭了,当然I是可以跟蓝线的,但是我觉得这里跟蓝线反而不好打了,前面的难度我都是这里起的滑条,I难度突然区分开来的意义不大,反而会破坏整体感
  3. 00:18:809 (2,3,4,5,6) - 有点别手 一直都是逆时针,可能卡手了点吧,不过既然没有更好的选择,暂时保持
  4. 00:21:019 (1,3) - 90度的锚点超难看啊。你可能不懂红点滑条的乐趣23333
  5. 00:25:440 (3,4) - 如果你跟的是鼓点的话折返那个位置的Note需要去掉,如果跟的是电吉他的话空的位置需要填上变成4折返 好,改成4折返了
  6. 00:34:598 (5,1) - DS有点大,突然这么一下,前后都没用过这么大的 拉进了一点
  7. 01:00:335 (1,2,3) - 重音很明显可以跳一跳啊 改了跳
  8. 01:00:809 (4,5,1) - 挤一起了感觉不是很清晰,可以摆开了 3/4滑条摆开了难度蹭蹭地往上涨,感觉不是很必要,不然会和1/2搞混

这图好难做啊,人不好好唱,节奏不好抓。(捂脸)
谢摸 :)
Nostalgic
m4m from your q

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/573691

  1. Disable widescreen support
  2. 從00:00:809 到 00:05:545 我覺得這樣留白有點奇怪,反正你之後都是跟 vocal,而且你前面的diffs 都有map vocal
  3. 00:17:861 (4) - 這個我覺得不要疊比較好,因為你之後的 00:18:414 (6,1) 害我以為它們都是相隔1/2
  4. 01:02:703 (1,2,3,4) - 音樂並沒有在加強,這個梗變得有點奇怪
  5. 01:08:387 (3,2) - stack?
  6. 01:10:914 (3,4) - stream? 這樣更好區別之後的 2/3 sliders
  7. 01:21:019 (3,4,5,6) - 幹嘛突然跟vocal,那些1/3 音還在呢...
  1. Disable widescreen support
  2. 00:07:756 (4) - 00:10:282 (4) - 00:12:809 (6) - 00:15:335 (6) - 00:16:756 (2) - 00:17:861 (5) - 為什麼這些都不是nc? 你跟的都是vocal 那 nc 不是都應該跟 vocal 的段落嗎?
  3. 00:28:282 (8,1) - 不要疊,我又以為是1/2 snapping
  4. 00:28:598 (1,2,3) - 這樣rhythm 比較好
  5. 01:21:019 (3,4,5) - 繼續2/3 sliders吧

大概就這樣 :)
Topic Starter
kanor

Nostalgic wrote:

m4m from your q

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/573691

  1. Disable widescreen support 好,改了
  2. 從00:00:809 到 00:05:545 我覺得這樣留白有點奇怪,反正你之後都是跟 vocal,而且你前面的diffs 都有map vocal 因为I所以想做点不一样的,我觉得跟不跟都随意,低难度选择更是因为低SV跟vocal滑条不会太难看,I还去跟滑条就会又长又丑
  3. 00:17:861 (4) - 這個我覺得不要疊比較好,因為你之後的 00:18:414 (6,1) 害我以為它們都是相隔1/2 把后面那个1/4的改了,因为我叠了很多1/2所以宁愿改1/4
  4. 01:02:703 (1,2,3,4) - 音樂並沒有在加強,這個梗變得有點奇怪 因为我在01:05:230 (1,2,3,4) - 01:07:756 (1,2,3,4) - 也是这么下的,感觉保持统一比较好
  5. 01:08:387 (3,2) - stack? 好,改了
  6. 01:10:914 (3,4) - stream? 這樣更好區別之後的 2/3 sliders 为了和00:25:440 (3,4) - 保持一致
  7. 01:21:019 (3,4,5,6) - 幹嘛突然跟vocal,那些1/3 音還在呢... 因为4个1/3折返我觉得已经够了,6个的话从1/3到1/2的过渡会不太舒服
  1. Disable widescreen support 好,改了
  2. 00:07:756 (4) - 00:10:282 (4) - 00:12:809 (6) - 00:15:335 (6) - 00:16:756 (2) - 00:17:861 (5) - 為什麼這些都不是nc? 你跟的都是vocal 那 nc 不是都應該跟 vocal 的段落嗎? 我NC的是两个小节的开头,并不是vocal,这曲子如果按VOCAL去NC会相当蛋疼,看起来和乱NC的没甚么区别
  3. 00:28:282 (8,1) - 不要疊,我又以為是1/2 snapping 稍微移开了点不至于完全重合,但是隔了1/1为什么还会觉得是1/2呢......
  4. 00:28:598 (1,2,3) - 這樣rhythm 比較好 好,改了
  5. 01:21:019 (3,4,5) - 繼續2/3 sliders吧
这里同Insane

