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[Kantan]

00:14:159 - this part is a bit too tricky. I'd suggest deleting 00:14:159 (23) - and moving 00:14:492 (24) - to 00:13:826 -

00:38:159 (64,65) - Delete these notes and add a finisher at 00:39:326 - so it goes a bit better with the song and is coherent with the following notes

00:49:492 - The kiai time is too dense. I'd recommend deleting notes such as 00:51:159 (4) - / 00:53:826 (10) - etc

00:57:826 (18,19,20) - You need a 4/1 break during the kiai, so I'd suggest doing like this . You can do the same at 01:08:492 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - since it is the same musical structure.

01:10:826 - For the last part consider doing as I told you earlier to nerf a bit the diff, aka deleting notes such as 01:12:492 (45) - etc

The Kantan is a bit too hard atm.

[Futsuu]

You could create a 2/1 break here 00:22:326 (67) - by removing the note for exemple.

00:36:326 (111) - This triplet is quite unfitting and make the diff a bit too hard.

00:38:826 - This part is a bit too hard to. Remove this note 00:39:659 (123) - and make this 00:39:826 (124) - a don. Do the same for the others.

00:54:826 - This string of note is too long. 00:57:826 (27) - Delete this note for some rest.

01:20:659 (100,101,102,103) - Considering this is the end of the map, I think removing these 01:20:659 (100,102) - would be more fitting.

[Muzukashii]

Again the diff is a bit too hard in density. Lower the density by removing uneeded notes such as 00:03:992 (11) - or 00:38:659 (158) - and making 2/1 breaks after you use 1/4 patterns.

[Oni]

00:38:659 (193) - Delete this note so the finisher next to it can be emphasized better

00:47:492 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - I'd do it like this, the downbeat will be more emphasized

01:10:242 (368) - triplet and quintuplet next to each other is a bit too much for the Oni imo, what about

01:16:742 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414) - The rhythms used here are really different from the ones used here 01:11:409 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) - , try to make it a bit more consistent hitsounding wise.

[Inner Oni]

00:26:659 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - This feels pretty much out of nowhere, there is no real musical reason behind this pattern. This would be much more fitting

01:00:159 (376) - No finisher here although there are at 00:49:492 (298) - and 00:54:826 (336) - ? Either remove them all or add one here.

01:04:492 - The logic of 1/4 triplet or quintuplet - 1/2 note - 1/4 triplet etc feel very off at this part. You can make some changes for exemple at 01:06:409 (422) - , moving this note to 01:06:742 - to emphasize the downbeat, and doing kind of the same structure later on.

01:14:076 (478,479,480,481,482) - what about to ass some variety while keeping the structure ?
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Arrival wrote:

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[Kantan]

00:14:159 - this part is a bit too tricky. I'd suggest deleting 00:14:159 (23) - and moving 00:14:492 (24) - to 00:13:826 - sure, it's good that way

00:38:159 (64,65) - Delete these notes and add a finisher at 00:39:326 - so it goes a bit better with the song and is coherent with the following notes ok, sure!

00:49:492 - The kiai time is too dense. I'd recommend deleting notes such as 00:51:159 (4) - / 00:53:826 (10) - etc deleted that you've mentioned and some more

00:57:826 (18,19,20) - You need a 4/1 break during the kiai, so I'd suggest doing like this . You can do the same at 01:08:492 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - since it is the same musical structure. done

01:10:826 - For the last part consider doing as I told you earlier to nerf a bit the diff, aka deleting notes such as 01:12:492 (45) - etc done; also changed a bit at the end

The Kantan is a bit too hard atm. yeah that's true lol

[Futsuu]

You could create a 2/1 break here 00:22:326 (67) - by removing the note for exemple. yeah, that fits good

00:36:326 (111) - This triplet is quite unfitting and make the diff a bit too hard. deleted, also chanhed 00:36:492 (111) to d 'cuz feels more fiiting

00:38:826 - This part is a bit too hard to. Remove this note 00:39:659 (123) - and make this 00:39:826 (124) - a don. Do the same for the others. ok

00:54:826 - This string of note is too long. 00:57:826 (27) - Delete this note for some rest. ok, nice

01:20:659 (100,101,102,103) - Considering this is the end of the map, I think removing these 01:20:659 (100,102) - would be more fitting. made like in kantan

[Muzukashii]

