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SkyDevil

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-14T17:22:51+00:00

I got lazy so I only answered on the things I didnt change/did something differently

Kroytz wrote:
SkyDevil
00:07:820 (1) - Since you subdivide this measure here, you could try to maybe change the direction of the next objects. I made a very loose mock-up but you get the idea
(ex) http://puu.sh/uH3ir/70e9ab3064.jpg I get what you mean, but I honestly don't think it'll change much in playability

00:08:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't try to enforce DS on repeating kicks because slider-leniency helps to add distance between them. I also don't think the layout of these sliders fair to the song all that well. You could try something like this since the piano goes down the scale
(ex) http://puu.sh/uH3qW/b96bcc75e1.jpg Changed a bit differently

00:10:820 (1) - It might look nice to make this curve and blanket (4) I like this currently better...

00:12:470 (2,3,4,5,1) - A tiny bit nazi but these spacing are also at odd angles its not noticeable when playing though, I like how it is currently

00:16:670 (1) - Could also blanket the (2) just using the angles not everything is a blanket > <

00:20:870 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Oh boy... This seems very problematic. I can't recommend an alternative but there are many ways to go about doing this, your way is REALLY intense for a section in the song that doesn't ask to be so intense. Lots of 1/2 circles and inconsistent spacing make this unintuitive to play with the song. Yeah I know,, I wasnt sure what to do with this part, I changed it a lot now

00:30:620 (9) - You could reduce the length of this by 1/4 or 2/4 and add a circle on the white tick. It's a clickable beat, would sound cool. idk why but I like it more when its just a slider only part

01:21:020 (4,1) - Overlap doesn't seem pleasant here. Meh ; ; I thought it would be fun to place them like this, I reallyyy want to keep them the way they currently are (also didnt change any of the other overlap suggestions because of that > <)

Diff started looking better later on but I'd make sure to be wary of what's being overlapped and what's not. To prevent unfavorable overlaps that might make some ruin on aesthetic. eh tbh most of the overlaps aren't that bothersome, it doesnt even feel bad when playing or something

thanks for mod

btw sdafsf don't forget to add my name to the tags (also yaspo, kenterz & left)

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-03-17T08:51:27+00:00

Q

[Eruption]
00:09:620 (1) - make jump like 00:09:020 (1,1) - ?
00:32:270 (1,2) - swap NC
01:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - make sliders like 00:28:820 (1,2,3,4,1) - .
01:08:520 - 01:08:820 - 01:09:120 - ... should be clickable.,
01:40:670 (4,1) - Hard to read this?

I'm poor at modding stream map,
GL

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-17T11:13:50+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
btw sdafsf don't forget to add my name to the tags (also yaspo, kenterz & left)

done

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-17T14:53:58+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Eruption]
00:09:620 (1) - make jump like 00:09:020 (1,1) - ? this is a different kind of emphesis.
00:32:270 (1,2) - swap NC removed nc here 00:32:120 (13) -
01:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - make sliders like 00:28:820 (1,2,3,4,1) - . i think the single circles fit the high pitch. the sliders fit the low pitch. just feels right imo
01:08:520 - 01:08:820 - 01:09:120 - ... should be clickable., ~~i think the build up is fine i get what you mean tho. ill think about it maybe ill change it~~ done
01:40:670 (4,1) - Hard to read this? dont think so

I'm poor at modding stream map,
GL

hi-mei

784 posts

Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-03-18T04:35:35+00:00

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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-03-18T09:42:14+00:00

Meme for meme

Yaspo's insane
00:30:020 (1) - Can try to use more mapping ideas than just 4x repeats, if you can.
00:31:820 (3) - Should map this part out to the large white tick
00:49:220 (1,2) - 00:51:620 (1,2) - 00:56:120 (3,1,2) - etc. Keep 1/2 gaps between circles and stuff either directly stacked or no overlap. Players generally read stuff as: Overlap - it's 1/4, No overlap - it's 1/2, It's directly stacked but waiting - it's 1/1
00:51:020 (2,1) - Same kinda thing, you often used 1/2 for this distance, difficult to see it's 1/1. Can just stack
Pishi explains this better than i do tbh. This part applies to the majority of your diff.
00:57:170 (1) - using more than 4x repeats is kind of iffy
oh wait you're Mo's other mentee, hi

Skydevil's extra
General for the opening section, probably rest of diff too: You're using a lot of different slider shapes, doesn't look too nice because the stuff is always changing. If you simplify the kinds of sliders you use, eg. changing curved 1/1 sliders so they have mostly the same curve, then it would look much better aesthetically. don't want to link pishi twice in a mod but his video on aesthetics covers this well.
00:10:670 (4,1) - Can increase spacing for emphasis
00:27:470 (5,1) - flow like this is a bit weird, see image. If you want to use angle to emphasise, it's not enough. Either create better flow by moving up/decreasing slider angle or moving up.

image

The bump between the two curves breaks flow, try and keep it round or sharp angled.

00:52:820 (1) - Slider ends pointing directly to the next object doesn't really work well, try changing things around.

yaspo

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yaspo 2017-03-18T11:12:16+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Meme for meme

Yaspo's insane
00:30:020 (1) - Can try to use more mapping ideas than just 4x repeats, if you can.
Not sure what other options I'd have outside of using 1/4th sliders or 1/4 circles, which I prefer not to use when there is nothing else to emphasize. Keeping this for now.
00:31:820 (3) - Should map this part out to the large white tick
Oh, I guess you were referring to the drums right before the break. Got lazy and never added them. Fixed!
00:49:220 (1,2) - 00:51:620 (1,2) - 00:56:120 (3,1,2) - etc. Keep 1/2 gaps between circles and stuff either directly stacked or no overlap. Players generally read stuff as: Overlap - it's 1/4, No overlap - it's 1/2, It's directly stacked but waiting - it's 1/1
Oh, you're right, I did mess up with that in some places. Fixed!
00:51:020 (2,1) - Same kinda thing, you often used 1/2 for this distance, difficult to see it's 1/1. Can just stack
I would have said that 1/1 gaps are easy enough to react to, but it does seem a bit awkward in this context now that I look at it. Fixed!
Pishi explains this better than i do tbh. This part applies to the majority of your diff.
00:57:170 (1) - using more than 4x repeats is kind of iffy
Turned it into 4x repeat and emphasized the percussion at the end with 1/4 circles. Fixed!
oh wait you're Mo's other mentee, hi
I am. Hi. Thanks for being my first mod ^^'