大概就這樣 :)
谢摸,待会去摸 :)
Nao Tomori
hello, from my m4m queue. my map: t/553935/start=0

[insane]
i don't see why you mapped the first bit with just 4 circles, it sounds very similar to 00:05:861 - this part. you could use lowered SV if you want to depict a buildup of intensity but outright not mapping it is weird in my opinion. you mapped it in hard as well.

00:19:598 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - i believe that the correct clickable rhythm is http://puu.sh/ueh9x/88b2bd85d0.jpg, which is actually reflected in your hitsounding as well. the current rhythm places 00:20:072 (2) - on a white tick that is very quiet while the drum hit is on the tail, and much more noticeable.

00:29:703 (4,1) - minor suggestion, i think this would work better as a repeat slider

00:32:861 (4) - i think this would be better as a slider continuing in the pattern here: 00:31:914 (1,2,3) - since it's just an extended version of the same sound. you do what i mean at 00:37:914 (4) - .

00:48:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't think this pattern represents the song that well since there isn't a sound being repeated 3 times. i hear drums on your clickable objects, but the issue for me is that 00:49:282 (2,4) - follow different types of drums in the same way, as if they were the same drum. this is mostly a stylistic argument rather than an actual problem.

00:55:440 (2) - why is this one extended? the vocal has already stopped, so it seems weird to extend this slider since 1/1 sliders previously followed vocals.

00:57:651 (1,2) - i don't see the reason for this pattern, i believe the drums are much louder on the red ticks so it makes sense to do a pattern that distinguishes between the white tick notes and red tick ones.

01:02:703 (1) - i think this section would be better if you added in 1/1 sliders to highlight vocals, rather than 1/2 spam everywhere.

01:06:966 (3,6) - since these notes are overmapped, i think it would be better to reduce their spacing so that the emphasis can go even more on 01:07:124 (4,1) - etc.

01:10:282 (1,2) - i don't see the reason to introduce hitsounds on slider tail here. if you wanted build up, wouldn't it be better to use circles with hitsounds?

i also don't like the hitsounds on the repeat sliders, it seems very anticlimatic. i think you could just use a burst of circles here.
01:10:914 (3,4) -

01:12:177 (3,4,5) - and 01:12:809 (1,2,3) - have the same pattern, but the 2nd one does not have vocals on it. i think this should be mapped with a different pattern since the song itself is very different.

[hard]
00:21:019 (1,2) - this rhythm seems really weird since 1 is an extended vocal that appears to end at 00:21:335 - and the red tick of the slider head is mapped to nothing. i think ctrl g on this seems better.

00:42:809 (1) - breaking this into 2 circles could be better since there are two syllables in the vocal.

00:53:230 (5,6) - i think stacking 1/1 break and then 00:54:177 (2,3) - 1/2 break could be confusing, but not big issue.

00:57:809 (1,2) - the rhythm here is not good imo. there is strong red tick based rhythm which is not followed, i think adjusting the use of sliders to reflect that would fit the song better.

01:06:493 - i feel as though this section should use 1/1 sliders to highlight vocals, since it currently has no difference from the rest of the map in terms of density, DS, or rhythm requirement.

