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Planecakes

Joined August 2015

Planecakes 2017-03-20T16:48:18+00:00

M4M stuff

Eruption

00:22:520 (3,4,1) - Improve flow
01:13:220 (1) - I would this circle a little bit up
01:03:020 (1,2) - decrease spacing?
01:06:920 (1,2) - increase spacing
01:08:120 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - easier to read circle timing change if you do it like this

click here

01:21:170 (5) - improve flow by moving the slider left

Left's Expert

00:26:870 (4) - looks better right?

click here

01:37:220 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woa that's fast
01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...

SkyDevil's Extra

00:07:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate overlaps like this aaa
00:10:220 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this
00:23:720 (5) - move a little bit right
00:27:470 (5,1) - This flow is killing me
01:26:120 (5,1) - no
01:39:620 (1,2,3) - bad flow aaa

Kenterz's Insane

00:44:420 (1) - move a little bit left
00:50:420 (1) - You could improve your slider art tho
01:31:745 (3,4) - I want spacing here

xi is good stuff and gl with your map

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-20T17:09:38+00:00

mari ohara

00:22:520 (3,4,1) - Improve flow seems fine
01:13:220 (1) - I would this circle a little bit up its a blanket and flows fine
01:03:020 (1,2) - decrease spacing? sure
01:06:920 (1,2) - increase spacing this is fine imo
01:08:120 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - easier to read circle timing change if you do it like this id consider this but im more afraid of too high spacing than readablity on this. misreading this would lead to acc drop at worst
01:21:170 (5) - improve flow by moving the slider left good point

THX!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-20T21:49:16+00:00

Mari Ohara wrote:
M4M stuff

SkyDevil's Extra
00:07:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate overlaps like this aaa thats cool but if I didnt like this I wouldnt have made it xd
00:10:220 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this I do like this
00:23:720 (5) - move a little bit right ehh why not
00:27:470 (5,1) - This flow is killing me I swear a lot of people have been mentioning it and I don't understand the problem but I changed it now then
01:26:120 (5,1) - no you're not being very helpful here lol
01:39:620 (1,2,3) - bad flow aaa Feels fine imo, it doesn't break the flow that badly

thanks

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hi-mei

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Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-03-20T22:32:47+00:00

hello, since i got rsi i cant play more than 5~ mins per day till my hands starts to hurt

so ill be miodding till it wont annoy me

eruption:
00:03:620 (1,2) - i dont think the stack here is necessary, basically it breaks ur structure that u started to follow before this place

i think the stream shud be starting from 00:06:620 - place, according to the music. the pitch starting 00:06:620 - but not 00:07:220 - here
00:10:595 - i think this place is underemapped for 6*, yoiu got 2 tangible sounds to map 00:10:595 - and 00:10:670 - especially
00:12:470 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/uS8Kc/ea3f9d81bb.jpg u got the idea right, x/y linear stuff, dont forget to calculate the distance between 00:12:770 (1,3) - to fit the 00:12:920 (2) - between them, same goes for 00:13:220 (1,2) -
00:18:920 - why didnt u map this?
00:21:320 (5,6,1) - ok quick tip here, dont do stuff like that, just stack them and stacking leniency will do the job for u. dont rush urself to make stuff that looks ugly.
00:22:370 (1,2,3) - same goes for thiis
00:23:720 (1,2,3) - ^ etc
00:28:820 (1) - this thing is different from 00:29:045 (2,3,4) - sound wise, so i guess u shud change the shape of 1st one
00:39:020 - fix the border, drag it to the spinner
ok so next up are streams:
i dont like the way you did them, example:
00:42:620 - is a pitch and the sound goes down after that, instead you are ignoring it to keep the smooth shape, which is uh... not that hard you know
dont be lazy and make it in accord to music
00:43:820 - ^
00:45:020 - kinda nice
00:46:220 - ;w;
00:51:620 (1,2) - are they that strong to use 3.25x ds? i guess no
00:55:820 (6) - its a pitch, the stream way should be changing here
00:57:845 (6) - nc like u did 01:08:520 (1) -
01:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - they are much stronger that the place i showed above 00:51:620 (1,2) - i think u shud add more spacing here
01:04:070 - pitch, please change this stream
01:13:220 (1) - i dont think that such ds shud be applied here, just make it a bit lower
01:14:720 (1) - wrong snapped slider, s-end shud be 01:14:795 -
01:31:820 (5,1) - are u sure ds here shud be 0.51?
01:33:545 (2) - shud be ending on 01:33:770 - i guess
and make them 01:33:320 (1,2) - closer plz
01:35:870 (8,1) - stack, if u want to surprise player, which is the case here i think
01:45:620 - same issue in regards of streams i mentioned above

left's expert:
nice diff
i think u can add revers wiggling slider 01:13:520 - here
01:32:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont really understand why u ignored the melody here, 01:32:720 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is way different form 01:32:420 (1,2,3,4) -
alright im done
thats it, gl

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-20T23:49:12+00:00

himei

eruption:
00:03:620 (1,2) - i dont think the stack here is necessary, basically it breaks ur structure that u started to follow before this place think its fine

THX!