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SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-18T11:36:06+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Skydevil's extra
General for the opening section, probably rest of diff too: You're using a lot of different slider shapes, doesn't look too nice because the stuff is always changing. If you simplify the kinds of sliders you use, eg. changing curved 1/1 sliders so they have mostly the same curve, then it would look much better aesthetically. don't want to link pishi twice in a mod but his video on aesthetics covers this well. I honestly dont see the problem, I already think most sliders are boring as hell and changing it up even more will make it bland and boring... Imo it doesnt even play bad or anything and it doesnt look too terrible
00:10:670 (4,1) - Can increase spacing for emphasis Im going from a faster part to a slower part so increasing the spacing seems kinda weird I think
00:27:470 (5,1) - flow like this is a bit weird, see image. If you want to use angle to emphasise, it's not enough. Either create better flow by moving up/decreasing slider angle or moving up. I dont see the difference..
image
The bump between the two curves breaks flow, try and keep it round or sharp angled.
00:52:820 (1) - Slider ends pointing directly to the next object doesn't really work well, try changing things around. Im sorry but I dont really understand this one

uhhmm nothing changed sorry, still thanks for the mod

Hikan

430 posts

Joined February 2016

Hikan 2017-03-18T13:42:24+00:00

m4m return
widescreen support off? idk

Light In

00:05:120 (1,2,3) - these are overlapped with 00:04:370 (4) - , you may want to move it down
00:10:370 (1,2) - this flow is a bit uncomfortable with the light insane because the (1)'s direction is totally contrariwise with the rest (idk how to imagine sorry https://puu.sh/uOul0/51efe4d831.png ), you could ctrl g the (1), or put (2) in the opposite side, its up to you
00:15:170 (1,2) - ofc this too unless its intentional :d
too much this kind of pattern I dont want to point them out
00:44:870 (3,4) - symmetric would be better imo
00:51:020 (2) - urghh this is ugly tbh, please change it somehow
01:12:920 (4) - how did they recognize it during gameplay lol (I mean the reversing times of this slider is different with others, which you used most in the part). I prefer to put a twin there and the 1/4 reverse slider behind, like
01:13:520 (1) - 1/6 imo, 1/8 is too hype xd
01:16:220 (3,5) - overlapped, also 01:18:320 (2,5) - 01:27:620 (6,8) -
01:39:420 (3) - single circle really? Imo make this 01:39:020 (2) - become reverse slider is much more better

In

00:08:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hype
00:09:920 (10,1) - try swapping nc them, since 10 is a large number
00:42:020 - 00:46:520 - I dont really understand what you are following here. I feels awkward af while playing this part, find sth better to follow? owO
00:57:620 (1) - add it a bit curvy for a nicer aesthetic maybe
01:02:270 (2) - unstack plez. super hard to recognize it
01:13:520 (1) - yes, 1/6 I suppose
01:18:320 (2) - 128;51 for better symmetric
01:31:820 (4,5) - another symmetrical thing here would be better imo
01:40:370 (5,6,1) - same distance, different gap #feelsbadman

Eruption

00:10:370 (1) - have you ever try ctrl g this? I think that will be more comfortable also more fun to play
00:15:170 (1,1) - nc for what
00:18:920 - you missed a beat heree, unless its intentional I think you should fill that
00:19:970 (1,1) - I dont understand this pattern so bye :joy: :gun:
01:13:520 (1) - yes another, 1/6 I believe
01:14:720 (1,2) - parallel for better aesthetic?
01:26:420 (1,2) - This is completely the different sound, but you used the same slider to represent them. I know that you want to emphasis the stream behind, but at least change 1 of them to make it different each other, or you will be complained every mods xd
01:31:820 (5) - this shape seems not to fit the song, can you change its shape? Imo a wave would represent song well

thats all, good luck

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-18T13:51:06+00:00

hikan

00:10:370 (1) - have you ever try ctrl g this? I think that will be more comfortable also more fun to play it would defeat the purpose of what its supposed to feel like
00:15:170 (1,1) - nc for what the first one cus its a new set of sounds and the second one cus its a strong spacing change
00:18:920 - you missed a beat heree, unless its intentional I think you should fill that not mapping drums here
00:19:970 (1,1) - I dont understand this pattern so bye :joy: :gun:
01:13:520 (1) - yes another, 1/6 I believe good catch
01:14:720 (1,2) - parallel for better aesthetic? yes
01:26:420 (1,2) - This is completely the different sound, but you used the same slider to represent them. I know that you want to emphasis the stream behind, but at least change 1 of them to make it different each other, or you will be complained every mods xd good point
01:31:820 (5) - this shape seems not to fit the song, can you change its shape? Imo a wave would represent song well dunno i think it fits

thx!

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-18T13:54:40+00:00

Hikan wrote:
m4m return
widescreen support off? idk
uhh ill look

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2017-03-18T14:11:57+00:00

Hikan wrote:
In
00:08:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hype
00:09:920 (10,1) - try swapping nc them, since 10 is a large number
00:42:020 - 00:46:520 - I dont really understand what you are following here. I feels awkward af while playing this part, find sth better to follow? owO I follow a sound which is on every red tick, and except the 1/4 sounds (I don't follow them because it's an Insane), this is the loudest sound, so no changes :3
00:57:620 (1) - add it a bit curvy for a nicer aesthetic maybe
01:02:270 (2) - unstack plez. super hard to recognize it I don't think so, there's the approach-circle and still the circle appears before you have to click on it
01:13:520 (1) - yes, 1/6 I suppose
01:18:320 (2) - 128;51 for better symmetric
01:31:820 (4,5) - another symmetrical thing here would be better imo sounds are differents, so sliders are too
01:40:370 (5,6,1) - same distance, different gap #feelsbadman I don't think it's a problem, and since the song stops a bit, you slow down your movement too

Thanks :3

Here

yaspo

osu! Alumni

249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-18T15:18:40+00:00

Hikan wrote:
Light In
00:05:120 (1,2,3) - these are overlapped with 00:04:370 (4) - , you may want to move it down
Fixed
00:10:370 (1,2) - this flow is a bit uncomfortable with the light insane because the (1)'s direction is totally contrariwise with the rest (idk how to imagine sorry https://puu.sh/uOul0/51efe4d831.png ), you could ctrl g the (1), or put (2) in the opposite side, its up to you
00:15:170 (1,2) - ofc this too unless its intentional :d
too much this kind of pattern I dont want to point them out
I'll keep this. I can see what you mean, but players typically play sliders like these by staying in place. So, I don't see an issue with how I've used them.
00:44:870 (3,4) - symmetric would be better imo
Fixed
00:51:020 (2) - urghh this is ugly tbh, please change it somehow
Did a thing, I hope it worked.
01:12:920 (4) - how did they recognize it during gameplay lol (I mean the reversing times of this slider is different with others, which you used most in the part). I prefer to put a twin there and the 1/4 reverse slider behind, like
Haven't gotten anyone to playtest this, but I do agree with your argument and suggestion. Fixed
01:13:520 (1) - 1/6 imo, 1/8 is too hype xd
Lol yes, 1/8th seems to be a bit overdone. Fixed
01:16:220 (3,5) - overlapped, also 01:18:320 (2,5) - 01:27:620 (6,8) -
All fixed
01:39:420 (3) - single circle really? Imo make this 01:39:020 (2) - become reverse slider is much more better
Oh, don't know why a repeat slider didn't occur to me at the time. Fixed

Thanks for modding!

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Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2017-03-18T16:19:35+00:00

chicken 4 chicken from #chikenreqs
[General]

Remove "sound voltex" from tags, because you have it in source already.

[Easy]

00:03:620 (4) - I think this slider should be move a little to left, because you've made it non-symmetry with 00:02:420 (2,3), but for me it will be better if it's symmetrical. I know it can be really nazi point, but i really can catch it in-game, so...
00:04:820 (5) - I prefer to NC this, because from 00:05:420 is really strong part, but it will be unreadable for newbies if you put a NC to 00:05:720 (6).
00:05:720 (2,3) - You can make this blanket better if you move a circle to 130/285 and move a second slider node from slider to 79/206. Now you can look it's more polished.
00:26:270 (2) - It's really weird when you end this slider at blue tick especially when you have a slidertick on red tick. I think it's only a miss, so you can fix it easily.
01:14:420 (1,2) - I prefer to make here a repeated 1/1 slider, cause it's really calm part so nicer thing for me is a repeat here.
01:25:220 (1) - This object is is offscreen, which is unrankable, you must to move it a bit to up.
Img:
SPOILER
01:27:620 (4) - Another time when object is ending on blue tick ;-;.