[normal]
00:25:440 (3,4,1) - this could be made less confusing imo, since 3>1 is the same spacing as 3>4 and 1 is in the same direction as the cursor movement from 2>3 players may get confused.

throughout the map you use stuff like 00:50:072 (4,5) - which could be very uncomfortable for noobs to play.

didn't see anything on easy.


i don't really like this song much, so i won't nominate it. good luck!
Topic Starter
kanor

Nao Tomori wrote:

hello, from my m4m queue. my map: t/553935/start=0

[insane]
i don't see why you mapped the first bit with just 4 circles, it sounds very similar to 00:05:861 - this part. you could use lowered SV if you want to depict a buildup of intensity but outright not mapping it is weird in my opinion. you mapped it in hard as well. fixed

00:19:598 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - i believe that the correct clickable rhythm is http://puu.sh/ueh9x/88b2bd85d0.jpg, which is actually reflected in your hitsounding as well. the current rhythm places 00:20:072 (2) - on a white tick that is very quiet while the drum hit is on the tail, and much more noticeable. fixed

00:29:703 (4,1) - minor suggestion, i think this would work better as a repeat slider fixed

00:32:861 (4) - i think this would be better as a slider continuing in the pattern here: 00:31:914 (1,2,3) - since it's just an extended version of the same sound. you do what i mean at 00:37:914 (4) - . fixed

00:48:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't think this pattern represents the song that well since there isn't a sound being repeated 3 times. i hear drums on your clickable objects, but the issue for me is that 00:49:282 (2,4) - follow different types of drums in the same way, as if they were the same drum. this is mostly a stylistic argument rather than an actual problem. fixed

00:55:440 (2) - why is this one extended? the vocal has already stopped, so it seems weird to extend this slider since 1/1 sliders previously followed vocals. fixed

00:57:651 (1,2) - i don't see the reason for this pattern, i believe the drums are much louder on the red ticks so it makes sense to do a pattern that distinguishes between the white tick notes and red tick ones. fixed

01:02:703 (1) - i think this section would be better if you added in 1/1 sliders to highlight vocals, rather than 1/2 spam everywhere. fixed

01:06:966 (3,6) - since these notes are overmapped, i think it would be better to reduce their spacing so that the emphasis can go even more on 01:07:124 (4,1) - etc. fixed

01:10:282 (1,2) - i don't see the reason to introduce hitsounds on slider tail here. if you wanted build up, wouldn't it be better to use circles with hitsounds? fixed

i also don't like the hitsounds on the repeat sliders, it seems very anticlimatic. i think you could just use a burst of circles here.
01:10:914 (3,4) - fixed

01:12:177 (3,4,5) - and 01:12:809 (1,2,3) - have the same pattern, but the 2nd one does not have vocals on it. i think this should be mapped with a different pattern since the song itself is very different. fixed

[hard]
00:21:019 (1,2) - this rhythm seems really weird since 1 is an extended vocal that appears to end at 00:21:335 - and the red tick of the slider head is mapped to nothing. i think ctrl g on this seems better. fixed

00:42:809 (1) - breaking this into 2 circles could be better since there are two syllables in the vocal. fixed

00:53:230 (5,6) - i think stacking 1/1 break and then 00:54:177 (2,3) - 1/2 break could be confusing, but not big issue. fixed

00:57:809 (1,2) - the rhythm here is not good imo. there is strong red tick based rhythm which is not followed, i think adjusting the use of sliders to reflect that would fit the song better. fixed

01:06:493 - i feel as though this section should use 1/1 sliders to highlight vocals, since it currently has no difference from the rest of the map in terms of density, DS, or rhythm requirement. fixed

[normal]
00:25:440 (3,4,1) - this could be made less confusing imo, since 3>1 is the same spacing as 3>4 and 1 is in the same direction as the cursor movement from 2>3 players may get confused. fixed

throughout the map you use stuff like 00:50:072 (4,5) - which could be very uncomfortable for noobs to play. fixed

didn't see anything on easy. fixed


i don't really like this song much, so i won't nominate it. good luck!
thx for modding :)
evilheal

kanor wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年3月16日 at 20:41:16

Artist: UVERworld
Title: Itteki no Eikyou (short ver.)
Source: 青の祓魔師 京都不浄王篇
Tags: blue ao no exorcist
BPM: 190
Filesize: 25345kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.53 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Hard (3.31 stars, 288 notes)
  3. Insane (4.7 stars, 321 notes)
  4. Normal (2.05 stars, 157 notes)


Download: UVERworld - Itteki no Eikyou (short ver.)
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Yukirin Daisuki!
RIP abhor's easy QAQ
Mafumafu
spread有问题, Insane比Hard难太多了
Insane那么多跳,Hard基本没有