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-21T14:40:40+00:00

-himei wrote:
hello, since i got rsi i cant play more than 5~ mins per day till my hands starts to hurt

left's expert:
nice diff
i think u can add revers wiggling slider 01:13:520 - here so small sound
01:32:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont really understand why u ignored the melody here, 01:32:720 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is way different form 01:32:420 (1,2,3,4) - maybe can consider it, but no problem with now i think
alright im done
thats it, gl

thx for mod~

Kroytz wrote:
mod

Left
00:13:220 (1,2,3) - So like these three are visually and rhythmically 1/1 apart but then like 00:15:920 (1,2,3) - and 00:11:120 (1,2,3) - aren't. antijump

00:18:020 (1,2,1) - Also kinda weirdly spaced with how you mapped previous ones.

00:44:420 (1) - Why not keep this as straight slider? doesn't need to be exactly overlapped, could be anti-jump'ed as an aesthetic but curve slider makes the linear triangle stand out kinda weird. agree fixed

00:45:620 (1) - Here is okay since it does a different purpose but linear slider could also be used to keep a bit of structure with the angles.

01:25:220 (1) - oh no... this isn't worth the undermapping Left ;___; showed that high sound

01:30:920 (5,6,1) - It's a bit hard at first sight to see that there is a surprise 1/4 beat in all of this. The distance between each other is really large.many examples in other maps

01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is so cool <33 xD

01:46:520 (5) - might be possible to NC this.consider it

Really nice map as always Left~

Really nice diff, hope so see it ranked ^^[/box]

thx for mod!

LeQuack wrote:
M4M

Left's Expert
01:20:870 (4) - I think the end of this slider is too important be un-clickable i would suggest just having two notes bass mapped
01:42:545 (3,4) - I would space these notes differently as the previous pattern has the same stack but it represents a different timing (a spacing ov .4x looked good to me no problem with now i think

Good luck with this set

thx for mod~

Mari Ohara wrote:
M4M stuff

Left's Expert
00:26:870 (4) - looks better right?
click here
ehh i like my one
01:37:220 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woa that's fast yea
01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...

xi is good stuff and gl with your map

thx for mod!

Left

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Mir

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Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-03-21T20:22:42+00:00

Free mod for your erupting difficulty.

[

Eruption]

00:01:820 (1,2) - Could do kickslider stuff for emphasis on 1 and 2 both rather than just 2. Might lower rhythm density though so up to you. Personally I just think that it would be cool for 1 to also get some.
00:10:520 (2) - I hear this skips a triple on 00:10:670, what you could do is shorten the slider one tick and map a note at 00:10:745 - for a slider end triple to catch it.
00:12:770 (1,2,3,1,2) - Could tidy this up a bit unless it's intentionally off for emphasis.
00:18:020 (1,2,3,1) - Preference but since you made 00:17:570 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle and 00:18:020 (1) - feels like it should fit in there as hex, maybe try to hex all of it? Again it's preference tbh.
00:18:920 - This is really noticeable and is being skipped with you could have a lot of emphasis on the 00:19:070 (2) - depending on how you use it.
00:25:220 (5,7) - Have weird emphasis, 5 is stronger and has a finish on it, yet is lower spacing than the 7. Also you could NC 5 but that's also preference.
00:25:520 (7,8) - You could ctrl+g this since the red tick slider seems like it isn't following anything in particular.
00:39:020 - Could remove break extension cuz in-game it felt kinda weird having the bg dim for so long before anything appears.
00:53:645 (6,7) - This flow really tripped me up, maybe cuz I'm bad but it's really awkward to play. Maybe this would work but it's more comfortable than what you might be going for. Tbh, it shouldn't be too uncomfortable because the sounds aren't really doing anything to warrant any extra emphasis within this phrase.
00:54:395 - Skipping a beat here you could map with 00:54:320 (3) - as a kickslider.
00:55:220 (1) - Skipping what seems to be a snare on the red with this extended slider. Up to you if you want to keep it but I personally would shorten the slider and make a slider end stream from here (as much as I hate those it does fit here)
00:58:145 (8,9) - Could make this slightly more comfortable and less wew to play if you did this instead.
00:58:820 (13,1) - This could be a slider to capture the held piano note here, and might transition a bit better.
01:08:420 (7,1,2) - Ask for opinions on this polarity change. To me it looks weird, but I can't play this so take that with a grain of salt lol.
01:12:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - From here on it gets a little excessively hard to hit these with the flow used. 01:12:420 (1,2,3) - Is like reverse circular so it's really hard to hit this one and they don't flow intuitively into each other (which isn't bad just plays really difficult)
01:16:595 - Skipping more noticeable beats you could stack on slider heads so that it still plays fine imo.
01:24:920 (5) - Tbh seems like it should be circles cuz it's like a transition thing and it's kinda lackluster if you just map a kickslider here.
01:25:220 (3,4,5,6) - Why follow the really boring drums when theres the DO DO DODO DOO DOO DOO thing in the back (idfk what it is)
01:28:220 (1) - Could be a kickslider for that extra movement into 2 which could be a bit cooler to play.
01:30:920 (5) - Starting using a kickslider here is a bit weird because when the really crazy stuff happens you don't really get emphasis on it since the rhythm is the same. I would do this to really highlight the higher pitches in the synth thing.
01:33:545 (2) - This is weird because it sounds to me like it should be this instead because that gap even musically doesn't really make sense.
01:34:670 (3) - Could be kickslider to catch that really high-pitched synth that kinda just gets ignored with a circle.
01:35:420 (5) - Slider end stream is pretty fitting here tbh, could do it since the synth thing starts on the blue tick the slider ends on. If you want more clicks that is. Same for 01:40:220 (1,2,3,4).
01:36:470 (1) - There's nothing actually here, you could make 01:36:320 (2) - a 1/2 slider instead to lead into this stream with another slider end (yay more of them)
01:37:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Increasing spacing here would be cool since the sounds get more intense over time.
01:45:470 (3,4) - This could be a kickslider instead because 01:45:620 (1) - is a really strong high-pitched note that could be emphasized with a lot more movement. The other sounds that were strong in this stream were already emphasized with direction changes, a more powerful sound such as this deserves a jump of some sort at least to me personally.