Again the diff is a bit too hard in density. Lower the density by removing uneeded notes such as 00:03:992 (11) - or 00:38:659 (158) - and making 2/1 breaks after you use 1/4 patterns. i think that i nerfed it a bit :thinking:

[Oni]

00:38:659 (193) - Delete this note so the finisher next to it can be emphasized better ok

00:47:492 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - I'd do it like this, the downbeat will be more emphasized well i tried it but i'm not happy with the result so i'll stick with what it is

01:10:242 (368) - triplet and quintuplet next to each other is a bit too much for the Oni imo, what about changed but with dkddk to emphasize the drum before the 5plet

01:16:742 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414) - The rhythms used here are really different from the ones used here 01:11:409 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) - , try to make it a bit more consistent hitsounding wise. changed

[Inner Oni]

00:26:659 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153) - This feels pretty much out of nowhere, there is no real musical reason behind this pattern. This would be much more fitting 25-50% playback rate please, really noticeable synth sounds

01:00:159 (376) - No finisher here although there are at 00:49:492 (298) - and 00:54:826 (336) - ? Either remove them all or add one here. i won't add it because there is no strong cymbal sound but those two have that so... no reason to delete those and likely no reason to add on what you've mentioned; also on all other diffs there is the same - i didn't put finisher on that moment on ANY diff

01:04:492 - The logic of 1/4 triplet or quintuplet - 1/2 note - 1/4 triplet etc feel very off at this part. You can make some changes for exemple at 01:06:409 (422) - , moving this note to 01:06:742 - to emphasize the downbeat, and doing kind of the same structure later on. yeah, this is good, changed

01:14:076 (478,479,480,481,482) - what about to ass some variety while keeping the structure ? ass some variety :DDD I CAN DO THAT LOL; changed 2plet to dk but i don't like kkd and kdd too there so i'll stick with ddd
ty~~~
lol forgot you moded this and gave kudosu
what's wrong with me bad headache actually
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>Oni
* 00:44:076 - delete this, Inner doesnt have it
* then 00:44:159 - finish it
* 00:47:992 - 00:48:159 - choose 1 to emphasize with kat

>Muzu
* 00:20:826 - to 00:20:492 - here, 00:20:659 - to 00:20:826 - here, better stucture
* 00:27:492 - don, a bit close with futsuu and far with oni
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Surono wrote:

>Oni
* 00:44:076 - delete this, Inner doesnt have it lol yeah it's random
* then 00:44:159 - finish it sure
* 00:47:992 - 00:48:159 - choose 1 to emphasize with kat 00:48:159 (243) 'cuz of increasing pitch then

>Muzu
* 00:20:826 - to 00:20:492 - here, 00:20:659 - to 00:20:826 - here, better stucture was the second note on other time??? added don after what i achieved to make it better @@
* 00:27:492 - don, a bit close with futsuu and far with oni ok
omg second bn here
thanks~
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I DL'd this map bcus youve request it on my queu I guess and I forget it lul
lookin for this map, good luck.
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Surono wrote:

I DL'd this map bcus youve request it on my queu I guess and I forget it lul
lookin for this map, good luck.
lol maybe
don't remember that
thanks anyway
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hi, i was checking my queue and i saw that you requested this map a long time ago and thought to help you so i going mod?
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Etsu wrote:

hi, i was checking my queue and i saw that you requested this map a long time ago and thought to help you so i going mod?
you can do that if you want
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hi, sorry for delay here my mod :> rip 2 kudos

[General]
  1. You have hitsound "111.mp3 and taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav" that is not being used, you must delete it.

[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:826 (2,3) - I think that these notes should not be for a kantan is a bit weird
  2. 00:07:159 (7) - delete?
  3. 00:15:159 (21,23) - ^
  4. 00:19:659 (32) - ^
  5. 00:39:326 (64) - change K like other diff?
  6. 00:45:492 (73) - change k?
  7. 01:00:826 - must map here for consistency like 00:50:159 (2) -
  8. 01:05:826 (27) - move to 01:06:159 - ?
  9. 01:10:826 (34) - feel better finish for end kiai imo
  10. 01:15:492 (41) - change kat? the sound is increased
  11. 01:19:992 (49) - change don?