[Ora's Normal]

00:28:820 (3,4,5) - I think this rhythm change is kinda hard for Normal diff, so i think better thing which you can make here is make repeat on 00:28:820 (3) and then put a 3/4 slider on 00:29:495.
00:52:220 (1) - This NC is unreasonable imo, because it's not a new part and really strong beat here.
01:01:370 - Why this sound's skipped, when you make an object on really quiet sound (i mean 01:01:520 (2)). I think it's better if you move 01:01:520 (2) to red tick.
01:02:420 (4) - Same as above (rest you should to find yourself)
01:42:620 (2,1) - Yea, it's kinda nazi thing, but you can stack this two cause this overlap now doesn't look fine tbh. Flow will be as good as now, because it's really little (only visual) change.

[Kin's Hard]

00:24:170 (3) - I think it sounds better if you remove a clap from sliderend and put it on start of 00:24:470 (4) slider.
01:44:570 (1) - This slider must end on 01:46:370 - because now it's not enough time to hit a 01:46:670 (1) circle i think.
OVERRALITY, REALLY GOOD DIFF.

[yaspo's Light Insane]

Good diff too!

Ok, this map is pretty

I'm so bad at modding, so you know...
GOOD LUCK!

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-18T16:35:14+00:00

chalwa

General
Remove "sound voltex" from tags, because you have it in source already. sure

Easy
00:03:620 (4) - I think this slider should be move a little to left, because you've made it non-symmetry with 00:02:420 (2,3), but for me it will be better if it's symmetrical. I know it can be really nazi point, but i really can catch it in-game, so... sure
00:04:820 (5) - I prefer to NC this, because from 00:05:420 is really strong part, but it will be unreadable for newbies if you put a NC to 00:05:720 (6). ok
00:05:720 (2,3) - You can make this blanket better if you move a circle to 130/285 and move a second slider node from slider to 79/206. Now you can look it's more polished. fixed with existing ones
00:26:270 (2) - It's really weird when you end this slider at blue tick especially when you have a slidertick on red tick. I think it's only a miss, so you can fix it easily. yea not on purpose
01:14:420 (1,2) - I prefer to make here a repeated 1/1 slider, cause it's really calm part so nicer thing for me is a repeat here. i tried to use circles since circles are easier for new players. also this is a new sound
01:25:220 (1) - This object is is offscreen, which is unrankable, you must to move it a bit to up. fixed
01:27:620 (4) - Another time when object is ending on blue tick ;-;. oops

Hythes

68 posts

Joined March 2016

Hythes 2017-03-19T09:57:25+00:00

Hope Cookiezi play this

Hythes

68 posts

Joined March 2016

Hythes 2017-03-19T10:39:53+00:00

Your map very good, until i don't know where i must mod it

Kin's Hard

00:19:070 (4) - don't NC that Circle, it can make confused

yaspo's Light Insane

00:29:720 (6,7) - this can make player got choked, if you mind move that two circle

Kenterz"s Insane

00:42:470 (5) - this slider not fit at the song, try make it stream
00:43:670 (3) - ^
00:44:870 (3) - ^
00:46:070 (3) - ^

SkyDevil's Extra

01:24:020 (1) - I think this slider can be changed to two circle, cuz the sound going hard at this time ( i don't know how to say it)

That's All! i think the other was good enough

Good Luck!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-19T11:33:08+00:00

2lazy to quote but I wont change it because its part of a pattern and I wanted to show the change in rhythm so I did it like this xd

yaspo

osu! Alumni

249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-19T11:55:28+00:00

hanif1711 wrote:
00:29:720 (6,7) - this can make player got choked, if you mind move that two circle
I assume you meant that the rhythm would be hard to read. Fixed!

Thanks for modding!

map

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75620
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70990,85220
DistanceSpacing: 5.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Solar Storm
TitleUnicode:Solar Storm
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:sdafsf
Version:yaspo's Light Insane
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:kin ora yaspo kenterz skydevil left bms evolved chronicles sound voltex sdvx
BeatmapID:1240063
BeatmapSetID:566408

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.7
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sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-19T14:01:38+00:00

hanif1711 wrote:
Hope Cookiezi play this

this is too easy lol

LittleEndu

17 posts

Joined January 2017

LittleEndu 2017-03-19T14:46:18+00:00

Quick mod. Hope it still helps with lower difficulties

Easy

01:16:820 (2) - This note is on silence.
01:19:220 (2) - 01:21:620 (2) - 01:24:020 (2) - These too.
There are two strong sound to click, one on red tick before and the other on red tick after.

Slider to hitcircle ratio is not good for easy difficulty.
Don't get me wrong, it's easy af (sightred SS) but sliders are confusing for beginners.
Convert some sliders to 1/2 or 1/1 streams.

Normal

01:01:220 (1) - This for sure is agaist ranking criteria.
Please don't do this. http://i.imgur.com/qb9GCba.png
You could use one of these instead (I like the 2nd one more): http://i.imgur.com/xn6gIkV.png

All strong sounds should have hit objects. Slider ends don't count.
Every slider that's longer than 5 1/2 ticks could be separated to slider + hitcircle.
edit to clarify: I mean five half ticks so anything over 5/2 in length seems too long for such fast song
This song just has that fast rhythm.

00:52:220 (1) - Why the NC?
These all are late: 00:20:120 (3) - 00:22:520 (4) - 00:27:320 (3) - 01:17:120 (4) - 01:19:520 (3) - 01:21:920 (4) - ...
Add circle here: 00:28:670 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/P7962la.png
And here: 01:23:870 (4) - 01:40:970 (2)

Hard

00:18:920 (3) - This doesn't fit. Everything else in this combo is following an instrument.
00:28:520 (4) - Why is this here?
01:18:920 (3) - This also doesn't fit into the combo.
01:37:220 (1) - I don't agree with this overmapping. This should not have reverse arrow, should be ctrl-G and moved in timeline instead.

This is well mapped if only it wouldn't mix mapping different instruments in same combos or map difficult to hear instruments.

And 6 digit pleb like me can't play more difficult maps

Last edited by LittleEndu 2017-03-19T16:32:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2017-03-19T15:21:40+00:00

hanif1711 wrote:
Your map very good, until i don't know where i must mod it
Kenterz"s Insane
00:42:470 (5) - this slider not fit at the song, try make it stream The fact is that I don't follow the stream but another sound every red tick, and it'd be weird to follow 2 different melodies at the same time :/
00:43:670 (3) - ^
00:44:870 (3) - ^
00:46:070 (3) - ^
That's All! i think the other was good enough

Good Luck!

Thanks for the mod though :3

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-19T15:53:27+00:00

LittleEndu wrote:
Quick mod. Hope it still helps with lower difficulties

Easy
01:16:820 (2) - This note is on silence.
01:19:220 (2) - 01:21:620 (2) - 01:24:020 (2) - These too. fixed the first 2 disagree with the 3rd there is a sound
There are two strong sound to click, one on red tick before and the other on red tick after.