Modded as I'm breaking down so feel free to redwall. d

Good luck.~

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-21T20:58:39+00:00

Mir wrote:
Free mod for your erupting difficulty.

[ Eruption]
00:01:820 (1,2) - Could do kickslider stuff for emphasis on 1 and 2 both rather than just 2. Might lower rhythm density though so up to you. Personally I just think that it would be cool for 1 to also get some. i get your point but i think this isnt wrong rn and i wanna keep it

00:10:520 (2) - I hear this skips a triple on 00:10:670, what you could do is shorten the slider one tick and map a note at 00:10:745 - for a slider end triple to catch it. you hear it when you slow down but at full speed it sounds like one continous sound to me. i dont think its appropriate to map it

00:12:770 (1,2,3,1,2) - Could tidy this up a bit unless it's intentionally off for emphasis. its emphesis. i felt like it wasnt strong enough when i made it perfect

00:18:020 (1,2,3,1) - Preference but since you made 00:17:570 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle and 00:18:020 (1) - feels like it should fit in there as hex, maybe try to hex all of it? Again it's preference tbh. i think the timing distance is big enough to allow the overlap of 2 and 1. im more of a pattern than a grid guy

00:18:920 - This is really noticeable and is being skipped with you could have a lot of emphasis on the 00:19:070 (2) - depending on how you use it. im not mapping the drums here. since im focusing on the melody here it would seem out of place imo

00:25:220 (5,7) - Have weird emphasis, 5 is stronger and has a finish on it, yet is lower spacing than the 7. Also you could NC 5 but that's also preference. changed the pattern

00:25:520 (7,8) - You could ctrl+g this since the red tick slider seems like it isn't following anything in particular. its following the drums. there is no drum on its end

00:39:020 - Could remove break extension cuz in-game it felt kinda weird having the bg dim for so long before anything appears. wasnt even on purpose lol

00:53:645 (6,7) - This flow really tripped me up, maybe cuz I'm bad but it's really awkward to play. Maybe this would work but it's more comfortable than what you might be going for. Tbh, it shouldn't be too uncomfortable because the sounds aren't really doing anything to warrant any extra emphasis within this phrase. changed

00:54:395 - Skipping a beat here you could map with 00:54:320 (3) - as a kickslider. the stop motion helps emphesising 00:54:620 (3) -

00:55:220 (1) - Skipping what seems to be a snare on the red with this extended slider. Up to you if you want to keep it but I personally would shorten the slider and make a slider end stream from here (as much as I hate those it does fit here) added a beat

00:58:145 (8,9) - Could make this slightly more comfortable and less wew to play if you did this instead. i guess

00:58:820 (13,1) - This could be a slider to capture the held piano note here, and might transition a bit better. the following stream sounds completely new so i think the stop motion is supporting the music really well here

01:08:420 (7,1,2) - Ask for opinions on this polarity change. To me it looks weird, but I can't play this so take that with a grain of salt lol. ask whom T_T

01:12:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - From here on it gets a little excessively hard to hit these with the flow used. 01:12:420 (1,2,3) - Is like reverse circular so it's really hard to hit this one and they don't flow intuitively into each other (which isn't bad just plays really difficult) dunno i wanna keep for now im still gathering opinions on this section. really glad for this input tho

01:16:595 - Skipping more noticeable beats you could stack on slider heads so that it still plays fine imo. sure

01:24:920 (5) - Tbh seems like it should be circles cuz it's like a transition thing and it's kinda lackluster if you just map a kickslider here. sure

01:25:220 (3,4,5,6) - Why follow the really boring drums when theres the DO DO DODO DOO DOO DOO thing in the back (idfk what it is) i feel its fits the long noice i nthe background and leads well into the following patterns

01:28:220 (1) - Could be a kickslider for that extra movement into 2 which could be a bit cooler to play. i prefer this

01:30:920 (5) - Starting using a kickslider here is a bit weird because when the really crazy stuff happens you don't really get emphasis on it since the rhythm is the same. I would do this to really highlight the higher pitches in the synth thing. i find this very fitting

01:33:545 (2) - This is weird because it sounds to me like it should be this instead because that gap even musically doesn't really make sense. ireally dont know what yukiyo and you are hearing here

01:34:670 (3) - Could be kickslider to catch that really high-pitched synth that kinda just gets ignored with a circle. sure

01:35:420 (5) - Slider end stream is pretty fitting here tbh, could do it since the synth thing starts on the blue tick the slider ends on. If you want more clicks that is. Same for 01:40:220 (1,2,3,4). sure

01:36:470 (1) - There's nothing actually here, you could make 01:36:320 (2) - a 1/2 slider instead to lead into this stream with another slider end (yay more of them) the sound is there. its just fading in. if you try to tap what you are hearing in slow motion here you will notice its 10 beats. 9 doesnt fit well