[Easy]
最开始的滑条速度比Normal都快
00:04:282 (2,1) - 像这样叠在一起的最好不要在Easy里出现 00:11:387 (2,3) - 这个也是,而且他们之间空的节奏也不一样,那就更不行了

00:12:966 (3) - 节奏?
00:15:493 (3) - 同上,这里节奏有点乱
00:29:072 (2,3) -都是 同方向的看起来很不好看
00:46:282 (1,2) - 我建议还是blanket
01:07:756 (3,4) - 没包好
01:12:177 (2) - 建议和1 3 换个方向
01:24:177 (1,2,3) - 这个有点不好因为Visual Spacing使得他们看起来比他们实际上要近

[Normal]
00:17:861 (4,1) - 考虑blanket一下
00:19:124 (2,3,4,1) - 这样的排列也不推荐 同样是Visual Spacing的问题 而且这里也没有必要用1/2吧 1/2上的鼓点比其他地方要轻多了
问题在于Kiai比非Kiai的节奏简单多了

[Hard]
00:28:598 (1,2,3) - 这里有个红线滑条 打起来有点怪 另外那个1/4折返滑条有点吵 音乐其实没有那么大声
01:19:756 (3,4,1,2) - 这样叠着也不是很好看 可以稍微弄大一点间距的

还可以 上述问题解决了还可以找我
Topic Starter
kanor

Regraz wrote:

spread有问题, Insane比Hard难太多了
Insane那么多跳,Hard基本没有
好,加了个Light Insane
[Easy]
最开始的滑条速度比Normal都快 改成0.75l了
00:04:282 (2,1) - 像这样叠在一起的最好不要在Easy里出现 00:11:387 (2,3) - 这个也是,而且他们之间空的节奏也不一样,那就更不行了
好,改掉了
00:12:966 (3) - 节奏?去掉了那个单点
00:15:493 (3) - 同上,这里节奏有点乱^
00:29:072 (2,3) -都是 同方向的看起来很不好看 翻了个位置
00:46:282 (1,2) - 我建议还是blanket
01:07:756 (3,4) - 没包好 改了
01:12:177 (2) - 建议和1 3 换个方向
01:24:177 (1,2,3) - 这个有点不好因为Visual Spacing使得他们看起来比他们实际上要近 换了个位置,视觉间距应该远一点了

[Normal]
00:17:861 (4,1) - 考虑blanket一下 好,blanket了
00:19:124 (2,3,4,1) - 这样的排列也不推荐 同样是Visual Spacing的问题 而且这里也没有必要用1/2吧 1/2上的鼓点比其他地方要轻多了 改成1/1了
问题在于Kiai比非Kiai的节奏简单多了
kiai塞了点人声进去,难度差距应该没那么大了
[Hard]
00:28:598 (1,2,3) - 这里有个红线滑条 打起来有点怪 另外那个1/4折返滑条有点吵 音乐其实没有那么大声 去掉了那个折返上的clap
01:19:756 (3,4,1,2) - 这样叠着也不是很好看 可以稍微弄大一点间距的 间距拉开了,不lap了

还可以 上述问题解决了还可以找我
谢谢瓜子大大 :) 等新diff多找几个摸得再来找尼
Ellyu
light insane 大水摸

00:42:177 (5,2) - 我不是很清楚,但这里箭头好像被完全挡住了不能直读
00:43:440 (4,1) - 间距加大,这里1明显是重音而且之前也没有用过这种强调方式
01:09:651 (4,5) - nazi,blanket
01:11:230 (6,7,8,9,1) - 不太适合白线起五连
01:21:651 (1) - 这个3/4有些怪了,而且红线上也有很明显的音
Lobelia

handsome muscle wrote:

light insane 大水摸

00:42:177 (5,2) - 我不是很清楚,但这里箭头好像被完全挡住了不能直读这个是折返在前不会挡住~~
00:43:440 (4,1) - 间距加大,这里1明显是重音而且之前也没有用过这种强调方式好。。做的比较赶。。没注意到
01:09:651 (4,5) - nazi,blanket
01:11:230 (6,7,8,9,1) - 不太适合白线起五连其实我个人感受是三连不适合白线起头。。五连还可以,不过我也觉得这个节奏不好,改了~
01:21:651 (1) - 这个3/4有些怪了,而且红线上也有很明显的音
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_MiaoFUuU_
来迟了不好意思~~
随便水几条


