thanks!hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hello, late mod from my modding Q~
This song ~ <3
[Sayonara]
- I don't know if this rule still apply but
Which mean the artist for this song should be written like this : "Dazai Osamu (CV. Miyano Mamoru)". I dunno tho, you might have to ask BN about this. was waiting for someone to mention this lol, i actually had no idea which was their first names when i made this xd anyways fixedOsu! Ranking Criteria wrote:
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format- 00:06:883 Why do you empty this part tho. The piano sound here is almost as big as the one here 00:06:201 imo so I think it should be at least mapped with a circle or something. there is nothing here, its just ongoing strings
- 00:14:610 (1,2,3) - Good pattern, but I prefer if (3) is kinda rotated a bit more so it looks less cramped https://puu.sh/wIqJb/a79a6e3e9e.jpg i prefer the more compact version tbh, was trying to have more overlaps in the verse sections so the kiai sections look more "open"
- 00:20:974 (3) - Since you repeated here, you might not want to apply above maybe, lol. Anyway, if you apply above, you might also want to change this one. ^
- 00:34:610 (1,2,3,4) - This is kinda nazi, lol, but better adjust these so their distances would be exactly the same. Disable the grid snap if necessary. i cant get any lower than 0.01 difference on the last DS but ok lol
- 00:38:701 (2) - I don't really hear any sound here so I don't really see the point of using circle here. I think deleting this circle (and this one too 00:38:928 (3) - ) then reverse (1) should be more appropriate. Or if you want to emphasize the sound here 00:38:928 - , something like this 00:40:065 (1,2,3) - fits better. theres piano
- 01:11:428 (2,3,4) - I don't really see the point of differences in spacing here. Especially here 01:11:655 (3,4) - where the music is bigger at (4) but the spacing is decreasing making the sound is less emphasized. Either make the entire spacing here the same so it's easier to hit and emphasized equally, or make a pattern that make (4) is emphasized more like you did here 00:56:883 (2,3,4) - spacing to 3 is because of the stronger vocal. spacing to 4 is regular DS, there isn't any vocal and additional hitsounding is only whistle
- 01:12:565 (1) - Start the slider here. Starting the slider at white tick doesn't really make sense here since the sound is much bigger at red tick. Mapping it like this just make the big sound at red tick become less emphasized. The rhythm here is similar to this one 01:05:292 (1) - and since you mapped that one "correctly", I think you better do the similar thing here. To make it simple, ctrl+g these 01:12:565 (1,2) - i dont use any 1/2 sliders in the kiai that have a whistle on the tail, all of the whistles are clicks. the only exception as of right now is in 1/4 heavy sections, might change later tho
- 01:15:292 (2,3) - What with the flow here, lol. Maybe change (3) shape to follow the flow's direction or move (3). I personally prefer if you move it a bit to the right so it would make a better flow with the previous slider too https://puu.sh/wIrbE/6f72028910.jpg flipped 3 horizontally and moved
- 01:37:565 (9) - NC here? to cut the currently pretty long combos. combos get long but i still wanna follow the same NC pattern
- 02:05:519 (1,2) - This is kinda too far imo xD you can keep tho theres no other way i can use this pattern without overlapping :X
- 02:34:610 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is kinda something imo xD I think it would flow better if you ctrl+g these two 02:35:065 (2,3) - like https://puu.sh/wIrkM/d72be661c5.jpg if the jump become too far however, you could do something like this https://puu.sh/wIrlB/8c25b6f2cd.jpg ill figure out something
- 02:50:746 (1,2) - Same suggestion as before here. This apply to the next similar rhythm. ok
- 03:44:610 (7) - Considering the long vocal and drum (?) sound here, maybe you could use 1/2 slider instead. Besides, it feels kinda empty without anything here 03:44:837 used 3/4, theres a small sound on the blue tick
- 03:47:337 why don't start a kiai here? .-. this is pretty much chorus. You could do another star burst here 03:58:246 if you want to emphasize it more. the soft section was also chorus, still not loud enough for me to put in kiai
- 04:18:019 (1,2) - Yep, ctrl+g-ing these is totally correct because not only the sound at red tick is emphasized better, the three piano sound here 04:18:474 04:18:701 04:18:928 are all mapped with circle which give them equal emphasize. The current rhythm make the one here 04:18:474 less emphasized than the other because it's only mapped with slider tail. ok
- 04:39:837 (6) - I think you should NC here instead of the next circle because the sound here is bigger, I mean, it's similar to the sound here 04:43:474 (1) - and you NC-ed there. sure
- 04:47:110 (6) - ^ fixed
That's all :3
Actually, I prefer if you put more emphasize to the bigger sound like here 01:47:337 (1) - by adding jump there instead of the less big sound like here 01:46:883 (4) - but since you use that kind of pattern a lot, I think it's just your style. It's fine tho :3 in the verse sections, NCs get jumps only under the condition that there is a vocal on it. snares always get jumps.
Still waiting for Chuuya's chara song. My heart just can handle mapping it :') here u go https://osu.ppy.sh/s/571271
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Good luck ~ ^^
edit: bless 008