01:37:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Increasing spacing here would be cool since the sounds get more intense over time. i dont hear this increase

01:45:470 (3,4) - This could be a kickslider instead because 01:45:620 (1) - is a really strong high-pitched note that could be emphasized with a lot more movement. The other sounds that were strong in this stream were already emphasized with direction changes, a more powerful sound such as this deserves a jump of some sort at least to me personally.sure

Modded as I'm breaking down so feel free to redwall. d get redwalled xd

Good luck.~

THANKS!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-22T01:08:12+00:00

Yaspo

00:08:420 (1) - Rhythmically, it would flow better to have a circle here and have this as an active beat. Also players won't suspect 00:08:120 (4) to have an extra reverse and hit the downbeat so it would feel very weird
00:09:920 (1) - ^ similar to the above
00:10:820 (2) and 00:13:220 (3) and 00:15:620 (2) 00:18:020 (3) and 00:19:070 (2) - would feel more natural and make more sense to have NCs on these beats since they are the predominant beats/sounds
00:50:420 (1) - For the sake of the structure of the other sliders 00:49:520 (4,5,6) it would look better to have it moved further down and not overlap since it will keep the structure of the other objects https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7625121
01:08:420 (1) - I'm kind of surprised you didn't opt for using 1/3 sliders in this section to follow the piano and instead go for the drums. Earlier in the song you would omit drum rhythms entirely to go for 1/4 sliders to map the piano. 00:47:120 (4,5,6) for example. So yh, would you consider 1/3 sliders for the piano
01:14:420 (2) - NC
01:15:020 (1,2) - These map a completely different sound to 01:14:420 (2,3) and they have much higher intensity so I would suggest doing something different, breaking the structure of the 2 prior sliders, changing flow, anything. When you play 01:14:420 (2,3,1,2) it feels off that the four sliders are clumped together in the same pattern when the sounds are completely different

[]I might come back later to mod the other diffs, GL!

yaspo

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249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-22T16:41:18+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Yaspo
00:08:420 (1) - Rhythmically, it would flow better to have a circle here and have this as an active beat. Also players won't suspect 00:08:120 (4) to have an extra reverse and hit the downbeat so it would feel very weird
00:09:920 (1) - ^ similar to the above
Both Fixed!
00:10:820 (2) and 00:13:220 (3) and 00:15:620 (2) 00:18:020 (3) and 00:19:070 (2) - would feel more natural and make more sense to have NCs on these beats since they are the predominant beats/sounds
All Fixed!
00:50:420 (1) - For the sake of the structure of the other sliders 00:49:520 (4,5,6) it would look better to have it moved further down and not overlap since it will keep the structure of the other objects https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7625121
While I would say that it is not a real structural problem (unique sound = unique look), it does look cleaner when it doesn't overlap as much. (and the flow change and size/shape of the slider already make it stand out, so that's fine) Fixed!
01:08:420 (1) - I'm kind of surprised you didn't opt for using 1/3 sliders in this section to follow the piano and instead go for the drums. Earlier in the song you would omit drum rhythms entirely to go for 1/4 sliders to map the piano. 00:47:120 (4,5,6) for example. So yh, would you consider 1/3 sliders for the piano
Oh welp, I never noticed that the piano sounds are in 1/3rd. I snapped the repeat sliders to the correct timing and changed the spacing accordingly.
As for rhythmical emphasis, I do feel that the drums are way more prominent than the piano in this section. Adding to that, the most important drum sounds also land on the white ticks. Therefore I focused on the strong percussion every beat. This also makes the new 1/3 rhythm easier to play (didn't want to focus on 1/3 rhythms in a lower difficulty of a mostly 1/4 map).
01:14:420 (2) - NC
Fixed!
01:15:020 (1,2) - These map a completely different sound to 01:14:420 (2,3) and they have much higher intensity so I would suggest doing something different, breaking the structure of the 2 prior sliders, changing flow, anything. When you play 01:14:420 (2,3,1,2) it feels off that the four sliders are clumped together in the same pattern when the sounds are completely different
Woops, accidentaly got rid of that through applying a different mod, Fixed!

I might come back later to mod the other diffs, GL!

Thanks for modding!

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-03-23T02:25:32+00:00

Overall from the mods you had a bunch of similar requests about the rhythm choices I made. Remember this is Normal diff so I'm making the rhythm as simple and tied down as possible.

00:28:820 (3,4) - I changed these as requested by Le Quack and Chawla but not in the Kiai. I feels these are rhythm patterns playable at normal. The reason why they looks so hard to play is because the of the BPM of the song which obviously speeds these rhythm patterns up. I think they are fine for the Kiai.

Thanks for finding those overlaps, all of them should be fixed now.

01:01:370 - From Chawla's mod, The rhythm I have here is fine imo. I chose not to use 1/2 in my diff

00:20:120 (3) - for skipping the rhythm here and all of the other same examples in this section,

Sorry timotania but I don't agree with any of the rhythm suggestions you made. Again I'm staying away from 1/2

Le Quack you make some good points about 01:21:770 - 1/2 sliders for parts like this but I just don't think it plays well with that rhythm for a Normal difficulty

Some remapped stuff because of rhythm issues but anyways, here you go ^_^

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2017-03-24T15:57:28+00:00

hello! for m4m.