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:17:492 (51) - add finish like other diff?
  2. 00:22:659 (67) - move to 00:22:326 - is better imo
  3. 00:38:826 (119) - feel don finish here

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:076 (18) - must remove this note, since it has no note in the diff oni .. or better that note would be better in Oni
  2. 00:10:993 (36,37) - maybe control + g for variation
  3. 00:11:409 (39) - delete?
  4. 00:40:659 (160) - feel better don finish is better sound imo
  5. 00:49:826 (191,192,193) - control + g?
  6. 01:14:076 (292) - remove
  7. 01:17:159 (305) - ^

[Oni]
  1. 00:03:992 (12) - i think delete this like 00:06:659 - is you are close to the diff inner imo
  2. 00:13:159 (56) - ^
  3. 00:17:659 (82) - delete? is long pattern this section, consistency 00:28:326 -
  4. 00:50:492 (256) - change kat?
  5. 00:52:659 (268,269) - control + g? feel better sound imo

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:52:076 (314) - maybe change kat here better for inner imo
  2. 01:14:409 (481) - ^
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Etsu wrote:

hi, sorry for delay here my mod :> rip 2 kudos
np, will review it soon
lol yeah
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Etsu wrote:

hi, sorry for delay here my mod :> rip 2 kudos

[General]
  1. You have hitsound "111.mp3 and taiko-normal-hitwhistle.wav" that is not being used, you must delete it. 111 ok but second is used o:

[Kantan]
  1. 00:01:826 (2,3) - I think that these notes should not be for a kantan is a bit weird i'll remap here somehow
  2. 00:07:159 (7) - delete? same
  3. 00:15:159 (21,23) - ^ same for here
  4. 00:19:659 (32) - ^ and here
  5. 00:39:326 (64) - change K like other diff? yeah, sure
  6. 00:45:492 (73) - change k? i'll delete this tbh
  7. 01:00:826 - must map here for consistency like 00:50:159 (2) - sure lol
  8. 01:05:826 (27) - move to 01:06:159 - ? i'll delete this too bcz it's stupid as hell
  9. 01:10:826 (34) - feel better finish for end kiai imo yep
  10. 01:15:492 (41) - change kat? the sound is increased it makes it way down here so no
  11. 01:19:992 (49) - change don? that seems better

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:17:492 (51) - add finish like other diff? yep
  2. 00:22:659 (67) - move to 00:22:326 - is better imo yep
  3. 00:38:826 (119) - feel don finish here it's K in all other diffs lul

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:076 (18) - must remove this note, since it has no note in the diff oni .. or better that note would be better in Oni all the notes shouldn't be consistent in all diffs so nope for this
  2. 00:10:993 (36,37) - maybe control + g for variation don't feel like it
  3. 00:11:409 (39) - delete? not really since i'm keeping note from first suggestion
  4. 00:40:659 (160) - feel better don finish is better sound imo same as futsuu
  5. 00:49:826 (191,192,193) - control + g? it feels ok as it is
  6. 01:14:076 (292) - remove same as previous two
  7. 01:17:159 (305) - ^ same

[Oni]
  1. 00:03:992 (12) - i think delete this like 00:06:659 - is you are close to the diff inner imo ok
  2. 00:13:159 (56) - ^ same
  3. 00:17:659 (82) - delete? is long pattern this section, consistency 00:28:326 - sure
  4. 00:50:492 (256) - change kat? it's kick and low sound so no
  5. 00:52:659 (268,269) - control + g? feel better sound imo it's ok with pitch so i'll keep it

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:52:076 (314) - maybe change kat here better for inner imo makes sense, it's also has a bit increased sound
  2. 01:14:409 (481) - ^ but here not really
thx for mod

changed some things in easier diffs as i thought was better
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Hello, sorry for the delay I totally forgot about it.

[General]

  1. I believe that the offset is a bit wrong, since there is only one timing point I recommend to shift the offset by about -6ms (from 1493 to 1487).
  2. Hitsound volumes are insufficient, the song suppresses the custom hitsounds. Use a program (example: Audacity) to increase the volumes of them.


[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:05:492 - Starting from here, red tick kats (a.k.a d k ddk d kkd k usage of rhythms) don't fit the drums, you are using custom hitsounds and it conflicts what you've been used also. Try using some sort of similiar rhythm to make it harmonious with the melody. It also conflicts of your rhythm choice that you used on Oni diff.