Abhor's Light Insane

  1. 00:10:282 (1) - 这个不要NC 00:10:756 (2) - 这个再NC怎样
  2. 00:13:282 (4) - NC
  3. 00:15:809 (4) - NC
  4. 00:24:335 (2) - 这个删了好点,然后 00:24:809 - 放个按的 00:25:598 - 这里也加一个
  5. 00:54:809 (3,1,2,3) - 这里的速度铺垫不够啊 不如把00:54:809 (3) - 这个滑条尾部改到蓝线,大白线放一个圈圈
  6. 00:57:335 (4,5,1) - 这里的节奏链接得好像不对 00:57:335 (4,5) - 这里节奏应该ctrl+g一下,然后圈圈不要叠去00:57:809 (1) -


good luck :)
Mafumafu
先回下模更新一下
Lobelia

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

来迟了不好意思~~
随便水几条


Abhor's Light Insane

  1. 00:10:282 (1) - 这个不要NC 00:10:756 (2) - 这个再NC怎样
  2. 00:13:282 (4) - NC
  3. 00:15:809 (4) - NCNC的点都不改啦,因为都是换句的地方弄得NC,我觉得刚好
  4. 00:24:335 (2) - 这个删了好点,然后 00:24:809 - 放个按的 00:25:598 - 这里也加一个QWQ我觉得这里减速对人声挺好的,不用搞太复杂吧
  5. 00:54:809 (3,1,2,3) - 这里的速度铺垫不够啊 不如把00:54:809 (3) - 这个滑条尾部改到蓝线,大白线放一个圈圈QWQ这里换轨
  6. 00:57:335 (4,5,1) - 这里的节奏链接得好像不对 00:57:335 (4,5) - 这里节奏应该ctrl+g一下,然后圈圈不要叠去00:57:809 (1) -
这里红线上有一个音。。比较特殊,但是我试过那里对了打着比较舒服

good luck :)
Topic Starter
kanor

Regraz wrote:

先回下模更新一下
updated! :)
Mafumafu
[General]
Metadata source?
Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav
Please add more tags! Like whether this is an op/opening or ed/ending the romanisation of 京都不浄王篇 , also [_Abhor_].

[Normal]
01:28:282 (1) - Too short ;w;

[Hard]
00:42:335 (6) - You missed an NC
01:28:361 (1) - Even if it is a Hard, I still think it may be too short.

[Light Insane]
00:14:387 (7,8) - You may follow the vocal here like what you previously did. https://puu.sh/v43aK/901719fa3e.png
00:23:545 (1,2) - Should be: https://puu.sh/v43o1/ed98d20b5a.png
00:25:756 (3,1) - The spacing here is so large that it could be easily read as 1/2.
00:26:230 (2,3,4) - Instead of keeping the actual spacing the same, try to keep the visual spacing the same.
00:30:809 (5,1) - Thought this is too huge.
00:41:703 (3,4,5) - A larger spacing should be between 4 and 5 instead of 3 and 4.
00:46:756 (3,4,5) - ^
00:51:335 (1) - You may try stick to DS for this entire part. (until 00:56:387 (1) - )
00:58:756 (4,5,1) - Keep a linear pattern here.
01:02:072 (4) - Ctrl+G and place it a bit lower.
01:10:835 (4) - Sounds pretty overmapped.
01:18:019 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
01:22:598 (4,5,1) - Jump should be between 4 and 5 (for cymbal sound)
01:23:387 (3,4) -Spaing tToo large while 01:23:861 (5,1) - too small
01:24:966 (4,1) - Too large as well
01:27:177 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow.