[Eruption]

00:25:520 (3,4) - ctrl+g this is more fit with the song and plays better like you also did on 00:26:720 (6,7)
00:29:720 (1,2) - I think you missing finish on both of this.
00:32:420 (2) - ^
00:54:995 (6) - you add note here for some reason, imo remove it is more fit with the song and plays better like you did on all of previous pattern.
how about remove 00:55:895 (8,9,10) and make 00:55:820 (7) to 3/4 slider to divide the high pitch 00:55:445 (2,3,4,5,6,7) and low pitch 00:56:120 (11,12,13,14,1) part? there also have no beat on blue tick too (but have piano yes) so imo it will fit well like you did on 00:59:420 (1)
01:08:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about make their spacing decreasing per each to impress how the song continuous lowering something like this] apply on 01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) too if you agree.
01:15:020 (1) - add finish?
01:31:820 (5) - imo, this part is the peak part of the song. use this slow slider and skip the very strong beat on 01:32:495 to 01:32:645 is kinda not enough to impress the song. please reconsider about this o.o it's also a 6 star diff
01:33:545 (2) - how about replace with circle instead of 1/2 slider? I think leaving a break before the new rhythm part is pretty good too.

[SkyDevil]

00:06:020 (1) - no need to use less spacing just make them consistent or bigger than previous.
00:10:520 (3,4) - how about ctrl+g this and make a perfect square so it will looks beautiful and give more impact to next cymbal note with jump? It's an extra diff so I think it needs something more than this
00:22:820 (1,3) - blanket potential DX
00:46:820 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - how about adding some aesthetic? like curve slider and ctrl+c+v square.
01:16:220 (4,1) - this overlapped is not beautiful apply to other too.
01:19:520 till 01:31:220 - I think your mapping field is pretty limited itself around the center like this picture. try spread the note around the playfield?

to be a little honest, your diff doesn't have a problem about playibility, yes. I fced your diff when testplayed but the only thing I conecern is the aesthetic such as I mentioned above, blanket, overlapped and pattern. Just improving your aesthetic and the diff will be alright! it plays completely fine.

Good luck !

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-24T16:21:45+00:00

pan

00:25:520 (3,4) - ctrl+g this is more fit with the song and plays better like you also did on 00:26:720 (6,7) in this section im trying to map the drums
00:29:720 (1,2) - I think you missing finish on both of this. sure
00:32:420 (2) - ^ yes
00:54:995 (6) - you add note here for some reason, imo remove it is more fit with the song and plays better like you did on all of previous pattern. fixed
how about remove 00:55:895 (8,9,10) and make 00:55:820 (7) to 3/4 slider to divide the high pitch 00:55:445 (2,3,4,5,6,7) and low pitch 00:56:120 (11,12,13,14,1) part? there also have no beat on blue tick too (but have piano yes) so imo it will fit well like you did on 00:59:420 (1) since in this section im focusing on the piano i will keep the 1/4 but i increased the spacing for the high pitch
01:08:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about make their spacing decreasing per each to impress how the song continuous lowering something like this] apply on 01:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) too if you agree. i see why but im not sure how the aesthetics would work. emphesis wise i agree but im not sure how to do it in a way that id be satisfied with.
01:15:020 (1) - add finish? i dont think that fits here
01:31:820 (5) - imo, this part is the peak part of the song. use this slow slider and skip the very strong beat on 01:32:495 to 01:32:645 is kinda not enough to impress the song. please reconsider about this o.o it's also a 6 star diff i kinda disagree saying this is the peak. this feels more like a short pause before the rhythm gets technical and then the song goes into the peak. i think this slider reflects the song well
01:33:545 (2) - how about replace with circle instead of 1/2 slider? I think leaving a break before the new rhythm part is pretty good too. i think the sound is too long to just make it a slider. the 1/1 gap feels long enough in this break imo

thanks a lot! really good mod

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-24T18:48:36+00:00

P A N wrote:
hello! for m4m.

[SkyDevil]
00:06:020 (1) - no need to use less spacing just make them consistent or bigger than previous. oops
00:10:520 (3,4) - how about ctrl+g this and make a perfect square so it will looks beautiful and give more impact to next cymbal note with jump? It's an extra diff so I think it needs something more than this ehhh you're not the first one saying this so I'll change it
00:22:820 (1,3) - blanket potential DX I changed it
00:46:820 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - how about adding some aesthetic? like curve slider and ctrl+c+v square. I curved some sliders
01:16:220 (4,1) - this overlapped is not beautiful apply to other too. but I did this on purpose ;i I like it this way
01:19:520 till 01:31:220 - I think your mapping field is pretty limited itself around the center like this picture. try spread the note around the playfield? ehh isnt this more a thing you'll notice when editing and not when playing? If I'm gonna change the spacing of these parts I might as well remap them, which sounds like a hassle considering its not even that bad

to be a little honest, your diff doesn't have a problem about playibility, yes. I fced your diff when testplayed but the only thing I conecern is the aesthetic such as I mentioned above, blanket, overlapped and pattern. Just improving your aesthetic and the diff will be alright! it plays completely fine. ehhh sounds more like a difference in mapping taste xd forexample I do like 01:16:220 (4,1) - but you apparently don't, I do agree that some overlaps need some work but I dont want everything to be super extremly neat since its supposed to be a bit of a chaos
Good luck !

thank you for modd

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7ambda

2,560 posts

Joined January 2015

7ambda 2017-03-25T01:20:43+00:00

Found some backgrounds that you might be more interested in.