[Oni]
  1. 00:20:326 - Removing this note will keep the spread balanced between this and Inner Oni.
  2. 00:27:659 - I think you can add a triplet here to emphasize the 1/4 vocals like you did in Inner, by using ddk or kdk.
  3. 00:30:826 - Move this note to 00:30:992 - here to keep the rhythm similiar to Inner Oni, they look a bit inconsistent to me right now.
  4. 00:39:742 - You can delete this note, there is no 1/4 sound on it and it'll create some difference between Inner and this. Also from Muzukashii to Oni spread will be adjusted too.
  5. 00:40:992 (201,202,203) - Instead of k d d, I recommend d k k to follow the drums by using kats on snare sounds.
  6. 00:54:826 (276,277,278,279) - Swap these four to adjust the rhythm by emphasizing vocals and drums with kats.


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:326 - From the beginning until 00:21:826 - this spot, there is no 3/2 break so I recommend deleting the note at 00:19:326 to provide one. Also,
    it is neccesary for consistency with 00:21:826. Same occasion at 00:24:659 -
  2. 00:22:826 - Finisher would be good with custom hitsounds.
  3. 00:39:159 (155) - Delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with other spots, as in 00:41:826 -
  4. 01:05:159 - You should put a note here. There is already a break at 00:59:492 - this spot. In order to provide another break, 01:11:159 (280) - you can delete this note.
  5. 01:10:659 - Add a note here or make a 1/4 triplet kkk to balance the spread between Oni and this, since it's the same with Futsuu.


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:159 - You can add a note here to create a difference on rhythm, and also keep the spread balanced with Muzu.
  2. 00:19:992 - 00:25:326 - Add notes here to balance the spread. While having 1/4 triplet on Muzukashii, you can't leave 1/1 notes on Futsuu.
  3. 00:26:159 (65) - Delete this note and 00:25:826 (64) - move this one to 00:25:992 - here to emphasize vocals.
  4. 00:48:992 - Adding a note here will be good, and also you need to add a note at 00:48:826 - here on Kantan.
  5. 01:00:659 - Also add a note here.


After those adjustments on Futsuu, Kantan spread must be balanced too. You may call me back.
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frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello, sorry for the delay I totally forgot about it.

[General]

  1. I believe that the offset is a bit wrong, since there is only one timing point I recommend to shift the offset by about -6ms (from 1493 to 1487). okay
  2. Hitsound volumes are insufficient, the song suppresses the custom hitsounds. Use a program (example: Audacity) to increase the volumes of them. made them louder, hope they are good now


[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:05:492 - Starting from here, red tick kats (a.k.a d k ddk d kkd k usage of rhythms) don't fit the drums, you are using custom hitsounds and it conflicts what you've been used also. Try using some sort of similiar rhythm to make it harmonious with the melody. It also conflicts of your rhythm choice that you used on Oni diff. i wanted to remap this anyway because wtf was i thinking when i mapped this lol


[Oni]
  1. 00:20:326 - Removing this note will keep the spread balanced between this and Inner Oni.
  2. 00:27:659 - I think you can add a triplet here to emphasize the 1/4 vocals like you did in Inner, by using ddk or kdk.
  3. 00:30:826 - Move this note to 00:30:992 - here to keep the rhythm similiar to Inner Oni, they look a bit inconsistent to me right now.
  4. 00:39:742 - You can delete this note, there is no 1/4 sound on it and it'll create some difference between Inner and this. Also from Muzukashii to Oni spread will be adjusted too.
  5. 00:40:992 (201,202,203) - Instead of k d d, I recommend d k k to follow the drums by using kats on snare sounds. so much better lmao
  6. 00:54:826 (276,277,278,279) - Swap these four to adjust the rhythm by emphasizing vocals and drums with kats.


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:326 - From the beginning until 00:21:826 - this spot, there is no 3/2 break so I recommend deleting the note at 00:19:326 to provide one. Also,
    it is neccesary for consistency with 00:21:826. Same occasion at 00:24:659 -
  2. 00:22:826 - Finisher would be good with custom hitsounds. not too sure about this since i didn't use it on any other diff
  3. 00:39:159 (155) - Delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with other spots, as in 00:41:826 -
  4. 01:05:159 - You should put a note here. There is already a break at 00:59:492 - this spot. In order to provide another break, 01:11:159 (280) - you can delete this note.
  5. 01:10:659 - Add a note here or make a 1/4 triplet kkk to balance the spread between Oni and this, since it's the same with Futsuu. made kdk instead