Slider to hitcircle ratio is not good for easy difficulty.
Don't get me wrong, it's easy af (sightred SS) but sliders are confusing for beginners.
Convert some sliders to 1/2 or 1/1 streams. replaced the sliders you pointed out with circles. the map had more circles at first but the star rating was too high then. dunno ill see what others say at first. i know about the easy diff guidelines

And 6 digit pleb like me can't play more difficult maps

thanks!

Flufinn

73 posts

Joined September 2015

Flufinn 2017-03-19T16:14:31+00:00

hi! m4m from #modreqs

noticed there was a mod earlier that covered these same difficulties so sorry if I repeat anything

REMEMBER! THIS IS MY OPINION SO DON'T FEEL LIKE YOU HAVE TO AGREE WITH EVERYTHING!

General

apparently this is an issue

Easy

00:18:620 (2) move this to x=356 y=170 and rotate clockwise -1

00:20:420 (1,2,3) - 00:22:820 (1,2,3) - maybe the flow directions on these are a little complicated for an 'Easy' as (3) contradicts the movement of (1,2)

00:25:220 (1) bit of a strange overlap here but my suggestion for it is to move it to x=286 y=156

00:42:020 (1) - 00:48:920 (2) - Just wanted to say I like this part

01:33:020(4,1) fix the overlap with these sliders. changing 01:34:820 (1) might work better with a different shape after this change depending on the new shape of 01:33:620 (1).

Here's an example that I made: https://puu.sh/uQ7k2/f064165b33.png

01:41:420 (1) - curve this to line up with the upcoming 01:43:520(4)

for example, https://puu.sh/uQ7rk/245c2d7906.png

Ora's Normal

ok so for some reason I kept getting 100s everywhere on this map when I played through it on almost every hitcircle (but not sliders) I think they are all timed too late. for example, 00:20:120 (3) should be at 00:19:970 and so on

00:28:670 there should be a note here

00:41:720 00:41:870 is there any specific reason for the volume change on these 2 timing points?

01:01:220 (1,2,3,4,5) There are really strong sounds here and you are mapping the weak sounds in the backgroud. this needs to be changed. 01:07:820 (3) is a good example of how this section should be mapped.
01:03:620 (1,2,3,4,5) same here

01:16:970 there should be a hitobject here
01:19:370 and here

01:25:220 (1,2) having 2 sliders here doesn't really fit the sound being mapped. I suggest changing this to a single slider

01:30:020 (1,2,3) this section is unfitting for the music

mostly, stop switching between the instruments being mapped so much. I can see why you have done it in some cases but it happens too often and it is confusing.

everything else I want to say has been said by LittleEndu's mod.

tbh I'm not a big fan of this difficulty, I liked the Easy diff but this one seems kinda underwhelming :/ I think this difficulty should either be replaced or remapped in my opinion

Kin's Hard

00:05:570 (4) I think this slider moves way too fast for the user to understand it
00:10:520 (1) same here

00:15:170 (5) put a stream of 5 here instead like this: https://puu.sh/uQa4N/a2695799dd.png
also maybe you could end it on the slider like this: https://puu.sh/uQa85/0d6c910d74.png

00:18:920 (3) remove this hitcircle as it doesn't fit to any sound in the music

00:28:745 (5) this doesn't need to be here

00:49:070 (6) make this the new combo instead of 00:49:070 (1)

01:10:895 start the spinner on 01:10:895 and make sure to readjust it to end it on 01:13:370

01:25:970 (2) I know you are mapping to the background sound here but it would work much better if you mapped this to the foreground sound. The rest of this section of music has sounds where both the background and the foreground can be mapped as one but this one slider doesn't work with that

01:37:220 (1) the sound of this part starts part way through this slider. The slider head should be on 01:37:370
may I suggest a pattern such as https://puu.sh/uQ9Ls/d190bd6bec.png or https://puu.sh/uQ9Nq/39d08ebdbf.png instead

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MAP

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-19T16:23:36+00:00

timotainia wrote:
hi! m4m from #modreqs

noticed there was a mod earlier that covered these same difficulties so sorry if I repeat anything

REMEMBER! THIS IS MY OPINION SO DON'T FEEL LIKE YOU HAVE TO AGREE WITH EVERYTHING!

General
apparently this is an issue
Easy
00:18:620 (2) move this to x=356 y=170 and rotate clockwise -1 -2° actually. but i just slightly adjusted the position

00:20:420 (1,2,3) - 00:22:820 (1,2,3) - maybe the flow directions on these are a little complicated for an 'Easy' as (3) contradicts the movement of (1,2) hmm i think its fine because its a 3/2 gap

00:25:220 (1) bit of a strange overlap here but my suggestion for it is to move it to x=286 y=156 definetly not strange in my eyes

00:42:020 (1) - 00:48:920 (2) - Just wanted to say I like this part thx

01:33:020(4,1) fix the overlap with these sliders. changing 01:34:820 (1) might work better with a different shape after this change depending on the new shape of 01:33:620 (1). fixed

Here's an example that I made: https://puu.sh/uQ7k2/f064165b33.png

01:41:420 (1) - curve this to line up with the upcoming 01:43:520(4) sure

for example, https://puu.sh/uQ7rk/245c2d7906.png

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR MAP

thanks!

LeQuack

516 posts

Joined September 2015

LeQuack 2017-03-20T00:42:04+00:00

M4M

Easy

00:48:020 (2) - Very slight but if you ctrl+leftarrow twice the blanket looks nicer
01:36:170 - i would add a half slider here as it makes the transition from red to white tick easier (search "polarity" in the wiki for a better understanding of what i mean)

Ora's Normal

00:02:420 (3,2) - Overlap looks ugly, might have to mix this section around to avoid the overlap
00:25:220 (1) - I would extend this to the next red tick as currently new players will get caught off guard by the transition from white to red ticks (mentioned it in previous diff but search "polarity" in the wiki for a better understanding) Ending on the red tick follows the organ (i think) sound and makes it easier for new players to anticipate the start of the next slider
00:27:170 - Adding onto my previous point a 1/2 slider here would fit better than the note as it starts on the red tick, the 1/2 slider would also finish on the white tick allowing players to anticipate the start of the next combo
00:28:220 (2) - I would have this as just a note as there is no real impactful sound on the end of the slider
00:28:820 (3,4,5) - I know blue ticks are allowed in normal diffs but they should be avoided and i think for this diff a 3/2 repeat slider would do well here (starts at 00:28:820 - repeats at 00:29:270 - and ends at 00:29:720 - )
00:52:220 (1) - No need for an NC here
01:00:020 (2,3,4) - Same as before, 3/2 repeat would be better
01:17:120 (4) - Would start at 01:16:970 - for an easier gap for newer players (still should end where it currently does tho)
01:19:370 - 1/2 note slider like i've mentioned previously
01:19:820 (1) - Shouldn't be a repeat slider as 01:20:420 - is such a strong noise and should be clickable, just remove the repeat
01:20:420 - following on from that have a full note slider here
01:21:770 - 1/2 slider for reasons mentioned previously
01:24:020 (4,5,6) - 3/2 repeating for reasons mentioned above
01:33:620 (2,3,4) - ^
01:35:720 - Maybe a note here
01:41:120 (2) - I don't really see what this is following in the music, i would just have this set up like you have previously with these style of rhythms (but with the 1/2 sliders i have mentioned)
01:44:420 (1) - This should overlap the end of 01:42:620 (2) - ( If you are trying to go with a triangle with 01:43:220 (3,4,1) - then put notes at the ends of 01:42:620 (2) - and 01:43:220 (3) - copy and rotate 120 and then move accordingly, the spacing should be consistent)
01:46:670 (1) - would end at 01:48:920 - as that is where the sound stops