(1920x1200)

More vibrant version of the original (1920x1080)

Some other ones that only have a download link

https://suwalls.com/space/burning-sun-21944/
https://suwalls.com/space/burning-sun-21925/

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-03-25T03:41:17+00:00

wikipedia > FHD

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-03-25T04:34:13+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
[Kin's Hard]
00:24:170 (3) - I think it sounds better if you remove a clap from sliderend and put it on start of 00:24:470 (4) slider. The snare is here 00:24:320 -
01:44:570 (1) - This slider must end on 01:46:370 - because now it's not enough time to hit a 01:46:670 (1) circle i think. ye, fixed
OVERRALITY, REALLY GOOD DIFF. thanks!

hanif1711 wrote:
00:19:070 (4) - don't NC that Circle, it can make confused this NC is okay with the rythm change

LittleEndu wrote:
00:18:920 (3) - This doesn't fit. Everything else in this combo is following an instrument. this note 00:18:920 - is actually the same as this one 00:18:770 - ; but the volume of the instrument is a bit lower
00:28:520 (4) - Why is this here? there's some sound, that I really can't ignore
01:18:920 (3) - This also doesn't fit into the combo. there's nothing wrong about mapping a snare
01:37:220 (1) - I don't agree with this overmapping. This should not have reverse arrow, should be ctrl-G and moved in timeline instead. how can you even call this pattern overmapped ? I mean, the 2/3 sliders are REALLY on strong piano/drum. The spacing are not even high.

This is well mapped if only it wouldn't mix mapping different instruments in same combos or map difficult to hear instruments.

timotainia wrote:
00:05:570 (4) I think this slider moves way too fast for the user to understand it a 1/4 reverse slider isn't really hard to play. You just have to hold the note 1/2. I changed the angle of the slider. I found it quite weird.

00:10:520 (1) same here
00:15:170 (5) put a stream of 5 here instead like this: https://puu.sh/uQa4N/a2695799dd.png
also maybe you could end it on the slider like this: https://puu.sh/uQa85/0d6c910d74.png I'm mapping an Hard difficulty 200bpm, not an Insane

00:18:920 (3) remove this hitcircle as it doesn't fit to any sound in the music same as previous mod : this note 00:18:920 - is actually the same as this one 00:18:770 - ; but the volume of the instrument is a bit lower

00:28:745 (5) this doesn't need to be here it does really feel empty without it. Also, the drum kick is here

00:49:070 (6) make this the new combo instead of 00:49:070 (1) the NC on downbeat is way better

01:10:895 start the spinner on 01:10:895 and make sure to readjust it to end it on 01:13:370 wrong copy paste, but I know what you mean. Anyway, fixed!

01:25:970 (2) I know you are mapping to the background sound here but it would work much better if you mapped this to the foreground sound. The rest of this section of music has sounds where both the background and the foreground can be mapped as one but this one slider doesn't work with that the main melody would have a way too long slider ; that's why I only use a reverse 1/1 to reflect the long melody here : 01:25:220 (1) - ; & swapped here : 01:25:970 -

01:37:220 (1) the sound of this part starts part way through this slider. The slider head should be on 01:37:370 this whole part is really 2/3
may I suggest a pattern such as https://puu.sh/uQ9Ls/d190bd6bec.png or https://puu.sh/uQ9Nq/39d08ebdbf.png instead

LeQuack wrote:
01:10:670 (7) - Would look nicer if this overlapped with 01:09:620 (5) - pretty sure you mean stack, anyway, fixed stack!

thanks for mod!

update Hard

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75620
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Solar Storm
TitleUnicode:Solar Storm
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:sdafsf
Version:Kin's Hard
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:kin ora yaspo kenterz skydevil left bms evolved chronicles sdvx
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sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-25T08:17:18+00:00

F1r3tar wrote:
Found some backgrounds that you might be more interested in.

(1920x1200)
More vibrant version of the original (1920x1080)
Some other ones that only have a download link
https://suwalls.com/space/burning-sun-21944/
https://suwalls.com/space/burning-sun-21925/

holy shit thanks! i owe you pm me if you want a mod or something!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2017-03-25T15:15:28+00:00

Hey

[Hard]
00:05:570 (4) - Vu que t'utilises la symétrie ça rend mieux si tu le fais vertical non ?
01:01:220 (1) - Je vois pas d'intérêt à ce jump, ta difficulté utilise un spacing très constant entre les notes. De plus, pour que ça ait du sens il te faudrait faire un jump ici 01:02:120 (4,6,1,4) - etc

[Expert]
Pretty good stuff.
00:27:320 (1,2) - Use circles instead ? Those kicksliders feel intense for no reason and are consistent with your rhythm before.
00:28:070 (4) - This belongs to the same combo/group as 00:27:620 (1,2,3) -. I understand that you decreased spacing because of antiflow but it feels like you overdid it. Increase spacing a bit.
00:45:620 (1) - It's really minor but this is stacked with the reverse slider's tail while 00:43:220 (1,1) - are stacked with the reverse sliders' heads which is a bit inconsistent.
00:51:920 (2) - I don't think that such antiflow is necessary. It's really hard to play and doesn't really emphasize anything. Rotate the stream a bit.
00:57:320 (9) - I don't really get why you ignore the 1/4's here. They're pretty loud.
01:06:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is a bit disappointing... rhythm is a bit monotous and the song provides more than that, I'm sure that you can do much better. For example you emphasize those sounds at 01:05:420 (9,10) - and 01:07:820 (4,5) - but not at 01:06:920 (1) - .
01:31:145 (6,1) - It works better if you separate them a bit imo.
01:42:545 (3,4) - This could be mistaken for 1/2 because of that 01:42:170 (1,2) - . I think that you should unstack 01:42:545 (3,4) - these

Good luck !