[Insane]
00:00:809 (1) - feels really empty. You have followed the vocal even in Easy, why you place such few notes here in this diff?
00:21:177 (1,2) - Those sharp curves does not match with the music tbh.
00:25:756 (4,1) - The spacing for 1/4 here is too large.
01:02:703 (1,2,3) - Not recommend to stack so many 1/2 in a row in Insane because it will cause unexpected stop of cursor movement.
01:10:914 (5) - Maybe you could add an NC here.
01:17:545 (5,1) - Make them like a perfect curve of a circle.
01:21:019 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe you could space them out for better flow: https://puu.sh/v47vf/f6d7a24476.png
01:19:756 (4,1) - Swap NC.
01:22:756 (5) - NC

call me back
Topic Starter
kanor

Regraz wrote:

[General]
Metadata source?i used metadata from http://www.ao-ex.com/music/opening.html and Mao's set from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/568110
Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav fixed
Please add more tags! Like whether this is an op/opening or ed/ending the romanisation of 京都不浄王篇 , also [_Abhor_]. add opening and fixed abhor!

[Normal]
01:28:282 (1) - Too short ;w; changed it into a slider

[Hard]
00:42:335 (6) - You missed an NC fixed
01:28:361 (1) - Even if it is a Hard, I still think it may be too short. the length is long enough imo...cause it would be too long if changed into a slider


[Insane]
00:00:809 (1) - feels really empty. You have followed the vocal even in Easy, why you place such few notes here in this diff? fixed
00:21:177 (1,2) - Those sharp curves does not match with the music tbh. fixed,change it into normal slider
00:25:756 (4,1) - The spacing for 1/4 here is too large. fixed
01:02:703 (1,2,3) - Not recommend to stack so many 1/2 in a row in Insane because it will cause unexpected stop of cursor movement. fixed
01:10:914 (5) - Maybe you could add an NC here. fixed
01:17:545 (5,1) - Make them like a perfect curve of a circle. fixed
01:21:019 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe you could space them out for better flow: https://puu.sh/v47vf/f6d7a24476.png fixed
01:19:756 (4,1) - Swap NC. fixed
01:22:756 (5) - NC fixed

call me back
wait for gder :)
Lobelia

Regraz wrote:

[Light Insane]
00:14:387 (7,8) - You may follow the vocal here like what you previously did. https://puu.sh/v43aK/901719fa3e.png
00:23:545 (1,2) - Should be: https://puu.sh/v43o1/ed98d20b5a.png
00:25:756 (3,1) - The spacing here is so large that it could be easily read as 1/2.
00:26:230 (2,3,4) - Instead of keeping the actual spacing the same, try to keep the visual spacing the same.
00:30:809 (5,1) - Thought this is too huge.there is a really obvious downbeat and i add a finish to emphasize the downbeat~~so i keep it
00:41:703 (3,4,5) - A larger spacing should be between 4 and 5 instead of 3 and 4.
00:46:756 (3,4,5) - ^
00:51:335 (1) - You may try stick to DS for this entire part. (until 00:56:387 (1) - )
00:58:756 (4,5,1) - Keep a linear pattern here.
01:02:072 (4) - Ctrl+G and place it a bit lower.move it a bit lower,but i think the flow is better now,so i don't want to make it Ctrl+g
01:10:835 (4) - Sounds pretty overmapped.
01:18:019 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
01:22:598 (4,5,1) - Jump should be between 4 and 5 (for cymbal sound)
01:23:387 (3,4) -Spaing tToo large while 01:23:861 (5,1) - too small
01:24:966 (4,1) - Too large as well
01:27:177 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
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352,234,75809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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456,109,76440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,109,76519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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287,326,77230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,326,77387,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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43,353,77861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
143,249,78019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
9,223,78177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
43,353,78335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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M4M from your queue

Maybe you can search for the part that makes this 1.52 to nerf it to 1.49 so it looks nicer in the spread

Since you are following the vocals very closely I would also place a 1/1 slider on 00:12:651

Even if itsonly a normal note you may want to put something on 00:15:335

00:16:914 (2) - would also place this circle on the red tick as thats where the word starts even though the "chi" may sound stronger

I see no problems in the rest of this diff
00:03:335 (1) - This needs to start on 00:03:177 as 00:03:966 (2,3) both follow vocals. 00:03:335 (1), this slider does follow the music but is not consistent with that part you are following.