Kin's Hard

01:10:670 (7) - Would look nicer if this overlapped with 01:09:620 (5) -

yaspo's Light Insane

00:41:870 (1) - I think the sound on the big white tick is too important to be un-cliackable i suggest making this a stacked triple
00:51:020 (2) - Fix blanket with 00:50:420 (1) - the imperfect blanket can currently be noticed at a glance

Kenterz's Insane

00:14:570 (2) - Currently movement is awkward to this slider as 00:12:770 (4,5,6) - and 00:13:970 (2,1) - Indicate circular flow whilst this breaks that, i would suggest using ctrl-g to continue circular flow in this section
00:17:570 (4,6) - Ctrl-g these for easier movement from the slider (the movement right now is sharp and can be awkward to play)
00:56:420 (1,3) - Current overlap doesn't look to good, either have a perfect overlap or have the stream blanket the note, like you have done with previous stream
01:03:620 (1,2,3) - This sounds the same as 01:01:220 (1,2,3) - yet you have used a different amount of repeats, this can throw players off i would suggest either keeping the same amount of repeats as the previous pattern or having notes at the repeat slider that are part of the stream so players have an easier time understanding that this part is mapped differently from the similar sounding part previously
01:40:970 (1) - I would move this somewhere that doesn't overlap with previous sliders as you have associated this visual spacing with a 1/4 note gap (eg. 01:39:770 (2,3) - and 01:40:220 (4,5) - ) whilst this is a whole note gap
01:46:670 (1) - No need for NC at this point, players usually associate NC of this type with a different timing (Such as a 1/3 or 3/4 gap) so they may hit this note incorrectly

Skydevil's Extra

00:01:820 (5) - Make this spacing consistent with the rest of the stream as it currently doesn't look to good and the same patterns afterwards have consistent spacing
00:27:470 (5) - I would overlap this with the start of 00:26:870 (3) - as current movement from this to the slider makes it awkward for players to adjust to the movement of the slider
01:05:345 (6) - I would move this to x:134 y:125 so the movement from the (4) to thisstream is more naturally lead into the slider
01:13:120 (9,1) - Should be stacked as all previous gaps like this are and this may cause players to think they need to play the (1) later than where it currently is
01:21:020 (4,1) - I would ctrl-g these sliders (separately) so movement is easier and the change in direction of flow due to slider shape and direction is less awkward
01:37:820 (3) - I would NC this so players understand that each NC is for a new triplet
01:42:170 (1) - Blanket this better with the stream
01:44:420 (1) - Space this consistently like i mentioned in my first suggestion

Left's Expert

01:20:870 (4) - I think the end of this slider is too important be un-clickable i would suggest just having two notes
01:42:545 (3,4) - I would space these notes differently as the previous pattern has the same stack but it represents a different timing (a spacing ov .4x looked good to me

Good luck with this set

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-20T13:18:13+00:00

lequack (easy)

00:48:020 (2) - Very slight but if you ctrl+leftarrow twice the blanket looks nicer fixed
01:36:170 - i would add a half slider here as it makes the transition from red to white tick easier (search "polarity" in the wiki for a better understanding of what i mean) 1/2 slider would be too hard. i added a circle

thx!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-20T16:14:41+00:00

LeQuack wrote:
M4M
Skydevil's Extra
00:01:820 (5) - Make this spacing consistent with the rest of the stream as it currently doesn't look to good and the same patterns afterwards have consistent spacing oops fixed
00:27:470 (5) - I would overlap this with the start of 00:26:870 (3) - as current movement from this to the slider makes it awkward for players to adjust to the movement of the slider ehh it plays fine for me
01:05:345 (6) - I would move this to x:134 y:125 so the movement from the (4) to thisstream is more naturally lead into the slider that doesnt change anything lol... just looks a bit more wobbly which I dont really like
01:13:120 (9,1) - Should be stacked as all previous gaps like this are and this may cause players to think they need to play the (1) later than where it currently is Hmmm I might change it, but I initially wanted to space it out because the song suddenly goes quiet, but it kinda looks weird when I look at it again hmm
01:21:020 (4,1) - I would ctrl-g these sliders (separately) so movement is easier and the change in direction of flow due to slider shape and direction is less awkward but the triangles qq
01:37:820 (3) - I would NC this so players understand that each NC is for a new triplet eh sure
01:42:170 (1) - Blanket this better with the stream the line between (1) and (2) pierces right through the middle of (11) so its intended like this
01:44:420 (1) - Space this consistently like i mentioned in my first suggestion o oops

Good luck with this set

tyy for mod

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yaspo

osu! Alumni

249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-20T16:34:53+00:00

LeQuack wrote:
M4M

yaspo's Light Insane
00:41:870 (1) - I think the sound on the big white tick is too important to be un-clickable i suggest making this a stacked triple
While I can see what you mean, I didn't make this a triple for a few reasons. A triple right after such a long break might be a bit sudden. A triple also doesn't really fit into the section following it, which mostly consists out of sliders. So, I'll keep this as a repeat slider.
00:51:020 (2) - Fix blanket with 00:50:420 (1) - the imperfect blanket can currently be noticed at a glance
I think I fixed it

Good luck with this set

Thanks for modding!

map

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 75620
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Title:Solar Storm
TitleUnicode:Solar Storm
Artist:xi
ArtistUnicode:xi
Creator:sdafsf
Version:yaspo's Light Insane
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:kin ora yaspo kenterz skydevil left bms evolved chronicles sound voltex sdvx
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Planecakes

271 posts

Joined August 2015

Planecakes 2017-03-20T16:48:18+00:00

M4M stuff

Eruption

00:22:520 (3,4,1) - Improve flow
01:13:220 (1) - I would this circle a little bit up
01:03:020 (1,2) - decrease spacing?
01:06:920 (1,2) - increase spacing
01:08:120 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - easier to read circle timing change if you do it like this

click here

01:21:170 (5) - improve flow by moving the slider left

Left's Expert

00:26:870 (4) - looks better right?

click here

01:37:220 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woa that's fast
01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...

SkyDevil's Extra

00:07:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate overlaps like this aaa
00:10:220 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this
00:23:720 (5) - move a little bit right
00:27:470 (5,1) - This flow is killing me
01:26:120 (5,1) - no
01:39:620 (1,2,3) - bad flow aaa

Kenterz's Insane

00:44:420 (1) - move a little bit left
00:50:420 (1) - You could improve your slider art tho
01:31:745 (3,4) - I want spacing here

xi is good stuff and gl with your map

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-20T17:09:38+00:00

mari ohara

00:22:520 (3,4,1) - Improve flow seems fine
01:13:220 (1) - I would this circle a little bit up its a blanket and flows fine
01:03:020 (1,2) - decrease spacing? sure
01:06:920 (1,2) - increase spacing this is fine imo
01:08:120 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - easier to read circle timing change if you do it like this id consider this but im more afraid of too high spacing than readablity on this. misreading this would lead to acc drop at worst
01:21:170 (5) - improve flow by moving the slider left good point

THX!