GameIt

62 posts

Joined April 2014

GameIt 2017-03-25T16:25:52+00:00

im doing a mod, although keep in mind i have no modding experience, i'm just playing them through and pointing out anything i see immediately

Kin's Hard
01:37:220 (5) - it doesn't seem like there is any sound here, i think keeping it as a non-repeating slider would be better, like this https://gyazo.com/819ac8b0581cc7ab4263e5a20c69a592

yaspo's Light Insane
In general, I think there are too many repeating sliders to represent streams here. Although it is 200 bpm, a light insane should use one or two burst streams, probably to emphasize important 1/4th rhythms.
00:08:120 (4) - this slider has 3 repeats on it, while the others only have 2, makes it hard to read and broke my combo first time playing. I think leaving it with 2 repeats still works with the song
00:09:920 (1) - same problem as above, though i would make it a burst of 5
00:32:270 (2,3,4) - this is not stacked properly
00:51:920 (3) - starting here, the map gets far too rhythmically dense, especially when the kiai is far easier. I would try to, like before, make all repeating sliders here use the same number of repeats and also keep the 1/4 bursts fully visible, as in not buried under and between sliders like 00:52:220 (4,5,6,7,8).

yaspo

osu! Alumni

249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-25T18:55:40+00:00

727pp wrote:
yaspo's Light Insane
In general, I think there are too many repeating sliders to represent streams here. Although it is 200 bpm, a light insane should use one or two burst streams, probably to emphasize important 1/4th rhythms.
I agree, but I need to put some thought in how to fix it without breaking the map in terms of consistency. Working on it.
00:08:120 (4) - this slider has 3 repeats on it, while the others only have 2, makes it hard to read and broke my combo first time playing. I think leaving it with 2 repeats still works with the song
00:09:920 (1) - same problem as above, though i would make it a burst of 5
Both fixed.
00:32:270 (2,3,4) - this is not stacked properly
Fixed, will update once I revise rhythm density.
00:51:920 (3) - starting here, the map gets far too rhythmically dense, especially when the kiai is far easier. I would try to, like before, make all repeating sliders here use the same number of repeats and also keep the 1/4 bursts fully visible, as in not buried under and between sliders like 00:52:220 (4,5,6,7,8).
As said before, I'll look into fixing this. Though, it's important to realize that a big part of the kiai (especially the beginning) just isn't as rhythmically dense in the music as the section you mention. Undermapping the section you mentioned even more also feels like the wrong way to go here. I'll definitely work on putting more strain on the intenser sections of the kiai.

Thanks for modding!

7ambda

2,560 posts

Joined January 2015

7ambda 2017-03-26T03:32:47+00:00

[Easy]

00:02:420 (2,3,4) - Why does this look so bad?

[Ora's Normal]

00:20:120 (3) - Active sound is on red tick.

[SkyDevil's Extra]

This is more of an Another than Extra, lol.
00:15:620 (1,3) - nice blanket
00:24:320 (2,4) - Slight overlap is ugly.
01:07:520 (3) - Would look less randomly angled if you copied (2), then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J.

[Eruption]

01:13:520 (1) - Definitely sounds like it continues for one more repeat.
01:14:720 (1,2) - Why not swap these for clockwise flow?
01:33:545 (2) - Sounds like the active sound begins on the white tick, not blue. If you decide to change, you might as well space further away from (1) to indicate 1/1.
A spinner at the end would be nice since the music fades out.

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-26T04:08:26+00:00

F1r3tar

easy:
00:02:420 (2,3,4) - Why does this look so bad? adjusted slightly

Eruption
01:13:520 (1) - Definitely sounds like it continues for one more repeat. it does but this map shouldnt have 1/6 gaps
01:14:720 (1,2) - Why not swap these for clockwise flow? plays fine and there isnt room to change this anyways
01:33:545 (2) - Sounds like the active sound begins on the white tick, not blue. If you decide to change, you might as well space further away from (1) to indicate 1/1. ill just change it since it has been requested multiple times
A spinner at the end would be nice since the music fades out. dont think it fits

thanks!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-26T11:34:42+00:00

2lazy to properly reply but I changed the first two and didn't do the last one because I didn't think it looked that great

also it used to be a proper extra but my star rating had to be dropped to 5 lol, so maybe another is a better name for it

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thank you

Harmango

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Harmango 2017-03-28T18:42:49+00:00

Hey! M4M from PM.