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:11:159 - You can add a note here to create a difference on rhythm, and also keep the spread balanced with Muzu.
  2. 00:19:992 - 00:25:326 - Add notes here to balance the spread. While having 1/4 triplet on Muzukashii, you can't leave 1/1 notes on Futsuu.
  3. 00:26:159 (65) - Delete this note and 00:25:826 (64) - move this one to 00:25:992 - here to emphasize vocals.
  4. 00:48:992 - Adding a note here will be good, and also you need to add a note at 00:48:826 - here on Kantan.
  5. 01:00:659 - Also add a note here.

    all changed


After those adjustments on Futsuu, Kantan spread must be balanced too. You may call me back.
thanks for your mod, was very helpful~
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Recheck.

[Muzukashii]

00:06:070 - There is a note on that spot, but there isn't a note on Oni. I suggest otherwise.

Everything else is fine for me.
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frukoyurdakul wrote:

Recheck.

[Muzukashii]

00:06:070 - There is a note on that spot, but there isn't a note on Oni. I suggest otherwise. ok sure

Everything else is fine for me.
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Everything looks good, let's give it a shot.

Bubbled!
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frukoyurdakul wrote:

Everything looks good, let's give it a shot.

Bubbled!
www thanks <3
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Kantan
* 00:01:487 - ~ 00:17:486 - spread and consistency still not good in this part imo, 00:02:153 - 00:04:820 - so yeah add both don here would make the build pattern balanced and not sudden increased, 00:12:986 - kinda hard and futsuu just similar density, I recommend to move 00:12:820 - in here as similar before and with the consistency of futsuu, because its simple and first rhythm emphasis from the song than 00:12:986 - mapped in this drum. 01:10:820 - dont forget apply in this part too
* 01:00:820 - kat, seems good with intense of vocal and also to balance with next colors pattern. duhh smth about density spread each other~
* 01:03:153 - you forget in here, well kat. yeah close to the end of map, point above and here for kiai should be consindered for sake consistency density between each diffs.

Futsuu
*00:19:320 - 00:21:320 - 00:22:653 - 00:24:653 - 00:35:320 - 00:31:320 - 00:35:320 - somehow it would be balanced between each diffs if you deleted these notes and kiai density seems good, you can let the rest of kiai part since the beginning until before entering the kiai has high density than kiai ahah, so yeah should be deleted those Ive pointed out anndd 00:22:820 - give it finish for consistency with the others after deleted those notes
* 01:00:153 - why its not finisher, maybe don finish it or just give it finish in this kat? ok just it.. for me it matters at all, I will rebubble it
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Surono wrote:

Kantan
* 00:01:487 - ~ 00:17:486 - spread and consistency still not good in this part imo, 00:02:153 - 00:04:820 - so yeah add both don here would make the build pattern balanced and not sudden increased, 00:12:986 - kinda hard and futsuu just similar density, I recommend to move 00:12:820 - in here as similar before and with the consistency of futsuu, because its simple and first rhythm emphasis from the song than 00:12:986 - mapped in this drum. 01:10:820 - dont forget apply in this part too check
* 01:00:820 - kat, seems good with intense of vocal and also to balance with next colors pattern. duhh smth about density spread each other~ k, seems fine
* 01:03:153 - you forget in here, well kat. yeah close to the end of map, point above and here for kiai should be consindered for sake consistency density between each diffs. if applying this i think it's don better bcz vocal is very still there and no drums, but yeah i changed

Futsuu
*00:19:320 - 00:21:320 - 00:22:653 - 00:24:653 - 00:35:320 - 00:31:320 - 00:35:320 - somehow it would be balanced between each diffs if you deleted these notes and kiai density seems good, you can let the rest of kiai part since the beginning until before entering the kiai has high density than kiai ahah, so yeah should be deleted those Ive pointed out anndd 00:22:820 - give it finish for consistency with the others after deleted those notes i see what you're saying yet didn't like deleting all mentioned (some parts while deleted just sounded really stupid D:), still deleted some and did a bit of variation here and there
* 01:00:153 - why its not finisher, maybe don finish it or just give it finish in this kat? ok just it.. for me it matters at all, I will rebubble it i didn't make notes finishers at same moments on every other diffs and i still think it's not that much of a cymbal sound comparing to the very start of kiai (also it's only on this short ver of song lmao)
thx thx frien
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