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-03-20T21:49:16+00:00

Mari Ohara wrote:
M4M stuff

SkyDevil's Extra
00:07:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I hate overlaps like this aaa thats cool but if I didnt like this I wouldnt have made it xd
00:10:220 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this I do like this
00:23:720 (5) - move a little bit right ehh why not
00:27:470 (5,1) - This flow is killing me I swear a lot of people have been mentioning it and I don't understand the problem but I changed it now then
01:26:120 (5,1) - no you're not being very helpful here lol
01:39:620 (1,2,3) - bad flow aaa Feels fine imo, it doesn't break the flow that badly

thanks

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hi-mei

784 posts

Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-03-20T22:32:47+00:00

hello, since i got rsi i cant play more than 5~ mins per day till my hands starts to hurt

so ill be miodding till it wont annoy me

eruption:
00:03:620 (1,2) - i dont think the stack here is necessary, basically it breaks ur structure that u started to follow before this place

i think the stream shud be starting from 00:06:620 - place, according to the music. the pitch starting 00:06:620 - but not 00:07:220 - here
00:10:595 - i think this place is underemapped for 6*, yoiu got 2 tangible sounds to map 00:10:595 - and 00:10:670 - especially
00:12:470 (4,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/uS8Kc/ea3f9d81bb.jpg u got the idea right, x/y linear stuff, dont forget to calculate the distance between 00:12:770 (1,3) - to fit the 00:12:920 (2) - between them, same goes for 00:13:220 (1,2) -
00:18:920 - why didnt u map this?
00:21:320 (5,6,1) - ok quick tip here, dont do stuff like that, just stack them and stacking leniency will do the job for u. dont rush urself to make stuff that looks ugly.
00:22:370 (1,2,3) - same goes for thiis
00:23:720 (1,2,3) - ^ etc
00:28:820 (1) - this thing is different from 00:29:045 (2,3,4) - sound wise, so i guess u shud change the shape of 1st one
00:39:020 - fix the border, drag it to the spinner
ok so next up are streams:
i dont like the way you did them, example:
00:42:620 - is a pitch and the sound goes down after that, instead you are ignoring it to keep the smooth shape, which is uh... not that hard you know
dont be lazy and make it in accord to music
00:43:820 - ^
00:45:020 - kinda nice
00:46:220 - ;w;
00:51:620 (1,2) - are they that strong to use 3.25x ds? i guess no
00:55:820 (6) - its a pitch, the stream way should be changing here
00:57:845 (6) - nc like u did 01:08:520 (1) -
01:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - they are much stronger that the place i showed above 00:51:620 (1,2) - i think u shud add more spacing here
01:04:070 - pitch, please change this stream
01:13:220 (1) - i dont think that such ds shud be applied here, just make it a bit lower
01:14:720 (1) - wrong snapped slider, s-end shud be 01:14:795 -
01:31:820 (5,1) - are u sure ds here shud be 0.51?
01:33:545 (2) - shud be ending on 01:33:770 - i guess
and make them 01:33:320 (1,2) - closer plz
01:35:870 (8,1) - stack, if u want to surprise player, which is the case here i think
01:45:620 - same issue in regards of streams i mentioned above

left's expert:
nice diff
i think u can add revers wiggling slider 01:13:520 - here
01:32:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont really understand why u ignored the melody here, 01:32:720 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is way different form 01:32:420 (1,2,3,4) -
alright im done
thats it, gl

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-20T23:49:12+00:00

himei

eruption:
00:03:620 (1,2) - i dont think the stack here is necessary, basically it breaks ur structure that u started to follow before this place think its fine

THX!

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-21T14:40:40+00:00

-himei wrote:
hello, since i got rsi i cant play more than 5~ mins per day till my hands starts to hurt

left's expert:
nice diff
i think u can add revers wiggling slider 01:13:520 - here so small sound
01:32:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont really understand why u ignored the melody here, 01:32:720 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - is way different form 01:32:420 (1,2,3,4) - maybe can consider it, but no problem with now i think
alright im done
thats it, gl

thx for mod~

Kroytz wrote:
mod

Left
00:13:220 (1,2,3) - So like these three are visually and rhythmically 1/1 apart but then like 00:15:920 (1,2,3) - and 00:11:120 (1,2,3) - aren't. antijump

00:18:020 (1,2,1) - Also kinda weirdly spaced with how you mapped previous ones.

00:44:420 (1) - Why not keep this as straight slider? doesn't need to be exactly overlapped, could be anti-jump'ed as an aesthetic but curve slider makes the linear triangle stand out kinda weird. agree fixed

00:45:620 (1) - Here is okay since it does a different purpose but linear slider could also be used to keep a bit of structure with the angles.

01:25:220 (1) - oh no... this isn't worth the undermapping Left ;___; showed that high sound

01:30:920 (5,6,1) - It's a bit hard at first sight to see that there is a surprise 1/4 beat in all of this. The distance between each other is really large.many examples in other maps

01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is so cool <33 xD

01:46:520 (5) - might be possible to NC this.consider it

Really nice map as always Left~

Really nice diff, hope so see it ranked ^^[/box]

thx for mod!

LeQuack wrote:
M4M

Left's Expert
01:20:870 (4) - I think the end of this slider is too important be un-clickable i would suggest just having two notes bass mapped
01:42:545 (3,4) - I would space these notes differently as the previous pattern has the same stack but it represents a different timing (a spacing ov .4x looked good to me no problem with now i think

Good luck with this set

thx for mod~

Mari Ohara wrote:
M4M stuff

Left's Expert
00:26:870 (4) - looks better right?
click here
ehh i like my one
01:37:220 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - woa that's fast yea
01:38:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...

xi is good stuff and gl with your map

thx for mod!

Left

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Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-03-21T20:22:42+00:00

Free mod for your erupting difficulty.

[

Eruption]