[Easy]

00:03:620 (4) - Make this slider straight vertical to have a better patter? cause right now its bent to the right and it just looks odd
00:25:220 (1,2) - I would remove this overlap because 00:42:020 (1,2) - here you have no overlap and you're using the same patterns
00:42:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Nice blankets btw
00:49:820 (4) - Move this note a bit higher? may feel weird for new players to like move that far down
Overall the flow in the difficulty is pretty good

[Kin's Hard]

00:57:620 (1,2) - Stack these slider?
00:58:520 (4,1) - ^
01:39:920 (2) - Point the end of this slider a bit more lower, this would make the flow more circular
01:44:570 (1,1) - You could have the slider end off where the note currently is cause theres a solid beat there and would sound better.

[yaspo's Light Insane]

00:14:270 (4,5,6) - Have the 5 note where ur 6 note is and place the 6 note where the 5 was, I hope that made sense, it would help with ur flow

Not very good with high BPM songs, but I hope I helped Good luck on your map!

yaspo

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yaspo 2017-03-28T20:25:05+00:00

harmanjit102 wrote:
[yaspo's Light Insane]
00:14:270 (4,5,6) - Have the 5 note where ur 6 note is and place the 6 note where the 5 was, I hope that made sense, it would help with ur flow
I don't think swapping 5 and 6 changes a lot for the three notes you mentioned. It does, however, change a lot for 00:15:170 (7) - , which suddenly becomes much more awkward to hit. So I'd rather keep it this way than to remap parts for a single ctrl + g.

Thanks for modding!

-Keitaro

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-Keitaro 2017-04-03T13:36:31+00:00

reminder :3

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2017-04-09T17:47:20+00:00

[Yaspo's Insane]

Be careful with your mapping, you're really not using the full editor. You want your notes to cover all of the grid, you have all that space so use it.

You also should try to avoid unnecessary overlap unless its expressly purposeful. Try to make sliders have consistent angling.

Overall rhythms are fine, somethings i would change, but its playable and has decent logic behind flow.

00:06:020 (1) - might want to make the last beat clickable, then do a spinner.
00:01:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - this patterning is VERY cluttered, it might help to not overlap stuff so much.
00:11:420 (3,8,3) - You can see here how all of these sliders have different angles on the grid. Things would look more consistent if you make it so th
00:22:070 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - look at how cluttered and overlapping this pattern is, use more space to spread these things out
01:04:670 (2,3) - if you're going to do circular patterns, I suggest trying to make the sliders more visually flow together, imagine a curve running between these two, you can see it wouldn't rly be properly circular
01:16:670 (1) - i feel like these kinds of beats would be better suited as 1/1 sliders.

There's not really too much I can say because it really needs a remap with more use of editor space and more effort on how things look and coordinate with eachother.

yaspo

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yaspo 2017-04-10T11:40:55+00:00

Quick reply to quick mod.

Xexxar wrote:
[Yaspo's Insane]
Be careful with your mapping, you're really not using the full editor. You want your notes to cover all of the grid, you have all that space so use it.
You're right, I wasn't really paying attention to that at the time. Even so, I'd think this only forms a real problem when it really feels like the map is always in the same place. Which isn't the case at all here, the map moves around plenty. I'll keep this in mind while working on the other points, but I'm not going to remap to fix this.

You also should try to avoid unnecessary overlap unless its expressly purposeful. Try to make sliders have consistent angling.

Overall rhythms are fine, somethings i would change, but its playable and has decent logic behind flow.
Hearing that from a BN is pretty cool, seems like I managed to do what I wanted to do.

00:06:020 (1) - might want to make the last beat clickable, then do a spinner.
I prefer representing the whole sound through a spinner. I also think that adding an extra click before the spinner might make the transition to the spinner harder, which would be problematic as the spinner isn't very long. I'll keep this.
00:01:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - this patterning is VERY cluttered, it might help to not overlap stuff so much.
I don't see how exactly this being a bit 'cluttered' is a bad thing. Sure there is overlap, but there is a very specific pattern, so it shouldn't affect aesthethics or readability in a bad way. Will clean the pattern up a bit, but will mostly keep this.
00:11:420 (3,8,3) - You can see here how all of these sliders have different angles on the grid. Things would look more consistent if you make it so th
It's kinda hard to reply to an incomplete sentence, but I figure you meant that the sliders would fit better together or something. I'm not exactly going for something hypersymmetrical here, so I don't see much need to change it for that reason. I will keep this in mind while I work on reducing clutter overall, but it won't be my focus.
00:22:070 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - look at how cluttered and overlapping this pattern is, use more space to spread these things out
You're right, will work on fixing this.
01:04:670 (2,3) - if you're going to do circular patterns, I suggest trying to make the sliders more visually flow together, imagine a curve running between these two, you can see it wouldn't rly be properly circular
Yeah, I should really fix these.
01:16:670 (1) - i feel like these kinds of beats would be better suited as 1/1 sliders.
When this becomes a 1/1 slider, I couldn't have a clickable object here 01:16:970 (2) , which I do intend on keeping (as I am following the melody). A 1/2 slider could fit both our needs, but even that I wouldn't agree with. There is no held sound to be expressed, the sound on the note you point at is really short. As such, I will be keeping this.
There's not really too much I can say because it really needs a remap with more use of editor space and more effort on how things look and coordinate with eachother.
More effort on aesthethics? Sure, I'll look into it. That wasn't a strong focus initially as I was mostly making sure flow, rhythm and spacing worked out properly. Remap? No. I don't feel like your arguments warrant an entire remap, as most of the issues look like they can be fixed with a bit of change.

Thanks for modding!

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