[General]
The pacing of the first two breaks left me kind of bored. You play for a little, then have a 10 second break, then play for 20 seconds, the break for another 10 seconds.
02:36:881 - Get the same feeling during this section
The 1.5x sections never feel... right to me either. The intensity of the song doesn't really change enough to justify such a large increase, imo.
[All difficulties]
00:51:272 (1) - I'm not feeling why the break is extended to the next beat on this spinner.
..though it seems to be applied to the majority of your breaks. There a reasoning behind it? If not, just move it back to default please.
01:53:832 (1) - Finish placement is odd since there's a crash in the music a beat later.
[Easy]
02:09:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda iffy on these for an Easy - especially with now the rest of the map is paced up until now.
02:27:369 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - And especially these - might be more appropriate for a Normal.
02:50:825 (4) - Might be better to have this end with a soft hit. That or have it end at 02:52:776 -
02:55:808 (1,2,1) - Eeh. I really don't recommend stacking under slider ends - especially with a 1/4 rhythm like this that hasn't really come up at all in the map until now. Not very noob-friendly.
03:12:890 (3) - This beat doesn't fit so much and got me off rhythmically for the next set of three. Might be better to delete this
03:23:278 (4,1) - Spacing (due to sv change)
[Normal]
00:29:824 (1,2,3) - This pattern didn't flow so well to me. The 1 slider is pretty much covered by the previous slider, then instead of the general arcing motions you had earlier, it juts downward then heads straight back up.
00:32:263 (6,7) - Perhaps some soft whistles to help with the musical change here? Otherwise it feels kind of flat. Actually, some use of soft whistles throughout the maps would probably spruce them up a bit since all I'm really hearing is finishes and claps.
Also try to keep your spacing a little more consistent. Compare the spacing between 00:40:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:27:629 (3,4,5) -
01:42:003 (1,2) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal
01:51:759 (1,2) - Sounds better with a clap on the end, remove the finish on 2.
02:03:467 (1,1) - 1.2x spacing feels a bit better
02:57:271 (2) - It'd be cool if this 2 was aligned with the slider. Of course it'd be best if you could get the two sliders symmetrical so that things line up.
03:00:198 (3,3) - Kinda ugly overlap here. Maybe raise/lower the tails by three grids.
03:08:987 (1,2,3) - Not feeling these jumps at all.
03:30:360 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for a Normal. Maybe if you place it closer to the center to make it easier to realign.
[Hard]
A lot of distance snap changing going on just in the intro here. Feels really weird to play.
03:26:692 (3) - Hitsounds on this don't make much sense with your pattern previously
03:39:872 (2) - This works better as normal circles instead of a slider
[Insane]
03:45:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just do the spinner through these. It gets really off time by 3, 4+
Such a strange song to map.