00:01:820 (1,2) - Could do kickslider stuff for emphasis on 1 and 2 both rather than just 2. Might lower rhythm density though so up to you. Personally I just think that it would be cool for 1 to also get some.
00:10:520 (2) - I hear this skips a triple on 00:10:670, what you could do is shorten the slider one tick and map a note at 00:10:745 - for a slider end triple to catch it.
00:12:770 (1,2,3,1,2) - Could tidy this up a bit unless it's intentionally off for emphasis.
00:18:020 (1,2,3,1) - Preference but since you made 00:17:570 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle and 00:18:020 (1) - feels like it should fit in there as hex, maybe try to hex all of it? Again it's preference tbh.
00:18:920 - This is really noticeable and is being skipped with you could have a lot of emphasis on the 00:19:070 (2) - depending on how you use it.
00:25:220 (5,7) - Have weird emphasis, 5 is stronger and has a finish on it, yet is lower spacing than the 7. Also you could NC 5 but that's also preference.
00:25:520 (7,8) - You could ctrl+g this since the red tick slider seems like it isn't following anything in particular.
00:39:020 - Could remove break extension cuz in-game it felt kinda weird having the bg dim for so long before anything appears.
00:53:645 (6,7) - This flow really tripped me up, maybe cuz I'm bad but it's really awkward to play. Maybe this would work but it's more comfortable than what you might be going for. Tbh, it shouldn't be too uncomfortable because the sounds aren't really doing anything to warrant any extra emphasis within this phrase.
00:54:395 - Skipping a beat here you could map with 00:54:320 (3) - as a kickslider.
00:55:220 (1) - Skipping what seems to be a snare on the red with this extended slider. Up to you if you want to keep it but I personally would shorten the slider and make a slider end stream from here (as much as I hate those it does fit here)
00:58:145 (8,9) - Could make this slightly more comfortable and less wew to play if you did this instead.
00:58:820 (13,1) - This could be a slider to capture the held piano note here, and might transition a bit better.
01:08:420 (7,1,2) - Ask for opinions on this polarity change. To me it looks weird, but I can't play this so take that with a grain of salt lol.
01:12:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - From here on it gets a little excessively hard to hit these with the flow used. 01:12:420 (1,2,3) - Is like reverse circular so it's really hard to hit this one and they don't flow intuitively into each other (which isn't bad just plays really difficult)
01:16:595 - Skipping more noticeable beats you could stack on slider heads so that it still plays fine imo.
01:24:920 (5) - Tbh seems like it should be circles cuz it's like a transition thing and it's kinda lackluster if you just map a kickslider here.
01:25:220 (3,4,5,6) - Why follow the really boring drums when theres the DO DO DODO DOO DOO DOO thing in the back (idfk what it is)
01:28:220 (1) - Could be a kickslider for that extra movement into 2 which could be a bit cooler to play.
01:30:920 (5) - Starting using a kickslider here is a bit weird because when the really crazy stuff happens you don't really get emphasis on it since the rhythm is the same. I would do this to really highlight the higher pitches in the synth thing.
01:33:545 (2) - This is weird because it sounds to me like it should be this instead because that gap even musically doesn't really make sense.
01:34:670 (3) - Could be kickslider to catch that really high-pitched synth that kinda just gets ignored with a circle.
01:35:420 (5) - Slider end stream is pretty fitting here tbh, could do it since the synth thing starts on the blue tick the slider ends on. If you want more clicks that is. Same for 01:40:220 (1,2,3,4).
01:36:470 (1) - There's nothing actually here, you could make 01:36:320 (2) - a 1/2 slider instead to lead into this stream with another slider end (yay more of them)
01:37:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Increasing spacing here would be cool since the sounds get more intense over time.
01:45:470 (3,4) - This could be a kickslider instead because 01:45:620 (1) - is a really strong high-pitched note that could be emphasized with a lot more movement. The other sounds that were strong in this stream were already emphasized with direction changes, a more powerful sound such as this deserves a jump of some sort at least to me personally.

Modded as I'm breaking down so feel free to redwall. d

Good luck.~

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

sdafsf 2017-03-21T20:58:39+00:00

Mir wrote:
Free mod for your erupting difficulty.

[ Eruption]
00:01:820 (1,2) - Could do kickslider stuff for emphasis on 1 and 2 both rather than just 2. Might lower rhythm density though so up to you. Personally I just think that it would be cool for 1 to also get some. i get your point but i think this isnt wrong rn and i wanna keep it

00:10:520 (2) - I hear this skips a triple on 00:10:670, what you could do is shorten the slider one tick and map a note at 00:10:745 - for a slider end triple to catch it. you hear it when you slow down but at full speed it sounds like one continous sound to me. i dont think its appropriate to map it

00:12:770 (1,2,3,1,2) - Could tidy this up a bit unless it's intentionally off for emphasis. its emphesis. i felt like it wasnt strong enough when i made it perfect

00:18:020 (1,2,3,1) - Preference but since you made 00:17:570 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle and 00:18:020 (1) - feels like it should fit in there as hex, maybe try to hex all of it? Again it's preference tbh. i think the timing distance is big enough to allow the overlap of 2 and 1. im more of a pattern than a grid guy

00:18:920 - This is really noticeable and is being skipped with you could have a lot of emphasis on the 00:19:070 (2) - depending on how you use it. im not mapping the drums here. since im focusing on the melody here it would seem out of place imo

00:25:220 (5,7) - Have weird emphasis, 5 is stronger and has a finish on it, yet is lower spacing than the 7. Also you could NC 5 but that's also preference. changed the pattern

00:25:520 (7,8) - You could ctrl+g this since the red tick slider seems like it isn't following anything in particular. its following the drums. there is no drum on its end

00:39:020 - Could remove break extension cuz in-game it felt kinda weird having the bg dim for so long before anything appears. wasnt even on purpose lol

00:53:645 (6,7) - This flow really tripped me up, maybe cuz I'm bad but it's really awkward to play. Maybe this would work but it's more comfortable than what you might be going for. Tbh, it shouldn't be too uncomfortable because the sounds aren't really doing anything to warrant any extra emphasis within this phrase. changed

00:54:395 - Skipping a beat here you could map with 00:54:320 (3) - as a kickslider. the stop motion helps emphesising 00:54:620 (3) -

00:55:220 (1) - Skipping what seems to be a snare on the red with this extended slider. Up to you if you want to keep it but I personally would shorten the slider and make a slider end stream from here (as much as I hate those it does fit here) added a beat

00:58:145 (8,9) - Could make this slightly more comfortable and less wew to play if you did this instead. i guess

00:58:820 (13,1) - This could be a slider to capture the held piano note here, and might transition a bit better. the following stream sounds completely new so i think the stop motion is supporting the music really well here

01:08:420 (7,1,2) - Ask for opinions on this polarity change. To me it looks weird, but I can't play this so take that with a grain of salt lol. ask whom T_T

01:12:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - From here on it gets a little excessively hard to hit these with the flow used. 01:12:420 (1,2,3) - Is like reverse circular so it's really hard to hit this one and they don't flow intuitively into each other (which isn't bad just plays really difficult) dunno i wanna keep for now im still gathering opinions on this section. really glad for this input tho

01:16:595 - Skipping more noticeable beats you could stack on slider heads so that it still plays fine imo. sure

01:24:920 (5) - Tbh seems like it should be circles cuz it's like a transition thing and it's kinda lackluster if you just map a kickslider here. sure

01:25:220 (3,4,5,6) - Why follow the really boring drums when theres the DO DO DODO DOO DOO DOO thing in the back (idfk what it is) i feel its fits the long noice i nthe background and leads well into the following patterns

01:28:220 (1) - Could be a kickslider for that extra movement into 2 which could be a bit cooler to play. i prefer this

01:30:920 (5) - Starting using a kickslider here is a bit weird because when the really crazy stuff happens you don't really get emphasis on it since the rhythm is the same. I would do this to really highlight the higher pitches in the synth thing. i find this very fitting

01:33:545 (2) - This is weird because it sounds to me like it should be this instead because that gap even musically doesn't really make sense. ireally dont know what yukiyo and you are hearing here

01:34:670 (3) - Could be kickslider to catch that really high-pitched synth that kinda just gets ignored with a circle. sure

01:35:420 (5) - Slider end stream is pretty fitting here tbh, could do it since the synth thing starts on the blue tick the slider ends on. If you want more clicks that is. Same for 01:40:220 (1,2,3,4). sure

01:36:470 (1) - There's nothing actually here, you could make 01:36:320 (2) - a 1/2 slider instead to lead into this stream with another slider end (yay more of them) the sound is there. its just fading in. if you try to tap what you are hearing in slow motion here you will notice its 10 beats. 9 doesnt fit well

01:37:420 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Increasing spacing here would be cool since the sounds get more intense over time. i dont hear this increase

01:45:470 (3,4) - This could be a kickslider instead because 01:45:620 (1) - is a really strong high-pitched note that could be emphasized with a lot more movement. The other sounds that were strong in this stream were already emphasized with direction changes, a more powerful sound such as this deserves a jump of some sort at least to me personally.sure