There needs to be something clickable on 00:12:651, maybe start a slider here and make it end on 00:12:966 (4)

00:15:493 (4) - Same as the easy, Would start this on the white tick before the note as clicking on the first part of the word feels more natural

00:16:914 (2) - Move this 1/2 earlier

Maybe place a note on 1:12:651 as you do use alot of 1/2 stacks already so this one would fit with the map

01:15:177 same as above, place a note after the reverse
00:03:335 (1) - Same as normal 00:03:966 (2,3) follow the vocals and 00:03:335 (1) follows an instrument so make it start 1/2 ealier

00:05:230 (4) - feels unneccesary, I think you can just leave this slider out

01:17:230 (3,4,5) - a stack like this of with 2 1/2 gaps is pretty boring to play so maybe space them out a bit

01:21:019 (3,4,5) - ^
00:04:282 (3) - Why not a long slider to reflect the long vocal sound

00:12:966 (2,4) - Would stack these so it looks better

00:15:493 (2,4) - ^

00:38:545 (5) - Place this note on top of 00:39:177 (4) as this part feels confusing already beacause of you having to go diagonaly over the square at the start

00:50:387 (2,4) - maybe stack
00:18:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels cluttered, maybe try to space it better

00:26:545 (4) - Make this flow better by curving the slider like this http://i.imgur.com/m6h8KBY.png

00:28:756 (6,7,8) - Don't think this increase in spacing is needed as you already have the mphasis of it being a triple

01:07:440 (5,1) - This does not need overlap and is easily fixable

01:10:282 (1,2,3,4) - using ctrl+g on 01:10:282 (1,4) and also on 01:10:440 (2,3) is better to keep circular flow when going into the stream

01:14:545 (4,6) - Overlap

01:27:177 (4) - The same as the imgut link a couple of comments higher up

01:27:966 (3,4) - Change these 2 notes into a 1/2 slider so clicking on 5 has more impact

Gl with the map :)
Topic Starter
kanor

gottagof4ast wrote:

M4M from your queue

Maybe you can search for the part that makes this 1.52 to nerf it to 1.49 so it looks nicer in the spread

Since you are following the vocals very closely I would also place a 1/1 slider on 00:12:651

Even if itsonly a normal note you may want to put something on 00:15:335

00:16:914 (2) - would also place this circle on the red tick as thats where the word starts even though the "chi" may sound stronger

I see no problems in the rest of this diff
00:03:335 (1) - This needs to start on 00:03:177 as 00:03:966 (2,3) both follow vocals. 00:03:335 (1), this slider does follow the music but is not consistent with that part you are following.

There needs to be something clickable on 00:12:651, maybe start a slider here and make it end on 00:12:966 (4)

00:15:493 (4) - Same as the easy, Would start this on the white tick before the note as clicking on the first part of the word feels more natural

00:16:914 (2) - Move this 1/2 earlier

Maybe place a note on 1:12:651 as you do use alot of 1/2 stacks already so this one would fit with the map

01:15:177 same as above, place a note after the reverse
00:03:335 (1) - Same as normal 00:03:966 (2,3) follow the vocals and 00:03:335 (1) follows an instrument so make it start 1/2 ealier

00:05:230 (4) - feels unneccesary, I think you can just leave this slider out

01:17:230 (3,4,5) - a stack like this of with 2 1/2 gaps is pretty boring to play so maybe space them out a bit

01:21:019 (3,4,5) - ^
00:18:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels cluttered, maybe try to space it better

00:26:545 (4) - Make this flow better by curving the slider like this http://i.imgur.com/m6h8KBY.png

00:28:756 (6,7,8) - Don't think this increase in spacing is needed as you already have the mphasis of it being a triple

01:07:440 (5,1) - This does not need overlap and is easily fixable

01:10:282 (1,2,3,4) - using ctrl+g on 01:10:282 (1,4) and also on 01:10:440 (2,3) is better to keep circular flow when going into the stream

01:14:545 (4,6) - Overlap

01:27:177 (4) - The same as the imgut link a couple of comments higher up

01:27:966 (3,4) - Change these 2 notes into a 1/2 slider so clicking on 5 has more impact

Gl with the map :)
00:04:282 (3) - Why not a long slider to reflect the long vocal sound

00:12:966 (2,4) - Would stack these so it looks better

00:15:493 (2,4) - ^

00:38:545 (5) - Place this note on top of 00:39:177 (4) as this part feels confusing already beacause of you having to go diagonaly over the square at the start

00:50:387 (2,4) - maybe stack
fixed some places for the gder as req
no reply=almost fixed :)
thx for modding!
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