Modded as I'm breaking down so feel free to redwall. d get redwalled xd

Good luck.~

THANKS!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-03-22T01:08:12+00:00

Yaspo

00:08:420 (1) - Rhythmically, it would flow better to have a circle here and have this as an active beat. Also players won't suspect 00:08:120 (4) to have an extra reverse and hit the downbeat so it would feel very weird
00:09:920 (1) - ^ similar to the above
00:10:820 (2) and 00:13:220 (3) and 00:15:620 (2) 00:18:020 (3) and 00:19:070 (2) - would feel more natural and make more sense to have NCs on these beats since they are the predominant beats/sounds
00:50:420 (1) - For the sake of the structure of the other sliders 00:49:520 (4,5,6) it would look better to have it moved further down and not overlap since it will keep the structure of the other objects https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7625121
01:08:420 (1) - I'm kind of surprised you didn't opt for using 1/3 sliders in this section to follow the piano and instead go for the drums. Earlier in the song you would omit drum rhythms entirely to go for 1/4 sliders to map the piano. 00:47:120 (4,5,6) for example. So yh, would you consider 1/3 sliders for the piano
01:14:420 (2) - NC
01:15:020 (1,2) - These map a completely different sound to 01:14:420 (2,3) and they have much higher intensity so I would suggest doing something different, breaking the structure of the 2 prior sliders, changing flow, anything. When you play 01:14:420 (2,3,1,2) it feels off that the four sliders are clumped together in the same pattern when the sounds are completely different

[]I might come back later to mod the other diffs, GL!

yaspo

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249 posts

Joined September 2014

yaspo 2017-03-22T16:41:18+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Yaspo
00:08:420 (1) - Rhythmically, it would flow better to have a circle here and have this as an active beat. Also players won't suspect 00:08:120 (4) to have an extra reverse and hit the downbeat so it would feel very weird
00:09:920 (1) - ^ similar to the above
Both Fixed!
00:10:820 (2) and 00:13:220 (3) and 00:15:620 (2) 00:18:020 (3) and 00:19:070 (2) - would feel more natural and make more sense to have NCs on these beats since they are the predominant beats/sounds
All Fixed!
00:50:420 (1) - For the sake of the structure of the other sliders 00:49:520 (4,5,6) it would look better to have it moved further down and not overlap since it will keep the structure of the other objects https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7625121
While I would say that it is not a real structural problem (unique sound = unique look), it does look cleaner when it doesn't overlap as much. (and the flow change and size/shape of the slider already make it stand out, so that's fine) Fixed!
01:08:420 (1) - I'm kind of surprised you didn't opt for using 1/3 sliders in this section to follow the piano and instead go for the drums. Earlier in the song you would omit drum rhythms entirely to go for 1/4 sliders to map the piano. 00:47:120 (4,5,6) for example. So yh, would you consider 1/3 sliders for the piano
Oh welp, I never noticed that the piano sounds are in 1/3rd. I snapped the repeat sliders to the correct timing and changed the spacing accordingly.
As for rhythmical emphasis, I do feel that the drums are way more prominent than the piano in this section. Adding to that, the most important drum sounds also land on the white ticks. Therefore I focused on the strong percussion every beat. This also makes the new 1/3 rhythm easier to play (didn't want to focus on 1/3 rhythms in a lower difficulty of a mostly 1/4 map).
01:14:420 (2) - NC
Fixed!
01:15:020 (1,2) - These map a completely different sound to 01:14:420 (2,3) and they have much higher intensity so I would suggest doing something different, breaking the structure of the 2 prior sliders, changing flow, anything. When you play 01:14:420 (2,3,1,2) it feels off that the four sliders are clumped together in the same pattern when the sounds are completely different
Woops, accidentaly got rid of that through applying a different mod, Fixed!

I might come back later to mod the other diffs, GL!

Thanks for modding!

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-03-23T02:25:32+00:00

Overall from the mods you had a bunch of similar requests about the rhythm choices I made. Remember this is Normal diff so I'm making the rhythm as simple and tied down as possible.

00:28:820 (3,4) - I changed these as requested by Le Quack and Chawla but not in the Kiai. I feels these are rhythm patterns playable at normal. The reason why they looks so hard to play is because the of the BPM of the song which obviously speeds these rhythm patterns up. I think they are fine for the Kiai.

Thanks for finding those overlaps, all of them should be fixed now.

01:01:370 - From Chawla's mod, The rhythm I have here is fine imo. I chose not to use 1/2 in my diff

00:20:120 (3) - for skipping the rhythm here and all of the other same examples in this section,

Sorry timotania but I don't agree with any of the rhythm suggestions you made. Again I'm staying away from 1/2

Le Quack you make some good points about 01:21:770 - 1/2 sliders for parts like this but I just don't think it plays well with that rhythm for a Normal difficulty

Some remapped stuff because of rhythm issues but anyways, here you go ^_^

osu file format v14

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355,328,82220,2,0,P|314:334|253:311,1,79.9999999999999
319,239,82820,5,0,0:0:0:0:
277,152,83120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,130,83420,2,0,P|132:135|95:149,1,79.9999999999999
146,231,84020,2,0,P|161:273|163:299,1,59.9999999999999
113,340,84470,2,0,P|69:331|45:320,1,59.9999999999999
35,256,84920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,167,85220,6,0,P|86:117|84:68,1,79.9999999999999
179,60,85820,2,0,P|214:97|258:120,1,79.9999999999999
330,139,86420,2,0,P|381:140|428:125,1,79.9999999999999
498,99,87020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,38,87320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,133,87620,6,0,P|404:173|403:227,1,79.9999999999999
311,240,88220,2,0,P|315:200|316:146,1,79.9999999999999
227,124,88820,2,0,P|223:164|222:218,1,79.9999999999999
133,232,89420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,141,89720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,215,90020,6,0,P|55:289|136:329,1,160
133,232,90920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,91220,2,0,P|264:154|361:230,1,160
265,249,92120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,92420,6,0,B|153:120|84:147|84:147|83:79|166:46,1,240
228,36,93620,2,0,L|299:42,1,59.9999999999999
354,68,94070,2,0,L|425:62,1,59.9999999999999
478,30,94520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
506,121,94820,6,0,B|504:174|504:174|486:237|486:237|481:308,1,160
365,361,95870,2,0,P|353:304|345:228,1,120
373,149,96620,2,0,P|328:146|289:162,1,79.9999999999999
154,234,97420,6,0,P|127:238|93:236,2,53.3333333333333
204,272,98020,2,0,P|208:299|206:333,2,53.3333333333333
242,222,98620,2,0,P|269:218|303:220,2,53.3333333333333
192,184,99220,2,0,P|188:157|190:123,2,53.3333333333333
336,311,100220,6,0,P|401:306|454:295,1,120
508,161,101120,2,0,P|461:162|414:155,1,79.9999999999999
332,142,101720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,98,102020,6,0,P|238:159|248:197,1,79.9999999999999
158,225,102620,2,0,P|109:187|71:177,1,79.9999999999999
92,85,103220,2,0,P|148:61|176:33,2,79.9999999999999,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
8,133,104120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,181,104420,6,0,P|109:238|34:331,1,160
14,236,105320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,181,105620,2,0,B|145:157|203:180|203:180|268:205|344:173,1,240
256,192,106670,12,0,109220,0:0:0:0:

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